1. MX - 4Key (3.22 stars, 748 notes)
2. NM - 4Key (1.87 stars, 386 notes)
3. Shiki's HD - 4Key (2.54 stars, 622 notes)

My 7th beatmap & Second rank map

Yami-chan daisukiiiiiii >_<

by Nanatsu
by Julie

Difficulty list

NM by me
HD by ShikiNoHollow
MX by me

ShikiNoHollow wrote:

offset - 4 Okay

ill take MX , no kds

Shirou wrote:

ShikiNoHollow wrote:

offset - 4 Okay

ill take MX , no kds

Nope....

I want make NM+ diff from you...

IRC

19:50 Shirou: Hello Shiki
19:51 Shirou: Do you think create a GD?
19:51 *Shirou is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/734320 Ray - Secret arms]
19:51 Shirou: This map
19:52 Shirou: If you have intention pm plz
19:57 ShikiNoHollow: let me see
20:01 ShikiNoHollow: shirou
20:23 Shirou: Hey Shiki
20:23 Shirou: I want make NM+ diff from you...
20:23 ShikiNoHollow: shit
20:23 ShikiNoHollow: idk how to make NM diff like
20:24 ShikiNoHollow: i can make MX
20:25 Shirou: hm..
20:25 Shirou: Okay
20:25 *ShikiNoHollow is editing Ray - Secret arms [Shiki's MX]
20:26 Shirou: Are you made few star level?
20:26 ShikiNoHollow: 3.5 star below
20:26 Shirou: okay..
20:27 Shirou: Diff spread is NM+ HD+ MX?
20:27 ShikiNoHollow: i guess
20:27 ShikiNoHollow: after finish i tell you
20:27 Shirou: okay
20:33 Shirou: You should be somethnig to know. It's for rank after Sweet days.
20:33 ShikiNoHollow: yea
20:34 ShikiNoHollow: i just added you on fb
20:34 Shirou: okay
20:34 Shirou: wait
20:38 Shirou: If you can add firends me, do it plz :d
20:42 ShikiNoHollow: okay
21:13 Shirou: Please don't overmapping
21:13 ShikiNoHollow: wut
21:15 ShikiNoHollow: 3.15 star?
21:15 ShikiNoHollow: btw did you adjust the offset?
21:15 ShikiNoHollow: - 4 offset
21:16 Shirou: Yep
21:24 Shirou: complete?
21:24 ShikiNoHollow: no
21:24 Shirou: Okay if you complete pm to me
21:24 ShikiNoHollow: okay
21:39 ShikiNoHollow: 3.4 star
21:40 Shirou: Okay
21:40 Shirou: give me file
21:40 ShikiNoHollow: wait
21:40 ShikiNoHollow: 00:50:251 - set this preview point
21:40 ShikiNoHollow: more accurate
21:40 Shirou: okay
21:43 ShikiNoHollow: i think your diff more overmapped
21:43 ShikiNoHollow: that LN is overmapper
21:44 ShikiNoHollow: is puush alright?
21:44 Shirou: yes
21:44 ShikiNoHollow: http://puu.sh/iQjEB/b1bebd5a2b.rar
21:47 Shirou: hm.. wait
21:51 Shirou: Good
21:51 Shirou: you can modding my diff?
