1. Advanced (2.52 stars, 278 notes)
2. Another (4.92 stars, 512 notes)
3. Extra (5.59 stars, 628 notes)
4. Hard (3.37 stars, 376 notes)
5. Insane (4.5 stars, 486 notes)
6. Normal (1.96 stars, 194 notes)

Heloo~ :3 M4M from your queue~

These are just suggestions. If you don't want to change it. Feel free to do so.

GENERAL

Okay~ That's all Sorry~ I still can't mod insane~
Good Luck for Ranking

Peachtrees wrote:

M4M for your Queue >w</~

Easy

00:14:949 (4) - I feel like making this two circles goes along better with the build-up in the music...makes the section a little more taxing, which feels appropriate ya

00:20:967 (3,4,1) - triangle here is abit off (assuming that's what you were going for) oh yea

00:25:841 (3) - very picky, but I feel like creating a sharper angle with the red anchor goes along better with the vocals here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3144911 something like this perhaps? ya

00:53:081 (2,4) - wouldn't stacking these two feel even better/more natural to play? 4 already appears by the time you hit 2 so it would make things more confusing htan i want them to be

01:11:785 (4) - perhaps curve this a little? the drop from 3 to 4 feels a little sharp and curving this woul make the angle required to properly catch this easier ya

01:44:690 (2) - I was told that touching the hp bar isn't unrankable, I guess you should be up-to-date on these kinds of things :c doesnt really matter but ya

01:52:719 (4) - could 'fix' the spacing one this for perfect symmetry ya

Normal

00:06:408 (1,2) - something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3144939 feels nicer to me, flow feels a bit harsh ya

00:31:002 (5,1) - would be neat to have these blanket ovo ya

00:37:311 (4,5,6) - how about having 5's tail face more in the direction of 6? doesn't have to perfectly align but the flow currently feels unneccessarily...dirty? I guess? not sure how to properly word this lol ya

00:52:794 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3144964 looks a tad bit neater to me idk seems too bent upwards

01:46:411 (2,3) - I think creating a sharper angle between these feels a bit more fitting than just moving in a straigh line (obviously not making it overlap with 01:45:550 (4) - ) ya

02:05:634 (2,1) - eeehhh really nazi and completely optional, but you could curve the tail of 2 a little more for a neater blanket i like not-full-blanketslol it makes no sense but fully roundness not what i wanted

Hard

00:15:519 (1) - curve this a little more? I feel like that overall help make this play a little smoother since it makes it easier to catch the next slider ya

00:19:820 (4,1) - I feel like 4 could be moved up a little to make the 'drop' a little more intense, I don't feel like that'd feel overdone it definitely feels more impactful 00:17:526 (4,1) - here ya

00:36:307 (2) - curve this a little more? also, and this is a personal opinon, but going in a straigt line here feels kinda boring compared to the previous sectiong :/ ya

00:43:906 (3,1) - deinitely feels like these could be a little more spaced out. I feel like this'd be lots of fun because the player already has the momentum going from 2->3 and then having a jump that's a little more taxing would fit perfectly fine I think ive got all spacing stuff distance snapped so i dunno consistency

00:55:949 (2) - move this to the left a bit to properly catch the slider movement? I know you'd like to have this stacked with 00:54:085 (2) - but it actually kinda stood out to me as being uncomfortable :c ya

01:29:786 (3,1) - why not make 1 a copy of 3? I feel like a little more 'swing' going into that slider would play nicely ;w; idk what you mean things seem okay tho

01:36:088 (2,3,4,1) - could do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3145001 ? feels a little more umm interesting to play dont want circular flow from 4->1 sooo

02:08:226 (2) - very minor and probably not as relevant for the actual gameplay as I'd like to think, but having it angle like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3145012 feels a tad bit nicer oklol

Light Insane

00:15:519 (1,2,3) - sharp angle between these doesn't feel nice :c ya

00:21:540 (4,1) - nazi stack ya

00:31:289 (5,1) - might just be me, but I was totally expecting this to be some sort of jump, since I think the song kinda calls for it too wanting to keep all 3/4slider->object spacing low on less-insane-insane so no can do

00:33:583 (5) - having this face downwards would feel a lot nicer I think, this currently feels unneccessarily harsh or harsh because downbeat B)

