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Kawawa

Topic Starter

Kawawa 2015-07-16T13:54:22+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015년 8월 16일 일요일 at 오전 1:34:25

Artist: Ogura Yui
Title: Baby Sweet Berry Love (3R2 Remix)
Source: 変態王子と笑わない猫。
Tags: tsukiko tsutsukakushi J-CORE Happy Hardcore Hentai Ouji to Warawanai Neko ending DJ Mashiro Marathon
BPM: 175
Filesize: 9983kb
Play Time: 05:32
Difficulties Available:

Sweetness Overload! - 7Key (5.33 stars, 4499 notes)

Download: Ogura Yui - Baby Sweet Berry Love (3R2 Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1 Bab by _S u w a k o_
#2 Bab by ExUsagi
OLYMPIC! by Julie

Thank you for All feedback. It helped me a lot.
Enjoy! /w/

Please Re-download! for New BG / HS

Last edited by Kawawa 2015-08-15T17:41:14+00:00, edited 71 times in total.

Nanatsu

1,138 posts

Joined June 2013

Nanatsu 2015-07-19T03:12:57+00:00

10/10 map ( 9~9.5 tbh )

get some kudosu star

sv

11:44 KawaEE: 안녕하세여 스와코님
11:45 _S u w a k o_: 안녕하세요오
11:45 KawaEE: 혹시 테스트 되시나용?
11:45 _S u w a k o_: 아
11:45 _S u w a k o_: 옆에 팡님 주무셔서 ㄷㄷ
11:45 KawaEE: ㅠㅠ
11:45 _S u w a k o_: 언제일어나시지 밥먹을떄쯤
11:45 KawaEE: SV좀 여쭤보려고 했는뎅
11:45 _S u w a k o_: ?
11:45 _S u w a k o_: 아
11:45 _S u w a k o_: 링크점
11:45 KawaEE: 넹
11:45 *KawaEE is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/741749 Ogura Yui - Baby Sweet Berry Love (3R2 Remix)]
11:46 _S u w a k o_: 이 노래 많이 만드시네요
11:46 KawaEE: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
11:50 _S u w a k o_: 02:46:442 - 02:46:785 - 여기가
11:51 _S u w a k o_: 0.3 1.7 해보셧나요 혹시?
11:51 KawaEE: 네
11:51 KawaEE: 아녀
11:52 _S u w a k o_: 전 0.5 1.5나 0.3 1.7 둘중 하나가 괜찮은거같아요
11:52 _S u w a k o_: 지금도 괜찮긴해요
11:52 KawaEE: 오오 0.3 1.7 괜찮은거같네요
11:52 KawaEE: 뭔가 더 속도감이 붙은 느낌이라고 해야하나
11:52 _S u w a k o_: 03:13:700 (193700|2) - ^
11:52 _S u w a k o_: 노래가 아예 멈췄다가
11:52 _S u w a k o_: 나오니까
11:52 KawaEE: 네
11:52 _S u w a k o_: 네 약간아무래도
11:52 KawaEE: 갠적으로 질문드리고 싶은건
11:53 KawaEE: 01:06:328 - 여기 인뎅
11:53 KawaEE: 여기가 원래 4단계로 줄어드는게 아니었거든여
11:53 KawaEE: 01:06:328 - 여기만 0.6이었었는데
11:53 KawaEE: 하도 버스트 이후에 급변속이다보니까
11:53 KawaEE: 다단계로 줄여보라고 많이 들어서
11:54 _S u w a k o_: 0.6 고정으로 가실건가요??
11:55 _S u w a k o_: 01:06:328 - 여기부터 줄여나가는게 좀 더 자연스러울 것 같은데
11:55 _S u w a k o_: 지금도 깔끔한 느낌이라서 킵하셔도될듯
11:55 _S u w a k o_: ?
11:55 KawaEE: 01:06:328 - 여기부터 01:28:271 - 여기까지
11:55 KawaEE: 전부 0.6을 원했는데
11:55 _S u w a k o_: 해볼게여
11:55 KawaEE: 01:06:328 - 여기를 버스트이후 0.6을 해버리니
11:55 KawaEE: 미스가 많이들 나더라구여
11:56 _S u w a k o_: 네
11:56 _S u w a k o_: 4단계가 훨씬 나아요
11:56 _S u w a k o_: 다만 느려지는건 01:06:328 - 이 부분 부터라서 여기서부터 줄여나가는게 좀 더 자연스러울 것 같아요
11:56 KawaEE: 오오
11:56 KawaEE: 감사합니다
11:56 _S u w a k o_: 01:06:671 - 여기가 0.9네요
11:56 _S u w a k o_: 0.05 단위..는 좀 그런가
11:56 KawaEE: 음 맞는말이네여
11:57 _S u w a k o_: 0.7 0.75 0.8 0.85 0.9 해볽요
11:57 _S u w a k o_: 해볼게요
11:57 KawaEE: 넹
11:57 KawaEE: 0.9 0.8 0.7 0.6 0.5는 좀그런가요?
11:57 _S u w a k o_: 0.05단위는 좀 느려지는감이
11:57 _S u w a k o_: 거의없어서 좀 그렇네요
11:58 _S u w a k o_: 0.5면
11:58 _S u w a k o_: 01:27:757 - 여기가 좀 어렵네요
11:58 _S u w a k o_: 그거말곤 0.5도 괜찮아보여요
11:58 KawaEE: 01:44:385 - 이건 어떻게 생각하세요?
12:00 _S u w a k o_: 1.3 0.7 1?
12:00 _S u w a k o_: 01:44:385 - 01:44:557 - 01:44:728 -
12:01 KawaEE: 음 저기 SV를 뺴는것도 괜찮나요?
12:01 _S u w a k o_: 아
12:01 _S u w a k o_: 이거 0.9있었구나
12:01 KawaEE: 넹
12:02 KawaEE: 01:28:271 - 여기가 0.8이라서
12:02 KawaEE: 자연스럽게 저기 1배속으로 넘어가게끔 0.9를
12:02 KawaEE: 중간에 넣긴했는데
12:03 _S u w a k o_: 여러개 해봤는데 넣는게 나아보여요
12:03 _S u w a k o_: 아니면 아까 말씀드린거 젇오
12:03 _S u w a k o_: 정도
12:03 KawaEE: 아하
12:05 _S u w a k o_: 01:50:214 - 0.1 01:50:900 - 1?
12:05 _S u w a k o_: 좀 이상한가 멈추는 느낌이 넣고싶었는데
12:06 KawaEE: 오 괜찮긴 하네여
12:06 _S u w a k o_: 느낌은 저런식으로 좀 더 연구해보셔도 괜찮을..것같아요
12:06 _S u w a k o_: 지금은 약간 부족한거같은데
12:07 KawaEE: 넹
12:07 _S u w a k o_: 0.05가 낫네요
12:07 _S u w a k o_: 03:24:842 - 여기도 아까말씀하신대로
12:07 _S u w a k o_: 4단계로 줄이시는게?
12:07 KawaEE: 0.05 쓸수 있나요?
12:07 _S u w a k o_: 네 되네요
12:08 KawaEE: 거긴 뭔가 4단계 느낌이 안들긴 하던데
12:08 KawaEE: 일관성을 유지해야하려나
12:08 _S u w a k o_: 03:34:871 - 여기도 음이 있네요 다른 노트랑 있는 악기
12:08 _S u w a k o_: 벨인가
12:09 KawaEE: 어 정말이네여
12:09 _S u w a k o_: 전 넣는게 나아보여요 4단계
12:10 _S u w a k o_: 패턴은 전에꺼보다
12:10 _S u w a k o_: 더좋네요
12:10 _S u w a k o_: 04:32:042 - ^^^^