21:51 ShikiNoHollow: lol
21:51 ShikiNoHollow: i just irc
21:52 Shirou: okay
21:53 ShikiNoHollow: argh
21:54 ShikiNoHollow: your map is hard then mine
21:54 ShikiNoHollow: your diff*
21:54 Shirou: oh..
21:54 ShikiNoHollow: 00:00:543 (543|2,652|1) - what you follow this?
21:54 ShikiNoHollow: if you follow the piano , make 1/6 like my diff
21:54 Shirou: bell sound?
21:54 ShikiNoHollow: okay
21:54 ShikiNoHollow: bell
21:54 Shirou: okay
21:55 ShikiNoHollow: bell sounds weird
21:55 Shirou: okay
21:55 ShikiNoHollow: before i tell you , BN or QAT will change your bell sound to piano
21:55 ShikiNoHollow: but its up to you
21:56 Shirou: okay
21:57 ShikiNoHollow: what is this - 00:15:105 (15105|1) -
21:57 Shirou: oh.. mistake
21:57 Shirou: lol
21:57 ShikiNoHollow: :3
21:57 ShikiNoHollow: 00:19:813 (19813|1,20032|3) - ctrl+j
21:58 Shirou: done
21:58 ShikiNoHollow: 00:21:345 (21345|2,21564|3) - ctrl+j and - 00:21:783 (21783|2) - move to 4
21:58 ShikiNoHollow: pattern
21:59 Shirou: done
21:59 ShikiNoHollow: 00:23:864 - missing note
21:59 Shirou: done
22:00 ShikiNoHollow: 00:30:980 (30980|2) - move to 4
22:00 Shirou: done
22:01 ShikiNoHollow: 00:32:294 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3354981 pitch vocal
22:02 Shirou: done
22:02 ShikiNoHollow: 00:35:141 (35141|1) - move to 1
22:03 Shirou: done
22:04 ShikiNoHollow: 00:57:586 (57586|1) - move to 4
22:04 Shirou: done
22:04 ShikiNoHollow: 00:59:667 (59667|1) - to 3
22:05 Shirou: done
22:05 ShikiNoHollow: 01:00:324 (60324|2) - to 4
22:05 Shirou: done
22:05 ShikiNoHollow: 01:03:389 (63389|1) - to 1
22:05 ShikiNoHollow: 01:05:798 (65798|1) - to 1
22:06 Shirou: done
22:06 ShikiNoHollow: 01:09:959 (69959|1) - to 1
22:06 Shirou: done
22:06 ShikiNoHollow: 01:11:710 (71710|3) - move to 1 , and - 01:11:601 (71601|1) - move to 4
22:07 ShikiNoHollow: 01:12:258 (72258|2,72367|3) - ctrl+j01:12:477 (72477|2) - move to 4 , avoid same place jack
22:08 ShikiNoHollow: 01:15:871 - kick , you should add a note
22:08 Shirou: dibe
22:08 Shirou: done
22:08 ShikiNoHollow: 01:20:689 (80689|1) - ??? ghost note
22:09 ShikiNoHollow: remove
22:09 Shirou: done
22:09 ShikiNoHollow: 01:25:178 - kick , add
22:09 ShikiNoHollow: 01:25:506 - ^
22:09 ShikiNoHollow: 01:25:944 - ^
22:09 ShikiNoHollow: i got to edit my diff
22:10 Shirou: done
22:10 ShikiNoHollow: ill post on forum

