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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on July 14, 2015 at 12:34:57 PM

Artist: penoreri
Title: Everlasting Message
Source: SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags: SDVX The 4th KACオリジナル楽曲コンテスト Original Song Contest KONAMI Arcade Championship RASIS Voltenizer Maxima 蒼弐 forever Queen
BPM: 230
Filesize: 8978kb
Play Time: 01:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. ADVANCED - 7Key (3.03 stars, 690 notes)
  2. EXHAUST - 7Key (4.38 stars, 1178 notes)
  3. GRAVITY - 7Key (5.33 stars, 1592 notes)
  4. NOVICE - 7Key (1.97 stars, 397 notes)
Download: penoreri - Everlasting Message
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After nearly a month of work~

WOW KAWAEE 22 STARS!!! WOW
Thanks for the BG ExUsagi :D

FOR QAT, there is a reason why there is no KIAI on this mapset. The hype part of the song is way to easy to play to have a kiai.

Thanks~
Waaaw thanks for the stars :
KawaEE
LordRaika
_S u w a k o_
Remillion Cross
_FrEsH_ChICkEn_
dosyeru
Love
Eternalie
RuberusuScarlet
Kuo Kyoka
Kyosuke-
ExUsagi
resuner
Raediaufar
-[ AmiShici ]-
Love
asdf
Fubukicat
Hi there Yulie
hope it will help :3
hey first modder >w< kyahhh !
Munya!
Collumn 7K = 1/2/3/4/5/6/7
[Gravity]
00:12:767 (12767|2,12897|5,13028|2) - this notes should be Double notes according to 00:12:636 (12636|3,12636|1) - same sounds
00:13:093 (13093|4) - just a question is this starting at the right place ? :o never see that before
00:29:201 (29201|4) - move to 7 00:28:941 (28941|6) - same sound :3
00:31:288 (31288|3) - move to 6 ^
00:38:136 (38136|5,38245|4,38332|3,38397|2,38506|1) - This is 1/3 stream
[Exhaust]
00:29:201 (29201|3) - move to 7 (same as gravity diff)
00:31:288 (31288|3) - move to 6 ^
[Advanced]
00:17:332 (17332|0) - add note
[Novice]
00:37:549 (37549|3) - move to 6 this note is higher picth tham 00:37:028 (37028|4) -
00:53:984 (53984|0,54115|0) - this sound like only one distinct sound to me ( you should probably make it only a LN )
01:07:810 (67810|3) - add another note to emphasize the little sound ?
01:39:962 (99962|5,99962|1) - I feel like it miss something here

sorry short mod =w=a abit troubled this days~

EDIT: That BG <3 why someone like this dosn't exist IRL ? LOL

Good Luck , Have a nice day yulie-chama
take a star :3b
[ A v a l o n ]
Julieee xD

7K Mod as requested . . .
huee, sorry my 7K skill is not enough . . . but i'll try

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

desu
NOVICE
  1. 00:01:811 - reduce to 3 notes, novice player will be surprised of this xD
  2. 00:07:028 (7028|4) - delete this note?,cuz kinda weird to be pressed, and the main piano that you follow is start here 00:07:288 -
  3. 00:09:115 - add note for comfortable intro imo
  4. 00:20:854 (20854|4) - basically, have same sound with this 00:19:810 (19810|3) - so, why not same column ?
  5. 00:22:680 (22680|3) - to 3, more nicely to plays =w=
  6. 00:25:549 (25549|3) - to 3, same reason as ^
  7. 00:26:593 (26593|4,26854|5,27115|6) - this pattern is kinda hard for novice player, what about 00:26:854 (26854|5) - move to 3 ?
  8. 00:28:941 (28941|6) - move to 5, according piano sound that i hear xD
  9. 00:33:897 - drum impact, add 1 additional note
  10. 00:35:201 (35201|3,35462|5) - what about to move these to 5 and 3 . . you can try that
  11. 00:39:636 - add a note, hmm why just 1 note, while the other of kind of this sund you use 3 like here 00:38:071 -
  12. 00:40:680 - start this, it seem to be inconsistent imo . . . you can try thishttp://puu.sh/hykaO/a683f568af.jpg just put 3 notes if contains cymbal only, and it will be not overmapped xD HIGH RECOMMENDED . . . i tested it desu . . . =w=)b
  13. 00:44:854 (44854|6,45245|6) - actually, this is not same sound xD . . so you can rearrange them
  14. 00:46:941 (46941|3,47332|4) - move to 5 and 3, more fit :3
  15. 00:52:549 (52549|0) - move that to 4, actally its kinda hard to pressed and it's not same sound . . .
  16. 00:53:984 (53984|0,54115|0) - ettooo, why not same as 00:45:636 (45636|6) - same sound right ?
  17. 00:54:506 (54506|3,54767|1) - move to 6 and 3, more fit i think xD
  18. 01:04:028 - try this ? http://puu.sh/hykAb/36266f0fd2.jpg
  19. 01:08:854 (68854|0) - to 3, more fit with piano, when you play it =w=
  20. 01:17:201 (77201|0) - move to 3, then add note on 5 here 01:18:245 - it will make fit with this note 01:18:636 -
  21. 01:20:593 (80593|6) - move this note to other column, actaually not same sound as 01:21:375 (81375|6) -
  22. 01:26:723 - try this ? http://puu.sh/hykSe/0f96968b30.jpg more fit if you play it imo, try it pls xD
  23. 01:28:419 (88419|3) - delete, and make LN from this 01:27:636 - to fill the piano roll
  24. 01:28:680 - & 01:29:397 - add new red timing section here, cuz the current section make it offbeat . . you can look at Spy's map for this timing section
  25. 01:32:136 (92136|3,92266|3) - get confused to press this note, actually ithink it's not same sound xD . . kinda hard to be pressed
  26. 01:39:962 - add note, feel weird if you didn't place a note here :o
  27. 01:49:484 - kinda overmapped for Novice diff xD . . . Julie pls don't kill me xD . . .you can try my suggestion on 00:40:680 -

