1. Extra - 7Key (5.79 stars, 1996 notes)
2. Hard - 7Key (3.2 stars, 1135 notes)
3. Normal - 7Key (1.91 stars, 500 notes)
4. Usagi's Insane - 7Key (4.47 stars, 1531 notes)

ExUsagi wrote:

http://puu.sh/gZY5P.rar
need new custom hitsound file.. =w=)b
beautiful music is beautiful

tangjinxi wrote:

Hey, Dear pporse~ here my mod
column set
1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Hard

00:06:246 - i think add note to 4 column in here is better ;w;
00:06:626 - same reason to add note to 4 column
add notes and arrange

00:20:202 (20202|3) - 00:21:721 (21721|3) - i can't hear any voice here,so i think you can delete them
keep it. hmm..actually there has guitar sound. but it's really lower. so u can't hear that

For the human voice ,
add a longnote from 01:36:056 - to 01:36:436 - at 2 column
add a longnote from 01:36:436 - to 01:36:816 - at 3 column
add a longnote from 01:36:816 - to 01:37:195 - at 4 column
keep it. i also considered about it. but it's hard diff.
if add LN in there, it's too difficult. so i didn't use it :3

hope it can help you ~ as you say, just a suggestion

Mwalls Ho wrote:

It's really nice map
You pro mapper pporse
Good luck with your map !

Mwalls Ho wrote:

Btw you can use "Xceon feat.森永真由美" as artist name
and put current artist into romanised if you dont mind.

arviejhay wrote:

hi ya! u req?


1,2,3,4,5,6,7

[Normal]
00:12:892 (12892|4,13271|2) - move to 3 and 2, hand balance and because of this 00:14:790 (14790|1) - applied
00:29:221 (29221|1) - move to 3, hand balance keep it
00:48:778 (48778|3,48873|4,48968|5) - its better if you move this to 7,6,5, for the previous notes 00:47:449 (47449|0,47733|1,48018|2,48208|3) - oh looks good :3 applied
00:54:094 (54094|3) - move to 2 i feel emptyness on the left side, if you want, i suggest to move 00:54:284 (54284|4) - move to 3 applied
01:27:702 (87702|3) - i suggest to move to 3 for balance keep it
01:47:449 (107449|3) - move to 2 , emptyness on column 2 keep it

[Hard]
00:31:309 (31309|1,31499|0) - why not ctrl + J? arranged
01:32:069 (92069|6,92069|0) - why not move to 3 and 5? applied

[Extra]
00:50:487 - to 00:51:246 - and 00:50:297 (50297|5,50392|4) - i suggest to make them into LN walls. since they are streams of notes. the aimod wont pick up that part. keep it

That's all

Good luck!

ExUsagi wrote:

applied the 2nd line, thanks arvie!

http://puu.sh/h76fg.rar
^ update including self mod.. x__x so many odd rhythm fixed (hopefully)

Takane6 wrote:

00:15:550 - add note
00:36:056 - add note for "finish" (since u using 4 notes at 00:34:537 - and 00:31:499 - too )
00:42:037 (42037|5) - move to 00:41:942 -
00:49:727 - add note? i suggest to add at 7 (or maybe make it LN too...)
00:57:322 - 4 note? but will be inconsistent with 00:51:246 -
00:52:765 - 3 note? but will be inconsistent with 00:54:284 -
00:56:942 - add note
01:03:018 - 4 note? it means it has a same strength with 01:03:398 - ??
01:16:689 - 4 note are too much i think ;w;
01:18:018 - ^
01:31:120 (91120|3) - delete 1 note
01:32:259 - and 01:33:398 - you using 4 note for finish but only 3 at 01:33:778 - 01:34:157 - and 01:33:018 - )
01:55:233 - delete 1 note?
02:01:120 - add note? (just like 01:55:044 - )

Takane6 wrote:

hi pporse o/
random mod here...

[Normal]

SPOILER

01:47:354 (107354|6) - the end of the LN? gosh!!~
changed endpoint to 01:48:208 -
00:07:195 - will be better if add note here ok added note on 7th column
00:13:271 - ^ the same :v ^
00:20:107 (20107|0) - i think will be better to delete this (follow the piano(mayor sound)) keep it there has piano sound :3
00:21:626 (21626|6) - ^ the same ^
00:48:208 (48208|3,48778|4) - same pitch of vocal... move this >> 00:48:778 (48778|4,48873|5,48968|6) - 1 column to the left, maybe?umm..i don't think that they're same pitch of vocal. but arranged
01:43:651 (103651|4) - change to normal note maybe? same as you did at 01:10:044 (70044|2,70233|4,70423|3,70518|2,70803|3) -
arranged (01:10:233 (70233|4) - changed to LN)
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01:01:784 (61784|6) - this LN showing the vocal right? but i think it has a change of pitch at 01:01:879 - from the vocal... keep it
01:07:195 (67195|4) - ^ (there is a change of vocal pitch at 01:07:385 - ) applied
01:47:354 (107354|6) - ^ (there is a change of vocal pitch at 01:47:449 - ) keep it
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00:51:246 - until 01:01:879 - its a bit less note in the left column (123)
Suggestions:
+ 00:59:411 (59411|4,59601|4,59790|5,59980|4,60170|3,60360|2) - http://puu.sh/hdnQ7/bb0d7adb76.jpg
arranged
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from 01:54:284 - until 01:55:044 - a bit too extreme for "Normal"
suggestions:
+ follow the vocal maybe?
+ change the 3 notes into 2 notes applied
+ change the 4 notes into 3 notes because that 4 notes are included LN too... applied

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from 01:58:082 - until 02:00:360 - a bit too extreme for "Normal"
i think so. hmm.. arranged
Suggestions:
+ 01:57:132 (117132|2,117322|3,117512|4,117702|3,117892|2) - more better if you spread the notes (it has 7 columns in here :3 )
+ 01:59:601 (119601|4,119695|3,119790|2,119980|4,119980|2,120170|0,120265|1,120360|4,120360|2,120360|6) - http://puu.sh/hdorL/d8efebafd4.png
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the last part of the music:
from 02:01:120 - until 02:07:195 - you are following the vocal right?
Suggestions:
+ more spread the notes... you let column 1 and 7 empty at this part >w<
+ 02:05:487 (125487|4) - this note is actualy not at red line (1/2) but at 1/6 (listen the 25% of playback rate) hmm i guess 1/8? lol im not sure
yes this part is follwing the vocal. hmm but it is better to follow piano sound. so remapped this part
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[Hard]

SPOILER

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from 00:01:120 - until 00:05:676 - if you are actually following the pitch as your note position...
Suggestions:
+ Arrange it exactly as the pitch are :3
+ from 00:01:120 - until 00:03:303 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3014063
+ from 00:03:778 - until 00:05:676 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3014065
keep it
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from 00:07:195 - until 00:15:170 - why only follow the vocal? ;w;
ooh... because you are very following the vocal :3
but why you're not follow the vocal from 00:15:360 - until 00:19:347 - then?
from 00:31:499 - until 00:34:537 - here too
i know what u say. actually this map's drum sounds are lower and simple. and other instruments is almost following vocal sound. so i often used the vocal sounds. 00:16:309 - 00:19:347 - this part has strong drum sounds. so i used drum roll instead of using the vocal sound.

Im telling you... i really suggesting to you to follow the music (aspecially the instruments)... not the vocal itself... because this song is getting intense by the time... and following vocal means the intensity is only the same...
yeah actually I prefer to use the instrument than with vocal sound, too. but before u can see, this map's drum sounds are lower and simple. and other instruments is almost following vocal sound.

the result when you only follow the vocal is :
+ 00:48:018 - you follow vocal and make this as 4 notes
arrange
+ 00:48:208 - you follow the vocal too... but you forget with the instrument intenensity which is creating an awkward pattern...
added notes on 1st & 2nd column
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from 00:22:385 - until 00:25:423 - a bit overmapped here :3
nice point. remapped this part
Suggestions:
+ 00:22:575 - no need to make this 3 note...even if you following the guitar... since your make 3 note for beat sound at 00:22:385 - and 00:22:765 -
+ 00:24:094 - ^
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+ 00:36:721 (36721|0) - delete keep it. there has sound.
+ 00:36:816 (36816|1,36911|2,37006|3,37101|4) - move 1 column to left
remapped
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from 00:37:575 - until 00:51:246 - i see many unconsistent notes :3
Suggestions:
+ 00:38:335 - why 4 note? the sound here are actually less stronger than 00:37:575 -
+ first 00:38:335 - 00:48:018 - 4 note to represent vocal
+ and then 00:38:620 - 00:47:449 - 00:47:733 - 3 note to represent vocal
+ and then 00:38:904 - 00:43:271 - 2 note to represent vocal
+ suddenly 00:44:790 - 00:45:170 - 1 LN to represent vocal
^ please take attention at this because the consistency is really necessary at here... you have 4 different amount of notes only for vocal... >w<
^ i know probably you will say "im following the other sound too" || yes you right... but the consistency is fully dissappear when you do that... better to follow the "mayor sound only" and take attention to the pitch...
+ 00:48:208 - why only 1 note? but 00:48:018 - 4 note? that 4 note's sound is not stronger than 00:48:208 - changed
+ 00:44:411 - 00:44:695 - 00:44:980 - the sound here is very blur... why you represent it as 2 notes?
+ 00:46:499 - 00:46:214 - 00:45:930 - ^ the same :3
+ 00:51:246 - its too awkward to make this only 2 note since the instruments are strong as well...

