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Sharlo - START:DASH!!

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Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年7月23日 at 19:34:40

Artist: Sharlo
Title: START:DASH!!
Source: Love Live! School idol project
Tags: lovelive IamKwaN Crystal ラブライブ！ muse
BPM: 150
Filesize: 3579kb
Play Time: 01:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Crystal's Hard (3.01 stars, 268 notes)
  2. Easy (1.51 stars, 139 notes)
  3. Insane (3.9 stars, 346 notes)
  4. KwaN's Normal (1.81 stars, 160 notes)
Download: Sharlo - START:DASH!!
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Normal by IamKwaN
Hard by Crystal
Last edited by Karen , edited 20 times in total.
Sharlo
667 posts
Joined May 2012
Sharlo
前排兹磁
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
liaoxingyao
。。。。。
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
From qq群
夏蘿大法好好好
[General]
  1. 把Countdown倒數關掉吧
    WidescreenStoryboard也是，如果沒有SB就關掉吧
    加個自定義combo顏色？
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:483 (2,4) - 這個4放到2如何，因為後面三連打很容易就錯誤讀圖或者誤按了
    00:16:283 (5,1) - blanket
    00:17:283 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - 這個試著每一下的間距遞增如何？像這樣
    SPOILER
    00:17:283 (2) - NC？看你後面的那個也有NC
    00:40:483 (7,2) - blanket
    00:40:483 (7,1,2) - 我覺得這個flow有點奇怪，建議換個順點的放法
    01:01:283 (4) - 這個可以放下一點，和2 blanket也行
    01:03:283 (1,2,3) - 這個flow也好奇怪，建議01:03:083 (1,2,1) - ctrl+G換個方向放
    01:18:483 (4,5,6) - 放個正三角形吧
    01:42:083 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 這個和上面說的那個同樣做法吧
[Crystal's Hard]
  1. 00:20:883 (3,1) - blanket的不夠好，差一點點
    00:35:683 (5) - hard放這種短滑條會不會太難了，雖然150BPM但也不建議啊
    00:43:083 (2,3) - ctrl+G換個方向放？
    01:44:683 (1,2,3) - 要是我的話會直接放個折返好了，免得坑了玩家，當然這個改不改都行= =
[Easy]
  1. 00:05:883 (3) - 這折返略違和啊，或許跟白線會比較好？
    01:17:283 (3) - 漏了個whistle音效
    01:36:483 (2,3) - 沒blanket好，差一點點
    01:44:483 (4,1) - EZ轉盤要隔兩拍
    EZ排版改動就不多說了，因為改太多然後會由於DS導致要remap的節奏=.=
美麗，祝順利起飛~
Kamio Misuzu
580 posts
Joined November 2012
Kamio Misuzu
ll就喜欢这个 :)
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW
1/100

[General]

偶像的歌竟敢把tags空着

偶像的歌竟敢不选combo colors

偶像的歌竟敢不关倒计时

综上所述你已经死了

EZ之后直接Hard了？

[Insane]

AR8看上去有点慢

00:12:483 (2,3) - 这两个看上去就像是多余的东西尤其是00:12:883 (3) - ，但是去掉的话是不可能的，照着00:10:283 (1,2,3) - 这样子差不多的摆挺好，或者这样？fyigvgaghdgdea

00:16:283 (5,1) - blanket，但是对象是00:15:483 (2) - 的滑条尾就没问题了

00:17:283 (2) - 这里似乎更应该用NC，00:16:683 (1) - 这里就不太必要，偶像唱出HEY的时候滑条上的数字都是一样的多好看，而且之后也分组了，很明显的分成了三个组但是NC居然不一样

