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Ogura Yui - Honey Come!! (TV size)

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Suimya
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Suimya
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, July 13, 2015 at 10:25:40 AM

Artist: Ogura Yui
Title: Honey Come!! (TV size)
Source: 城下町のダンデライオン
Tags: YuiKaori ゆいかおり Kaori Ishihara 石原夏織 lolicon Oomori Shouko 大森祥子 Shunryu 俊龍 Ookuba Kaoru 大久保薫 Hikari Sakurada 櫻田光Castle Town Dandelion Joukamachi no Dandelion TVsize ending Sekai Kawaiwkyik eINess CelsiusLK KantoKun
BPM: 184
Filesize: 14308kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Celsius' Hard (3.11 stars, 268 notes)
  2. Easy (1.56 stars, 112 notes)
  3. eINess' Normal (2 stars, 156 notes)
  4. Insane (4.12 stars, 350 notes)
  5. Kanto's Insane (4.78 stars, 347 notes)
  6. wkyik's Extra (4.99 stars, 388 notes)
Download: Ogura Yui - Honey Come!! (TV size)
Download: Ogura Yui - Honey Come!! (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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YUI <3

Using random bg, because I didn't like any of this anime bgs so far, so please don't ask about it!

DON'T USE MY MP3/VIDEO/BGs WITHOUT ASKING ME FIRST!

Metadata: http://www.tbs.co.jp/anime/dande/disc/cd1.html

Video by Meyrink
Last edited by Suimya , edited 49 times in total.
Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
/me slaps bakai =3=/
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Sekai <3
Ujimatsu Chiya
2,480 posts
Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya
http://puu.sh/iMk99/eeec1d610d.zip

owo~
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
http://puu.sh/iMnaU/206c1a5a7a.rar
i will add hitsound tomorrow
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks everyone, added both diffs right now =w=/
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
http://puu.sh/iMMdp/82cb3bbdeb.rar
done hitsound!
also changed diff name to wkyik's Insane
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Added and finally moved to pending <3
Dilectus
1,727 posts
Joined April 2014
Dilectus
From your own modding queue

General:
Use the same kiai time on every difficulty. Talking to you, Celsius and elNess.

Insane:
00:15:596(7,8) - Stack with 00:14:944(5)
00:39:401(5,6) - I think ctrl+g would make it flow better.
00:48:147(5) - I see you're trying to blanket the note in the middle but it doesnt look that good atm. But move it down to x:348 y:272 and blanket. Looks better ^^
01:07:770(5,6,7) - Maybe I'm just nazi now but wouldn't it be better if you increased the spacing? It is kiai time after all.

Celsius Hard:
AR8?
00:23:096(3) - Copy and paste 00:23:423(2) and ctrl+h ctrl+g and move it to place.
01:21:466(1) - You could've done something nice with this slider like you did to 01:22:607(2)

Cant really mod normal or easy. xD
Overall the difficulties are well made and I expect a bubble soon enough. ^^
Tenseki
803 posts
Joined November 2013
Tenseki
hi~ m4m~

[General]
Make a same KIAI timing and Check Widescreen Support on Design toggles with ALL diffs

[Easy]
First, im not good at Easy mod but i try
00:20:162 (3,1) - not recommend overlapping on Easy diff :D Should fix please
00:36:466 (2,3) - ^
01:08:423 (1,3) - ^
01:14:944 (4,1) -

[eINess' Normal]
Fine

[Celsus's Hard]
00:49:836 (4) - looks little odd shape with flow
everythings are fine for me except for which

[Insane]
00:10:705 - add one cirlce cuz i can hear sound
00:12:010 (6,1) - i feel strange about patterns. how about this?
SPOILER
00:14:781 (4,5) - ^, ctrl+g for pattern?
00:43:966 (4) - nc for highlight
01:04:754 (3,4) - i think this patterns should be changed to 1/2 of two circles
01:19:999 (5) - nc for consistence
01:22:118 (3) - overlap is not fit as well on this time
01:26:357 - add one slider? i can hear guitar sound