    ADVANCED
  28. 00:24:506 - delete 1 note, no cymbal sound like 00:25:028 -
  29. 00:25:549 - same^
  30. 00:26:462 - missing piano, add note here =w=
  31. 00:33:897 - contains high piano sound with drum, add 1 note
  32. 00:43:941 - seems not melodical xD . . try this? http://puu.sh/hylK0/ac0cb5dc2b.jpg more get feeling on there :D
  33. 00:53:984 (53984|0,54115|0) - same sound as 00:45:636 (45636|6) -
  34. 01:01:941 - where's the piano note ;w; ? come on . . . try this? http://puu.sh/hylUE/421ded1ab4.jpg fit with piano imo xD
  35. 01:14:462 - add note to continous the piano . . . example http://puu.sh/hyman/c5502eeaf7.jpg
  36. 01:26:593 - try this, more fit when i play it imo http://puu.sh/hymjl/03e7acd904.jpg
  37. 01:28:680 - you can look at Spy's map about timing xD

done, sorry Julie, i can't mod the higher diff . .
i hope my mods help . . . Good luck =w=)b
Topic Starter
Julie

Eternalie wrote:

Hi there Yulie
hope it will help :3
hey first modder >w< kyahhh !
Munya!
Collumn 7K = 1/2/3/4/5/6/7
[Gravity]
00:12:767 (12767|2,12897|5,13028|2) - this notes should be Double notes according to 00:12:636 (12636|3,12636|1) - same sounds
00:13:093 (13093|4) - just a question is this starting at the right place ? :o never see that before
00:29:201 (29201|4) - move to 7 00:28:941 (28941|6) - same sound :3
00:31:288 (31288|3) - move to 6 ^
00:38:136 (38136|5,38245|4,38332|3,38397|2,38506|1) - This is 1/3 stream
[Exhaust]
00:29:201 (29201|3) - move to 7 (same as gravity diff)
00:31:288 (31288|3) - move to 6 ^
[Advanced]
00:17:332 (17332|0) - add note
[Novice]
00:37:549 (37549|3) - move to 6 this note is higher picth tham 00:37:028 (37028|4) -
00:53:984 (53984|0,54115|0) - this sound like only one distinct sound to me ( you should probably make it only a LN )
01:07:810 (67810|3) - add another note to emphasize the little sound ?
01:39:962 (99962|5,99962|1) - I feel like it miss something here

sorry short mod =w=a abit troubled this days~

EDIT: That BG <3 why someone like this dosn't exist IRL ? LOL H etern-tan >w<

Fixed mostly everything, just the piano solo part I'm considerating :D

Good Luck , Have a nice day yulie-chama
take a star :3b
Thanks a lots for the mods and stars <333

Fpr gravity testplayer LOL
00:11:984 (11984|3,11984|6,12071|2,12158|1,12201|2,12245|3,12288|4,12332|5,12375|6) -
00:38:158 (38158|5,38245|4,38332|3,38419|2,38506|1) -
OMG I feel so bad making my tester play this part, this got unsnap QAQ!!! when changing offset sad. Thanks etern mods , uwahh feel bad unsnap xD

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Julieee xD

7K Mod as requested . . .
huee, sorry my 7K skill is not enough . . . but i'll try

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

desu
NOVICE
  1. 00:01:811 - reduce to 3 notes, novice player will be surprised of this xD Nop, is only press note here and mini break after, and nothing before, number of note doesn't change.
  2. 00:07:028 (7028|4) - delete this note?,cuz kinda weird to be pressed, and the main piano that you follow is start here 00:07:288 - Piano part that I was mapping wont be consistent
  3. 00:09:115 - add note for comfortable intro imo ^
  4. 00:20:854 (20854|4) - basically, have same sound with this 00:19:810 (19810|3) - so, why not same column ? fix, nice catch
  5. 00:22:680 (22680|3) - to 3, more nicely to plays =w= Shouldn't be same as 00:21:897 - xD
  6. 00:25:549 (25549|3) - to 3, same reason as ^ same column as 00:25:028 - D:?
  7. 00:26:593 (26593|4,26854|5,27115|6) - this pattern is kinda hard for novice player, what about 00:26:854 (26854|5) - move to 3 ? Nop, don't follow song
  8. 00:28:941 (28941|6) - move to 5, according piano sound that i hear xD No, don't follow the piano chart
  9. 00:33:897 - drum impact, add 1 additional note Hard for novice due to this note 00:33:767 (33767|1) - .
  10. 00:35:201 (35201|3,35462|5) - what about to move these to 5 and 3 . . you can try that Pitch~ :D
  11. 00:39:636 - add a note, hmm why just 1 note, while the other of kind of this sund you use 3 like here 00:38:071 - Differnet rhythmn
  12. 00:40:680 - start this, it seem to be inconsistent imo . . . you can try thishttp://puu.sh/hykaO/a683f568af.jpg just put 3 notes if contains cymbal only, and it will be not overmapped xD HIGH RECOMMENDED . . . i tested it desu . . . =w=)b This llook freaking HARD to play, and overmap. You said 3 stairs note = hard for novice here
  13. 00:26:593 (26593|4,26854|5,27115|6) - , but this is a LOTS of 3 stairs notes ;w;...
  14. 00:44:854 (44854|6,45245|6) - actually, this is not same sound xD . . so you can rearrange them Okii nice, delete xD
  15. 00:46:941 (46941|3,47332|4) - move to 5 and 3, more fit :3 No fit the song
  16. 00:52:549 (52549|0) - move that to 4, actally its kinda hard to pressed and it's not same sound . . . Hmm, Imma check what other modder hear~ Thanks
  17. 00:53:984 (53984|0,54115|0) - ettooo, why not same as 00:45:636 (45636|6) - same sound right ? Ohh nice, yes was same sound, but I didn't know I did that on another part xD
  18. 00:54:506 (54506|3,54767|1) - move to 6 and 3, more fit i think xD Nop, won't fit with this 00:55:028 (55028|4) -
  19. 01:04:028 - try this ? http://puu.sh/hykAb/36266f0fd2.jpg nop ><....
  20. 01:08:854 (68854|0) - to 3, more fit with piano, when you play it =w= Move to 2
  21. 01:17:201 (77201|0) - move to 3, then add note on 5 here 01:18:245 - it will make fit with this note 01:18:636 - Fix :3
  22. 01:20:593 (80593|6) - move this note to other column, actaually not same sound as 01:21:375 (81375|6) - same as 01:20:071 (80071|6) - ,
  23. 01:26:723 - try this ? http://puu.sh/hykSe/0f96968b30.jpg more fit if you play it imo, try it pls xD No fit song XD
  24. 01:28:419 (88419|3) - delete, and make LN from this 01:27:636 - to fill the piano roll Don't understand ;w;
  25. 01:28:680 - & 01:29:397 - add new red timing section here, cuz the current section make it offbeat . . you can look at Spy's map for this timing section Time?
  26. 01:32:136 (92136|3,92266|3) - get confused to press this note, actually ithink it's not same sound xD . . kinda hard to be pressed I hear same ;w;
  27. 01:39:962 - add note, feel weird if you didn't place a note here :o Imma consider, right now, REALLy to hard to play LOL
  28. 01:49:484 - kinda overmapped for Novice diff xD . . . Julie pls don't kill me xD . . .you can try my suggestion on 00:40:680 - That sugestion look way to hard to read! and with lots of rhythmn change ;w;

