1. Inner Oni (4,28 stars, 1807 notes)
2. pishi's Extra (5,36 stars, 1207 notes)

changelog

Changed offset thanks to Hanjamon
Removed some sliders thanks to Gero
Changed BG due to it being a bit... uhhhh controversial thanks to Gero
Added pishifat's mod and Standard difficulty
Modified several parts from the kiai, update if you were going to mod
Changed a transition SV change thanjs to Hanjamon
Added Culedesu's mod
Added SKSalt's mod
Added tasuke912's mod
Added OzzyOzrock's [BN] mod
Added Lost The Lights' mod
Changed MP3 and fixed timing issues (thanks pishi)
Fixed metadata things
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CIRCLE HYPE
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Added S a n d's mod, i feel closer to bubble
Added agu's mod, feel even closer to bubble
Added Nishizumi's mod, bubble is that you?
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Bubble #1 by Ozzy
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Self popped to apply Nweff's mod
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Rebubbled by Nwolf (#2)
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Self-popped to apply Nardoxyribonucleic's mod
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Final recheck with Nardoxyribonucleic
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Approved by Nardoxyribonucleic

Hanjamon wrote:

Offset with 4966 sounds better imo so... better select all timing points (red timing point and inherit points) write +18 and click move, then OK

example

Edit: don't forget to snap all notes

pishifat wrote:

heres the this http://puu.sh/iuwn3/555333f71a.zip

and the idk:

2015-06-18 23:41 pishifat: in taiko can you just map
2015-06-18 23:41 pishifat: anything
2015-06-18 23:41 pishifat: like even when it's not in the song
2015-06-18 23:42 Raiden: not really
2015-06-18 23:42 Raiden: I'm being serious here
2015-06-18 23:42 Raiden: if you don't follow the rhythm you're actually screwed
2015-06-18 23:43 Raiden: getting the map DQ in no time
2015-06-18 23:43 Raiden: I'm making sure tehse streams fit well
2015-06-18 23:43 pishifat: but i mean like
2015-06-18 23:43 pishifat: even when there's no 1/4 you're mapping 1/4
2015-06-18 23:43 pishifat: is that ok in tacoland
2015-06-18 23:47 Raiden: yes and no
2015-06-18 23:48 Raiden: in some parts there IS 1/4 tho
2015-06-18 23:48 Raiden: in fact, leaving it 1/2 made it sound bad
2015-06-18 23:48 Raiden: so I 1/4'd
2015-06-18 23:48 pishifat: o
2015-06-18 23:48 pishifat: that part for me is all 1/2 lul
2015-06-18 23:49 Raiden: the 30 note stream you mean?
2015-06-18 23:49 pishifat: yea
2015-06-18 23:49 Raiden: hm
2015-06-18 23:50 Raiden: my 30 note stream sounds just fine
2015-06-18 23:50 Raiden: changed it
2015-06-18 23:50 Raiden: but still a stream
2015-06-18 23:50 pishifat: all taiko maps have weird rhythm to me so thats why i was wondering
2015-06-18 23:50 Raiden: lmao
2015-06-18 23:50 pishifat: like a lot of the stuff in your diff doesnt make sense to me
2015-06-18 23:50 pishifat: just from referncing it while i was mapping
2015-06-18 23:51 Raiden: maybe at the end
2015-06-18 23:51 Raiden: when the music starts to get lower
2015-06-18 23:51 Raiden: I should not 1/4
2015-06-18 23:51 Raiden: however lol
2015-06-18 23:51 Raiden: taiko is the map that follows the rhythm the most
2015-06-18 23:51 Raiden: modfe*
2015-06-18 23:51 Raiden: mode* holy sht
2015-06-18 23:52 pishifat: stuff like 05:08:566 (1743) - tho
2015-06-18 23:52 pishifat: like why isn't it on the red tick before that
2015-06-18 23:52 pishifat: since htat's definitely where the piano stuff is
2015-06-18 23:52 Raiden: wow
2015-06-18 23:52 Raiden: I should KD you for that
2015-06-18 23:53 Raiden: not kidding
2015-06-18 23:53 pishifat: lol....
2015-06-18 23:53 Raiden: thanks for noticing lo
2015-06-18 23:53 pishifat: that same thing tho
2015-06-18 23:53 Raiden: 05:09:766 (1724) - this one asw ell
2015-06-18 23:53 pishifat: happens like everywhere
2015-06-18 23:53 pishifat: in your ending
2015-06-18 23:53 pishifat: so gl
2015-06-18 23:54 Raiden: nah
2015-06-18 23:54 Raiden: just 2 notes
2015-06-18 23:55 pishifat: 05:09:766 (1746) - tho
2015-06-18 23:55 Raiden: I was faster than you
2015-06-18 23:55 Raiden: oh yes
2015-06-18 23:55 pishifat: 05:18:016 - is just missing one or something
2015-06-18 23:55 pishifat: 05:19:366 (1765) -
2015-06-18 23:55 Raiden: hmmm
2015-06-18 23:55 Raiden: fixed
2015-06-18 23:55 Raiden: you should post this log
2015-06-18 23:55 Raiden: just sayin'
2015-06-18 23:56 pishifat: lul
2015-06-18 23:56 pishifat: i can post log with my diff B)
2015-06-18 23:56 pishifat: my first ever mlg taiko mod
2015-06-18 23:56 Raiden: indeed
2015-06-18 23:56 Raiden: I went full yolo on that end part
2015-06-18 23:56 Raiden: and didn't htink it was important
2015-06-18 23:57 pishifat: gg
2015-06-18 23:57 pishifat: my diff is done btw
2015-06-18 23:57 Raiden: wow
2015-06-18 23:57 pishifat: its been done for a few days i just never did anything with it lol

