1. ALEFY's MEDIUM - 4Key (2.18 stars, 663 notes)
2. BASIC - 4Key (1.35 stars, 377 notes)
3. HARD - 4Key (2.84 stars, 954 notes)
4. SPECIAL - 4Key (3.83 stars, 1238 notes)

Fresh Chicken wrote:

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Timing: The start point should be 00:01:887 - here. Check your slider tick.
match the white line and drum sounds.

Etc: You should add the tag "ALEFY"
oh...i forgot. sorry added.

Why ALEFY's MEDIUM difficulty has low HP than BASIC? Please check it again. Or I have a suggestion for all difficulties. How about this?
BASIC: HP:6/OD:6 or 7, MEDIUM: HP:7/OD:7, HARD: HP:7.5/OD:7.5, SPECIAL: HP:8/OD:8, depend on you.
fixed

I'm really confusing now because of the name of artist. But I'm on to the "wrong".
I think the romanised artist should be "Hinatabi Bitter Suites". Check the I Tunes.
http://puu.sh/n0022/affcbb192d.jpgIt is the Official Image. written "Sweets". it is right.

Seems all difficulties have good completeness. Nice job!

BASIC

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  00:44:435 (44435|2) - Hmm... I'm really confusing about this snap. In music's flow. It should be 1/3. But seems 1/3 is misaligned too. I think it is right snap but you can ask to some other people about it.
  I think so , too ;w; i want to listen to other opinion. now keep.

1. 00:50:745 (50745|2,50745|1) - I have a one suggestion for this. Actually it is fine already but I want to make it more suitably pattern. How about this?
   Good.
   
2. 00:58:316 (58316|1,58459|1) - 1/2 jack in BASIC difficulty...It is very unfriendly pattern in BASIC. I think it should be a problem, so highly recommend to move a one note of these, in my personal opinion is... 00:58:459 (58459|1) - move to column 3 this note.
   I see. Okay.
   
3. 01:11:852 (71852|1,72245|2) - It should be snapped on 1/3. I won't tell it on other difficulties. Please fix this in all difficulties.
   01:43:458 - ~01:44:887 - How about this? for more good balance with each other hands.
   yeah~ ok.

Hard

1. 00:23:316 - Actually here has more big sound than 00:23:459 - here. Seems you are confusing about this. Check your chord.
   Adjusted.
2. 00:37:030 - If you want to make consistency with your beat. It should be two notes. Check these
   00:35:173 (35173|0,35173|1,35459|0,35459|1,35887|1,35887|0) - / 00:37:459 (37459|2,37459|0,37745|3,37745|1,38173|1,38173|3) -
   Okay. good modding.
3. 00:43:745 - Seems kinda awkward to make it empty, how about add some note?
   add a note.

SPECIAL

1. 00:06:316 (6316|1,6316|2) - Seems it doesn't need two notes I think like 00:05:745 (5745|1) - this.
   wow, i didn't notice. thanks
2. 00:25:459 - You may knew it already but I want to tell about it. This section also has sound like 00:25:030 - this. Depend on you.
   Yes, i know. But i want to emphasize. Keep...
3. 00:58:745 - Actually the main guitar sounds can feel from 00:58:887 - here. But guitar's start point is 00:58:745 - here. I want to suggest to remove this 00:58:745 (58745|2) - long note but well, it also depend on you.
   you're right. fixed
   01:21:506 (81506|2,81554|0,81602|1,81673|2) - These notes are absolutely wrong snap overall. Seems it is really faint snap but in my opinion, it is more correct snapping. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4487797
   Okay.
4. 01:31:744 - Why isn't it three notes like 01:33:458 - 01:35:172 - these? Suggest to add a one more note for consistency.
   Because there is no Vocal.(It is growing in the accurate) Also add when other user are pointed out. lol
5. 01:48:458 (108458|1) - It is same reason as 00:58:745 - this. It may back to me with a different answer what you chose on before.
   Yes~

ModとStarありがとうございます！本当に助かりました<3
Thanks for Modding and Stars! It was very helpful!!

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Hello PiraTom and ALEFY! Here is the mod as you(PiraTom) requested to me on in-game message!

Sorry for English modding. But I have no Japanese keyboard also it is too hard to use the Window imagine keyboard.

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ALEFY's MEDIUM

1. 00:14:602 - How about add some 1/2 notes or just note or long note? Seems it is kinda awkward to empty. Also BASIC difficulty has long note on this section. Please consider about this.
   [*]00:21:030 - I suggest to make it double. And suggest to add on column 4. Seems it is big sound like 00:19:745 - ,00:20:316 - these. I may able to understand what you intended. I'm using 1/2 stream so suddenly two notes can make players confusing. Isn't it? If that so, it doesn't matter to add on column 4. It is using only a one hand so it may not to be hard.
   