    ADVANCED
  29. 00:24:506 - delete 1 note, no cymbal sound like 00:25:028 - Um is from my hitsound ;w; thats why didn't put that hitsound...but more note due to impact
  30. 00:25:549 - same^ ^
  31. 00:26:462 - missing piano, add note here =w= no main piano sound here
  32. 00:33:897 - contains high piano sound with drum, add 1 note same reason as novice, is on higher level though
  33. 00:43:941 - seems not melodical xD . . try this? http://puu.sh/hylK0/ac0cb5dc2b.jpg more get feeling on there :D
  34. 00:53:984 (53984|0,54115|0) - same sound as 00:45:636 (45636|6) - Fix
  35. 01:01:941 - where's the piano note ;w; ? come on . . . try this? http://puu.sh/hylUE/421ded1ab4.jpg fit with piano imo xD I wasn't fitting the piano, but that look nice, I'd have to keep in mind fitting drum instead piano for other level due to not wanting to map this 00:44:723 - Piano is on higher level for this part
  36. 01:14:462 - add note to continous the piano . . . example http://puu.sh/hyman/c5502eeaf7.jpg Consider :D
  37. 01:26:593 - try this, more fit when i play it imo http://puu.sh/hymjl/03e7acd904.jpg no fit the song xD
  38. 01:28:680 - you can look at Spy's map about timing xD?? can't link time? instead?

done, sorry Julie, i can't mod the higher diff . .
i hope my mods help . . . Good luck =w=)b Helped :3
Thanks for the mods~ :D
[ A v a l o n ]
tehee :P
sorry, i forget to add time section. . . .
add red timing on there 01:29:528 -
Topic Starter
Julie

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

tehee :P
sorry, i forget to add time section. . . .
add red timing on there 01:29:528 -
add and delete this one 01:29:658 - ? white stick will be off XD. So cant ;w;

I'll check about that with a bn :3. Thanks ~ :D
Kruzon


Hi, my 7k modding column format is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7


Novice

SPOILER
00:22:680 (22680|3,22680|6,23071|4,23071|0) - looks pretty random to me, my suggestion:
00:23:071 (23071|0) - move to 2 so it has the same gap length as 00:22:680 (22680|6,22680|3) - , neater flow
also, i don't see any problem with this jack 00:23:071 (23071|1,23462|1) - and there's no need changes on 00:23:462 (23462|1,23462|5,23723|2,23723|4,23984|6,23984|0) - it's fitting well

00:28:680 (28680|5,28941|6) - shift them 1 time to the left, refer to 00:26:593 (26593|4,26854|5,27115|6) - which has the highest pitch and legit notes placement

01:01:028 (61028|3) - rather than this, i would use this 01:01:549 (61549|0) - as a long note instead. contrary to this, the following are my suggestions:
01:00:506 (60506|6) - move to 6
01:00:506 (60506|4) - move to 3
01:01:028 (61028|3) - move to 2
01:01:549 (61549|0) - move to 4
also, refer to what i'm trying to deliver here 00:59:462 (59462|6,59984|0,60506|5,61028|1,61549|3) -

01:05:462 (65462|1) - well, move it to 5 and include as part of stairs will be nice 01:05:201 (65201|3,65462|4,65723|5) - riding the ascending flow 01:04:028 (64028|0,64158|4,64419|1,64549|5,64810|2,64941|6) -

Optional: PR + Pattern Flow
01:19:288 (79288|0) - move to 7
01:19:810 (79810|4) - move to 6
01:20:071 (80071|6) - move to 2
01:20:332 (80332|3) - move to 6
-

01:26:332 (86332|1,86332|3) - will look nice if included as an ending to symmetrical pattern before it. therefore,
01:26:332 (86332|3) - move to 6
01:26:723 (86723|2) - you may then move this to 4

Please try them all out first before rejecting
01:36:962 (96962|3) - hmm.. perhaps move to 5,
01:37:744 (97744|0) - move to 3,
01:39:049 (99049|6) - move to 4

-


Advanced

SPOILER
00:05:202 (5202|5,5202|1,5202|2,5202|4,5332|5,5332|1,5332|2,5332|4) - it seems that for exhaust difficulty, you use the exact amount of notes density at this point. i'd recommended to use 2 noters for its density rather than 4, idk how to explain this due to my poor english xD but i think that you should do something about it depending on difficulty spread

(your current notes density on respective difficulty)
novice: without jack, 2-noters
advanced: 2-noters, with jack
exhaust: 4-noters, with jack
gravity: 5-noters, with jack

do you get what i'm trying to say? if no then just pretend you did, let's move along then

00:07:288 (7288|4,7419|3,7549|5,7680|2,7810|0) - seems rather messy imo, perhaps:
00:07:288 (7288|4,7419|3) - shift 1 time to the left
00:07:549 (7549|5) - move to 2

00:32:332 (32332|1,32332|5) - move to 3 and 5 respectively, refer 00:30:245 (30245|0,30245|2,31288|3,31288|1,32332|2,32332|4) -

