1. Mattress Actress (5.71 stars, 1486 notes)

small_hins wrote:

hi. hi

[Mattress Actress]

00:00:540 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the sliders from here i can't hear any rhythm, try to make like this : soft bass sound, actually.

03:44:082 (1) - use a circle instead of slider there's small sound on red tick, its consistent with 01:29:682 (1) -

05:12:882 (1) - the slider end why it is not the hitsound - finish? fixed~

oh, awesome song (or i call it music... I don't know) thanks~

thanks for using my modding queue

oh, bye. bye

1. 00:01:911 - You could stack a circle ontop of the slider here. Would follow the vocals. There are other places where adding a circle wouldn't hurt either.
2. 00:02:082 (1,2,3) - You might want to make the spacing better reflect the time between the objects. Right now theyre almost the same spacing, but 1>2 is 1/1
3. 00:07:568 (1,2,3) - ^ etc...
4. 00:12:882 - Could add a circle here too.
5. 00:33:454 - - Here onward to 00:38:940 - . You might want to flip this whole section, like just Ctrl+J. There is a tonne of upward motion throughout this whole first section. Would help if you split this section halfway and used downward motion for the second half.
6. 00:43:397 (2) - Could Ctrl+G this if you want.
7. 01:22:825 (1) - Could improve the shape of this slider .
8. 01:34:311 (1,2,3,4) - Could have the SV increase with each slider to match the pitch change.
9. 01:50:168 (16,1) - This one doesn't really emphasize much . Try and angle it more so it fits better with the rest of your square stream. Compare this transition to like 01:50:511 (4,1) - . Same sound but This one's mapped to a sharp turn so it fits with the music.
10. 02:12:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Waaaaa. This stream is like the most intense of the 3 sets... it's definitely the loudest and the drum hits are the most noticeable, why the low spacing.... if anything it should have the most spacing to capture the built up intensity of the other two streams.
11. 03:11:168 (1,2,3,4) - Square pattern instead? :S
12. 04:26:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - As mentioned earlier.
13. 05:10:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - :C
14. 05:12:882 (1) - 1/2 slider instead? make 05:13:225 - clickable.

monstrata wrote:

[Mattress Actress]

1. 00:01:911 - You could stack a circle ontop of the slider here. Would follow the vocals. There are other places where adding a circle wouldn't hurt either. considered but i don't want to confuse people by focusing on too many rhythms at once.
2. 00:02:082 (1,2,3) - You might want to make the spacing better reflect the time between the objects. Right now theyre almost the same spacing, but 1>2 is 1/1 readable lol
3. 00:33:454 - - Here onward to 00:38:940 - . You might want to flip this whole section, like just Ctrl+J. There is a tonne of upward motion throughout this whole first section. Would help if you split this section halfway and used downward motion for the second half. the sound is like it goes up, so i'm gonna stick with that. i would usually apply this for variety ofc
4. 00:43:397 (2) - Could Ctrl+G this if you want. ^
5. 01:22:825 (1) - Could improve the shape of this slider . looks fine to me, fits with the rest of the sliders
6. 01:34:311 (1,2,3,4) - Could have the SV increase with each slider to match the pitch change. removed the part with the SV actually, inconsistent
7. 01:50:168 (16,1) - This one doesn't really emphasize much . Try and angle it more so it fits better with the rest of your square stream. Compare this transition to like 01:50:511 (4,1) - . Same sound but This one's mapped to a sharp turn so it fits with the music. tru, fix
8. 02:12:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Waaaaa. This stream is like the most intense of the 3 sets... it's definitely the loudest and the drum hits are the most noticeable, why the low spacing.... if anything it should have the most spacing to capture the built up intensity of the other two streams. low spacing is a form of emphasized too, it suits the 'monotone' nature of the 1/4 kicks, imo.
9. 03:11:168 (1,2,3,4) - Square pattern instead? :S nah, i like the current one
10. 04:26:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - As mentioned earlier. ye
11. 05:10:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - :C ye
12. 05:12:882 (1) - 1/2 slider instead? make 05:13:225 - clickable. i like how this plays, actually. i also hate getting 100 in a last note.

nice same

toybot wrote:

