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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 21 Juni 2015 at 21:53:53

Artist: Satori-san
Title: Hari no Sora
Tags: Japan Waruwaru Alliance 小清水 亜美 Koshimizu Ami C74 Comiket Garasu Sound Online Yatoki Tsukasa 矢鴇つかさ Bungaku Shoujo
BPM: 126
Filesize: 4644kb
Play Time: 02:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lv.13 - 4Key (3,04 stars, 1194 notes)
  2. Lv.7 - 4Key (1,82 stars, 684 notes)
Download: Satori-san - Hari no Sora
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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(=w=) Enjoy (=w=)

31/05/2015 - BG Changed
Thanks Ring-kun & Verniy-chan
Released at Comic Market 74 ~ Vocals by Satori-san


by Marirose
by Kuo Kyoka
Thanks for all modder who improved this map too <3

Metadata Source ==> vgmdb.net & nautiljon.com
Artist based on this newest ranked beatmap
Verniy_Chan
Hi Avalon-san >.<)/
NM as requested from PM in Web

4K = |1|2|3|4|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern)

[Lv.6]
00:21:811 (21811|0,22049|3,22287|1,22525|2,22882|3) change into normal note for consistency
00:23:240 (23240|0) ?
00:29:430 (29430|3,29668|2,29906|1,30620|3) change into normal note?
00:31:097 (31097|2,31335|2) avoid low jack
00:37:763 (37763|2) move to 00:37:644 - following piano sound is better
00:40:859 (40859|0) move to 2
00:48:240 (48240|0) move to 2 row balance
00:49:192 (49192|0) ^
00:53:716 (53716|3,53954|1) Ctrl + G, variation pattern
00:54:668 (54668|1,55144|2) move to right 1x, then 00:55:859 (55859|0) move to 1
01:00:620 (60620|3,60620|0) move to 2 & 3, since kick beat is patch
01:01:097 (61097|0,61097|3) move to 01:00:859 , snare beat is strong sound :v
01:16:811 (76811|2,77049|2) avoid low jack
01:19:430 (79430|3,79668|2,79906|1) move to left 1x, then 01:20:382 (80382|0) move to 2
01:31:097 - 01:32:049 it will be nice if you following kick than long sound
01:49:906 (109906|0) move to 2
02:24:549 (144549|0) move to 2, then 02:24:668 (144668|2) move to 1

[Lv.10]
00:33:120 (33120|3) move to 3?
00:36:811 (36811|3) remove
01:46:811 (106811|0) ghost note here? i think long sound from here 01:46:335
01:49:192 (109192|2) move to 4
02:06:573 (126573|0,126811|1) Ctrl + G
Nice Pattern here

Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Topic Starter
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Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Avalon-san >.<)/\(>.<) Hi Verniy-san
NM as requested from PM in Web
woah, so fast =w=)b

4K = |1|2|3|4|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern)

[Lv.6]
00:21:811 (21811|0,22049|3,22287|1,22525|2,22882|3) change into normal note for consistency hmm, keep that . . . it's for diffrence between piano sound (cuz this is have 2 piano sound actually xD)
00:23:240 (23240|0) ? oh my . . deleted xD
00:29:430 (29430|3,29668|2,29906|1,30620|3) change into normal note? not for now, but considered :3
00:31:097 (31097|2,31335|2) avoid low jack i think it's fine . . since the kick sound is same in each note o.o
00:37:763 (37763|2) move to 00:37:644 - following piano sound is better OK
00:40:859 (40859|0) move to 2 OK
00:48:240 (48240|0) move to 2 row balance OK
00:49:192 (49192|0) ^ OK
00:53:716 (53716|3,53954|1) Ctrl + G, variation pattern OK
00:54:668 (54668|1,55144|2) move to right 1x, then 00:55:859 (55859|0) move to 1 keep xD
01:00:620 (60620|3,60620|0) move to 2 & 3, since kick beat is patch OK
01:01:097 (61097|0,61097|3) move to 01:00:859 , snare beat is strong sound :v lol My bad . .OK
01:16:811 (76811|2,77049|2) avoid low jack keep xD
01:19:430 (79430|3,79668|2,79906|1) move to left 1x, then 01:20:382 (80382|0) move to 2 OK
01:31:097 - 01:32:049 it will be nice if you following kick than long sound keep, avoid too much single note here xD . .it will cause boring
01:49:906 (109906|0) move to2 OK
02:24:549 (144549|0) move to 2, then 02:24:668 (144668|2) move to 1 OK

[Lv.10]
00:33:120 (33120|3) move to 3? OK
00:36:811 (36811|3) remove OK
01:46:811 (106811|0) ghost note here? i think long sound from here 01:46:335 but piano roll still exist on here 01:46:335 (106335|2,106454|1,106573|2,106692|3) - hmm maybe i will remap this part a little
01:49:192 (109192|2) move to 4 OK
02:06:573 (126573|0,126811|1) Ctrl + G keep xD
Nice Pattern here

Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Thanks for mods :D
Draftnell
Request from chat :v

MOD START !!! (lebay)
|1|2|3|4|


Lv.6
00:23:240 (23240|0) - apa ne ??? delete ?
00:46:811 - ada sound disini....add note gen :v
00:49:192 (49192|2,49430|1) - ctrl + J
00:48:716 - add gen (ada sound)
00:54:430 - ^
00:55:859 - add LN ? (suara bass panjang)
01:00:144 (60144|0,60144|3,60263|2,60263|1,60859|0,60859|3,60978|2,60978|1) - lv.6 ada double note :v asa pina ngalih menurut nda :3
01:00:620 (60620|2) - nih jaka jadi akan LN di kolom 1 sampai panjang nya >>> 01:01:573 -
01:01:573 (61573|3) - pindah akan di col 2
02:02:049 - jaka nih add note
02:09:668 - ^
02:23:597 (143597|0,143716|1,143835|2,143954|3,144073|0,144192|1,144311|2,144430|3,144549|1,144668|0) - wkwkw stream ny :v ( tapi kadeda masalah pang :v )

dah tu ja gen :v

Lv.10
00:13:835 - nih cocok stream 1/8....kayapa ?
00:46:573 - lanjut akan note nya :v (single note ja)
00:48:478 - ^
00:50:382 - ^
00:55:263 (55263|2) - nih ? ngikutin sound wut ?....delete ?
01:17:049 (77049|1) - no jack plis :v
01:20:859 (80859|2) - ^
01:47:525 (107525|1,107644|0) - geser ke kiri 1x

dah itu ja ku dapat salah nya :v

mantap map nya zainal !!!! #upss

GOOD LUCK xD
Topic Starter
[ A v a l o n ]

Draftnell wrote:

Request from chat :v

MOD START !!! (lebay)
|1|2|3|4|


Lv.6
00:23:240 (23240|0) - apa ne ??? delete ? wkwkwk ok ok
00:46:811 - ada sound disini....add note gen :v kada usah bro ay . . lain lagi instrumentalnya yg ku umpati xD
00:49:192 (49192|2,49430|1) - ctrl + J hmm, dipertimbangkan :v
00:48:716 - add gen (ada sound) kada ah :v
00:54:430 - ^ sama
00:55:859 - add LN ? (suara bass panjang) bujur jua pang, tapi kena gen dlu :3
01:00:144 (60144|0,60144|3,60263|2,60263|1,60859|0,60859|3,60978|2,60978|1) - lv.6 ada double note :v asa pina ngalih menurut nda :3 wkwkk ok nda delete :v . . sekalian nda garap ulang xD
01:00:620 (60620|2) - nih jaka jadi akan LN di kolom 1 sampai panjang nya >>> 01:01:573 - nah kada cuy ae . . . nda fokus ke kick aja gen :3
01:01:573 (61573|3) - pindah akan di col 2 kada ah :v
02:02:049 - jaka nih add note OK
02:09:668 - ^ OK
02:23:597 (143597|0,143716|1,143835|2,143954|3,144073|0,144192|1,144311|2,144430|3,144549|1,144668|0) - wkwkw stream ny :v ( tapi kadeda masalah pang :v ) wkwkwk penutup cuy :v

dah tu ja gen :v

Lv.10
00:13:835 - nih cocok stream 1/8....kayapa ? sip mas bro
00:46:573 - lanjut akan note nya :v (single note ja) beri jeda cuy . . kasian orng hanyar ja mencet double 1/4 :v . .
00:48:478 - ^ hilang kena keunikannya bro ae :v
00:50:382 - ^ sama wkwkw
00:55:263 (55263|2) - nih ? ngikutin sound wut ?....delete ? OK sebenarnya tu ada kicknya disana . . tapi biar haja gen :v
01:17:049 (77049|1) - no jack plis :v OK
01:20:859 (80859|2) - ^ OK
01:47:525 (107525|1,107644|0) - geser ke kiri 1x kada gen, sudah pas itu bro ae :v

dah itu ja ku dapat salah nya :v

mantap map nya zainal !!!! #upss wkwkkwk nama unda disambat . .. ok thanks Imroni . .. #upss

GOOD LUCK xD
Thanks for mods and star :)
-[ AmiShici ]-
Hiii Avalon o/

Here my mod

4K = |1|2|3|4|


Little mod from me
[My Opinion]
Map ente kaya punya si usagi. kadang pas ngemod ga jelas ini ngikut apa tapi pas main bisa ngefeel. lel ^.^)b

[Lv.6]
01:52:049 (112049|3,112525|0) - ini ngikut apa yah? kalo menurutku mending dibikin note biasa deh.. dari 01:52:168 - sampe 01:52:882 - add note di blue line
02:01:573 (121573|3,122049|0) - ^ sama
02:09:192 (129192|0,129668|2) - ^Sama

