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Sytry(CV:Yoshitsugu Matsuoka) - Believe My Dice ~Sytry Solo

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Sieg
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 30 мая 2015 г. at 0:36:45

Artist: Sytry(CV:Yoshitsugu Matsuoka)
Title: Believe My Dice ~Sytry Solo ver.~
Source: 魔界王子
Tags: devils and realist from stratford with love eba hotaru tv size habiholic regraz gokugohan12468
BPM: 175
Filesize: 27541kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Goku's Normal (1,55 stars, 121 notes)
  2. Habi's Hard (3,13 stars, 246 notes)
  3. Insane (4,33 stars, 371 notes)
  4. Regraz's Advanced (2,42 stars, 192 notes)
Download: Sytry(CV:Yoshitsugu Matsuoka) - Believe My Dice ~Sytry Solo ver.~
Download: Sytry(CV:Yoshitsugu Matsuoka) - Believe My Dice ~Sytry Solo ver.~ (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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HabiHolic
Done

Habi's Hard
http://puu.sh/hWmC4/a0e3432b3d.zip
Kyouren
Is all mapset is taken full?
Topic Starter
Sieg

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Is all mapset is taken full?
not yet :3
Asonate
Here I am :)

[General]
There are some Uninherited Timing Sections, which are not really needed

[Insane]
  1. 00:01:071 (1) - I know, this is nitpicky and some people hate it, but this slider is not a perfect blanket (pls no punch for pixels :_:)
  2. 00:24:899 (2) - Maybe make this shorter ?
  3. 00:32:442 (6) - Consider making the spacing of 6 to 2,3,4 equal (so that its un the middle)
  4. 00:44:013 (2,3) - Maybe make these jumps instead ? These sliders take out the momentum this map has, imo
  5. 00:50:270 (7) - Same as before
  6. 01:29:527 (1,2,3) - Since these 3 sliders blanket each other I suggest making the distance to the blanket equal in all of them
[Habi's Hard]
  1. 00:59:184 (2,3) - This is really hard to read
[Regraz's Advanced]
  1. 00:06:557 (1,2,3) / 00:24:385 (1,2,3) - This looks Copy/Pasted
  2. 00:32:613 (1,2) - Maybe make 1 a repeatslider and remove 2 ?
  3. 01:23:355 (1,2) - This doesn't look too good, as the endpoints intersect, consider moving 1s endpoint a bit to the right
[Goku's Normal]
  1. 01:29:184 (1) - This note, imo is hard too read especially for a beginner
All Done :)
Hope I could help
If you have any questions regarding my mods, feel free to PM me ingame :)
Good Luck
Nozhomi
Bonjour, baguette here~ from #modreqs.

- General :
  1. 00:23:185 - Is this redline really useful ? I think it's perfectly fine with music to have white tic on 00:24:385 - imo.

- Goku's Normal :
  1. Overall check your blanket, there is place for some improvement. Rest of the diff is fine to me.


- Regraz's Advanced :
  1. 00:05:700 (2) - I don't really like how you break flow here. I know you use similar pattern after, but I don't think it works well here. You just should place it at 196:368, it make also flow better with 00:06:043 (3) - imo.
    :/ really good too


- Habi's Hard :
  1. Like Normal, check your blanket, you can improve some of them.
    Fking perfect.


- Insane :
  1. 01:29:527 (1,2,3) - I just think you should change the pattern like this -> http://puu.sh/i1S4e/14e276fea6.jpg , because the angle between 01:29:013 (5,6,1) - make the flow a little bad imo. Would play better with this triangle flow.

orz this mapset is almost perfect (or I'm just a shitty modder). Just rank it... (no kd if this mod is useless).
Muyku~
Topic Starter
Sieg
@Asonate,
changed everything expect 00:24:899 (2)
thanks :)

@Nozhomi
I'll think how to implement suggested flow with 01:29:355 (6,1) - increased spacing
red line on 00:23:185 for metronome fix, necessary
thanks :3
Mortem
Hi.

