1. Easy (0.88 stars, 94 notes)
2. Hard (2.98 stars, 374 notes)
3. Normal (1.7 stars, 214 notes)

About this song~

- It's my childhood memories of this song when I play @SNES
- This song was sung 21 years ago o.O?
- It's from Pray album (1994)
- If you heard this song before, you're getting old lol
- Why I use CS in this song very small? This song very slow, so I think it suitable like fast music with large CS

Thanks for modded!

Homura-, -Hakurei-, RandomEffect, IamKwaN, noz1995, Frostings, RzHr, Come[Back]Home, small_hins, MoodyRPG, Gray Veyron, BeatofIke, Hinsvar

1. Please be consistent with Widescreen Support of all of the difference

1. hit sound I is written to Insane diff

1. 02:59:744 (1) - Please remake the slider　　This slider is not good in a normal diff
2. 03:02:734 (1) - ^
3. 03:08:714 (1) - ^

1. hit sound I is written to Insane diff

1. 00:30:239 (2) - 00:42:200 (3) - add whistle from slider tail?
2. 00:36:220 (2) - It's beautiful when put this way
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:43:321 (1) - add clap from slider tail?
4. 01:07:366 (1) - ^
5. 01:31:287 (1) - ^
6. 02:02:932 (1) - add clap?
7. 02:14:893 (1) - add whistle?
8. 02:14:893 (1,2) - ctlr＋g?
9. 02:26:853 (3) - add whistle from slider head
10. 02:35:823 (3,4) - remove clap from slider tail?
11. 02:56:754 (1,2) - ctlr＋g?
12. 03:02:734 (5) - add whistle
13. 03:08:901 (1,2) - ctlr＋g?
14. 03:14:695 (5) - add whistle from slider tail?
15. 03:16:937 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer to be allowed to stack the note
    
    SPOILER

    

1. too easy to play, well played

1. 02:56:380 (1,2) - ctrl+G, then stack with 02:56:754 (1,2) -

Homura- wrote:

hi Backstep san M4M

[General]

1. Please be consistent with Widescreen Support of all of the difference

I want to make Storyboard soon, so I disable this...

[Easy]

1. hit sound I is written to Insane diff

[Normal]

1. 02:59:744 (1) - Please remake the slider　　This slider is not good in a normal diff
2. 03:02:734 (1) - ^
3. 03:08:714 (1) - ^

I think player can guess this rhythm and this slider will make player not bored and have new vision about slider.

[Hard]

1. hit sound I is written to Insane diff

[Insane]

1. 00:30:239 (2) - 00:42:200 (3) - add whistle from slider tail?
2. 00:36:220 (2) - It's beautiful when put this way
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:43:321 (1) - add clap from slider tail?
4. 01:07:366 (1) - ^
5. 01:31:287 (1) - ^
6. 02:02:932 (1) - add clap?
   I forgot here.
7. 02:14:893 (1) - add whistle?
8. 02:14:893 (1,2) - ctlr＋g?
9. 02:26:853 (3) - add whistle from slider head
10. 02:35:823 (3,4) - remove clap from slider tail?
11. 02:56:754 (1,2) - ctlr＋g?
12. 03:02:734 (5) - add whistle
13. 03:08:901 (1,2) - ctlr＋g?
14. 03:14:695 (5) - add whistle from slider tail?
15. 03:16:937 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer to be allowed to stack the note
    
    SPOILER

    

Fixed.

About whistle I fixed with my own, but add more finish-drum it's not suitable for this song :/
However about all ctrl+g I think it's fine coz I want to make anti-jump here and some your suggestion it make bad flow imo.

I'm sorry that I can not really point out...

good luck

-Hakurei- wrote:

hi

[Easy]

1. too easy to play, well played

[Insane]

1. 02:56:380 (1,2) - ctrl+G, then stack with 02:56:754 (1,2) -

can't find more problems here ._. GL!