00:33:375 (33375|2,33375|4) - make a jack note here, suggest to move 00:33:375 (33375|2) - to 4 and 00:33:375 (33375|4) - move to 7
00:35:462 (35462|1) - move to 6, i believe it belong to the right side due to pr
00:37:549 (37549|5) - move to 4 only if you follow the above statement, for pattern consistency
00:38:071 (38071|3) - move to 5, only if you follow the above statement

Optional: 00:38:593 (38593|4,38593|6,38593|5) - shift 3 times to the left, refer to 00:38:071 (38071|4,38071|0) -

00:39:375 (39375|3,39375|5,39636|0,39636|6) - - hmm something feels off here, doesn't sync with the rhythm, help

00:48:506 (48506|4,48506|3) - hmm.. i would move 00:48:506 (48506|3) - to 3 for proper gap and it's comfortable

01:12:245 (72245|0,73549|0) - i don't see anything wrong with leaving this area empty,
but area between this part 01:14:158 (74158|1,74854|4) - contains "main" instrument which is necessary to plot notes along the on-going rhythm. I would suggest you to add some pattern in-between them

01:27:636 (87636|0) - since you're not resuming the upcoming piano stream, you should take into account the strong piano playing at this point, and use it to close the pattern sequence before the pause afterward. i suggest to add 1 more notes, perhaps on 7

- mod ends -


epic song, nice choice
good luck with your map 8-)
Topic Starter
Julie

Kruzon wrote:



Hi, my 7k modding column format is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7


Novice

SPOILER
00:22:680 (22680|3,22680|6,23071|4,23071|0) - looks pretty random to me, my suggestion:
00:23:071 (23071|0) - move to 2 so it has the same gap length as 00:22:680 (22680|6,22680|3) - , neater flow
also, i don't see any problem with this jack 00:23:071 (23071|1,23462|1) - and there's no need changes on 00:23:462 (23462|1,23462|5,23723|2,23723|4,23984|6,23984|0) - it's fitting well Follow the suggestion, except the jack, decide to change something better :3!!!

00:28:680 (28680|5,28941|6) - shift them 1 time to the left, refer to 00:26:593 (26593|4,26854|5,27115|6) - which has the highest pitch and legit notes placement Oups, fix

01:01:028 (61028|3) - rather than this, i would use this 01:01:549 (61549|0) - as a long note instead. contrary to this, the following are my suggestions: This 01:01:549 (61549|0) - is already long note wwww
01:00:506 (60506|6) - move to 6
01:00:506 (60506|4) - move to 3
01:01:028 (61028|3) - move to 2
01:01:549 (61549|0) - move to 4
also, refer to what i'm trying to deliver here 00:59:462 (59462|6,59984|0,60506|5,61028|1,61549|3) - All apply~ nice

01:05:462 (65462|1) - well, move it to 5 and include as part of stairs will be nice 01:05:201 (65201|3,65462|4,65723|5) - riding the ascending flow 01:04:028 (64028|0,64158|4,64419|1,64549|5,64810|2,64941|6) - No change, shouldn't be part of this flow 01:04:028 (64028|0,64158|4,64419|1,64549|5,64810|2,64941|6,65201|3) - or you can also try just listening what these 01:04:028 (64028|0,64419|1,64810|2,65201|3) - note are match for.

Optional: PR + Pattern Flow
01:19:288 (79288|0) - move to 7 OMG nice spot, I think your saying 7 because of this 01:18:636 (78636|6) - , I'm changing a bit here, and also made me realize made error here 01:17:201 (77201|2,77723|3,78245|4) -
01:19:810 (79810|4) - move to 6 no change because of above change ^ to something else xD
01:20:071 (80071|6) - move to 2 01:19:810 (79810|4) - Should be right to this note 01:19:810 (79810|4) - o.o
01:20:332 (80332|3) - move to 6 Imma think about it, right now, it feel too right side with these 01:20:071 (80071|6,80593|6) -
-

01:26:332 (86332|1,86332|3) - will look nice if included as an ending to symmetrical pattern before it. therefore,
01:26:332 (86332|3) - move to 6
01:26:723 (86723|2) - you may then move this to 4
Fix , changed the pattern a bit, since didn't want to be on same column as this 01:25:288 (85288|5,85288|1) - /color]

Please try them all out first before rejecting
01:36:962 (96962|3) - hmm.. perhaps move to 5,
01:37:744 (97744|0) - move to 3, My bad, made some error, did something else xD
01:39:049 (99049|6) - move to 4 Should be more right to this 01:38:788 (98788|4) -

-


Advanced

SPOILER
00:05:202 (5202|5,5202|1,5202|2,5202|4,5332|5,5332|1,5332|2,5332|4) - it seems that for exhaust difficulty, you use the exact amount of notes density at this point. i'd recommended to use 2 noters for its density rather than 4, idk how to explain this due to my poor english xD but i think that you should do something about it depending on difficulty spread Fix

(your current notes density on respective difficulty)
novice: without jack, 2-noters
advanced: 2-noters, with jack
exhaust: 4-noters, with jack
gravity: 5-noters, with jack

do you get what i'm trying to say? if no then just pretend you did, let's move along then

00:07:288 (7288|4,7419|3,7549|5,7680|2,7810|0) - seems rather messy imo, perhaps: Fix
00:07:288 (7288|4,7419|3) - shift 1 time to the left
00:07:549 (7549|5) - move to 2
Other did another pattern~ Nice spot~

00:32:332 (32332|1,32332|5) - move to 3 and 5 respectively, refer 00:30:245 (30245|0,30245|2,31288|3,31288|1,32332|2,32332|4) -

00:33:375 (33375|2,33375|4) - make a jack note here, suggest to move 00:33:375 (33375|2) - to 4 and 00:33:375 (33375|4) - move to 7
00:35:462 (35462|1) - move to 6, i believe it belong to the right side due to pr
00:37:549 (37549|5) - move to 4 only if you follow the above statement, for pattern consistency
00:38:071 (38071|3) - move to 5, only if you follow the above statement

Optional: 00:38:593 (38593|4,38593|6,38593|5) - shift 3 times to the left, refer to 00:38:071 (38071|4,38071|0) -

00:39:375 (39375|3,39375|5,39636|0,39636|6) - - hmm something feels off here, doesn't sync with the rhythm, help

