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Rameses B - Mountains (Ft. Veela)

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Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, May 29, 2015 at 3:50:09 AM

Artist: Rameses B
Title: Mountains (Ft. Veela)
Tags: gaia liquid Melodic DnB drum and bass Monstercat
BPM: 175
Filesize: 2635kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.49 stars, 79 notes)
  2. Gaia's Insane (4.36 stars, 252 notes)
  3. Hard (3.06 stars, 184 notes)
  4. Insane (4.15 stars, 258 notes)
  5. Normal (2.09 stars, 136 notes)
Download: Rameses B - Mountains (Ft. Veela)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~Conversations running through my head, I'll see ya.
Moving Mountains just to be ahead all the time, is it worth it? Oh.
Now I'm stuck in this feeling ah-ah, like I'm up on the ceiling so shy.
Guided up to the recent silence, don't know whether to be mad or be silent.
If you suffer intrusions ah-ah, let me get on the music so bright.
Don't know if i'm a nuisance ah-ah, but I'm tired of choosing alright.~
Last edited by Milan- , edited 16 times in total.
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg
pro
Anxient
1,568 posts
Joined June 2014
Anxient
FIRST MOD
since insane is the only diff that is between the minimum and maximum...
00:38:917 (7) - consider putting this a bit more down. what I mean is put it in x79 y202
00:49:888 (7,8) - I know where youre getting at with this, but try to ctrl+g each slider. http://puu.sh/hdplh/ffbd753976.jpg

Suggestion for hard:
no AR 8? D:

tiny mod. hue also..
gg
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-

pkhg wrote:

pro
wtf this map sucks (mod it /w\)


Also, thanks Anxient, i did those thing except the ctrl g. i really wanna break the flow there ><
Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
4,642 posts
Joined May 2013
Monstrata
Hey Milan! Here's a mod, giving back I suppose? Thanks for helping me out with my marathon :D. I hope some of this will be helpful~

[Insane]

00:28:802 (2) - How about 1/2 repeat slider instead? Could map 00:28:974 - ~
00:38:917 (7) - How about a 1/2 slider hear instead of a circle? Would be nice to cover the start of the vocal at 00:39:088 - .
00:41:145 (1) - Idk if this 3x repeat works... Also, you could add a circle at 00:41:060 - And begin the stream after the slider too.
00:43:545 - How about having a 1/2 slider begin here?
00:49:717 (6,7) - I don't really like how this flows. Maybe something like this instead?
00:55:203 (6,7) - Same^
00:58:974 (3,4) - Make this a jump? You've mapped jumps to emphasize the white ticks 00:58:460 (1,2) - 00:59:317 (5,6) - So it would fit for 3>4 too.
01:01:717 (3,4) - Same idea~
01:08:403 (3,4,5) - It would be nice if you could make this angle a bit less sharp. Would improve the flow~
01:09:431 (1) - 1/2 slider instead? And map another circle at 01:09:688 - .
01:12:174 (1,2) - ^. I think 1/2 slider with double at the end is better. You also seem to use this rhythm for later sections anyways, (01:14:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) (01:16:631 (2,3,4) - ) Etc...~
01:18:345 (3,4,5) - This flow could be improved.. Ctrl+G'ing 5 would flow better but maybe you have a better idea
01:21:088 (3,4,5,6) - Swap their locations Like this For better flow.

[Hard]

00:38:917 (7) - 1/2 slider instead?
00:39:945 (3) - I feel like instead of a 1/1 slider, You could map two 1/2 sliders starting on the white ticks instead.
00:43:545 - 1/2 slider here too?
00:47:145 (7,8,1) - Imo, this flow could be improved too. Since 7>8>1 is like clock-wise flow, but the slider itself goes the opposite direction.
01:16:631 (7,8,9) - Hmm... Maybe try a rhythm like This?.
01:26:574 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - If your intention is to create a fade out effect, I think it would be better to have the circles first, and then the 1/2 sliders so the intensity also decreases as the music fades out.