1. Romanised artist: Lisa Ooki
   Romanised title: Toki no Hourousha
   romanisation rule of japanese https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/185922
   official site (high priority than romanisation rule) http://www.kasaya.com/lisa.htm
   (but i'm not sure. please ask BN)
2. tags suggetion:
   Tina ("Terra" 's name in japanese ver.)
3. "Cyan" is necessary for tags?

1. i suggest to make CS larger
2. 01:53:215 (4) - I prefer to delete. not hear any sound

1. 00:23:885 (1,2) - this circle pattern is hard to find rhythm because of starting of play. Isuggest to change to 1/2 slider or single circle's pattern like this
   
2. 01:53:775 - why not add circle at this part?
3. 02:29:843 (1) - drum sound is not suitable, imo

1. 00:27:810 (4) - delete. confusing rhythm
2. 00:51:731 (2,3) - I prefer 1/4 slider
3. 01:27:051 (1,2,3) - a little not good flow. I suggest to rotate 3 clockwise more
4. 01:37:517 (1,2) - it is better to avoid stack. so confusing
5. 01:43:497 (1) - I prefer to keep 1/4 rhythm like other parts
6. 01:47:982 (1) - simple curved slider is better in the same way as 01:48:729 (3) -
7. 01:50:038 (2,3) - flow breaking is unnecessary at this part
8. 01:57:700 (3) - rightward slider is better for good flow

1. 00:53:786 (1,2,3,4,5) - consistent spacing is better
2. 01:05:747 (1,3) - why not blanket correctly?
3. 01:48:542 (4,5) - I recommend to decrease spacing because not good flow like 02:00:503 (4,5) -
4. 02:26:292 (1) - I suggest to add only circle at red line. following blue line is strange
5. 02:47:223 (1,2) - avoid stack. hard to find blue line's rhythm

RandomEffect wrote:

hi! M4M!

[metadata]

1. Romanised artist: Lisa Ooki
   Romanised title: Toki no Hourousha
   romanisation rule of japanese t/185922
   official site (high priority than romanisation rule) http://www.kasaya.com/lisa.htm
   (but i'm not sure. please ask BN)
   Wait Melophobia to check this~
2. tags suggetion:
   Tina ("Terra" 's name in japanese ver.)
   Added.
3. "Cyan" is necessary for tags?
   Removed.

[Easy]

1. i suggest to make CS larger
   Okay.
2. 01:53:215 (4) - I prefer to delete. not hear any sound
   You're right! remove it.

[Normal]

1. 00:23:885 (1,2) - this circle pattern is hard to find rhythm because of starting of play. Isuggest to change to 1/2 slider or single circle's pattern like this
   
2. 01:53:775 - why not add circle at this part?
3. 02:29:843 (1) - drum sound is not suitable, imo
   Apply all change.

[Hard]

1. 00:27:810 (4) - delete. confusing rhythm
2. 00:51:731 (2,3) - I prefer 1/4 slider
3. 01:27:051 (1,2,3) - a little not good flow. I suggest to rotate 3 clockwise more
4. 01:37:517 (1,2) - it is better to avoid stack. so confusing
5. 01:43:497 (1) - I prefer to keep 1/4 rhythm like other parts
6. 01:47:982 (1) - simple curved slider is better in the same way as 01:48:729 (3) -
7. 01:50:038 (2,3) - flow breaking is unnecessary at this part
8. 01:57:700 (3) - rightward slider is better for good flow
   Fixed all!

[Insane]

1. 00:53:786 (1,2,3,4,5) - consistent spacing is better
   I don't know what do you mean? but I'll try to fix my own.
2. 01:05:747 (1,3) - why not blanket correctly?
   My mistake ._.
3. 01:48:542 (4,5) - I recommend to decrease spacing because not good flow like 02:00:503 (4,5) -
   I see... then fixed and re-arrange notes.
4. 02:26:292 (1) - I suggest to add only circle at red line. following blue line is strange
   okay.
5. 02:47:223 (1,2) - avoid stack. hard to find blue line's rhythm
   Fixed.

i've liked this original song "Terra's theme" since my childhood<3
~Good Luck~

ReeChelly wrote:

Hello again~
I can't really find anything, I think it's prefect!
If you need a mod on any other map, feel free to send me pm :3

IamKwaN wrote:

Hey there, as requested!