Kawawa

Topic Starter

Kawawa 2015-07-19T04:41:27+00:00

_S u w a k o_ wrote:
10/10 map ( 9~9.5 tbh )

get some kudosu star

sv
11:44 KawaEE: 안녕하세여 스와코님
11:45 _S u w a k o_: 안녕하세요오
11:45 KawaEE: 혹시 테스트 되시나용?
11:45 _S u w a k o_: 아
11:45 _S u w a k o_: 옆에 팡님 주무셔서 ㄷㄷ
11:45 KawaEE: ㅠㅠ
11:45 _S u w a k o_: 언제일어나시지 밥먹을떄쯤
11:45 KawaEE: SV좀 여쭤보려고 했는뎅
11:45 _S u w a k o_: ?
11:45 _S u w a k o_: 아
11:45 _S u w a k o_: 링크점
11:45 KawaEE: 넹
11:45 *KawaEE is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/741749 Ogura Yui - Baby Sweet Berry Love (3R2 Remix)]
11:46 _S u w a k o_: 이 노래 많이 만드시네요
11:46 KawaEE: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
11:50 _S u w a k o_: 02:46:442 - 02:46:785 - 여기가
11:51 _S u w a k o_: 0.3 1.7 해보셧나요 혹시?
11:51 KawaEE: 네
11:51 KawaEE: 아녀
11:52 _S u w a k o_: 전 0.5 1.5나 0.3 1.7 둘중 하나가 괜찮은거같아요
11:52 _S u w a k o_: 지금도 괜찮긴해요
11:52 KawaEE: 오오 0.3 1.7 괜찮은거같네요
11:52 KawaEE: 뭔가 더 속도감이 붙은 느낌이라고 해야하나
11:52 _S u w a k o_: 03:13:700 (193700|2) - ^
11:52 _S u w a k o_: 노래가 아예 멈췄다가
11:52 _S u w a k o_: 나오니까
11:52 KawaEE: 네
11:52 _S u w a k o_: 네 약간아무래도
11:52 KawaEE: 갠적으로 질문드리고 싶은건
11:53 KawaEE: 01:06:328 - 여기 인뎅
11:53 KawaEE: 여기가 원래 4단계로 줄어드는게 아니었거든여
11:53 KawaEE: 01:06:328 - 여기만 0.6이었었는데
11:53 KawaEE: 하도 버스트 이후에 급변속이다보니까
11:53 KawaEE: 다단계로 줄여보라고 많이 들어서
11:54 _S u w a k o_: 0.6 고정으로 가실건가요??
11:55 _S u w a k o_: 01:06:328 - 여기부터 줄여나가는게 좀 더 자연스러울 것 같은데
11:55 _S u w a k o_: 지금도 깔끔한 느낌이라서 킵하셔도될듯
11:55 _S u w a k o_: ?
11:55 KawaEE: 01:06:328 - 여기부터 01:28:271 - 여기까지
11:55 KawaEE: 전부 0.6을 원했는데
11:55 _S u w a k o_: 해볼게여
11:55 KawaEE: 01:06:328 - 여기를 버스트이후 0.6을 해버리니
11:55 KawaEE: 미스가 많이들 나더라구여
11:56 _S u w a k o_: 네
11:56 _S u w a k o_: 4단계가 훨씬 나아요
11:56 _S u w a k o_: 다만 느려지는건 01:06:328 - 이 부분 부터라서 여기서부터 줄여나가는게 좀 더 자연스러울 것 같아요
11:56 KawaEE: 오오
11:56 KawaEE: 감사합니다
11:56 _S u w a k o_: 01:06:671 - 여기가 0.9네요
11:56 _S u w a k o_: 0.05 단위..는 좀 그런가
11:56 KawaEE: 음 맞는말이네여
11:57 _S u w a k o_: 0.7 0.75 0.8 0.85 0.9 해볽요
11:57 _S u w a k o_: 해볼게요
11:57 KawaEE: 넹
11:57 KawaEE: 0.9 0.8 0.7 0.6 0.5는 좀그런가요?
11:57 _S u w a k o_: 0.05단위는 좀 느려지는감이
11:57 _S u w a k o_: 거의없어서 좀 그렇네요
11:58 _S u w a k o_: 0.5면
11:58 _S u w a k o_: 01:27:757 - 여기가 좀 어렵네요
11:58 _S u w a k o_: 그거말곤 0.5도 괜찮아보여요
11:58 KawaEE: 01:44:385 - 이건 어떻게 생각하세요?
12:00 _S u w a k o_: 1.3 0.7 1?
12:00 _S u w a k o_: 01:44:385 - 01:44:557 - 01:44:728 -
12:01 KawaEE: 음 저기 SV를 뺴는것도 괜찮나요?
12:01 _S u w a k o_: 아
12:01 _S u w a k o_: 이거 0.9있었구나
12:01 KawaEE: 넹
12:02 KawaEE: 01:28:271 - 여기가 0.8이라서
12:02 KawaEE: 자연스럽게 저기 1배속으로 넘어가게끔 0.9를
12:02 KawaEE: 중간에 넣긴했는데
12:03 _S u w a k o_: 여러개 해봤는데 넣는게 나아보여요
12:03 _S u w a k o_: 아니면 아까 말씀드린거 젇오
12:03 _S u w a k o_: 정도
12:03 KawaEE: 아하
12:05 _S u w a k o_: 01:50:214 - 0.1 01:50:900 - 1?
12:05 _S u w a k o_: 좀 이상한가 멈추는 느낌이 넣고싶었는데
12:06 KawaEE: 오 괜찮긴 하네여
12:06 _S u w a k o_: 느낌은 저런식으로 좀 더 연구해보셔도 괜찮을..것같아요
12:06 _S u w a k o_: 지금은 약간 부족한거같은데
12:07 KawaEE: 넹
12:07 _S u w a k o_: 0.05가 낫네요
12:07 _S u w a k o_: 03:24:842 - 여기도 아까말씀하신대로
12:07 _S u w a k o_: 4단계로 줄이시는게?
12:07 KawaEE: 0.05 쓸수 있나요?
12:07 _S u w a k o_: 네 되네요
12:08 KawaEE: 거긴 뭔가 4단계 느낌이 안들긴 하던데
12:08 KawaEE: 일관성을 유지해야하려나
12:08 _S u w a k o_: 03:34:871 - 여기도 음이 있네요 다른 노트랑 있는 악기
12:08 _S u w a k o_: 벨인가
12:09 KawaEE: 어 정말이네여
12:09 _S u w a k o_: 전 넣는게 나아보여요 4단계
12:10 _S u w a k o_: 패턴은 전에꺼보다
12:10 _S u w a k o_: 더좋네요
12:10 _S u w a k o_: 04:32:042 - ^^^^