Lv. 6 keknya dah bagus
[Lv.10]00:03:954 - add note sama kek sesudah dan sebelumnya
00:11:573 - ^

00:44:430 - add note? ada suara simbal walau kecil

01:41:573 - add note? buat pianonya
01:43:478 - add kalo yg diatas setuju xD
01:18:716 - ^
01:20:620 - ^
01:24:430 - ^
01:26:335 - ^
01:28:240 - ^ dst

02:19:668 - ini ada 3 nada sebenernya tapi up to u dah xD Kalo diapply lanjutnya juga di add yah ^^

Goodluck avalon =w=)b
Gomen ga bisa bantu banyak jadi take my aja
Topic Starter
[ A v a l o n ]

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hiii Avalon o/

Here my mod

4K = |1|2|3|4|


Little mod from me
[My Opinion]
Map ente kaya punya si usagi. kadang pas ngemod ga jelas ini ngikut apa tapi pas main bisa ngefeel. lel ^.^)b
hee masa ? . . . wkwkk ga tau juga w xD

[Lv.6]
01:52:049 (112049|3,112525|0) - ini ngikut apa yah? kalo menurutku mending dibikin note biasa deh.. dari 01:52:168 - sampe 01:52:882 - add note di blue line nah LN itu buat gantikan piano rollnya. . . kan susah tuh klo di Lv.6 ini mencet 1/4 . . . ya dibikin LN aja
02:01:573 (121573|3,122049|0) - ^ sama
02:09:192 (129192|0,129668|2) - ^Sama ^ eheheh, kasian sama noob player . . keep aja ya xD

Lv. 6 keknya dah bagus
[Lv.10]00:03:954 - add note sama kek sesudah dan sebelumnya nah itu pitchnya udah low . .. jadi cukup 1 note aja . . but nanti ak pikir2 lagi deh xD
00:11:573 - ^ alasannya sama kek diatas xD

00:44:430 - add note? ada suara simbal walau kecil hmm, ok deh

01:41:573 - add note? buat pianonya
01:43:478 - add kalo yg diatas setuju xD
01:18:716 - ^
01:20:620 - ^
01:24:430 - ^
01:26:335 - ^
01:28:240 - ^ dst all apply xD

02:19:668 - ini ada 3 nada sebenernya tapi up to u dah xD Kalo diapply lanjutnya juga di add yah ^^ keep xD

Goodluck avalon =w=)b
Gomen ga bisa bantu banyak jadi take my aja
thanks for mods and star xD
Critical_Star
Hihi, ava-san! xD
just a small suggestion here :p
column 1 2 3 4
Lv.6
00:13:478 (13478|2) - u can chg this to LN end 00:13:954 - since here is long sound just to fill this empty space :)
01:00:620 (60620|3,60620|2,60859|1,60978|2,60978|3,61097|0) - CTRL+H? 01:00:620 (60620|2,60620|3,60978|2,60978|3) - these double sound is not the same as 01:00:263 (60263|3,60263|2) - so i might suggest to put at other column xD
01:25:382 (85382|1,85620|2) - CTRL+H and move to right by 1 (balance)
Lv.10
00:13:954 (13954|3) - hmm, how about chg this to LN like u do in lv6? well is quite empty ahead,a LN should fit the sound better at here :3
00:16:454 - add a note since u map this sound ahead
00:17:406 - ^
00:18:359 - ^
00:23:240 - add another note here,here is also a louder pitch piano :3
01:09:073 - actually u can add another note here since here is still a loud impact like 01:08:835 (68835|1,68835|2) -
01:20:859 (80859|3) - move to 3? make a stair
01:57:287 (117287|0,117525|0,117763|0) - i think u can rearrange some note here, triple jack are not really necessary here lol 01:57:763 (117763|0,117763|1) - maybe u can moved to other column 2 and 4?
overall are okay :p
good luck nyan~ hope my mod can help xD "star"
Topic Starter
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Critical_Star wrote:

Hihi, ava-san! xD Hi CS -san xD
just a small suggestion here :p
column 1 2 3 4
Lv.6
00:13:478 (13478|2) - u can chg this to LN end 00:13:954 - since here is long sound just to fill this empty space :) alright, feels better
01:00:620 (60620|3,60620|2,60859|1,60978|2,60978|3,61097|0) - CTRL+H? 01:00:620 (60620|2,60620|3,60978|2,60978|3) - these double sound is not the same as 01:00:263 (60263|3,60263|2) - so i might suggest to put at other column xD ah good feeling xD, applied
01:25:382 (85382|1,85620|2) - CTRL+H and move to right by 1 (balance) OK
Lv.10
00:13:954 (13954|3) - hmm, how about chg this to LN like u do in lv6? well is quite empty ahead,a LN should fit the sound better at here :3 hehe, for special purpose, Lv 10 is no LN, so . . keep xD
00:16:454 - add a note since u map this sound ahead xD the sound is almost not audible here , so i prefer to not put note on that . . its diffrent with 00:18:835 (18835|0) - cuz it's more audible to map xD
00:17:406 - ^ same ^
00:18:359 - ^ same ^
00:23:240 - add another note here,here is also a louder pitch piano :3 OK =w=)b
01:09:073 - actually u can add another note here since here is still a loud impact like 01:08:835 (68835|1,68835|2) - yea right, but i can't make it more harder . . and the sound is a little different i think xD . . according to my headphone lol
01:20:859 (80859|3) - move to 3? make a stair hmm, keep xD . . .
01:57:287 (117287|0,117525|0,117763|0) - i think u can rearrange some note here, triple jack are not really necessary here lol 01:57:763 (117763|0,117763|1) - maybe u can moved to other column 2 and 4? ah oki doki =w=)b
overall are okay :p
good luck nyan~ hope my mod can help xD "star"
OK thanks for mod and star CS !!!
nyaaa ~ =w=)b
Deep Sea
Hi ~

[Lv.6]

00:22:882 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3181350 or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3181351
01:19:192 (79192|2) - clap
01:21:097 (81097|1) - ^
01:31:097 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3181357
02:23:597 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3181363

[Lv.10]

00:50:382 - add note to 3
00:56:097 - add note
00:58:001 - ^
02:06:811 (126811|2) - delete
02:24:549 (144549|2,144668|1) - delete

Good luck :oops:
Topic Starter
[ A v a l o n ]

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hi ~

[Lv.6]

00:22:882 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3181350 or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3181351 hmm oki . .take the number 2 :3
01:19:192 (79192|2) - clap OK, btw hitsound still in progress o_o
01:21:097 (81097|1) - ^ OK
01:31:097 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3181357 alright, OK
02:23:597 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3181363 keep xD

[Lv.10]

00:50:382 - add note to 3
00:56:097 - add note
00:58:001 - ^ ^^^ not applied xD . . . sorry but the main sound is almost not audible . . . xD
02:06:811 (126811|2) - delete it contains a clap and piano push too . . . so i mapped it same as 02:05:859 - 02:08:716 - . . . .hmm maybe i considered to change it in another time =w=)b
02:24:549 (144549|2,144668|1) - delete keep xD, more get the feel when playing it . . . if i map that part :3

Good luck :oops:
woah . . . thanks for your mod Shana <3
Bad Apple
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IT'S TIME TO MO-MO-MOD!

Everything mentioned in my Mods is subjective and should be treated as a suggestion. If I find an UNRANKABLE issue, it'll be marked RED.
When replying to the Mod, please consider telling me whether or not you've applied parts of the Mod and why you did/didn't.
If you have any further questions, feel free to ask me here or ingame.

Columns: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
-

Hey there, Avalon :3
Here's your Mod from my queue!
- General -
- The Mp3 file you're using has a sample-rate of 181kbit, I'm not sure whether or not that could be an issue if you're trying to rank it, so I would search for an audiofile with 128kbit instead :)
- I think you should use "Bungaku Shoujo" as the source (I'm assuming that's where the song comes from :D)

- Lv.6 -
- I would suggest reducing OD and HP to 7, since the map is relatively easy :3
00:03:954 - add on 4? it has the same sound as 00:03:240 -
00:11:573 - add on 1? same as above
00:53:359 (53359|2,53359|3,53716|1,53716|0,53954|2,53954|3) - Ctrl+H for better balance?
01:10:859 - I hear a kick drum here, would suggest adding a note on 1 for it :)
01:12:763 - ^ same as above, but this time on 4
01:52:049 - kick drum here aswell, maybe add one (on 3 or 4)
02:07:763 - you didn't map the snare drum here with two notes (like you did all the time), I would either add two on 1 and 3 or 1 and 4, or remove the single note on 02:07:644 - to keep pattern consistency
02:09:192 - again, kick drum and piano, so I would add a note :D

- Lv.10 -
00:03:954 - again, maps the same sound as the double-chords before, so maybe add one x)
00:11:573 - ^ same :D
00:13:716 - there is a piano sound here you could map :)
00:39:668 - add one on 3 to keep pattern consistency (2 notes every second kick drum)
00:41:573 - ^ same
02:01:930 - add note on 1 for the kick drum

I have to say, I really like the way you map and I really enjoyed playing the mapset. Best of luck for Ranked! :D
Apple
Topic Starter
[ A v a l o n ]

- Bad Apple - wrote:

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IT'S TIME TO MO-MO-MOD!

Everything mentioned in my Mods is subjective and should be treated as a suggestion. If I find an UNRANKABLE issue, it'll be marked RED.
When replying to the Mod, please consider telling me whether or not you've applied parts of the Mod and why you did/didn't.
If you have any further questions, feel free to ask me here or ingame.