Culedesu wrote:

M4M! (probably)

Inner Oni

00:47:941 (265) - remove I like it as it is now
00:48:091 - add d it sounds good, but it'd make the 2 patterns way harder than I aim to
00:50:266 (282,283,284) - kkd this section feels better with d k d
00:52:666 (299,300,301) - kdd sounds good, added
00:59:266 (346,347,348) - ^ changed a note, but not to k d d
01:19:441 (464) - remove I changed a bit the stream, but not removed that note
01:19:516 (464,465,466,467,468,469,470) - so, stream is gonna start on 464, do kdkkddk the last note can't be k since it'd cause inconsistency with the rhythm
01:28:816 (520,521,522,523,524,525,526,527,528) - ddkdkkddk it's already like that XD
01:31:441 (539) - change d sounds better with k imo
01:58:141 (704) - remove I feel there is no need to
02:04:066 (731,732,733) - kkd would cause inconsistency with the rhythm
02:06:241 - add a k here so a stream can be made there is no need to make a stream here imo
02:06:016 (742,743,744,745,746,747,748,749,750) - after you add ^, a stream is going to be made starting from note 742, do ddkkddkdk see above
02:08:491 (761) - remove I feel there is no need to
02:08:941 (765) - ^ ^
02:13:591 (793) - ^ ^
02:15:766 (806,807,808,809,810,811,812) - ddkdkkd would cause inconsistency with the rhythm
02:18:466 (825) - remove. after removing move 02:18:391 (824) - to 825's point this stream is just fine
02:20:941 (840) - remove nah
02:21:091 (842) - ^ nah
02:31:066 (893) - I'm just suggesting this: from this part make patterns with the drum sounds at the background of the song until 02:34:666 (903) - thought about it, but it would add unnecessary difficulty
03:44:566 - add d there is no sound here
03:44:641 - ^ ^
03:46:816 (1241) - change d why?
03:47:266 (1245) - change k why would I?
03:47:416 (1248) - ^ (sorry for constant number changes, I had to redl the map over and over again) d is better imo
03:48:241 (1258) - change d that'd make the stream unnecessarily hard
03:48:541 (1262) - ^ ^
03:54:166 (1302,1303,1304,1305,1306) - kkddk would cause inconsistency with rhythm
03:56:266 (1315,1316,1317,1318,1319,1320,1321,1322,1323) - kdddkdkdk same than above
03:57:016 - add d there is a k here
03:57:091 - ^ unnecessary difficulty imo
03:57:166 (1326) - change k inconsistency with rhythm
04:01:141 (1349) - remove this pattern is fine
04:15:691 (1442) - ^ ^
04:17:866 (1454,1455,1456,1457,1458) - ddkdk inconsistency with rhythm
05:38:566 (1768) - move two ticks to the right it doesn't fit at all lol
05:40:216 (1773,1774,1775) - kdd kkd fits more imo

Even tought you haven't accepted yet, I wanted to mod this.
Good luck on approval!

1. Change offset to +8ms or more +? I played twice. Once, offset is +-0ms https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/zj69wji.jpg. Twice, offset is +5ms https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/tQ50eGL.jpg. It is an appreciable change. Please try to consider it.
2. It is a very generous portion. Please lower 10% of volume.