00:20:083 (1,2,3,4) - 这里有点想跟肛琴也，4个1/4折返滑条看上去也不错的样子

00:27:683 (5) - 跟00:28:083 (1) - 一样看上去就挺好，这滑条弯的看上去也没什么意义

00:33:283 (3) - →（209，130），无关紧要

00:35:683 (1,2,3,4,1) - 都这么放了，这个串就可以试试看拉大点间距，0.7-0.8的DS？

00:41:283 (2) - 这个和00:40:883 (1,3) - 有同样间距更好吧？

00:48:283 (7,8) - 换一下位置感觉跟吉他音似乎更准一点，不过也是有点玄学

01:01:483 (5) - NC？

01:07:483 (4,5) - 光看节奏的话这里似乎更适合折返滑条

01:41:683 (1) - 这个NC看上去似乎没啥必要

01:44:083 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 结尾这串放的毫无亮点，这个串的前四个小间距后四个大间距而且作出一定的形状会好一点？我随便糊了一个卵用没有的东西 sdyusvsukbuihvl

[xiaoxingxingshabi]

OD6？

00:35:283 (4,5,6,7,1) - 这个打起来可能有点难度的，可能对读图和切指有点门槛，而且后面还有3连

01:21:083 (2,3) - blanket

01:25:083 (4,1) - 间距，感觉这里没啥必要变间距，反而看上去有点奇怪，不管是1.25还是1.10都没问题但是你偏偏弄个1.03

01:30:483 (1,1) - 完全相同的地方Insane和Hard的NC居然不一样，建议两个难度统一

[Esay]

不会 美丽
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

Kencho wrote:

From qq群
夏蘿大法好好好
[General]
  1. 把Countdown倒數關掉吧
    WidescreenStoryboard也是，如果沒有SB就關掉吧
    加個自定義combo顏色？
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:483 (2,4) - 這個4放到2如何，因為後面三連打很容易就錯誤讀圖或者誤按了
    00:16:283 (5,1) - blanket
    00:17:283 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - 這個試著每一下的間距遞增如何？像這樣
    SPOILER
    00:17:283 (2) - NC？看你後面的那個也有NC
    00:40:483 (7,2) - blanket
    00:40:483 (7,1,2) - 我覺得這個flow有點奇怪，建議換個順點的放法
    01:01:283 (4) - 這個可以放下一點，和2 blanket也行
    01:03:283 (1,2,3) - 這個flow也好奇怪，建議01:03:083 (1,2,1) - ctrl+G換個方向放
    01:18:483 (4,5,6) - 放個正三角形吧
    01:42:083 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 這個和上面說的那個同樣做法吧

[Easy]
  1. 00:05:883 (3) - 這折返略違和啊，或許跟白線會比較好？ 重音从红线起的
    01:17:283 (3) - 漏了個whistle音效
    01:36:483 (2,3) - 沒blanket好，差一點點
    01:44:483 (4,1) - EZ轉盤要隔兩拍 这个没事
    EZ排版改動就不多說了，因為改太多然後會由於DS導致要remap的節奏=.=
美麗，祝順利起飛~
no reply=fix :)
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

T-Mac wrote:

1/100

[General]

偶像的歌竟敢把tags空着

偶像的歌竟敢不选combo colors

偶像的歌竟敢不关倒计时

综上所述你已经死了

EZ之后直接Hard了？ 在等gd

[Insane]

AR8看上去有点慢

00:12:483 (2,3) - 这两个看上去就像是多余的东西尤其是00:12:883 (3) - ，但是去掉的话是不可能的，照着00:10:283 (1,2,3) - 这样子差不多的摆挺好，或者这样？fyigvgaghdgdea 没看懂为啥是多余的

00:16:283 (5,1) - blanket，但是对象是00:15:483 (2) - 的滑条尾就没问题了

00:17:283 (2) - 这里似乎更应该用NC，00:16:683 (1) - 这里就不太必要，偶像唱出HEY的时候滑条上的数字都是一样的多好看，而且之后也分组了，很明显的分成了三个组但是NC居然不一样