00:48:506 (48506|4,48506|3) - hmm.. i would move 00:48:506 (48506|3) - to 3 for proper gap and it's comfortable

01:12:245 (72245|0,73549|0) - i don't see anything wrong with leaving this area empty,
but area between this part 01:14:158 (74158|1,74854|4) - contains "main" instrument which is necessary to plot notes along the on-going rhythm. I would suggest you to add some pattern in-between them Yeah saw that while watching testplay, I guess I should :3!! added some~

01:27:636 (87636|0) - since you're not resuming the upcoming piano stream, you should take into account the strong piano playing at this point, and use it to close the pattern sequence before the pause afterward. i suggest to add 1 more notes, perhaps on 7 Kept~

- mod ends -


epic song, nice choice
good luck with your map 8-)
Will finish replying later :3!! Thanks a lots for the mods~!
resuner
Hi Julie the someone
Here's your hero mod XD

[EXHAUST]
00:41:071 (41071|4,41201|4) - move to column 6
00:41:854 (41854|2,41984|2) - move to column 2
01:14:680 (74680|2) - im not sure but it has to be here 01:14:723 or not?
01:14:462 (74462|4,74593|3,74680|2) - move this 2 column to right
01:14:854 (74854|4,74984|3,75115|2) - then move this 2 column to left
01:40:744 (100744|5) - move to column 7
01:40:810 (100810|6) - move to column 6
01:51:049 (111049|2,111179|2) - move to column 2
01:51:049 (111049|2,111179|2) - move to column 6
01:51:310 (111310|1) - move to column 3
01:51:310 (111310|5) - move to column 5
01:51:440 (111440|0) - move to column 2
01:51:440 (111440|6) - move to column 6

That's all i can do for this exhaust :shock: Very awesome map ;) Goodluck :shock:
Candiize
hi m4m :D

column:0~6

mod
[NOVICE]
00:17:462 add kick
00:33:897 (33897|4) - LN
00:57:767 (57767|4) - end in 00:58:028
01:14:071 (74071|5) - end in 01:15:245
01:18:506 add note
01:22:680 ^
01:40:092 (100092|2) - move to 01:39:962
01:40:484 (100484|4) - move to 01:40:353
[ADVANCED]
00:11:332 add
00:19:810 ^
00:59:984 (59984|1,59984|5) - change
[EXHAUST]
00:14:462 add note
00:14:723 ^
01:05:201 http://i.imgur.com/E2GTZZd.jpg?1
01:10:810 (70810|0) - resnap
[GRAVITY]
00:14:462 add
00:14:723 ^
00:21:832 (21832|1) - ghost note
01:20:332~01:22:419 over map

good luck :D
17VA
simpuru check

00:01:289 - negative offset? move first red line to 00:00:245 - here.

[Gravity]

00:05:202 (5202|4,5332|4) - move 4th column to make using space bar

00:05:462 (5462|2,5723|2) - different tone but same column looks little awkward,

http://puu.sh/hQX6m/658b5877f3.png how about this?

00:06:506 - hmm.. make it single? no chords here.

00:07:288 - chords here, add 7th column and 00:07:419 (7419|3) - move 3 for make comfortable.

00:23:984 (23984|4) - move 4th column for comfortable stair note streams

00:35:462 - more fun way for fingers - http://puu.sh/hQXw3/05b0206c21.png

00:36:832 (36832|4) - unsnapped ?

00:38:593 - place notes at 1,3,4,5,7

00:39:375 - how about make symmetric drum stream here? examples : http://puu.sh/hQXFo/b53e4f97aa.png

00:40:158 - ^

00:41:071 (41071|4,41071|2,41201|4,41201|2) - move to 2,6.

00:41:854 (41854|2,41984|2) - move to 2. little discorded piano chords. so don't make symmetric here.

00:45:897 - add 1 for bass

00:51:115 (51115|1,51245|0,51375|1,51506|0,51636|1,51767|0,51897|1,52028|0) - reverse. 121212~

because 00:50:854 (50854|1) - same column is repeating here.

00:52:680 (52680|0) - end at 00:52:941 - or 00:53:071 - and add 1 at 00:53:201 -

00:54:245 - add bass note

01:01:028 - I recommend use 131313~ patterns for drum. http://puu.sh/hQY1h/961f975a06.png

01:05:984 - in last part, use double stair streams here? examples : http://puu.sh/hQY6U/d5673d602a.png
Rivals_7
:3

did I say sunday? I change my mind :3 since I have time now, I do it now XD

I literally can't even play 7K more than 2,2 stars, but I'll trying to mod this as best as I can :3

Click me :3
Exhaust

00:37:288 (37288|2,37375|1,37462|0) - ctrl + h
00:35:984 - a beat. add one more note
00:37:288 - ^
00:37:549 - ^
00:38:071 - ^
00:38:593 - why 4? it's the same tune like - 00:38:984 - right?
01:05:984 (65984|1,66115|2,66245|3,66375|4,66506|5,66636|6) - move 1 col to left? ( I know it will be jack with the quad-notes before, but I think it's ok)
01:23:723 - following the drum beat? add one more note or delete it if you follow the piano.


Gravity

01:19:680 - add 2 notes here? there's a beat there.
01:29:397 (89397|6,89397|5) - move to |2|3|
and then - 01:29:528 (89528|1) - move to 5
01:40:353 - different tone with - 01:40:484 - . make it 3 notes instead like your Exhaust.
01:57:701 (117701|3) - how about moving it to 7?

Advanced

00:03:767 (3767|4) - move to 4
00:13:093 (13093|4,13354|5) - what is this follows?

Novice

00:01:811 - 4 notes in the most easier diff on the beatmap? suggest to change it to 3notes instead on |3|4|5|

Give me your reason if you ignore some of my mods. I Need to increase the experience on modding 7K :3
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Julie
Alright update~ uwah took me some times since was clearing some mods ><
Kawawa
HiYA <3

Timing : Okay.
Kiai : No problem. but u can consider about kiai
AImod : No problem.