쿠도와 테스팅, SV 피드백 감사합니다.
급변속 부분은 제안 해주신대로 1.3 0.7으로 변경했으며,
4단계 변속은 말씀하신대로 처음부분을 0.9로 하려했으나, 우선은 1.0으로 유지해본 후에
여러 SV요소 파트에 주신 의견과 더불어서, 다른 모더의 피드백과 충분히 고려하여 잘 반영해보도록 하겠습니다!

SReisen

898 posts

Joined October 2011

SReisen 2015-07-19T05:11:21+00:00

somewhat

12:45 KawaEE: Shiki~
12:45 ShikiNoHollow: ya
12:46 KawaEE: test plss
12:46 KawaEE: ;w;
12:46 ShikiNoHollow: ouhkay
12:46 *KawaEE is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/741749 Ogura Yui - Baby Sweet Berry Love (3R2 Remix)]
12:46 KawaEE: just press update button
12:46 ShikiNoHollow: updatinh
12:47 ShikiNoHollow: i just woke up , so i think i cant get A ==
12:47 KawaEE: yoi!
12:47 KawaEE: ah...... sorry
12:47 ShikiNoHollow: is not even 5 star?
12:47 ShikiNoHollow: ==
12:47 KawaEE: ahahaha
12:53 ShikiNoHollow: oo A
12:53 KawaEE: sorry shiki
12:53 ShikiNoHollow: that SV is more nicer
12:53 KawaEE: seems u sleepy now
12:53 ShikiNoHollow: nah im hungry
12:53 KawaEE: oh i see xD
12:53 KawaEE: hahahah hongry
12:53 ShikiNoHollow: i will S it :3
12:53 KawaEE: ouhkay
12:53 ShikiNoHollow: btw , you said it will be 5 star :<
12:54 KawaEE: .........i can't....
12:54 ShikiNoHollow: disapponted T^T
12:54 KawaEE: ..........limit
12:54 KawaEE: i can't anymore star-rating up
12:54 ShikiNoHollow: your stream can do like , 1 7 , 2 6 , 3 5 , 4
12:54 KawaEE: hm which part?
12:55 ShikiNoHollow: 01:03:585 - these maybe
12:56 KawaEE: oho
12:56 KawaEE: now 4.96star
12:57 ShikiNoHollow: 02:54:671 - this also
12:58 KawaEE: yea
12:58 ShikiNoHollow: 03:22:100 - these
12:58 KawaEE: \03:24:842 - this SV is
12:59 KawaEE: what do u think about?
12:59 KawaEE: 03:25:185 - 03:25:528 -
12:59 ShikiNoHollow: thats is awesome
12:59 ShikiNoHollow: really epic
12:59 KawaEE: same with this 01:06:328 -
12:59 KawaEE: oh really?
12:59 ShikiNoHollow: bit by bit becomes slower
12:59 ShikiNoHollow: 04:40:271 - there
13:00 ShikiNoHollow: your map is not hard
13:00 ShikiNoHollow: but is like hard to press
13:00 KawaEE: oh i see
13:00 KawaEE: :3
13:01 ShikiNoHollow: 05:29:642 - to 05:31:014 - stream?
13:01 KawaEE: ummmm
13:01 KawaEE: idk well this part
13:01 KawaEE: just same with this 00:41:642 -
13:02 ShikiNoHollow: that last part had a drum
13:02 ShikiNoHollow: the one you pointed dont have drum
13:02 KawaEE: ur right
13:03 ShikiNoHollow: :3
13:03 KawaEE: anyway thanks shiki <3
13:03 KawaEE: good feedback!
13:03 ShikiNoHollow: no prob
13:04 ShikiNoHollow: ireally glad i can help
13:04 KawaEE: ahahaha cute

