Konpaku Sariel wrote:

뀨

0 ~ 00:17:493
너무 조용한 부분인데 이부분은 매핑을 안하는게 좋을거같아요
: d d 가 심장박동 소리같아서 좋다는 의견도 있었거든요..
일단 놔두고 모딩을 더 받아보고 같은 지적이 또 나오면 바꾸도록 할게요

00:37:728 (73) - 동 추가
00:37:799 (74) - ^

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00:38:507 (79) - -> 00:38:365 (78) -
00:38:577 (80) - 을 강조하기위해서
: 79번 노트를 78번 앞에 옮겼는데 맞게 했나 모르겠네요

00:41:549 (96) - 캇 추가
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00:43:247 (105) - 큰캇
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00:47:068 (120) - 동 추가
00:47:209 (121) - 캇

00:47:492 (123,124,125,126) - ㄷ ㄷㄷㅋ
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01:08:436 (4,5,6) - ctrl + g
: 개굿 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

01:11:549 (30) - 캇
: 완료

01:25:771 (51,52) - 정박자로 다시 놓는것이 좋을듯..
: 목소리 때문에 그렇게 놨었는데 정박이 더 낫네요 굿
01:26:266 (53) - 캇
: 완료

01:26:832 (56,57) - ㅋㄷ
: 굿

01:46:926 (11) - ~01:48:059 (23) - 1/3 박자 패턴으로
: 어떻게든 넣었네요 ㅋㅋ

01:54:002 (22,23) - ㅋㄷ
01:54:285 (25) - 동
: 수정하고 26번 노트를 캇으로 수정
04:24:426 (61) - 큰 캇
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모딩 정말 감사합니다!
바꾸니까 확실히 더 좋아진 부분들이 많네요

- Racoon - wrote:

흐므

HP 5나 4로 줄여주세요

태고 맵이 노래가 길수록 영혼이 안모여요

그래서 어프곡일수록 OD는 높고 HP는 낮은 경우가 많아요

Tag에서 태그는 ,으로 구분하는게 아니라 스페이스바로 구분해요.

,대신 스페이스바 써주세요

: 태그 수정하고, hp 5로 수정했습니다.

귀찮으니 이유는 없다!

는 구라고 솔직히 오니 이상 난이도는 매퍼의 취향 타는 문제라 어떻게 딱히 지적할 수가 없어요.

중간중간에 Finish 빼먹은 부분이 있을 수 있어요.

만약 뒤쪽 드럼에서 심벌즈 사운드가 나면 전 넣는 편이라 넣어보는거도 괜찮으실 듯 싶네요


00:10:134 (1,1) - Delete? - 스핀까진 좋은데 이 박자는 잘 안들리는거 같아요
: 음.. 두번이나 지적 당해서 일단 빼기는 했는데 그렇게 하면 브레이크 타임이 되어버리는데.. 괜찮은지 모르겠군요
00:23:719 (17) - Delete?
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00:25:417 (1) - ^
00:27:540 (17) - ^
00:30:087 (31) - ^
00:32:280 (47,48) - ^
: 이 부분은 사운드가 앞 마디보다 확 강력해지는 부분인거 같아서 앞부분보다 조금이라도 더 넣고 싶었어요
저 노트들이 어색한거 같지도 않아서 일단 놔뒀습니다.
00:38:719 (79,80) - Ctrl+G?
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00:40:983 (93) - k?
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00:43:955 (108) - Delete?
00:44:238 - Add K?
: 죄송하지만 원래대로가 더 좋은것 같아요..
00:48:908 (129) - k?
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00:49:049 - Add d?
00:52:445 (145) - k?
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00:53:294 (151,152) - Delete?
00:54:851 (162) - K?
00:53:153 - 00:52:587 (146,147,148,149,150) 이 패턴 반복
: 세가지 모두 반영해서 그 부분 수정했어요
00:56:125 (167,168) - Ctrl+G?
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00:58:106 (176,177) - ^
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00:58:530 (178,181,184) - Add Finish?
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01:05:040 (1) - 끝나는 지점을 1틱 앞당겨주세요. 파란선에 있으면 뭔가 보기가 깔끔하지 못하다고 할까나
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01:07:304 (1) - k?
: 확실히 음이 다르군요. 완료
01:09:992 (15) - Delete?
01:10:771 (22,23) - Move to 01:10:842?
01:10:842 (22,24) - Ctrl+G?
: 위치 바꾸고 동캇 재설정 했어요
01:15:228 (60,61) - Delete?
01:16:502 (74) - ^
:
01:16:643 (75) - k?
: 굿
01:17:705 (85) - Delete?
01:17:988 (89) - ^
01:17:846 (87) - k?
: kkddkdddk 이게 상당히 칠때 느낌이 좋거든요.. 그렇게 바꾸면 단순해져서 재미가 떨어지지 않을까 싶습니다
01:18:908 (1) - K?
:

핳 모딩을 포기했습니다 ㅠ 너무 빽빽해요 ㅠㅠ
키아이 타임을 제외 하시고는 제가 모딩해 드린거처럼 조금 조금씩 텀을 주는게 저같은 경우는 보기 좋아요

02:02:634 - 02:23:153 - Kiai Time
02:40:983 - 03:37:728 - 키아이 타임 아니에요
03:37:728 - 03:55:983 - Kiai Time
04:52:587 - 04:55:983 - Kiai Time
05:00:794 - 05:01:643 - 키아이라고 하기엔 아직 도입부에요
05:01:643 - 05:24:285 - Kiai Time

:키아이 타임 전체적으로 3부분으로 알려주신대로 수정했어요
이렇게하니 확실히 깔끔하고 좋네요
(05:00:794 - 05:01:643 - 키아이라고 하기엔 아직 도입부에요) 저는 이부분 부터가 하이라이트인것 같더라구요..
그래서 전체적으로 이 부분부터 넣었습니다.

제가 오니 이상의 모딩엔 약해서 ㅠㅠㅠㅠ

죄송합니다 ㅠㅠ

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일단 모딩 정말 감사합니다~
k d 의 배치를 곡 분위기에 맞춰서 잘 바꿔주신거 같고 사소한 실수들을 잡아주신 부분에서 도움을 받았네요
비트 부분에서는 저랑 스타일 차이가 좀 있으신거 같아서.. 반영 못한 부분들이 많아서 죄송합니다.

Sanjenin Nagi wrote:

안녕하신가! 내 이름을 물어본다면 나는 왈도.
선택이 당신을 모딩합니다!
(모딩을 해드리지만 전부 수정할 필요 없이 선택하셔서 수정하시면 됩니다. :>)
: 멋지다!

이렇게 표기합니다(색까진 넣지 않습니다 :>)
Don동 = d
Big Don 큰동 = D
Kat캇 = k
Big Kat큰캇 = K

New World


배치가 어느 부분마다 어색하다고 생각됩니다.

그럼
Offset
bpm 시작점을 17493 - 3908 로 이동시켜도 원래 있던 부분에선 똑같이 흘러갑니다
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00:32:280 (47) - Delete
: Done
00:30:724 (35) - ^
: ddddd -> ddk d Good
00:47:068 - d
00:47:209 (120) - Change k
: Good!
00:48:200 - d
: Done
00:48:625 (128) - move 00:48:483
00:48:766 - d
: sound is exist on empty space so i didn't fix
00:50:535 - dk
00:50:747 - d
: great idea
00:51:738 (139) - k
00:51:950 (141) - Delete
00:52:021 (142) - Change d
00:52:233 - d
00:52:445 (145) - Change d
00:52:728 (147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154) - i think making 1/3 note :>

: All changed that part. i didn't like that part but now so coll!
00:54:002 (156) - Change k
00:54:214 (158) - Delete
00:54:356 (160) - ^
00:54:497 - d
: all done
00:54:709 (163) - Change K
00:54:851 (164) - Delete
: i think 00:54:851 (164) - no delete is better so d k (163,164)
00:57:823 (11,12) - kd -> dk
: done
01:13:955 (49) - Change k
: done
01:14:096 (50,51) - Delete
01:14:450 - d
: sorry i think the original pattern is better
01:15:228 (60,61) - Delete
01:15:865 - d
: changed 11 train and rematch d ks
01:16:148 (70) - Change k
01:17:846 (87,89) - Delete
01:18:059 (1,2,3) - Change KKD
: i liked kkddkdddk but it's good too! done
01:19:615 (7,8) - Delete
01:20:393 (15) - ^
01:20:747 (18) - ^
01:21:101 (21) - Change d
01:21:455 (24,25) - Delete
: there are so many deletes :d
01:21:667 - k
: done
01:23:153 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) -

