1. Easy (1.35 stars, 53 notes)
2. Hard (2.82 stars, 156 notes)
3. Lanturn's Advanced (2.53 stars, 129 notes)
4. Normal (1.96 stars, 97 notes)

Heloo~ Here's for the M4M.

These are just suggestion. If you don't want to change it, Feel free to do so.

GENERAL

HITSOUNDS

NORMAL

HARD

1. Those Combo Colorus don't fit really well imo >.<
   Try these instead

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,150,0
   Combo2 : 141,255,28
   Combo3 : 255,85,85
   Combo4 : 255,255,128

2. The title should contain "Cut ver.", like "MAGIC! - Rude (Cut ver.)" since your beatmap is just 1 minute of the original song (which is almost 4 minutes)
3. Add “Don’t Kill the Magic” to tags, since this is the official album from where this song is
4. Remove "bg.jpeg" from your beatmap's folder since you don't use it anymore[/list[
   
   
   [Hard]
   

   1. 00:01:969 (3,4) - I feel bad for this pattern. Can you make a blanket ? Like this?
   2. 00:02:802 (4) - My player's instincts tell me this slider needs a Ctrl + G *^* Nvm
   3. 00:02:802 (4,1) - & 00:04:469 (2,4) - Can you stack them better?
   4. 00:10:302 (4) - Maybe a Ctrl + G?
   5. 00:13:635 (3,4,5) - Just to be nazi: Can you use these slider ends to make a better triangle? Like this
   6. 00:15:302 (1,2) - Again nazi. Can you improve this blanket? From this to this
   7. 00:34:468 (1,3) - I don't really like this overlap >.<
      Try something like this for that overlap:
      1. 00:34:259 (5) - Move it to 176:116 and do a blanket with (4)
      2. 00:34:468 (1,2) - Select them both and move them at: (1) to 40:20 and (2) to 176:116 (just drag one of them where I said and they will fit both)
      3. 00:35:301 (3) - Move this to 120:220
      This way you'll keep the pattern after (4) and you'll also keep the feeling you had with the rest of the pattern (Check all the list before denying/applying)
   8. 00:36:551 (5) - Judging the previous spacing, you need a NC (if you followed the previous suggestion, otherwise just skip this)
   9. 00:39:884 (6) - You surely need a NC here because you change Snap Divisor
   10. 00:45:301 (1,2) - Spread them a little more so (3) can start in the exact middle of the circle they create. Basically, improve blanket xD
   11. 00:46:967 (4) - This shape doesn't have any meaning as it is imo :/ What about an "S" shape? (A proper one, though)
   12. 00:46:967 (4,6) - Bad overlap :/
   13. 00:50:300 (4,5) - : What about this?
   14. 00:51:967 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit too massy imo. Try something like this
   15. 00:59:467 (4,5,6) - AAAAAAA Please, these sliders are just put there in a "I try to make a good pattern using cloned sliders"-way while there is no blanket at all. Try somethinkg like this or even change pattern if you feel like doing it
   16. 01:01:967 (3) - Give a meaning to this slider please. Also, use the previous 2 sliders to make a blanket xD (/me runs)
   17. 01:02:800 (4) - NC?
   18. 01:03:425 (5,6) - Again, improve this blanket xD

   Hitsound section for this diff:
   
   

   1. 00:27:801 - The volume is really too high here. Reduce it up to 30%
   2. 00:54:467 - Again, volume too high. Reduce it up to 55%
   
   
   [Normal]
   

   1. I'd decrease OD and AR by 1
   2. 00:01:969 (3,2) - I don't really like this overlap, but I can't come up with anything atm. Keep this in mind, maybe someday you'll be able to do something better
   3. 00:19:468 (3,4) - Please keep the DS constant throughout your map on Normal diffs. After this I checked the other DSs and it came out you have a lot of different spacings, which is really bad on Normal diffs and lower. Please fix this matter
   4. 00:25:718 (1,2) - Anti-jumps aren't so easy to read as well as stacks in general. Try to find out how to change this (it's a normal diff so it won't change much were you move it. Just move it)
   5. 00:26:135 (2,3,4) - Probably you already know the issue here
   6. 00:27:801 (1,2,3,4) - This reminds me of a pattern I used on my Lindsey Stirling - Senbonzakura :^)
   7. 00:41:134 - No SV changes on Normal diffs and lower please

   Hitsound section for this diff:
   
   Same as for the Hard diff, that's all
   
   I did my job on this. Good luck :3

1. 00:40:301 (2) Stack the slider end onto the 5 HC
2. 00:40:717 (3) Snapping the 3 back and forth slider here and adding a HC on the big white tick is much more readable to play. Placements are up to you
3. 01:06:758 (5,6,7) This triple was a bit awkward to reach. How about doing this placement? It would give clockwise rotational flow
   
   SPOILER

   

1. change BG resolution : 1228 x 767 to 1024 x 768
2. audio lead in : +864 ( all difficult )
3. please make same hitsound on every difficulty ..
4. this just my suggestion . kiai time on all difficult can start on 00:41:551 - and end on 01:07:800

1. Check DS again please. 1.5 don't raise / reduce
2. 00:26:968 (4) - missing whistle (tail)
3. 00:34:468 (3) - missing clap (tail)
4. 00:51:967 (1) - remove NC
5. 00:52:800 (2) - NC

1. 00:40:301 (2,3) - sound very weird over here. . mind if you re-map this part.
2. 00:34:884 (2,4) - stack
3. 01:02:592 - add not
4. 00:34:259 (5) - move to x:44 y:168 better
5. 00:25:718 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:26:135 (4) - NC
7. 00:18:635 (1) - remove NC
8. 00:17:802 (5) - NC

1. The way you do your combo lengths is not immediately apparent, but seems to follow some coherent pattern that I can't decipher.

