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eufonius - Narcissus

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Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Lavender
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年6月12日 at 14:40:23

Artist: eufonius
Title: Narcissus
Source: ナルキッソス -SIDE 2nd-
Tags: stage-nana riya 菊地創 Kikuchi Hajime Σ Narcissu
BPM: 100
Filesize: 32201kb
Play Time: 02:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.52 stars, 229 notes)
  2. Normal (1.7 stars, 153 notes)
Download: eufonius - Narcissus
Download: eufonius - Narcissus (no video)
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#5


『凛と伸びた花は今も』
『きっと傍で咲き続けてる』

Mapset
Normal by Narcissu
Hard by me
Modders
z1085684963
Sakaue Nachi
small_hins
zj0924
DreaM117er
Wafu
tm1209
Minakami Yuki
CelsiusLK
tutuhaha
Kawaiwkyik

Thanks all of you!
自创旋律会不会被打
Last edited by Lavender , edited 22 times in total.
z1085684963
327 posts
Joined August 2012
z1085684963
[Hard]
00:49:853 (1) - 我知道是故意的，所以故意踢一下
00:51:353 (4,5) - 这梗太难了就算放到i里都是 01:00:953 (3,4) -
00:53:903 (2) - ctrl+g
01:23:003 (4,5,1) - 间距拉小点，和前面那个二连会造成视觉错误

water mod
Sakaue Nachi
558 posts
Joined September 2012
Sakaue Nachi
速度水
[general]
考虑加点tag进去

[Normal]
ar od -1 这bpm以及这难度，现在太高了
00:14:753 (5,6) - blanket吗
00:57:053 (4,5) - 这两个靠的太近不太好看
02:03:053 (3) - 这个弄弯和前后保持一致性

[Hard]
00:03:953 (3) - 这个直接1\2或者折返？现在感觉节奏有点乱
00:42:653 (1) - 感觉前面不用break直接前面开始转盘把
01:18:053 (3) - 这个滑条有点莫名，头是没有任何音的，01:17:153 (2) - 可以把这个换成折返就行了
CookieBite
1,483 posts
Joined August 2014
CookieBite
您好, 我是来自我 NM / M4M Queue 。

那个Normal最好改成Narcissu's Normal
让别人知道Normal是由Narcissu所做的

MOD START!

[Normal]
00:45:053 (1) - 移至黄色的1

00:52:253 (1,1) - 最好不要NC

01:13:853 (1) - 移至绿色的3

02:06:053 (2) - 摆上一些

[Hard]
00:45:053 (1,2) - 一条滑条直接替代二条滑条

00:49:703 (5) - 移至这
photo

00:51:353 (4) - 拉多一格

00:53:903 (2) - 变成这样
photo

01:00:953 (3) - 拉多一格

01:03:953 (1) - 不要NC

01:04:253 (2) - NC

01:23:378 (5) - 移除

MOD END

hitsound不錯
歌曲也滿好聽!

謝謝您使用我的 NM / M4M Queue。
zj0924
309 posts
Joined November 2014
zj0924

Hi!From my queue

Default = Normal mods(suggestions)
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]
  1. Tag加上Narcissu，同时把Normal改成Narcissu‘s Normal
  2. 音效好像还没准备好的样子;w;在有钢琴key的地方加上whistle
  3. 因为是慢歌，容错率较高，除了nazi摸以外，我会给些另外的摆法和节奏，酌情修改

[Normal]
  1. 00:03:953 (4) - 看得出是为了跟vocal用的长滑条，但是中间的piano key就被吃了，00:13:853 (4) - 你跟了piano。推荐这样下节奏，不违和，而且音效准备好之后这个音就能体现出来了
  2. 00:06:353 (1) - 同上但是这里节奏不需要动，把滑点个数改为2，就行了
  3. 00:23:153 (1) - 同第一条
  4. 00:27:953 (1) -
    其他地方类似，如果同意的话
  5. 00:57:053 (4,5) - 略挤，中间的夹缝不是很好看，不想动的话考虑改下弧度，或者这样6 blanket
  6. 01:16:253 (3,4) - 感觉flow角度有点怪，34这样的排列我觉得不是很好看...
  7. 01:25:553 (5) - 这个应该往右弯？
  8. 01:36:653 (6) - 不map这个吗？滑条拉到这也行啊..
  9. 01:37:853 (1) - 音效准备好了加finish
  10. 01:40:253 (3) - 这里滑点改成1用个slidertick，好好的音不能浪费
  11. 01:45:653 (2,4) - 分别ctrl+h，因为后面1/2对flow要求明显比1/1的要高，1到2flow稍微卡点并无大碍
  12. 01:52:253 (1) - 往下弯一点flow准确点？
  13. 02:03:053 (3,1) - 感觉flow能在好一点，歌慢无大碍
  14. 02:18:653 (1,2) - 这flow对新手太难了

