1. Advanced (2,17 stars, 170 notes)
2. Average (1,52 stars, 115 notes)

1. 00:18:205 (3) - Мне не нравится как расположен этот слайдер, гораздо лучше было бы ctrl+j и станкунуть его с концом (3), чтобы образовать треугольник
2. 00:32:705 (2) - Попробуй расположить более симметрично белые точки, примерно как в 00:30:705 (4) -
3. 00:42:205 (3) - Ну не знаю, выглядит как-то грубо. Я думаю будет лучше, если ты добавишь белую точку в хвосте, примерно как тут 00:30:705 (4) -
4. 00:50:205 (4) - Вот тут он гораздо лучше выглядит, не знаю почему
5. 00:56:205 (1,2) - Можно лучше сделать этот бланкет
6. 01:34:205 (4) - Казалось бы, этот слайдер должен быть на 184 252, чтобы образовать квадрат. Сейчас это выглядит странно
7. 01:40:205 (1) - Попробуй его поставить так, чтобы сделать бланкет. Как-то так наверное http://puu.sh/lP75T/fe55ec5b04.jpg

1. лол http://puu.sh/lP7b1/64c8672164.png
2. 00:30:205 (3,1) - оверлап режет глаза
3. 00:34:205 (3,1) - стакни их правильно, нервно сейчас
4. 00:55:038 (2,3,4,1,2) - мне не очень нравится, что в этой области распложено слишком много объектов. Идеально будет для меня, если переместить 00:56:705 (2) - на 8 328. Гораздо лучше
5. 01:02:205 (5) - его бы изогнуть еще больше для лучшего флоу
6. 01:35:705 (8) - Тут я думаю надо его сделать прямым, потому что относительно 01:36:205 (1) - он выглядит плохо
7. 01:58:205 (5,7) - очень плохой бланкет, поменяй
8. 02:06:705 (4,6) - Тоже, станки правильно

1. followpoint.png and reversearrow.png are missing, should be added because they're in same set. Unfortunately, sets were removed from skinning wiki, don't know why, but rules still don't allow this.
2. SliderBorder colors must be added to both difficulties.
3. What is Two tag doing there? The song is from album Lenka: http://lenkamusic.com/music/
4. I think that kaboom on 01:32:205 - could have reversed effect - explosions spreads, doesn't appear all of sudden, so I think the scale should increase, not decrease.
5. I think that hitsounds don't give much feedback, respectively, using only drum hitsounds is quite monotonous, especially when you're emphasizing just a snare with a kick drum. I think the song provides both kick and snare, so they could be hitsounded both. Kicks could be hitsounded with drum finish or drum clap and the snare could be something custom. Increasing volume to fit approximately the volume of song would make it more audiable and give sensible feedback.

1. Insufficient mp3 quality, your mp3's frequency cap is even lower than regular 128kbps. You may use this alternative (you'll need to move SB and timing points by about -59, shouldn't be a problem to select all points and use move on them), here's a proof of why it isn't really 192kbps and is even lower than 128kbps - even if it was close to 128, it would be unacceptable as it takes same files size as 192.
   
   Your mp3

   
   Real 128kbps

   
   Real 192kbps

   

1. 01:59:205 (7) - If I didn't miss anything, this was the only object that had downbeat without click. For consistency, you may do something like this.
   
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2. This inherited points have no usage, it's changing nothing afaik: 01:59:371 - 01:59:538 - 01:59:705 -
3. 00:26:205 (3) - Seems you forgot whistle as you're using it on same place very frequently. Obviously with Auto Additions.
4. 00:35:205 - I think this whistle is out of your order. It seems like you follow piano or w/e it is previously, but now you put it on a regular hi-hat.
5. 00:37:705 (2) - This should in my opinion have Additions Drum as you use Drum Whistle on these rim sounds.
6. 00:40:705 - You mostly use clap + whistle on this sound if I'm not wrong, thus I think it should be also on these: 00:40:705 - 00:42:705 - 01:36:705 - 01:38:705 -
7. 01:50:205 (1) - I don't see any logic in his, as nothing end on this slider's end. Kick drum start, and her voice is till prolonged on 01:50:538 -
8. 00:52:205 - This hitsound is in my opinion standing out way too much, but seems like only one like this, so I don't think it was supposed to be like this.
9. 00:53:205 - The hitsound seems to be out, the snare is only on 00:52:705 - and 00:53:705 - so adding something in the middle doesn't sound well.
10. There are some finishes that are in my opinion overused as they don't follow a cymbal in music properly: 00:44:205 - 00:46:205 (1) - 00:48:205 - 00:54:205 - 01:00:205 - 01:19:705 - 01:28:205 (1) - 01:40:205 - 01:42:205 (1) - 01:48:205 - 01:50:205 - 01:56:205 - (actually it's supposed to be on 01:55:705 - there is a little inconsistency in the song itself, so following its logic would be fine) 02:02:205 (4) - 02:04:205 - 02:05:705 - 02:05:705 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Doesn't seem to have a single cymbal in song at all. If you want it to be a 'great end', at least mute it so you don't cause anyone an ear-bleeding.
11. 01:35:205 (7) - Should in my opinion had a little lower volume as it's not same as other cymbals
12. 01:59:705 - Finish is missing as there's a cymbal in song. I recommend this one and 01:55:705 - to have slightly lower volume.

1. Seems like I have only concerns about hitsounds here. Most of them should be on same places as above difficulty as it seems copied. Try to make it more sensible with the song. If you have question, PMs are welcome as always.

Wafu wrote:

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1. 00:37:705 (2) - This should in my opinion have Additions Drum as you use Drum Whistle on these rim sounds.
   whistle as soft finisher for this section works better
   
2. 00:52:205 - This hitsound is in my opinion standing out way too much, but seems like only one like this, so I don't think it was supposed to be like this.
   suppossed to be finisher sound to emphesize vocals and rhythm pause
   
3. There are some finishes that are in my opinion overused as they don't follow a cymbal in music properly: 00:44:205 - 00:46:205 (1) - 00:48:205 - 00:54:205 - 01:00:205 - 01:19:705 - 01:28:205 (1) - 01:40:205 - 01:42:205 (1) - 01:48:205 - 01:50:205 - 01:56:205 - (actually it's supposed to be on 01:55:705 - there is a little inconsistency in the song itself, so following its logic would be fine) 02:02:205 (4) - 02:04:205 - 02:05:705 - 02:05:705 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Doesn't seem to have a single cymbal in song at all. If you want it to be a 'great end', at least mute it so you don't cause anyone an ear-bleeding.
   finish hitsounds are used not only to copy cymbal from the song but also to emphesize parts of the song - kiai here
   
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   1. Seems like I have only concerns about hitsounds here. Most of them should be on same places as above difficulty as it seems copied. Try to make it more sensible with the song. If you have question, PMs are welcome as always.
      we worked out some of them