ShikiNoHollow wrote:

offset - 4 Okay

:3 , i dont think i can make simple NM :v , still taking MX :v

EDIT

IRC

19:50 Shirou: Hello Shiki
19:51 Shirou: Do you think create a GD?
19:51 *Shirou is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/734320 Ray - Secret arms]
19:51 Shirou: This map
19:52 Shirou: If you have intention pm plz
19:57 ShikiNoHollow: let me see
20:01 ShikiNoHollow: shirou
20:23 Shirou: Hey Shiki
20:23 Shirou: I want make NM+ diff from you...
20:23 ShikiNoHollow: shit
20:23 ShikiNoHollow: idk how to make NM diff like
20:24 ShikiNoHollow: i can make MX
20:25 Shirou: hm..
20:25 Shirou: Okay
20:25 *ShikiNoHollow is editing Ray - Secret arms [Shiki's MX]
20:26 Shirou: Are you made few star level?
20:26 ShikiNoHollow: 3.5 star below
20:26 Shirou: okay..
20:27 Shirou: Diff spread is NM+ HD+ MX?
20:27 ShikiNoHollow: i guess
20:27 ShikiNoHollow: after finish i tell you
20:27 Shirou: okay
20:33 Shirou: You should be somethnig to know. It's for rank after Sweet days.
20:33 ShikiNoHollow: yea
20:34 ShikiNoHollow: i just added you on fb
20:34 Shirou: okay
20:34 Shirou: wait
20:38 Shirou: If you can add firends me, do it plz :d
20:42 ShikiNoHollow: okay
21:13 Shirou: Please don't overmapping
21:13 ShikiNoHollow: wut
21:15 ShikiNoHollow: 3.15 star?
21:15 ShikiNoHollow: btw did you adjust the offset?
21:15 ShikiNoHollow: - 4 offset
21:16 Shirou: Yep
21:24 Shirou: complete?
21:24 ShikiNoHollow: no
21:24 Shirou: Okay if you complete pm to me
21:24 ShikiNoHollow: okay
21:39 ShikiNoHollow: 3.4 star
21:40 Shirou: Okay
21:40 Shirou: give me file
21:40 ShikiNoHollow: wait
21:40 ShikiNoHollow: 00:50:251 - set this preview point
21:40 ShikiNoHollow: more accurate
21:40 Shirou: okay
21:43 ShikiNoHollow: i think your diff more overmapped
21:43 ShikiNoHollow: that LN is overmapper
21:44 ShikiNoHollow: is puush alright?
21:44 Shirou: yes
21:44 ShikiNoHollow: http://puu.sh/iQjEB/b1bebd5a2b.rar
21:47 Shirou: hm.. wait
21:51 Shirou: Good
21:51 Shirou: you can modding my diff?
21:51 ShikiNoHollow: lol
21:51 ShikiNoHollow: i just irc
21:52 Shirou: okay
21:53 ShikiNoHollow: argh
21:54 ShikiNoHollow: your map is hard then mine
21:54 ShikiNoHollow: your diff*
21:54 Shirou: oh..
21:54 ShikiNoHollow: 00:00:543 (543|2,652|1) - what you follow this?
21:54 ShikiNoHollow: if you follow the piano , make 1/6 like my diff
21:54 Shirou: bell sound?
21:54 ShikiNoHollow: okay
21:54 ShikiNoHollow: bell
21:54 Shirou: okay
21:55 ShikiNoHollow: bell sounds weird
21:55 Shirou: okay
21:55 ShikiNoHollow: before i tell you , BN or QAT will change your bell sound to piano
21:55 ShikiNoHollow: but its up to you
21:56 Shirou: okay
21:57 ShikiNoHollow: what is this - 00:15:105 (15105|1) -
21:57 Shirou: oh.. mistake
21:57 Shirou: lol
21:57 ShikiNoHollow: :3
21:57 ShikiNoHollow: 00:19:813 (19813|1,20032|3) - ctrl+j
21:58 Shirou: done
21:58 ShikiNoHollow: 00:21:345 (21345|2,21564|3) - ctrl+j and - 00:21:783 (21783|2) - move to 4
21:58 ShikiNoHollow: pattern
21:59 Shirou: done
21:59 ShikiNoHollow: 00:23:864 - missing note
21:59 Shirou: done
22:00 ShikiNoHollow: 00:30:980 (30980|2) - move to 4
22:00 Shirou: done
22:01 ShikiNoHollow: 00:32:294 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3354981 pitch vocal
22:02 Shirou: done
22:02 ShikiNoHollow: 00:35:141 (35141|1) - move to 1
22:03 Shirou: done
22:04 ShikiNoHollow: 00:57:586 (57586|1) - move to 4
22:04 Shirou: done
22:04 ShikiNoHollow: 00:59:667 (59667|1) - to 3
22:05 Shirou: done
22:05 ShikiNoHollow: 01:00:324 (60324|2) - to 4
22:05 Shirou: done
22:05 ShikiNoHollow: 01:03:389 (63389|1) - to 1
22:05 ShikiNoHollow: 01:05:798 (65798|1) - to 1
22:06 Shirou: done
22:06 ShikiNoHollow: 01:09:959 (69959|1) - to 1
22:06 Shirou: done
22:06 ShikiNoHollow: 01:11:710 (71710|3) - move to 1 , and - 01:11:601 (71601|1) - move to 4
22:07 ShikiNoHollow: 01:12:258 (72258|2,72367|3) - ctrl+j01:12:477 (72477|2) - move to 4 , avoid same place jack
22:08 ShikiNoHollow: 01:15:871 - kick , you should add a note
22:08 Shirou: dibe
22:08 Shirou: done
22:08 ShikiNoHollow: 01:20:689 (80689|1) - ??? ghost note
22:09 ShikiNoHollow: remove
22:09 Shirou: done
22:09 ShikiNoHollow: 01:25:178 - kick , add
22:09 ShikiNoHollow: 01:25:506 - ^
22:09 ShikiNoHollow: 01:25:944 - ^
22:09 ShikiNoHollow: i got to edit my diff
22:10 Shirou: done
22:10 ShikiNoHollow: ill post on forum