[Normal]

00:24:345 - Better to map another 1/1 slider starting here since it appears as if you're mapping to the vocals. New players would miss 00:24:517 (4) - Because they would click on the red tick thinking it's following the vocals (which imo is better).
00:35:317 - ^Same idea
00:41:317 (4,5) - 1/1 slider here too? I know there's a beat at 00:41:660 (5) - But it's kinda feint for me...
01:19:202 - 1/1 slider like before?
01:21:945 - ^ But i guess this one's kinda feint so the circle fits a bit better.
01:27:945 (7) - Optional i guess, but maybe NC this since you NC'ed the last note on Insane/Hard?

[Easy]

00:25:545 (1) - This touches the HP-bar for me (1680x1050) Maybe move it down slightly if it bothers you.
00:27:088 - Circle maybe?
00:52:631 (4,1,2) - Nazi blankets~
01:06:002 (2,3) - 1/1 slider would be better. The rhythm in the music will get beginners confused when they go to click 3.
01:27:945 (3) - NC? Like Hard/Insane

Really nice song, good luck ranking!
Haruto
1,815 posts
Joined December 2013
Haruto
Hi from my modding queue :)

[Easy]
  1. 00:26:917 - add a slider/note here please
  2. 00:40:631 (3,1) - - i think this is unrankable for Easy
  3. 00:47:831 (1) - 1/2 slider with reverse will be good imo
  4. 00:48:517 (2) - add note(if you accept above)/*:m:1337]
I just found that Issues on Easy difficulty :)

[Normal]
  1. 01:14:745 (5,6) - dont stack them please?
Good Normal diff, :D

[Hard]
  1. 00:53:488 (2,3,4) - This Stacks of Stream sure looks unreadable
oh my ><
sorry if my modding are bad :<
i just found that issues on your mapset :<
and Good luck on the ranking :D
nice mapset btw :)
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-
mod replies if someone cares
SPOILER

monstrata wrote:

Hey Milan! Here's a mod, giving back I suppose? Thanks for helping me out with my marathon :D. I hope some of this will be helpful~ it makes me feels like i have a gun infront of you hahaha k

[Insane]

00:28:802 (2) - How about 1/2 repeat slider instead? Could map 00:28:974 - ~ im mapping the melody, thus it's fine
00:38:917 (7) - How about a 1/2 slider hear instead of a circle? Would be nice to cover the start of the vocal at 00:39:088 - . i think the pause is for consistency , but uhm
00:41:145 (1) - Idk if this 3x repeat works... Also, you could add a circle at 00:41:060 - And begin the stream after the slider too. ok :3
00:43:545 - How about having a 1/2 slider begin here? it'd be weird rhythm to me;w;
00:49:717 (6,7) - I don't really like how this flows. Maybe something like this instead? broken flow is on purpuse cuz the music but ill see ><
00:55:203 (6,7) - Same^ same
00:58:974 (3,4) - Make this a jump? You've mapped jumps to emphasize the white ticks 00:58:460 (1,2) - 00:59:317 (5,6) - So it would fit for 3>4 too. i think it's fine for variation and stuffs
01:01:717 (3,4) - Same idea~
01:08:403 (3,4,5) - It would be nice if you could make this angle a bit less sharp. Would improve the flow~ i dont really see the problem here tbh, i do this pattern a lot on the kiai
01:09:431 (1) - 1/2 slider instead? And map another circle at 01:09:688 - . i believe i did it on purpuse to fits drums and vocals better
01:12:174 (1,2) - ^. I think 1/2 slider with double at the end is better. You also seem to use this rhythm for later sections anyways, (01:14:917 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) (01:16:631 (2,3,4) - ) Etc...~ those have different music tho
01:18:345 (3,4,5) - This flow could be improved.. Ctrl+G'ing 5 would flow better but maybe you have a better idea remade the whole pattern
01:21:088 (3,4,5,6) - Swap their locations Like this For better flow. i think it plays fine like this

[Hard]

00:38:917 (7) - 1/2 slider instead? it feels akward to me ;w;
00:39:945 (3) - I feel like instead of a 1/1 slider, You could map two 1/2 sliders starting on the white ticks instead. it covers the melody fine i think
00:43:545 - 1/2 slider here too? really akward
00:47:145 (7,8,1) - Imo, this flow could be improved too. Since 7>8>1 is like clock-wise flow, but the slider itself goes the opposite direction. it plays ok to me, the distance from8 to 1 isnt high to break the flow
01:16:631 (7,8,9) - Hmm... Maybe try a rhythm like This?. did something different
01:26:574 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - If your intention is to create a fade out effect, I think it would be better to have the circles first, and then the 1/2 sliders so the intensity also decreases as the music fades out. circles fits better the second part imo ><