Columns: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
-

Hey there, Avalon :3
Here's your Mod from my queue!
- General -
- The Mp3 file you're using has a sample-rate of 181kbit, I'm not sure whether or not that could be an issue if you're trying to rank it, so I would search for an audiofile with 128kbit instead :)
- I think you should use "Bungaku Shoujo" as the source (I'm assuming that's where the song comes from :D)

- Lv.6 -
- I would suggest reducing OD and HP to 7, since the map is relatively easy :3 OK
00:03:954 - add on 4? it has the same sound as 00:03:240 - low pitch i think ._.
00:11:573 - add on 1? same as above ^
00:53:359 (53359|2,53359|3,53716|1,53716|0,53954|2,53954|3) - Ctrl+H for better balance? hmm, keep for special purpose xD. . .
01:10:859 - I hear a kick drum here, would suggest adding a note on 1 for it :) alright, OK
01:12:763 - ^ same as above, but this time on 4 OK
01:52:049 - kick drum here aswell, maybe add one (on 3 or 4) keep :) . . . i count the LN as 1 note in this diff
02:07:763 - you didn't map the snare drum here with two notes (like you did all the time), I would either add two on 1 and 3 or 1 and 4, or remove the single note on 02:07:644 - to keep pattern consistency avoid boring . . . so i map the piano xD
02:09:192 - again, kick drum and piano, so I would add a note :D it will make for more harder . . but maybe i will considered to change it xD

- Lv.10 -
00:03:954 - again, maps the same sound as the double-chords before, so maybe add one x) alright, now, its okay for Lv.10 xD
00:11:573 - ^ same :D OK
00:13:716 - there is a piano sound here you could map :) diffrerent piano sound . . . keep
00:39:668 - add one on 3 to keep pattern consistency (2 notes every second kick drum) i only put 2 note for drum that contain a clap sound here xD
00:41:573 - ^ same ^
02:01:930 - add note on 1 for the kick drum nice catch ! OK

