340 wrote:

хорошая карта и придраться мало к чему могу, разве что к мелочам
[Insane]

1. letterboxing during breaks, думаю, лучше будет отключить. спецом оставила, как по мне, классно выглядит в брейках ;о
2. 00:16:057 (5) - неплохо было бы подобные моменты слегка заглушить, ибо так сложно понять, чему в песне они соответствуют. этот заглушила, а подобные = какие?
3. 00:28:902 (1,2) - drum claps/finishes? можно
4. 00:39:841 (1) - ну нормал тут совсем как-то не к месту, имо могу заглушить к 30%, вроде неплохо звучит
5. 02:10:504 (2,3,4) - совсем этого момента не понимаю. вроде бы и под музыку особо не ложится (или я глухой и чего-то не слышу. но даже если и так, то я не уверен, что эти звуки стоят того, чтобы их вот так вот выделяли), а жопу своей неудобностью при игре ноты рвут. тут явно какие-то другие звуки в инстументах, я пыталась как-то их замапать.. переделала в первых двух киаях со слайдерами, может поможет
6. 03:57:576 (2) - тише сделай, а то уши режет. там и так уже 20% лол. будет 15, оккккк

23:35 Leader: 00:21:278 (3) - how about this being an equal jump, 2,36/2,88 right now
23:38 Leader: 00:48:294 (3,1) - might be bad but I'd honestly stack them to make the white-blue transition play better :<
23:38 Leader: ...ALRIGHT tell me when you can
23:39 Aka: omg
23:39 Aka: whe
23:39 Aka: what
23:39 Aka: jwiadas
23:39 Aka: i mean
23:39 Aka: yes
23:39 Aka: wait
23:45 Aka: ok im here
23:45 Aka: lemme check these two points
23:46 Leader: it will be hard to find something but let's see
23:46 Leader: 01:15:145 (2,3) - ew no please make a stack
23:46 Aka: u mean
23:46 Leader: http://puu.sh/jHpkb/658f77ac14.jpg
23:46 Aka: 00:03:354
23:47 Aka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3559489
23:47 Aka: m,mmmmmmmm
23:48 Aka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3559499 \m/
23:49 Leader: sure
23:49 Leader: well kiais are flawless
23:49 Leader: i testplayed it before and
23:49 Leader: damn that flow
23:49 Aka: woaaa
23:49 Aka: rly
23:49 Aka: cool <3
23:49 Aka: though
23:49 Aka: there are spots sometimes
23:50 Aka: on slider ends
23:50 Aka: there are actually no sounds
23:50 Aka: but i hitsounded them with normal hit
23:50 Aka: like idk, i heard sounds at first and hitsounded following them but then they just dissapeared, i dont hear them anymore
23:50 Aka: lemme find an example
23:50 Leader: wtf aka-chan
23:50 Aka: 01:58:239 (1) - this
23:51 Leader: 03:57:576 (2) - I would make it even lower
23:51 Leader: 03:58:902 (1,2) - why are they not symmetric
23:52 Aka: 03:58:902 (1,2) - idk lately i like making such stuff like first is straight, second is slightly curved lol
23:52 Aka: look cute for me :c
23:53 Aka: did that in miiro xd https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3559521
23:53 Leader: 05:07:189 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - y u no blanket
23:53 Leader: 05:10:338 (6,7,1) - NOO YOU DID IT RIGHT IN THE WHOLE MAP AND NOW YOU JUST
23:53 Leader: I HATE YOU
23:54 Aka: mapped it with hit animations so i didnt really see all the blanket issues xD
23:54 Aka: AHAHAH LEADER
23:54 Aka: only for u okay
23:54 Leader: 05:34:371 (1,2) - might be misleading since this is a 1/4 pattern in the rest of the map
23:55 Leader: if you update i can testplay it again to be sure
23:56 Aka: 00:48:294 (3,1) -
23:56 Aka: didnt get dis
23:56 Leader: nah that's okay
23:56 Leader: I noticed it later
23:56 Aka: i tried to make bigger spacing for double
23:57 Aka: so its easier to see its a double actually
23:57 Aka: and u wont click earlier
23:57 Aka: i think
23:57 Aka: and
23:57 Aka: for the very first
23:57 Aka: timestamp
23:57 Aka: i wanted to make that slider be with bigger spacing intentinally xD
23:58 Leader: oh ok
23:58 Aka: feels like it deserves some wider movement
23:58 Aka: updated
23:58 Leader: wait two minutes and i'll play it
23:58 Leader: brb
23:58 Aka: blanketed stream also xd
23:58 Aka: okekkk
00:01 *Leader is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/729702 amazarashi - Kisetsu wa Tsugitsugi Shindeiku [Insane]]
00:10 Leader: 05:34:371 (1,2) - you didn't fix this :((
00:10 Aka: enni
00:10 Leader: and mmm
00:11 Aka: yes i didnt get that
00:11 Aka: :D
00:11 Aka: explain pls
00:11 Leader: oh
00:11 Leader: basically
00:11 Leader: the spacing looks like 
00:11 Aka: like
00:11 Aka: its ez to misread as 1/4?
00:11 Leader: 00:41:664 (3,4) - patterns like this
00:11 Leader: I personally can read it
00:11 Leader: but might be misleading :<
00:13 Aka: stack then?
00:13 Leader: 02:20:780 (1,2) - also here xD
00:13 Leader: yeah or maybe higher spacing to avoid overlaps
00:14 Aka: like dis? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3559597
00:14 Leader: there was another thing but i can't find the pattern LOL
00:14 Leader: yes
00:15 Aka: 03:56:250 (1,2) -
00:15 Leader: it was about two loud finishes
00:15 Aka: oh
00:15 Leader: that the spacing should be bigger to emphasize them better
00:15 Leader: otherwise they would be loud and awful ;;
00:16 Aka: 02:17:465 (4,1) - ???????????
00:17 Leader: yes
00:17 Aka: yea i have a weird feeling when i play that xD
00:18 Leader: same ;;
00:18 Leader: that's it

