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DONUT QUINTET - PLATINUM JET [Taiko]

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Charlotte
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年10月12日 at 23:33:26

Artist: DONUT QUINTET
Title: PLATINUM JET
Source: SHIROBAKO
Tags: ending ed tv size musashino animation musani どんどんドーナツ ! どーんといこう ! Don-Don-Donuts ! Let's go nuts ! nardoxyribonucleic hanjamon
BPM: 131
Filesize: 1676kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hanjamon's Futsuu (1.9 stars, 201 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.37 stars, 111 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2.74 stars, 282 notes)
  4. Nardo's Inner Oni (3.61 stars, 428 notes)
  5. Oni (3.22 stars, 377 notes)
Download: DONUT QUINTET - PLATINUM JET
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kantan - Completed
Hanjamon's Futsuu - Completed
Muzukashii - Completed
Oni - Completed
Nardo's Inner Oni - Completed
Surono
<(``) ngek...

[Kantan]
no problem 4 me, well nice `w`

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]
nice too~

[Muzukashii]
00:45:384 (153) - k

[Oni]
00:45:384 (194) - k

[Nardo's Inner Oni]
00:05:766 add k

well nice map =w= , hope helpful ~ ^^"
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Surono wrote:

<(``) ngek...

[Kantan]
no problem 4 me, well nice `w`

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]
nice too~

[Muzukashii]
00:45:384 (153) - k fixed

[Oni]
00:45:384 (194) - k fixed

[Nardo's Inner Oni]
00:05:766 add k

well nice map =w= , hope helpful ~ ^^"
Thank you mod :)
Nardoxyribonucleic

Surono wrote:

<(``) ngek...

[Nardo's Inner Oni]
00:05:766 add k fixed

well nice map =w= , hope helpful ~ ^^"
Thanks for the mod~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/hypUz.rar
tasuke912
Hi. from my queue.
[ General]
  1. プラチナジェットと(TVサイズ)の間に半角スペースを入れてください。Amazon
  2. 余裕があったらタグに歌手名も入れましょう。
[ Kantan]
  1. 00:02:102 (1,2,3,4) かなり小さな音なので初心者にはリズムを掴むのが困難な配置だと思います。いっそのこと9まで全て消して目立つ音が鳴っている00:08:972にノーツを置くのはどうでしょうか。
  2. 00:15:384 (9,10,11,12) kdddは特に似た音が無くパッとしない印象なので、一番は00:20:422との統一性を考えた配置にする、他はメロディーをもっとフォローする、奇数配置にするなどが良いと思います。
  3. Kiaiで同じようなパターンが延々と続いているので、休憩を兼ねて全音符を入れてみるのはどうでしょうか。
[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]
  1. 00:02:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) It's incomplete to follow the melody. Delete these or follow more faithfully.
  2. 00:09:430 -, 00:38:743 -, There are no ddk and kkd are too many. Please make some ddk.
  3. 00:59:353 (127,128,129) kdd => d-k - I think it's more fit.
  4. 01:14:010 ^
  5. 01:24:773 Delete.
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:03:705 (5,6,7) Melodyと真逆の色なのでかなり違和感を感じます。変更を検討してください。
  2. 00:08:972 (26) 響く音が鳴っているのでただのdよりはbigKにした方がより曲を活かせると感じました。前のddの一打目を消すと若干の休憩も挿めて良いと思います。
  3. 00:18:590 dkdkdkdにはどのような意味があるのでしょう。
  4. 00:28:437統一感を考えると 前後と同じように2連打にするべきでしょう。かなり浮いています。
  5. 01:13:094 最初のkiaiと同じようにkを置くべきだと思います。
  6. 01:24:773 Delete. 一つ前の響いた音で〆た方が聞こえが良いです。
[ Oni]
  1. 00:06:682 かなり静かな場所なので18のようなゴーストノーツは不必要です。
  2. 00:08:972 Muzu同様K
  3. 00:15:384 (59) メロディーの位置をガン無視するメリットを感じません。
  4. 00:24:315 配色が音に合ってないので若干オーバーマップ気味の複合になってます。複合を入れるとしても序盤は控えめにするべきでしょう。
    また、00:38:743からの方が音が強いので個人的には緩急を考え直してリマップすることを推奨します。
  5. 00:56:262 ボーカルの音程がかなり上がっているのでkkddは不適当だと思います。00:56:605にkを置く配置を考えてみてください。
  6. 01:24:773 same as Muzukashii.
[ Nardo's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:08:399 (25) I think it's more fit to change to d. Triangle sound here, but I prefer to follow the vocal.
  2. 00:15:613 consider to change to kkdkd-d-k. I think it follow more melody.
  3. 00:44:926 Delete. 1/6 doesn's sound here.
Good luck. 8-)
Nardoxyribonucleic