ZTechnoBladez wrote:

could i assist on the NM+?

Adinata28 wrote:

where's the NM ? D:

Niks wrote:

드럼음에서 노트를 1개만 두기엔 소리가
애매해서 저는 2개놓는쪽으로..

MX

00:18:499 (18499|2) - 노트 추가
00:20:251 (20251|2) - ^
00:20:689 (20689|2) - ^
00:36:017 (36017|1) - ^
00:36:455 (36455|1) - ^
00:37:331 (37331|2) - ^
00:37:550 (37550|3) - ^
00:37:769 (37769|3) - ^
00:37:878 (37878|1) - ^
00:37:988 (37988|1) - 4로 이동
00:38:426 (38426|1) - 노트 추가
00:39:083 (39083|1) - ^
00:41:053 (41053|2) - ^
00:43:024 (43024|0) - ^
00:43:462 (43462|0) - ^
00:44:338 (44338|1) - ^
00:44:557 (44557|2) - ^
00:44:776 (44776|3) - 4로 이동
00:44:886 (44886|2) - 노트 추가
00:44:995 (44995|2) - 노트 제거
00:45:214 (45214|0) - 노트 추가
00:45:433 (45433|1) - ^
00:49:813 (49813|3) - 이 지점에서 00:50:032 (50032|2) - 까지 음이있는데 롱노트 어떠신가요 변속으로 맞출꺼라..
00:50:141 (50141|1) - 노트 추가
00:50:251 (50251|0) - ^
00:50:360 (50360|3) - ^
00:50:470 (50470|1) - ^
00:50:579 (50579|2) - ^
00:57:586 (57586|3) - 고스트 노트 음 있습니다.
00:57:805 (57805|1) - 노트 추가
00:58:353 (58353|2,58353|3) - 노트 2개추가 하나 추가했습니다
00:59:557 (59557|2) - 노트 추가 추가 했습니다
00:59:776 (59776|3) - ^
01:00:105 (60105|0) - ^
01:00:214 (60214|2) - ^
01:05:689 (65689|2) - ^
01:06:126 (66126|1) - ^
01:07:440 (67440|3) - ^
01:08:535 (68535|0) - ^
01:08:864 (68864|2) - ^
01:09:302 (69302|3) - ^
01:09:411 (69411|1) - ^
01:09:521 (69521|1) - 노트 제거
01:10:397 (70397|1) - ^
01:10:287 (70287|1) - 노트 추가
01:10:944 (70944|2) - ^
01:17:951 (77951|0) - 여긴 허전했었어요 노트 추가
01:18:170 (78170|2) - 여기도 노트 추가

Pang wrote:

노래좋댜

Aphrodena wrote:

Hi, from queue, col 1234

[MX]
00:01:856 (1856|3,2075|2) - Swap for pitch relevancy
00:22:440 (22440|3) - Not sure what these LN map to... if they're for guitar, they at least go to the white line - > change untill 00:22:659
00:22:769 - Add note for drum sound
00:23:316 (23316|0) - Same with the other LN, not too sure what it maps to. (the guitar goes to 00:23:535 at least)
01:02:294 - Add note to 4
01:02:951 - ^, to 1
01:04:046 - ^, to 2
01:04:703 - ^

Can't really say I like the use of 4 note chords all that much, makes the map clunky and not smooth to play, but that might just be me lol

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Good luck Shirou <3
I like this song

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

Hi Shirou! Mod from your IRL request LOL

|1|2|3|4|

[General]

BG: 1366 x 768 No problem also Video.
MP3: 192 kbps No problem
Spread: No problem
AI mod: No problem
Audio and Hitsound: All hitsounds are using but Not fit with your NM and MX diff. You're using soft in NM diff.
ex. 00:00:762 - 00:51:564 - 01:23:097 - These timings are using Soft hitsounds in NM diff. But MX isn't. I'll catch this in mod. and Shiki's HD. Please add hitsound XD
Timing: No problem
Etc: You should remove Tactics.jpg in your file It isn't using now. Please remove this
Widescreen Support only turn off in MX diff. Please turn off all.
You should add the this tag. To LOVE ru -trouble-Darkness. It's romanised name of Source. It's rule
Kiai time is inconsistency.
NM : Starts on 00:51:564, ends on 01:23:097
MX : Starts on 00:51:564, ends on 01:23:097
Shiki's HD : Starts on 00:51:564, ends on 01:21:783
It's not rules because it's guest diff. But I suggest to make same with Shiki's HD

[Inconsistency hitsounds]

00:06:893 (6893|2,6893|3) - You're using whistle and clap hitsounds in NM diff. But MX diff is only using clap sound.

00:38:207 (38207|1) - You're using finish sound in NM diff. But MX diff is using whistle sound.

00:38:645 (38645|3) - Same reason. Using finish sound in NM diff. But MX diff is using whistle sound.

00:41:053 (41053|0) - MX diff has a whistle sound. But NM hasn't any hitsounds.

00:41:491 (41491|2) - MX diff has a clap but NM diff hasn't any hitsounds.

00:51:564 (51564|1,51564|2) - MX diff has a finish sound in this timing. But NM diff just has a whistle sound.

01:19:594 (79594|2) - NM diff has a finish sound but MX diff has a clap sound.

[NM]

00:02:075 (2075|3,2294|1) - How about make 3->4 pattern? Because. You can see the 3 col is lonely a long time ;w; He needs a friend. and It will make more unaffected Pattern I think.

00:03:170 (3170|3) - For balance. How about move to 2 ? It is using only one hand. Some players will feel it's hard.

00:19:484 (19484|2,19594|1) - About this part. I suggest to remove 00:19:594 (19594|1) - This note and just follow the symbol sound. Because. It's kinda unnatural pattern. or If you use a two notes in this timing. Will be unaffected. But that's hard in NM diff. Isn't it? XD and It's not loud sound too. It can be loud with hitsound.

00:21:017 (21017|2,21126|1,21236|0) - Ctrl + J this part. Because 00:20:907 (20907|3) - It seems different sounds with that three notes. For more good unaffected.

00:22:221 (22221|1,22221|3,22440|2) - Amm... I'm not sure about this 2->1 notes. Because 00:22:440 - This timing has more powerful sound than 00:22:221 - This timing. But the chords are reverse. I guess you're using two notes with clap sounds. Please consider this.

00:27:915 (27915|1,28024|2,28134|3) - Ctrl + J this part.It same reason with 00:21:017 - Part. It's not fit sound with 00:27:805 (27805|0) - This note. It was kinda awkward.

00:30:105 (30105|0,30105|2) - I suggest to remove a one note. It's for consistent pattern. Look at this.

Images

00:29:229 -

00:31:418 -

Inconsistent right? and You also add a one note in here. 00:31:856 - Please consider this.