00:52:794 (3,4) - perhaps space these out a bit more? they feel a little close..like 1.3~ perhaps? made 1.2 cuz next instance was also 1.2

Really like the Kiai >w<

01:46:411 (2,3,4) - this is fine as it currently is, but the song feels like it kinda picks up in tempo a bit so I feel like making these sliderjumps a little more taxing would work nicely ya

02:00:461 (3,4) - same thing as 00:52:794 (3,4) -, they just feel a tad bit too close to me >< 1.2

Insane

00:17:812 (1) - curve this a bit more for a nice swing into 2? I feel as though that'd help improve the flow with having to re-arrange pretty much anything ya

00:24:407 (5,3) - would be neat to have these stacked too, though that's obviously not neccessary ;w; cant handle the pseudostackz

00:25:411 (4,5) - probably just me, but a sharp drop like this feels a tad bit..eh ya

00:55:949 (2,1) - is the spacing supposed to be like this between these two? ya or uh no it's not

01:32:074 (4,5,6,1) - feels like this jump could be a little harsher to me wanted more of a jump from 3->4tho

01:34:941 (2) - I really think that using a curve that loooks a it less subtle here plays/looks better. Makes the drop towards 3 feel nicer/more natural. Though it kinda ruins your pattern I guess ><...your call, keeping this is probably fine i dunno seems to play fine both ways and i like biggercurve

01:42:396 (5,6,1) - is mapping 1/4 here really neccessary? the sudden hault in motion felt a bit unnatural to me made flow less ew

01:59:027 (2,3) - feels a bit to harsh >< ya

Most, if not all, of the things I pointed out were highly subjective, so see if this was any good for you and then mod back on your own accord.

AsakuraNe wrote:

Will use Box >< It's too long xD

Heloo~ :3 M4M from your queue~

These are just suggestions. If you don't want to change it. Feel free to do so.

GENERAL

1. Uncheck widecreen support on all diffs yea to both
2. Add to Tags: The Sufferer & the Witness punk rock Melodic hardcore Tim McIlrath Joe Principe Chris Chasse Brandon Barnes

EASY

1. Use Grid Size 4 so to have the right Distance spacing not relevant when grid snapping is disabled :p
2. 00:07:832 - Add 2nd anchor point and curve it so to compliment the next slider like this: http://puu.sh/hSxma/fa4a12dca5.jpg doesnt flow from 3 very well with the curve tho
3. 00:10:964 - Move this circle a little down. It's touching the HP bar~ ya
4. 00:11:248 - Curve both sides to compliment w/ the next slider like this: http://puu.sh/hSxK0/fb9e2f311c.jpg yea uh seems better without the curve id say
5. 00:15:519 - Try this hitsound: Make the sampleset soft and the additions normal loses all the impact soo nah
6. 00:19:246 - Copy 2 and Paste here then Ctrl+JG to maintain consistency consistency with what?
7. 00:20:967 - Move this slider at x:216 y:160 for this not to be too cramped like this: http://puu.sh/hSzu5/8ee3c2053a.jpg triangles are pretty common :p
8. 00:21:540 - Don't curve to compliment with 2~ put a red anchor point or just copy 2 and rotate by 142 degrees seems way unnecessary tho
9. 00:22:400 - Make the sampleset soft and the additions normal same thoughts as the last one uhh
10. 00:25:268 - Move the middle point at x:472 y:272 what does that even do...
11. 00:25:841 - Compliment with the previous slider and also making a triangle pattern like this: http://puu.sh/hSzlx/55c0136abc.jpg peachtrees actually suggested that and i did it from there lol
12. 00:28:995 - Fix DS~ use grid size 4. Also, make a triangle so to make 00:29:282 go a little up and not out of the mapping area did the spacing thing, other stuff way useless
13. 00:31:576 - Make the sampleset soft and the additions normal yea no
14. 00:35:590 - Copy 2 and paste at here then CTrl+H
15. ^(from the one above) I noticed that the 3 and the 2 at 00:37:311 are complimenting each other because they're both straight. Then I guess you should change the 2 at 00:35:017 - It's already curved down so curved it a little more so to compliment with 1 uh what it's fine
16. 00:38:171 - Move this a little down to stack 00:38:458(1) with 00:35:590(3) 's Tail those objects are over 3 seconds apart it does not matter lol
17. 00:40:751 - Make the sampleset soft and the additions normal w
18. 00:41:898 - Copy 4 and Paste here then Ctrl+JHG im not seeing why this matters at all
19. 00:43:906 - Move 2 at x:100 y:196 then move 3 at x:180 y:244 why tho whyyyy
20. ^ 00:41:898(3,4,1,2,3,4) - Move both sliders up so to make more space for 00:45:339(1,2)
21. 00:48:207 - Copy 1 and paste here then Ctrl+H uh
22. 00:48:780 - Move middlepoint at x:360 y:120 that does like nothing wat
23. 00:49:927 - Remove 2nd red point and Curve it instead like this: http://puu.sh/hSBeG/86619c2c7c.jpg The curve point is at x:511 y:144 thats silly
24. 00:54:228 - Stack 4 to 2 for better flow and move 1 up a little at x:184 y:240 to make a straight line explained why it's like that to peachtrees too
25. 00:57:956 - Move 3 at x:244 y:156 for better flow how
26. 01:01:351 - Make the sampleset soft and the additions normal about
27. 01:05:195 - Move middle point at x:500 y:136 and endpoint at x:492 y :196 nah
28. 01:47:271 - CTrl+H then remove red point and curve it instead. Blanket with end tail of 2 all
29. 01:48:418 - Make the sampleset soft and the additions normal this
30. 01:51:859 - Add red middle point at x:428 y:252 stuff
31. 01:59:314 - Curve this up and the tail end should be facing to the next slider is
32. 02:01:034 - Put a red middle point to compliment with above slider like this: http://puu.sh/hSCkY/63070ab17d.jpg useless

