1. TWO DIMENSIONS (5.4 stars, 3550 notes)

monstrata wrote:

HITSOUNDS:

100% Finished!!!!

1. 00:11:440 (1) - finish on head. Here too 00:22:690 (1,2) - 00:27:690 (1) - 00:42:690 (1) - 00:47:690 (1) - 00:52:690 (1) - 00:57:690 (1) - 01:02:690 (1) - 01:07:690 (1) - 01:22:690 (1) - 01:27:690 (1) - 01:32:690 (1) - 01:37:690 (1) - 01:42:690 (1) - etcetetcetcetc
2. 00:17:065 (5,6) - this can be just a 1/1 slider to cover the melody better, which is what ur mapping the whole time
3. 00:21:127 (6) - cancel clap pls.. cuz there's nothing here.
4. 00:26:049 (2,3) - uhm this can work better i think http://puu.sh/h1WZ3/cc203658b8.jpg
5. 00:39:955 (5) - sound better without this note. Actually, you can try something like this maybe http://puu.sh/h1Xec/997bd4d9ae.jpg cuz multi repeats doesnt really fit imo
6. 00:52:690 - to 00:57:690 - : this section's melody is quite slower than before, i dont see the point on using only 1/2 rhythms. 1/1 rhythms fits better here.
7. 01:01:205 (7) - there's nothing here, pls remove it ;w;
8. 01:42:065 (2,3) - this as 1/1 slider would be much better imo, i mean this http://puu.sh/h1XNI/49112a4f9e.jpg . cuz the repeat doesnt really land on something specific
9. 02:02:533 (1) - this slider makes the rhythm quite weird imo. Cuz you're ignoring the clear cymbal at 02:02:690 - . I'd ctrl+g these rhythms 02:02:533 (1,2) - . In addition, this triangle 02:02:221 (5,6,1) - doesnt feel cool cuz where (1) is looking at ;w;
10. 02:09:721 (5,6) - ctrl g?
11. 02:12:690 (1,2) - these feels better as 1/2 sliders i think, also constancy and stuffs, specially (1)
12. 02:18:783 (4,1,2) - make these equally distanced)? i mean move 1 to x354 y260

Milan- wrote:

monstrata wrote:

HITSOUNDS:

100% Finished!!!!

uhm, really? hitsounds arent just claps and some finishes ;w; Lol sorry ;___; I only aim for barely passable hitsounds x___x theyre not for me .

1. 00:11:440 (1) - finish on head. Here too 00:22:690 (1,2) - 00:27:690 (1) - 00:42:690 (1) - 00:47:690 (1) - 00:52:690 (1) - 00:57:690 (1) - 01:02:690 (1) - 01:07:690 (1) - 01:22:690 (1) - 01:27:690 (1) - 01:32:690 (1) - 01:37:690 (1) - 01:42:690 (1) - etcetetcetcetc Okay added them all
2. 00:17:065 (5,6) - this can be just a 1/1 slider to cover the melody better, which is what ur mapping the whole time
3. 00:21:127 (6) - cancel clap pls.. cuz there's nothing here. Removed
4. 00:26:049 (2,3) - uhm this can work better i think http://puu.sh/h1WZ3/cc203658b8.jpg I prefer my original pattern.
5. 00:39:955 (5) - sound better without this note. Actually, you can try something like this maybe http://puu.sh/h1Xec/997bd4d9ae.jpg cuz multi repeats doesnt really fit imo Nice. Changed.
6. 00:52:690 - to 00:57:690 - : this section's melody is quite slower than before, i dont see the point on using only 1/2 rhythms. 1/1 rhythms fits better here. This is fine imo.
7. 01:01:205 (7) - there's nothing here, pls remove it ;w; O right. Fixed. The triplet was supposed to be on the note before, I just forgot to fix x__x.
8. 01:42:065 (2,3) - this as 1/1 slider would be much better imo, i mean this http://puu.sh/h1XNI/49112a4f9e.jpg . cuz the repeat doesnt really land on something specific Took out the repeat, but I used a 1/2 slider instead.
9. 02:02:533 (1) - this slider makes the rhythm quite weird imo. Cuz you're ignoring the clear cymbal at 02:02:690 - . I'd ctrl+g these rhythms 02:02:533 (1,2) - . In addition, this triangle 02:02:221 (5,6,1) - doesnt feel cool cuz where (1) is looking at ;w; Okay, i fixed the triangle, but keeping the slider rhythm, I like it lol.
10. 02:09:721 (5,6) - ctrl g? Prefer not to... since the previous two patterns were both linear, it might through players off unnecessarily if i Ctrl+G.
11. 02:12:690 (1,2) - these feels better as 1/2 sliders i think, also constancy and stuffs, specially (1) Nah, I think 1/4 repeat sliders are better here.
12. 02:18:783 (4,1,2) - make these equally distanced)? i mean move 1 to x354 y260 Idk about this, but i'll try another pattern.