SPOILER

Many other reference websites regarding to her romanised name: https://twitter.com/lisaooki
https://www.facebook.com/lisa.ooki
http://lisaooki.exblog.jp/
Unicode Title: 時の放浪者
Romanised Title: Toki no Hourousha
Unicode Artist: 大木理紗
Romanised Artist: Lisa Ooki
You might also want to add the Japanese name of the game into the tags.

Good luck with your map, Mr. Backstep!!

1. 01:25:556 (3,4) - Blanket better: http://puu.sh/it4sF.jpg
2. 02:34:328 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/it4Ul.jpg
3. 02:38:813 (1,2) - Curve each of them a little more: http://puu.sh/it5yu.jpg
4. 02:40:309 (2,3) - Blanket: http://puu.sh/it5Gq.jpg
5. 02:46:289 (3,4) - ^ (too much images huh =)) )
6. 03:20:675 - I think you should reduce sample sound here to 5-15%

1. 00:42:200 (1) - move to (412,68), change curve direction, then change the position of the next notes, and it will look like this: http://puu.sh/it7bQ.jpg
2. 02:20:686 - flute sound here is loud, should add a circle
3. 02:40:309 (3,4) - Curve more: http://puu.sh/it8En.jpg
4. 02:59:744 (1) - For players use skin with no slider ends like me, it's... cool =)): http://puu.sh/it9mq.jpg . That's why I don't like sliders like this
5. 03:02:734 (1) - ^
6. 03:05:724 (1) - Draw better: http://puu.sh/it9O9.jpg
7. 03:08:714 (1) -
8. 03:14:695 (1) - Draw better. Red sliderpoint should be near 03:14:695 (1): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3269102
9. 03:20:675 - Same as easy

1. 01:37:330 (4,1) - I suggest this: http://puu.sh/itbC0.jpg
2. 01:46:300 (4,1,2) - ^
3. 02:00:503 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This chain of circle is very hard for a 3.09 stars map with OD 6. But I don't know how to fix this...
4. 02:14:519 (1) - I think reverse it and move to (416,216) is better
5. 03:14:695 (1) - Same as Normal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3269167

1. AR 8.0 could make the diff more vivid
2. 02:44:233 (1) - Remove this and make 02:44:420 (2) s new combo
3. 02:50:213 (1) - Move to (360,360) or remove and make 02:50:400 (2) a new combo
4. 03:07:593 (8) - (160,304)

noz1995 wrote:

Hello Mr.Backstep, from m4m
I think your map is mostly perfect, that I can not mod much
Glad to hear that

[Easy]
This diff, very easy, 0.88* for more than 3 minutes

1. 01:25:556 (3,4) - Blanket better: http://puu.sh/it4sF.jpg
2. 02:34:328 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/it4Ul.jpg
3. 02:38:813 (1,2) - Curve each of them a little more: http://puu.sh/it5yu.jpg
4. 02:40:309 (2,3) - Blanket: http://puu.sh/it5Gq.jpg
5. 02:46:289 (3,4) - ^ (too much images huh =)) )
   Fixed all!
6. 03:20:675 - I think you should reduce sample sound here to 5-15%
   Ignore this I think it fine~

[Normal]
Easy diff use 1 or 2 beats blank between two objects, but Normal diff use 1/4 beat for circles? I think it's a big gap between two diff. May be you should find someone good at mapping and ask them for a harder Easy GD
I think I should remove all 1/4 notes except a few notes in kiai :/