   
2. 00:44:411 (44411|2) - Seems it is wrong snap for me. Check other difficulties. others have the notes on 00:44:435 - this section.
3. 01:07:459 - I have a one suggestion. How about this? Seems the old pattern is using holding long note and should handle the normal note with same hand which one is holding the long note. Seems it is more comfortable to playing. Depend on you.
4. 01:10:697 (70697|1,71078|2) - Should be snapped on 01:10:745 - and 01:11:102 - here. It is wrong snap.
5. 02:02:316 (122316|0) - How about make it long note like 02:02:316 (122316|3) - this? Seems more fit with this part!

Well done PiraTom and ALEFY!! I don't know I deserve to judge your mapset but it has really good completeness even it didn't take any mods yet!!
Hope my mod could be help to you guys and good luck for rank!! And if you have some question about this mod. Feel free to contact me on in-game or forum message!

不足なmodding読んでくれてまことにありがとうございます!

*Edit. The reply is fine with Japanese!

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

hardをプレイした時に違和感があったので…
01:21:459 - to 01:21:745 - ここのsnap1/2じゃなくて1/3かなと…（dramsound）

あとmetadateのtagについてですけどGITADORAとPop'n musicも入れていいと思います。

good map!!
頑張って><)/~

puxtu wrote:

alright m4m
[Hard]
00:09:459 (9459|1) - add double for snare?
add a note.
00:10:030 (10030|0) - there's a loud kick before this note too
you're right. but here is one note.sry
00:24:745 - missing notes for snare
match vocals... okay added.
00:25:459 - here too
i don't want to put notes here T-T

01:21:459 (81459|3,81649|2) - add more 1/3?
02:01:316 (121316|1) - add 1/2 note
02:02:316 (122316|3) - add 1 more note for impact
added.

[Special]
00:09:602 (9602|2) - remove, no sound
yes, and change long note.
00:09:602 (9602|2,20030|3) - add W
sure
00:20:887 (20887|2) - missing note for clap
00:21:173 (21173|1) - and here for kick
? already put
00:30:030 - again, this time is quite loud. not sure if it was intended or not
same reason, sry
01:41:316 - add note
okay
02:01:458 - why are you keep ignoring the drum sound lol
oh,forgot yeah
nice map pira, gl!

Nanatsu wrote:

乙女繚乱 舞い咲き誇れ > Otome Ryo'u'ran Mai Sakihokore? たぶん?
修正しました
山口愛 > yamaguchi ai? yamaguchi megumi? 知らんな。。これはよくわかんない；
"megumi"が正しいです。image
ゲームの名前がtagにある場合、発売されたシリーズを入れることもできます。が めんどくさいならしなくてもおk


こんな感じで (だいたいtagはあっていれば少なくても沢山いてもおk）
ありがとうございます。しかし、省略しました。

あ、ちなみに ひなビタとhinabita入れるのは?
加えました。
hitsound チェックするツールがないです; 名前忘れった;;;

BASIC

* 00:18:316 (18316|0,18745|0,19459|0,19887|0,20316|0) - lol. probably a bit too many to use same column on easiest difficulty. can be moved a bit to 2.

* 00:33:887 - 00:34:745 - There's no problem on this section,

But I'd want to re-arrange like this way for novice players who aren't get used to use finger to play mania yet.



Just Whatver. Lol.

* 00:45:173 - 00:45:959 - ま〜ん〜こ〜
WTF (i)
* 00:49:745 (49745|1,49959|2) - I think they have same intervals. So i want to try something like 00:49:745 (49745|1,49959|2,50173|0,50316|0) - Ctrl + G ( I mean only column. )

* 01:42:316 - 01:44:673 - This part has odd rhythm to follow for novice mania players. I'd rather make a bit more easier here if possible. ( I'm not saying the beatsnap was wrong. so it's not necessarily to change and i'm not bn no longer ) [/img]
All Fixed.

へたくそになったからもうできなさそう; なにしてるのか全然わかんないし;

また来ます;
無理はしないでください

Fresh Chicken wrote:

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MY 2 KUDO SLOT

wwww Mark for bubble check.

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Okay, I'm here for bubble check.