01:25:983 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76) -

: i really like my original pattern in that part so i didn't fixed
sorry for you give me screenshot T_T
01:30:936 (85,94,103) - Change K
: i think that's good but it's not balanced with next part so i didn't fixed
01:31:431 - d
01:31:573 (89) - Delete
01:31:785 (91) - Change d
: all done
01:34:474 (109) - Change D
: done
01:34:757 (110) - Change k
: done
01:35:889 (119,120) - Change kd
: done
01:41:195 (167) - Delete
01:41:266 (168) - add Finish+Clap
: done
01:41:408 - 01:41:549 - 01:41:832 - 01:41:974 - add d
: It's d d K d d K, i did d K d K because that pattern is in next part enough
01:45:158 (8) - move 01:45:228 -
: done
01:50:464 (7) - Delete
: if that note not exist, i feel empty so i chose original
01:51:596 (1,2) - move to 1/3snap 01:51:549 and 01:51:643 -
: Good!
02:01:926 - Kiai Time move to 02:02:634 -
: i think kiai time should start from 02:01:926 - but i heard same thing twice so i fixed
02:09:143 (9,10,11,12) - i think no fine 1/8note like 1/4 ddk :>
: ?? i can't understand dddk (1/6) -> ddk (1/4) ok? LoL
02:10:559 (27) - Change k
02:10:629 (1) - Delete
: i think original pattern is better sorry
02:19:332 (26) - Change k
02:19:403 (27,28) - Delete
02:19:615 (29) - Change D
: if no 27,28 notes, i feel empty so i didn't delete and change some color
02:43:106 - K
: i can't hear sound
02:45:606 (28) - d
: that's high sound so i choose k
02:45:889 (31,32) - Change dk
: done
03:36:738 - Kiai Time move to 03:37:728 -
: done
03:37:516 (65,66) - Delete
03:37:304 (63,64,67) - add Finish
: that's nice changable note!
03:42:257 (18) - Change d
: done
04:27:681 - open F6 Change soft sound /// I think that it is better to follow the piano sound
04:44:804 (47,48) - Move to 1/3 Snap 04:44:757 - 04:44:851 -
: Good 2
04:57:587 (14) - Move to 04:57:540 -
: done
05:00:794 - Kiai Time move to 05:01:502 -
: done
05:08:294 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) - i think this note so strange but i'm no touching
: i'm thinking new stream
05:24:356 - Change sv 1.0 and move to 05:24:285 -
05:25:842 - add timing Section(F6 -> Plus button) SV: 0.85
: done
05:31:926 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - Delete Duplicate Timing Section(GreenLine and Little Red Line)
332526,-117.647058823529,4,1,0,70,0,0
332692,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,70,0,0
333160,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
333601,-78.7401574803149,4,1,0,70,0,0
333895,-105.263157894737,4,1,0,70,0,0
334349,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
334621,-138.888888888889,4,1,0,70,0,0
334821,-106.382978723404,4,1,0,70,0,0
335341,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0
335978,705.882352941176,4,1,0,70,1,0
(아 영어 귀찮아 타이밍 셋 가셔서 보시면
5:32:526
5:32:692
5:33:160
5:33:601
5:33:895
5:34:349
5:34:621
5:34:821
5:35:341 여기까진 녹색라인
5:35:978여긴 빨간라인 입니다.)

그럼 도움이 되셨길 바라며
무조건 바꾸는 것이 아닌 당신의 선택입니다.
: 님 광고 만드셔도 되겠어요 ㅋㅋ

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정성스러운 모딩 정말 감사합니다!
아주 좋아진 부분들이 많네요 ㅋㅋ 특히 첫번째 스샷은 굿굿
역시 수정하지 않은 부분들도 있지만 다음에 또 지적당하면 (대부분?) 고치도록 하겠습니다
엌 근데 하다보니 별이 0.08이나 내려가서 인세인으로 강등당함 ㅋㅋ 잼
두배만큼 해주셨으니 쿠도스 두개드립니다 ㅋ!?

Backfire wrote:

New World -
01:23:153 (37,51,78) - - Finishers here, it almost seems as if you missed them? Or you're intentionally not using them. You don't have to underuse them, you know
: i didn't think it ever but it's so good! Done
01:55:417 - Kat here would be nice, it flows and sounds better.
: Done
01:55:841 (50) - finisher or spinner here, it has no oomph or anything without it.
02:02:634 - ^
: add two finishers. So good
02:09:568 - lol what, I think you should really tone this down. ddk k ddk d kdddk seems like a fine pattern.
: that's good but i think that's climax and i want some hard thing on them so i fixed as ddkdkkddk k kdddk
02:19:332 - I don't like this, just seems straight up random.
: kk kd -> kkd k
02:56:549 - I would extend this stream a bit longer to here 02:57:257 -
: 5-1 notes -> 9 notes ( 02:57:257 - i think this part is good to one timing term )
03:01:077 - ddd right here would flow good
: that's good but i change like that, SV is not soft so i change SV only 1/3 part lol
03:19:757 - fill this whole section with 1/2 notes, it leaves it less empty.
: add one don before big notes
03:43:530 - d ddk is much betrer
: Done. it's better lol
03:44:662 - I don't like this stream, it feels like blatant overmapping, and it also is a very poorly constructed stream. Try some other alternatives
: reduce some notes (02:09:568 - like this part)
04:27:681 - Follow the vocals, because later in this section you do. Don't be lazy.
: Done. i thought that can make good atmosphere but it's better
04:57:964 - Please don't use a spinner in a section like this with lots of awesome drums.
: that's my miss :d changed drum beats

I did not like this map as a whole but it had its moments of good-ness.

