1. Hard (2.78 stars, 260 notes)
2. Insane (3.68 stars, 358 notes)
3. Normal (1.53 stars, 114 notes)

1. 所有的diff里的Countdown, widescreen support, letterbox全部取消
2. NH的gap有点大，可能 肯定会被挑，因为hard下的节奏已经和insane差不多了
3. 默认sliderslide好吵啊啊啊啊啊，其实现在我听默认音效都会觉得吵，还是建议找一组好音效

1. 00:22:222 (1) - 建议改成note空1/8spinner以加强打击感 01:42:222 (1) - 同理
2. 00:48:585 (1,2) - normal不要叠，有图这样吃过dq、

1. 00:01:313 (4) - 现在不是很好在Hard放多于一次的折返了
2. 00:22:222 (1) - 见normal，后面不提了
3. 01:03:813 (5,6) - 最好不叠

1. 没什么好说的了，节奏和hard差不多啊，排版比我好

1. nc略凌乱，最好是等拍数大白线，有些bn比较在意这个，后面不再提
2. 00:27:676 - 转盘结束这里，另外需要注意下间歇时间，00:28:585 (1,2) - 不是太必要的话建议减去
3. 01:09:494 (1,2) - 低难度还是建议尽量减少重叠，可以试下发散排列 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2964250
4. 01:16:767 (1,2) - 略不好读，可以下和前个Kiai类似的排列
5. 好像有个说法转盘消音不能低于10% orz

1. 00:01:313 (4,5) - 00:03:131 (3,4) - 减一折接1/2条的话还能兼顾下ds
2. 00:21:313 (3) - ds
3. 00:27:676 - 转盘部分比N简单些。。。
4. 00:31:085 - 这里填一下没什么不好。。捎带改善下节奏
5. 美丽

1. 00:17:449 (3,4,5) - 听音乐的话DS 3-4＞4-5 会好些
2. 00:20:404 - 感觉三个难度用相同的排列略单调，高难度推荐试下填鼓点或者用滑条表达啥的
3. 01:12:222 - 4个一组略错位可能美观些 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2964360
4. 01:40:404 - 另外建议Kiai结束这里，因为节奏放缓和转盘没啥必要下闪光

[Teichan] wrote:

房

这排版比我工整多了

[General]

1. 所有的diff里的Countdown, widescreen support, letterbox全部取消 好
2. NH的gap有点大，可能 肯定会被挑，因为hard下的节奏已经和insane差不多了 感觉不会把，hard我一处连打都没有放，insane倒是有很多连打。
3. 默认sliderslide好吵啊啊啊啊啊，其实现在我听默认音效都会觉得吵，还是建议找一组好音效我去找找看~

[Normal]

1. 00:22:222 (1) - 建议改成note空1/8spinner以加强打击感 01:42:222 (1) - 同理 fixed
2. 00:48:585 (1,2) - normal不要叠，有图这样吃过dq、像这样的我感觉还行吧，具体我去问问

[Hard]

1. 00:01:313 (4) - 现在不是很好在Hard放多于一次的折返了 不会吧，这样打起来多没意思
2. 00:22:222 (1) - 见normal，后面不提了改了
3. 01:03:813 (5,6) - 最好不叠;w;

[Insane]

1. 没什么好说的了，节奏和hard差不多啊，排版比我好

Kagamine Ren wrote:

M4M
[Normal]

1. 关了widescreen support和letterbox 都去掉了
2. 00:09:494 (2,3) - 感觉要么就再弯一点，要么就干脆直着好了，这个样子挺奇怪的，可能是位置问题导致看起来不好看，01:38:585 (2,3) - 这两个就挺好的 感觉两边差不多弯啊
3. 00:34:722 - 加个note？改了
4. 01:04:040 (1,3) - 调整一下让他们叠起来吧 好
5. 01:41:767 (4) - 去掉clap 改了

[Hard]

1. 关了widescreen support和letterbox
2. 00:04:949 (3,4) - 感觉太近了，会让人误以为是连续的 这里是故意的
3. 00:22:222 (1,1) - 为什么这两个转盘跟normal的不一样 改了
4. 01:17:676 (1,2) - 试试ctrl+G的flow？好

[Insane]

1. 关了和letterbox
2. 00:25:176 (1) - 三个diff这里转盘的位置都不一样，还是统一一下比较好 现在一样了
3. 00:44:949 (5,6) - 太近的感觉 故意弄的
4. 00:46:767 (6,7) - ^ 后面00:57:676 (1,1,1,1) - 这里连续的反而比这个间距还大，不科学
5. 01:17:676 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - 可以摆的再好看一点，大概这样 感觉区别不大呀
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:03:813 (7,8) - 这个跳有点突然，建议减小一点间距或者前面也跳一下 no

没了

AIR wrote:

[Normal]