1. 01:12:786 - Why do you move Preview Point in front of 1/8? 01:12:786 - Is it not here?(Inner Oni is -20ms)

1. 00:04:966 ~ 01:02:566 - There is not Big note. I think that we need more effective big notes.
   1. 00:14:116 - d
   2. 00:14:266 - d
   3. Because k k k k is bored.
   4. 00:32:266 - move to 00:32:116
   5. 00:32:566 - remove
   6. 00:32:116 - add to d
   7. I think that it is fit rhythm.
   8. 02:29:866 - add to d
   9. 02:29:941 ~ 02:30:091 - add to "kkk"
   10. 02:30:466 ~ 02:30:541 - change to "kk"
   11. if you want to follow vocal, I think that it is fine like that.

SKSalt wrote:

Hi Raiden, Taiko m4m

[General]

1. Change offset to +8ms or more +? I played twice. Once, offset is +-0ms https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/zj69wji.jpg. Twice, offset is +5ms https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/tQ50eGL.jpg. It is an appreciable change. Please try to consider it.
2. It is a very generous portion. Please lower 10% of volume.

Actually yes at the volume part (I sometimes can't hear the music), however the offset for now I'll keep it as it is, as long as no more modders tell me this
(Inner Oni only)

1. 01:12:786 - Why do you move Preview Point in front of 1/8? 01:12:786 - Is it not here?(Inner Oni is -20ms)

(all diffs) thanks for noticing

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:04:966 ~ 01:02:566 - There is not Big note. I think that we need more effective big notes. I think there is no Finisher sound in this part whatsoever, so I'll keep it as it is for now
2. 00:14:116 - d I think the pitch fits more k than d here
3. 00:14:266 - d same than above
4. Because k k k k is bored. wat D:
5. 00:32:266 - move to 00:32:116 ah yes! And added some personal modifications
6. 00:32:566 - remove
7. 00:32:116 - add to d what I said above ^
8. I think that it is fit rhythm.
9. 02:29:866 - add to d but there is no hitsound here ._.
10. 02:29:941 ~ 02:30:091 - add to "kkk" I think these patterns are fine as they are right now
11. 02:30:466 ~ 02:30:541 - change to "kk" Same than above >.<
12. if you want to follow vocal, I think that it is fine like that.

That's all. Good luck. Thank you very much <3

1. All green lines are shifted -20ms. please fix these.
2. unify tags and preview point.
3. 01:12:786 -, don't have to add red line here because real bpm is not changed. Delete this line, and +20ms this red line. 00:04:966
4. Personally, OD6.0 is better. OD5.0 is easy for Oni players.
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5. 01:42:036 (593) - change to k, i think it fits to drum well.
6. 01:44:436 (611,629,647) - ^
7. 01:58:386 (708,709,710) - idk these big notes what to follow the sound. try to change to better clarity pattern. if you want to follow the vocal, change to 4/3?
8. 03:35:286 to 03:43:236 -, some pattern don't follow the drum well. try to listen more and change to better pattern.
   e.g.)
   03:35:886 (1178,1179) - Delete (1179) and change (1178) to kat.
   03:36:336 -, add don.
   03:37:086 -, add kat. and 03:36:936 (1184) - change to don.
9. 04:57:186 -, SEvol25% is so small. i recommend to be little big. (40%?)

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi, Raiden. m4m from #taiko
[ Inner Oni]

1. All green lines are shifted -20ms. please fix these. i really thought I fixed them a while ago...looks like I was mistaken
2. unify tags and preview point. done, thanks for noticing
3. 01:12:786 -, don't have to add red line here because real bpm is not changed. Delete this line, and +20ms this red line. 00:04:966 there actually is an offset change here, tested by the timing master pishifat
4. Personally, OD6.0 is better. OD5.0 is easy for Oni players. good idea, changed
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5. 01:42:036 (593) - change to k, i think it fits to drum well. the sound fits more of a d since it sounds the same than the previous notes. Besides, I use that pattern at the start of the song as well
6. 01:44:436 (611,629,647) - ^ ^
7. 01:58:386 (708,709,710) - idk these big notes what to follow the sound. try to change to better clarity pattern. if you want to follow the vocal, change to 4/3? I am not following the vocals whatsoever in the song
8. 03:35:286 to 03:43:236 -, some pattern don't follow the drum well. try to listen more and change to better pattern. I think they follow the rhythm quite good actually
   e.g.)
   03:35:886 (1178,1179) - Delete (1179) and change (1178) to kat. that'd cause inconsistency with previous patterns
   03:36:336 -, add don. sounds good, added
   03:37:086 -, add kat. and 03:36:936 (1184) - change to don. I think it doesn't fit the rhythm
9. 04:57:186 -, SEvol25% is so small. i recommend to be little big. (40%?)I lowered volume a lot to actually hear the song, since the sound goes lower and lower at these points

that's all. Good luck! ty<3

• This is already giving me nightmares.