[Hard]

  • 节奏下的没问题，可是感觉还是太偏向vocal，由于vocal具有随机性，在起伏方面给我感觉略显违和，表现力不够。以下给出另外一种下节奏的方式，都hard难度了，不必拘束于vocal，试着跟piano，表现起伏会更加好
  1. 00:03:953 (3) - 可以考虑下钢琴key，不知道有没有办法这里2个滑条点，其他地方复原，否则可以这里搞个slidertick owo或者试试这样的节奏，
  2. 00:13:853 (4) - 用1/1减速，否则给我感觉就像是不停在打1/2滑条，表现力会不够
  3. 00:20:753 (1) - 可以试试看这样的节奏
  4. 00:28:253 (5) - 34做个对称椭圆flow过渡，然后5拉长滑条
  5. 像这里就做得很好00:31:553 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 起伏感很明显
  6. 00:51:353 (4,5) - 这个梗肯定得改，读图也有可能是先点再滑条...干脆单点去了变折返
  7. 01:00:953 (3,4) - ^
  8. 00:53:453 (1,2) - 这加速很突然，3/4滑条可以用，但是不适用于12的flow，提供一种方法供参考
  9. 01:03:053 (1,2) - 同上这个flow不适合用在3/4，试试看ctrl+j的那种感觉
  10. 01:06:053 (6,1) - 还是推荐这样的节奏
  11. 01:23:453 (1) - 我感觉后面留空档不是一个合适的选择，试试看这样的，转成1/8滑条
  12. 01:34:853 (4) - 用这样的滑条会给我一种糊弄的感觉，后面的两个折返根本没有音（轻到听不见）所以略显违和，试试这样
  13. 02:03:053 (1,2,3) - 我更喜欢向外转的感觉，分别ctrl+g？
  14. 02:07:253 (2) - 叠02:05:453 (3) - 上？我觉得更有感觉
  15. 02:15:053 (3,4) - 试试看这样的组合？调整要得当，使得4匀速flow到1。现在的由于是折返箭头，会有强烈的停顿感，我觉得可以试试我给的方法
这也是我最近看的比较认真的一张图了，做的不错，图本身没有什么可多说的。所以提出的建议很多都是从自身角度出发，可能与你的作图理念有冲突，但还是希望能够帮到你 :)
GL~
Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Lavender
这个摸图态度真是让我惭愧，不上狗可惜了
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu

zj0924 wrote:


Hi!From my queue

Default = Normal mods(suggestions)
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]
  1. Tag加上Narcissu，同时把Normal改成Narcissu‘s Normal …… 我覺得不用改 = =
  2. 音效好像还没准备好的样子;w;在有钢琴key的地方加上whistle …… 嗯嗯，但是亭就上傳了……
  3. 因为是慢歌，容错率较高，除了nazi摸以外，我会给些另外的摆法和节奏，酌情修改