[wkyik's insane]
00:07:770 (2) - nc for distinction
00:17:064 (2,3) - ctrl+g for feeling jumpy like this 00:17:553 (1,2,3) -
00:20:732 (3) - i can hear emphasize thing like drum-kick. so add whislte?
00:26:031 (4) - add whislte on head? and i can hear 00:26:194 (5) 's head too
00:31:086 (3) - ctrl+g? for flow
01:06:466 (3) - blanket?
01:18:042 (3) - swap nc 01:18:857 (1) with 01:19:183 (2) cuz rhythms change on 01:19:020

That's all. I hope these helpful
GL~
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for the mod guys, Fixed everything on my insane, I really think the overlaps on easy are fine imo o.o/
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Pending already? o.o
That was fast lol XD
Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Iceskulls

DavidEd wrote:

From your own modding queue

General:
Use the same kiai time on every difficulty. Talking to you, Celsius and elNess. :arrow: I want to keep kiai on my diff because it reallt fit the song there imo , inconsistent kiai between gd is k

Celsius Hard:
AR8? :arrow: maybe ? let me think about it
00:23:096(3) - Copy and paste 00:23:423(2) and ctrl+h ctrl+g and move it to place. :arrow: nah , current pattern pretty much fit the song
01:21:466(1) - You could've done something nice with this slider like you did to 01:22:607(2) :arrow: circular flow looks cool for this part xD

Cant really mod normal or easy. xD
Overall the difficulties are well made and I expect a bubble soon enough. ^^

Tenseki wrote:

[notice]hi~ m4m~

[General]
Make a same KIAI timing and Check Widescreen Support on Design toggles with ALL diffs :arrow: inconsistent kiai betwwen gd is fine

[Celsus's Hard]
00:49:836 (4) - looks little odd shape with flow :arrow: mmm this beat kinda fit upward flow , I don't want to use straight tho since it make pattern a bit not instresting so curve is best option here
everythings are fine for me except for which

That's all. I hope these helpful
GL~
thanks for the mods

didn't fix anything.......orz
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia

Tenseki wrote:

[wkyik's insane]
00:07:770 (2) - nc for distinction i think it's fine
00:17:064 (2,3) - ctrl+g for feeling jumpy like this 00:17:553 (1,2,3) - i want this flow
00:20:732 (3) - i can hear emphasize thing like drum-kick. so add whislte? add drum-clap
00:26:031 (4) - add whislte on head? and i can hear 00:26:194 (5) 's head too
00:31:086 (3) - ctrl+g? for flow flow is fine imo
01:06:466 (3) - blanket?
01:18:042 (3) - swap nc 01:18:857 (1) with 01:19:183 (2) cuz rhythms change on 01:19:020 i think fine too[/notice]

That's all. I hope these helpful
GL~
6456456
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Honey.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 44455
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 3.699998

[Metadata]
Title:Honey Come!! (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Honey♥Come!! (TV size)
Artist:Ogura Yui
ArtistUnicode:小倉唯
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:wkyik's Insane
Source:城下町のダンデライオン
Tags:Castle Town Dandelion Joukamachi no Dandelion TVsize TV Size ending Sekai Kawaiwkyik eINess CelsiusLK
BeatmapID:731966
BeatmapSetID:330175

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OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9.1
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SliderTickRate:1

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Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
updated and fixed the hp drain on my diff =3=/
Exa
445 posts
Joined January 2015
Exa
[Easy]


00:09:727 (5) - You can easily map the beat which you are skipping. Make this into Slider + Note.
00:20:162 (3,1) - Not a big issue but try finding a way to avoid the overlap.
00:43:477 - End the slider here. It's end is mapping nothing.
00:45:596 (2,3) - These 2 are not perfectly symmetrical.
00:56:683 (3,1) - It will relatively easy to find a way around this overlap.
01:05:814 (1,2) - The fake blanket is imperfect.

[eINess' Normal]


- I feel like the SV is a bit high.
00:05:162 (2,3,1) - This might be too confusing for new players. It looks too cramped.
00:39:727 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same especially when this happens 2 times in a row. It gets too hard too quickly.
00:51:466 (1,2) - Blanket is imperfect.
00:52:770 (1,2) - Blanket is imperfect.
00:52:770 (1,1) - These are not perfectly symmetrical.
01:15:107 - Map this. It's a strong vocalic beat.
01:16:738- Maybe try mapping this too.
01:17:716 - And this.
01:23:423 (2,3,1) - I seriously suggest you find another pattern.