[Normal]

00:24:345 - Better to map another 1/1 slider starting here since it appears as if you're mapping to the vocals. New players would miss 00:24:517 (4) - Because they would click on the red tick thinking it's following the vocals (which imo is better). i know, but i dont wanna use too many 1/1 here. Also, new players just see the circle, they wont miss it xD
00:35:317 - ^Same idea
00:41:317 (4,5) - 1/1 slider here too? I know there's a beat at 00:41:660 (5) - But it's kinda feint for me... but it even has clap on it ;w;
01:19:202 - 1/1 slider like before? these are fine cuz the music
01:21:945 - ^ But i guess this one's kinda feint so the circle fits a bit better.
01:27:945 (7) - Optional i guess, but maybe NC this since you NC'ed the last note on Insane/Hard? it would break my constancy tho uhm i nc'd cuz the slow down on higher diffs xd

[Easy]

00:25:545 (1) - This touches the HP-bar for me (1680x1050) Maybe move it down slightly if it bothers you. ok
00:27:088 - Circle maybe? i follow just vocals here, but adding a note on a red tick and create 2 3/2 gaps is bad idea to me
00:52:631 (4,1,2) - Nazi blankets~ dont nazy my blankets they are cool >(
01:06:002 (2,3) - 1/1 slider would be better. The rhythm in the music will get beginners confused when they go to click 3. i think it's fine tbh
01:27:945 (3) - NC? Like Hard/Insane same as b4

Really nice song, good luck ranking! tyy<3

Haruto_Aizawa wrote:

Hi from my modding queue :)

[Easy]
  1. 00:26:917 - add a slider/note here please it isnt needed for the music imo
  2. 00:40:631 (3,1) - - i think this is unrankable for Easy it's totally fine
  3. 00:47:831 (1) - 1/2 slider with reverse will be good imo i dont do that on my easies ;;, (most of time)
  4. 00:48:517 (2) - add note(if you accept above)/*:m]
I just found that Issues on Easy difficulty :)

[Normal]
  1. 01:14:745 (5,6) - dont stack them please? these kind of stacks are used on every normal you see tho
Good Normal diff, :D

[Hard]
  1. 00:53:488 (2,3,4) - This Stacks of Stream sure looks unreadable it just so autostack doesnt make it looks ugly, it's fine
oh my ><
sorry if my modding are bad :<
i just found that issues on your mapset :<
and Good luck on the ranking :D
nice mapset btw :) tyyyy<3

Thank you guysss!<3

(someone help me to choose a bg pls!! /w\)
Krauv
50 posts
Joined August 2014
Krauv
From Krauv's Queue.

Easy
00:33:774 (1) - suggest moving up a couple grid spaces for better flow (makes a nicer curve starting with previous (1))
01:14:231 (3) - end point could be blanketed better with previous slider
01:17:660 (1) - ^ and with next slider
Normal
00:49:888 (6) - add clap on end point to make it consistent with other hitsounds
00:58:288 (7) - ^
01:00:860 (6) - ^
Hard
00:49:888 (8) - curve this to match the curve set with next (1)
00:49:888 (8) - add clap on end point to make it consistent with other hitsounds
00:58:288 (8) - ^
01:00:860 (8) - ^
01:03:774 (9) - ^
Insane
01:28:631 (1) - remove NC

Also, I think it'd be better only having one BG. Just personal preference, but it does make the size smaller.
All suggestions.
CSLM
1,058 posts
Joined May 2013
CSLM
more rameses b yay!
don't be lazy, the next time map full ver plzzz ;w;
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-

Krauv wrote:

From Krauv's Queue.