1. nc略凌乱，最好是等拍数大白线，有些bn比较在意这个，后面不再提 好
2. 00:27:676 - 转盘结束这里，另外需要注意下间歇时间，00:28:585 (1,2) - 不是太必要的话建议减去 改了
3. 01:09:494 (1,2) - 低难度还是建议尽量减少重叠，可以试下发散排列 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2964250 差不多啊感觉
4. 01:16:767 (1,2) - 略不好读，可以下和前个Kiai类似的排列 改了
5. 好像有个说法转盘消音不能低于10% orz orz先保留把

[Hard]

1. 00:01:313 (4,5) - 00:03:131 (3,4) - 减一折接1/2条的话还能兼顾下ds 不太想改，现在感觉还行
2. 00:21:313 (3) - ds 改了
3. 00:27:676 - 转盘部分比N简单些。。。改了
4. 00:31:085 - 这里填一下没什么不好。。捎带改善下节奏 这里不加了吧，为了突出hard到insane难度增加
5. 美丽

[Insane]

1. 00:17:449 (3,4,5) - 听音乐的话DS 3-4＞4-5 会好些 改了
2. 00:20:404 - 感觉三个难度用相同的排列略单调，高难度推荐试下填鼓点或者用滑条表达啥的好！
3. 01:12:222 - 4个一组略错位可能美观些 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2964360 这样改感觉太花了
4. 01:40:404 - 另外建议Kiai结束这里，因为节奏放缓和转盘没啥必要下闪光

wwwwwwwwwww

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

ClariS 赞~
[general]
offset + 8

[Insane]
00:09:949 (2,3) - 试下 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2968241 感觉现在这样好些
00:20:858 (2,3,4) - 建议头都可以加个fin 已经加了2个finish了，感觉够用了
00:25:176 (1) - fin 改了
00:33:131 (5,6) - 这两个和前面分开啊，和你前面那里一样00:30:858 (4,5,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2968261 不一定要和前面一样吧，这里想弄个停留效果的
01:14:267 (5,1) - 包好点 好
01:29:949 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 试下这顺序 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2968287 不用改了吧，现在这样挺好的
01:42:279 (1) - fin 最后这两个转盘都挺轻的，不用加fin了

[Hard]
音效可以参考我上面说的 前半部分第二个转盘加了finish
00:58:585 (1,2,3) - 可以在稍微弄好点。。orz这个不仔细看很难看出来的
01:26:313 (5,6) - 这里有个变化是两个音，前面叠的都是一个音，可以试下变化，例如把 01:26:540 (6,7) - ctrl+g 这么改感觉难度太大了

[Normal]
00:25:176 (1) - fin 改了
00:50:858 (5,1) - 包好点 改了

ts8zs wrote:

offset 420
[Insane]
plz use 24clap or flollow the music 24clap for kiai is enough for this song
00:07:691 (4) - del whistle no
00:18:146 (1) - make 1/4 shorter no
00:18:600 (2) - make 1/4 longer no
00:22:294 (1) - start at 00:22:350 - whistle not necessary
00:25:191 (1,1) - del no
00:33:146 (5,1) - swap nc no
00:33:600 (1,2) - Ctrl+G no
00:37:919 (7) - del no
00:38:146 - to 00:43:600 - 24clap no
00:43:373 - clap no
00:45:759 (2) - del 00:45:646 (1,2) - swap nc no
00:47:578 (9) - del no
00:48:941 (6,8) - move to 00:48:487 - no
00:52:691 (1) - make 1/4 shorter no
00:54:055 (2) - 00:53:600 -
00:53:600 (1) - 00:54:055 -
00:57:691 (1,1,1,1) - use circle no
00:58:600 (1) - del whistle no
01:09:737 - circle no
01:02:464 (3,4,5,1,2) - http://puu.sh/h0XLn/e9635eef24.jpg no
01:24:396 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/h0XNc/18f8651606.jpg no
01:26:782 (6) - NC fixed
01:40:419 (1) - del whistle no
01:41:328 - 30% fixed
[Hard]
00:30:873 - use 1/2 slider no
00:38:146 (1,3) - use 1/2 slider no
00:43:600 (4) - 1/2 slider no
00:52:691 (1,3) - use 1/2 slider no
00:58:600 (1,3) - blanket fixed
01:07:464 (6) - keep ds no
01:09:509 (5) - NC fixed
01:18:374 (6,1) - avoid this lap fixed
01:23:373 - Circle no
01:30:419 (5) - use 1/2 slider no
01:34:509 (6) - use 1/2 slider no
01:36:328 (5) - use 1/2 slider no
01:37:237 (2) - use 1/2 slider no
[Normal]
00:07:237 (4) - del no
NC at every long white line
fix all blankets
looks well

Litharrale wrote:

M4M from my queue!
(Heads up, your mod was so boss so I'll try my best but sorry if it's not good :c_

[General]
The background you have atm is from oreimo but I'm fairly certain the song isn't from that show. Try using one like this http://puu.sh/h3Bto/1e1942b8bc.jpg instead. I know it isn't from that anime but I can't find any better BG related to ClariS. The BG you just provided for me, I have used it in another ClariS map. I think I will find a better BG by myself, thank you for reminding me of that
Add more tags like the songs name, your username, ClariS, etc. I don't think songs name or my username should be written in tags.
Metadata checks out.

