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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, October 16, 2017 at 2:14:18 PM

Artist: Kuroneko Dungeon
Title: Lilieze to Enryuu Laevateinn
Source: REFLEC BEAT colette -Summer-
Tags: zektbach beatmania iidx 22 pendual tomosuke funaki oldstyle gamemusic beatstream アニムトライヴ pop'n music うさぎと猫と少年の夢 maya takamura 高村真耶 captin1 Giralda
BPM: 200
Filesize: 3067kb
Play Time: 01:45
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Download: Kuroneko Dungeon - Lilieze to Enryuu Laevateinn
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My favorite genre is old style game music 8-)

This map will test quite a few skills that you have. You won't be able to do this if you don't have a good balance of ability.

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2015-10-05 13:06 Underdogs: let's irl
2015-10-05 13:06 Underdogs: i-it's not like I wanna mod for y-you 
2015-10-05 13:06 Nyquill: no tee why i'm allergic to oxygen
2015-10-05 13:06 Nyquill: ijk
2015-10-05 13:07 Nyquill: oh irc
2015-10-05 13:07 Nyquill: o ok]
2015-10-05 13:07 Underdogs: insect playin osu? omg
2015-10-05 13:07 Nyquill: o
2015-10-05 13:07 Nyquill: ya
2015-10-05 13:07 Underdogs: lel w8 gonna wait for finish dl
2015-10-05 13:12 Underdogs: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/725139 Kuroneko Dungeon - Lilieze to enryuu Laevateinn [Another†leggendaria]]
2015-10-05 13:12 Underdogs: not sure if it's ok, but how about circles in the red ticks?
2015-10-05 13:13 Nyquill: what do you mean?
2015-10-05 13:13 Underdogs: wait
2015-10-05 13:13 Nyquill: also I updated again might want to bump that
2015-10-05 13:13 Underdogs: 00:09:927 (1,2) -  like here?
2015-10-05 13:14 Nyquill: mmm
2015-10-05 13:14 Nyquill: I really like the sole emphasis on a thing that only happens at the beginning of the song
2015-10-05 13:14 Nyquill: like the alternative would be to have a 1/2 slider
2015-10-05 13:14 Nyquill: then a note right?
2015-10-05 13:15 Nyquill: the note after would feel like its underwhelming compared to the slider
2015-10-05 13:15 Underdogs: I got only 42 postt tho :v
2015-10-05 13:15 Underdogs: so not a pro
2015-10-05 13:15 Nyquill: no its alright
2015-10-05 13:15 Nyquill: good suggestion tbh
2015-10-05 13:15 Nyquill: but what do you think?
2015-10-05 13:15 Underdogs: not really, coz the sudden jump might be too much
2015-10-05 13:15 Nyquill: uh what jump?
2015-10-05 13:16 Underdogs: try to add a circle after
2015-10-05 13:16 Underdogs: 00:09:927 (1) - 
2015-10-05 13:16 Nyquill: ohhhh
2015-10-05 13:16 Underdogs: i mean, the recovery time might be good, but is it good for newcomers of 5 stars?
2015-10-05 13:16 Nyquill: yeah the lack of the note there is meant to be emphasis too
2015-10-05 13:16 Underdogs: continue on
2015-10-05 13:16 Nyquill: like uhm
2015-10-05 13:17 Underdogs: 00:18:327 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -  
2015-10-05 13:17 Underdogs: good stream mate :D
2015-10-05 13:17 Nyquill: the section up until where the violin comes in
2015-10-05 13:17 Nyquill: or strings comes in
2015-10-05 13:17 Nyquill: is all mapped on the drums
2015-10-05 13:17 Nyquill: or rather you click when there is a drum
2015-10-05 13:17 Underdogs: specific dem time mate :v
2015-10-05 13:17 Nyquill: so thats in line with that emphasis scheme
2015-10-05 13:18 Nyquill: starting from 00:09:927 (1) -
2015-10-05 13:18 Nyquill: to 00:18:327 (4) -
2015-10-05 13:18 Nyquill: is all drums right
2015-10-05 13:18 Underdogs: 00:48:927 (1) -  intentional slider or not enough room?
2015-10-05 13:18 Nyquill: intentional
2015-10-05 13:18 Nyquill: but in hindsight could look better
2015-10-05 13:18 Underdogs: i know
2015-10-05 13:19 Underdogs: but it's up to you :v
2015-10-05 13:19 Nyquill: i'll remake it
2015-10-05 13:19 Nyquill: lol
2015-10-05 13:19 Underdogs: lel, sure?
2015-10-05 13:19 Underdogs: continue on
2015-10-05 13:20 Underdogs: looking at the stream, naisu 1/3
2015-10-05 13:20 Underdogs: pretty awesome at 00:38:427 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -  as well, although you can use slider stream
2015-10-05 13:21 Underdogs: in a horizontal+vertical path
2015-10-05 13:21 Nyquill: mmmmm I want to redo some of the kiai
2015-10-05 13:21 Underdogs: only kiai?
2015-10-05 13:22 Nyquill: mostlly the kiai
2015-10-05 13:22 Nyquill: and the part immediately before the kiai
2015-10-05 13:22 Underdogs: 01:27:027 (4) -  this one's the mistake
2015-10-05 13:22 Underdogs: ?
2015-10-05 13:22 Nyquill: meh that was just me being lazy LOL
2015-10-05 13:22 Nyquill: i'll think of something
2015-10-05 13:23 Underdogs: mapper problem : laziness, even Skystar is being sloppy :v
2015-10-05 13:23 Nyquill: frankly most of the kiai was p lazy compared to the rest of the map
2015-10-05 13:23 Underdogs: 01:34:677 (1,2,3,4,5) - example as well, 6 pointed star :v
2015-10-05 13:24 Nyquill: oh thats kind of intentional
2015-10-05 13:24 Nyquill: but I don't want it to look liek that
2015-10-05 13:24 Nyquill: one sec
2015-10-05 13:25 Underdogs: star formation?
2015-10-05 13:26 Underdogs: or make it a curve circle flow
2015-10-05 13:26 Nyquill: nah it was meant to be a antistar
2015-10-05 13:27 Nyquill: though in hindsight that would have been a badidea too
2015-10-05 13:27 Underdogs: dehh badi wot
2015-10-05 13:27 Nyquill: as in
2015-10-05 13:27 Nyquill: a triangle
2015-10-05 13:27 Nyquill: then reverse flow for another triangle to make a star
2015-10-05 13:27 Underdogs: OMG A FOLLOWER OF ILLUMINATI
2015-10-05 13:27 Nyquill: ok
2015-10-05 13:27 Underdogs: ACTION take arm 
2015-10-05 13:28 Underdogs: oh and the last part
2015-10-05 13:28 Underdogs: 01:38:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -  it might be good time to pressure the game with circle
2015-10-05 13:28 Underdogs: like
2015-10-05 13:29 Underdogs: 01:38:427 here and 01:38:877
2015-10-05 13:30 Underdogs: btw, is captin1 up?
2015-10-05 13:31 Nyquill: should be
2015-10-05 13:32 Underdogs: a'ight, this is the end of the conversation :D
2015-10-05 13:32 Nyquill: I can copy the later pattern I guess
2015-10-05 13:32 Nyquill: but personally I like the small variance
2015-10-05 13:33 Nyquill: but I changed a lot of patterns lol thanks
2015-10-05 13:33 Underdogs: ACTION stalks Nyquill's every map and secretly put his backgroud picture as my waifu
2015-10-05 13:33 Underdogs: Nyquill-sama <3
2015-10-05 13:33 Nyquill: uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
2015-10-05 13:33 Nyquill: you should post in the thread
2015-10-05 13:33 Nyquill: so I can KD you
2015-10-05 13:33 Nyquill: . /savelog
2015-10-05 13:34 Underdogs: google beina bitch
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okay lets not make this wait as long as sylphia
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i don't see anything worth mentioning with the beginner/normal