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi. from my queue.
[ Nardo's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:08:399 (25) I think it's more fit to change to d. Triangle sound here, but I prefer to follow the vocal. As the sound is really high-pitched and prominent, k would be better.
  2. 00:15:613 consider to change to kkdkd-d-k. I think it follow more melody. Both are okay to me, so I would like to keep mine atm.
  3. 00:44:926 Delete. 1/6 doesn's sound here. There exist sounds denser than 1/4, so 1/6 is used in attempt to accompany with them.
Good luck. 8-)
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Gemu-
Hi owo, from my Queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Kantan]

You forgot remove the Widescreen Support

00:16:300 - Change to k for the pattern in this part.

[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]

00:05:079 - Cambiar a k.
00:36:224 - Cambialo a d para hacer dk kd.

[ Muzukashii]

Perfect! :3

[ Oni]

Perfect! :33

[ Nardo's Inner Oni]

Perfect! :333

Amazing Beatmap!, I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
Hanjamon

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi. from my queue.

[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]
  1. 00:02:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) It's incomplete to follow the melody. Delete these or follow more faithfully. i think it's fine, i'll think about it
  2. 00:09:430 -, 00:38:743 -, There are no ddk and kkd are too many. Please make some ddk. changed some patterns
  3. 00:59:353 (127,128,129) kdd => d-k - I think it's more fit. okay changed to kkk
  4. 01:14:010 ^ ^
  5. 01:24:773 Delete. is fine imo
Good luck. 8-)

game rock wrote:

Hi owo, from my Queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]

00:05:079 - Cambiar a k. hmm ok
00:36:224 - Cambialo a d para hacer dk kd. no la veo la necesidad de ello lol


Amazing Beatmap!, I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
Thanks for the mods! ^^