1. 00:42:200 (1) - move to (412,68), change curve direction, then change the position of the next notes, and it will look like this: http://puu.sh/it7bQ.jpg
   Fixed!
2. 02:20:686 - flute sound here is loud, should add a circle
   Like I said above, so not change here.
3. 02:40:309 (3,4) - Curve more: http://puu.sh/it8En.jpg
   Okay.
4. 02:59:744 (1) - For players use skin with no slider ends like me, it's... cool =)): http://puu.sh/it9mq.jpg . That's why I don't like sliders like this
5. 03:02:734 (1) - ^
6. 03:05:724 (1) - Draw better: http://puu.sh/it9O9.jpg
7. 03:08:714 (1) -
   Fixed by my own way :/
8. 03:14:695 (1) - Draw better. Red sliderpoint should be near 03:14:695 (1): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3269102
   Your suggestion was nice!, but I fixed a bit to look more smoother.
9. 03:20:675 - Same as easy

[Hard]
1/12 IS NOT RECOMMENDED FOR ANYONE TO USE EVER =)) Just joking. Nevermine :v

1. 01:37:330 (4,1) - I suggest this: http://puu.sh/itbC0.jpg
2. 01:46:300 (4,1,2) - ^
   Not good here, I think... coz it will make like Insane difficulty.
3. 02:00:503 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This chain of circle is very hard for a 3.09 stars map with OD 6. But I don't know how to fix this...
   Yeah... but I think it will be okay for hard playing before break time :/
4. 02:14:519 (1) - I think reverse it and move to (416,216) is better
   Nice suggestion but fixed by own way.
5. 03:14:695 (1) - Same as Normal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3269167

[Insane]
I'm not good at Hard and Insane, so my mod for this diff will be too short could be bad. Feel free to ignore

1. AR 8.0 could make the diff more vivid
   I reject this.... AR 8 make harder to reading during solo part.... :c
2. 02:44:233 (1) - Remove this and make 02:44:420 (2) s new combo
3. 02:50:213 (1) - Move to (360,360) or remove and make 02:50:400 (2) a new combo
4. 03:07:593 (8) - (160,304)
   Not change all, sorry

That's all my mod. Hope it helps. Good luck

IamKwaN wrote:

why is the romanised artist still Risa, Mr. Backstep :C ?

Frostings wrote:

Hi
[General]

1. Your normal whistle is extremely quiet and makes the audio feedback non-existant. This makes it quite hard to hit your patterns, especially in Insane where you use them along with high-spaced jumps
   Increase volume by 30%
2. Change Romanised Artist from Risa Ooki to Lisa Ooki (as IamKwan has pointed out)
   Oops! my mistake.

[Insane]

1. 00:51:918 (5,1) - maybe as a design choice make them not touch
2. 01:03:878 (5,1) - same. Make the distances visually consistent either by eye, or by disabling grid snap and using distance snap (along with the rest of the objects that are similar)
3. 01:06:121 (3,5) - I think it would be good to make them not overlap to make it look neater
4. 01:22:317 (1) - This is kinda low, the tail touches the hit error bar. maybe angle it upwards instead of downwards
   I think it's fine coz it not out screen during playing :3
5. 02:38:440 (1,2,3,4,5) - consider using polygon circles (ctrl+shift+D)

[Hard]

1. 01:46:300 (4,1,2,3,4) - Try to make a better pentagon (the internal angle is 72 degrees. you can copy paste these two notes 01:46:300 (4,4) - and rotate them at 72 degree intervals to make your shape)
2. 02:56:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - same here
3. 03:00:492 (3) - I would highly advise against the tip at the tail here. quite hard to read and frankly almost unrankable
   Change to heart shape.

[Normal]

1. 00:41:452 (4,1) - maybe make better blanket here (and then adjusting 00:43:695 (3) - to follow suit)
   
   example

   
2. 03:02:734 (1) - hmm. as a design choice I would advise against something like this, but your choice I suppose
   Fixed another way.