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[General]

Tagに、を付けてはいけません。和泉一舞,Izumi Ibuki,津田美波,Tsuda Minami,春日咲子,Kasuga Sakiko,山口愛,Yamaguchi Megumi,ひなビタ,hinabita　こちらにある、を削除してください

AImodを確認してください。一つのerrorがあります
。
前にも言いましたけど、Hinatabi Bitter Sweets　に確信がありません、IamKwaNさんに聞いてみる方がいいと思います　

Widescreen Support をuncheckしてください。song setup -> Design にあるます。

Use special style(N+1 style) for mania をuncheckしてください。song setup -> Advanced にあるます。（なんでこれcheckしましたかｗｗｗ）

First offsetは　１６０２　です。for slider tick. offset を変わる前に適用しでください！

Hard のODとHPが不適切です。８：７．５をおすすめします。

diff同士 snap を一貫してください。
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rejected mod は必ず言ってください

[ALEFY's MEDIUM]

01:06:602 - 01:31:744 - 01:56:601 - unnecessary timing points.
done

00:14:602 - こっちにnoteがあればもっといいだと思います
done

00:38:887 (38887|2) - Vocalがだと思いますが。。。じゃあこれは00:39:173 - こっちで終わるLNがなるべきです
声の音が短いので却下させていただきます。

00:44:411 (44411|2) - これは00:44:435 - こっちです、他のdiffも00:44:435 - こっちにnoteがあります。
done

00:57:602 - missing?
done

01:07:602 (67602|2,67887|1,68030|2) - http://puu.sh/reUkI/34eb548f4a.png これがもっとbalanceがあると思います
見た目のbalanceがよくても、押しにくいので却下させていただきます。

01:10:697 (70697|1) - 01:10:745 - Wrong snap
指摘していただいた場所の方が違和感があるので却下させていただきます。

01:11:078 (71078|2) - 01:11:102 - Wrong snap
〃

01:11:840 (71840|2,72221|1) - 01:11:852 - 01:12:245 - Wrong snap
〃

01:57:173 (117173|0,117173|1) - これじゃなくて01:57:458 - こっちが 2 notesになるべきだと思います
ボーカルに合わせるのならばそちらの方がよいかもしれませんが、drumに合わせてあるので却下させていただきます。

一度適当に小さいおすすめとunrankable issue をmainでmodしました。

修正が終わったら呼んでください o/

Fresh Chicken wrote:

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[General]

Tagに、を付けてはいけません。和泉一舞,Izumi Ibuki,津田美波,Tsuda Minami,春日咲子,Kasuga Sakiko,山口愛,Yamaguchi Megumi,ひなビタ,hinabita　こちらにある、を削除してください

AImodを確認してください。一つのerrorがあります。

前にも言いましたけど、Hinatabi Bitter Sweets　に確信がありません、IamKwaNさんに聞いてみる方がいいと思います　
I know that there is no "HinaBita" ranked map. For a reason, you can't believe this source.
But I check konami original images (1 2 3 4). I think that I don't miss it...

Widescreen Support をuncheckしてください。song setup -> Design にあるます。

Use special style(N+1 style) for mania をuncheckしてください。song setup -> Advanced にあるます。（なんでこれcheckしましたかｗｗｗ）

First offsetは　１６０２　です。for slider tick. offset を変わる前に適用しでください！
I'm really sorry. I can't understand a little. I fixed, but it maybe wrong. please re:check chicken.

Hard のODとHPが不適切です。８：７．５をおすすめします。

diff同士 snap を一貫してください。
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rejected mod は必ず言ってください

[BASIC]

00:10:602 - 00:11:173 - 00:34:316 - 01:09:316 - 01:10:030 - 01:21:554 - 01:21:745 - 01:58:173 - unnecessary timing points.
他のdiffはそれぞれnoteがあるからこれがあると思えますが、BASICはnoteがありません。削除してください。

00:47:459 (47459|1) - ４はどうですか？for balance.

01:12:602 - add one, ほかの１noteのpartとは違いがあるし　01:17:173 - こちと同じと思います。


[Hard]

diffの名前をHARDに変わりたい、ならtext で修正する方法があります。

00:49:959 (49959|1,50173|1,50173|2,50316|1,50316|2) - これをもっと構造的にできると思います。http://puu.sh/reVtC/0e9aa56a2d.jpg

00:58:745 - add one more note? sound が少し強いです

[SPECIAL]

00:19:887 - add one? 少し強いです

00:23:316 - ^

00:27:887 - こっちは三つですね

00:58:745 - add one?

01:41:601 - ^

01:21:554 (81554|1) - F hitsound

01:48:458 - 00:58:745 と同じです

一度適当に小さいおすすめとunrankable issue をmainでmodしました。

修正が終わったら呼んでください o/