Kawawa

Topic Starter

Kawawa 2015-07-19T05:13:40+00:00

ShikiNoHollow wrote:
somewhat
12:45 KawaEE: Shiki~
12:45 ShikiNoHollow: ya
12:46 KawaEE: test plss
12:46 KawaEE: ;w;
12:46 ShikiNoHollow: ouhkay
12:46 *KawaEE is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/741749 Ogura Yui - Baby Sweet Berry Love (3R2 Remix)]
12:46 KawaEE: just press update button
12:46 ShikiNoHollow: updatinh
12:47 ShikiNoHollow: i just woke up , so i think i cant get A ==
12:47 KawaEE: yoi!
12:47 KawaEE: ah...... sorry
12:47 ShikiNoHollow: is not even 5 star?
12:47 ShikiNoHollow: ==
12:47 KawaEE: ahahaha
12:53 ShikiNoHollow: oo A
12:53 KawaEE: sorry shiki
12:53 ShikiNoHollow: that SV is more nicer
12:53 KawaEE: seems u sleepy now
12:53 ShikiNoHollow: nah im hungry
12:53 KawaEE: oh i see xD
12:53 KawaEE: hahahah hongry
12:53 ShikiNoHollow: i will S it :3
12:53 KawaEE: ouhkay
12:53 ShikiNoHollow: btw , you said it will be 5 star :<
12:54 KawaEE: .........i can't....
12:54 ShikiNoHollow: disapponted T^T
12:54 KawaEE: ..........limit
12:54 KawaEE: i can't anymore star-rating up
12:54 ShikiNoHollow: your stream can do like , 1 7 , 2 6 , 3 5 , 4
12:54 KawaEE: hm which part?
12:55 ShikiNoHollow: 01:03:585 - these maybe
12:56 KawaEE: oho
12:56 KawaEE: now 4.96star
12:57 ShikiNoHollow: 02:54:671 - this also
12:58 KawaEE: yea
12:58 ShikiNoHollow: 03:22:100 - these
12:58 KawaEE: \03:24:842 - this SV is
12:59 KawaEE: what do u think about?
12:59 KawaEE: 03:25:185 - 03:25:528 -
12:59 ShikiNoHollow: thats is awesome
12:59 ShikiNoHollow: really epic
12:59 KawaEE: same with this 01:06:328 -
12:59 KawaEE: oh really?
12:59 ShikiNoHollow: bit by bit becomes slower
12:59 ShikiNoHollow: 04:40:271 - there
13:00 ShikiNoHollow: your map is not hard
13:00 ShikiNoHollow: but is like hard to press
13:00 KawaEE: oh i see
13:00 KawaEE: :3
13:01 ShikiNoHollow: 05:29:642 - to 05:31:014 - stream?
13:01 KawaEE: ummmm
13:01 KawaEE: idk well this part
13:01 KawaEE: just same with this 00:41:642 -
13:02 ShikiNoHollow: that last part had a drum
13:02 ShikiNoHollow: the one you pointed dont have drum
13:02 KawaEE: ur right
13:03 ShikiNoHollow: :3
13:03 KawaEE: anyway thanks shiki <3
13:03 KawaEE: good feedback!
13:03 ShikiNoHollow: no prob
13:04 ShikiNoHollow: ireally glad i can help
13:04 KawaEE: ahahaha cute

soon, i will re-arrange about Last part and some stream.
thanks for feedback

kagiii

720 posts

Joined June 2014

kagiii 2015-07-19T12:59:23+00:00

Mod Ready ~

Mods

[Sweetness Overload!]
02:23:814 (143814|0) - move to 2? balance
02:38:042 (158042|0) - ^ to 2? some thing
03:17:642 (197642|6,197814|5) - Crtl + G?
04:19:871 (259871|0,260214|0,260557|0) - i think it will be nice if you change it to LN ?
05:32:214 (332214|6,332257|5,332300|4,332342|3) - how about Ctrl + J?

that was i found, it's too perfect for me xD , if this can't be help don't give mek kudos :3
GL~ Kawaaeeiii >w<

Kawawa

Topic Starter

Kawawa 2015-07-19T19:18:26+00:00

ExKagii- wrote:
Mod Ready ~

Mods
[Sweetness Overload!]
02:23:814 (143814|0) - move to 2? balance
02:38:042 (158042|0) - ^ to 2? some thing
03:17:642 (197642|6,197814|5) - Crtl + G? consider~
04:19:871 (259871|0,260214|0,260557|0) - i think it will be nice if you change it to LN ? I agree!
05:32:214 (332214|6,332257|5,332300|4,332342|3) - how about Ctrl + J? consider~

that was i found, it's too perfect for me xD , if this can't be help don't give mek kudos :3
GL~ Kawaaeeiii >w<

Thanks for mod!!!!! xD

Todestrieb

305 posts

Joined February 2014

Todestrieb 2015-07-19T21:10:01+00:00

Tried to mod, but this beatmap is already perfect

Shooting star toh

ArcherLove

1,434 posts

Joined March 2013

ArcherLove 2015-07-20T02:47:22+00:00

Todestrieb wrote:
Tried to mod, but this beatmap is already perfect

[2]

to Indonesia when?