I have to say, I really like the way you map and I really enjoyed playing the mapset. Best of luck for Ranked! :D
Apple oh thank you so much. . . . it's my pleasure :oops:
Thanks for your mod . . . Bad Apple-san :)
Spy
SPOILER
2015-05-30 21:00 [ A v a l o n ]: XD  . . .  start now :3 ?
2015-05-30 21:00 Spy: OK
2015-05-30 21:00 Spy: np the map
2015-05-30 21:00 [ A v a l o n ]: wait . . i forgot da name . .LOL
2015-05-30 21:01 [ A v a l o n ]: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/703896 Koshimizu Ami - Hari no Sora]
2015-05-30 21:01 Spy: LOL
2015-05-30 21:01 [ A v a l o n ]: *slap myself . . btw start at lv.6 or 10 ?
2015-05-30 21:01 Spy: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/703897 Koshimizu Ami - Hari no Sora [Lv.6]]
2015-05-30 21:01 Spy: First
2015-05-30 21:01 [ A v a l o n ]: =w=)b
2015-05-30 21:02 [ A v a l o n ]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/703897 Koshimizu Ami - Hari no Sora [Lv.6]]
2015-05-30 21:02 Spy: For general, how do you think about hitsounding
2015-05-30 21:02 Spy: I feel soft-hitnormal is a little loud
2015-05-30 21:02 Spy: I may recommend you take my soft-hitnormal
2015-05-30 21:03 [ A v a l o n ]: hmmm. . . .xD . . i just take from anither map . .. oki let see ur hitsound =w=
2015-05-30 21:03 [ A v a l o n ]: *another
2015-05-30 21:03 Spy: OK
2015-05-30 21:03 [ A v a l o n ]: wait . . . i didn't have soft-hitnormal on the mapset ._.
2015-05-30 21:04 Spy: Yes, so take mine to use may be better because my hitnormal adjusted the volumn
2015-05-30 21:04 [ A v a l o n ]: oki doki . . .
2015-05-30 21:06 [ A v a l o n ]: waiting . . . xD
2015-05-30 21:07 Spy: 00:01:097 (1097|2) -
2015-05-30 21:07 Spy: 00:01:573 (1573|2,3478|2) -
2015-05-30 21:07 Spy: Hitsounds like as these, well I think unnecessary
2015-05-30 21:08 Spy: Especially it is a quite calm song
2015-05-30 21:08 O_O . . . yea . . i think so . .. * me noob
2015-05-30 21:09 [ A v a l o n ]: btw . . HS still in progress xD
2015-05-30 21:09 Spy: Remember, when we're doing hitsounding, at least in mania, we must find similar sound to do
2015-05-30 21:09 [ A v a l o n ]: similar sound . .. =w=)b same sound at bgm right ?
2015-05-30 21:09 Spy: No need same since you can't find 100% same, just similar
2015-05-30 21:10 [ A v a l o n ]: oh ok . . . btw 00:00:621 - 00:13:954 - can left empty without HS ?
2015-05-30 21:10 [ A v a l o n ]: *until
2015-05-30 21:11 Spy: No problem
2015-05-30 21:12 [ A v a l o n ]: oki . . . i will left that empty =w=
2015-05-30 21:13 [ A v a l o n ]: :3 how's the pattern ?
2015-05-30 21:14 Spy: Patterns are fine actually
2015-05-30 21:14 [ A v a l o n ]: :3 ayy thanks xD
2015-05-30 21:16 Spy: 00:21:811 (21811|3,22049|0,22287|1,22525|2,22882|3) -
2015-05-30 21:16 Spy: Actually I feel the pitches seems not like this..
2015-05-30 21:17 [ A v a l o n ]: hmmm . . . actually .. i get confused to place the LN here xD
2015-05-30 21:18 Spy: aw
2015-05-30 21:18 [ A v a l o n ]: xD . . . any suggestion for that part :3 ?
2015-05-30 21:19 Spy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3190182 I may change like as this, aw, I feel first 3 LN are continuous, and fourth is not
2015-05-30 21:21 [ A v a l o n ]: omg . .. really nice when i test it xD . . .=w=)b
2015-05-30 21:21 Spy: :D
2015-05-30 21:21 [ A v a l o n ]: :D
2015-05-30 21:22 [ A v a l o n ]: applied as well :3
2015-05-30 21:22 Spy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3190200
2015-05-30 21:22 Spy: Personally I suggest this
2015-05-30 21:23 [ A v a l o n ]: hmm. . .. wait xD
2015-05-30 21:24 [ A v a l o n ]: need to compare xD
2015-05-30 21:24 Spy: I just feel second one is better ~
2015-05-30 21:24 [ A v a l o n ]: YES . . take the second suggestion :D
2015-05-30 21:24 Spy: OK :D
2015-05-30 21:24 [ A v a l o n ]: yea . . really better :3
2015-05-30 21:25 Spy: Honestly patterns are really fine, just I think the instrument following can be better
2015-05-30 21:26 Spy: I'll point out later
2015-05-30 21:26 Spy: Let's continue
2015-05-30 21:26 Spy: 00:38:716 - This part
2015-05-30 21:26 [ A v a l o n ]: ah . . my pleasure xD . . .yea i need some learning about following the instrument
2015-05-30 21:26 [ A v a l o n ]: yes ?
2015-05-30 21:26 Spy: You can see like as 00:39:192 - is getting heavy beats, so
2015-05-30 21:27 Spy: 00:39:192 - 00:39:668 - 00:40:144 - 00:41:097 - 00:41:573 - 00:42:049 - can just add one more
2015-05-30 21:28 Spy: 00:43:001 - 00:43:954 - Same but not important as latter
2015-05-30 21:28 [ A v a l o n ]: xD it make the pattern more harder i think :3 . . . and i just put 2 notes if contains a cymbal sound like finish sound i think . . .so it's okay ?
2015-05-30 21:29 [ A v a l o n ]: for this part only :3
2015-05-30 21:29 Spy: It's fine, just hm, I feel it may can makes the "feel" in this part
2015-05-30 21:30 Spy: 01:00:144 (60144|0,60859|2) - missed clap
2015-05-30 21:31 [ A v a l o n ]: yea . . i think same too . . . but i guess the noob player can't handle it xD
2015-05-30 21:31 Spy: 01:01:097 (61097|3) - Same
2015-05-30 21:31 Spy: You may think too much lol, due to BPM is low, I think it may be fine
2015-05-30 21:31 Spy: 01:03:001 (63001|2) - missed clap
2015-05-30 21:31 [ A v a l o n ]: ok . . btw . .. HS still BOOM . . not checked yet after ctrl G or ctrl H after modding . . i will check the HS later xD
2015-05-30 21:32 Spy: LOL OK
2015-05-30 21:32 [ A v a l o n ]: lol sorry xD
2015-05-30 21:32 Spy: 01:04:430 (64430|2) -
2015-05-30 21:32 Spy: How do you think about if remove it
2015-05-30 21:32 Spy: After removed, just use 100% to review this part to check the effect after removed
2015-05-30 21:33 Spy: I think it may be better
2015-05-30 21:33 [ A v a l o n ]: oh . .. so just following the kick only ?
2015-05-30 21:33 Spy: snares/kicks I think
2015-05-30 21:33 Spy: Sometimes
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: When you're mapping
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: Hm
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: After finished a part
2015-05-30 21:34 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: Review it
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: And use normal speed to check it
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: Whether it is the "feel" you want to make
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: In such lower difficulity it is very obvious
2015-05-30 21:35 [ A v a l o n ]: OK sensei . . . . owo / . . .
2015-05-30 21:35 Spy: We often follow obvious easy understandable instruments in Normal, or Hard(For me it is)
2015-05-30 21:36 [ A v a l o n ]: =w=)b
2015-05-30 21:36 Spy: So while mapping Easy/Normal diffs
2015-05-30 21:37 Spy: Just better not to follow unobvious sounds
2015-05-30 21:37 Spy: So according to what I said here, 01:04:430 (64430|2) - this one is kinda unobvious
2015-05-30 21:37 Spy: Especially it is unobvious and the sound be covered with your hitsound, if you noticed it
2015-05-30 21:38 [ A v a l o n ]: yea . .. so i will remove it xD
2015-05-30 21:39 Spy: 01:23:478 - I think it may really no reason only 1 note here
2015-05-30 21:39 Spy: Since you add 2 notes for same sound
2015-05-30 21:39 Spy: aw wait
2015-05-30 21:40 Spy: misunderstand, lol
2015-05-30 21:40 [ A v a l o n ]: Xd
2015-05-30 21:40 [ A v a l o n ]: lol . . makes me scared
2015-05-30 21:40 Spy: 01:24:192 (84192|1,84430|2) -
2015-05-30 21:40 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 21:40 Spy: You may can try to make it in same column
2015-05-30 21:40 Spy: You may know what I want to make here
2015-05-30 21:41 [ A v a l o n ]: col 3 is fine ?
2015-05-30 21:41 Spy: No problem
2015-05-30 21:41 Spy: 01:28:240 (88240|3) - NICE HITSOUND, LOL
2015-05-30 21:41 [ A v a l o n ]: really nice ? lol
2015-05-30 21:41 Spy: No
2015-05-30 21:41 Spy: ACTION slaps
2015-05-30 21:42 [ A v a l o n ]: fak yea
2015-05-30 21:42 [ A v a l o n ]: :v
2015-05-30 21:42 Spy: LOL
2015-05-30 21:42 [ A v a l o n ]: WTF is that
2015-05-30 21:42 [ A v a l o n ]: LOL
2015-05-30 21:42 Spy: You should ask yourself due to the map is yours
2015-05-30 21:42 [ A v a l o n ]: sampleset normal . . lol
2015-05-30 21:42 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 21:42 [ A v a l o n ]: changed
2015-05-30 21:43 Spy: 01:47:287 -
2015-05-30 21:43 Spy: Then
2015-05-30 21:43 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 21:43 Spy: I think you can start to change the instruments here
2015-05-30 21:43 Spy: Follow the piano mainly
2015-05-30 21:44 [ A v a l o n ]: piano only is better /
2015-05-30 21:44 [ A v a l o n ]: ?
2015-05-30 21:44 Spy: Oh do you think drum only is better ?
2015-05-30 21:44 Spy: *Or
2015-05-30 21:44 Spy: 02:15:859 (135859|3,136335|2,136811|1,137287|0) -
2015-05-30 21:45 [ A v a l o n ]: yes ?
2015-05-30 21:45 Spy: 02:17:763 (137763|3,138001|2,138240|1,138478|0,139430|1,139668|3,139906|2,140144|1,140382|0,140620|2,140859|1,141097|3,141335|0,141573|2,141811|1,142049|2,142287|3,142525|2,142763|1,143478|3,143597|0,143716|1,143835|2,143954|3,144073|0,144192|1,144311|2,144430|3,144549|0,144668|1) - You also followed piano hre
2015-05-30 21:45 Spy: Aren't you ?
2015-05-30 21:45 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 21:46 [ A v a l o n ]: yea i followed piano on that part o_o