[Normal]
  1. 00:03:953 (4) - 看得出是为了跟vocal用的长滑条，但是中间的piano key就被吃了，00:13:853 (4) - 你跟了piano。推荐这样下节奏，不违和，而且音效准备好之后这个音就能体现出来了……我認為在跟人聲按滑條的時候玩家根本不會在意鋼琴音，現在的節奏再密上去就和hard無異了
  2. 00:06:353 (1) - 同上但是这里节奏不需要动，把滑点个数改为2，就行了……我認為tick rate補音效沒有任何意義，沒有點擊卻有聲音才奇怪……所謂補上節奏都是mapper單方面的想法，實際打圖並沒有感覺……主要我覺得一堆點點點看上去很不舒服
  3. 00:23:153 (1) - 同第一条
  4. 00:27:953 (1) -
    其他地方类似，如果同意的话
  5. 00:57:053 (4,5) - 略挤，中间的夹缝不是很好看，不想动的话考虑改下弧度，或者这样6 blanket……好
  6. 01:16:253 (3,4) - 感觉flow角度有点怪，34这样的排列我觉得不是很好看...……額，都一樣太奇怪了
  7. 01:25:553 (5) - 这个应该往右弯？……好
  8. 01:36:653 (6) - 不map这个吗？滑条拉到这也行啊..……好
  9. 01:37:853 (1) - 音效准备好了加finish
  10. 01:40:253 (3) - 这里滑点改成1用个slidertick，好好的音不能浪费
  11. 01:45:653 (2,4) - 分别ctrl+h，因为后面1/2对flow要求明显比1/1的要高，1到2flow稍微卡点并无大碍……只是看上去會有影響……
  12. 01:52:253 (1) - 往下弯一点flow准确点？
  13. 02:03:053 (3,1) - 感觉flow能在好一点，歌慢无大碍
  14. 02:18:653 (1,2) - 这flow对新手太难了

我覺得1/1以上的空拍並沒有flow這一說，已經有足夠的時間給玩家反應。對於更大的空拍來說光標早就停下等物件出現了……誰會和以前的aotu一樣用超慢勻速往下一個物件走……

small_hins wrote:

您好, 我是来自我 NM / M4M Queue 。

那个Normal最好改成Narcissu's Normal …… 我覺得不被知道也沒什麼關係 = =
让别人知道Normal是由Narcissu所做的

MOD START!

[Normal]
00:45:053 (1) - 移至黄色的1……這是要堆疊？

00:52:253 (1,1) - 最好不要NC……這樣按下去才有“激”，都空了一節了……

01:13:853 (1) - 移至绿色的3……我覺得均勻分散更好

02:06:053 (2) - 摆上一些……好

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

速度水
[general]
考虑加点tag进去

[Normal]
ar od -1 这bpm以及这难度，现在太高了……我一直覺得比AR5要低的diff沒有意義……越低越難讀……換4了
00:14:753 (5,6) - blanket吗……已經是了啊
00:57:053 (4,5) - 这两个靠的太近不太好看……
02:03:053 (3) - 这个弄弯和前后保持一致性……又不是相似的什麼……
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TitleUnicode:ナルキッソス
Artist:Eufonius
ArtistUnicode:Eufonius
Creator:[Teichan]
Version:Normal
Source:ナルキッソス -SIDE 2nd-
Tags:
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BeatmapSetID:306616

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452,372,126053,2,0,P|448:308|428:240,1,120
472,92,127253,5,0,0:0:0:0:
308,52,127853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,216,128453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,324,129053,6,0,P|80:332|8:320,1,120
24,156,130253,2,0,P|88:148|160:160,1,120
284,60,131453,5,0,0:0:0:0:
372,204,132053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,56,132653,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,60,133253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,204,133853,6,0,P|380:268|376:360,1,120
216,292,135053,2,0,P|208:228|212:136,1,120
320,48,136253,5,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,136853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,137453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,138053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,304,138653,6,0,P|348:305|419:283,1,120
320,144,139853,2,0,P|355:90|374:18,1,120
480,164,141053,6,0,L|496:316,1,120
332,232,142253,2,0,L|348:384,1,120
188,288,143453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,143753,12,0,145853,0:0:0:0:
Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Lavender

z1085684963 wrote:

[Hard]
00:49:853 (1) - 我知道是故意的，所以故意踢一下 orz
00:51:353 (4,5) - 这梗太难了就算放到i里都是 01:00:953 (3,4) - 不难啊
00:53:903 (2) - ctrl+g 好
01:23:003 (4,5,1) - 间距拉小点，和前面那个二连会造成视觉错误 想了想把note去了

water mod

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

速度水
[general]
考虑加点tag进去 不知道加啥，我找人check下metadata

[Hard]
00:03:953 (3) - 这个直接1\2或者折返？现在感觉节奏有点乱 这里是全跟vocal
00:42:653 (1) - 感觉前面不用break直接前面开始转盘把 这个break还是必须的
01:18:053 (3) - 这个滑条有点莫名，头是没有任何音的，01:17:153 (2) - 可以把这个换成折返就行了 想了想这个前面用过了，没改

zj0924 wrote:


Hi!From my queue

Default = Normal mods(suggestions)
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