Update ----> http://puu.sh/hEEi1/3ad0fb46ca.rar
Topic Starter
Charlotte

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi. from my queue.
[ General]
  1. プラチナジェットと(TVサイズ)の間に半角スペースを入れてください。Amazon fixed
  2. 余裕があったらタグに歌手名も入れましょう。結構tagがいっぱいですので、一時見送ります。
[ Kantan]
  1. 00:02:102 (1,2,3,4) かなり小さな音なので初心者にはリズムを掴むのが困難な配置だと思います。いっそのこと9まで全て消して目立つ音が鳴っている00:08:972にノーツを置くのはどうでしょうか。1/2の音を取ってますが、同パターンでそこまで困難ではないと思いますのでno changeで
  2. 00:15:384 (9,10,11,12) kdddは特に似た音が無くパッとしない印象なので、一番は00:20:422との統一性を考えた配置にする、他はメロディーをもっとフォローする、奇数配置にするなどが良いと思います。パターンを変更しました。
  3. Kiaiで同じようなパターンが延々と続いているので、休憩を兼ねて全音符を入れてみるのはどうでしょうか確かにそうですね。他にも指摘がありましたら、少し変えてみようかと思います。
[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]
  1. 00:02:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) It's incomplete to follow the melody. Delete these or follow more faithfully.
  2. 00:09:430 -, 00:38:743 -, There are no ddk and kkd are too many. Please make some ddk.
  3. 00:59:353 (127,128,129) kdd => d-k - I think it's more fit.
  4. 01:14:010 ^
  5. 01:24:773 Delete.
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:03:705 (5,6,7) Melodyと真逆の色なのでかなり違和感を感じます。変更を検討してください。パターンを変更しました
  2. 00:08:972 (26) 響く音が鳴っているのでただのdよりはbigKにした方がより曲を活かせると感じました。前のddの一打目を消すと若干の休憩も挿めて良いと思います。fixed
  3. 00:18:590 dkdkdkdにはどのような意味があるのでしょう。パターンを変更しました。
  4. 00:28:437統一感を考えると 前後と同じように2連打にするべきでしょう。かなり浮いています。fixed
  5. 01:13:094 最初のkiaiと同じようにkを置くべきだと思います。^
  6. 01:24:773 Delete. 一つ前の響いた音で〆た方が聞こえが良いです。^
[ Oni]
  1. 00:06:682 かなり静かな場所なので18のようなゴーストノーツは不必要です。削除しました。
  2. 00:08:972 Muzu同様K fixed
  3. 00:15:384 (59) メロディーの位置をガン無視するメリットを感じません。パターンを変更しました
  4. 00:24:315 配色が音に合ってないので若干オーバーマップ気味の複合になってます。複合を入れるとしても序盤は控えめにするべきでしょう。
    また、00:38:743からの方が音が強いので個人的には緩急を考え直してリマップすることを推奨します。短いパターンに変更しました、また音が強い部分があまりにも寂しい感じだったので、notesを追加しました。
  5. 00:56:262 ボーカルの音程がかなり上がっているのでkkddは不適当だと思います。00:56:605にkを置く配置を考えてみてください。fixed
  6. 01:24:773 same as Muzukashii. ^
[ Nardo's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:08:399 (25) I think it's more fit to change to d. Triangle sound here, but I prefer to follow the vocal.
  2. 00:15:613 consider to change to kkdkd-d-k. I think it follow more melody.
  3. 00:44:926 Delete. 1/6 doesn's sound here.
Good luck. 8-)
Thank you mod :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

game rock wrote:

Hi owo, from my Queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Kantan]

You forgot remove the Widescreen Support fixed

00:16:300 - Change to k for the pattern in this part. fixed

[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]

00:05:079 - Cambiar a k.
00:36:224 - Cambialo a d para hacer dk kd.

[ Muzukashii]

Perfect! :3

[ Oni]

Perfect! :33

[ Nardo's Inner Oni]

Perfect! :333

Amazing Beatmap!, I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
Thank you mod :)
[R]
Suggestion

[Muzukashi~Oni]
Nothing to do -/\-
[Nardo's Inner Oni]
01:00:956 - switch 01:01:185 -
01:20:651 (402,403,404) - dkd
01:22:483 (413,414,415) - dkd
taiko_maniac1811
Hi hi~ M4M incoming