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Mattress Actress

00:27:625 (9,10) - turn into 1/4 sliders? it feels weird having a 1/2 gap here when the synth sound holds for longer intentional cuz klaps
00:42:368 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it will be more interesting if this was slightly angled by like 1 degree clockwise, not just horizontalok
00:44:425 (1,2,1,2) - kiiwa ptsd intensifies come on, candidates of worst words said in osu history
00:58:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - bit random switching to triplets, eh? + there are sounds in those gaps the triple sounds become more pronounced here, i think its legit
01:04:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - clap spam here is scary. pls delete claps; the claps sound really out-of-place and just not having them would make it sound better okay b0ss
01:08:425 - rip sexy synth thing sex
01:09:111 (1) - pretty sure this is supposed to end on the white tick same
01:17:340 (1) - 01:25:568 (1) - whistle on head for both sliders? same
01:29:682 (1) - make the tail soft-sampleset to mimic how the lazer sound softens? same
01:34:654 (2) - the whole pattern would look nicer if you raised this slider up to y=168 i disagree, because im gay
01:41:511 - you should have a circle placed here, since its part of the melody but 01:29:682 (1,2,3) -
01:52:311 (5,6,1) - why can't this triplet just be straight like the rest of his friends hes gay
02:06:197 (2,3) - ctrl+g these to make them more like jumps instead of going around in a circle? or arrange the pentagon however to at least make jumps alright b0ss
02:12:025 (15,16) - lel stream jumps having this stream shaped like this makes it awkward to go into the next one. rearrange these two circles to flow in better or delete (16) and turn (15) into a 1/4 slider thats the whole point1!222 awkawrd movemsnets X:ddDD
02:42:025 (9,10) - turn these into 1/4 sliders? b/c ^ n0
02:57:454 (1) - tail should end on red tick before, so either shorten the slider or change the SV to around 0.66x (.5 * 4/3) ya thers sound but music stops on white tick
03:12:540 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as b4 h3h3
03:22:825 - rip sexy synth thing v2 h0h0
03:44:082 (1) - make the tail a soft-sampleset b/c same as before emas
03:57:797 (1,2) - imo, these sliders should be red tick sliders to fit the rhythm. so do w/e (i'd delete circle before, move sliders one red tick before, then just put circle at 03:58:311 - ) wanted to keep it simple here
04:00:368 (4,1,2) - ^ s a m e simpel
04:10:654 (3) - should bend this slider slightly like ones after it jimmy hasnt turned retarded yet
04:22:654 (6) - ^ and yeah rearrange 04:22:997 (7) - jimmy's twin
05:12:882 (1) - how about making this slider faster so it ends on blue tick before, and add a circle at that white tick? that would make more of an impact w/ the finish circles after 3/4 sliders are sa ta n

cool map

+1 stars

Euny wrote:

as your request! welcome back handsome♥ thx!

• Mattress Actress

1. 00:43:911 (4,5) - i feel too far these. make some easy flow. this seems fine
2. 00:44:425 (1,2,1) - add whistle at these front cause i heard new melodies also you did that in 00:49:911 (1) -, 00:51:282 (1) - these done
3. 00:52:654 (1,9) - add finish should be better for music. cause there is cymbal sound. done
4. 01:31:740 (5) - why you didnt put note for here? feels bit empty cause there is strong tempo in music. synth focus
5. 04:31:568 (2) - why keep ds for this only? move it near by 252l76 just like this pattern, expand
6. 05:07:397 (4,5) - add note for there. this is just suggest no, not audible hard sound so i'll leave it empty.

other looks fine to me.
hope this is helpful... yes! thanks

Smoothie World wrote:

[General]

AR 9.2 or something would fit better in my opinion nah i think its fine.

[Mattress Actress]

00:37:054 - Hmm, unmapped sound here. Consider dividing 00:36:882 (3) into two sliders to account for that unmapped sound. missed that one, fixed!
01:44:082 (1,2,1,2,1) - Not a fan of this flow here. Consider making 01:44:425 (1,2) more vertical as opposed to how it is now for better flow changed it up a little more
01:53:854 (4) - I feel that if you Ctrl + G'd this slider, the flow would improve. nah, for consistency with the pattern
02:12:111 (16,1) - It feels uncomfortable to have to go backwards to hit the next stream. Consider moving it like this to make it flow better but to maintain that jump in the stream: enough complaints of this already, fixed~
05:10:397 (16,1) - I'd recommend having a space between these two much like the previous streams that are similar. i'll keep the ending simple.

Nice map, one of my favs from you < 3 thanks~

Frey wrote:

Seishun points +1000！ (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)

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  Mattress Actress

1. try to add more clap sound in the whole music, it fits the music, and increase the feedback. btw, soft-hitclap is better. eg:00:55:397 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 03:09:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - not sure how to do this since i already have whistles for kicks
   
2. 01:31:054 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - I think this part need more Sampleset-Normal. I feel not good if there isn't enough feedback from clicks done!
   
3. 05:01:911 (6,7) - Ctrl +g? Feels better if there is a jump between 05:02:082 (7,1) - good suggestion, however i like current pattern more
   
4. 02:22:482 (3) - this part is really confusing, NC to emphasize it? done!
   
5. 02:56:425 (1) - remove NC, cuz 02:55:825 (14,15,1) - are all purple, a bit hard to distinguish changed differently, didnt remove nc but shift the slider

As always, I can't play streamy map ;w;
Good Luck Handsome. don't forget to find somebody to check the metadata! thank u so much!

DahplA wrote:

Honestly, this map looks amazing already, so I doubt this mod will be long. ty

Mattress Actress

1. 00:48:540 (2) - Not sure if this is meant to be a blanket, if so, it's slightly off fixeed
2. 02:17:682 (1) - Another slightly off blanket fixeed
3. 02:34:140 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Should these be spaced further, since it's most intense at the end of the stream nah, i don't wanna make it too hard
4. 02:46:140 (5,6,7,8,1) - Stack is off slightly fixeed
5. 03:59:854 (3) - Using two anchor points for the curve makes the bend sort of spike ever so slightly. what
6. 04:01:225 (3) - I can't really hear anything on the 3/4 note. I think 1/2s should do for mapping the claps synths
7. 04:48:540 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I think you should increase spacing here, since it gets intense and it's nearing the end of the map same as above
8. 05:12:882 (1) - Personally, I feel that a hittable downbeat would do better here. personal preference but i like sliders ending on a song

Wow, yep. Everything was really consistent and you have good reasoning for your patterns (like some of the 1/2 shapes). More stars? woo thanks for the mod!