Easy
00:33:774 (1) - suggest moving up a couple grid spaces for better flow (makes a nicer curve starting with previous (1)) it's for zig zag movement
01:14:231 (3) - end point could be blanketed better with previous slider my eyes say that these 2 are fine owo
01:17:660 (1) - ^ and with next slider
Normal
00:49:888 (6) - add clap on end point to make it consistent with other hitsounds no need
00:58:288 (7) - ^ yes
01:00:860 (6) - ^
Hard
00:49:888 (8) - curve this to match the curve set with next (1) it matches previous slider tho ;w;
00:49:888 (8) - add clap on end point to make it consistent with other hitsounds it isn't needed here imo
00:58:288 (8) - ^ ok
01:00:860 (8) - ^ no need here
01:03:774 (9) - ^ ^
Insane
01:28:631 (1) - remove NC it's cuz constancy

Also, I think it'd be better only having one BG. Just personal preference, but it does make the size smaller. i still dont know which bg to use here tbh ><
All suggestions.
tyyy<3

CSLM wrote:

more rameses b yay!
don't be lazy, the next time map full ver plzzz ;w;
full versions are boring as hell >w<
VINXIS
Featured Artist
3,161 posts
Joined April 2014
VINXIS
k i was told 2 mod gaia's diff olny l0l

btw remove the caps in each fo teh tags, ti deosnt matter and it looks cleaner without caps k

gaia's diff l0l
  1. inb4 diff name is kill
  2. imo if u manually perfectly stacked the notes it'd look better with ur kinda linear flow aesthetic of the map idk cuz it'd then be like skystar but with different flo xddd
  3. 00:34:288 (2,3) - everytime i see this overlap it keeps b o t h e r i n g me and isnt kawaii imo :<
  4. 00:58:802 (2) - i feel like u sud put this closer to 1, like around 388/196 or smth tbh
  5. 00:56:917 (1) - possibly offscreen? it might be for some resolutions cuz hp bar and shiot
  6. 01:10:802 (1,2,3,4) - imo i REALLY don't like how this flows and u never do dis kinda shiet evr anyway so i suggest u sud change it anyway to smth like how u did 01:21:431 (1,2,3,4) - which imo would play MUCH better or smth lol
  7. 01:27:945 (1) - The slider looks like this rn, imo if u changed the 5th point to red like this it'd look better tbh



sik diff
Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
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SPOILER

VINXIS wrote:

k i was told 2 mod gaia's diff olny l0l

btw remove the caps in each fo teh tags, ti deosnt matter and it looks cleaner without caps k

gaia's diff l0l
  1. inb4 diff name is kill
  2. imo if u manually perfectly stacked the notes it'd look better with ur kinda linear flow aesthetic of the map idk cuz it'd then be like skystar but with different flo xddd too much work -w-
  3. 00:34:288 (2,3) - everytime i see this overlap it keeps b o t h e r i n g me and isnt kawaii imo :< that's on purpose tho!!
  4. 00:58:802 (2) - i feel like u sud put this closer to 1, like around 388/196 or smth tbh shifted 00:58:460 (1) - down instead
  5. 00:56:917 (1) - possibly offscreen? it might be for some resolutions cuz hp bar and shiot not really but i did move it a bit
  6. 01:10:802 (1,2,3,4) - imo i REALLY don't like how this flows and u never do dis kinda shiet evr anyway so i suggest u sud change it anyway to smth like how u did 01:21:431 (1,2,3,4) - which imo would play MUCH better or smth lol sure
  7. 01:27:945 (1) - The slider looks like this rn, imo if u changed the 5th point to red like this it'd look better tbh
nah i like this =w=



sik diff

thanks!

baka diff =w=
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Rizen
1,662 posts
Joined August 2013
Rizen
From my modding queue~

[Timing]
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  • all fine ;)

[Easy]
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  • Disable Widescreen support because you have no storyboard?
    00:27:260 (2) - maybe add a circle here? The silence is kinda awkward. (like, do what you did here at 00:38:231 (2) - )
    00:39:260 (1) - blanket with previous circle 4
    00:40:631 (3) - maybe make this parallel to previous slider 2?
    00:52:288 (3) - I reckon you should change this to a 1/2 slider to emphasize the "si" in "silence"
    00:52:974 (4) - change to single circle to emphasize the "boooh" sound effect
    01:03:260 (3) - change to 1/2 slider to emphasize the "wreah, wreah" sound effect
    01:03:945 (4) - change to single circle to emphasize the cymbals
    01:17:660 (1) - blanket with previous slider end 4
    01:19:031 (2) - blanket with previous slider 1
    01:22:460 (4) - blanket with previous circle 3
    regarding the rhythm at 00:52:228 and 01:03:260, I know that you are trying to repeat the same rhythm as 00:46:802 but I feel that a little bit more variety would be nice

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  • 00:31:717 (2) - blanket better with previous slider end 1
    00:39:260 (1) - blanket better with previous circle 5
    01:12:860 (2) - Move to x:21, y:199? Looks better (but this would mean you would have to adjust everything else after)
    01:27:945 (7) - might just be me but try using a more interesting slider shape? maybe like this?. Ignore this if you disagree

[Insane]
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  • Disable Widescreen support because you have no storyboard?