2015-05-30 21:46 Spy: Yes, and I think uh
2015-05-30 21:47 Spy: You followed drums in much parts
2015-05-30 21:47 [ A v a l o n ]: bad :v ?
2015-05-30 21:47 Spy: If you keep it, it may be boring
2015-05-30 21:48 [ A v a l o n ]: hmmm . . . i totally get confused xD
2015-05-30 21:48 Spy: And follow piano may make it easier or just same, anyway it won't make it harder I'm sure
2015-05-30 21:48 Spy: Hm ?
2015-05-30 21:48 [ A v a l o n ]: so what's the best for that part :3 ?
2015-05-30 21:48 Spy: If for me, I may map piano
2015-05-30 21:49 Spy: 01:01:573 (61573|3,61573|0,61811|2,62049|0,62287|1,62525|3,62763|0,63001|2,63240|3,63478|1,63478|2,63716|0,63954|3,64192|0,64430|2,64668|1,64906|3,65144|0,65382|2,65382|3) -
2015-05-30 21:49 [ A v a l o n ]: start here right ? 02:17:763 -
2015-05-30 21:50 Spy: Just like as these, you've done same thing here, in the end I think it may be better if you follow the piano since it is main sound and it can makes your diff be interesting more
2015-05-30 21:50 Spy: 01:47:287 - here
2015-05-30 21:51 [ A v a l o n ]: YOSH . . oki doki . . .. (^ ^)7
2015-05-30 21:52 [ A v a l o n ]: wait i update diff . . .you can check it right or not xD
2015-05-30 21:53 Spy: OK~
2015-05-30 21:53 [ A v a l o n ]: updated ~
2015-05-30 21:54 Spy: 00:13:478 (13478|1) -
2015-05-30 21:55 Spy: How about change to 00:13:478 - 00:13:716 - add one note and remove the LN ?
2015-05-30 21:55 [ A v a l o n ]: oki changed :3
2015-05-30 21:56 Spy: OK
2015-05-30 21:56 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:47:287 - the piano is right ? . . or need more notes xD ?
2015-05-30 21:57 Spy: It depends on you, you can just add one more note
2015-05-30 21:58 [ A v a l o n ]: hmm . . . ok . . . so if it's following piano until the end . . . is more interisting for you :3 ?
2015-05-30 21:59 Spy: Yea, at least for me :D
2015-05-30 22:00 [ A v a l o n ]: ok . . it'fine for mee too xD . . .
2015-05-30 22:01 Spy: OK ~
2015-05-30 22:03 [ A v a l o n ]: Lv.6 passed xD for now . . .:3 ? . . continue to lv 10 ?
2015-05-30 22:04 Spy: OK
2015-05-30 22:05 [ A v a l o n ]: testplay first pls xD /. . .lol
2015-05-30 22:06 Spy: Lv.10 ?
2015-05-30 22:09 [ A v a l o n ]: aw sorry spy . .. my internet is BOOM xD
2015-05-30 22:09 Spy: yea ?
2015-05-30 22:10 [ A v a l o n ]: already testplay the lv.10 ?
2015-05-30 22:10 Spy: You don't have the map ?
2015-05-30 22:10 [ A v a l o n ]: heee ? lol
2015-05-30 22:10 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 22:11 [ A v a l o n ]: "latest pending version" . . .xD
2015-05-30 22:11 [ A v a l o n ]: lv.10 xD
2015-05-30 22:13 [ A v a l o n ]: aaa
2015-05-30 22:13 Spy: 00:13:716 - Missed note
2015-05-30 22:14 [ A v a l o n ]: hmm ok . . .but i think it's different piano that i follow from the first xD
2015-05-30 22:15 [ A v a l o n ]: aww fak . .slaps my ear . .. OK applied
2015-05-30 22:16 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 22:17 Spy: 00:29:192 (29192|0,29311|2,29430|1,29668|3) -
2015-05-30 22:17 Spy: You follow same as 00:27:287 (27287|2,27406|0,27525|3,27763|2) -
2015-05-30 22:17 Spy: But
2015-05-30 22:18 Spy: 00:29:430 - 00:29:668 - 00:29:906 - has one more piano sound
2015-05-30 22:18 Spy: I think these can add
2015-05-30 22:18 [ A v a l o n ]: ok i changed . . . i put 2 note for heavy piano sound =w=)b
2015-05-30 22:19 Spy: 00:53:240 (53240|0,53359|1,53359|2,53478|3) -
2015-05-30 22:19 Spy: About these
2015-05-30 22:19 [ A v a l o n ]: ;w;
2015-05-30 22:20 Spy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3190463 I may change like as these
2015-05-30 22:20 Spy: Hmm I don't know how to explain
2015-05-30 22:20 Spy: But a note with double note which has opening(?) can express this part well imo
2015-05-30 22:20 Spy: I don't know what I am express now
2015-05-30 22:20 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 22:21 [ A v a l o n ]: lol . .. but i will understand when i play it :3
2015-05-30 22:21 Spy: lol ok
2015-05-30 22:21 [ A v a l o n ]: nah . .now i'm understand . . OK applied =w=)b
2015-05-30 22:22 Spy: 01:15:859 (75859|3,75859|2,75978|1,75978|0,76097|3,76097|2,76216|0,76216|1,76335|3,76335|2,76454|0,76454|1,76573|3,76573|2,76692|0,76692|1) -
2015-05-30 22:23 Spy: aw wait, seems fine
2015-05-30 22:23 [ A v a l o n ]: eheheheee . . dat part ;w;
2015-05-30 22:23 Spy: But I may not to map like this lol
2015-05-30 22:24 [ A v a l o n ]: lol . . . i try the other ways . . . but seems not fit xD . . and finally i get that :v
2015-05-30 22:24 [ A v a l o n ]: readable :v
2015-05-30 22:26 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 22:26 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 22:26 [ A v a l o n ]: *slap my self
2015-05-30 22:27 Spy: Actually for such calm song I may use 3 notes less
2015-05-30 22:27 Spy: But it is reasonable when I saw your patterns
2015-05-30 22:27 [ A v a l o n ]: :3
2015-05-30 22:27 Spy: 01:26:573 (86573|1,86573|2) - any difference with 01:26:097 (86097|1) - ?
2015-05-30 22:28 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:26:573 - well ithink this is have more heavy piano sound . .. depends on my headphone . .lol
2015-05-30 22:29 [ A v a l o n ]: wait . . . maybe it's same . . .aaaa . . what about you ?
2015-05-30 22:30 Spy: lol I just can't hear any difference
2015-05-30 22:30 Spy: Maybe hitsounds covered with its sound
2015-05-30 22:31 Spy: Did you added hitnormal ?
2015-05-30 22:31 Spy: If so I may redl again and check again
2015-05-30 22:31 [ A v a l o n ]: btw . . . i didn't receive the link of that HS . . lol
2015-05-30 22:32 Spy: ha ?
2015-05-30 22:33 [ A v a l o n ]: really . . .
2015-05-30 22:33 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 22:33 Spy: o.o ??
2015-05-30 22:35 [ A v a l o n ]: heee . . . i don't understand xD . . . you recommended to use your hitnormal . . right ?
2015-05-30 22:35 [ A v a l o n ]: o.o
2015-05-30 22:37 [ A v a l o n ]: wtf what is happen here xD . . . i just use the default HS for hitnormal . . .
2015-05-30 22:37 Spy: aw check QQ PM
2015-05-30 22:38 [ A v a l o n ]: aw nothing on there o_o
2015-05-30 22:38 [ A v a l o n ]: accepted ! .. lol
2015-05-30 22:39 Spy: Just use that, it is the hitsound which has been turn down the volumn
2015-05-30 22:40 [ A v a l o n ]: OK . . .wait
2015-05-30 22:42 [ A v a l o n ]: updated ~
2015-05-30 22:43 Spy: ok~
2015-05-30 22:43 [ A v a l o n ]: btw . .lv.6 is under construction . .ignore the last part xD
2015-05-30 22:43 Spy: Maybe in timing, all can change to S:1
2015-05-30 22:44 Spy: S:C1
2015-05-30 22:45 [ A v a l o n ]: ok~
2015-05-30 22:45 Spy: And then general volumn can be higher
2015-05-30 22:45 Spy: Because after you changed to that, we almost can't hear it lol
2015-05-30 22:45 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 22:45 Spy: Just adjust the volume to the appropriate one
2015-05-30 22:46 [ A v a l o n ]: hmm what the best volume level for that ? . . . well i just very noob at this xD
2015-05-30 22:47 [ A v a l o n ]: at least for lower volume
2015-05-30 22:47 [ A v a l o n ]: 40% is enogh for you :3 ?
2015-05-30 22:48 Spy: Adjust it until you can hear the hitsound and then it is not noisy or annoying~
2015-05-30 22:48 [ A v a l o n ]: oh oki . ..
2015-05-30 22:50 [ A v a l o n ]: i put it on 55% . .for this part 00:00:621 -
2015-05-30 22:51 [ A v a l o n ]: ok next ?
2015-05-30 22:51 Spy: OK, remember to change to S:C1
2015-05-30 22:52 [ A v a l o n ]: ok . . already changed all timing to S:C1 :3
2015-05-30 22:52 Spy: remember change Lv.6 too then ~
2015-05-30 22:53 Spy: OK let's continue after updated
2015-05-30 22:55 [ A v a l o n ]: updated xD
2015-05-30 22:56 Spy: OK~
2015-05-30 23:01 [ A v a l o n ]: . . . .
2015-05-30 23:01 [ A v a l o n ]: lol
2015-05-30 23:02 Spy: 01:48:478 (108478|2) -
2015-05-30 23:02 Spy: Remove may be better
2015-05-30 23:03 Spy: 01:50:382 (110382|1) - Same, imo
2015-05-30 23:03 [ A v a l o n ]: hhmmm every of them ?
2015-05-30 23:03 [ A v a l o n ]: XD . . too many like that
2015-05-30 23:04 Spy: Just make it has pause feel
2015-05-30 23:04 Spy: nonstop here is weird, you know I mean
2015-05-30 23:05 [ A v a l o n ]: ok . . . removed all of them xD
2015-05-30 23:05 Spy: 01:57:287 (117287|2,117287|0,117287|1,117287|3) - Why sudden 4 notes ?
2015-05-30 23:05 Spy: 02:00:144 (120144|3,120144|0,120144|1) - ^ sudden 3 notes ?
2015-05-30 23:05 [ A v a l o n ]: LOL . ..
2015-05-30 23:05 [ A v a l o n ]: my mistake
2015-05-30 23:05 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 23:05 Spy: 02:05:859 (125859|3,125859|0,125859|2) -
2015-05-30 23:06 Spy: 02:06:811 (126811|1,126811|0,126811|2) -
2015-05-30 23:06 Spy: 02:08:716 (128716|3,128716|1,128716|0) -
2015-05-30 23:06 Spy: 02:24:549 (144549|2,144668|1) -
2015-05-30 23:07 Spy: These are different from piano you followed
2015-05-30 23:07 [ A v a l o n ]: piano + clap . . .. well i use 2 for calp xD
2015-05-30 23:07 Spy: if you want to follow it, you had better add 02:24:787 - and 02:24:906 - too
2015-05-30 23:07 Spy: Aw lol
2015-05-30 23:07 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 23:08 [ A v a l o n ]: 02:05:859 (125859|2,125859|0,125859|3) - piano + clap xD . . .or maybe it will be nice if only 2 notes ?
2015-05-30 23:09 Spy: Oh it's fine
2015-05-30 23:09 Spy: Just these ~
