1. Another (4.2 stars, 447 notes)
2. Beginner (1.38 stars, 74 notes)
3. Hyper (3.42 stars, 306 notes)
4. Normal (2.16 stars, 194 notes)

Axarious wrote:

General

1. from #modreqs, small mod
2. perhaps raise the OD from [Beginner] -> [Hyper] to bridge into the OD9 on the [Another]. either this or maybe lower [Another]'s OD to 8? Since Another is not that hard, aiming and accuracy is more important. I'll consider to raise OD of B&N
3. song's bitrate is above 192kbps according to AIMod. Re-encode it for rank. =w= OH I'll change it!
4. http://puu.sh/jevhI/fd1254479e.jpg 1366 x 768 bg for widescreen? :3 xD

Beginner

1. OD2 or 3? otherwise this difficulty looks fine. ok

Normal

1. OD5 or 6? yes
2. Check AIMod for unsnapped object ends. k
3. 00:48:598 - Link maybe this rhythm instead? or maybe use in [Hyper] for the first kiai? ;x umm no..
4. 01:44:208 (2) - Link move the red node to the right for symmetry? done

Hyper

1. HP 6? ;v; umm ok
2. OD7.5 or 8? no
3. Check AIMod for unsnapped object ends. done
4. 01:12:378 (2,3) - weird ds increase that isn't seen anywhere else :0 did a small change :3
5. 01:21:159 (2,3,1) - Manual stack? maybe move 01:21:433 (3) - to x:303? and possibly move 01:21:525 (1) - to x:294 for a perfect stack with slider (2)'s tail okay

Another

1. HP7? ;w; nnno
2. Check AIMod for unsnapped object ends. done
3. 00:29:025 (1) - remove nc? k
4. 00:30:579 (5) - to x:378 y:254 for ds fix? moved 6
5. 00:55:549 (3,1) - symmetry but results in low ds, it's okay though. ya
6. 01:22:439 (2) - no NC here for consistency with [Hyper]? umm no..

1. Unrankable issues
2. Personal criteria, something that I believe should be changed
3. Normal suggestions

1. The bitrate for corn.mp3 is 201 kb/s, which is above the maximum of 192 kb/s.
   Disable countdown
   Hitsounds are really strong at the first part of the mapset, and sounds really annoying IMO

1. Your combo usage is really spammy and alot of times doesn't makes sense with the song or your patterns, for example 01:47:134 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) -
2. Reduce OD to 8, since your Hyper diff is 6
3. 00:16:403 (1,3,3,3) - should be 1/1 sliders, according to the music
4. 00:22:256 (5) - slider shape is a bit weird to follow, for now do keep it if you want and get more opinions about this
5. 00:23:720 (1,2,3) - spacing is wrong and hard to read, if you really want to keep the antijump stack 2 with 3, since your current pattern make people think that you are doing a 1/2 circle pattern like 1 and 2 does
6. 00:31:037 (1,2) - this rhythm is really wrong and confused to play, mainly cuz you are ignoring such important beat in the middle of 00:31:037 (1,2) - , this 00:31:220 - should be mapped.
7. 00:42:927 - same as above
8. 00:47:134 (1,1,1,1) - as I said before there is no reason to combo spam like this
9. Personally I'll like if you take a look at your rhythms more careful, since alot of parts in your map can have better rhythm

1. AR is too fast atm, use AR8 seems better for this diff
2. Also your HP is really High atm, reduce it to 6
3. 00:19:329 pls don't map strong beats as slider tails, it doesn't make sense with the song tbh.
4. 00:23:903 (1,1,1) - as I said in another you don't need to combo spam for this kind of patterns, you just mess up the overall HP drain in the diff
5. 00:29:573 (1,2,3,4,1) - really hard to read, for this lvl of difficulty
6. 00:45:671 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1) - yup don't spam combos pls
7. basically the same as Another

1. OD 4 is better
2. 00:56:464 (2,3) - spacing
3. 00:47:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - after all the slider patterns this circle spam seems hard to catch >; maybe some circle slider circle will work better
4. 00:48:598 (1,3) - this kind of slider are not nice for a normal diff, most of people have problem reading them, cuz there is no way to know the number of repeats (short slider as 1/4 are easy to get or long sliders like 1/1, but 1/2 are always a pain to play specially in normal diffs)

Frey wrote:

伤感，结果还是grave吗

huafenshaonv wrote:

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神图
[general]
我觉得开头慢速段落音量还是低点好 懒得改啊 算了还是改了 不还是不改了
ok
[Beginner]
00:38:354 00:47:866这段的ds 为了haokan 我觉得只要不是智障这么点小距离差不可能打不上
[Normal]
00:39:086 (5) - 这个弄个弧线 不用a
01:25:915 (7) - 移到这里01:26:098？ 直线就好
[Hyper]
ar快了点 拉低了
00:28:659 (4) - 太贴了 没啥太大所谓。。
01:45:671 (3) - 有点区别的节奏 拉直什么的 ，。。不用
[Another]
00:23:903 (2,3) - 表现停顿还是堆叠好了 第一pc读错 可以
01:15:488 (3,4,5) - 上挪点更美观 做三角形 不挪
01:35:061 (1,2,3,4) - 摆成间距更大的 这个应该是个梗点才对 不动了
01:48:232 (1) - 01:49:695 (1) - 01:51:159 (1) - 01:52:622 (1) - 最后一个音有点区别 纯画五角星感觉浪费了这个梗 怪我太他妈的懒了 不过间距变大了 和刚刚不一样 没事
why you aways god

1. Tick rate 1
2. 00:28:110 - 00:33:964 - 00:39:817 - missing finish
3. 01:22:256 - 這也加個比較好
4. 00:48:598 (1,1,1,1) - 我覺得這4個滑條的路徑作為最低難度來說還是有一些難，建議改簡單點，不要有重疊的地方

1. Tick rate 1
2. 00:55:549 (3,1) - DS錯了吧
3. 00:48:598 (1,3,1,3) - 這東西不安全，建議最多折返一次
4. 01:11:281 (4) - ^ 我覺得這後面這一塊就複製下一個kiai那裡，這裡DS都不一樣

1. 01:21:159 (2,1) - 遮的有些多，安全起見少遮點

Karen wrote:

as request :3

Beginner:

1. Tick rate 1 k
2. 00:28:110 - 00:33:964 - 00:39:817 - missing finish done
3. 01:22:256 - 這也加個比較好 可以
4. 00:48:598 (1,1,1,1) - 我覺得這4個滑條的路徑作為最低難度來說還是有一些難，建議改簡單點，不要有重疊的地方 唉 三年前就不会有这种问题

Normal:

1. Tick rate 1 k
2. 00:55:549 (3,1) - DS錯了吧 是 改了
3. 00:48:598 (1,3,1,3) - 這東西不安全，建議最多折返一次 remap
4. 01:11:281 (4) - ^ 我覺得這後面這一塊就複製下一個kiai那裡，這裡DS都不一樣 改了 毕竟一个人做4难度难免偷懒

[Hyper]

1. 01:21:159 (2,1) - 遮的有些多，安全起見少遮點 我感觉这还属于看得见的范畴

MP3換成192，記得重新弄offset
還有因為所有diff都是你自己做的，所以結束時間要一致 好

cool map