[Gaia's baka insane diff =w=]
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  • Disable Widescreen support because you have no storyboard?
    01:17:317 (1) - Is there a reason why Kiai time is toggled here? Maybe it was accidently turned off (turn it back on)

btw, I like the background in the Easy over all of the others (closely followed by the BG in Hard/Gaia). The song sounds very sad/chilly/cool/eerie/lonely so a light blue background would fit well imo. The normal one is too green and the Insane one is too orange

All in all, a very nice map. If anything, it's too short :)

if you do not like this mod, please don't give me a mod as I shouldn't really deserve it
Euny
2,274 posts
Joined January 2014
Euny

as your request!♥ came from my queue


  • General
  1. okay, lets changing these bg pixels lol. i found 2 images doesnt fit ratio size 16:9 or 4:3. so....
    using it if you want. dont worry, its same file name. just change file.
    same as above.
nice map. nvm that bad acc lol

  • Normal
  1. 01:25:717 (1,2) - i think its not good to ignore 01:25:888 -this sound. how about this time line? cause you already makes nice tempo for this part to other diffs.
  • Hard
  1. 00:41:317 (5) - seems to nc spot.
  • Insane
  1. 00:30:517 (5) - sometimes, triangle flow gives bad reading imo. so,, move it x334y65 helps make better flow for your diff.
  2. 01:02:403 (1) - i really recommend ctrl G for this slider. it make a nice jump for this part.

that's it :) other diffs are looks fine to me and all diffs are looks really good :D
hope it ranked.
Milan-
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Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-
mods replies

[ Rizen ] wrote:

From my modding queue~

[Timing]
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  • all fine ;)

[Easy]
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  • Disable Widescreen support because you have no storyboard? doesnt matter if it's on or off :3
    00:27:260 (2) - maybe add a circle here? The silence is kinda awkward. (like, do what you did here at 00:38:231 (2) - ) i think it gives a nice effect tho uhm
    00:39:260 (1) - blanket with previous circle 4 it's fine already
    00:40:631 (3) - maybe make this parallel to previous slider 2? it looks better this way imo
    00:52:288 (3) - I reckon you should change this to a 1/2 slider to emphasize the "si" in "silence" i dont wanna use 1/2 on thi easy ;w;
    00:52:974 (4) - change to single circle to emphasize the "boooh" sound effect but 2/1 slider is fine to cover vocals i think
    01:03:260 (3) - change to 1/2 slider to emphasize the "wreah, wreah" sound effect not fan of 1/2
    01:03:945 (4) - change to single circle to emphasize the cymbals vocals are more important imo
    01:17:660 (1) - blanket with previous slider end 4 i move it like 3 pixels yei
    01:19:031 (2) - blanket with previous slider 1
    01:22:460 (4) - blanket with previous circle 3 it's fine
    regarding the rhythm at 00:52:228 and 01:03:260, I know that you are trying to repeat the same rhythm as 00:46:802 but I feel that a little bit more variety would be nice i guess i like constancy a lot more :(

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  • 00:31:717 (2) - blanket better with previous slider end 1 blankets are fine
    00:39:260 (1) - blanket better with previous circle 5
    01:12:860 (2) - Move to x:21, y:199? Looks better (but this would mean you would have to adjust everything else after) i think mine plays a bit better
    01:27:945 (7) - might just be me but try using a more interesting slider shape? maybe like this?. Ignore this if you disagree circular shape is enough to me:3

[Insane]
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  • Disable Widescreen support because you have no storyboard?