chatlog warning long

08:51 *KawaEE is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/691638 ESTi - Ghostly Band ~ Phantom Ensemble [MX]]
08:51 KawaEE: very awesome chart
08:51 ArcherLove: hi! 
08:51 KawaEE: :3
08:51 ArcherLove: thanks!
08:51 ArcherLove: :3
08:51 KawaEE: but, i am not an expert about LN
08:51 ArcherLove: yeah, so lv.00 is maybe your superior :3
08:52 ArcherLove: but still opinion is important =w=
08:52 KawaEE: personally, i think that u have to skip some LN for player can feel more easily expreesion   (MX)
08:52 KawaEE: xD
08:52 KawaEE: but is good.
08:52 ArcherLove: thanks! ww
08:52 KawaEE: eh........btw......
08:52 ArcherLove: ya?
08:53 KawaEE: infact, soon, i planned to visit u
08:53 KawaEE: =w=
08:53 KawaEE: about any feedback
08:53 ArcherLove: ahh
08:53 *KawaEE is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/741749 Ogura Yui - Baby Sweet Berry Love (3R2 Remix)]
08:53 ArcherLove: I think for a second you come to Indonesia -w-
08:53 KawaEE: give me any feedback!
08:53 ArcherLove: ok!~
08:53 KawaEE: WAHAHA
08:53 ArcherLove: I will do my current task first wwww
08:53 KawaEE: wwww
08:53 ArcherLove: won't be long because only 1.30 chart~
08:54 KawaEE: oh i see
08:54 ArcherLove: wait a bit ok :3
08:54 KawaEE: :3
09:04 ArcherLove: ok done
09:04 ArcherLove: oh took 10 mins w
09:04 ArcherLove: oh two baby sweet berry love
09:05 KawaEE: ahahaha xD
09:05 KawaEE: two
09:06 KawaEE: can u testing?
09:06 ArcherLove: eh sorry checking browser a bit just then
09:06 ArcherLove: okay
09:06 KawaEE: yay
09:06 ArcherLove: can I turn off hitsound?
09:07 KawaEE: yea
09:07 ArcherLove: okay~
09:13 ArcherLove: nice map!
09:13 KawaEE: wwww hardrock
09:13 KawaEE: :O
09:13 ArcherLove: there is a bit repetitive pattern
09:13 ArcherLove: but I guess that's just what bms is
09:13 KawaEE: ETLove
09:13 ArcherLove: zzz
09:13 ArcherLove: why et ww
09:13 KawaEE: zzzz
09:14 KawaEE: u can give me some suggestion or feedback?
09:14 KawaEE: !!
09:14 ArcherLove: hmm wait I will try to look at editor
09:14 KawaEE: yaya
09:16 ArcherLove: !!
09:16 ArcherLove: 00:15:757 - missing not
09:16 ArcherLove: e
09:16 KawaEE: oh there is only vocal following
09:16 KawaEE: :3
09:17 ArcherLove: ohh okay then :3
09:17 KawaEE: 00:03:500 (3500|4,3757|6,3928|4,4014|6,4185|4,4357|6,4442|4) -  like stream
09:17 KawaEE: 00:04:785 (4785|5,5042|5,5214|5,5300|3,5471|4,5642|5,5814|6) -  synth?
09:17 KawaEE: and all "poppi" sounding is vocal
09:17 KawaEE: :3
09:17 ArcherLove:  oh but it is synth sound?
09:18 ArcherLove: the bubble sound is after 00:15:757- ?
09:19 KawaEE: ummm
09:19 ArcherLove: I mean the 00:15:757 - is synth sound and 00:15:842 - the bubble sound is here.. 
09:19 ArcherLove: rip explanation z
09:19 KawaEE: yea right
09:19 KawaEE: but my intend is
09:19 KawaEE: all spam synth and stream
09:19 KawaEE: just follow the vocal that part
09:19 KawaEE: xD
09:19 ArcherLove: ah okay I get it just now
09:19 ArcherLove: orz
09:19 KawaEE: ahahaha
09:20 ArcherLove: I too focused to the instrument and not noticing the girl orz
09:20 KawaEE: HAHAHA xD
09:21 ArcherLove: 01:09:071 (69071|2,69071|4,69071|0) - do you think you can add 1 more note at 7 because there is melody that sounded like01:08:385 (68385|6) - ?
09:22 ArcherLove: move 01:15:928 (75928|2) - to 5 maybe? for PR :3?
09:22 KawaEE: mhmhm
09:22 KawaEE: 01:09:071 -  that is  consider
09:23 KawaEE: btw what do u think about?
09:23 KawaEE: about this SV
09:23 KawaEE: 01:06:328 - ~01:07:700 -
09:24 ArcherLove: yeah it's trapping the visual system (eye)
09:24 ArcherLove: so for first-timer player that
09:24 ArcherLove: -
09:24 ArcherLove: that's not familiar with SV
09:24 ArcherLove: will miss
09:24 ArcherLove: other may be 200 or if they were superior with SV 300
09:24 KawaEE: yes, ur right,
09:25 ArcherLove: but I think the QAT will be like "please reconsider delete" or "please reconsider only 1 sv"
09:25 ArcherLove: zzzzzzz
09:25 KawaEE: before there is no SV 01:06:671 - 01:07:014 - 01:07:357 - 01:07:700 -
09:25 KawaEE: 01:06:328 -  only using x0.6
09:26 ArcherLove: it's too sudden
09:26 KawaEE: yea T^T
09:26 ArcherLove: wait
09:26 ArcherLove: I will thinking about something
09:26 KawaEE: so, fix  like this now
09:26 ArcherLove: oh only 0.6? or 9,8,7,6?
09:27 ArcherLove: I think it's okay this way too
09:27 ArcherLove: 01:09:071- this about the same as01:09:07 -
09:27 KawaEE: ummmm?
09:27 ArcherLove: asdf 01:09:071 -
09:27 ArcherLove: I think it's okay to keep the SV original
09:27 ArcherLove: not change it to 0.6 only :3
09:27 KawaEE: 01:06:328 - only 0.6?
09:28 KawaEE: and 01:06:671 - ~01:07:700 -  remove all?
09:28 ArcherLove: nooo keep the original
09:28 ArcherLove: it's okay to not change
09:28 ArcherLove: aa
09:28 KawaEE: 9876?
09:28 KawaEE: :3
09:28 ArcherLove: yes
09:28 ArcherLove: =w=
09:28 KawaEE: ohhhh
09:28 KawaEE: why?
09:28 ArcherLove: well I love sv
09:28 ArcherLove: so why not
09:28 KawaEE: i'm scare QAT
09:28 ArcherLove: do not scare ww
09:28 ArcherLove: later talk to expew
09:28 ArcherLove: or starry-
09:29 KawaEE: hahaha
09:29 ArcherLove: starry I recommend you, because he still "kind"
09:29 ArcherLove: spy is, well I think he will say "how about you remove it" orz so Starry- is best option 
09:29 KawaEE: okay then
09:30 KawaEE: hahaha
09:30 ArcherLove: 01:09:071 - about moving this to 6?
09:30 ArcherLove: 01:20:042 (80042|2,80042|4,80042|0) - this too
09:30 ArcherLove: I don't know but this song have many same rhythm 
09:30 ArcherLove: maybe my sugestion will be the same, but different time loop ;w;
09:31 KawaEE: haha don't worry
09:32 KawaEE: it's good helpful
09:33 ArcherLove: ww thanks, I will try to find anything again, my modding is consist only for missing note and PR/hand position, so it's really have a small chance to find misake ;w;
09:33 KawaEE: ;w;
09:34 KawaEE: i see www
09:34 ArcherLove: oh
09:34 ArcherLove: 03:12:500 (192500|3) - this
09:34 ArcherLove: how about change to 2 LN
09:34 ArcherLove: at 2 and 6
09:34 ArcherLove: .w.
09:34 ArcherLove: oh no don't do it
09:34 ArcherLove: it will worse for hand
09:35 KawaEE: ahahaha xD
09:35 ArcherLove: 03:24:842 ~ 03:35:814 - you only map 1 melody?
09:36 ArcherLove: if yes, then you missing 1 sound here 03:35:642 -
09:36 KawaEE: ummmmmmmmm
09:36 ArcherLove: I mean here
09:36 ArcherLove: 03:35:471-
09:36 ArcherLove: orz
09:36 ArcherLove: 03:35:471 -
09:36 KawaEE: then? 03:35:728 -
09:36 ArcherLove: hm how about middle?
09:36 ArcherLove: at 4
09:37 ArcherLove: collumn 1~7 (orz only say now)
09:37 KawaEE: If i delete this SV  01:06:328 - ~01:07:700 -
09:37 KawaEE: is okay?
09:37 ArcherLove: is ok
09:38 ArcherLove: I recommend not 0.6 sv
09:38 ArcherLove: but 01:06:328 - 0.8 then
09:38 ArcherLove: or 0.7
09:38 KawaEE: oh i see
09:38 KawaEE: 01:28:271 - here 0.8
09:38 ArcherLove:   yes there 0.8 so 01:06:328 - should be less 
09:39 ArcherLove: 0.7 I think 
09:39 ArcherLove: wait I will try first
09:39 KawaEE: yea
09:39 ArcherLove: or like this
09:40 ArcherLove: oh no just 0.7 is ok
09:40 KawaEE: just 0.7 is ok?
09:40 KawaEE: than 9876
09:40 ArcherLove: yes it's not really slow
09:40 ArcherLove: so should be still readable
09:41 ArcherLove: and not shock
09:41 ArcherLove: the player
09:41 KawaEE: yea
09:41 KawaEE: 03:24:842 - then same?
09:41 KawaEE: ~03:26:214 -
09:42 KawaEE: 03:25:185 - ~03:26:214 -  remove
09:42 KawaEE: 03:24:842 - and just 0.7
09:42 ArcherLove: it's still okay
09:42 ArcherLove: so 0.7 only should be fine
09:43 ArcherLove: okay I done taking a look at overall pattern it's great
09:43 ArcherLove: nothing to change for me, go ranked instant please 
09:44 ArcherLove: :'3
09:44 KawaEE: ahaha
09:44 KawaEE: if u post, i can give u kudo
09:44 ArcherLove: okies