  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:08:514 (9) - move this to 00:08:399 , current placing is not correct. It would be awkward to play this on the white tick where the chime/bell is one tick earlier (blue tick)
  2. 00:35:079 (37) - move to 00:34:850 ? Fits well with vocal and drum
  3. 00:49:735 (58) - move to 00:49:506 ? Same reason as above ^
  4. 01:27:979 (107) - umm, add finish? Would be nicer if this was a K
  • [Hanjamon's Futsuu]
  1. 00:03:247 (4) - umm, move this to 00:03:476 instead? Flows nicely with the melody, and less awkward to hit at white tick
  2. 00:05:079 (8) - move this to 00:05:308 , same reason as above ^
  3. 00:08:399 (16) - add finish? This is up to you, but I prefer this to be K
  4. 00:19:964 - add a note? Somehow it's empty here without one
  5. 00:30:727 - add d? I know you want to have same rest places, but this here is too empty for me lol
  6. 00:51:338 (106) - end the slider at 00:52:025 so that players can have a rest time to prepare for the K K K after it, well you can leave it as it is if you'd like, no harm
  7. 01:27:979 (197) - add finish? Would be nicer if this was a K
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:03:705 (5) - move this to 00:03:476 instead? Flows better with the melody of the song
  2. 00:14:926 (47,48,49) - move these to 00:15:155 , and delete 00:15:384 (50) , flows well with the song's melody this way
  3. 00:21:567 (71) - delete? Can have a little rest time to prepare for the notes at 00:21:796
  4. 00:32:789 (109) - delete? This part is same as 00:25:460 , and it follows the vocal well without the k
  5. 00:58:437 (198) - delete? You can keep this if you like, I just want to make the pattern simple by deleting it lol
  6. 01:13:094 (253) - delete? ^ same as above
  7. 01:14:697 - forgot d? This part follows this one 01:00:040 (204)
  8. 01:27:979 (298) - umm, add finish? Would be nicer if this was a K
  • [Oni]
  1. 00:03:705 (5) - move this to 00:03:476 instead? Flows better with the melody of the song
  2. 00:07:483 (20,21) - swap kd? kkd plays better with the vocals imo
  3. 00:15:040 (53) - change to k and move it to 00:15:727 instead, follows the melody better
    00:16:071 (60) - ^ if above is changed, change this to k to make the patterns flow well
  4. 00:24:659 (99) - delete? Abit early for this d to be here, coz the vocals start at 00:24:773
  5. 00:28:208 (119,120,121,122,123) - this pattern here doesnt play very well, how about change it like this
  6. 00:31:987 (137) - delete? Same as 00:24:659 (99)
  7. 00:36:338 (160) - umm, k? The melody's pitch is rising here
  8. 00:47:102 (207) - change this to k and add d at 00:47:216 ,flows well with both vocals and melody of the song
    00:47:445 (208) - ^ if above is changed, change this to k so that it flows well with above
  9. 01:13:208 (325) - delete? Doesn't play well with the vocals that you're following
  10. 01:16:872 (343) - delete? same as above reason ^
  11. 01:27:979 (381) - umm, add finish? Would be nicer if this was a K
  • [Nardo's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:16:529 (65) - k? The pitch is still the same as 00:16:300 , and can emphasize the D at 00:16:758 more
  2. 00:38:972 (173) - delete? Don't have any significant melody to follow and can emphasize the D at 00:38:743
  3. 00:45:613 (210) - delete? A pause here can bring the impact on this k at 00:45:384
    00:45:842 (211) - ^ if above is changed, make this a k? can make a good flow imo
  4. 00:51:567 (241) - delete? Can emphasize the K at 00:51:338 more
  5. 01:27:979 (428) - umm, no add finish for this k? Would be nicer if it was a K imo

That's all from me
good luck! :3
Hanjamon

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Hi hi~ M4M incoming
  • [Hanjamon's Futsuu]
  1. 00:03:247 (4) - umm, move this to 00:03:476 instead? Flows nicely with the melody, and less awkward to hit at white tick it's fine imo >.<
  2. 00:05:079 (8) - move this to 00:05:308 , same reason as above ^ ^
  3. 00:08:399 (16) - add finish? This is up to you, but I prefer this to be K since the other diffs are not using finisher here i'll keep without, also, will be easier to hit (i know is only a big note xD)
  4. 00:19:964 - add a note? Somehow it's empty here without one i think a break is good, in low diffs the breaks are important
  5. 00:30:727 - add d? I know you want to have same rest places, but this here is too empty for me lol added a k instead
  6. 00:51:338 (106) - end the slider at 00:52:025 so that players can have a rest time to prepare for the K K K after it, well you can leave it as it is if you'd like, no harm done
  7. 01:27:979 (197) - add finish? Would be nicer if this was a K same as before xD

That's all from me
good luck! :3
Thanks for the mod :3

Update ---> http://puu.sh/iaTnX/3d6bcba460.rar
Nardoxyribonucleic

[R] wrote:

Suggestion

[Nardo's Inner Oni]
01:00:956 - switch 01:01:185 - The latter note has a higher pitch than the former.
01:20:651 (402,403,404) - dkd The vocal pitch is increasing, so ddk would be better imo.
01:22:483 (413,414,415) - dkd The vocal at 01:22:483 (413) - is relatively high-pitched.