[Gaia's baka insane diff =w=]
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  • Disable Widescreen support because you have no storyboard?
    01:17:317 (1) - Is there a reason why Kiai time is toggled here? Maybe it was accidently turned off (turn it back on)

btw, I like the background in the Easy over all of the others (closely followed by the BG in Hard/Gaia). The song sounds very sad/chilly/cool/eerie/lonely so a light blue background would fit well imo. The normal one is too green and the Insane one is too orange yes ill use that one, ty for the opinion too xD

All in all, a very nice map. If anything, it's too short :) thanks <3

if you do not like this mod, please don't give me a mod as I shouldn't really deserve it

Euny wrote:


as your request!♥ came from my queue


  • General
  1. okay, lets changing these bg pixels lol. i found 2 images doesnt fit ratio size 16:9 or 4:3. so.... Thank you! changed both for now :3
    using it if you want. dont worry, its same file name. just change file.
    same as above.
Nice score xD

  • Normal
  1. 01:25:717 (1,2) - i think its not good to ignore 01:25:888 -this sound. how about this time line? cause you already makes nice tempo for this part to other diffs. Did something different
  • Hard
  1. 00:41:317 (5) - seems to nc spot. ill try to keep constancy for now here
  • Insane
  1. 00:30:517 (5) - sometimes, triangle flow gives bad reading imo. so,, move it x334y65 helps make better flow for your diff. ok
  2. 01:02:403 (1) - i really recommend ctrl G for this slider. it make a nice jump for this part. i tested it and doesnt feel confortable to me ;w; i like this flow much more, altho your suggestion was nice :3

that's it :) other diffs are looks fine to me and all diffs are looks really good :D
hope it ranked.

Thank you! <3<3<3
Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Iceskulls
ticket used

[general]
  1. widescreen support checked in easy , gaia's diff and insane but not on other diffs
[easy]
  • I think slidertick 2 might be too much here the song is not really intense or something imo , I'd use slidertick 1 here
  1. 01:16:288 (3) - this touch hp bar also I think 01:14:917 (1,2) - transition here can be better for beginners , try something like this ?
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[normal]
  1. 00:28:974 - whistle
  2. 00:47:145 (6,7,1) - not pretty sure about triple stack like this but I think it might be kinda hard to read for new players
  3. 01:03:945 (1,3) - make them look same so flow would be better here ?
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[hard]
  1. 00:54:174 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - wow so many jumps here this would give player a bit wtf feeling or something imo I would try to reduce jumps here a bit , I guess these 00:54:174 (6,7) - , 00:54:860 (8,9) - are not really need to jumps imo
  2. 01:07:031 (2,3) - jumps here is pretty inconsistent with this jumps here 01:09:774 (2,3) - either jumps both or not jumps both for consistency
  3. 01:14:917 (1,2) - somehow if these two sliders look same it would make flow here better
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[insane]
  1. 00:32:745 (2) - nc for anti jumps ?
  2. 00:41:060 (1,2) - this kinda make me think you are doing 1/2 spacing here (it actually similiar to 1/2 spacing you use at the beginning ) would make more sense if you lower spacing here a bit so player might not go full wat here
  3. 00:48:517 (6,1) - this stack play a bit weird imo I think jumps like what you did here 00:54:003 (6,1) - would make transition here feel a bit better or you can stack (6) with (5) instead that also work imo
  4. 00:51:260 (6,1) - similiar to what I said above
  5. 00:50:060 (8) - ctrl+g this would make flow here 00:49:888 (7,8,1) - a bit better imo similiar to what you did here 01:00:860 (7,8,1) - current feel a bit awkward imo
  6. 00:59:145 (4,5) - is this derp flow here intentionally? hmm I guess you can make this consistent with flow here 00:58:803 (2,3,4) - like go up down up down up down kk
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    that would make flow here a bit better
  7. 01:06:003 (3) - nc for anti jumps ?
  8. 01:08:403 (3,4) - so close for spacing here somehow , use 1.1x ds spacing here ?
  9. 01:12:003 (8) - ctr+g this and it would make flow here 01:11:831 (7,8,1) - a bit better imo
  10. 01:19:545 (4,5) - a bit similiar to 00:59:145 (4,5) - flow would be more better if you make this somehow consistent like go up down .. , I guess lol
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[gaia =w=]
  1. 00:40:288 (4) - for some reason I think spacing here 00:39:945 (3,4) - should be same as 00:39:260 (1,2,3) - lol I guess that would make flow here a bit consistent
  2. 00:45:431 (3,5) - swap place of these two notes so flow here 00:45:088 (2,3,4,5,1) - would be better imo
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  3. 01:06:688 (1,2,1) - mhmm I think if you move this down a bit it would make flow here 01:06:002 (1,1) - better imo
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  4. 01:17:660 - wonder why you slow down sv here ? I think speed up sv would make sense here
good luck :)
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-
CelsiusLK