2015-05-30 23:12 [ A v a l o n ]: mod end ?
2015-05-30 23:12 Spy: Yes
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2015-05-30 21:00 [ A v a l o n ]: XD  . . .  start now :3 ?
2015-05-30 21:00 Spy: OK
2015-05-30 21:00 Spy: np the map
2015-05-30 21:00 [ A v a l o n ]: wait . . i forgot da name . .LOL
2015-05-30 21:01 [ A v a l o n ]: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/703896 Koshimizu Ami - Hari no Sora]
2015-05-30 21:01 Spy: LOL
2015-05-30 21:01 [ A v a l o n ]: *slap myself . . btw start at lv.6 or 10 ?
2015-05-30 21:01 Spy: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/703897 Koshimizu Ami - Hari no Sora [Lv.6]]
2015-05-30 21:01 Spy: First
2015-05-30 21:01 [ A v a l o n ]: =w=)b
2015-05-30 21:02 [ A v a l o n ]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/703897 Koshimizu Ami - Hari no Sora [Lv.6]]
2015-05-30 21:02 Spy: For general, how do you think about hitsounding
2015-05-30 21:02 Spy: I feel soft-hitnormal is a little loud
2015-05-30 21:02 Spy: I may recommend you take my soft-hitnormal
2015-05-30 21:03 [ A v a l o n ]: hmmm. . . .xD . . i just take from anither map . .. oki let see ur hitsound =w=
2015-05-30 21:03 [ A v a l o n ]: *another
2015-05-30 21:03 Spy: OK
2015-05-30 21:03 [ A v a l o n ]: wait . . . i didn't have soft-hitnormal on the mapset ._.
2015-05-30 21:04 Spy: Yes, so take mine to use may be better because my hitnormal adjusted the volumn
2015-05-30 21:04 [ A v a l o n ]: oki doki . . .
2015-05-30 21:06 [ A v a l o n ]: waiting . . . xD
2015-05-30 21:07 Spy: 00:01:097 (1097|2) -
2015-05-30 21:07 Spy: 00:01:573 (1573|2,3478|2) -
2015-05-30 21:07 Spy: Hitsounds like as these, well I think unnecessary
2015-05-30 21:08 Spy: Especially it is a quite calm song
2015-05-30 21:08 O_O . . . yea . . i think so . .. * me noob
2015-05-30 21:09 [ A v a l o n ]: btw . . HS still in progress xD
2015-05-30 21:09 Spy: Remember, when we're doing hitsounding, at least in mania, we must find similar sound to do
2015-05-30 21:09 [ A v a l o n ]: similar sound . .. =w=)b same sound at bgm right ?
2015-05-30 21:09 Spy: No need same since you can't find 100% same, just similar
2015-05-30 21:10 [ A v a l o n ]: oh ok . . . btw 00:00:621 - 00:13:954 - can left empty without HS ?
2015-05-30 21:10 [ A v a l o n ]: *until
2015-05-30 21:11 Spy: No problem
2015-05-30 21:12 [ A v a l o n ]: oki . . . i will left that empty =w=
2015-05-30 21:13 [ A v a l o n ]: :3 how's the pattern ?
2015-05-30 21:14 Spy: Patterns are fine actually
2015-05-30 21:14 [ A v a l o n ]: :3 ayy thanks xD
2015-05-30 21:16 Spy: 00:21:811 (21811|3,22049|0,22287|1,22525|2,22882|3) -
2015-05-30 21:16 Spy: Actually I feel the pitches seems not like this..
2015-05-30 21:17 [ A v a l o n ]: hmmm . . . actually .. i get confused to place the LN here xD
2015-05-30 21:18 Spy: aw
2015-05-30 21:18 [ A v a l o n ]: xD . . . any suggestion for that part :3 ?
2015-05-30 21:19 Spy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3190182 I may change like as this, aw, I feel first 3 LN are continuous, and fourth is not
2015-05-30 21:21 [ A v a l o n ]: omg . .. really nice when i test it xD . . .=w=)b
2015-05-30 21:21 Spy: :D
2015-05-30 21:21 [ A v a l o n ]: :D
2015-05-30 21:22 [ A v a l o n ]: applied as well :3
2015-05-30 21:22 Spy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3190200
2015-05-30 21:22 Spy: Personally I suggest this
2015-05-30 21:23 [ A v a l o n ]: hmm. . .. wait xD
2015-05-30 21:24 [ A v a l o n ]: need to compare xD
2015-05-30 21:24 Spy: I just feel second one is better ~
2015-05-30 21:24 [ A v a l o n ]: YES . . take the second suggestion :D
2015-05-30 21:24 Spy: OK :D
2015-05-30 21:24 [ A v a l o n ]: yea . . really better :3
2015-05-30 21:25 Spy: Honestly patterns are really fine, just I think the instrument following can be better
2015-05-30 21:26 Spy: I'll point out later
2015-05-30 21:26 Spy: Let's continue
2015-05-30 21:26 Spy: 00:38:716 - This part
2015-05-30 21:26 [ A v a l o n ]: ah . . my pleasure xD . . .yea i need some learning about following the instrument
2015-05-30 21:26 [ A v a l o n ]: yes ?
2015-05-30 21:26 Spy: You can see like as 00:39:192 - is getting heavy beats, so
2015-05-30 21:27 Spy: 00:39:192 - 00:39:668 - 00:40:144 - 00:41:097 - 00:41:573 - 00:42:049 - can just add one more
2015-05-30 21:28 Spy: 00:43:001 - 00:43:954 - Same but not important as latter
2015-05-30 21:28 [ A v a l o n ]: xD it make the pattern more harder i think :3 . . . and i just put 2 notes if contains a cymbal sound like finish sound i think . . .so it's okay ?
2015-05-30 21:29 [ A v a l o n ]: for this part only :3
2015-05-30 21:29 Spy: It's fine, just hm, I feel it may can makes the "feel" in this part
2015-05-30 21:30 Spy: 01:00:144 (60144|0,60859|2) - missed clap
2015-05-30 21:31 [ A v a l o n ]: yea . . i think same too . . . but i guess the noob player can't handle it xD
2015-05-30 21:31 Spy: 01:01:097 (61097|3) - Same
2015-05-30 21:31 Spy: You may think too much lol, due to BPM is low, I think it may be fine
2015-05-30 21:31 Spy: 01:03:001 (63001|2) - missed clap
2015-05-30 21:31 [ A v a l o n ]: ok . . btw . .. HS still BOOM . . not checked yet after ctrl G or ctrl H after modding . . i will check the HS later xD
2015-05-30 21:32 Spy: LOL OK
2015-05-30 21:32 [ A v a l o n ]: lol sorry xD
2015-05-30 21:32 Spy: 01:04:430 (64430|2) -
2015-05-30 21:32 Spy: How do you think about if remove it
2015-05-30 21:32 Spy: After removed, just use 100% to review this part to check the effect after removed
2015-05-30 21:33 Spy: I think it may be better
2015-05-30 21:33 [ A v a l o n ]: oh . .. so just following the kick only ?
2015-05-30 21:33 Spy: snares/kicks I think
2015-05-30 21:33 Spy: Sometimes
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: When you're mapping
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: Hm
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: After finished a part
2015-05-30 21:34 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: Review it
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: And use normal speed to check it
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: Whether it is the "feel" you want to make
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: In such lower difficulity it is very obvious
2015-05-30 21:35 [ A v a l o n ]: OK sensei . . . . owo / . . .
2015-05-30 21:35 Spy: We often follow obvious easy understandable instruments in Normal, or Hard(For me it is)
2015-05-30 21:36 [ A v a l o n ]: =w=)b
2015-05-30 21:36 Spy: So while mapping Easy/Normal diffs
2015-05-30 21:37 Spy: Just better not to follow unobvious sounds
2015-05-30 21:37 Spy: So according to what I said here, 01:04:430 (64430|2) - this one is kinda unobvious
2015-05-30 21:37 Spy: Especially it is unobvious and the sound be covered with your hitsound, if you noticed it
2015-05-30 21:38 [ A v a l o n ]: yea . .. so i will remove it xD
2015-05-30 21:39 Spy: 01:23:478 - I think it may really no reason only 1 note here
2015-05-30 21:39 Spy: Since you add 2 notes for same sound
2015-05-30 21:39 Spy: aw wait
2015-05-30 21:40 Spy: misunderstand, lol
2015-05-30 21:40 [ A v a l o n ]: Xd
2015-05-30 21:40 [ A v a l o n ]: lol . . makes me scared
2015-05-30 21:40 Spy: 01:24:192 (84192|1,84430|2) -
2015-05-30 21:40 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 21:40 Spy: You may can try to make it in same column
2015-05-30 21:40 Spy: You may know what I want to make here
2015-05-30 21:41 [ A v a l o n ]: col 3 is fine ?
2015-05-30 21:41 Spy: No problem
2015-05-30 21:41 Spy: 01:28:240 (88240|3) - NICE HITSOUND, LOL
2015-05-30 21:41 [ A v a l o n ]: really nice ? lol
2015-05-30 21:41 Spy: No
2015-05-30 21:41 Spy: ACTION slaps
2015-05-30 21:42 [ A v a l o n ]: fak yea
2015-05-30 21:42 [ A v a l o n ]: :v
2015-05-30 21:42 Spy: LOL
2015-05-30 21:42 [ A v a l o n ]: WTF is that
2015-05-30 21:42 [ A v a l o n ]: LOL
2015-05-30 21:42 Spy: You should ask yourself due to the map is yours
2015-05-30 21:42 [ A v a l o n ]: sampleset normal . . lol
2015-05-30 21:42 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 21:42 [ A v a l o n ]: changed
2015-05-30 21:43 Spy: 01:47:287 -
2015-05-30 21:43 Spy: Then
2015-05-30 21:43 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 21:43 Spy: I think you can start to change the instruments here
2015-05-30 21:43 Spy: Follow the piano mainly
2015-05-30 21:44 [ A v a l o n ]: piano only is better /
2015-05-30 21:44 [ A v a l o n ]: ?
2015-05-30 21:44 Spy: Oh do you think drum only is better ?
2015-05-30 21:44 Spy: *Or
2015-05-30 21:44 Spy: 02:15:859 (135859|3,136335|2,136811|1,137287|0) -
2015-05-30 21:45 [ A v a l o n ]: yes ?
2015-05-30 21:45 Spy: 02:17:763 (137763|3,138001|2,138240|1,138478|0,139430|1,139668|3,139906|2,140144|1,140382|0,140620|2,140859|1,141097|3,141335|0,141573|2,141811|1,142049|2,142287|3,142525|2,142763|1,143478|3,143597|0,143716|1,143835|2,143954|3,144073|0,144192|1,144311|2,144430|3,144549|0,144668|1) - You also followed piano hre
2015-05-30 21:45 Spy: Aren't you ?
2015-05-30 21:45 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 21:46 [ A v a l o n ]: yea i followed piano on that part o_o
2015-05-30 21:46 Spy: Yes, and I think uh
2015-05-30 21:47 Spy: You followed drums in much parts
2015-05-30 21:47 [ A v a l o n ]: bad :v ?