Kawawa

Topic Starter

Kawawa 2015-07-20T03:12:27+00:00

Todestrieb wrote:
Tried to mod, but this beatmap is already perfect
Shooting star toh

HAHA.. Thanks!
But, I still need a lot of help.

Kawawa

Topic Starter

Kawawa 2015-07-20T03:13:56+00:00

ArcherLove wrote:

Todestrieb wrote:
Tried to mod, but this beatmap is already perfect

[2]

to Indonesia when?

chatlog warning long

08:51 *KawaEE is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/691638 ESTi - Ghostly Band ~ Phantom Ensemble [MX]]
08:51 KawaEE: very awesome chart
08:51 ArcherLove: hi! 
08:51 KawaEE: :3
08:51 ArcherLove: thanks!
08:51 ArcherLove: :3
08:51 KawaEE: but, i am not an expert about LN
08:51 ArcherLove: yeah, so lv.00 is maybe your superior :3
08:52 ArcherLove: but still opinion is important =w=
08:52 KawaEE: personally, i think that u have to skip some LN for player can feel more easily expreesion   (MX)
08:52 KawaEE: xD
08:52 KawaEE: but is good.
08:52 ArcherLove: thanks! ww
08:52 KawaEE: eh........btw......
08:52 ArcherLove: ya?
08:53 KawaEE: infact, soon, i planned to visit u
08:53 KawaEE: =w=
08:53 KawaEE: about any feedback
08:53 ArcherLove: ahh
08:53 *KawaEE is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/741749 Ogura Yui - Baby Sweet Berry Love (3R2 Remix)]
08:53 ArcherLove: I think for a second you come to Indonesia -w-
08:53 KawaEE: give me any feedback!
08:53 ArcherLove: ok!~
08:53 KawaEE: WAHAHA
08:53 ArcherLove: I will do my current task first wwww
08:53 KawaEE: wwww
08:53 ArcherLove: won't be long because only 1.30 chart~
08:54 KawaEE: oh i see
08:54 ArcherLove: wait a bit ok :3
08:54 KawaEE: :3
09:04 ArcherLove: ok done
09:04 ArcherLove: oh took 10 mins w
09:04 ArcherLove: oh two baby sweet berry love
09:05 KawaEE: ahahaha xD
09:05 KawaEE: two
09:06 KawaEE: can u testing?
09:06 ArcherLove: eh sorry checking browser a bit just then
09:06 ArcherLove: okay
09:06 KawaEE: yay
09:06 ArcherLove: can I turn off hitsound?
09:07 KawaEE: yea
09:07 ArcherLove: okay~
09:13 ArcherLove: nice map!
09:13 KawaEE: wwww hardrock
09:13 KawaEE: :O
09:13 ArcherLove: there is a bit repetitive pattern
09:13 ArcherLove: but I guess that's just what bms is
09:13 KawaEE: ETLove
09:13 ArcherLove: zzz
09:13 ArcherLove: why et ww
09:13 KawaEE: zzzz
09:14 KawaEE: u can give me some suggestion or feedback?
09:14 KawaEE: !!
09:14 ArcherLove: hmm wait I will try to look at editor
09:14 KawaEE: yaya
09:16 ArcherLove: !!
09:16 ArcherLove: 00:15:757 - missing not
09:16 ArcherLove: e
09:16 KawaEE: oh there is only vocal following
09:16 KawaEE: :3
09:17 ArcherLove: ohh okay then :3
09:17 KawaEE: 00:03:500 (3500|4,3757|6,3928|4,4014|6,4185|4,4357|6,4442|4) -  like stream
09:17 KawaEE: 00:04:785 (4785|5,5042|5,5214|5,5300|3,5471|4,5642|5,5814|6) -  synth?
09:17 KawaEE: and all "poppi" sounding is vocal
09:17 KawaEE: :3
09:17 ArcherLove:  oh but it is synth sound?
09:18 ArcherLove: the bubble sound is after 00:15:757- ?
09:19 KawaEE: ummm
09:19 ArcherLove: I mean the 00:15:757 - is synth sound and 00:15:842 - the bubble sound is here.. 
09:19 ArcherLove: rip explanation z
09:19 KawaEE: yea right
09:19 KawaEE: but my intend is
09:19 KawaEE: all spam synth and stream
09:19 KawaEE: just follow the vocal that part
09:19 KawaEE: xD
09:19 ArcherLove: ah okay I get it just now
09:19 ArcherLove: orz
09:19 KawaEE: ahahaha
09:20 ArcherLove: I too focused to the instrument and not noticing the girl orz
09:20 KawaEE: HAHAHA xD
09:21 ArcherLove: 01:09:071 (69071|2,69071|4,69071|0) - do you think you can add 1 more note at 7 because there is melody that sounded like01:08:385 (68385|6) - ?
09:22 ArcherLove: move 01:15:928 (75928|2) - to 5 maybe? for PR :3?
09:22 KawaEE: mhmhm
09:22 KawaEE: 01:09:071 -  that is  consider
09:23 KawaEE: btw what do u think about?
09:23 KawaEE: about this SV
09:23 KawaEE: 01:06:328 - ~01:07:700 -
09:24 ArcherLove: yeah it's trapping the visual system (eye)
09:24 ArcherLove: so for first-timer player that
09:24 ArcherLove: -
09:24 ArcherLove: that's not familiar with SV
09:24 ArcherLove: will miss
09:24 ArcherLove: other may be 200 or if they were superior with SV 300
09:24 KawaEE: yes, ur right,
09:25 ArcherLove: but I think the QAT will be like "please reconsider delete" or "please reconsider only 1 sv"