[General]
  1. Tag加上Narcissu，同时把Normal改成Narcissu‘s Normal 楼上说啦
  2. 音效好像还没准备好的样子;w;在有钢琴key的地方加上whistle 我已经准备好了特技
  3. 因为是慢歌，容错率较高，除了nazi摸以外，我会给些另外的摆法和节奏，酌情修改 √

[Hard]

  • 节奏下的没问题，可是感觉还是太偏向vocal，由于vocal具有随机性，在起伏方面给我感觉略显违和，表现力不够。以下给出另外一种下节奏的方式，都hard难度了，不必拘束于vocal，试着跟piano，表现起伏会更加好
  1. 00:03:953 (3) - 可以考虑下钢琴key，不知道有没有办法这里2个滑条点，其他地方复原，否则可以这里搞个slidertick owo或者试试这样的节奏，
    不太好，这里还是跟vocal吧，这一段就一个钢琴key啊
  2. 00:13:853 (4) - 用1/1减速，否则给我感觉就像是不停在打1/2滑条，表现力会不够 √
  3. 00:20:753 (1) - 可以试试看这样的节奏
    不太好，前面我都跟vocal
  4. 00:28:253 (5) - 34做个对称椭圆flow过渡，然后5拉长滑条
    不改节奏
  5. 像这里就做得很好00:31:553 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 起伏感很明显
  6. 00:51:353 (4,5) - 这个梗肯定得改，读图也有可能是先点再滑条...干脆单点去了变折返 先看看吧，我打着还好，等我找找testplay
  7. 01:00:953 (3,4) - ^
  8. 00:53:453 (1,2) - 这加速很突然，3/4滑条可以用，但是不适用于12的flow，提供一种方法供参考
    √
  9. 01:03:053 (1,2) - 同上这个flow不适合用在3/4，试试看ctrl+j的那种感觉
  10. 01:06:053 (6,1) - 还是推荐这样的节奏
  11. 01:23:453 (1) - 我感觉后面留空档不是一个合适的选择，试试看这样的，转成1/8滑条
    nice!
  12. 01:34:853 (4) - 用这样的滑条会给我一种糊弄的感觉，后面的两个折返根本没有音（轻到听不见）所以略显违和，试试这样
    这个还是不改了，改了后面一个
  13. 02:03:053 (1,2,3) - 我更喜欢向外转的感觉，分别ctrl+g？ 不太好改
  14. 02:07:253 (2) - 叠02:05:453 (3) - 上？我觉得更有感觉 ?没什么区别嘛
  15. 02:15:053 (3,4) - 试试看这样的组合？调整要得当，使得4匀速flow到1。现在的由于是折返箭头，会有强烈的停顿感，我觉得可以试试我给的方法
好
这也是我最近看的比较认真的一张图了，做的不错，图本身没有什么可多说的。所以提出的建议很多都是从自身角度出发，可能与你的作图理念有冲突，但还是希望能够帮到你 :) 这种图还能这么认真的mod，真是谢谢啦
GL~
Thanks for modding! hitsound added.
DreaM117er
1,594 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
Catch me in game~

[Hard]

  • 00:14:753 (5) - 這裡很奇怪，聲音也不是在紅線'上，尾巴也不是。這裡一樣：00:33:953 (5) -
    00:51:353 (1,2) - 調小聲，大概40%左右。一樣：01:00:953 (1,2) -
    00:49:853 (1,2,3) - 可以用Drum鋼琴的聲音，感覺不錯。00:49:853 - Finish，00:50:753 - Clap (或者whistle在前，Finish在後)。這裡一樣：00:59:453 (1,2) -
    01:04:253 - 這裡用鋼琴音(Clap)，01:04:553 - 這之後不變。這裡一樣：01:09:053 (1) - 01:13:853 - 01:18:653 (1) -
    01:16:253 (1,2) - 前面頭可以用Drum-Clap，後面頭可以用Drum-Finish
    01:25:853 - 01:25:853 (1,2,3) - 這三個用鋼琴音，依你喜歡的搭配
    01:35:453 - 到Kiai前面都用鋼琴音^
    02:15:053 - 就這個點用鋼琴音比較好
  1. 鋼琴音好棒，中間夾雜一點鋼琴，然後一段消失，再接鋼琴音。這樣的感覺很棒 :)