CelsiusLK wrote:

ticket used

[general]
  1. widescreen support checked in easy , gaia's diff and insane but not on other diffs it doesnt do anything tho
[easy]
  • I think slidertick 2 might be too much here the song is not really intense or something imo , I'd use slidertick 1 here i like 2
  1. 01:16:288 (3) - this touch hp bar also I think 01:14:917 (1,2) - transition here can be better for beginners , try something like this ? touching hp bar by 2 pixels isnt bad, and transition is fine too imo
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[normal]
  1. 00:28:974 - whistle ok
  2. 00:47:145 (6,7,1) - not pretty sure about triple stack like this but I think it might be kinda hard to read for new players it's totally fine
  3. 01:03:945 (1,3) - make them look same so flow would be better here ? flow is just fine to me o.o
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[hard]
  1. 00:54:174 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - wow so many jumps here this would give player a bit wtf feeling or something imo I would try to reduce jumps here a bit , I guess these 00:54:174 (6,7) - , 00:54:860 (8,9) - are not really need to jumps imo i think it's fine for the intensity and kinda constant with similar parts, uhm
  2. 01:07:031 (2,3) - jumps here is pretty inconsistent with this jumps here 01:09:774 (2,3) - either jumps both or not jumps both for consistency music is different in both cases tho
  3. 01:14:917 (1,2) - somehow if these two sliders look same it would make flow here better i made it this way so the next slider isnt too weird to play
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[insane]
  1. 00:32:745 (2) - nc for anti jumps ? i dont think people is that bad to no read this properly
  2. 00:41:060 (1,2) - this kinda make me think you are doing 1/2 spacing here (it actually similiar to 1/2 spacing you use at the beginning ) would make more sense if you lower spacing here a bit so player might not go full wat here ok
  3. 00:48:517 (6,1) - this stack play a bit weird imo I think jumps like what you did here 00:54:003 (6,1) - would make transition here feel a bit better or you can stack (6) with (5) instead that also work imo it's fine this way too imo
  4. 00:51:260 (6,1) - similiar to what I said above
  5. 00:50:060 (8) - ctrl+g this would make flow here 00:49:888 (7,8,1) - a bit better imo similiar to what you did here 01:00:860 (7,8,1) - current feel a bit awkward imo it plays fine to me, also both patterns have different music/way to play o.o
  6. 00:59:145 (4,5) - is this derp flow here intentionally? hmm I guess you can make this consistent with flow here 00:58:803 (2,3,4) - like go up down up down up down kk
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    that would make flow here a bit better i made this way so it's parralel with previous slider, also it doesnt play bad at all ;w;
  7. 01:06:003 (3) - nc for anti jumps ? not needed imo o.o
  8. 01:08:403 (3,4) - so close for spacing here somehow , use 1.1x ds spacing here ? ok
  9. 01:12:003 (8) - ctr+g this and it would make flow here 01:11:831 (7,8,1) - a bit better imo it plays totally fine to me
  10. 01:19:545 (4,5) - a bit similiar to 00:59:145 (4,5) - flow would be more better if you make this somehow consistent like go up down .. , I guess lol i tihnk circular flow is just fine here, uhmmm
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good luck :)

Thank you <3<3
ac8129464363
1,560 posts
Joined October 2013
ac8129464363
[Easy]
01:01:888 (2,3,4) - a rhythm like this would probably work better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3082661

[Normal]
00:47:145 (6,7,1) - not a fan of stacking 1/2 like this, even in normal diff. it works fine with 2 circles but doesn't really work out when you have 3 in a stack imo. you could space them out or use a slider.
00:52:631 (6,7,1) - ^
00:58:117 (6,7,1) - ^

[Hard]
nothing

[Insane]
00:26:060 (2,3) - overlap feels out of place. It has nothing to be consistent with like 00:23:317 (2,3) - and you don't do much overlappy stuff in this diff. you could probably remove it and it'd look better
00:40:631 (4,1) - eh idk it feels really odd being forced to click on the blue tick. you could just make 00:40:631 (4) - a 1/2 slider and have (1) start on the white tick
00:54:688 (2,3,4,5) - almost 3x jump, are you sure about this in easier insane?
01:06:003 (3,4,5) - this feels really nice to play if you know what to expect, but it's almost impossible to read if you don't already know the song. imo you should just make this a 3/4 repeat slider.

