from my m4m queue
[General]
I'm a bit concerned about your usage of spinners. Remember spinners can be seen as the opposite of sliders: their musical value is at their and, while the slider's musical value is at their start. As such, never put a spinner's start where a note should be, since the player doesn't click a spinner's start. Instead, put a note, and THEN start the spinner. I'll explain below.
[Easy]
00:04:714 (3) - I'm not too sure about stacks like this in an easy diff. They are fine but maybe a bit confusing for new players?
00:36:500 (3) - This pattern would definitely be confusing for new players. It looks good and fits the music perfectly, but you have to keep in mind this is an easy diff x.x try to do something less confusing for newbies!
01:06:143 (4,2) - As far as I know you can't hide a slider's end under a note like this, cause the player, specially newbie players, won't know if the slider has a repeat or not.
01:23:464 (1) -
I'd love to see a note here and THEN the spinner. Remember spinner's starts have no musical value so you are leaving a huge beat unmapped.Really polite diff although I'm not too sure about some stacks.
[Normal]
00:13:643 (1) - Same as easy diff, there should be a note here and then the spinner, spinner starts have no musical value.
01:18:285 (2) - This sliders seems a bit of an overmap, I'd make it 1/1
00:05:071 (1) - No reason for that repeat. I'd remove the repeat OR do something like this:
http://puu.sh/ioUzv/13e38f978c.jpgSame thing for the last spinner as Easy diff.
[Hard]
00:01:678 (3) - This slider fails to fit the music. The main beat of the piano is at the white tick, where you put the slider's end, and just as spinner's starts, sliders ends have no musical value for the player since you don't click it. I'd do this:
http://puu.sh/ioUGr/ca24fc8bd3.jpg00:05:071 (1) - Move a bit to the left so it doesn't touch the long slider like that?
00:39:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think this is too much singletapping + a stream for a Hard diff. Turn two of this notes into a slider, maybe something like this:
http://puu.sh/ioUR9/5c963145ca.jpg00:47:928 (5) - NC should be here, and remove NC from the next note.
00:56:143 (3,1) - Same as I said before, I think slider's ends can't be hidden under a note like this.
01:23:464 (1) - Add a note here and then the spinner.[Insane]
00:01:678 (5,6) - Exactly the same as Hard diff
00:17:035 (2) - I'd move this to x324 y132 for a better blanket + the slider's end doesn't touch the other slider's body.
00:17:928 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern has really poor flow in my opinon, mostly because of forcing a blanket. Try this:
http://puu.sh/ioVen/fce8750576.jpg00:25:071 (1,1) - I think this looks better, what do you think?
http://puu.sh/ioVjY/d546e6b4e6.jpg00:51:143 (2,3,4,5) - This feels bad to play because of it's angle, I believe. Try this:
http://puu.sh/ioVvu/d278ee37f5.jpg or something you can think of :3
And the same thing for the spinner as the other diffs!