NORMAL

1. Use grid size 4 for perfect spacing im just gonna mark the thigns that were changed that'll be a bit easier. most of this stuff is changing minor things away from any intentions or they're pointless
2. 00:07:832 - Change it like this: http://puu.sh/hSFyl/9b8f972f8a.jpg
3. 00:12:957 - Remove the curve to be consistent
4. 00:14:949 - Remove curve
5. 00:15:234 - Make this straight and the same w/ 00:14:380
6. 00:15:519 - Make the sampleset soft and the additions normal
7. 00:18:386 - If you're gonna curve this, Curve 00:16:092 too or just make this a straight slider.
8. 00:19:533 - Make this opposte of 3 with like this: http://puu.sh/hSG7n/a9981f971d.jpg
9. 00:22:400 - Make the sampleset soft and the additions normal
10. 00:25:841 - Copy 1 and paste here the Ctrl+JH
11. 00:26:415 - How about this pattern? http://puu.sh/hSGhS/82c52ae161.jpg
12. 00:29:282 - Make this slider compliment w/ 4 like this: http://puu.sh/hSGww/c2e22ddad6.jpg
13. 00:31:576 - Make the sampleset soft and the additions normal
14. 00:31:576 - I'm kinda off here when playing. don't know why. How about changing to http://puu.sh/hSGEc/4ecb22b02c.jpg this?
15. http://puu.sh/hSGXD/a90b7c1782.jpg
16. ^(From the picture above) 00:34:443 - Move this 1 box above and should be symmetrical with the head of slider 2
17. ^ 00:34:720 - Move this to x:392 y:228 to be symmetrical w/ the incoming slider of 00:36:307(2)
18. ^ 00:35:017 - Move this to x:348 y:132
19. ^ 00:35:303 - Move this to x:352 y:28 to make a perfect Y shape
20. 00:36:164 - To follow the vocals more and for not to be off when playing. Use this pattern http://puu.sh/hSHcC/f28ade5751.jpg
21. 00:39:031 - Copy 5 and paste here then Ctrl+JH for consistency
22. 00:40:751 - Make the sampleset soft and the additions normal
23. 00:49:354 - Copy 3 and paste here then Ctrl+JH
24. 00:50:501 - Move endpoint to x:92 y:216
25. 00:53:368 - Straighten this. The vocals are the same anyway
26. 01:01:351 - Make the sampleset soft and the additions normal
27. 01:02:998 - Curve this a little like this: http://puu.sh/hSHJA/561cf265cc.jpg to complement w/ 01:01:351(1)
28. 01:12:334 - Copy 4 and paste here then Ctrl+JH
29. ^ 01:13:433 - Then put a little curve here
30. 01:16:728 - Don't curve
31. 01:32:360 - Change like this to complement w/ 3 and 2: http://puu.sh/hSHXl/b2e350497b.jpg
32. 01:42:683 - Copy 1 and paste here then Ctrl+JG
33. 01:46:697 - Move this down a little. Should be the symmetrical w/ 2 i actually did something here...from peachtree's mod lol
34. 01:47:558 - Better if not curved
35. 01:48:418 - Make the sampleset soft and the additions normal
36. 01:54:439 - Fix blanket by moving middlepoint to x:200 y:48 and endpoint at x:152 y:72 dunno how that got so messed up
37. 02:02:181 - Curve this to compliment w/ 4
38. 02:05:634 - Fix Blanket by moving 3rd to the last pont to x:376 y:128, 2nd to the last point to x:292 y:120 and endpoint to x:256 y:204