00:20:083 (1,2,3,4) - 这里有点想跟肛琴也，4个1/4折返滑条看上去也不错的样子 有道理，但是我觉得这样也好，善良如我

00:27:683 (5) - 跟00:28:083 (1) - 一样看上去就挺好，这滑条弯的看上去也没什么意义 这跟前面是一组的

00:33:283 (3) - →（209，130），无关紧要 没有吧

00:35:683 (1,2,3,4,1) - 都这么放了，这个串就可以试试看拉大点间距，0.7-0.8的DS？ 善良

00:41:283 (2) - 这个和00:40:883 (1,3) - 有同样间距更好吧？

00:48:283 (7,8) - 换一下位置感觉跟吉他音似乎更准一点，不过也是有点玄学 玄学

01:01:483 (5) - NC？

01:07:483 (4,5) - 光看节奏的话这里似乎更适合折返滑条

01:41:683 (1) - 这个NC看上去似乎没啥必要

01:44:083 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 结尾这串放的毫无亮点，这个串的前四个小间距后四个大间距而且作出一定的形状会好一点？我随便糊了一个卵用没有的东西 sdyusvsukbuihvl 我这就不服了，偶像的歌你敢做这么鬼畜？我要举报了。
牛逼
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
Aji Ren <3
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
No kd。夏萝唱的真是好。（对不起我词穷了）

Insane:
00:26:083 (5) - 头用drum addition clap，尾用drum addition finish
00:29:283 (5,6,1) - 第一个和第三个用drum clap，第二个用drum finish或者你的whistle
00:32:083 (3,4) - 跟前面类似的改动。总之这些转折的地方，原曲都不是你的clap，所以用drum addition会合适很多。举一反三的就不列举了。

星星的Hard：
00:35:683 (5,6,7) - 这种梗对Hard会不会过难了

就这样了，实在摸不出来。。
Crystal
Former osu!catch Champion: 2018
1,123 posts
Joined June 2012
Crystal

Kencho wrote:

From qq群
夏蘿大法好好好
[General]
  1. 把Countdown倒數關掉吧
    WidescreenStoryboard也是，如果沒有SB就關掉吧
    加個自定義combo顏色？
[Crystal's Hard]
  1. 00:20:883 (3,1) - blanket的不夠好，差一點點 改了
    00:35:683 (5) - hard放這種短滑條會不會太難了，雖然150BPM但也不建議啊 改了
    00:43:083 (2,3) - ctrl+G換個方向放？ 没必要 而且后面就好难了
    01:44:683 (1,2,3) - 要是我的話會直接放個折返好了，免得坑了玩家，當然這個改不改都行= = 这个爽呀
美麗，祝順利起飛~
@狗币&Adol Christin: all fixed, thanks!
@人格:肯哥和狗币提到的general的东西帮我改一下

