RSP - Sakura ~Anata ni Deaete Yokatta~ · forum

DarkRingSystem

Topic Starter

DarkRingSystem 2010-07-24T15:55:00+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年1月14日 at 11:40:54

Artist: RSP
Title: Sakura ~Anata ni Deaete Yokatta~
Tags: impossiblexu sherrie__fay H-Miku KayeSara
BPM: 160
Filesize: 9469kb
Play Time: 04:51
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.92 stars, 742 notes)
impossiblexu's Easy (2.19 stars, 285 notes)
KS's Taiko (4.83 stars, 1416 notes)
Normal (4.05 stars, 427 notes)

Download: RSP - Sakura ~Anata ni Deaete Yokatta~
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 3rd beatmap
Anata ni Deaete Yokatta~
Thanks impossiblexu's Easy
KS(H-Miku)' taiko
And sherrie__fay' s SB & Skin

Redownload if you get it before 2012(M/D)~

Last edited by DarkRingSystem 2012-01-14T03:44:02+00:00, edited 111 times in total.

Selee

1,556 posts

Joined February 2010

Selee 2010-07-24T23:23:41+00:00

[General]
删除文件夹里的osb
BPM: 132.00
Offset: 1838
Tags里面全部删掉 = = 看着都eggpain
Storyboarding里面取消掉Letterbox during breaks

[Unknow]
最重要的问题你的Unknown少了个n....

删除第一个圈圈...
完全无意义外加无法rank

还有....重做吧 = =....

Guest diff等你做完个完整难度之后再说, 省的时间点出问题或者坑掉被无视 = =...

Selee

1,556 posts

Joined February 2010

Selee 2010-07-24T23:28:09+00:00

viewtopic.php?f=19&t=17122&view=next
可以参考下

Artist改成ESTi Miku?

LKs

3,119 posts

Joined August 2009

LKs 2010-07-25T04:33:27+00:00

OFFEST=9,103

另外你所有note几乎不在红白线上，节奏也不准

如果你用我给的offest，把下面的代码复制到你的难度osu里（右键写字本打开），是覆盖原有的，把新的放进去（覆盖原有的hitobjects部分）

[HitObjects]
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56,304,2284,5,0
56,128,2738,1,0
144,216,2966,2,0,B|344:216,1,170
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392,152,4103,1,0
440,224,4330,1,0
440,288,4557,1,0
328,304,4784,2,0,B|328:256|328:256|336:264,2,42.5
328,304,5239,2,0,B|328:352|328:352,2,42.5
240,304,5921,1,0
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192,184,12512,2,0,B|136:184|136:184,2,42.5
96,240,13193,2,0,B|136:320|248:304,1,170
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328,72,24557,1,0
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312,328,33421,5,0
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472,216,34216,5,0
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384,160,34557,1,0
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176,208,37739,5,0
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488,336,40239,2,0,B|520:296|488:256|464:288|488:304|480:224|480:224,1,85
480,152,40693,1,0
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352,192,45693,5,0
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272,192,47284,1,0
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digiaria

257 posts

Joined October 2008

digiaria 2010-07-25T04:57:14+00:00

原来是广告拼接版，我就比较奇怪为什么是4分多钟（原曲明明只有3分多钟 OTL）

Artist:ESTi feat. Various Artists
Source:Pangya Season4 Delight
应该这样才对

这歌我也在做，但做了一半被我坑掉，到现在都没动过了 OTL

DarkRingSystem

Topic Starter

DarkRingSystem 2010-07-25T05:38:26+00:00

感谢各位大神的指导
新手作图压力巨大啊 TAT

我会努力的

subarasikibuta

559 posts

Joined May 2009

subarasikibuta 2010-07-25T19:29:42+00:00

esti!!~

miku

186 posts

Joined March 2009

miku 2010-08-20T09:01:10+00:00

渣mapper路过
一点个人意见

nromal..我觉得hard更恰当一点..

这个BG...
这首跟DJMAX的i want you有关..?
若无关的话还希望LZ换一个BG..
如果有关就无视我的话吧 >_>

00:36:830 (6) - 感觉偏低
02:38:307 (3) - 这个不知道怎么说..就是觉得这个有点变扭..OTL..
03:05:466 (8) - 感觉偏高
03:05:921 (9) - 感觉偏左

其实还有几个感觉太靠边的..不过不算太靠边..应该没问题吧 >_>..

嘛..以上都是个人意见 > <
如果有说的不对的地方欢迎指出 > <

LZ加油 >///<
star~

DarkRingSystem

Topic Starter

DarkRingSystem 2010-08-20T09:10:58+00:00

ballban wrote:
渣mapper路过
一点个人意见

nromal..我觉得hard更恰当一点..