Goku's Normal:
00:11:528 (4) - The slider end is off the playfield. Maybe move it little bit?
01:10:498 (2,3) - Move these little bit down (off playfield again)
01:28:155 (4) - Redesign slider like this.

Regraz's Advanced:
Seems fine.

Habi's Hard:
00:08:957 (4,1) - Make perfect blanket.
00:27:127 (5) - Move to x:4; y:263

Insane:
01:26:956 (4,2) - Stack?

Sorry for little mod, but I didn't find any more issues. :x
I hope that at least this helps.
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Sieg
Pjecoo yep, thanks :3
I've also fixed stuff for goku
Lama Poluna
Приветик \(^▽^)/
Insane

00:59:184 (2) - Может лучше покрутить по часовой и поставить на x:252 y:172
00:50:441 (8,9,1) - x:88 y:108
Мне нечего сказать о других диффах. Слишком уж все идеально (─‿‿─)
Lama Poluna
(゚∀゚)ノ゙
Вот по мне кажется что первый оффсет будет 1081.

Прости что не написал в первом посте, забыл.
Topic Starter
Sieg
@Lama Poluna подправил бланкет, спасибо :3
по поводу оффсета, попробуй послушать метроном
Topic Starter
Sieg
updated with new mp3 and better timing D:
Seijiro
Here I am from my queue :3

SPOILER
~ Legend ~

  1. Black = Just a suggestion, feel free to refuse
  2. Blue = Highly recommended suggestion. You need a strong reason to refuse this
  3. Red = Unrankable. You MUST fix this
Please reply with:
  1. Green = Fixed
  2. Red = Didn't fix
  3. Orange = Fixed part of the suggestion

[General]
  1. Insane and Goku's Normal diffs have Widescreen Support disabled while the other 2 have it enabled. It's not really a problem at all, but enable/disable it on every diff

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:857 (1) - What about a Ctrl + G here? Basically, I'd like to give empashis to the hitsound on this slider's head
  2. 00:22:800 (3) - I think that a couple of stacked circles would work out well to introduce the next pattern, since it looks a bit cramped right now. If you don't like those circles what about changing direction? As it is now it gives the impression there is a 1/4 slider jump there
  3. 00:40:886 (5,2) - What about moving 5 where 2 is? That part feels a bit too slow imo =3= Anyway, if you don't like my suggestion see if you can move it further away where you want

[Habi's Hard]
  • I'm disappointed in myself for not finding a single thing to say. Really good job (y)

[Regraz's Advanced]
    1. 00:22:286 (4,5) - Isn't this part a bit too much for beginners? I sometimes fail to read such metrics changes even if I played for 2 years now... What about a repeat on 00:22:286 (4) - ?

[Gaku's Normal]
  1. 00:23:914 - What about a 1/1 slider from here? (if you're worrying about the time after the spinner, it's fine :3)
  2. 01:04:371 (1) - Is this intentional? (I guess it isn't since the spacing isn't consistent)

Alright, that's all. I hope this helps a bit, but seeing the mapset I think it doesn't need many improvements at all :3
GL~
Topic Starter
Sieg

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Here I am from my queue :3

SPOILER
~ Legend ~

  1. Black = Just a suggestion, feel free to refuse
  2. Blue = Highly recommended suggestion. You need a strong reason to refuse this
  3. Red = Unrankable. You MUST fix this
Please reply with:
  1. Green = Fixed
  2. Red = Didn't fix
  3. Orange = Fixed part of the suggestion

[General]
  1. Insane and Goku's Normal diffs have Widescreen Support disabled while the other 2 have it enabled. It's not really a problem at all, but enable/disable it on every diff

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:857 (1) - What about a Ctrl + G here? Basically, I'd like to give empashis to the hitsound on this slider's head
    that's the point, right. but I prefer to follow guitar riff here
  2. 00:22:800 (3) - I think that a couple of stacked circles would work out well to introduce the next pattern, since it looks a bit cramped right now. If you don't like those circles what about changing direction? As it is now it gives the impression there is a 1/4 slider jump there
    changed direction
  3. 00:40:886 (5,2) - What about moving 5 where 2 is? That part feels a bit too slow imo =3= Anyway, if you don't like my suggestion see if you can move it further away where you want
    dunno, I like this kind placment