HARD

1. Use grid size 4 for perfect spacing
2. 00:15:234 - Curve this facing left to then change the next slider(1) into a straight slider like this: http://puu.sh/hSKz8/f7a5dff26b.jpg
3. 00:15:519 - Make the sampleset soft and the additions normal
4. ^(the 1st suggestion) 00:16:379 - Make this a straight slider
5. 00:18:959 - Copy 2 and paste here then Ctrl+JH
6. 00:20:393 - Fix Blanket by moving the endpoint to x:520 y:316
7. ^ 00:19:820 - Copy the slider above(2) and paste here then Ctrl+J
8. 00:22:400 - Make the sampleset soft and the additions normal
9. 00:24:981 - Fix Blanket by moving the middle point to x:288 y:40
10. 00:30:429 - Move the endpoint to x:396 y:240 to compliment w/ 2
11. 00:31:576 - Make the sampleset soft and the additions normal
12. 00:33:583 - Move the endpoint to x:40 y:240 to have the same direction w/ 2 before the middle red point
13. 00:34:013 - Curve this facing the right like this: http://puu.sh/hSLuz/8825bd8e91.jpg
14. 00:37:311 - Copy 2 and paste here then Ctrl+JG
15. 00:38:171 - Copy 1 and paste here then Ctrl+H
16. 00:39:605 - Remove curve
17. 00:41:612 - How about stacking 3 and 4 to look neat? :3
18. 00:57:382 - Move 3 like this to complement w/ 1 http://puu.sh/hSM7F/c2030ba3c3.jpg
19. 00:59:103 - Move this to x:36 y:176 to make a straight line. Also fix 3 for the straight line.
20. 00:59:946 - Copy 1 and paste here then Ctrl+G
21. 01:01:351 - Make the sampleset soft and the additions normal
22. 01:05:469 - Better if this is a straight slider
23. 01:12:060 - ^
24. 01:14:257 - Now, this should be curved a little
25. 01:32:360 - Straight slider here and it compliments with 3
26. 01:36:948 - Curve this up instead like this: http://puu.sh/hSMIO/18cd725588.jpg
27. 01:38:955 - Remove curve and be a straight slider
28. 00:40:751 - Make the sampleset soft and the additions normal
29. 01:40:963 - Ctrl+G
30. 01:42:683 - Curve this to compliment w/ 3
31. 01:46:984 - To fix blanket~ Move middlepoint to x:368 y:120 and endpoint at x:400 y:104
32. 01:47:558 - Move this a little up so not to touch 4
33. 01:48:418 - Make the sampleset soft and the additions normal
34. 01:49:278 - Straight this slider to compliment w/ 1
35. 01:55:299 - To fix blanket~ Move middlepoint to x:304 y:336
36. 01:56:160 - Copy 3 and Paste here then make the curve opposite of 3 so it's facing down
37. 01:58:454 - Remove curve
38. 02:01:034 - Looks neat if stacked w/ 3
39. 02:02:755 - ^ Stack w/ 1
40. 02:07:653 - Curve a little like 1
41. 02:09:086 - Curve this

i think we have very different ideas when mapping. it may be a good idea to figure out the mapper's intentions before writing walls of text which defy that :p

Okay~ That's all Sorry~ I still can't mod insane~
Good Luck for Ranking

intoon wrote:

SPOILER

hi

[Easy]