[Celsius' Hard]


00:09:075 (3,4) - You can blanket those.
00:38:912 (3,4,5) - Try making using a symmetrical pattern here, use (3,4) as reference for how (5) should be.
01:19:020 - Start spinner here?

[Insane]

00:02:879 (8,1) - I find this to be to big of a jump which should not be included in the introductory flow. I suggest moving (8) somewhere around (288,280).
00:07:770 (7,1) - There is an audio sample that can be heard between these 2 objects, keeping the cursor still during that seems awkward.
00:24:564 (2,3,4,5) - I can see readability problems popping up here.
00:34:183 (3,3) - Try forming a fake blanket.
00:49:836 (8,9,1) - I like how you dealt with this though.
01:02:879 (4) - I would move that on the right instead of left in order to increase tension for the upcoming beat.
01:11:031 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket.
01:21:466 (1,3) - Y u overlap. It doesn't look bad, but it's unnecessary.

[wkyik's Insane]


00:03:531 (2) - I would move that around (284,140). But they way it's mapped right now seems fitting too.
00:33:042 (4,1) - Don't stack those, move the 1/4 slider a bit up. (Aesthetics)
00:55:053 (2,3,1) - Try making the note flow symmetrical to the slider.
00:58:477 (3,4) - Too big, doesn't play comfortably nice for someone of this map's level.
01:00:270 (7,1) - Bad looking overlap.
01:06:303 (2,3) - Imperfect blanket.
01:26:031 (2,3) - Imperfect blanket.
01:27:988 (1) - Handicapped slider XD.

[General]


- Check tags on all diffs and make sure they are the same.
- Moar combo colors?
- Why am I loving wkyik's Insane?
Last edited by Exa , edited 1 time in total.
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for modding Exa, fixed mostly everything on easy.

and only fixed the nazi stuff on my Insane since, i meant to those stuff on my insane

so yeah i'll just keep it as it for now =w=
Ujimatsu Chiya
2,480 posts
Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya

Exa wrote:

[eINess' Normal]


- I feel like the SV is a bit high.
00:05:162 (2,3,1) - This might be too confusing for new players. It looks too cramped. // but how make better here? idk what's better then now.
00:39:727 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same especially when this happens 2 times in a row. It gets too hard too quickly. // save above
00:51:466 (1,2) - Blanket is imperfect.
00:52:770 (1,2) - Blanket is imperfect.
00:52:770 (1,1) - These are not perfectly symmetrical.
01:15:107 - Map this. It's a strong vocalic beat. // looks good enough
01:16:738- Maybe try mapping this too. // ^
01:17:716 - And this. // ^
01:23:423 (2,3,1) - I seriously suggest you find another pattern. // have any idea?
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140,64,45923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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331,82,54401,2,0,L|253:43,1,57.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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138,187,62879,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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440,108,74292,2,0,L|441:199,1,57.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
471,207,74618,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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360,132,79999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,132,80162,6,0,L|346:15,2,115,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,213,81140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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96,112,83423,1,2,0:0:0:0:
139,84,83586,2,0,L|129:24,2,57.5
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388,53,84727,2,0,P|458:68|482:117,1,115,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,86683,12,4,88477,0:0:0:0:

thanks mod~
Suimya
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Suimya
updated <3
pkhg
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Joined May 2010
pkhg
hiya :3/

[Easy]

01:16:249 (1,2,3) - try this http://puu.sh/iNhgb/a8ebb51b84.png so you'll avoid the 3/2 gap and make the downbeat clickable :3
01:26:683 (1) - you forgot the finish, baka

[eINess' Normal]

00:07:118 (3) - NC to keep consistency

[Celsius' Hard]

00:14:292 (3) - remove finish
00:14:781 (1) - finish on head
00:33:694 (2) - normal whistle on purpose?

everything else is cool :3

good luck o/
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