[Normal]
  1. 你沒放音效?? 抄Hard的就好了的說，Hard非常棒耶 :)
Crystal
Former osu!catch Champion: 2018
1,122 posts
Joined June 2012
Crystal
Narcissu's Narcissu
Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Lavender

m1223961117 wrote:

Catch me in game~

[Hard]

  • 00:14:753 (5) - 這裡很奇怪，聲音也不是在紅線'上，尾巴也不是。這裡一樣：00:33:953 (5) - 然而并没有什么办法，可能要测过timing
    00:51:353 (1,2) - 調小聲，大概40%左右。一樣：01:00:953 (1,2) - 好
    00:49:853 (1,2,3) - 可以用Drum鋼琴的聲音，感覺不錯。00:49:853 - Finish，00:50:753 - Clap (或者whistle在前，Finish在後)。這裡一樣：00:59:453 (1,2) -
    01:04:253 - 這裡用鋼琴音(Clap)，01:04:553 - 這之後不變。這裡一樣：01:09:053 (1) - 01:13:853 - 01:18:653 (1) -
    01:16:253 (1,2) - 前面頭可以用Drum-Clap，後面頭可以用Drum-Finish
    01:25:853 - 01:25:853 (1,2,3) - 這三個用鋼琴音，依你喜歡的搭配
    01:35:453 - 到Kiai前面都用鋼琴音^
    02:15:053 - 就這個點用鋼琴音比較好
  1. 鋼琴音好棒，中間夾雜一點鋼琴，然後一段消失，再接鋼琴音。這樣的感覺很棒 :)
基本全加了，不过有些不一样
[/notice]
Thanks for mod!
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu

Random mod

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion
General


  1. Romanised title is not supposed to be Narcissu, but Narcissus. We can refer to comparsion of normal title shown in original version and the Steam version. Just use it as romanised title and put narcissu to tags as it is the romanised game name. Eventually, if you want to keep the title because you think title and source should be both romanised the same, then use lower-case letters, because the game is naricssu, not Narcissu, you can see that even on logo, but I think previous reason is enough obvious.
    SPOILER
  2. There are no tags, add stage-nana, riya and 菊地創 (+romanised Kikuchi Hajime). stage-nana developed the game, riya and Kikuchi Hajime are singers from eufonius.