1. Check for useless green lines. http://puu.sh/j8fjT/4629cf3645.png
2. Don't let the volume go past 40%. The guitar gets soft, but the piano is still loud and hit confirmation is still important.
   
3. 00:32:586 (165) - k? This guitar note's pretty high.
4. 00:33:336 (170) - k? These dons look as if they're part of 00:33:786 (172,173,174,175) -, so the k helps differentiate it.
5. 00:37:086 (192,195) - d and k respectively? dkdkdkd doesn't quite fit this part.
6. 00:36:936 (191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201) - Re-invent this part? I know you don't want to use dddkkk because you use it later, but currently dkdkdkd doesn't work either.
7. 01:46:686 (628) - d? ddk sounds out of place
8. 01:49:086 (646) - ^
9. 02:18:186 (819,820,821,822,823,824,825) - kdddkdk since kddkddk doesn't match with much?
10. 02:28:686 (875,876,877,878,879,880) - kk for these, so they're more emphasized as the highest?
11. 02:32:286 () - There's a guitar note to map here.
12. yo those sliders can be mapped to fit better than 1/4 being spammed over it
13. 03:36:786 (1180,1181) - messed up? still one more done before the k
14. 03:38:886 (1191,1192,1193,1194,1195) - ^
15. 03:41:286 (1206,1207,1208,1209,1210) - ^
16. 03:46:836 (1241) - should be replaced with 03:46:686 (1240) -
17. How about mapping all the audible piano at the end as best as you can instead of k k k k at some parts?

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Raiden! M4M NM. I made you get all this priority but you'll probably still need some mods s

[Inner Oni]

• This is already giving me nightmares. it was not my intention :c or maybe it was?

1. Check for useless green lines. http://puu.sh/j8fjT/4629cf3645.png fixed the last 4 ones. The first is necessary to restore x1.00 SV
2. Don't let the volume go past 40%. The guitar gets soft, but the piano is still loud and hit confirmation is still important. fixed volume escalation
   
3. 00:32:586 (165) - k? This guitar note's pretty high. it is
4. 00:33:336 (170) - k? These dons look as if they're part of 00:33:786 (172,173,174,175) -, so the k helps differentiate it. i'm gonna change 00:33:486 (171) - instead
5. 00:37:086 (192,195) - d and k respectively? dkdkdkd doesn't quite fit this part. sounds actually better lol
6. 00:36:936 (191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201) - Re-invent this part? I know you don't want to use dddkkk because you use it later, but currently dkdkdkd doesn't work either. it's dddkkk already D:
7. 01:46:686 (628) - d? ddk sounds out of place it indeed is out of place
8. 01:49:086 (646) - ^ fixed too
9. 02:18:186 (819,820,821,822,823,824,825) - kdddkdk since kddkddk doesn't match with much? fixed
10. 02:28:686 (875,876,877,878,879,880) - kk for these, so they're more emphasized as the highest? done on the later ones, but not the first ones C:
11. 02:32:286 () - There's a guitar note to map here. fixed but don't use () since it gives "Invalid format" error xD
12. yo those sliders can be mapped to fit better than 1/4 being spammed over it i honestly think it's fine the way it is...idk for now i'll keep
13. 03:36:786 (1180,1181) - messed up? still one more done before the k I can't seem to hear any clear sound here
14. 03:38:886 (1191,1192,1193,1194,1195) - ^ ^
15. 03:41:286 (1206,1207,1208,1209,1210) - ^ ^
16. 03:46:836 (1241) - should be replaced with 03:46:686 (1240) - probably yup
17. How about mapping all the audible piano at the end as best as you can instead of k k k k at some parts? I'll try it, but i want you to recheck it when you can since I was not very sure to map this part according to the piano