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Hi hi~ M4M incoming

  • [Nardo's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:16:529 (65) - k? The pitch is still the same as 00:16:300 , and can emphasize the D at 00:16:758 more fixed
  2. 00:38:972 (173) - delete? Don't have any significant melody to follow and can emphasize the D at 00:38:743 Retained for pattern consistency as 00:42:636 (192) -
  3. 00:45:613 (210) - delete? A pause here can bring the impact on this k at 00:45:384 I would like to keep this to maintain a stricter pattern structure like 00:41:949 (190) -
    00:45:842 (211) - ^ if above is changed, make this a k? can make a good flow imo No change here as ^ is unchanged.
  4. 00:51:567 (241) - delete? Can emphasize the K at 00:51:338 more A better impact would be resulted when the pattern chain is longer.
  5. 01:27:979 (428) - umm, no add finish for this k? Would be nicer if it was a K imo Remain unchanged since 00:08:399 (26) - is mapped as k.

That's all from me
good luck! :3
Thanks for the mods~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/ib2nG.rar
Alepat
Hi! from Mid&Friends Taiko Modding Queue
Legend
(?) = Suggestion
^^ = same as above
[General]
Nice nice mapping! I love it

[Kantan]
00:08:514 (9) - move to 00:08:399 - (?)

[Muzukashii]
00:29:811 (98,99) - d k
00:47:216 (158) - move to 00:47:102 -
00:50:651 (172) - remove finish, maintain note (?)

[Oni]
01:21:109 (365) - k

[Nardo's Inner Oni]
00:44:926 (205) - k (?)
Nardoxyribonucleic

Alepat wrote:

Hi! from Mid&Friends Taiko Modding Queue
Legend
(?) = Suggestion
^^ = same as above
[General]
Nice nice mapping! I love it

[Nardo's Inner Oni]
00:44:926 (205) - k (?) Here I would like to focus more on the drums compared to the previous similar part.
Thanks for the mod~ The update link is unchanged.
Topic Starter
Charlotte

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Hi hi~ M4M incoming

  • [Kantan]
  1. 00:08:514 (9) - move this to 00:08:399 , current placing is not correct. It would be awkward to play this on the white tick where the chime/bell is one tick earlier (blue tick) pkay,try bule tick.
  2. 00:35:079 (37) - move to 00:34:850 ? Fits well with vocal and drum keep.because,hard to Kantan player
  3. 00:49:735 (58) - move to 00:49:506 ? Same reason as above ^ ^
  4. 01:27:979 (107) - umm, add finish? Would be nicer if this was a K nope.k is fit imo.

  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:03:705 (5) - move this to 00:03:476 instead? Flows better with the melody of the song fixed
  2. 00:14:926 (47,48,49) - move these to 00:15:155 , and delete 00:15:384 (50) , flows well with the song's melody this way ^
  3. 00:21:567 (71) - delete? Can have a little rest time to prepare for the notes at 00:21:796 ^
  4. 00:32:789 (109) - delete? This part is same as 00:25:460 , and it follows the vocal well without the k ^
  5. 00:58:437 (198) - delete? You can keep this if you like, I just want to make the pattern simple by deleting it lol nice suggestion,but keep.
  6. 01:13:094 (253) - delete? ^ same as above ^
  7. 01:14:697 - forgot d? This part follows this one 01:00:040 (204) oh,fixed
  8. 01:27:979 (298) - umm, add finish? Would be nicer if this was a K keep.
  • [Oni]
  1. 00:03:705 (5) - move this to 00:03:476 instead? Flows better with the melody of the song fixed
  2. 00:07:483 (20,21) - swap kd? kkd plays better with the vocals imo ^
  3. 00:15:040 (53) - change to k and move it to 00:15:727 instead, follows the melody better ^
    00:16:071 (60) - ^ if above is changed, change this to k to make the patterns flow well ^
  4. 00:24:659 (99) - delete? Abit early for this d to be here, coz the vocals start at 00:24:773 ^
  5. 00:28:208 (119,120,121,122,123) - this pattern here doesnt play very well, how about change it like this ^
  6. 00:31:987 (137) - delete? Same as 00:24:659 (99) ^
  7. 00:36:338 (160) - umm, k? The melody's pitch is rising here ^
  8. 00:47:102 (207) - change this to k and add d at 00:47:216 ,flows well with both vocals and melody of the song ^
    00:47:445 (208) - ^ if above is changed, change this to k so that it flows well with above ^
  9. 01:13:208 (325) - delete? Doesn't play well with the vocals that you're following ^
  10. 01:16:872 (343) - delete? same as above reason ^ ^
  11. 01:27:979 (381) - umm, add finish? Would be nicer if this was a K keep.