SPOILER
osu file format v14

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Artist:Sharlo
ArtistUnicode:Sharlo
Creator:Karen
Version:Crystal's Hard
Source:Love Live! School idol project
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40,252,31883,2,0,P|32:212|36:164,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,116,32283,2,0,P|136:156|123:203,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,260,32683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,260,32883,6,0,L|380:256,2,160,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,312,33883,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,272,34083,5,8,0:0:0:0:
60,272,34483,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,272,34883,2,0,P|68:224|52:148,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,112,35283,2,0,L|36:68,3,40,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,40,35683,2,0,L|119:79,3,40,8|8|8|8,3:0|3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
172,144,36083,6,0,P|224:172|328:112,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,88,36683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,144,36883,2,0,P|164:192|172:236,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,284,37283,2,0,L|328:280,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,332,37683,6,0,B|408:296|408:296|420:164,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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324,152,38483,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,100,38683,2,0,P|208:100|160:120,2,80,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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316,292,40283,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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312,48,41283,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,48,41483,2,0,P|316:87|308:126,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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176,152,42083,2,0,L|88:156,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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144,316,43083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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156,124,45483,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,20,61283,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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276,68,65283,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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340,128,66083,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,200,66283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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316,356,66883,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,356,67083,2,0,P|240:356|168:312,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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172,80,68083,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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384,60,68683,2,0,B|424:76|456:68|456:68|480:104|464:160,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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476,296,69483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,348,69683,2,0,P|344:360|320:352,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,70083,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,304,70283,2,0,P|192:328|100:288,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,240,70883,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,240,71083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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56,104,71883,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,36,72083,2,0,P|156:40|280:36,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,100,72683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,52,72883,6,0,P|416:116|404:240,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,352,73683,2,0,P|240:288|252:164,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,88,74483,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,88,74883,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,88,75283,2,0,L|56:84,3,40,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,168,75683,2,0,L|56:172,3,40,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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88,356,76483,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,320,76683,2,0,P|220:300|320:352,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,292,77283,2,0,P|436:276|488:288,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,180,77683,5,2,0:0:0:0:
480,180,77883,2,0,P|443:194|403:193,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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100,104,78883,2,0,P|108:52|100:20,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,64,79283,5,2,0:0:0:0:
32,152,79483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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32,320,79883,2,0,P|72:344|192:288,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,360,80483,2,0,P|304:348|340:360,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,324,80883,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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484,160,81483,2,0,P|424:144|340:192,1,160
304,268,82083,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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224,228,82483,6,0,P|156:224|124:236,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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224,228,83283,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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380,32,85883,2,0,L|296:36,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,80,86283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,40,86483,1,2,0:0:0:0:
68,84,86683,2,0,P|60:148|68:176,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,232,87083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,176,87283,5,2,0:0:0:0:
260,224,87483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,180,87683,2,0,P|392:176|416:184,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,256,88083,1,10,0:0:0:0:
472,256,88183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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416,348,88883,6,0,P|368:364|268:324,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,252,89483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,304,89683,2,0,P|100:316|64:304,2,80,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,252,90283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,180,90483,5,4,0:0:0:0:
444,68,91683,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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380,28,93083,2,0,P|320:24|280:32,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,76,93483,2,0,P|152:84|56:64,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,156,94083,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,232,94283,2,0,P|24:280|36:328,2,80,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,280,94883,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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264,284,101483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
小人斗膽用了自己的combo color跟音效
ren大爺看看滿意不滿意

http://puu.sh/iIm6g/2cdf6f9120.rar
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

Adol Christin wrote:

No kd。夏萝唱的真是好。（对不起我词穷了）

Insane:
00:26:083 (5) - 头用drum addition clap，尾用drum addition finish
00:29:283 (5,6,1) - 第一个和第三个用drum clap，第二个用drum finish或者你的whistle
00:32:083 (3,4) - 跟前面类似的改动。总之这些转折的地方，原曲都不是你的clap，所以用drum addition会合适很多。举一反三的就不列举了。
好吧 都改了
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

IamKwaN wrote:

小人斗膽用了自己的combo color跟音效
ren大爺看看滿意不滿意

http://puu.sh/iIm6g/2cdf6f9120.rar
kwan大大不要这样，小的受不起
Ipas
806 posts
Joined September 2013
Ipas
Hello~
Requested by KwaN xD
Your mapset seems good . Maybe there's just a little suggestion xD

