i modded your map, then realize that timing is (probably) off.
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私はバカですよ。ごめなさい
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i tried offset 2,096 and it sounds better imo
it's up to you though
forgive me please forgive me
ゆるして -
;_;
havent modded Nardo's yet, please poke me again whenever you want about what do you think about the offset and mod on Nardo's ;_;
once again really sorry
ほんとうにごめなさい。。。 QAQ
[General]
- Since there's no official source whatsoever about the title, how about change it to プラチナジェット, move TV Size to tags?
- There's a double space between 'ending' and 'ed' lol not important but worth pointing it out
- 01:27:979 (298) - what a troll
[Kantan]
- 00:08:056 (8,9) - the break is too small, remove 00:08:056 (8) - , considering 00:08:399 (9) - is a blue tick note
- 00:14:468 (8) - just suggestion, but remove this then move 00:15:384 (9) - to 00:14:926. Also add a note 00:15:842. Suddenly changing rhythm and new pattern (duplets) sounds kinda off and hard i think. 00:14:926 (8) - also can be used as a start of the new instrument, and 00:15:842 the drum becomes more intense .w.
- 00:50:651 (60) - no need for finish? I think the music here is not as strong as 00:51:338 (61) - , the music becomes quieter too. The vocal also powered up at 00:51:109, so remove it, i guess?
[Futsuu]
- 00:16:071 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - personal opinion tbh you need to simplify this. The pattern is ok, i admit it you're following the music and it's good. However, after a complicated (judging the player is a new one) like kdkD, don't you feel like adding a break? While im not pushing you to do it, i make some changes like this, however i highly suggest smth like that.
- 00:21:796 (33) - k? reason isn't needed i guess.. well music's pitch? and personally i think kD is easier to hit
- 00:27:063 (45,46,47,48) - isn't better as kkdd? Following the vocal's pitch imo
- 00:41:720 (82) - jumpscare? Im not kidding when i hear this im surprised lol can you move this to 00:41:949, by any chance?
- 00:46:987 (93) - try removing this, i think it follows the vocal better. also giving breaks for player to prepare for the sudden 'note but following vocal and music' stuff (?)
- 00:50:422 ~ 00:52:941 now THIS is hard for Futsuu player. try deleting some notes will you, i make it smth like this though, idk if you have anything simpler (which is even better) in mind.
- 00:53:399 (107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126) - too many 1/2s, needs more breaks. i changed the pattern several times, but it ended up ruining your mapping style. i hope you can search another alternative for this
- 01:07:140 (145) - also i dont really like a slider here, it's too short and too sudden for new players.
- 01:05:995 (142) - can be removed for break imo. the vocal 'ni' is kinda vague, and 01:06:224 (143) - has stronger pitch i guesss
- lolyeah problem is lack of breaks on 1/2s patterns, my opinion. rest are fine for me ovo/
[Muzukashii]
- 00:09:430 (26) - missing finish?
- 00:12:636 (39) - isn't it better as k for the clap heavy cymbal on the music?
- 00:16:071 (51) - isn't k better for following the music? >_>
- 00:19:277 (65,66,67,68) - kddk? it follows the music's pitch better than current one, or do this instead? lol
- 00:21:796 (71) - change to k?
- 00:29:353 add a note? vocal here seems empty without any note ww
- 00:47:216 (157) - move to 00:47:102? doesn't matter the tick, it's muzukashii and the current beat sounds off, really.
- 01:21:567 (288,289) - swap them? vocal goes higher on 288, and low at 289 (drum also strong there
- 01:22:483 (291) - change to k for vocal?
[Oni]
- 00:12:636 (43) - change to k for the kat rhythm?
- 00:20:422 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - ah this please change it. it should appear on inner oni, this kind of stream is hard enough, or 00:20:765 (85) - can be deleted, so the stream isnt too long or harder to read
- 00:35:880 (152) - same as above, although i try changing it to something like this. up to you~
- 01:03:704 (277) - this can be removed, since no vocal there ovo as well as for break, i guess? others too (00:56:376 (242) - 01:11:033 (310) - 01:18:361 (345) -
dont kd this yet please