2015-05-30 21:47 Spy: If you keep it, it may be boring
2015-05-30 21:48 [ A v a l o n ]: hmmm . . . i totally get confused xD
2015-05-30 21:48 Spy: And follow piano may make it easier or just same, anyway it won't make it harder I'm sure
2015-05-30 21:48 Spy: Hm ?
2015-05-30 21:48 [ A v a l o n ]: so what's the best for that part :3 ?
2015-05-30 21:48 Spy: If for me, I may map piano
2015-05-30 21:49 Spy: 01:01:573 (61573|3,61573|0,61811|2,62049|0,62287|1,62525|3,62763|0,63001|2,63240|3,63478|1,63478|2,63716|0,63954|3,64192|0,64430|2,64668|1,64906|3,65144|0,65382|2,65382|3) -
2015-05-30 21:49 [ A v a l o n ]: start here right ? 02:17:763 -
2015-05-30 21:50 Spy: Just like as these, you've done same thing here, in the end I think it may be better if you follow the piano since it is main sound and it can makes your diff be interesting more
2015-05-30 21:50 Spy: 01:47:287 - here
2015-05-30 21:51 [ A v a l o n ]: YOSH . . oki doki . . .. (^ ^)7
2015-05-30 21:52 [ A v a l o n ]: wait i update diff . . .you can check it right or not xD
2015-05-30 21:53 Spy: OK~
2015-05-30 21:53 [ A v a l o n ]: updated ~
2015-05-30 21:54 Spy: 00:13:478 (13478|1) -
2015-05-30 21:55 Spy: How about change to 00:13:478 - 00:13:716 - add one note and remove the LN ?
2015-05-30 21:55 [ A v a l o n ]: oki changed :3
2015-05-30 21:56 Spy: OK
2015-05-30 21:56 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:47:287 - the piano is right ? . . or need more notes xD ?
2015-05-30 21:57 Spy: It depends on you, you can just add one more note
2015-05-30 21:58 [ A v a l o n ]: hmm . . . ok . . . so if it's following piano until the end . . . is more interisting for you :3 ?
2015-05-30 21:59 Spy: Yea, at least for me :D
2015-05-30 22:00 [ A v a l o n ]: ok . . it'fine for mee too xD . . .
2015-05-30 22:01 Spy: OK ~
2015-05-30 22:03 [ A v a l o n ]: Lv.6 passed xD for now . . .:3 ? . . continue to lv 10 ?
2015-05-30 22:04 Spy: OK
2015-05-30 22:05 [ A v a l o n ]: testplay first pls xD /. . .lol
2015-05-30 22:06 Spy: Lv.10 ?
2015-05-30 22:09 [ A v a l o n ]: aw sorry spy . .. my internet is BOOM xD
2015-05-30 22:09 Spy: yea ?
2015-05-30 22:10 [ A v a l o n ]: already testplay the lv.10 ?
2015-05-30 22:10 Spy: You don't have the map ?
2015-05-30 22:10 [ A v a l o n ]: heee ? lol
2015-05-30 22:10 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 22:11 [ A v a l o n ]: "latest pending version" . . .xD
2015-05-30 22:11 [ A v a l o n ]: lv.10 xD
2015-05-30 22:13 [ A v a l o n ]: aaa
2015-05-30 22:13 Spy: 00:13:716 - Missed note
2015-05-30 22:14 [ A v a l o n ]: hmm ok . . .but i think it's different piano that i follow from the first xD
2015-05-30 22:15 [ A v a l o n ]: aww fak . .slaps my ear . .. OK applied
2015-05-30 22:16 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 22:17 Spy: 00:29:192 (29192|0,29311|2,29430|1,29668|3) -
2015-05-30 22:17 Spy: You follow same as 00:27:287 (27287|2,27406|0,27525|3,27763|2) -
2015-05-30 22:17 Spy: But
2015-05-30 22:18 Spy: 00:29:430 - 00:29:668 - 00:29:906 - has one more piano sound
2015-05-30 22:18 Spy: I think these can add
2015-05-30 22:18 [ A v a l o n ]: ok i changed . . . i put 2 note for heavy piano sound =w=)b
2015-05-30 22:19 Spy: 00:53:240 (53240|0,53359|1,53359|2,53478|3) -
2015-05-30 22:19 Spy: About these
2015-05-30 22:19 [ A v a l o n ]: ;w;
2015-05-30 22:20 Spy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3190463 I may change like as these
2015-05-30 22:20 Spy: Hmm I don't know how to explain
2015-05-30 22:20 Spy: But a note with double note which has opening(?) can express this part well imo
2015-05-30 22:20 Spy: I don't know what I am express now
2015-05-30 22:20 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 22:21 [ A v a l o n ]: lol . .. but i will understand when i play it :3
2015-05-30 22:21 Spy: lol ok
2015-05-30 22:21 [ A v a l o n ]: nah . .now i'm understand . . OK applied =w=)b
2015-05-30 22:22 Spy: 01:15:859 (75859|3,75859|2,75978|1,75978|0,76097|3,76097|2,76216|0,76216|1,76335|3,76335|2,76454|0,76454|1,76573|3,76573|2,76692|0,76692|1) -
2015-05-30 22:23 Spy: aw wait, seems fine
2015-05-30 22:23 [ A v a l o n ]: eheheheee . . dat part ;w;
2015-05-30 22:23 Spy: But I may not to map like this lol
2015-05-30 22:24 [ A v a l o n ]: lol . . . i try the other ways . . . but seems not fit xD . . and finally i get that :v
2015-05-30 22:24 [ A v a l o n ]: readable :v
2015-05-30 22:26 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 22:26 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 22:26 [ A v a l o n ]: *slap my self
2015-05-30 22:27 Spy: Actually for such calm song I may use 3 notes less
2015-05-30 22:27 Spy: But it is reasonable when I saw your patterns
2015-05-30 22:27 [ A v a l o n ]: :3
2015-05-30 22:27 Spy: 01:26:573 (86573|1,86573|2) - any difference with 01:26:097 (86097|1) - ?
2015-05-30 22:28 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:26:573 - well ithink this is have more heavy piano sound . .. depends on my headphone . .lol
2015-05-30 22:29 [ A v a l o n ]: wait . . . maybe it's same . . .aaaa . . what about you ?
2015-05-30 22:30 Spy: lol I just can't hear any difference
2015-05-30 22:30 Spy: Maybe hitsounds covered with its sound
2015-05-30 22:31 Spy: Did you added hitnormal ?
2015-05-30 22:31 Spy: If so I may redl again and check again
2015-05-30 22:31 [ A v a l o n ]: btw . . . i didn't receive the link of that HS . . lol
2015-05-30 22:32 Spy: ha ?
2015-05-30 22:33 [ A v a l o n ]: really . . .
2015-05-30 22:33 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 22:33 Spy: o.o ??
2015-05-30 22:35 [ A v a l o n ]: heee . . . i don't understand xD . . . you recommended to use your hitnormal . . right ?
2015-05-30 22:35 [ A v a l o n ]: o.o
2015-05-30 22:37 [ A v a l o n ]: wtf what is happen here xD . . . i just use the default HS for hitnormal . . .
2015-05-30 22:37 Spy: aw check QQ PM
2015-05-30 22:38 [ A v a l o n ]: aw nothing on there o_o
2015-05-30 22:38 [ A v a l o n ]: accepted ! .. lol
2015-05-30 22:39 Spy: Just use that, it is the hitsound which has been turn down the volumn
2015-05-30 22:40 [ A v a l o n ]: OK . . .wait
2015-05-30 22:42 [ A v a l o n ]: updated ~
2015-05-30 22:43 Spy: ok~
2015-05-30 22:43 [ A v a l o n ]: btw . .lv.6 is under construction . .ignore the last part xD
2015-05-30 22:43 Spy: Maybe in timing, all can change to S:1
2015-05-30 22:44 Spy: S:C1
2015-05-30 22:45 [ A v a l o n ]: ok~
2015-05-30 22:45 Spy: And then general volumn can be higher
2015-05-30 22:45 Spy: Because after you changed to that, we almost can't hear it lol
2015-05-30 22:45 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 22:45 Spy: Just adjust the volume to the appropriate one
2015-05-30 22:46 [ A v a l o n ]: hmm what the best volume level for that ? . . . well i just very noob at this xD
2015-05-30 22:47 [ A v a l o n ]: at least for lower volume
2015-05-30 22:47 [ A v a l o n ]: 40% is enogh for you :3 ?
2015-05-30 22:48 Spy: Adjust it until you can hear the hitsound and then it is not noisy or annoying~
2015-05-30 22:48 [ A v a l o n ]: oh oki . ..
2015-05-30 22:50 [ A v a l o n ]: i put it on 55% . .for this part 00:00:621 -
2015-05-30 22:51 [ A v a l o n ]: ok next ?
2015-05-30 22:51 Spy: OK, remember to change to S:C1
2015-05-30 22:52 [ A v a l o n ]: ok . . already changed all timing to S:C1 :3
2015-05-30 22:52 Spy: remember change Lv.6 too then ~
2015-05-30 22:53 Spy: OK let's continue after updated
2015-05-30 22:55 [ A v a l o n ]: updated xD
2015-05-30 22:56 Spy: OK~
2015-05-30 23:01 [ A v a l o n ]: . . . .
2015-05-30 23:01 [ A v a l o n ]: lol
2015-05-30 23:02 Spy: 01:48:478 (108478|2) -
2015-05-30 23:02 Spy: Remove may be better
2015-05-30 23:03 Spy: 01:50:382 (110382|1) - Same, imo
2015-05-30 23:03 [ A v a l o n ]: hhmmm every of them ?
2015-05-30 23:03 [ A v a l o n ]: XD . . too many like that
2015-05-30 23:04 Spy: Just make it has pause feel
2015-05-30 23:04 Spy: nonstop here is weird, you know I mean
2015-05-30 23:05 [ A v a l o n ]: ok . . . removed all of them xD
2015-05-30 23:05 Spy: 01:57:287 (117287|2,117287|0,117287|1,117287|3) - Why sudden 4 notes ?
2015-05-30 23:05 Spy: 02:00:144 (120144|3,120144|0,120144|1) - ^ sudden 3 notes ?
2015-05-30 23:05 [ A v a l o n ]: LOL . ..
2015-05-30 23:05 [ A v a l o n ]: my mistake
2015-05-30 23:05 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 23:05 Spy: 02:05:859 (125859|3,125859|0,125859|2) -
2015-05-30 23:06 Spy: 02:06:811 (126811|1,126811|0,126811|2) -
2015-05-30 23:06 Spy: 02:08:716 (128716|3,128716|1,128716|0) -
2015-05-30 23:06 Spy: 02:24:549 (144549|2,144668|1) -
2015-05-30 23:07 Spy: These are different from piano you followed
2015-05-30 23:07 [ A v a l o n ]: piano + clap . . .. well i use 2 for calp xD
2015-05-30 23:07 Spy: if you want to follow it, you had better add 02:24:787 - and 02:24:906 - too
2015-05-30 23:07 Spy: Aw lol
2015-05-30 23:07 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 23:08 [ A v a l o n ]: 02:05:859 (125859|2,125859|0,125859|3) - piano + clap xD . . .or maybe it will be nice if only 2 notes ?
2015-05-30 23:09 Spy: Oh it's fine
2015-05-30 23:09 Spy: Just these ~
2015-05-30 23:12 [ A v a l o n ]: mod end ?
2015-05-30 23:12 Spy: Yes
Thanks for your advice and lesson Spy . . .<3
i learned so much from that xD

