M4M from my queue!
(Heads up, your mod was so boss so I'll try my best but sorry if it's not good :c_
[General]
The background you have atm is from oreimo but I'm fairly certain the song isn't from that show. Try using one like this
http://puu.sh/h3Bto/1e1942b8bc.jpg instead.
Add more tags like the songs name, your username, ClariS, etc.
Metadata checks out.
[Insane]
00:00:413 (1) - This whole section desperately needs hitsounding. It feels very floaty and it's hard for some (like me) to get good accuracy. Even make the volume of hitsounds 10%, they just have to be there.
00:11:322 (1,2) - Keep spacing consistent to 00:06:663 (5,1,4,1) -
00:18:140 (1,2) - ^ I get you're doing it to emphasize the new sentence but it's not needed and just ruins flow
00:17:913 (5,4,5) - stack?
00:20:413 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent slider shapes
00:32:686 (4,5,6) - Hard to read
00:37:685 (5,6,7,8) - Turn into a line, stack ruins flow
00:39:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I like this!
00:50:867 (3) - NC to stay consistent with your NC patterns before the new stanza (big white line)
00:57:685 (1,1,1,1) - NC really needed here?
01:00:413 (5,2) - ugly overlap
01:36:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - Blanket the stream on the end of the slider
01:39:049 (1,2) - This jump is 400x harder than every other part of this song
That's all from me!