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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 18 мая 2017 г. at 20:47:01

Artist: SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki
Title: &Z (TV size)
Source: アルドノア・ゼロ
Tags: Aldnoah.Zero kawawa opening 2nd season 2 s2
BPM: 158
Filesize: 22876kb
Play Time: 01:28
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Normal = 100%
*Hitsound = 100%*
Kawa's Hyper by Kawawa = 100%
*Hitsound = 100%*
The Heavens Fall = 100%
*Hitsound = 100%*


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ImageBubbled by Rizqy

ImageRanked by Kuo Kyoka


Special Thanks
DarkSider2442 for mod
KawaEE for GD and star
HOST for mod
Frim4503 for mod
IamBaum for mod
Steins for star
ArcherLove for mod
Rizqy for check
Kuo Kyoka for check
Last edited by [Shana Lesus] on , edited 61 times in total.
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Another Moon Lv. 10
00:07:910 - http://puu.sh/i4Qvd/721f3f2889.png — может стоит продолжить эту часть? http://puu.sh/i4Qzu/eb9090ea4c.png
00:11:898 (11898|3,11898|4) - на одну колонку влево или 00:11:898 (11898|3) - на 3 колонку
00:14:936 (14936|5) - на 4 колонку, 00:15:126 (15126|4) - на 6 колонку
00:26:518 - может стоит выделить долгий звук? Ноту на 7 колонку
00:41:138 - добавь ноту, тут звук пианино вроде
00:41:898 - ^
00:42:657 - ^
00:47:214 - ^
01:03:163 - ты уверен, что здесь так необходимо 6 нот?
01:15:315 - и что это? =/ 01:15:600 - удали 2 ноты, 01:15:790 - удали одну и тут одну 01:15:980 -
01:21:866 (81866|6) - удаляй, звуков там нет
01:27:467 - стрёмно выглядит, переделай лучше, например, 4 колонки с тройным молотком, хотя может ты придумаешь чего получше.


Обязательно позови, когда будут готовы остальные сложности
Удачи :)
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DarkSider2442 wrote:
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Another Moon Lv. 10
00:07:910 - http://puu.sh/i4Qvd/721f3f2889.png — может стоит продолжить эту часть? http://puu.sh/i4Qzu/eb9090ea4c.png
00:11:898 (11898|3,11898|4) - на одну колонку влево или 00:11:898 (11898|3) - на 3 колонку
00:14:936 (14936|5) - на 4 колонку, 00:15:126 (15126|4) - на 6 колонку
00:26:518 - может стоит выделить долгий звук? Ноту на 7 колонку
00:41:138 - добавь ноту, тут звук пианино вроде
00:41:898 - ^
00:42:657 - ^
00:47:214 - ^
01:03:163 - ты уверен, что здесь так необходимо 6 нот?
01:15:315 - и что это? =/ 01:15:600 - удали 2 ноты, 01:15:790 - удали одну и тут одну 01:15:980 -
01:21:866 (81866|6) - удаляй, звуков там нет
01:27:467 - стрёмно выглядит, переделай лучше, например, 4 колонки с тройным молотком, хотя может ты придумаешь чего получше.


Обязательно позови, когда будут готовы остальные сложности
Удачи :)


Все исправлено, спасибо
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В описании не забудь добавить, что у харда есть один мод

Normal Lv.6
00:23:290 (23290|5) - на 3 колонку перенеси, чтобы так вышло 00:20:252 (20252|4,20632|5,20632|2,21012|3) -
00:44:936 (44936|1,44936|0,44936|3) - подобный паттерн очень неудобно и сложно играть на нормале, перенеси, например, 00:44:936 (44936|1) - на 7

Kawa's Hyper Lv.8
00:28:986 (28986|2) - move to 5
00:32:024 (32024|6) - move to 5
00:41:138 - add note (piano)
00:41:898 - ^
00:44:936 - add note
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DarkSider2442 wrote:
Kawa's Hyper Lv.8
00:28:986 (28986|2) - move to 5 keep
00:32:024 (32024|6) - move to 5 ^same, it's intend about same column :D

00:41:138 - add note (piano)
00:41:898 - ^
00:44:936 - add note
^Focus on only Bass, but i will consider this xD thanks~


Thanks for feedback xD
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hi shana mod from pm >:D



00:30:505 , 0033:543 , 00:36:581 - how about using whistle hitsounds instead of clap hits?


column 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 / 6 / 7 / 8


Normal Lv.6

01:28:037 - add 3





Kawa's Hyper Lv.8

kawaee made kkul jam patterns

01:22:531 (82531|1) - move 6





Another Moon Lv.10

00:05:822 (5822|1) - remove
00:08:860 (8860|3) - remove
00:11:898 (11898|2) - remove
00:14:746 (14746|1) - remove

01:17:214 (77214|5) - remove
01:18:733 (78733|7) - remove
01:24:809 (84809|7) - remove






good luk and thx for request \:D/
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HOST wrote:

kawaee made kkul jam patterns lol

01:22:531 (82531|1) - move 6 okay, nice one



Thanks for mod :D


+ FIX : OD 8.0 → 7.5
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Thanks HOST <3
All fixed
updated
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Normal Lv.6
00:23:290 (23290|2) - move to 1. feels empty
00:38:100 (38100|4) - ^5
01:03:733 - add note. for better flow
01:27:467 (87467|1,87562|5,87657|3,87752|7,87847|4,87847|6) - make this part simple :(