Hard


  1. The map itself is quite fine, but the settings make a very huge gap between the normal and hard diffuculty. I recommend OD 5 and AR 5.5 or 5. Normal should then have HP 2.5, OD 2.5 and AR 3. That in my opinion makes the spread perfect. There should be really low gap in 2-diff maps.
  2. Parts like 00:04:253 - or 00:06:653 - should definitely be mapped. I know you follow the vocals more, but be honest, the piano in background is so well emphasized so it feels off when lower volume voice is mapped instead of it and additionally note which doesn't exist is mapped on 00:04:553, so at least make these 1/2 sliders to make it more sensible with the song. Mapping something what's not in the song is really bad in such a calm song. Or, if you don't want to use that many of 1/2 sliders, just end this one on 00:04:853 - and it will fit the song enough.
  3. 00:24:353 (7) - Replace this with a circle on 00:24:353 - because you map empty places in song.
  4. There is completelly no sound on 00:29:753 - 00:30:053 - 00:30:353 - thus mapping them in a row is especially inappropriate. Removing 00:29:153 (7,8) - and adding a circle on 00:29:153 - (on the same position as the slider) would make it nice to play and fit the song as well.
  5. 00:45:053 (1,2) - This rhythm doesn't make sense. There is no sound on 00:45:503 - . I would add just a circle on 00:45:053 - or to follow the music exactly, end this slider on 00:45:253 - it is 1/3 note.
  6. 00:49:703 (5) - Remove this note because it's not in the song and plays quite bad then.
  7. 00:53:903 - This is your choice, but this sound's volume is decreasing, so what about 30% volume here? If you remove the sliders, you can notice 00:53:903 (2) - is not that loud as previous slider.
  8. 00:59:303 (4) - Remove the note because it's not in the song.
  9. 01:03:503 - Same suggestion as 00:53:903 - if you liked it.
  10. 01:13:103 - Same as previous.
  11. 01:18:053 (3) - There is no sound on 01:18:053 - I would add circle on 01:18:353 - instead of this circle. You can actually notice something there, but it is offbeat, because it is fading-off sound!
  12. 01:23:753 (2) - Same as above, but there is no sound on 01:24:053 - so circle on start and leaving a pause here would be cool.
  13. 01:30:653 (1) - It is supposed to end on 01:31:253 - because what you hear on 01:31:103 - is fading-off vocal, which is obviously offbeat.
  14. 01:22:703 - Same suggestion as 00:53:903 - .
  15. 01:32:303 - Same as above.
  16. 01:34:853 (4) - I am not sure in this case, but it sounds like it should have 1 less repeat because there is not audiable sound on 01:35:303 - I think.
  17. 01:37:853 (1,2,3) - There are only fading sounds on 01:38:153 - 01:38:753 - 01:39:353 - thus it is offbeat and shouldn't be mapped. I would use 1/1 slider with repeat there.
  18. 01:39:653 (1) - This slider should end on 01:39:953 - because there is no audiable sound on 01:40:103 - .
  19. 01:40:853 (3) - This sound similar like 1:34:853 (4) - maybe there should be 1 less repeat too.
  20. 01:41:453 (1) - End this slider on 01:42:053 - because it doesn't make sense with music, no sound on 01:41:903 - .
  21. 01:43:253 (1,2,3) - This is the same as 01:37:853 (1,2,3) - .
  22. 01:45:053 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above.
  23. 01:46:853 (1) - This should end on 01:47:153 - because you mapped a sound which is not there, but didn't map a sound which is there.
  24. 01:48:653 (1) - This should end on 01:49:253 - because of the same reason as 01:41:453 (1) - .
  25. 01:50:453 (1,2,3) - This is the same as 01:37:853 (1,2,3) - .
  26. 01:52:253 (1) - This should end on 01:52:853 - because there is no sound on 01:52:703 - .
  27. 01:52:853 (2,3) - This is the same as 01:37:853 (1,2,3) - .
  28. 01:54:653 (3) - Same as above.
  29. 01:55:853 (1) - This should end on 01:56:453 - because there is no sound on 01:56:303 - .
  30. 02:15:503 - You might want to do the same as I suggested on 00:53:903 - .
I really like the difficulty, but you should focus on mapping the most significant sounds in the song. Mapping nearly audiable sounds with constant volume is not really good idea. Map important sounds, or map all sounds BUT change volume according to the song. In your case, you would have to make many changes. Also if there is fading-out sounds (long vocal, strings), it is impossible to map its end because it is unsnapped. You should not map such sounds.

Normal


  1. Your map doesn't use hitsounds. The simpliest way to fix it would be copying the hitsounds from hard with grumd's hitsounds copier.
  2. Firstly, tick rate should be same on all diffs - but that would be okay because it is only guideline. However you cannot manually edit .osu file. 0.5 tick rate was removed from editor, so it is not supposed to ever be used again.

Conclusion: Rankable

Very nice beatmap, but there are many bad-rhythm patterns on hard - they are either mapped to nothing or barely audiable sounds, but you are using constant volume. Try to copy the song a bit more when it comes to volume and rhythm and the map will be nice.
To be honest, without these rhythm things, I would say there is no reason to say 'no' to the future bubble. Obviously, feel free to ask me whatever you want regarding the map or moving the map forward. Good luck, have my star~! :3
Last edited by Wafu , edited 1 time in total.
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW
M4M


[General]


Normal → Narcissu's Normal 前人说了那么多遍了怎么还是没改。。


[Normal]


建议是AR4.5 OD3.5，当然这并没有什么卵关系，原因是因为AR太慢我看着就心急

全曲70%的音量居然就不变了dfuivuiegcvyrebciwyducvuiwdcbqwicwe

00:09:053 (1,1) - 这两个地方的音量我觉得可以大一点，可能是因为前面都跟vocal 去了，钢琴的声音似乎就特别明显一点

00:18:653 (1) - 00:30:653 (1) - 00:52:253 (1,1) - 同上

00:14:753 (5,6) - 这个blanket看着总感觉有点问题

00:45:053 (1) - 这里我觉得有必要放一个自定义的音效什么的了，sampleset和additions都是Auto感觉不太好

00:55:853 (2,3,4) - 我觉得这里摆成弧线形状会漂亮一点，因为前后两个都是弧线形状的滑条

00:57:053 (4,5,6) - 这里我还是觉得摆成这样比较不错，之前的话就个人来说是不太喜欢的

01:01:853 (1) - 这之后的几个钢琴音真的不跟吗？

01:06:353 (1,2,3) - 这里的123的头部感觉就可以排成一条直线

01:25:253 (4) - →（345，57），之前的话一个1.38DS一个1.43DS还是能看出来DS有变化的

01:53:453 (2) - 往下面移动1-2的话blanket的效果会更好一点

01:54:353 - 这里真的不加个note吗？

我觉的这个的音量也应该大一点


[Hard]