BG / Sound File :
"BG.png" Please change size "1024x768" or "1366x768"
"tam01,02,03.wav, etc.."
Some wav files is have a problem,
All the sounds are must be started within 5ms.
maybe, i think seems you to change it later. I just check xD

Etc : -
Column
7K |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

▽NOVICE

Click
00:08:462 (8462|4) - move to 7
^ more smooth play, and more better chord progress


00:38:593 (38593|3,38984|1) - remove and 00:39:636 - add one note
^there is no crash at here, You, at the string part, only had used the one note
like 00:34:941 (34941|1,35201|3,35462|5) - 00:37:028 (37028|4,37288|1,37549|5) -
in other words, Because the same code, if you use the same chord, this may have a better representation.

00:42:245 (42245|6) - move to 5
^ For better pattern, it seems consider the pitch.
but when i viewed a around note, it's have good balance pattern,
It is good to change from same pattern

00:56:006 (56006|4) - move to 4
^It can be a smooth progress

01:05:723 - ~ 01:07:810 - Because so much empty space, I was feeling a little strange in pattern progress.
i know, you do not want to use a piano for NOVICE diff,
instead, when using a long note in this space, players can feel the rhythm in this part.

01:09:897 - add at 4 for crash sounding. only u used crash chord in first part
like 00:09:375 (9375|3) - 00:44:854 (44854|4) -

01:56:918 (116918|4,117179|2,117440 |4) - This is a somewhat vague expression.
^I also understand, it's intend for NOVICE pattern,
01:57:049 - 01:57:310 - 01:57:571 - one note add here,
it can be a smooth progress. like your "ADVANCED diff"

▽ADVANCED

Click
1. 00:07:288 (7288|4,7419|3,7549|5) - 00:07:680 (7680|3,7810|1,7941|6) -
2. 00:05:984 (5984|1,6245|1) - 00:06:115 (6115|6,6375|6) -
^It has the same relation to each other pitch
00:05:984 - ~ 00:07:941 - what do u think about? ▽



00:19:810 - add one note for crash, there is have one, like 00:20:854 (20854|0) -
and i consider other diff,

00:38:593 (38593|5,38984|1) - remove, and 00:39:636 - one note add
^same mod "NOVICE", for relevance

00:58:680 - note one remove
yes, you delete it, It can be a smooth progress. only focus string sound

01:09:897 - ~ 01:15:115 - i think something wrong,
there is too much space, i recommend you remap at this part and add some note for specifics sound available here.
There is a representation of a piano is too awkward, Because skipped some of piano pitch
so, if u only follow the string and bass kick crash, i think this may have a better representation.
for example, like this part 01:15:115 - ~ 01:18:245 -

▽EXHAUST

Click
00:01:376 (1376|0,1419|6) - mhmmhm, did it match the correct beat?
I think that you check once again,
First. you can consider about this 00:01:028 - ~ 00:01:811 -
if you delete this part, it may be a better flow.

00:09:375 (9375|1) - move to 6
^You are focused on base for 4hammer,
like 00:10:419 (10419|6,10680|6,10941|6,11201|6) - , 00:13:549 (13549|1) -

00:15:636 - add at 2 and 00:16:028 (16028|1) - move to 3
First , crash for emphasize,
Second 00:15:897 - ~ 00:17:201 - It has the same relation to each other pitch, therefore moved

00:17:332 (17332|4,17397|3) - remove, and 00:17:462 (17462|1) - move to 5
You already focus on the main sound. It is not necessary.

00:35:810 - 00:35:897 - one note add
focus on the main piano. All players can feel the rhythm in that space
because you focus on the main piano

00:52:419 (52419|0) - move to 3 and 00:52:549 (52549|5) - move to 5
It has relevance of patterns. from before regular pattern.

01:00:506 - ~ 01:01:549 - idk this may have a better representation.
please focus on the main piano, For example, ▽

^blue note is 6snap.

01:01:549 - one or two note add.
there is have a crash

01:09:897 - ~ 01:14:071 - a little vague expression.
if you using follow the only piano in this part, it may can be better
coz, i feel the piano at 01:10:810 - ~ 01:11:201 - 01:12:767 - ~ 01:13:288 -
for example ▽

^ u can only 3snap, and only 1note. just, ignore the other sound
^ same 01:12:680 - 01:13:288 -

01:14:071 - ~ 01:15:636 - about, This part is a regular piano. maybe it seems mistaken
01:14:158 (74158|1) - move to 01:14:201 -
01:14:332 - one note add, there is have a piano
01:14:419 (74419|2) - this is ghots note. move to 01:14:528 -
01:14:680 (74680|2) - move to 01:14:723 -



01:26:593 - add at 1 and 01:26:723 (86723|0) - move to 5
^for smooth play, and chord progress

01:28:680 - add at 2, consider your "GRAVITY diff"

01:32:788 - ~ 01:36:310 - about, You must add some more notes.
^ all player are feel making sense with Drun in this part, add some note for drum sound here.
for example 01:33:049 - 01:33:440 - 01:33:571 - 01:34:092 - 01:34:484 - etc..

01:47:918 - add at 4, there is have a piano

▽GRAVITY

Click
00:01:028 - ~ 00:01:811 - same mod with EXHAUST diff

00:03:767 (3767|3) - move to 7 and 00:03:897 (3897|2) - move to 6
^ when i viewed a around note, focus on a around pattern

00:05:202 - 00:05:332 - note one remove. and 00:05:984 - add one note
^00:05:202 - there is S-crash, and 00:05:984 - is L-crash. L is strong than S

00:08:854 (8854|1) - move to 1 and 00:09:115 - add at 1
^ 00:07:288 (7288|0,7680|0,8071|0,8462|0) - this is same with 00:03:767 (3767|0,4158|0,4419|0,4680|0,4941|0) -

00:24:832 (24832|4) - mistake, move to 00:24:854 -
^ it's 3snap. like 01:09:462 (69462|6) -

00:33:962 (33962|6) - ^same mistake, move to 00:33:984 -


01:00:506 - ~ 01:01:549 - same mod with EXHAUST diff, Please consider that Piano part
01:09:897 - ~ 01:15:375 - ^same.