Okoratu wrote:

i can barely even hear your finishes asdklf;jasdf
at least in the end where u put drum hitfinishes on cymbals idk lol
or cymbals like 02:14:813 (3) -
didnt get dis xd


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00:20:449 (6,1,2) - i found this much easier to comprehend if space between 1,2 was bigger w
00:49:620 (3,4,5) - y is this so drastically different than like all the other stuff in this section being 3/4 sliders and this is the only little one that gets to have slider doublet instead of 2 sliders 3/4?k?
00:50:283 (6) - could represent stuff like vocals etc better if it was 2 circles instead but not really a big thing since direction change already suffices
01:32:880 (8) - pitch rises space decreases ... for looks or what ya, for looks, cause idk how to make a good jump here. halp?
02:06:195 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - was one of the few patterns that made me screw up the first time i played it maybe it's because of how linear it is compared to most of the rest? (03:41:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - :c) and how2make good jumps? :c
02:55:090 (5) - sliderend sounds early af added a quiter soft hit, should be ok now
03:00:476 (5) - 03:03:128 - i don't get why one has circle and one has not, i think having a circle in the first place can be throwing you off a bit because you kinda get used to the 3/4 stuff after playing it like all kiai long cause one has a beat in music 03:00:476 - and has not 03:03:128 - ? lol
03:13:487 (5,7) - 04:56:416 (2,5) - the touch :V asdf
03:30:725 (5) - would prefer as circles for obvious reasons and maybe cuz 01:54:924 (3,4,5,6,7) - 05:08:846 (5) - is literally same as this one though but i would just call same argument on that one made it jumps in 2nd kiai but idk how to make a good one for last, halp
i still can't deal with how he goes normal voice in 2nd break and then is like fuck this high pitch bois
04:51:609 (4,5) - this is like ultra hitler but uh 04:50:614 (1,2,3,4) - the way these start kind of could look better if they would follow a half-circle motion wat i mean is like a slider like the one in this picture, but actally not executed in like 10 seconds idk what was wrong with mine but idk changed? check?
05:07:520 (5,6) - kinda sad that things like this aren't hitsounded with whistles or something because it would be cool ? added for 6 but idk how to add soft whistle to 5 since it should have normal finish. if u meant normal whistles - hell no, i hate normal whistles sounds
05:10:338 (6,7,1) - why, i remember the other copy paste things having one of these but they are gone and this stays ?? ? ? ? ? didnt get dis as well oko r u drunk xdxdxd
05:23:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is like sudden and kinda oddball 03:45:642 (1,2,3,4) - is less oddball maybe doing same to 05:24:178 (3,4) - and keeping 5 is better dunnooo okay