这个BG...
这首跟DJMAX的i want you有关..?
若无关的话还希望LZ换一个BG..
如果有关就无视我的话吧 >_>

00:36:830 (6) - 感觉偏低
02:38:307 (3) - 这个不知道怎么说..就是觉得这个有点变扭..OTL..
03:05:466 (8) - 感觉偏高
03:05:921 (9) - 感觉偏左

其实还有几个感觉太靠边的..不过不算太靠边..应该没问题吧 >_>..

嘛..以上都是个人意见 > <
如果有说的不对的地方欢迎指出 > <

LZ加油 >///<
star~

要说BG的话我是故意的说ESTi跟I want you 的作者LIN-G都跟DJMAX献过唱这也算有个关吧毕竟是同事嘛XD
说正经的因为这歌是一款韩国高尔夫网游的主题曲我个人感觉用官方的BG很违和...所以我选择一套 I want you的BG
完全无违和感反正不知情的人也不会知道 XD....

jameskong1

403 posts

Joined December 2008

jameskong1 2010-08-20T11:47:04+00:00

star first~

Kami

49 posts

Joined May 2010

Kami 2010-08-20T12:25:42+00:00

12加油~
我觉得很好了~
没什么意见~

NanBu

28 posts

Joined April 2010

NanBu 2010-08-20T12:43:13+00:00

-Chitose Sana-

12 posts

Joined August 2008

-Chitose Sana- 2010-08-20T13:33:21+00:00

只打了hard哦不,normal...感觉就只有02:38:307 (3)那里好别扭,如果把02:37:284(2)的slider做成和02:36:602(1)一样的形状可能会好点.加油做啊XD

Crazy Jay

482 posts

Joined October 2008

Crazy Jay 2010-08-21T10:19:12+00:00

[Hard]
00:19:330 (8) - new combo
00:20:239 (1) - cancel new combo

papapa hitsound

little mod no kds plz

DarkRingSystem

Topic Starter

DarkRingSystem 2010-08-22T18:53:19+00:00

cry:

Last edited by DarkRingSystem 2011-02-11T23:28:00+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Selee

1,556 posts

Joined February 2010

Selee 2010-08-22T23:35:09+00:00

[General]
两个osb文件 ._.? 如果没有SB那都删掉
不是很喜欢这样的遮挡
从01:25:012开始换Normal音效如何
KIAI的话...个人感觉 01:25:466 - 01:55:466 似乎更合适..

[Normal]
00:20:807 (1) - 后移1/4 减短1/4
00:30:466 (1,2,3) - 会出现遮挡这样如何 ._.

00:56:830 (8) - New Combo (以下缩写NC)
00:58:648 (1) - Remove NC
01:00:466 (4) - NC
01:25:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 重新考虑下排版吧 ._. 难看的一堆
01:29:103 (7) - NC
01:31:375 (1) - Remove NC
01:34:557 (6) - NC?
01:35:921 (8,9,10,11,12) - 为什么非要叠上...个人不是很喜欢这样的...好吧即使要叠加也要叠准 Distace Spacing开到0.0 之后关掉grid snap进行叠加
01:39:103 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
01:43:648 (7) - NC
01:55:921 (1) - 对于Normal来说似乎太短了...由于是最后一个...嘛不知道会不会有别人提出意见

[Hard]
总体感觉排版很乱音效很乱距离很乱 ._.
...没变动么...
00:28:875 (1) - 缩短之后从00:29:103开始如何
00:30:921 (7) - NC
00:32:284 (1) - Remove NC
01:01:830 (7) - NC
01:10:239 (1) - Remove NC
01:10:921 (2) - NC
01:24:557 (7) - 位置上移?
01:43:193 (6) - ^
01:48:193 (1) - 感觉结尾没必要静音吧试试Finish
01:49:784 (1) - 从01:50:012开始
02:23:648 (1,2,3,4) - 不觉得很单调么 ._.
02:32:739 (7) - NC
02:43:193 (5) - Stacking
02:47:284 (6,7,8,9,10) - 我会在这里断掉之后kick你
02:50:921 (6) - NC
02:56:148 (7) - ^
02:57:284 (1) - Remove NC
03:00:012 (8) - NC
03:13:648 (7) - ^
03:17:057 (11) - ^
03:18:193 (1) - Remove NC
03:20:012 (5) - NC
03:21:830 (9,1) - 距离反而会让1 2连不上...从这里改1.2x吧
03:27:284 (x) - 加个note?

Curisu

2,241 posts

Joined January 2010

Curisu 2010-08-23T04:22:27+00:00

LS的NC我看成了脑残