[~General]
  1. Add the username of your GDs to tags
  2. Use custom combo colors? Default one doesn't fits better . You can use combo colors from KwaN's difficulty
  3. There's not much recovery time for adding countdown, so better to uncheck it
  4. Uncheck Widescreen support since you didn't use stroryboard, and uncheck Letterbox During Breaks since there's no beak time throughout the song which mapped
[Crystal's Hard]
  1. 00:06:483 (1) - I don't think this NC really necessary, this slider has the same rhythm with previous 3 objects
  2. 00:19:083 (2,3) - Looks neater if blanket-ed
  3. 01:44:683 (1,3) - This NC must be swapped . There's no reason why you put NC on (1), because it has same rhythm with previous object while (3) has a cymbal sound that can be emphasized better with NC
[Insane]
  1. 00:08:683 (1) - Avoid this offbeat slider? The end of slider falls on the place that should be emphasized
  2. 00:10:483 - This section must be filled, and I guess it fits more with 1/1 slider . I see no reason why you put 00:10:283 (1) - on 00:10:283 - . You can emphasis more the current rhythm you used here if you filled this one, and keep your slider end falls on 00:10:883 - if you used 1/1 slider pattern . So the current rhythm will looks like this ~ Image starts from 00:10:283 - ~
    SPOILER
  3. 00:43:283 (3) - Straighten this slider? It looks better and neater compared to 00:42:483 (1) -
  4. 00:48:483 (8,1) - These two have the same spacing like previous 1/2 jumps, even this is larger a bit . I know you want to keep this triangle flow, but to avoid misread, maybe you can stack (8) with (1) so (8) still on line of triangle flow even though it doesn't makes triangle anymore
  5. 01:03:083 (1) - I think this NC is not really necessary . No such a proper beat to be place by NC here
  6. 01:33:483 (1) - If you give NC here, 01:34:283 (4) - must be putted NC too, since (4) still louder than (1), which has given NC
  7. 01:39:883 (5,1) - Swap NC to keep consistency on 01:33:483 (1) - , then give 01:40:883 (3) - NC too with the same reason above
[]
Nothing to say for Easy and KwaN's, Good Job~
Good Luck everyone~
xiyangOvO
106 posts
Joined June 2013
xiyangOvO
前排围观。。。。
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

Ipas wrote:

Hello~
Requested by KwaN xD
Your mapset seems good . Maybe there's just a little suggestion xD

[~General]
  1. Add the username of your GDs to tags
  2. Use custom combo colors? Default one doesn't fits better . You can use combo colors from KwaN's difficulty
  3. There's not much recovery time for adding countdown, so better to uncheck it
  4. Uncheck Widescreen support since you didn't use stroryboard, and uncheck Letterbox During Breaks since there's no beak time throughout the song which mapped
all fixed

[Insane]
  1. 00:08:683 (1) - Avoid this offbeat slider? The end of slider falls on the place that should be emphasized i think the slider's head is the strong beat that should be emphasized.
  2. 00:10:483 - This section must be filled, and I guess it fits more with 1/1 slider . I see no reason why you put 00:10:283 (1) - on 00:10:283 - . You can emphasis more the current rhythm you used here if you filled this one, and keep your slider end falls on 00:10:883 - if you used 1/1 slider pattern . So the current rhythm will looks like this ~ Image starts from 00:10:283 - ~
    SPOILER
  3. 00:43:283 (3) - Straighten this slider? It looks better and neater compared to 00:42:483 (1) -
  4. 00:48:483 (8,1) - These two have the same spacing like previous 1/2 jumps, even this is larger a bit . I know you want to keep this triangle flow, but to avoid misread, maybe you can stack (8) with (1) so (8) still on line of triangle flow even though it doesn't makes triangle anymore reworked here
  5. 01:03:083 (1) - I think this NC is not really necessary . No such a proper beat to be place by NC here
  6. 01:33:483 (1) - If you give NC here, 01:34:283 (4) - must be putted NC too, since (4) still louder than (1), which has given NC no need NC here, i just put NC on each big white line.
  7. 01:39:883 (5,1) - Swap NC to keep consistency on 01:33:483 (1) - , then give 01:40:883 (3) - NC too with the same reason above ^
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Nothing to say for Easy and KwaN's, Good Job~
Good Luck everyone~
Thanks for your mod! :)
Bara-
11,955 posts
Joined April 2013
Bara-
Mod as requested

[General]
Add AudioLeadIn, as said to you in-game

[Easy]
  1. 00:05:883 (3,1) - A blanekt would make this nicer and look better
Great diff. Usually I really dislike upbeat sliders, but they are well done here