[Gaia]
00:44:745 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - <3
01:15:517 (3) - emphasis is on white tick so it'd probably work out if you just made this into a double coming off the slider rather than blue TicClicking (sorry 4 retarded pun)

not much to mod here @_@

good luck, nice set
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-

deetz wrote:

[Easy]
01:01:888 (2,3,4) - a rhythm like this would probably work better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3082661 I know what you mean, but the current one follows the vocals just fine imo. And also, using sliderend for strong beats on lower diffs is fine in my personal opinion, if there's a special purpuse.

[Normal]
00:47:145 (6,7,1) - not a fan of stacking 1/2 like this, even in normal diff. it works fine with 2 circles but doesn't really work out when you have 3 in a stack imo. you could space them out or use a slider. I think these are fine, they follow and fits the momentium
00:52:631 (6,7,1) - ^
00:58:117 (6,7,1) - ^

[Hard]
nothing

[Insane]
00:26:060 (2,3) - overlap feels out of place. It has nothing to be consistent with like 00:23:317 (2,3) - and you don't do much overlappy stuff in this diff. you could probably remove it and it'd look better ok
00:40:631 (4,1) - eh idk it feels really odd being forced to click on the blue tick. you could just make 00:40:631 (4) - a 1/2 slider and have (1) start on the white tick did something else
00:54:688 (2,3,4,5) - almost 3x jump, are you sure about this in easier insane? i was drunk
01:06:003 (3,4,5) - this feels really nice to play if you know what to expect, but it's almost impossible to read if you don't already know the song. imo you should just make this a 3/4 repeat slider. added NC, i dont really wanna change it to slider, it feels nice with circles :(

not much to mod here @_@

good luck, nice set much love<3
teach me how to jump!!!
Changed more stuffs on my insane and combo colours x.x apple whereareyouineedyou
Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
Rizen

[ Rizen ] wrote:

From my modding queue~

[Gaia's baka insane diff =w=]
SPOILER

  • Disable Widescreen support because you have no storyboard? ok
    01:17:317 (1) - Is there a reason why Kiai time is toggled here? Maybe it was accidently turned off (turn it back on) lol

btw, I like the background in the Easy over all of the others (closely followed by the BG in Hard/Gaia). The song sounds very sad/chilly/cool/eerie/lonely so a light blue background would fit well imo. The normal one is too green and the Insane one is too orange

All in all, a very nice map. If anything, it's too short :)

if you do not like this mod, please don't give me a mod as I shouldn't really deserve it

CelsiusLK

CelsiusLK wrote:

ticket used

[general]
  1. widescreen support checked in easy , gaia's diff and insane but not on other diffs fixed on mine
[gaia =w=]
  1. 00:40:288 (4) - for some reason I think spacing here 00:39:945 (3,4) - should be same as 00:39:260 (1,2,3) - lol I guess that would make flow here a bit consistent ya fixed
  2. 00:45:431 (3,5) - swap place of these two notes so flow here 00:45:088 (2,3,4,5,1) - would be better imo hmmm not bad but id like to keep mine
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  3. 01:06:688 (1,2,1) - mhmm I think if you move this down a bit it would make flow here 01:06:002 (1,1) - better imo flow wise it'd be pretty much the same imo, it just looks better this way for me ><
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  4. 01:17:660 - wonder why you slow down sv here ? I think speed up sv would make sense here ohhhhh idk ahahaha i'll see ww
good luck :)

deetz

deetz wrote:

[Gaia]
00:44:745 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - <3 ww
01:15:517 (3) - emphasis is on white tick so it'd probably work out if you just made this into a double coming off the slider rather than blue TicClicking (sorry 4 retarded pun) ehhh i think it's alright lol

not much to mod here @_@

good luck, nice set

thx everyone!

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osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 43888
Countdown: 0
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Mode: 0
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