00:20:753 (1) - 和00:22:253 (4) - 也保持1.2的DS大概会更漂亮一点，至少我是这么认为的

00:35:453 (1) - 我觉得这个可能还要再加点音效，或者加大一点音量似乎都是可行的，看上去这个似乎可以是个finish

00:51:353 (1) - 之后的几段的折返的音量似乎有点大，听上去感觉违和感有点强，感觉这里没什么必要也用40%的音量，25%这样应该够用

00:51:653 (2) - 01:01:253 (2) - 和前面的分开点？

01:19:553 (3) - NC？这样看上去可能会读错什么的

01:22:553 (2,3) - 01:32:153 (2,3) - 不如叠一起吧




这么水真是不好意思啊
Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Lavender
Accepted most suggestions from Wafu(I'll let QAT check metadata soon, so no change for now)
Denied most from tm1209.

Added hitsound for Normal, updated.
Moecho
267 posts
Joined October 2014
Moecho
沒必要逼著人改成GD名啊，人家不想要就別叫改了，又不是rule寫著要 只要 tag有gd mapper的名字就行了 我記得
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu

[Teichan] wrote:

Accepted most suggestions from Wafu(I'll let QAT check metadata soon, so no change for now)
Ooopps! Sorry... I put bad link in a mod so there was wrong screenshot. You can check it there, also changed in mod: http://puu.sh/hYHkW/7e86d4beb4.jpg
It is taken from Steam translation - It's not 100% official, because stage-nana didn't translate this. But because it was released on Steam, that means stage-nana agreed with this romanisation, else it couldn't be released, so I think it's enough reliable.

Also remove 'romanised' from tags. I just wanted to tell you it is how his name reads and that it should be in tags for this reason, but without the word 'romanised' :)
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
看來我需要改ID = =

tm1209 wrote:

M4M


[General]


Normal → Narcissu's Normal 前人说了那么多遍了怎么还是没改。。 …… 這個應該可以不改……


[Normal]


建议是AR4.5 OD3.5，当然这并没有什么卵关系，原因是因为AR太慢我看着就心急……我也覺得低於5反而難讀……AR換成4.5了

全曲70%的音量居然就不变了dfuivuiegcvyrebciwyducvuiwdcbqwicwe …… ah …… 稍等我改改

00:09:053 (1,1) - 这两个地方的音量我觉得可以大一点，可能是因为前面都跟vocal 去了，钢琴的声音似乎就特别明显一点……額，等音效修完再插線 = =

00:18:653 (1) - 00:30:653 (1) - 00:52:253 (1,1) - 同上

00:14:753 (5,6) - 这个blanket看着总感觉有点问题……是啊但是包好那個滑條好彎啊 = =

00:45:053 (1) - 这里我觉得有必要放一个自定义的音效什么的了，sampleset和additions都是Auto感觉不太好……fix

00:55:853 (2,3,4) - 我觉得这里摆成弧线形状会漂亮一点，因为前后两个都是弧线形状的滑条……ok

00:57:053 (4,5,6) - 这里我还是觉得摆成这样比较不错，之前的话就个人来说是不太喜欢的……換了一種√

01:01:853 (1) - 这之后的几个钢琴音真的不跟吗？……這都是紅線音啊加了就變成hard了

01:06:353 (1,2,3) - 这里的123的头部感觉就可以排成一条直线……好

01:25:253 (4) - →（345，57），之前的话一个1.38DS一个1.43DS还是能看出来DS有变化的…… fix

01:53:453 (2) - 往下面移动1-2的话blanket的效果会更好一点…… fix

01:54:353 - 这里真的不加个note吗？…… 好

我觉的这个的音量也应该大一点
@Wafu : i wait mapper dnoe hitsound and i will copy Orz

about tick rate , AudioLeadIn edit .osu file too but it's useful …… i think it's no problem . i use tick rate 0.5 for a clean layout and hitsound …… if its unrankable i will add a small volume slidertick.wav . my map use 0.5 but none point it …… maybe its ok ……

thx mod and star ::>_<::