[Kwan's Normal]
  1. 00:05:283 - Add a circle. It's really hard to follow those red-ticked sliders, especially where there is a (soft) sound here in the background
  2. 00:08:083 (2,3) - Please blanket them, I'm persoanlly no fan of strong curves in lower diffs
  3. 01:04:483 (2,3) - Blanket is really of, please fix it
And another great diff.
Oh please look a little better, cause I still see a few polishing issues (like blankets) You don't need to fix them, but it's recommended to make the map look nicer. Decided not to post them here, cause I don't want to nazi mod

[Crystal's Hard]
  1. 00:10:483 (1) - It might be me, but it feels weird having the vocals start on a reverse, please make this into a circle, and a 1/1 slider afterwards to follow the vocals better
  2. 00:12:083 (1) - ^^
  3. 00:13:683 (5) - Nc, as you use NC before every 4 beats, and here it goes on for 8 beats
  4. 00:16:883 (1) - See above
  5. 00:35:283 (4,5) - Spacing between them is pretty high, consider lowering it (Move (5) to 104:112 for example)
  6. 00:45:283 (7,1,2,3) - Blanket
  7. 01:15:283 (5,6) - Again, kinda high spacing, please tone it down a bit
and another great diff
So fun to play with DT/NC <3

[Insane]
  1. 00:35:283 (2) - Nc, feels better for reading (and you did an NC at 00:35:683 (1) -
  2. 00:49:683 (3) - I kinda dislike this slider because the head and tail overlap each other. Try something like this
    SPOILER
  3. 01:14:483 (1,2) - The 3/4 here feel very weird, please make them 1/2, it fits more IMO
  4. 01:31:883 - Add a circle for the trumpet type of sound
  5. 01:31:983 - ^^
  6. 01:36:483 (4) - Really minor, move up to 217:79-78 so the stack is better
  7. 01:44:483 (6) - NC? It fits betterwith the stream(Same happened at 00:35:683 (1) - but there it was for reading)
Such a great mapset
Call me back
Edit: Added the star icon
Karen
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Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
all fixed in my diff except this:
  • 01:44:483 (6) - i think it's no need to NC here because there is nothing hard to read here, i added NC 00:35:683 (1) - here because 00:35:583 (4,1) - this stream jump.
thanks for your great mod.
Crystal
Former osu!catch Champion: 2018
1,123 posts
Joined June 2012
Crystal

Ipas wrote:

Hello~
Requested by KwaN xD
Your mapset seems good . Maybe there's just a little suggestion xD

[Crystal's Hard]
  1. 00:06:483 (1) - I don't think this NC really necessary, this slider has the same rhythm with previous 3 objects it is to make the pattern more readable
  2. 00:19:083 (2,3) - Looks neater if blanket-ed ok
  3. 01:44:683 (1,3) - This NC must be swapped . There's no reason why you put NC on (1), because it has same rhythm with previous object while (3) has a cymbal sound that can be emphasized better with NC ok

baraatje123 wrote:

Mod as requested

[Crystal's Hard]
  1. 00:10:483 (1) - It might be me, but it feels weird having the vocals start on a reverse, please make this into a circle, and a 1/1 slider afterwards to follow the vocals better i see no problems here, 00:10:483 downbeat is here. i dont think it is weird to have a reverse on starting vocal. also, the recommended pattern seems not continuous
  2. 00:12:083 (1) - ^^
  3. 00:13:683 (5) - Nc, as you use NC before every 4 beats, and here it goes on for 8 beats ok
  4. 00:16:883 (1) - See above
  5. 00:35:283 (4,5) - Spacing between them is pretty high, consider lowering it (Move (5) to 104:112 for example) i dont like overlapping them, i think current one is fine enough. it is decent for "hard", imo.
  6. 00:45:283 (7,1,2,3) - Blanket ok
  7. 01:15:283 (5,6) - Again, kinda high spacing, please tone it down a bit
and another great diff
So fun to play with DT/NC <3
Such a great mapset
Call me back
Edit: Added the star icon
thanks for modding!!
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