I made you get all this priority but you'll probably still need some mods to seal the deal for bubbles to start ;~: GL DOOD you didn't have to give me any priority man, I know there is a lot of work left to do but I wanna polish this map as much as I can

1. 00:34:986 (179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186) - Podrías intentar kkkdddkk en esto, asi suena más acorde a la música (si te fijas, tu tienes kdkdkkdk, pero el sonido solamente sube en el primer k, baja en el segundo d y vuelve a subir en el 3er d)
2. 00:39:786 (209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216) - Igual que antes.
3. 00:44:586 (240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248) - No estoy seguro si intentas seguir el ritmo de fondo, pero otra vez, podrías intentar lo de arriba, cambiando el ddk del final por kdk.
4. 00:47:136 (258,259,260) - Me suena mejor como kkd.
5. 00:47:886 (264,265,266) - kdk por lo mismo de antes.
6. 00:49:386 (275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284) - Otra vez, cambiando el ddk del medio por ddd y el ddk del final por kdk. (Si no lo hiciste antes, ignora este punto, si lo hiciste, haz lo mismo con los siguientes, no quiero señalarlos todos xD)
7. 01:06:786 (397,398,399,400,401) - Para variar un poco, podrías hacer esto k kkd k.
8. 01:25:236 (502) - d para consistencia con tus anteriores patrones iguales a este.
9. 01:26:436 (508) - k para un poco de variedad (?)
10. 01:27:636 (517) - d para consistencia, lo mismo de antes.
11. 01:30:036 (533,535) - ctrl+g estas dos, así haces consistencia.
12. 01:31:461 (541) - Creo que suena mejor como d, pero solo es mi opinión, puedes rechazar esto si quieres.
13. 01:44:286 (610,611) - Si vas a poner un k ahí, creo que sería mejor que lo pongas en el 611, osea, ctrl+g con esto seleccionado. (aunque recomiendo que lo dejes como d por la consistencia)
14. 01:55:386 (687,688,689,690,691) - lo mismo de antes por lo de la variedad, k kkd k.
15. 02:07:236 (755) - :I (Consistencia, btw intenta arreglar los demás así no tengo que seleccionarlos todos yo x_x)
16. 02:49:986 - Como ya te había dicho antes, reemplaza los sliders por notas, quedan muy feo y son aburridos al jugar.
17. 03:39:486 - Agrega una nota aquí como k, que hace falta, y cambia 03:39:336 (1201) - por d.
18. 03:41:886 - Lo mismo de arriba.
19. 04:47:586 - Recomendaría que en esta parte, comenzaras a seguir el ritmo que resalta más en lugar del que se va desvaneciendo, es algo confuso cuando se juega, pero es solo mi opinión.

Lost The Lights wrote:

Hello, M4M as requested.

d=don
k=kat
D=Big Don
K=Big Kat
r=remove
(?)=Suggestion

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:34:986 (179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186) - Podrías intentar kkkdddkk en esto, asi suena más acorde a la música (si te fijas, tu tienes kdkdkkdk, pero el sonido solamente sube en el primer k, baja en el segundo d y vuelve a subir en el 3er d) fixed
2. 00:39:786 (209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216) - Igual que antes. fixed
3. 00:44:586 (240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248) - No estoy seguro si intentas seguir el ritmo de fondo, pero otra vez, podrías intentar lo de arriba, cambiando el ddk del final por kdk. si, no sigo las vocals, así que de momento esa la dejo así
4. 00:47:136 (258,259,260) - Me suena mejor como kkd. si, el pitch está invertido (no sé en que estaria pensando orz)
5. 00:47:886 (264,265,266) - kdk por lo mismo de antes. en esta parte si sube el pitch
6. 00:49:386 (275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284) - Otra vez, cambiando el ddk del medio por ddd y el ddk del final por kdk. (Si no lo hiciste antes, ignora este punto, si lo hiciste, haz lo mismo con los siguientes, no quiero señalarlos todos xD) esta parte la voy a remapear con mas consistencia
7. 01:06:786 (397,398,399,400,401) - Para variar un poco, podrías hacer esto k kkd k. también he cambiado 01:09:186 (412,413,414) - a kdk
8. 01:25:236 (502) - d para consistencia con tus anteriores patrones iguales a este. fixed
9. 01:26:436 (508) - k para un poco de variedad (?) fixed
10. 01:27:636 (517) - d para consistencia, lo mismo de antes. estas las he cambiado un poco para variar (por el pitch)
11. 01:30:036 (533,535) - ctrl+g estas dos, así haces consistencia. esta la he cambiado porque el pitch es más alto, la he puesto k k
12. 01:31:461 (541) - Creo que suena mejor como d, pero solo es mi opinión, puedes rechazar esto si quieres. creo que por el pitch debería tener más k, igual lo cambio a kkkkd
13. 01:44:286 (610,611) - Si vas a poner un k ahí, creo que sería mejor que lo pongas en el 611, osea, ctrl+g con esto seleccionado. (aunque recomiendo que lo dejes como d por la consistencia) lo arreglé cambiando ambos a d para no causar inconsistencia
14. 01:55:386 (687,688,689,690,691) - lo mismo de antes por lo de la variedad, k kkd k. fixed
15. 02:07:236 (755) - :I (Consistencia, btw intenta arreglar los demás así no tengo que seleccionarlos todos yo x_x) sé a que te refieres, fixed
16. 02:49:986 - Como ya te había dicho antes, reemplaza los sliders por notas, quedan muy feo y son aburridos al jugar. parte remapeada
17. 03:39:486 - Agrega una nota aquí como k, que hace falta, y cambia 03:39:336 (1201) - por d. fixed y fixed
18. 03:41:886 - Lo mismo de arriba. fixed
19. 04:47:586 - Recomendaría que en esta parte, comenzaras a seguir el ritmo que resalta más en lugar del que se va desvaneciendo, es algo confuso cuando se juega, pero es solo mi opinión. yo también lo pensé. Me basaré en el mapa de pishifat para hacer esto