[hitsound]

因為不是我自己弄的而且我覺得normal應該和 hard一樣，而且osu掉線地獄所以我寫這裡了111

00:45:053 (1) - 這個水滴的聲音我是灰常灰常不喜歡……矯揉造作的感覺。個人建議換成鐘，穩重而有儀式感 → http://puu.sh/i19lG/99fe3730d6.wav

01:37:853 - ^

00:57:053 - Normal難度裏面的這個應該弄錯了，應該是drum-finish 或者別的什麼……

01:17:153 - ^

01:35:453 - ^

01:18:953 - 還是我的難度 = = …… 這個應該不是finish ，

01:39:653 - 這之後固定的長白線clap次次次的和音樂出入相當大……反正是安靜的歌曲沒有打擊感也無所謂我建議全部去掉

02:06:653 - sliderslider需要靜音，少女你都是圈但是我是滑條啊111

我不敢動音效額……少女就當接了摸改一下吧【run

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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: narcissu.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 96878
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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Title:Narcissu
TitleUnicode:ナルキッソス
Artist:eufonius
ArtistUnicode:eufonius
Creator:[Teichan]
Version:Normal
Source:ナルキッソス -SIDE 2nd-
Tags:stage-nana riya 菊地創 Kikuchi Hajime
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Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Lavender

Narcissu wrote:

[hitsound]

因為不是我自己弄的而且我覺得normal應該和 hard一樣，而且osu掉線地獄所以我寫這裡了111

00:45:053 (1) - 這個水滴的聲音我是灰常灰常不喜歡……矯揉造作的感覺。個人建議換成鐘，穩重而有儀式感 → http://puu.sh/i19lG/99fe3730d6.wav

01:37:853 - ^

00:57:053 - Normal難度裏面的這個應該弄錯了，應該是drum-finish 或者別的什麼…… 没错, normal-hitfinish是底音sol

01:17:153 - ^ ^

01:35:453 - ^

01:18:953 - 還是我的難度 = = …… 這個應該不是finish ，

01:39:653 - 這之後固定的長白線clap次次次的和音樂出入相當大……反正是安靜的歌曲沒有打擊感也無所謂我建議全部去掉

02:06:653 - sliderslider需要靜音，少女你都是圈但是我是滑條啊111

其余都改了

我不敢動音效額……少女就當接了摸改一下吧【run
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General

  1. 此曲同样被收录在eufonius的专辑：“Σ”中，根据Wafu提供的截图和我去wiki上搜到的结果，这歌的歌名应该是这样的：
    Romanised Title:Narcissus（水仙花的英语后面本来就有个s然而日本厂商却在标题里没有加s导致水仙id错误的这个锅谁来背）
    然后你得把水仙的id加到tags里面去：
    add tags: Narcissu,Σ
  2. 当然你不确定可以去问下alacat？
Normal
  1. 01:28:253 (7,1) - 照前面这里是不是应该swap NC啊
Insane
  1. 00:22:253 (4,5) - 这梗不别扭吗，照道理5应该ctrl+g打起来才流畅，可以重新排一下
  2. 00:51:353 (1,2) - 坑比
  3. 01:03:053 (1) - ctrl+g?
Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Topic Starter
Lavender

Minakami Yuki wrote:

  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General

  1. 此曲同样被收录在eufonius的专辑：“Σ”中，根据Wafu提供的截图和我去wiki上搜到的结果，这歌的歌名应该是这样的：
    Romanised Title:Narcissus（水仙花的英语后面本来就有个s然而日本厂商却在标题里没有加s导致水仙id错误的这个锅谁来背）
    然后你得把水仙的id加到tags里面去：
    add tags: Narcissu,Σ √
  2. 当然你不确定可以去问下alacat？ 然而alacat现在只接泡图的check req了
Normal
  1. 01:28:253 (7,1) - 照前面这里是不是应该swap NC啊 帮改了
Insane
  1. 00:22:253 (4,5) - 这梗不别扭吗，照道理5应该ctrl+g打起来才流畅，可以重新排一下 这歌很慢我想应该没事
  2. 00:51:353 (1,2) - 坑比 都改了
  3. 01:03:053 (1) - ctrl+g? √
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