Kawa's Hyper Lv.8
00:24:050 (24050|6) - move to 1. feels empty in col. 1
00:35:062 (35062|2,35062|1,35442|1,35442|2) - move 1 col. to left. see this 00:32:024 (32024|6,32024|5,32404|5,32404|6,32784|6,32784|4,32784|7) -

i suggest to rearange again cuz i feel col. 1 is empty and not balance. or maybe the stlye ? 1+7 k


Another Moon Lv. 10
same with Lv.8 feels empty in col. 1


sorry if it's didn't help you cuz idk how to mod 8k -_-
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col:1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8

Normal Lv.6
00:23:290 (23290|2) - move to 1. feels empty
00:38:100 (38100|4) - ^5
01:03:733 - add note. for better flow added
01:27:467 (87467|1,87562|5,87657|3,87752|7,87847|4,87847|6) - make this part simple :(fixed

Kawa's Hyper Lv.8
00:24:050 (24050|6) - move to 1. feels empty in col. 1
00:35:062 (35062|2,35062|1,35442|1,35442|2) - move 1 col. to left. see this 00:32:024 (32024|6,32024|5,32404|5,32404|6,32784|6,32784|4,32784|7) -

i suggest to rearange again cuz i feel col. 1 is empty and not balance. or maybe the stlye ? 1+7 k


Another Moon Lv. 10
same with Lv.8 feels empty in col. 1


sorry if it's didn't help you cuz idk how to mod 8k -_-


Thanks for mod :oops:
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col:1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8


00:24:050 (24050|6) - move to 1. feels empty in col. 1
00:35:062 (35062|2,35062|1,35442|1,35442|2) - move 1 col. to left. see this 00:32:024 (32024|6,32024|5,32404|5,32404|6,32784|6,32784|4,32784|7) -
i suggest to rearange again cuz i feel col. 1 is empty and not balance. or maybe the stlye ? 1+7 k


Sorry, ^i will keep all.
my scratch style is only focus on cymbal or crash sound.
but, shana style is, seems The kick sound was expressed at scratch key
So perhaps you might have felt a lot of empty scratch key in my diff
but, As mentioned, I will keep. thank you xD, was good feed back. :D
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oh..
it's so fast

yeah about kawa dif it's seem empty in col 1.
feels like playing 7k :)
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Nice! osu!mania version :D
i thought there'll be a piano/keysound in the map u.u
just passing by, you may want to add some tags,
just add this "Season 2 Opening and Slaine Troyard, because he's in the BG

Sadly i cant mod Mania :(
Really a neat/nice diff <3
Hope its ranked Sooner <3
Good luck! Credits for using some of my Hitsound and BG pls xD /me runs
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Nice! osu!mania version :D
i thought there'll be a piano/keysound in the map u.u
just passing by, you may want to add some tags,
just add this "Season 2 Opening and Slaine Troyard, because he's in the BG

Sadly i cant mod Mania :(
Really a neat/nice diff <3
Hope its ranked Sooner <3
Good luck! Credits for using some of my Hitsound and BG pls xD /me runs



Thank you <3 :oops:
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Hi there, here is the mod from your m4m with Apple, i'll mod as his substitute :)
I Hope this is kind of useful.

Columns |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|

Normal Lv.6 / Hyper Lv.8
Try to exchange the patterns form Normal and hyper, from 00:39:619 - until 00:45:695 -
As you can see on this screenshot (Left side: Normal | Right side: Hyper) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3366147 , the normal diff is more difficult than the hyper diff.


Normal Lv.6
I'd recommend that u don't use chords with 4 notes in a normal difficulty, cause this might be too hard to read for this kind of diff.
These are the spots with those chords:
00:03:163 - Remove 1 of the notes.
00:39:619 - ^
01:03:163 - ^
01:03:923 - ^

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I'd recommend to use the same amount of notes for these 2 chords 01:05:062 (65062|5,65062|2) - and 01:05:442 (65442|0,65442|6,65442|3) - , cause they have the same pitch and they are pretty close.
01:27:847 - Add a note, cause the sound from this "note" sounds quite strong.


Hyper Lv.8
00:14:746 (14746|7,14746|5,14936|3,14936|2,15126|5,15126|6) - Maybe turn these chords into single notes, cause u always used single notes in this section for this kind of sound.
01:23:100 (83100|2,83100|4,83100|1) - Remove one of the notes, cause there is no heavy Beat here.


Another Moon Lv.10
01:04:682 (64682|7,64682|4,64682|2,64682|3) - Remove 1 note, cause this note is no "heavy beat".
01:15:980 (75980|3,75980|5,75980|2) - Remove 1 of the notes. The pattern here is: 3-2-3-2-3-3-4, but i think you should keep a constant amount of notes, cause there is a constant pitch. therefore i would suggest to use a 3-2-3-2-3-2-4 pattern.


Really nice map and a great Song, good luck with getting this ranked, we need more 8K Songs ^^
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