Hi, I'll be modding your 4K and as usual, you know my modding column format-
Light*Regarding pitch relevancy, I strongly pointed this out, especially on a
single-instrument area to emphasize the rhythm better. I personally think plotting based on PR is a good choice, here:
00:01:220 (1220|0,1308|1,1397|3) - I think this is better of as stair, I don't see why would you separate the stair, because:
00:01:749 (1749|2) - has the highest pitch and deserve 4th column, not this 00:01:397 (1397|3) -
00:02:808 (2808|0,3073|1) - these notes as well, 00:03:073 (3073|1) - deserve 1st column due to it's pitch, not 00:02:808 (2808|0) -
*Optional but Better Notes Presentation:
Between 00:01:220 (1220|0) - and 00:05:632 (5632|0) - , Listen to the instrument, and you will noticed repetition/chorus, I suggest to plot note by repeating pattern, to make your notes presentation make sense and sync with the rhythm- I'll let you think how to deal with this
Between 00:07:044 (7044|1) - and 00:11:279 (11279|0) - as well, from the very start of the song it already gives out random vibes, which i found weird. Follow pattern repetition here as well
*If you don't follow my optional above, then you may proceed to these statements:
00:07:044 (7044|1) - should be on 1
00:07:749 (7749|0) - well, move to 2
00:08:279 (8279|1) - Move to 3, same sound as 00:07:396 (7396|2) -
00:11:279 (11279|0) - Move to 3, and
00:11:544 (11544|1) - Move to 1, better flow
00:12:691 (12691|2,12691|3,13044|3) - I don't see problem with the jack notes, but you need to make 00:13:396 (13396|1,13396|0,13661|3) - with jack note as well, for consistency. I suggest:
00:13:661 (13661|3) - Move to 1
00:16:749 (16749|1,16926|0,16926|2) - perhaps it's time to stop using this pattern, now try to implement new pattern variation. My suggestion:
00:16:749 (16749|1) - Move to 3
00:16:926 (16926|2) - Move to 2, refer 00:16:220 (16220|1,16220|0,16926|1,16926|0) - same impact sound
00:22:573 (22573|2,22573|1) - should be in the same column as 00:21:867 (21867|0,21867|1) - to preserve consistency
Anyway, you should have noticed that I'd recommended you to follow PR and implement pattern repetition on here as well, but this cost you a lot, as it's breaking your pattern. Therefore, starting now my modding will be based on minor issues, so I don't have to destroy your pattern!
00:31:396 (31396|2,31396|3) - this dual notes are out of nowhere, actually it's still part of these pattern 00:29:985 (29985|0,29985|3,30691|0,30691|3) -
I suggest you to move them to 1 and 4 instead.
00:31:749 (31749|0) - Move to 3
00:32:102 (32102|3,32102|2) - This dual notes seem unfitting to be placed on the right side, press Ctrl + H, and
00:32:279 (32279|1) - Move to 3
00:32:455 (32455|0,32455|2) - I would widened their gap due to strong impact playing here, therefore suggesting 00:32:455 (32455|2) - move to 4.
00:32:808 (32808|3) - Move to 3,
00:33:161 (33161|0) - move to 2, good riddance
refer these as extra result 00:32:102 (32102|0,32102|1,32808|2,32808|1,33514|3,33514|2) -
00:33:867 (33867|0) - Move to 4, creating jack notes to preserve consistency with 00:29:279 (29279|2,29632|2) -
00:34:220 (34220|3) - Move to 3,
00:34:926 (34926|1,34926|3,35102|2,35279|1,35279|0) - you might want to follow/ clone 00:33:514 (33514|2,33514|3,33691|1,33867|3) - for pattern consistency, and 00:35:279 (35279|1,35279|0) - should be given wider gap due to strong impact here
00:35:632 (35632|2,35632|3) - having the same notes density as 00:35:279 (35279|1,35279|0) - despite only being a kick sound, is not a good move. Also, it even has pattern similarity (dual notes) which makes it even worse. I suggest to reduce notes on:
00:35:632 (35632|3,35632|2) -
00:36:338 (36338|1,36338|2) -
00:36:691 (36691|2,36691|3) - doesn't have to be dual note as well. This should has its own base pattern already, the instrument already playing different sound here. I suggest widened the gap to 1 and 4 respectively
00:36:955 (36955|0) - Move to 3, more reasonable
00:37:220 (37220|3,37220|2) - Gives wider gap as well, 1 and 4
00:50:455 (50455|3) - Move to 3,
00:50:808 (50808|2) - Move to 4
00:55:044 (55044|2) - Starting here, suddenly pattern flow so good, lol. There's minor to fix, but I'll let you think what you gonna do with these:
01:00:691 (60691|2,60691|3,61044|0,61044|1) -
01:06:338 (66338|0,66338|1,66691|2,66691|3) -
01:10:573 (70573|3) - Move to 1
01:10:926 (70926|0) - Move to 4, refer 01:09:514 (69514|0,69514|1,70220|2,70220|1,70926|2,70926|3) -
01:11:632 (71632|0,71632|3,71985|3,71985|1) - wrong gap between notes, refer sound loudness
01:12:338 (72338|3,72338|0) - deserve the left side of the column, not fully-widened gap 1 - 4
01:15:867 (75867|1,75867|0,76220|2,76220|3) - these are okay though, I don't have any qualm with it. Besides, I also like how you made it repeated by 01:16:573 (76573|0,76749|1,76926|3,76926|2) -
01:17:455 (77455|0,77544|1,77632|2) - splendid
Eh, after this is just same chorus, i guess I'll skip them ^_^
- Mod Ends -
Sorry, in the end I did a lot of destruction after all. But, I did my best to help you!
Beware of the chorus, repetitive pattern are vital here, if you ignore this then your map just gonna go randomize all the way..
Good luck with your map c: