1. Easy (1.66 stars, 115 notes)
2. Hard (2.91 stars, 238 notes)
3. Insane (3.61 stars, 303 notes)
4. Normal (1.97 stars, 148 notes)

58_Carrots wrote:

Thanks heaps for making this beatmap, i fell in love with this song the first time i heard it and have been groving to it since. been looking for its beatmap all over osu and i finally came across yours and i must say your timing on the notes are superb never had so much fun trying to finish a map in a long time great job man!

1. 00:03:188 (6) - extend it 1/4 as slider 3/4 gap is akward and not necessary at all. 01:15:915 (5) - same here and others diffs
2. 00:42:620 (1,2) - this is totally 1/6 ><. also add claps(?
3. 01:23:756 (1,2,3,4) - this is 1/6 as well
4. 01:24:438 (6) - ^
   hitsounds
5. 00:00:120 (1) - soft-finish fits nicely here >w< Here too 00:14:665 (1) - ; 01:01:256 (5) - tail
6. 00:12:847 (1) - 00:13:188 (2) - normal sampleset on tails? cuz clear snare
7. 00:14:324 (3,4) - i'd add clap on 3 and drum finish on 4. It sounds cool right?? rightt??? maybe
8. 00:28:983 (8) - drum finish sounds fine here too
9. 00:29:665 (2) - normal sample should be on tail instead of head imo. Same here, altho finishes can also fit. Also boths seem to be on 1/3, 1/4 sounds a bit too early >< (or may need more red lines yei)
10. 00:41:029 (4) - drum finish?
11. 00:41:710 (9) - normal sam sounds pretty on head. Here too 01:02:392 (3,7) -

1. 01:24:665 (2,3,1) - flow is pretty weird here >< try ctrl g on 1?

1. 01:21:029 (2,1) - something else? http://puu.sh/hour1/b93d18eb3f.jpg maybe
2. You could add some 1/2 on easy imo. Your normal is heave 1/2 charged and also has some awkward3/4 gaps

NewIpas wrote:

Hello~
From my Queue with your request in-game first xD

Let's start--------------

General

1. Set AudioLeadIn at least 1500 or 2000

1000？..

Easy

1. 01:05:574 (1,2) - I think flow after (1) doesn't look good since (2) placed difference against direction of (1) . Try to make it in the same direction so the flow will be nicerfix
2. 01:07:392 (1,2) - Same as above . You could try to Ctrl+J (1) so it will be directly notice that the next note was in the same line like its slider body...I think is fine now
3. 01:25:688 (1) - It's not a suggestion or anything, just comparing . Try to remove this spinner? *I guess it will be not fine* . Since you doesn't use spinner at the other diff

hmm..I add spinner on easy because is weird to use slider on Easy, also is weird to stope the map.

Normal

1. 00:01:029 (3,4,1) - Is this kind of pattern fine? I don't ever look something like this before, so I don't know if it's fine or not . Try to change? Seems a bit Hard for a Normalfix
2. 00:26:029 (2,3,4) - , 00:59:210 (2,3,4) - This toofix
3. 01:06:483 (3,1) - How about blanket? It will be make the flow nicerfix
4. 01:21:029 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - This kind of pattern too

fix

Hard

1. 00:17:733 (4) - Try to move this one to the left side a bit, so it will be like this :....nope
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:59:551 (4) - Just make it like this? It's resulted after I'd Ctrl+H on (3) :I would like to keep that
   
   SPOILER

   

Insane

1. 00:43:301 (4) - Try pattern like this, it will fits more better with the vocal :nah...nope
   
   SPOILER

   

That's all~
Good Luck~

sodarose wrote:

M4M request https://osu.ppy.sh/s/304122

[Insane]
00:38:983 (4) - x:132 y:96fix
00:45:574 (1) - 这个往上放一点跟00:44:665 (5) - Blanketfix
00:55:460 (4) - 往下放一点做Blanket？这个就...
01:02:165 (2,1) - 好像有点挨到了隔老远呢挨到一点儿没啥

[Hard]
00:02:847 (3) - 这个Blanket好像歪了fix
00:04:551 (4) - ^nope

[Normal]
Good diff

[Easy]
HP-1 ? 没太大必要性啊...


我尽力了！ orz

Lazer wrote:

[Insane]

00:08:188 (5) - Move upwards a littlefix

00:16:029 (6) - Maybe make this into a 1/4 slider?nope

[Hard]

00:01:824 (1) - Blanket with 00:01:029 (3) ?fix

00:02:392 (2,3) - Those two blanket aswell?fix

00:46:029 (2) - Make it curve slightly more upwardfix

00:53:756 (3) - 1/2 slider and add note at 00:54:097 (4) nope

00:55:120 (2,1) - Make those two stackfix

01:21:029 (3) - Maybe make this slider angle a bit more to the left


I could not find anything off in the other difficulties, really well made!

Milan- wrote:

hi imhere to increase ur sp

[insane]

1. 00:03:188 (6) - extend it 1/4 as slider 3/4 gap is akward and not necessary at all. 01:15:915 (5) - same here and others diffs
2. 00:42:620 (1,2) - this is totally 1/6 ><. also add claps(?
3. 01:23:756 (1,2,3,4) - this is 1/6 as well
4. 01:24:438 (6) - ^
   well, actually I like to follow the vocal on this diff so....and I pretty sure there has no 1/6 in this song (PД`q。)·。'゜！！！
   hitsounds
5. 00:00:120 (1) - soft-finish fits nicely here >w< Here too 00:14:665 (1) - ; 01:01:256 (5) - tailfix
6. 00:12:847 (1) - 00:13:188 (2) - normal sampleset on tails? cuz clear snare
7. 00:14:324 (3,4) - i'd add clap on 3 and drum finish on 4. It sounds cool right?? rightt??? maybe_(:зゝ∠)_nah...too strong for me
8. 00:28:983 (8) - drum finish sounds fine here too
9. 00:29:665 (2) - normal sample should be on tail instead of head imo. Same here, altho finishes can also fit. Also boths seem to be on 1/3, 1/4 sounds a bit too early >< (or may need more red lines yei)fix
10. 00:41:029 (4) - drum finish?fix
11. 00:41:710 (9) - normal sam sounds pretty on head. Here too 01:02:392 (3,7) -

[normal]

1. 01:24:665 (2,3,1) - flow is pretty weird here >< try ctrl g on 1?

fix

[easy]

1. 01:21:029 (2,1) - something else? http://puu.sh/hour1/b93d18eb3f.jpg maybe...weird..
2. You could add some 1/2 on easy imo. Your normal is heave 1/2 charged and also has some awkward3/4 gaps

_(:зゝ∠)_ well......I try to make easy as simple as I can..


Yea, Better check for others possibles snapping errors xD. you could convert your png bg to jpg for smaller size too

tutuhaha wrote:

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SoGa wrote:

Hi , From wkyik's queue

[General]

1. Set audio lead-in to 1500
2. u add custom combo colours and didnt enable it how many meanings可不可以好好说英文，give you some color see see Pia!(ｏ ｀-′)ノ”(ノ﹏<。)
   马蒂我还纳闷了一会haw many meanings是几个意思结果凑表脸！
   fix
3. Dissable widescreen support if ur not going to make a storyboard

[Easy]

• 
  Ar3.5 ?不习惯小数儿

1. I consider the current NC's way is too short tho , maybe u can try NCing them by 2 groups of Big white ticks insteadlong long ago, 有位神人和我说easy里NC要多，于是easy里的NC就多了起来
2. 00:15:574 (2) - Try to add whistle on head ?表，太重
3. 00:28:756 (2) - 其实这个不下也没什么所谓 >> 毕竟ez漏一个不舒服
4. 00:32:392 (3) - Finish instead?fix
5. 00:32:847 (1) - ^ on the slider-head表，太重
6. 00:40:120 (1,2) - 用一条滑条覆盖整个轨道怎样？miss掉俩音效不开心

[Normal]

1. Ar 5 ?
2. 00:04:210 (2,3) - sound weird this rhythm .也没那么奇怪啦...
3. 01:03:301 (3) - Curve this one ?直的多好
4. 01:07:392 (1,2,3) - Prefer to make something like this

改了这个后要移动前后左右的位置太麻烦了

[Hard]

1. 00:16:370 (1) - Why did u ignore the downbeat .. Try this if u want to follow vocal too , sound weird ignoring the big white ticks there因为在跟人声啊
2. 00:19:097 (5) - ^因为在跟人声啊
3. 00:18:301 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a perfect square ?搞正方形太费力了还是菱形好
4. 00:53:756 (3,2) - Nazi , stack ;w;啧...算了不过把形状稍微修了一下

[Insane]

1. 00:41:483 (8,9) - Kick slider 怎样虽然不太get你在说啥不过稍微拉开了点儿距离
2. Intersting rhythm ;w;

呵呵哒

sry for water mod ;w;

SoGa wrote:

听说英语会对未来有前途

jonathanlfj wrote:

[General]
audio-leadin用1000ms...是用1500ms吧..我现在已经都是1000ms了啊_(:зゝ∠)_

[Hard]
00:33:983 (6,7) - 这种读起来也很难，试试这样：

SPOILER

00:35:801 (5,6) - 同上

jonathanlfj wrote:

Normal和Hard的难度差距可能还是有点大，我再找找一些Normal能加大难度的地方

00:03:523 - circle
00:24:659 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/hGwpv.jpg
00:32:614 - circle
00:38:977 - circle
00:48:068 - circle
01:16:477 (1,2) - 这里换成circle跟00:54:659 (1,2,3,4) - 一样
嗯这样我觉得应该差不多了