Muy buen mapa, no te preocupes si el mod es largo, mas que nada puntué un par de partes que necesitaban consistencia y/o variedad. omg<3

Suerte! <3

S a n d wrote:

Taiko mod request from: Raiden
Request Type: M4M
Request Diff: Inner Oni
Modding Content: Inner Oni
*Note: I mod map according to my style of mapping, so sorry if it is unpractical >_<*



- This is too easy to be Inner Oni o_o. I would say around Oni. my inner onis are like this. ALL of them :p
- Background placement: 0,0,"steamworkshop_webupload_previewfile_205192716_preview.jpg",0,100 what's wrong with it? ._.edit: fixed
- First part in general - Why don't you add more finishers qwqwqwqwq. because there is no finisher sound you silly!!
- 00:09:036 and 00:09:111 - I hear ddd in the background, maybe add d :3? okay i'll do it
- 00:11:436 and 00:11:511 - ^ added
- 00:16:461 - Add k? Same reason as before. 00:16:311 - it is here
- 01:01:836 - kkkkk -> kkddd ? nah, kkkkk is fine
- 01:12:786 - The note density in kiai is still pretty similar to verse. Which you kinda miss the climax feeling. Tho I get it, the song is simple and you shouldn't overmap qwq. yep C:
- 01:15:186 - Since you added finisher 01:12:786 here, why not add more during the kiai such as 01:15:186, 01:17:586 ...etc. That at least gives it a bit more variation on game play :3. i'll add some, thanks for suggesting
- 01:31:986 - Personally I would set kiai end here. uhh it doesnt matter lol
- 01:33:636 and 01:33:711 - Add d? Same reason as beginning. okay
- 01:36:261 - Add k? Same reason as before. (Also a lot of parts in the future applies ><) fixed
- 02:01:986 - Same comment as first kiai. Also I think this kiai can be harder than first kiai since the song progresses, it'd be nice to see difficulties increase too. i think it is fine as it is...
- 03:09:636 ~ 03:28:386 - An idea came to my mind is that why don't you change all the blue notes into spinners XD? Since the sound is stretched anyway. that'd make the song unnecessarily exhausting :^)
- 03:29:436 - Add a note? Sounds like something is missing.
- 03:30:636 - ^
- 03:31:836 - ^
- A lot of ^ in this section lol, you can find them XD. ^^^^ fixed all ^^^^
- 03:49:986 - Same comment as second kiai :3. i like all the kiai note setups as they are
- 04:37:986 - Do you think the transition will be better with sv changes? nah, it would make the song unbearably painful to play at the end
- 05:45:534 - I highly recommend mapping this section note by note instead of a spinner. It really gives it a nice piano outro feeling, instead of spamming dkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdk. nah...the spinner is fine
- 05:52:510 - I would use ddkk (1/6) instead of a spinner :3. i guess you refer to the last finisher. I prefer to keep is as it is right now, no need to make it unnecessarily harder

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