00:36:745 (36745|4) - wouldn't it be more consistent if the LN starts 00:36:912 - ? well just like the others in above, yea move it to other collumn if you aggred (or maybe you'll even re-pattern for the pitch)
00:41:412 (41412|2) - what about moving it to 2nd collumn ? (so the jack is consistent 00:41:578 (41578|2,41745|3,41745|2,41912|3) - and not triplet jack 00:41:412 (41412|2,41578|2,41745|2) - )
00:47:245 - i hear 1/6 there, what about making them 1/6 snap with 2 note ? something like:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5421386 ye actually i hear that too in other part so it's ok if you wont apply this
00:49:578 (49578|4) - it's should be 1/2 LN (hear the music again) 00:49:578 (49578|4) - be like in the left earphone and 00:49:745 - in both earphone
00:52:245 (52245|4) - this one too but maybe you already know this ? (00:54:912 (54912|2) - this one too xD)
01:07:995 (67995|2,67995|4) - no sound ? o.o
01:41:578 (101578|4) - i know you already know that there's no synt here like theothers but can you explain to me what sound that you layer here then o.o
02:00:995 (120995|1,120995|2,120995|4) - maybe just make this 2 note ? since the sound seems same with 02:00:828 (120828|4,120828|2) - or maybe make 02:00:828 - 3 note since it's same with 02:01:245 (121245|6,121245|0,121245|5) - and 02:00:995 (120995|4,120995|2,120995|1) -
03:17:495 (197495|4) - isn't this one louder than 03:17:578 (197578|6,197578|3) - ?
03:36:578 - i hear a kick too in here, but i think it's up to you to add it or no o.o
03:39:412 - 03:40:745 - seriously the SV is really confusing here to play
03:51:078 (231078|3) - what about end the LN on 03:51:245 - and add a new LN on 03:51:245 - in 7th collumn and move 03:51:412 (231412|6) - to 4th collumn ? since 03:51:078 (231078|3,231078|0) - one of these LN should be 1/2 like 03:49:578 (229578|2,229745|3,229912|4,230078|6,230245|3,230412|4,230578|5,230745|6,230912|5) - and i can hear the 1/2
04:00:745 - can you atleast add 1 note on 1st collumn ? for the synt ._.
04:41:828 (281828|4) - what about move this to 1st collumn ? since 04:41:745 (281745|2,281745|5,281828|3,281828|4,281912|2,281912|5) - this pattern make it looks like there's a 1/2 snare xD (you know, something like 04:49:412 (289412|4,289412|1,289495|5,289495|2,289578|4,289578|1) - )
04:54:912 (294912|4,294912|0) - 05:05:578 (305578|3,305578|0) - maybe just 1 note please? no snare here, just like you do on 04:33:412 (273412|0,273412|2,273412|6,273495|1,273495|5,273495|3,273578|6,273578|2) -
ok that's all..