1. I'd go with AR7. AR8 feels forced and too fast.
2. 00:02:802 (4) - blanket?
3. 00:05:302 (4) - this one isn't quite stacked under the slider end of 00:04:469 (2)
4. 00:08:635 (1,2,3) - Alright, so these three notes follow the vocals, but 00:10:302 (4,5) - these two follow the drums. I'd suggest making it consistent.
5. 00:15:302 (1,2) - blanket/parallel?
6. 00:22:801 (3,4,5,6,7) - It sorta feels like you crammed in these sliders. Maybe move 00:21:968 (2) - down to the left to start? Not sure.
7. 00:27:593 (7) - A finish hitsound should be something you hit, not that you receive as you end a slider. (AKA, active/passive hitsounding). I'd either remove the hitsound or make it so that there's a circle when you have the finish hitsound.
8. 00:40:301 (2) - This slider's length is like on an 1/8 or something and sounds very strange
9. 00:42:384 (3,4) - slider overlap... ack.
10. 00:53:425 (6,7) - blanket?
11. 00:58:634 (2,3,4) - blanket??
12. 01:01:133 (1,2,3) - balance this pattern out so that the start hit circles on these sliders form a line? looks nicer IMO
13. 01:06:758 (5,6) - 00:13:427 (1,2,3) - 00:25:926 (2,3) - be consistent about how you stack or unstack these.

Charles445 wrote:

[General]
Delete drum-slidertick.wav, you need to have one of the two audible (and the ticks sound nice with the song) done
Delete soft-hitfini.wav, it's an accidental file done
Delete soft-slidertick.wav, same reason as the drum tick one done

[Normal]
00:16:135 (3,4) - Bad spacing Fixed
00:19:468 (3,4,5) - Space these out a little tiny bit more. From a distance they look like they are touching. I actually concerning about it. But done
00:26:135 (3) - Add new combo so this is easier to read. Done
00:32:801 (1) - Try to move the start of this slider closer to the previous slider, aim for 1.5x spacing. Done

[Hard]
00:08:635 (1) - Move this more to the right, makes the spacing easier to see. Done
00:16:135 (3) - Rotate clockwise 3 degrees, makes a better blanket (Edit -> Rotate by...) Done
00:20:718 (8) - Try flipping and reversing this and putting it up in the top right. -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3101938 Okay
00:25:093 (7) - I'd recommend using two circles instead. This is the first time I say no to your overview
00:27:593 (7) - Same here, circles feel better. Nope
00:36:551 (1,2,3) - Maybe move these a bit more to the right. I'll consider it
00:40:222 - Try snapping the slider end here (1/16) Done
00:40:561 - Try snapping the slider end here (1/16) Done
00:47:592 (5,6) - Instead of two sliders, try circle slider circle. Pattern changed as yourtell me
00:49:467 (3) - Rotate counter clockwise 2 degrees for better blanket. Done
00:50:925 (5,6) - Again, circle slider circle feels better here. Pattern changed as you tell me
00:57:592 (8) - Try two circles here instead. Nope
01:01:133 (1,2,3) - Move these more to the left so the distance between 3 and 4 is greater. Done
Really good ending Thanks

afk98 wrote:

#modreqs

Some small things.

Easy => Normal? LOL
Somewhere around the kiai time, if you listen to the metronome, it goes off a beat. Might want to check that. Just being nitpicky.
The CS seems to make this a little difficult for an easy. I'll consider it
00:26:447 - Distance snap jump too far. No, it doesn't o.O
00:41:551 - Not sure if you want to keep this slider velocity change (preference) because it's not as suitable for an easy. This is an Normal, my friend.
00:44:884 (5) - Move the NC (new combo) here? It'll be harder to read since it's an anti-jump

Normal => Hard? LOL
00:11:343 - Not sure if you just want to put a slider here (the voice goes a little offbeat). Nope
Move 00:58:217 (1) to 00:58:008 (1) and make it a reverse slider? Nope. It's better to make a slider after a beat
01:01:133 (1) - The hitsounds sound a little off-beat with the music (hitting on the weaker beats instead). There's not hitsounds here o.O (It's still using hitnormal)

Snaggletooth wrote:

Since this is a Cut version you need to include "(Short Ver.)" in the title.

inverness wrote:

I strongly recommend you to remove (Cut Ver.) from the title since http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/89198 said so

• Check your spacing. I think there is some little mistakes

• Spacing mistakes. Try to avoid unstable spacing on normal. There is no reason to make them different
  00:01:968 (3) For example. Prev:1,71 Next:1,46
  00:19:468 (3,4,5) DS = 1,6. For what? Possible to redo in 1,5
  00:41:550 it sounds like a 00:44:884 (5) but there is no circle here
  00:56:758 (4) you can make it reverse, like 01:00:300 (4)
  00:59:883 (3,4) try to redo like this
  SPOILER

  
  01:11:133 It isn't important but you can make a finish here (on hard diff too)

• Song isn't so fast for your slider speed. Try to make them slower
  00:56:967 (7,8) Sounds better
  SPOILER

  
  00:45:300 (1,2) Is this slider's form really important? You can make them less rude
  SPOILER

  
  00:34:467 (1,2) ^
  00:41:967 (2,3) ^