hmm..:3 i think ur mapping style is very different with my style. consistency is necessary. yes that's right. but it is not rule. sometimes need to boldly give it up. i don't think that players always count the number of notes when they're playing. 2notes? 3notes? they feel just 'chord notes'. eh..it's my idea. u may not agree about it :3 it's just difference of opinion. never mind what i said applied some suggestions
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from 00:51:246 - until 01:15:550 - the first chorus of the map (actually you can put kiai here :3 )... you are extremely following the vocal well :3
you are very following the vocal ;w; it means you forget the instruments here
hmm..kiai is enough now.

00:51:246 - 01:03:398 - the 1st part of the 1st chorus is very inconsistent with the 2nd part of the 1st chorus... >w<
you completely following the vocal in the first chorus.. but then you follow the instruments at the 2nd part... means the consistency is fully destroyed :3 please arrange this >w<
keep it. when i played, i cannot find issue. if u point it out just for consistency, i don't have to be mentioned ;_; it's my style

from 01:14:031 - until 01:15:550 - well... people are dying in here... you are creating sort of jack pattern at column 7 but keep the column 3 and 4 untouched... please spread the note into all the columns
keep it. it's my intention. i know that spread pattern is comfortable. but from the beginning to the end a just comfortable map is boring and not help for skill improve..so sometimes it is necessary like to this pattern.
01:13:936 (73936|1,73936|0) - same problem with "Normal" diff :3
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from 01:21:626 - until 01:36:816 - this is the condition when the music getting intense... and you only follow the vocal which is really kills the increasing intensity :3
the note u using for vocal... i really suggest to delete that because as i said before: the intensity is only the same... and because the instruments can make the flow better while vocal not!
01:27:702 - 01:30:740 - remapped
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from 01:37:195 - until 02:01:120 - the kiai part (2nd chorus)
from 01:37:195 - until 01:45:930 - you are very following the vocal... but...
why you not following the vocal from 01:48:968 - until 02:07:195 - ??? If you answer: "because im following the instruments... and it creates a consistency" || then why you not do that before???
i always cannot understand that "because you used this before, you must use it same thing." i can say only one thing about it. this difference was necessary. that's it.
from 01:54:474 - until 01:54:569 - this part is so deadly... you using double 1/8 stream which is so rough for this diff :3
hmm..i agree that this pattern is really difficult for this diff. but for skill improve, it's necessary. keep it.
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[Extra]

SPOILER

00:10:993 (10993|4) - i think better to change this into normal note since there is a changing vocal's pitch at 00:11:183 -
arrange
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from 00:17:828 - until 00:19:347 - the pattern in here is "mirrorring" but its not consistent :3
00:18:018 - this is 4 note... but 00:18:113 - this is 2 note :3
00:18:208 - 4 note... er.. same problem :3
00:19:157 - here too~~ :3
keep it. it's my intention.
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00:22:385 - add note (finish sound)
00:23:904 - ^
added notes on 6th & 7th column
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from 00:25:423 - until 00:37:575 - this part actually are too easy when comparing to other part
00:31:499 - 5 notes are too much :3 keep it
00:32:259 - 4 notes are too much too reduced
00:34:537 - add note (finish sound) added note on 6th column
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from 00:37:575 - until 00:51:246 - i know this diff is "extra" but what are you doing are too much :3
as i tell you before at diff normal and hard... you really inconsistent in patterning ;w;
00:37:860 - different amount of notes while the sound is same with 00:38:620 (38620|5,38620|1,38620|2,38620|4,38714|6,38714|0) -
00:38:145 - different amount of notes while the sound is the same with 00:38:904 -
00:38:335 - 4 notes? are saying the strength is the same with 00:37:575 - which is using 4 notes too??
00:40:233 - 5 notes?? the music its not stronger than the 4 notes at 00:40:613 -
00:41:183 - different amount of notes while the sound is the same with 00:41:942 -
00:40:898 - different amount of notes while the sound is the same with 00:41:657 -
00:41:373 - 4 notes? are saying the strength is the same with 00:40:613 - which is using 4 notes too??
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00:39:094 - you use 3 note... same as 00:39:474 - 00:39:854 - 00:42:132 - 00:42:512 - and 00:42:892 -
but you didnt do that again at 00:45:170 - 00:45:550 -
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00:45:930 - i know what this 3 note follows too... but that is too much... you not need to waste such energy to push that 3 notes with that blur sound... 2 notes are enough for that...
00:48:018 - and you even make 4 notes for that ;w;