01:26:397 (86397|6,86462|0) - remove.
^ focus on main piano, if you want use this bass sound, you should add also here 01:26:267 -
but if you skip bass, may have a better expression

Really, i wanted to give more help as possible,
Good luck <3
Raediaufar
Okay M4M, sorry if this is not much, your mapset looks good to me

Column: l1l2l3l4l5l6l7l

EXHAUST
00:17:462 (17462|1,17723|2) - Add G#6S_Ab6S_s to these notes, because I see you added those in advanced
01:07:810 (67810|2) – This one has higher pitch than the previous one, you can put it on 6
01:09:245 – Maybe you can try to add note here and at - 01:09:310 – because of there is drum sound
01:11:984 (71984|5) – You can try double on this, because there are piano sound and cymbal sound there
01:13:549 (73549|3) – this as well
01:14:071 (74071|6) - ^

This diff is pretty easy for 4 stars imo

ADVANCED
00:05:202 (5202|2,5202|4,5332|4,5332|2) – add kick1 and cym1 here, because you added those in exhaust diff
00:13:028 (13028|4) – This LN, I don’t know what sound you follow here but I heard nothing
00:17:462 (17462|5,17462|3) – This one, it’s pretty hard to press the next four notes for people who use their right hand for tapping 4. Maybe you can move 4 to 2
00:19:810 (19810|0) – add cym here
00:39:375 (39375|5) – add tam03 here
00:48:375 (48375|4,48506|4) – Maybe just me but I think this jack is pretty hard to tap, move both to 6 seems better for me
00:52:158 (52158|3) – move to 3, because it’s pretty hard to tap for right thumbers
01:13:028 – add a note here, because there is a sound and to fill the big gap between those stairs
01:14:462 – also ad a note here because the piano starts here

NOVICE
01:40:875 – how about to add a note here?

and yeah about this diff, because the star is 1.97 which is near 2, I think you should remove some notes


the others seems good to me

awww, really want this one gets ranked, take a star -w-)b
Topic Starter
Julie

KawaEE wrote:

HiYA <3

Timing : Okay.
Kiai : No problem. but u can consider about kiai
AImod : No problem.

BG / Sound File :
"BG.png" Please change size "1024x768" or "1366x768"
"tam01,02,03.wav, etc.."
Some wav files is have a problem,
All the sounds are must be started within 5ms.
maybe, i think seems you to change it later. I just check xD

Etc : -
Column
7K |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

▽NOVICE

Click
00:08:462 (8462|4) - move to 7
^ more smooth play, and more better chord progress


00:38:593 (38593|3,38984|1) - remove and 00:39:636 - add one note
^there is no crash at here, You, at the string part, only had used the one note
like 00:34:941 (34941|1,35201|3,35462|5) - 00:37:028 (37028|4,37288|1,37549|5) -
in other words, Because the same code, if you use the same chord, this may have a better representation. I did put cym hitsound there, but mostly matching a sound that most likely are the same for all these 00:39:375 (39375|6,39636|0,39897|5,40158|2,40419|6) - XD

00:42:245 (42245|6) - move to 5
^ For better pattern, it seems consider the pitch.
but when i viewed a around note, it's have good balance pattern,
It is good to change from same pattern Will still consider pitch

00:56:006 (56006|4) - move to 4
^It can be a smooth progress Moved

01:05:723 - ~ 01:07:810 - Because so much empty space, I was feeling a little strange in pattern progress.
i know, you do not want to use a piano for NOVICE diff,
instead, when using a long note in this space, players can feel the rhythm in this part. Hahaha true, but you know where I use long note for :3But yeah true will see about that

01:09:897 - add at 4 for crash sounding. only u used crash chord in first part
like 00:09:375 (9375|3) - 00:44:854 (44854|4) - Will think about it, focusing on another sound

01:56:918 (116918|4,117179|2,117440 |4) - This is a somewhat vague expression.
^I also understand, it's intend for NOVICE pattern,
01:57:049 - 01:57:310 - 01:57:571 - one note add here,
it can be a smooth progress. like your "ADVANCED diff" Yeah but was consisdering bpm being to high XD, oh well added, except not here 01:57:571 - , give more time for last 3 notes

▽ADVANCED

Click
1. 00:07:288 (7288|4,7419|3,7549|5) - 00:07:680 (7680|3,7810|1,7941|6) -
2. 00:05:984 (5984|1,6245|1) - 00:06:115 (6115|6,6375|6) -
^It has the same relation to each other pitch
00:05:984 - ~ 00:07:941 - what do u think about? ▽

00:06:245 (6245|1,6506|1) - should be same column Fixed some chord on all diff :3


00:19:810 - add one note for crash, there is have one, like 00:20:854 (20854|0) - added
and i consider other diff,

00:38:593 (38593|5,38984|1) - remove, and 00:39:636 - one note add Just added
^same mod "NOVICE", for relevance

00:58:680 - note one remove Removed
yes, you delete it, It can be a smooth progress. only focus string sound

01:09:897 - ~ 01:15:115 - i think something wrong,
there is too much space, i recommend you remap at this part and add some note for specifics sound available here.
There is a representation of a piano is too awkward, Because skipped some of piano pitch
so, if u only follow the string and bass kick crash, i think this may have a better representation.
for example, like this part 01:15:115 - ~ 01:18:245 -Yeah, some part map some part unmap, always mess me up on ADV on this, so fix xD

▽EXHAUST

Click
00:01:376 (1376|0,1419|6) - mhmmhm, did it match the correct beat?
I think that you check once again,
First. you can consider about this 00:01:028 - ~ 00:01:811 -
if you delete this part, it may be a better flow. Deleted

00:09:375 (9375|1) - move to 6
^You are focused on base for 4hammer,
like 00:10:419 (10419|6,10680|6,10941|6,11201|6) - , 00:13:549 (13549|1) - Fix

00:15:636 - add at 2 and 00:16:028 (16028|1) - move to 3
First , crash for emphasize,
Second 00:15:897 - ~ 00:17:201 - It has the same relation to each other pitch, therefore moved 00:16:810 (16810|1) - Should move this at 2, 00:16:028 - and 00:16:810 - should be the same xD

00:17:332 (17332|4,17397|3) - remove, and 00:17:462 (17462|1) - move to 5
You already focus on the main sound. It is not necessary. Moved

00:35:810 - 00:35:897 - one note add
focus on the main piano. All players can feel the rhythm in that space
because you focus on the main piano Added

00:52:419 (52419|0) - move to 3 and 00:52:549 (52549|5) - move to 5
It has relevance of patterns. from before regular pattern. No change, not sure to understand ><

01:00:506 - ~ 01:01:549 - idk this may have a better representation.
please focus on the main piano, For example, ▽

^blue note is 6snap. The begining 1/6? I hear more piano note on the beginner.