That's all from me
good luck! :3
Thank you mod :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Alepat wrote:

Hi! from Mid&Friends Taiko Modding Queue
Legend
(?) = Suggestion
^^ = same as above
[General]
Nice nice mapping! I love it Thanks=3=!

[Kantan]
00:08:514 (9) - move to 00:08:399 - (?) fixed

[Muzukashii]
00:29:811 (98,99) - d k nope.
00:47:216 (158) - move to 00:47:102 - ^
00:50:651 (172) - remove finish, maintain note (?) ^

[Oni]
01:21:109 (365) - k nope.
Thank you mod :)
Senritsu
i modded your map, then realize that timing is (probably) off.
...............................

私はバカですよ。ごめなさい 
;_______;

i tried offset 2,096 and it sounds better imo
it's up to you though

forgive me please forgive me
ゆるして -
;_;

havent modded Nardo's yet, please poke me again whenever you want about what do you think about the offset and mod on Nardo's ;_;

once again really sorry
ほんとうにごめなさい。。。 QAQ

[General]
  1. Since there's no official source whatsoever about the title, how about change it to プラチナジェット, move TV Size to tags?
  2. There's a double space between 'ending' and 'ed' lol not important but worth pointing it out
  3. 01:27:979 (298) - what a troll
[Kantan]
  1. 00:08:056 (8,9) - the break is too small, remove 00:08:056 (8) - , considering 00:08:399 (9) - is a blue tick note
  2. 00:14:468 (8) - just suggestion, but remove this then move 00:15:384 (9) - to 00:14:926. Also add a note 00:15:842. Suddenly changing rhythm and new pattern (duplets) sounds kinda off and hard i think. 00:14:926 (8) - also can be used as a start of the new instrument, and 00:15:842 the drum becomes more intense .w.
  3. 00:50:651 (60) - no need for finish? I think the music here is not as strong as 00:51:338 (61) - , the music becomes quieter too. The vocal also powered up at 00:51:109, so remove it, i guess?
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:16:071 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - personal opinion tbh you need to simplify this. The pattern is ok, i admit it you're following the music and it's good. However, after a complicated (judging the player is a new one) like kdkD, don't you feel like adding a break? While im not pushing you to do it, i make some changes like this, however i highly suggest smth like that.
  2. 00:21:796 (33) - k? reason isn't needed i guess.. well music's pitch? and personally i think kD is easier to hit
  3. 00:27:063 (45,46,47,48) - isn't better as kkdd? Following the vocal's pitch imo
  4. 00:41:720 (82) - jumpscare? Im not kidding when i hear this im surprised lol can you move this to 00:41:949, by any chance?
  5. 00:46:987 (93) - try removing this, i think it follows the vocal better. also giving breaks for player to prepare for the sudden 'note but following vocal and music' stuff (?)
  6. 00:50:422 ~ 00:52:941 now THIS is hard for Futsuu player. try deleting some notes will you, i make it smth like this though, idk if you have anything simpler (which is even better) in mind.
  7. 00:53:399 (107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126) - too many 1/2s, needs more breaks. i changed the pattern several times, but it ended up ruining your mapping style. i hope you can search another alternative for this
  8. 01:07:140 (145) - also i dont really like a slider here, it's too short and too sudden for new players.
  9. 01:05:995 (142) - can be removed for break imo. the vocal 'ni' is kinda vague, and 01:06:224 (143) - has stronger pitch i guesss
  10. lolyeah problem is lack of breaks on 1/2s patterns, my opinion. rest are fine for me ovo/
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:09:430 (26) - missing finish?
  2. 00:12:636 (39) - isn't it better as k for the clap heavy cymbal on the music?
  3. 00:16:071 (51) - isn't k better for following the music? >_>
  4. 00:19:277 (65,66,67,68) - kddk? it follows the music's pitch better than current one, or do this instead? lol
  5. 00:21:796 (71) - change to k?
  6. 00:29:353 add a note? vocal here seems empty without any note ww
  7. 00:47:216 (157) - move to 00:47:102? doesn't matter the tick, it's muzukashii and the current beat sounds off, really.
  8. 01:21:567 (288,289) - swap them? vocal goes higher on 288, and low at 289 (drum also strong there
  9. 01:22:483 (291) - change to k for vocal?
[Oni]
  1. 00:12:636 (43) - change to k for the kat rhythm?
  2. 00:20:422 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - ah this please change it. it should appear on inner oni, this kind of stream is hard enough, or 00:20:765 (85) - can be deleted, so the stream isnt too long or harder to read
  3. 00:35:880 (152) - same as above, although i try changing it to something like this. up to you~
  4. 01:03:704 (277) - this can be removed, since no vocal there ovo as well as for break, i guess? others too (00:56:376 (242) - 01:11:033 (310) - 01:18:361 (345) -
dont kd this yet please
Hanjamon