thank you for opinion. but i said as before at other diff.
no comment
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from 00:51:246 - until 01:15:550 - this part is what i said a overmapped part... you really push the vocal sound into a deadly zone while you can follow the instruments (as i said at diff hard and normal)
umm...can i ask why u said overmapped? i really don't know why u said it. it's wrong to use the vocal sound? i think that using the vocal is suited in this song. it is also used to be very much in the REFLEC BEAT.

01:01:784 (61784|6,61784|0) - not sure with this... since there is a change of vocal pitch at 01:01:879 - hmm im not sure, too. blue line? white line? or 1/6 line? orz i'm still considering about it
01:02:733 - 4 notes? that sound is are exactly the same with 01:02:828 - 01:02:638 - 01:02:544 -
01:02:923 - ^
arranged. actually they're not same with 01:02:544 -
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from 00:51:246 - until 01:00:360 - you using 2 notes for vocal
suddenly you using 3 notes for vocal from 01:03:398 - until 01:14:031 - you even use 4 notes for vocal ;w;
which means its very inconsistent in all the way
keep it. i just used other pattern. that's it.
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01:20:676 - 6 notes? in this situation?? this >>> 01:20:297 - are stronger than this >>> 01:20:676 - so why have to be 6 notes?
keep it. i think 6-notes is necessary.
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Kiai part: wew this part is overmaped for my eye ;w;
i do not know the meaning of 'overmapped' you saying. just too much -> overmapped ???
01:42:132 - 3 short LN?? is it too much?? it's necessary cuz it is climax part in this phase.
01:42:322 - ^ ^
01:42:512 - ^ ^
01:42:702 - ^ ^
01:47:638 - 4 notes? the sound is similar with 01:47:733 - which only use 2 notes ;w; keep it
01:47:828 - ^ ^
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from 01:48:968 - until 01:54:664 -
try to take a look at your other diff... the sound actually are kinda less in there... its oke when you follow the vocal... but i think the instrument sound only come out at the red line...
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01:54:569 (114569|4,114569|2,114664|4,114664|2) - uuh... after double 1/8 stream... you end this with 4 notes which 2 notes of it become a jack ;w;
when i played, this pattern is suited. ;w;
01:54:284 - 5 notes??i think better to delete 1 note because this sound is weaker than 01:55:044 - which has finish sound remove 4th column note
01:59:221 - delete 1 note... you using 5 notes for this part, right? (01:58:082 - 01:58:271 - 01:58:461 - 01:58:651 - ) keep it
01:59:411 - ^ ^
01:59:790 - 4 note again? the sound is similar with 01:59:885 - which only use 2 notes ;w; keep it
01:59:980 - ^ ^
02:00:265 - ^ ^
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maybe im a little bit too harsh... but remeber:
"~The more i mod a map, the more i support it~"

ExUsagi wrote:

thanks ene, all done, and thanks for the support..
http://puu.sh/heP8L.rar

MEGAtive wrote:

Hi
Mod from my queue

[Extra]

Mods

00:02:638 (2638|5) - Move to 7. It's easier to press. applied
00:04:347 (4347|4,4442|3) - Move one column to the left. Well, IMO it's much better than this. applied

00:16:594 - You can add notes here. It's IMO same sound as 00:12:607 + Usagi's Insane covers it.
00:16:784 - ^
00:16:974 - ^
00:17:164 - ^
00:17:354 - ^
00:17:544 - ^
00:17:733 - ^
arranged

00:20:392 - Add note? I think i hear a faint piano here.
00:21:911 - ^
00:23:240 - ^
00:23:430 - ^
keep it

00:31:309 (31309|3) - Move to 5. I think it's more convenient to press.
keep it. i'ts also convenient

00:37:765 - Add note here? I could hear piano here.
00:38:525 - ^
00:40:803 - ^
00:41:563 - ^
keep it

Great Mapset. And 5.73 star, KONAMI!! :3 :3
Good Luck~