01:01:549 - one or two note add.
there is have a crash added

01:09:897 - ~ 01:14:071 - a little vague expression.
if you using follow the only piano in this part, it may can be better
coz, i feel the piano at 01:10:810 - ~ 01:11:201 - 01:12:767 - ~ 01:13:288 -
for example ▽

^ u can only 3snap, and only 1note. just, ignore the other sound
^ same 01:12:680 - 01:13:288 - Hmm did another way xD

01:14:071 - ~ 01:15:636 - about, This part is a regular piano. maybe it seems mistaken
01:14:158 (74158|1) - move to 01:14:201 -
01:14:332 - one note add, there is have a piano
01:14:419 (74419|2) - this is ghots note. move to 01:14:528 -
01:14:680 (74680|2) - move to 01:14:723 -

Redid some snap

01:26:593 - add at 1 and 01:26:723 (86723|0) - move to 5 Fix
^for smooth play, and chord progress

01:28:680 - add at 2, consider your "GRAVITY diff" Fix

01:32:788 - ~ 01:36:310 - about, You must add some more notes.
^ all player are feel making sense with Drun in this part, add some note for drum sound here.
for example 01:33:049 - 01:33:440 - 01:33:571 - 01:34:092 - 01:34:484 - etc.. Consider, matching some specific sound

01:47:918 - add at 4, there is have a piano Oups have to be on 7

▽GRAVITY

Click
00:01:028 - ~ 00:01:811 - same mod with EXHAUST diff Deleted whole part

00:03:767 (3767|3) - move to 7 and 00:03:897 (3897|2) - move to 6
^ when i viewed a around note, focus on a around pattern lower pitch then 00:03:636 - and 00:04:028 - xD

00:05:202 - 00:05:332 - note one remove. and 00:05:984 - add one noteOh yeah but have other instrument on the 1st part XD
^00:05:202 - there is S-crash, and 00:05:984 - is L-crash. L is strong than S

00:08:854 (8854|1) - move to 1 and 00:09:115 - add at 1 Moved and added
^ 00:07:288 (7288|0,7680|0,8071|0,8462|0) - this is same with 00:03:767 (3767|0,4158|0,4419|0,4680|0,4941|0) -

00:24:832 (24832|4) - mistake, move to 00:24:854 - Oups nice, baka offset change, unsnap xD
^ it's 3snap. like 01:09:462 (69462|6) -

00:33:962 (33962|6) - ^same mistake, move to 00:33:984 -


01:00:506 - ~ 01:01:549 - same mod with EXHAUST diff, Please consider that Piano part Yeah I hear something like that, but was more focus on pattern, so fix
01:09:897 - ~ 01:15:375 - ^same. Don't understand ><, only 2 piano keys I didnt add imma add but you didn't point it out, and point out part I already put for piano xD


01:26:397 (86397|6,86462|0) - remove.
^ focus on main piano, if you want use this bass sound, you should add also here 01:26:267 -
but if you skip bass, may have a better expression

Really, i wanted to give more help as possible,
Good luck <3
YAY thanks a lots kawawa, awesome!
[ Setsuna ]
I BELEIVE
Topic Starter
Julie

Raediaufar wrote:

Okay M4M, sorry if this is not much, your mapset looks good to me

Column: l1l2l3l4l5l6l7l

EXHAUST
00:17:462 (17462|1,17723|2) - Add G#6S_Ab6S_s to these notes, because I see you added those in advanced Omg nice spot, actually ADV wrong, apply wrong hitsound on these note.
01:07:810 (67810|2) – This one has higher pitch than the previous one, you can put it on 6 Hmm is a bit tricky, I hear lower though xD
01:09:245 – Maybe you can try to add note here and at - 01:09:310 – because of there is drum sound Not bad like how you think haha, but yeah matching piano for here
01:11:984 (71984|5) – You can try double on this, because there are piano sound and cymbal sound there
01:13:549 (73549|3) – this as well
01:14:071 (74071|6) - ^ Kept it for GRV :3

This diff is pretty easy for 4 stars imo YESS :D!!!

ADVANCED
00:05:202 (5202|2,5202|4,5332|4,5332|2) – add kick1 and cym1 here, because you added those in exhaust diff Added :3
00:13:028 (13028|4) – This LN, I don’t know what sound you follow here but I heard nothingSame instrument as 00:13:288 -
00:17:462 (17462|5,17462|3) – This one, it’s pretty hard to press the next four notes for people who use their right hand for tapping 4. Maybe you can move 4 to 2 Hmm nice point but deleted one
00:19:810 (19810|0) – add cym here Already have
00:39:375 (39375|5) – add tam03 here Nice point, but I didn't map the other of this drum thats why I didn't add
00:48:375 (48375|4,48506|4) – Maybe just me but I think this jack is pretty hard to tap, move both to 6 seems better for me No change
00:52:158 (52158|3) – move to 3, because it’s pretty hard to tap for right thumbers
01:13:028 – add a note here, because there is a sound and to fill the big gap between those stairs Didnd't understand the reason, but added for that fill? O.O
01:14:462 – also ad a note here because the piano starts here I didn't map any piano there, that note over there for snare xD

NOVICE
01:40:875 – how about to add a note here? Added :D, and for remove notes, try doing something near 2 but less, because ADV is 3 xD.

and yeah about this diff, because the star is 1.97 which is near 2, I think you should remove some notes


the others seems good to me

awww, really want this one gets ranked, take a star -w-)b
Thanks for the m4m!! I'll get on yours this week! :D
And impressive mods for a new modder! O.O!! Point out really nice stuff xD!! Keep it up!

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Hi Julie, i came for the BPM check
Here's the results:
Some is for the different snaps, please careful on the time signature:



Yah ~ I will mod it later!

Good luck ~ <3
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