09:25 ArcherLove: zzzzzzz
09:25 KawaEE: before there is no SV 01:06:671 - 01:07:014 - 01:07:357 - 01:07:700 -
09:25 KawaEE: 01:06:328 -  only using x0.6
09:26 ArcherLove: it's too sudden
09:26 KawaEE: yea T^T
09:26 ArcherLove: wait
09:26 ArcherLove: I will thinking about something
09:26 KawaEE: so, fix  like this now
09:26 ArcherLove: oh only 0.6? or 9,8,7,6?
09:27 ArcherLove: I think it's okay this way too
09:27 ArcherLove: 01:09:071- this about the same as01:09:07 -
09:27 KawaEE: ummmm?
09:27 ArcherLove: asdf 01:09:071 -
09:27 ArcherLove: I think it's okay to keep the SV original
09:27 ArcherLove: not change it to 0.6 only :3
09:27 KawaEE: 01:06:328 - only 0.6?
09:28 KawaEE: and 01:06:671 - ~01:07:700 -  remove all?
09:28 ArcherLove: nooo keep the original
09:28 ArcherLove: it's okay to not change
09:28 ArcherLove: aa
09:28 KawaEE: 9876?
09:28 KawaEE: :3
09:28 ArcherLove: yes
09:28 ArcherLove: =w=
09:28 KawaEE: ohhhh
09:28 KawaEE: why?
09:28 ArcherLove: well I love sv
09:28 ArcherLove: so why not
09:28 KawaEE: i'm scare QAT
09:28 ArcherLove: do not scare ww
09:28 ArcherLove: later talk to expew
09:28 ArcherLove: or starry-
09:29 KawaEE: hahaha
09:29 ArcherLove: starry I recommend you, because he still "kind"
09:29 ArcherLove: spy is, well I think he will say "how about you remove it" orz so Starry- is best option 
09:29 KawaEE: okay then
09:30 KawaEE: hahaha
09:30 ArcherLove: 01:09:071 - about moving this to 6?
09:30 ArcherLove: 01:20:042 (80042|2,80042|4,80042|0) - this too
09:30 ArcherLove: I don't know but this song have many same rhythm 
09:30 ArcherLove: maybe my sugestion will be the same, but different time loop ;w;
09:31 KawaEE: haha don't worry
09:32 KawaEE: it's good helpful
09:33 ArcherLove: ww thanks, I will try to find anything again, my modding is consist only for missing note and PR/hand position, so it's really have a small chance to find misake ;w;
09:33 KawaEE: ;w;
09:34 KawaEE: i see www
09:34 ArcherLove: oh
09:34 ArcherLove: 03:12:500 (192500|3) - this
09:34 ArcherLove: how about change to 2 LN
09:34 ArcherLove: at 2 and 6
09:34 ArcherLove: .w.
09:34 ArcherLove: oh no don't do it
09:34 ArcherLove: it will worse for hand
09:35 KawaEE: ahahaha xD
09:35 ArcherLove: 03:24:842 ~ 03:35:814 - you only map 1 melody?
09:36 ArcherLove: if yes, then you missing 1 sound here 03:35:642 -
09:36 KawaEE: ummmmmmmmm
09:36 ArcherLove: I mean here
09:36 ArcherLove: 03:35:471-
09:36 ArcherLove: orz
09:36 ArcherLove: 03:35:471 -
09:36 KawaEE: then? 03:35:728 -
09:36 ArcherLove: hm how about middle?
09:36 ArcherLove: at 4
09:37 ArcherLove: collumn 1~7 (orz only say now)
09:37 KawaEE: If i delete this SV  01:06:328 - ~01:07:700 -
09:37 KawaEE: is okay?
09:37 ArcherLove: is ok
09:38 ArcherLove: I recommend not 0.6 sv
09:38 ArcherLove: but 01:06:328 - 0.8 then
09:38 ArcherLove: or 0.7
09:38 KawaEE: oh i see
09:38 KawaEE: 01:28:271 - here 0.8
09:38 ArcherLove:   yes there 0.8 so 01:06:328 - should be less 
09:39 ArcherLove: 0.7 I think 
09:39 ArcherLove: wait I will try first
09:39 KawaEE: yea
09:39 ArcherLove: or like this
09:40 ArcherLove: oh no just 0.7 is ok
09:40 KawaEE: just 0.7 is ok?
09:40 KawaEE: than 9876
09:40 ArcherLove: yes it's not really slow
09:40 ArcherLove: so should be still readable
09:41 ArcherLove: and not shock
09:41 ArcherLove: the player
09:41 KawaEE: yea
09:41 KawaEE: 03:24:842 - then same?
09:41 KawaEE: ~03:26:214 -
09:42 KawaEE: 03:25:185 - ~03:26:214 -  remove
09:42 KawaEE: 03:24:842 - and just 0.7
09:42 ArcherLove: it's still okay
09:42 ArcherLove: so 0.7 only should be fine
09:43 ArcherLove: okay I done taking a look at overall pattern it's great
09:43 ArcherLove: nothing to change for me, go ranked instant please 
09:44 ArcherLove: :'3
09:44 KawaEE: ahaha
09:44 KawaEE: if u post, i can give u kudo
09:44 ArcherLove: okies

wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Kurisu Makise

348 posts

Joined June 2013

Kurisu Makise 2015-07-20T05:01:08+00:00

Hi, KawaII

This map is really perfect, all my mod consist of suggestions. A few times i tried to change pattern and finally realized that i had done some shit

I'd really insist on one change only. It's marked with (*).