Needs some more work

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Thanks for your modding so much!
My map is better thanks to your modding

-H a y a- wrote:

hello,M4M,sorry for delay

[new world]
sv
tooooo many slow downs,remove some
and not all maps need speed up at last
: but i think it's soft and good to atmosphere
last fast sv is not special part but i want to feel climax.
if other says same thing, i'll consider to fix it.
others
00:19:615 - add d here
: i don't like
00:30:865 (36) - k
: Done
00:41:691 (95,96,97,98) - k d k d
: Good
01:08:436 (4) - make it like that?
: that's not bad but i choose original
01:16:219 (71,72,73) - kkd
: i don't know what's better
01:47:492 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - there is no 1/3 in music
01:51:455 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - ^

01:55:276 (46,47,48,49,50) - kkddK
: good
02:45:606 (28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - It's 1/4 not 1/3

03:21:172 (128) - k
03:21:596 (131) - d
: i don't know what's better ww
03:29:945 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - ^

03:51:313 (57) - k
: fixed next note d to k
03:55:842 (91) - D
: done
04:10:841 (16) - k
: good
04:11:549 (21) - d
: that part ( k k k ) is higher 0.5 sounds each note so k d k is not fit
04:15:794 (1,2,3,4) - ^ recommand kkddk
: done it's 1/4 sound lol
04:20:747 (41) - d
: same reason as 04:11:549
04:36:172 (26) - k
: done
04:44:662 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) -^

05:08:294 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) - confusing while playing, but i can't point it out
05:23:719 (185,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
: climax is harder lol, if it's not awkward, it's good i think
too many notes after 05:27:398 - delete some?
: i don't want

This map still need some efforts ,but good luck
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Thanks to mod my map!

the 1/3 part you said is i really think it's well fit and some part was other modder's suggestion
so i don't fix 1/3s sorry

Surono wrote:

hello from my Qwekwek <(``)

[New World]
no problem for me, nice map~

hmm.. you must chose preview point in Timing xD

... sry not helpful ;w;
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Thanks!
i changed preview point

Neil Leo wrote:

From my modding queue, as you requested:

Ordinary Modding

New World:

1. 00:18:908 (6,7) - Ctrl+G, this seems better here
2. 00:23:577 (16) - If you did the above mod, I'd suggest to make this don.
   : i don't like two, sorry
3. 00:50:464 - Add don
   : Done
4. 00:57:398 - Add kat
   : no sound here
5. 01:35:747 (119,120) - Ctrl+G
   : Done
6. 02:36:596 (34,35) - Ctrl+G, to break repetition, also 02:36:738 (35) has a luoder note
   : Good
7. 03:02:068 (5,6) - Ctrl+G because of vocals
   : i think d k is better because vocal sound is high at last note
8. 03:25:205 (17) - Move to 03:24:922
9. 03:25:488 - Add don for consistency of above
   : 2 done, changed some colors
10. 03:21:738 (132) - Don, for vocals
    : k k k -> that's higher sound of 3 so i choose k
11. 04:13:955 (35) - Remove
    : done
12. 04:36:313 (27,29) - Ctrl+G seems better here
    : Done

That's all, good luck on your map!

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Thanks to mod my map~
Your mod has helpful suggestions!

1. 00:46:360 (115,116,117) add Finish.
2. 00:51:596 add d for follow the drum.
3. 00:55:841 add Finish
4. 02:00:370 add Finish. Guitar loud sound here.
5. 04:24:851 (105,107) Finish. In the same way as 97,99,101,103

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi. from my queue.
[ New World]

1. 00:46:360 (115,116,117) add Finish.
   : Done
2. 00:51:596 add d for follow the drum.
   : good :>
3. 00:55:841 add Finish
   : done
4. 02:00:370 add Finish. Guitar loud sound here.
   : done
5. 04:24:851 (105,107) Finish. In the same way as 97,99,101,103
   : i think it's awkward finish only 2 on these 4 same impactable notes

Good luck!
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Thanks to advice
Your suggestions are cool!