btw . . .wtf long irc :v
Ringating
from my queue:

your first image is fairly blurry and has a column of black pixels along the right side. the second one is pretty good, but it doesn't seem like it's as sharp as it could be (though I can't quite tell what the cause is; it might just be due to the texture of the image and the resizing method).

so, I remade the first bg using this as the source. The text previously on the bg is no longer there, so if that was necessary I can re-add it.I also made a sharper version of the second bg, using this as the base. It doesn't have the floral pattern of the current bg, but you can use the included png for editing it in if you want/can.
2

the png for editing (if necessary)
no kds
Topic Starter
[ A v a l o n ]
waw . .. very nice =w=)b
thanks Ringating for the background :3

i take the number one bg :3
maybe i will take the number 2 bg for my dekstop wallpaper . . lol

btw . .. thanks again
-SoraGami-
Hi Avalon!~ :)

here's my mod
1|2|3|4

[Lv.6]
00:28:240 (28240|2,28716|3) - move to left, to feel more the note presence in column 2 and to avoid contact with 00:29:430 (29430|3) - so it will became balance
01:04:192 (64192|2) - fix the hitsound of this
01:24:192 (84192|2,84430|2) - i think this two have different sound... correct me if im wrong..
01:47:525 (107525|0,107644|1,107763|2) - move to right, its sheilding the LN and for balance cuz column 2 have a long rest compared with the other column
01:53:954 (113954|0) - delete? i dont know if your only following piano here
01:59:668 (119668|1) - ^
02:03:001 (123001|0,123478|1) - ctrl + j, for better blance
[Lv.10]
00:03:954 (3954|1) - move to 4, to be consistent with 00:03:240 - and the others
00:21:692 - add note, it can be notice cuz with have the same loudness with 00:21:930 (21930|0) -
00:23:835 - not adding this?
00:28:835 (28835|1) - delete? its not the same sound your following (can't describe it xD), it's just same with this 00:36:454 - ; if you apply it, 00:28:954 (28954|3) - move this to 2 for balance
00:36:930 - not adding?, it's so hearable
00:48:240 (48240|0) - move to 2 for balance
01:00:501 (60501|0) - delete this? it's better while playing, its just focusing the presence of the beat
01:03:359 (63359|1) - move to 1 for balance
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i might destroy your pattern here, you can ignore it, cuz i dont know how you map it
why 01:26:097 (86097|1,86097|2) - and 01:26:573 (86573|1,86573|2) - has double notes while 01:28:001 (88001|2) - is louder which has only 1 note?
* 01:26:097 (86097|2,86573|1) - delete, cuz 01:26:335 (86335|2,86573|2) - has more potential to be a jack and add note here 01:28:001 -
same case with 01:18:478 (78478|1,78478|2,78954|1,78954|2) - and 01:20:382 (80382|1) -
01:35:620 - add?
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Awesome Map!!!
have a star...
Good Luck nya!~
Topic Starter
[ A v a l o n ]

-SoraGami- wrote:

[Lv.6]
00:28:240 (28240|2,28716|3) - move to left, to feel more the note presence in column 2 and to avoid contact with 00:29:430 (29430|3) - so it will became balance OK
01:04:192 (64192|2) - fix the hitsound of this HS still progress . . so don't mod the HS lol
01:24:192 (84192|2,84430|2) - i think this two have different sound... correct me if im wrong.. the better feeling when you play that . . considered
01:47:525 (107525|0,107644|1,107763|2) - move to right, its sheilding the LN and for balance cuz column 2 have a long rest compared with the other column keep . . overused in the right hand 01:46:811 (106811|3,107287|2,107287|3) -
01:53:954 (113954|0) - delete? i dont know if your only following piano here lol deleted
01:59:668 (119668|1) - ^
02:03:001 (123001|0,123478|1) - ctrl + j, for better blance ^ ^ OK
[Lv.10]
00:03:954 (3954|1) - move to 4, to be consistent with 00:03:240 - and the others keep . . . it's different pitch
00:21:692 - add note, it can be notice cuz with have the same loudness with 00:21:930 (21930|0) - OK . . i didn't notice it
00:23:835 - not adding this? no
00:28:835 (28835|1) - delete? its not the same sound your following (can't describe it xD), it's just same with this 00:36:454 - ; if you apply it, 00:28:954 (28954|3) - move this to 2 for balance keep desu
00:36:930 - not adding?, it's so hearable OK
00:48:240 (48240|0) - move to 2 for balance re arrange
01:00:501 (60501|0) - delete this? it's better while playing, its just focusing the presence of the beat keep . . it will be weird pattern . . cuz this 01:00:382 (60382|3) - is exist before
01:03:359 (63359|1) - move to 1 for balance keep . . btw, if moved to other it's not balanced too . . . i just want to keep the pitch here
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i might destroy your pattern here, you can ignore it, cuz i dont know how you map it
why 01:26:097 (86097|1,86097|2) - and 01:26:573 (86573|1,86573|2) - has double notes while 01:28:001 (88001|2) - is louder which has only 1 note?
* 01:26:097 (86097|2,86573|1) - delete, cuz 01:26:335 (86335|2,86573|2) - has more potential to be a jack and add note here 01:28:001 -
same case with 01:18:478 (78478|1,78478|2,78954|1,78954|2) - and 01:20:382 (80382|1) -
01:35:620 - add? btw usage 2 notes is to express the piano push here . . . maybe will changed in another time . . thanks for point that
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Awesome Map!!!
have a star...
Good Luck nya!~
thanks for mod and star xD
Kruzon


hi and 1 - 4 lets go

level 6

um, well, you see, I've goes through your map, and it seems that my suggestions regarding PR would be overkill and will definitely rip apart your pattern, but I guess it won't hurt to state my opinion, on rough basis. I'd put them in spoiler, so you can either close your eyes and pretend to see nothing, or if you're curious you can click onto the horizon line of spoiler.

first of all, from 00:00:621 (621|0) - to 00:03:954 (3954|0) - is good.
Normally, i would ask you to align 00:01:097 (1097|2,1811|3,2525|0) - on the same column for better emphasizing the notes placement, fitting with the rhythm. Making your notes goes stair mode all the way is a good move as a pattern in a long term, but it's not a wise choice to ignore pr at this point, imo.

00:07:287 (7287|0) - being the loudest and highest pitch, try to exclude it from your stair notes, move it to 4
00:07:525 (7525|2,7763|3) - move them 1 time to the left

00:21:573 (21573|0,21573|1) - very weak and meaningless sound, there's no reason to put 2 notes here
00:25:382 (25382|0,25382|1) - same reason

00:26:573 (26573|1) - missing note, add note for consistency and readable pattern, refer 00:25:382 (25382|1,25620|2,25859|0) -
00:28:478 (28478|3) - same reason

00:30:144 (30144|0,30144|3) - well, instead of 2 notes here, i would delete 00:30:144 (30144|3) - , and move 00:30:144 (30144|0) - sync it with pr.
00:30:620 (30620|3) - obviously, moved to 1

00:37:049 (37049|0,37287|3,37525|0,37644|1) - looks quite random to me. well, i suggest:
00:37:049 (37049|0) - move to 2
00:37:287 (37287|3) - move to 1
00:37:525 (37525|0,37644|1) - shift them 2 times to the right
00:38:001 (38001|3) - move to 2
00:44:430 (44430|0,44430|3,44906|1,44906|2,45382|0,45382|1,45859|3,45859|0,46097|2,46335|1,46335|3) - well.. it does look okay i suppose..
00:46:335 (46335|3,46335|1) - I agreed you put 2 notes here, because it's necessary to represent loudness here. But, you're making 00:44:430 (44430|0,44430|3,44906|1,44906|2,45382|0,45382|1,45859|3,45859|0) - having 2 notes as well, despite just being a kick sound. moreover, this is killing off meaning on 00:46:335 (46335|3,46335|1) - which have 2 notes to emphasize the loud sound.. I suggest to use only 1 note on 00:44:430 (44430|0,44430|3,44906|1,44906|2,45382|0,45382|1,45859|0,45859|3) -

00:48:954 (48954|3,49192|2,49430|0,49668|1,49906|3,49906|2,50144|1,50144|0) - you know what, just press ctrl + H and they'll look better and sync, pr-wise as well

00:50:859 (50859|3,51097|2,51335|1,51573|2,51811|3,52049|2,52287|1,52525|0,52763|1,53001|3,53001|2) - copy-pasta clone notes, avoid excessively cloning your notes from 1 to another diff- Also, i suggest you to plot notes based on different sound base here.
00:50:859 (50859|3,51097|2,51335|1,51573|2,51811|3,52049|2,52287|1) - despite being a copy-pasta, you also did this wrong because it has the wrong base sequence. Actually, it should start 00:50:620 (50620|1) - . Deleting this doesn't mean you make this diff easier, but you made the pattern lose its balance
Solution for above statement: Delete 00:51:335 (51335|1,52287|1) - and re-pattern the rest 00:50:620 (50620|1,50859|3,51097|2,51573|2,51811|3,52049|2) - use pr

00:53:001 (53001|2,53001|3) - is not equal to 00:53:359 (53359|2,53359|3) - , listen deeply, it's different sound. But, 00:53:716 (53716|0,53716|1) - is equal to 00:53:954 (53954|3,53954|2) - , so they should be in the same column instead- do something about them

01:02:406 (62406|2,62763|2) - , nah don't use jack pattern yet, for the time being implement different pattern variation. I suggest:
01:02:763 (62763|2) - move to 2
01:03:001 (63001|0) - move to 3

- 01:06:216 (66216|1) - starting at this point you may kept your jack notes -
01:08:120 (68120|1,68478|2) - you need to plot them in the same column, the same as you did with 01:06:216 (66216|1,66573|1) - to preserve notes consistency
01:08:716 (68716|0,68716|1) - gives wider gap, for pattern flow. suggest move them to 1 and 4 respectively
01:08:954 (68954|3) - move to 2
01:09:192 (69192|1) - move to 4

01:10:620 (70620|3) - um, put this to 1 for cow sake
01:10:859 (70859|0) - move to 2
01:11:097 (71097|1) - move to 4
01:11:573 (71573|0,72049|0) - move them to column 4, sequence repetition with 01:09:668 (69668|3,70144|3) -

Well, I'll stop here :)


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