Senritsu wrote:

i modded your map, then realize that timing is (probably) off.
...............................

私はバカですよ。ごめなさい 
;_______;

i tried offset 2,096 and it sounds better imo
it's up to you though

forgive me please forgive me
ゆるして -
;_;

havent modded Nardo's yet, please poke me again whenever you want about what do you think about the offset and mod on Nardo's ;_;

once again really sorry
ほんとうにごめなさい。。。 QAQ

[General]
  1. Since there's no official source whatsoever about the title, how about change it to プラチナジェット, move TV Size to tags?
  2. There's a double space between 'ending' and 'ed' lol not important but worth pointing it out
  3. 01:27:979 (298) - what a troll
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:16:071 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - personal opinion tbh you need to simplify this. The pattern is ok, i admit it you're following the music and it's good. However, after a complicated (judging the player is a new one) like kdkD, don't you feel like adding a break? While im not pushing you to do it, i make some changes like this, however i highly suggest smth like that. changed the pattern to kkkD instead, it feels more easy
  2. 00:21:796 (33) - k? reason isn't needed i guess.. well music's pitch? and personally i think kD is easier to hit i was thinking d D is easier than k D for that reason i used d D, but anyways, changed to k D for now
  3. 00:27:063 (45,46,47,48) - isn't better as kkdd? Following the vocal's pitch imo i'll think about this, dkkd sounds good for me
  4. 00:41:720 (82) - jumpscare? Im not kidding when i hear this im surprised lol can you move this to 00:41:949, by any chance? not a bad idea, but i think the next section starts better without a note before in 00:41:949 -
  5. 00:46:987 (93) - try removing this, i think it follows the vocal better. also giving breaks for player to prepare for the sudden 'note but following vocal and music' stuff (?) done
  6. 00:50:422 ~ 00:52:941 now THIS is hard for Futsuu player. try deleting some notes will you, i make it smth like this though, idk if you have anything simpler (which is even better) in mind. i don't think is too hard, you know, is monotonal pattern, not things like ddkdd etc.. also, the spread is hard in other diffs, so i'll keep this for now
  7. 00:53:399 (107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126) - too many 1/2s, needs more breaks. i changed the pattern several times, but it ended up ruining your mapping style. i hope you can search another alternative for this as i said before i think is needed, due to the spread, if not the Muzukashii will be more more hard than this
  8. 01:07:140 (145) - also i dont really like a slider here, it's too short and too sudden for new players.i agree with this, maybe i was drunk or something xD changed to a d instead
  9. 01:05:995 (142) - can be removed for break imo. the vocal 'ni' is kinda vague, and 01:06:224 (143) - has stronger pitch i guesss i think is fine so keep >.<
  10. lolyeah problem is lack of breaks on 1/2s patterns, my opinion. rest are fine for me ovo/
dont kd this yet please
Thanks for the mod Senritsu :3

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