01:09:588 (3,1) - inconsistent distance? woops

[Normal]

00:33:870 (1,2) - would rather do something to differentiate this section from others
00:39:605 (3,4,5) - suggestion ya

1

um.... too hard?..
02:04:188 (5) - x384 y96? for DS i suppose

[Hard]

00:16:665 (1,2) - decrease DS? yea
00:23:547 (1,2,3) - make consistent DS each other? higher spacing on 2 cuz of the snare
00:29:999 (3) - x312 y136 wait what thats a huge jump for nothing lol
01:41:249 (4) - ctrl+G? not going for superflowy thing there :p
01:46:411 (2) - x320 y312 yea
01:47:414 - um... stream start here? avoiding any 1/4 circles on this diff so nah

01:59:601 (4) - x112 y56 snare tho
02:13:387 (4,1) - why not use 3/4 slider here? i think it's so good idea about here. maybe for the top 3 diffs, but not this one :p

[Light Insane]

01:03:547 (1,2) - so close than same partten.01:01:351 (1,2) - or 01:05:744 (1,2) - made it further
02:05:634 (1,1) - stack them? example) spacing works fine too tho :p

1

[Insane]

00:10:679 (4) - same extra diff it's got an extra repeat for the same reason why 00:06:693 (2) - 00:07:263 (4) - aren't just 1/4 sliders
00:21:253 (1,2) - decrease DS? so big jump yea
02:04:475 (1) - take out at slider's end? but... no emphasis wihtout a click

[Extra]

00:11:533 (3) - x272 y56 i knwo what you mean but i'm spacing things dependent on the song not whether it's equal between sliders
00:10:679 (4) -
00:22:113 (3) - ctrl+G ? and 00:22:257 (4) - too. not trying to make it super circular tho
00:23:547 (1,2) - ctrl+G? 1 has no emphasis tho
00:58:099 (2,3,1) - not good overlap imo. yeeeeeeeeeeeeez

1

01:12:334 (1,2) - so close than previous partten. increase DS? yea
01:29:505 (2,3,4) - suggestion too sharp between 4,5 tho ;-;

1

01:41:393 (5,1) - more closer them? ya
01:42:396 (5,6,1) - suggestion not really interested in blanketty stuff

1

pishifat wrote:

mod me pho

do you take paypal

1. Some stuff about your choice of difficulty names since I feel they don't reflect their actual map difficulty well:
   Easy - You're having high 1/1 beat density in a high BPM song, this doesn't suit as a beginner difficulty at all. Rename to Normal.
   Normal - Advanced fits better as difficulty name.
   ALso Light Insane isn't that light with its relatively small CS and intermediate jumps, you could just call it Insane and rename the actual Insane to Another.
2. Unsnapped preview time if you want to fix dat.
3. Maybe add hardcore to tags
4. 01:28:662 - Unnecessary greenline in the lower diffs (Easy-Hard)

1. 00:28:135 (3,4) - Small spacing inconsistency
2. 00:48:780 (3,4) - Blanket kthx. Same at 00:51:648 (4,1) -

1. 00:21:253 (1) - Would switch this off with two sliders,there's a strong drumbeat on where this slider ends.
2. 01:07:392 (5,6) - Stacking here feels wrong sicne you didn't do it at 01:02:998 (5,6) - 01:05:195 (4,5) - and it dampens the flow unnecessarily.
   How about:
   
   SPOILER

   

1. I found HP6.4 to be rather unforgiving, but then again im just noob player :v
2. 00:08:544 (5) - Finish? It's identical with 00:08:401 (4) - with the same intensity and yet you left it out. Same for 00:13:099 (5) -
3. 00:10:679 (4) - last repeat is actual overmap. It would be better without imo for a better transition. Same for your other insany diffs.
4. 00:18:673 (5) - Drum-sample on tail
5. 00:21:970 (2) - Drumclap instead of finish here?
6. 00:39:318 (6) - Finish on head, there's cymbal in the track here.
7. 01:44:834 (6,7) - Sounds like these should be 1/6 snapped like 01:41:393 (5) -
8. 01:46:267 (2) - I feel this jump is a bit overemphasized for what a relatively weak beat this actually is, tone down the spacing a bit, and let it slightly overlap with 6:
   
   SPOILER