[Insane]
00:00:413 (1) - This whole section desperately needs hitsounding. It feels very floaty and it's hard for some (like me) to get good accuracy. Even make the volume of hitsounds 10%, they just have to be there. the hitsounds in the beginning is not very strong but definitely exist. I used soft-hitnormal2 and some soft whistle for the beginning part
00:11:322 (1,2) - Keep spacing consistent to 00:06:663 (5,1,4,1) - not really necessary
00:18:140 (1,2) - ^ I get you're doing it to emphasize the new sentence but it's not needed and just ruins flow I just fully stack them for better shape, not really affect the flow.
00:17:913 (5,4,5) - stack? OK
00:20:413 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent slider shapes not really need to be consistent
00:32:686 (4,5,6) - Hard to read added NC on it
00:37:685 (5,6,7,8) - Turn into a line, stack ruins flow streams here all stacked is a stop done in purpose
00:39:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I like this! thanks!
00:50:867 (3) - NC to stay consistent with your NC patterns before the new stanza (big white line) fixed
00:57:685 (1,1,1,1) - NC really needed here? yes, DS is increasing
01:00:413 (5,2) - ugly overlap I think it is fine o.o
01:36:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - Blanket the stream on the end of the slider ok
01:39:049 (1,2) - This jump is 400x harder than every other part of this song yes, you are right. decreased the distance

That's all from me!

thank you!

imaikiseta wrote:

Insane

00:25:185 (1) - Remove spinner, add slider and end it 00:25:526 no
00:25:640 - 00:25:867 - Add slider ^
00:26:094 - Add spinner ^
00:35:867 (3) - Ctrl+G no
01:08:026 (6,7) - Change the technique for this no

01:08:822 (1) - Remove no
01:45:185 (1) - Remove and end slider there ending 01:45:526 no
01:45:640 - Add a slider ending 01:45:867 - with reverse ^
01:46:322 - Add spinner ^

Hard

00:20:413 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make a star pattern with these no
00:25:185 (1) - Remove spinner, add slider and end it 00:25:526 ^
00:25:640 - 00:25:867 - Add slider ^
00:45:640 (4) - Place circle on top of 00:45:867 (1) no
00:47:458 (6,1) - ^^ ^
01:06:208 (2) - Flip this the other way I don't think so

01:40:413 (1,2,3,4,1) - Star pattern why always star pattern?o.o

Normal

00:38:140 (2) - Add hitsound Finish no
00:38:594 (3) - ^^ ^
00:39:958 (4) - ^^ ^
(I would keep this going as a pattern)
01:23:140 (4) - Face this the other way no

01:40:413 (1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe do a star pattern?no

liangv587 wrote:

normal-hitclap2可以把后面1000ms空白剪掉，节约100多kb的空间 改了
soft-hitnormal2可以把后面1600ms空白剪掉，节约将近将近200kb的空间 改了
[Insane]
00:09:049 (5) - 移到176,296，做个跳 感觉差不多
00:40:413 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这样不太好看，可以做个跳http://puu.sh/h61qf.jpg后面那个也可以抄一下 不好
01:26:322 (5,1) - 跨度太大了，不适合这个难度，而且flow不好，偷懒点旋转下就行了http://puu.sh/h61AE.jpg 不是太想改...

美丽，摸不动

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

General

1. soft-hitnormal2太轻，听不清了，弄响。 改了
2. normal-hitclap2有3ms的delay，去掉。 去了
3. 你这tag也太少，加点进去啊。“クラリス kura risu Clara クララ Karen カレン”总归要加的咯。找了几个加了
4. bg干嘛要选俺妹的又没啥关系。。。还不如选clara和karen的人物立绘。claris的BG有点少，别的几张我在别的图里用了，而且大部分有人用过了，现在这张凑合着用了吧-。-

Insane

1. 00:44:958 (5) - 这个反向吧。后面的那个随意。00:46:776 (6) - 同理。改了
2. 00:31:094 (5,1) - 这两个nc还是换一下，突然跳那么大nc不换很别扭。改了
3. 我觉得像01:24:049 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这种地方真心可以好好设计一下，别就一个对称了事。从前面这01:24:049 (1) - 开始就对称走向了 这里不对称感觉有点别扭

Hard

1. 01:41:322 (3,4) - 稍微弄响点。改30了

Normal

1. 00:07:231 (4,1) - 既然是最低难度就不要叠了，分出去。还有00:07:231 (4) - 这个完全听不见了啊。改成normal的了
2. 00:16:322 (2,3) - 同理，换梗。还有00:29:503 (1,2) - ，00:38:140 (2,3) - ，00:50:413 (4,5) - ，00:52:685 (2,3) - 等等，自己全改掉吧。
3. 00:40:413 (5) - 箭头那个点拖到40,360那边吧，flow顺点这可是最低难度，要么你再做个easy否则就必须摆直观点的梗。
4. 以上都必须改，不改不泡。 叠的问题都改了
5. 01:11:322 (3) - nc咯，你前面都spam了这里又没kiai。改了

你也堕落量产了？是的

改完戳我。