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Giralda's Hyper
  • 00:31:527 (1) - i absolutely hate this spinner - i understand it's your interpretation and that it's a lower diff but you're the only one who chose to slap a spinner on top of what is a perfectly mappable part; come on... you can map that
  • 01:04:527 (1,2) - the gap in between these is awkward, i don't see any reason to leave it unmapped - even a single note would be better than nothing as there is a perfectly fine snare drum to map there. i understand you did that gaps like that later on too (01:08:877 (4,1) - etc.), but you didn't leave as much space there as you did in the future so it just sticks out more
  • 01:38:127 (1,2,1,2) - personally i think these could be spaced out more like the second set at 01:40:527 (1,2,1,2) -

other than that spinner, this is great


Captin's Another
  • 00:20:127 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - wait why does the 1/3 start compressing here, you used 1x spacing earlier now it just weirdly gets smaller
  • 00:28:827 (2,3,4,5,1) - i'd compress this another .1 or .2 spacing just for better contrast to the spacing used in the previous section (if you're going to keep it)
  • 01:11:727 (1,2,3) - a pretty minor squable, but this looks kinda weird/ugly

also great diff


Nyquill's Another
  • 00:08:877 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i feel almost as if this should be more jumpy than it is to match the increasing intensity of the song there, you did up until that point then you just kinda stopped for that triplet or something
  • 00:24:027 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - that was kind of unexpectedly large
  • 00:32:427 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - something about this just feels off - i don't like the way the first triangle flows into the next one, i think you could make this work better by repositioning or switching up the sequence of the second triangle
  • 01:02:877 (6) - any real need to put that partly under the slider? lol just move it up a little
  • 01:06:027 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - i don't like this; i feel like this section should be really flowy to match the flute or w/e and you make the player make this really jerk-y cut back. it's just kinda awkward - i'd move 6 down and to the left a little and move the stream up and to the right and just have the player flow through it all
  • 01:18:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is okay but i'd space out the groupings a little bit more so it's not quite as unexpected after the spacing of the 1/3 earlier

it's nice, enjoyed playing it
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i just realized I accidentally rip'd the 2kd post spot
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A few more thoughts.

First, since you've added Tomosuke to the tags, it might be a good idea to add his full name as well (Tomosuke Funaki). Secondly, the jacket for this song is seriously cool; I'd consider adding it to the info description.

Third, go ahead and throw in the the video. It's nice and a cool touch to add to your already good mapset.

Also, I'm not sure what exactly you're doing, but every time you update your Another diff it breaks on my end (comes up as unsubmitted).
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unicode in diff names breaks a lot of things
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Jam is best waifu tbh
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