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

00:51:928 - Maybe try this: http://puu.sh/j5AC8/fc9bc5a752.png? I just couldn't escape the feeling that something is wrong with note in 1st column... If accept, than move 00:54:500 (54500|3) - to 1 for pattern consistency.
I tried to make section starting from 01:28:271 - more balanced and keep bms-style pattern consistency. As a result, i've got the following list of changes:

01:30:328 (90328|1) - Move to 5
01:33:071 (93071|1,93414|4,93757|3) - to 5-4-5
01:35:814 (95814|1) - to 5
01:37:014 (97014|4) - to 6
01:38:557 (98557|1) - to 5
01:41:300 (101300|1) - ^
01:44:042 (104042|1,104385|4,104728|3) - to 5-4-5

02:23:642 (143642|0) - Move to 3? I feel like shield note fits music better than double. And that double seemed to be out of any sequence.
02:34:614 - What about this: http://puu.sh/j5E0Q/29851536df.png?
02:37:871 (157871|0) - To 2 and 02:37:871 (157871|6,158042|5) - 1 column left. Note in 6th column seemed to be out of pattern. (*)
04:09:242 (249242|6) - To 5 if accept previous shield note suggestion.
04:31:014 (271014|5,271014|6) - Maybe 1 column left? To keep shift like here: 04:31:185 (271185|3,271185|1,271357|4,271357|2) -
05:09:757 (309757|0,309757|6,309814|5,309814|1,309871|2,309871|4) - Are you sure that it's not 1/12?
05:29:642 - Do you ignore 1/4 from here intentionally?

Good luck for rank :3

Kawawa

Topic Starter

Kawawa 2015-07-20T16:49:25+00:00

Kiviman wrote:
Hi, KawaII

This map is really perfect, all my mod consist of suggestions. A few times i tried to change pattern and finally realized that i had done some shit
I'd really insist on one change only. It's marked with (*).

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
00:51:928 - Maybe try this: http://puu.sh/j5AC8/fc9bc5a752.png? I just couldn't escape the feeling that something is wrong with note in 1st column... If accept, than move 00:54:500 (54500|3) - to 1 for pattern consistency. Good!
I tried to make section starting from 01:28:271 - more balanced and keep bms-style pattern consistency. As a result, i've got the following list of changes:
01:30:328 (90328|1) - Move to 5
01:33:071 (93071|1,93414|4,93757|3) - to 5-4-5
01:35:814 (95814|1) - to 5
01:37:014 (97014|4) - to 6
01:38:557 (98557|1) - to 5
01:41:300 (101300|1) - ^
01:44:042 (104042|1,104385|4,104728|3) - to 5-4-5
Sorry ;w; col 1/2/3 = my custom drum roll // col 4/5/6/7 = piano
02:23:642 (143642|0) - Move to 3? I feel like shield note fits music better than double. And that double seemed to be out of any sequence.
hmmm okie.
02:34:614 - What about this: http://puu.sh/j5E0Q/29851536df.png? consider~
02:37:871 (157871|0) - To 2 and 02:37:871 (157871|6,158042|5) - 1 column left. Note in 6th column seemed to be out of pattern. (*) ocake!
04:09:242 (249242|6) - To 5 if accept previous shield note suggestion. okie^^^
04:31:014 (271014|5,271014|6) - Maybe 1 column left? To keep shift like here: 04:31:185 (271185|3,271185|1,271357|4,271357|2) -
05:09:757 (309757|0,309757|6,309814|5,309814|1,309871|2,309871|4) - Are you sure that it's not 1/12? i don't think so about 1/12
05:29:642 - Do you ignore 1/4 from here intentionally? ummmmmmm...... consider!

Good luck for rank :3

Thanks for mod!!!

Koneko-

121 posts

Joined September 2009

Koneko- 2015-07-21T11:35:16+00:00

pm 요청으로 모딩하러 왔습니다.
0|1|2|3|4|5|6

Sweetness Overload!

[Hitsound]
01:39:242 (99242|4) - 여기에 서브베이스나 베이스음을 추가하는건 어떨지?
01:48:500 (108500|4) - 여기에 서브베이스가 빠진 것 같네요.
03:02:214 (182214|4) - 여기두요.
03:34:100 (214100|2) - ^
04:47:814 (287814|4) - ^

[Patterns]
04:58:957 (298957|3) - 여기에 노트 1개를 쓰는 것보다
04:58:957 (298957|0,298957|6) - 에 노트 2개를 쓰는게 더 났다고 생각합니다.
05:09:928 (309928|3) - 여기도 05:09:928 (309928|6,309928|0) - 에 노트를 두고
05:10:014 (310014|0,310014|6) 를 05:10:014 (310014|5,310014|1)에 두는게 났다고 생각합니다.

[Suggesion]
(무시해도 됩니다.)
01:11:814 (71814|1) - 0으로 이동.
01:22:785 (82785|1) - ^

전체적으로 깔끔해서 크게 지적할 만한 부분은 보이지 않네요.
7키 모딩은 처음이라 미숙하지만 도움이 됐으면 합니다.
GoodLuck!

Harbyter

Beatmap Nominator

1,364 posts

Joined October 2011

Harbyter 2015-07-21T15:27:14+00:00

good good, count on me for the qualify

Kawawa

Topic Starter

Kawawa 2015-07-21T16:03:03+00:00

dakemoto wrote:
pm 요청으로 모딩하러 왔습니다.
0|1|2|3|4|5|6

Sweetness Overload!
[Hitsound]
01:39:242 (99242|4) - 여기에 서브베이스나 베이스음을 추가하는건 어떨지?
01:48:500 (108500|4) - 여기에 서브베이스가 빠진 것 같네요.
03:02:214 (182214|4) - 여기두요.
03:34:100 (214100|2) - ^
04:47:814 (287814|4) - ^
힛사 미싱은 확실히 제 실수네요. 감사합니다!

[Patterns]
04:58:957 (298957|3) - 여기에 노트 1개를 쓰는 것보다
04:58:957 (298957|0,298957|6) - 에 노트 2개를 쓰는게 더 났다고 생각합니다.
05:09:928 (309928|3) - 여기도 05:09:928 (309928|6,309928|0) - 에 노트를 두고
05:10:014 (310014|0,310014|6) 를 05:10:014 (310014|5,310014|1)에 두는게 났다고 생각합니다.
좋은 피드백 감사합니다. 시간을 두고 한 번 고려해보겠습니다.

[Suggesion]
(무시해도 됩니다.)
01:11:814 (71814|1) - 0으로 이동.
01:22:785 (82785|1) - ^
col이 겹치는걸 선호하나, ^를 적용하며, 이참에 주변 패턴을 약간 리어렌지 해보았습니다

전체적으로 깔끔해서 크게 지적할 만한 부분은 보이지 않네요.
7키 모딩은 처음이라 미숙하지만 도움이 됐으면 합니다.
GoodLuck!