[Habi's Hard]
  • I'm disappointed in myself for not finding a single thing to say. Really good job (y)

[Regraz's Advanced]
    1. 00:22:286 (4,5) - Isn't this part a bit too much for beginners? I sometimes fail to read such metrics changes even if I played for 2 years now... What about a repeat on 00:22:286 (4) - ?
      replaced with repeat slider

[Gaku's Normal]
  1. 00:23:914 - What about a 1/1 slider from here? (if you're worrying about the time after the spinner, it's fine :3)
    start from hard beat, which is clap, is better imo
  2. 01:04:371 (1) - Is this intentional? (I guess it isn't since the spacing isn't consistent)
    fixed

Alright, that's all. I hope this helps a bit, but seeing the mapset I think it doesn't need many improvements at all :3
GL~
thanks! (:
edit: I've also fixed stuff for gds from prev mods
Krfawy
#ЗАПУЗЫРЕНО
20:35 Sieg: oups, hs fixed on 00:47:228 (3) -
20:35 Krfawy: K :3
20:35 Krfawy: 01:00:600 (2,3) - Could it be more like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3187142 this] pls?
20:35 Sieg: sure
20:43 Sieg: http://makai-ouji.com/music.html metadata
20:43 Sieg: if you interested D:
20:44 Krfawy: а ты знаешь что я ничего не понимаю? о3о
20:44 Sieg: да xD
20:44 Sieg: там все хорошо
20:46 Krfawy: \o3o/
21:02 Krfawy: 01:23:914 (2,3) - K so here too o3o
21:02 *Krfawy is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/705849 Sytry(CV:Yoshitsugu Matsuoka) - Believe My Dice ~Sytry Solo ver.~ [Regraz's Advanced]]
21:03 Krfawy: 01:25:628 (3,1) - and here XD
21:03 Sieg: кк
21:03 Sieg: 01:25:628 (3,1) -
21:03 Sieg: and here
21:03 Sieg: ?
21:03 Sieg: http://puu.sh/i57LW/7dbe83a72b.jpg
21:06 Krfawy: yeah now it's purrrfuckt o3o
21:21 Krfawy: K
21:21 Krfawy: R U RDY 4 THE BUBBLE
21:21 Krfawy: ??!?!?!?!!????!ONE
21:21 Sieg: updating
21:21 Krfawy: o3o
21:22 Sieg: kk, done :3
21:23 Krfawy: I'm happy
Topic Starter
Sieg
(:
meii18
We made IRC