[Easy]

1. 01:56:952 (1,2,3,4,1) - same thing about the pentagons in your other diffs

pretty straightforward map

RzHr wrote:

From my ModQ

General

- Maybe add more combo colours to make it more interesting? :>

Easy

- 00:31:734 (2,3) - Blanket :>

- 00:45:190 (3) - idk. Maybe, will be better if change this into a slider? there is a sound that fit if you make a slider on it, imo.
I think it's okay coz after hit these notes it have a bit some break
- 01:39:012 (4) - ctrl+j? make it curve to another way.
I think it's fine :/
- 02:25:358 (4,1) - Blanket

Normal

- 00:25:380 (4) - 392,104?

I want to keep this coz it's blanket with (3)
- 01:03:130 (1) - don't overlap the head & tail... look ugly & make little confused for new player, imo
- 02:56:380 (1) - better remove this i think
Fine here lol
- 03:02:734 (1) - i think this slider shape will make some new player confused .-.
Fixed other shape.

Hard

- 02:08:539 (1) - make it curved? :>

- 03:06:472 (3) - rotate this around 20deg.?
- 03:14:695 (1) - i know you want it to blanket with (6) .-. but the head & tail overlap still look ugly

Insane

- 01:26:677 (1,2,3) - Stack? why don't make it same like another same part of this song? (little jump) :>
- 01:48:729 (5) - NC
- 02:00:690 (1) - ^

i don't know what i am doing, this map is too good for me. and sorry for my bad english....
hope this mod helped GL

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Easy

00:33:229 (3) I'd ctrl+g this for a nice flow
01:44:992 (4) Move the middle sliderpoint too 176/160 so (3,4) wont be so close to each other
02:17:883 (3) I'd ctrl+g this one too for a nice flow
02:34:328 (2,3) They are nearly touching which looks weird, you should fix that. Just blank them nicely
03:11:705 (5) Move this one too 312/348 and let it look like this

SPOILER

Fixed all Easy difficulty that you said :3
Has better flow and fits more

Normal

00:33:229 (1,2) Improve the blank here by moving the middle sliderpoint too 172/312 and the slidertail too 204/232
Your eyes was great! fixed.
00:36:220 (1,2,3,4) I dont like the flow in this one, i think it can be improved by moving (2) too 72/72(3) too 32/148 and (4) too 100/208 or 100/240 (You have to fix ds though)
Fixed.
00:41:452 (4,1) Improve this blank
00:56:776 (4,1) ^
01:00:140 (1,2) ^
All blanket fixed.
02:01:437 (2) I think this would fit more since you have done that before too 01:56:952 (1,2) Example

SPOILER

Fixed by my own.
02:50:774 (1) ctrl+g on this one would create a cool flow imo, if you do, you should move (4) too 208/180 which makes it better
Sure, but move (4) for another way.
02:59:744 (1,2) Blank can be improved
Fixed.

Hard

00:28:557 (5) Slidertail too 80/8 so it looks better?
Fixed my own way here.
01:53:215 (3) You should make this one straight too like 01:52:467 (1,2) it fits better imo
Sure, you're right!
02:00:503 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) It looks really cool and nice, but i dont know if this fits in hard, i dont think it fits the spread, its a bit too hard imo, you should add some sliders there.
I think it's fine here because after that it's break... and this 1/4 notes isn't jump like Insane. (make little challenging here.)
02:44:794 (1) This one is too edged imo, you should decrease it a bit
Fixed.
02:53:577 (2,3) You should move (2) too 260/128 and (3) too 180/144 if you want a perfect line
okay o/

Insane

You may want to check some jumps here 01:35:648 - 02:02:932 since they are pretty challenging, but still awesome diff
Glad to hear that you like this difficulty, about that part it's challenging of this song so I won't to change that much :3

Really Beautifull Beatmap, very well map, and great SB, i love it. Good Luck.