00:47:185 - It seems like same pattern with here. 00:46:309 - But I suggest to make a 2.3->1.3 pattern only this part. 00:47:185
For more fresh pattern and fit with sound I think.

00:47:842 (47842|1) - I suggest to make this just NM note. also you can add a note in this timing too. 00:47:951 Yeah. It's 1/8 sound but too small. Players will not able to hear this sounds. So I just suggest to make a NM note or add a note in 1/4 snap.

00:57:696 (57696|2,58024|1) - I don't know what sound you're following XD It seems vocal sound I guess. But... it's not good I guess. Because This word finish in here. 00:58:579
So My suggestion is this. 00:57:696 -

Images

01:23:754 (83754|0) - It should finish in here. 01:24:192 - Seems you're following a guitar sound. But guitar finish on this timing. 01:24:192 -

[MX]

00:05:360 (5360|3,5579|2,5798|1) - This pattern. I suggest to this. 00:05:360 (5360|3) - Move to 2 and 00:05:798 (5798|1) - Move to 4. You know. It's for pitch. Melody gonna be low whenever 1/2 snap. and If you follow this. Don't forget this! 00:06:893 (6893|3) -

00:07:112 (7112|2,7221|3) - I suggest to make a jack. It's seems a some sound. and It's kinda a low BPM right? But... Yeah. We have a 4 chord. so If you follow this. Jack gonna be a three. Depend on your mind XD

00:10:178 (10178|3) - It should be LN I guess like this 00:09:302 (9302|3) - It seems a long melody. And If you follow this. Move to 3 For no overlap note.

00:14:776 (14776|1) - It should be LN. You can reference your NM diff.

Image

Sorry for weird BG. If my brother will see anime BG. I will be hit XD

And 00:15:433 - Need LN too. I told a reason XD

00:15:871 - About this notes. don't need three notes I think. Because you used a 1-1-2 note in normal. That means this timing has a not low sounds than 00:16:090 - This. I mean. 00:15:871 - 00:16:090 - This two timings has a same pitch. I suggest to remove 3.

00:19:594 (19594|0,19594|3,19594|1,19813|3,19813|2) - Yes. same reason. It seems same sounds with 00:17:842 (17842|1,17842|0,18061|2,18061|3) - This guys. I suggest to remove a 00:19:594 (19594|3) - this guy (This note have a hitsound. It you remove this. Don't forget a add the hitsound on other notes.) or 00:19:594 (19594|1) - This guy.

00:31:418 (31418|2,31637|1,31856|2,32075|3) - I don't know what sounds you're following XD Piano sounds are only this guys. 00:31:418 (31418|2,31856|2) -

00:38:207 (38207|2,38426|3) - Same reason. This timing only has a drum beat + some less melody sound. But this LNs aren't fit anywhere.

00:44:886 (44886|1,44886|2,44995|3) - It's not fit with pitch. Actually. this timing should be two notes. 00:44:995 - Have more big drum sound. but 00:44:886 - This timing only has a kick sounds.

00:45:214 (45214|2,45433|3) - Yeah. Same reason with 00:38:207 (38207|2,38426|3)

00:59:776 - You should add one a note in this timing. Because 00:59:229 (59229|1,59338|2) - You used a notes in this timing. and It seems a same sound.

01:23:754 (83754|2) - Same reason with NM mod.

Good luck

Aphrodena wrote:

Hi, from queue, col 1234

[Shiki's HD]
I like this diff! i hope it satisfied you
00:45:652 (45652|2) - Move to col 2 for hand balance, because there are 4 bass kicks in a row on col 3 idk , but follow
01:12:148 (72148|1) - Perhaps do a 12/34/12/34 fill here? Maybe if it doesn't feel too hard rearrange
01:18:499 - Add note for snare, and it's not a really hard pattern added
01:22:878 (82878|1) - Move to col 3 to avoid mini jack not a jack :v