Sieg \o3o/
23:23 ByBy_ChAn: hi
23:24 Sieg: hey
23:24 ByBy_ChAn: I saw your map is bubbled now :)
23:24 ByBy_ChAn: check the thread I made a post
23:24 Sieg: yep
23:24 Sieg: xD
23:25 ByBy_ChAn: would you like to .....?
23:25 Sieg: sure :D
23:25 ByBy_ChAn: yay \w/
23:43 ByBy_ChAn: can you fix on Goku's diff ?
23:44 Sieg: I can
23:44 Sieg: for all diffs
23:44 ByBy_ChAn: good :)
23:44 ByBy_ChAn: on goku
23:44 ByBy_ChAn: 00:35:571 (3)- missing finish on head i guess :p
23:45 Sieg: added
23:45 ByBy_ChAn: good
23:46 ByBy_ChAn: 00:41:057 (3)- I suggest to remove the finish from arrow and tail since there's no cymbal and don't forget to remove the clap from tail too
23:48 Sieg: kk
23:48 ByBy_ChAn: 01:11:914 (4)- remove finish ? this finish doesn't sound too good to me
23:49 Sieg: I prefer to have double finishes here
23:49 Sieg: good for transfer
23:49 ByBy_ChAn: ok
23:54 ByBy_ChAn: regraz
23:54 Sieg: kk
23:55 ByBy_ChAn: 00:18:086 (1)- why here's NC while there's already a NC on 00:17:571 (1)- ? I suggest to remove that NC
23:55 Sieg: guess for lyrics, w\e ermoved second
23:55 ByBy_ChAn: ok
23:57 ByBy_ChAn: 00:19:457 (1)- I know this is an advanced diff but this slider doesn't look so friendly for newbie players.maybe change with one more suitable for newbies
23:58 Sieg: kk
23:58 Sieg: http://puu.sh/i5bzt/1e4cdf98c5.jpg
00:01 ByBy_ChAn: is good
00:01 Sieg: good :3
00:07 ByBy_ChAn: 00:22:286 (4)- I prefer a 1/1 slider and placed on 00:22:200 - to catch perfectly the vocal instead using an 3/4 slider with repeat place on blue tick which sounds very weird to me
00:09 Sieg: mhm
00:09 Sieg: somthing like http://puu.sh/i5ci9/676217d97c.jpg ?
00:11 ByBy_ChAn: yes
00:11 Sieg: idk, there is no anyting that starts from 22200 actually, let me think
00:11 ByBy_ChAn: ok
00:12 Sieg: I can make http://puu.sh/i5cvp/8585046be3.jpghttp: ... 046be3.jpg
00:12 Sieg: http://puu.sh/i5cvp/8585046be3.jpg
00:12 Sieg: ups
00:14 Sieg: or http://puu.sh/i5cBz/30b14b823e.jpg even better
00:15 ByBy_ChAn: ok
00:15 ByBy_ChAn: use the last
00:16 Sieg: and same concept for habi diff then
00:16 Sieg: for this spot
00:16 ByBy_ChAn: ok
00:20 ByBy_ChAn: 00:35:571 (1)- missing finish at head and on the next slider on 00:36:086 (2)- remove the finish from head because no cymbal
00:20 ByBy_ChAn: *there
00:21 Sieg: kk
00:22 ByBy_ChAn: 00:41:571 (2)- too remove finish from head
00:22 Sieg: prefer to keep here bacause this slider start - active element of play
00:22 Sieg: andd
00:22 Sieg: vocals
00:23 ByBy_ChAn: ok
00:23 Sieg: unlike in normal
00:23 Sieg: this was repeat or w\e
00:23 ByBy_ChAn: ooh
00:23 Sieg: slider end
00:23 ByBy_ChAn: yea :/
00:27 ByBy_ChAn: nothing on Habi's hard
00:27 Sieg: :)
00:34 ByBy_ChAn: that's all I guess
00:35 Sieg: I've also added album name to tags
00:35 ByBy_ChAn: good
00:36 Sieg: k
00:36 Sieg: updated
00:36 ByBy_ChAn: yay
00:37 ByBy_ChAn: the video haven't sound right ?
00:37 Sieg: yep
00:37 ByBy_ChAn: okay
00:37 ByBy_ChAn: that's good
00:39 ByBy_ChAn: the metadata seems fine right ? too lazy to find now ==
00:40 Sieg: http://makai-ouji.com/music.html
00:40 ByBy_ChAn: ok
00:40 ByBy_ChAn: the spread seems fine to me :)
00:40 Sieg: well to me too
00:40 ByBy_ChAn: hmm ok
00:41 ByBy_ChAn: SV ok
00:42 ByBy_ChAn: green lines ok I guess I checked to detect duplicate green line
00:42 Sieg: I've checked with new AIBat
00:42 Sieg: no duplicates
00:42 ByBy_ChAn: awesome
00:42 ByBy_ChAn: so let's go
00:42 Sieg: xD
00:42 ByBy_ChAn: everything ready ?
00:42 ByBy_ChAn: all ?
00:43 Sieg: post the log first, so I can kd you
00:43 Sieg: yep
00:43 ByBy_ChAn: ok
00:43 ByBy_ChAn: \w/

Great job everyone Here's my heart for you Sieg :3
Topic Starter
Sieg
thanks (:
Pho
lul gratz c:
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