i just wanted to say that thing about hitsounds xd (you can ask me to help you with this matter if you want, i like this song /w\)

me runs

Shadw wrote:

really good map so i won't have much to say

[TWO DIMENSIONS]
-Hitsound volume at the beginning (from 00:01:440 (1) - to 00:10:815 (2) - ) is too loud, might want to reduce it to 50% Done~
- 00:09:877 - add a note maybe? It's silent there ;P. The note is on a red-tick but I want to keep a 1/1 rhythm at minimum here
- 00:18:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - spacing is for the start of the map. don't have to change but consider it if that's alright Ya this spacing is fine, but i'll probably nerf the spacing on the earlier sections ;o
- 00:44:252 (2,3) - the spacing here contrasts the jumps around it (that has similar rhythm). consider changing Nice, changed
- 00:45:502 (2,3) - ^Changed too ;o.
- 01:00:190 (1) - doesn't really flow well with 00:59:721 (5,6,7) - 's flow. if possible, angle the slider more (and adjust pattern after that) to fit the flow better. This flow is fine imo. 5>6>7 create a clockwise flow. I just bend it slightly with slider 1 (30 degrees) so it can flow better into the next pattern without having to create another hexagon shape.
- 01:31:440 (1,2,3) - i personally think the spacing difference between the two jumps is quite large and it may make that part feel forced. it goes from a 1.42 spacing jump to 2.50 spacing back to two more 1.42-1.45 spacing jumps. i don't find it comfortable to play but change it if you think it doesn't work either Ehhh... I think this spacing is fine. The increased spacing is because i want to emphasize the white-ticks. Emphasis = larger jump for me xD.

sorry that i don't have much but i'll edit more when i have time ;w;

Shadw wrote:

really good map so i won't have much to say

[TWO DIMENSIONS]
(04/04/2014)
- Hitsound volume at the beginning (from 00:01:440 (1) - to 00:10:815 (2) - ) is too loud, might want to reduce it to 50%
- 00:09:877 - add a note maybe?
- 00:18:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - spacing is for the start of the map. don't have to change but consider it if that's alright
- 00:44:252 (2,3) - the spacing here contrasts the jumps around it (that has similar rhythm). consider changing
- 00:45:502 (2,3) - ^
- 01:00:190 (1) - doesn't really flow well with 00:59:721 (5,6,7) - 's flow. if possible, angle the slider more (and adjust pattern after that) to fit the flow better.
- 01:31:440 (1,2,3) - i personally think the spacing difference between the two jumps is quite large and it may make that part feel forced. it goes from a 1.42 spacing jump to 2.50 spacing back to two more 1.42-1.45 spacing jumps. i don't find it comfortable to play but change it if you think it doesn't work either
(04/05/2014)
- 04:01:908 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - good rhythm. it works well as is but im not sure if the second set of triplets flow very well with the two circles preceding it. though it may not suit your style, maybe angling the triplets in a way that would make the pattern more comfortable to play can work. change if you think this is reasonable. Okay sure. I stacked the triplets instead of having them angled.
- 04:22:221 (4,5,6,1) - very unsure about whether this can work or not in terms of spacing. the music doesn't exactly feel stronger at this part to use these wide jumps. keep it if you believe the spacing works just fine with the music It works imo, mainly because the music changes. Different instrument ya? xD
- 04:37:689 (2,3,4,5) - i was thinking you could ctrl+G 04:37:689 (2,5) - and ctrl+G 04:37:845 (3,4) - but then i dunno if that works o.o this is just a mere suggestion so ya use whatever works with you Wow nice.
- 05:33:002 (5,1) - missing notes, but really i think that it can work as is anyway Kinda really complex rhythm here xP i didn't want to map it out since i mapped a lot of 3/4's sliders to this section. Would feel inconsistent.
- 05:59:877 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - works well with the rhythm. i don't have a problem with this part but i can tell some people might. i can't be helpful at all here but if possible try and find a better way to map this part. if you can't then i'm fine with it but i dunno ;w; sorry Yea... idk. I think it works too. I'll keep it unless someone can suggest a better pattern cuz the one right now plays out just fine for me.
- 07:43:314 (5,1,2,3,4) - i find this real uncomfortable to play flow just doesn't work well with me. this might take a lot to change since the patterns around here (and the entire map) are so structured but i feel like this might be a necessary change. I see what you mean~ Fixed. Found a nice alternative that doesn't require any restructuring haha.
- 08:09:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - following up a stream with these set of wide jumps might cause forced gameplay. also the pattern is laid out across in a very uncomfortable manner (personally). i will suggest patterns to you later when i'm not lazy ;w; I took out the first circle on the stream, that way players have a chance to breath after the slider before going into the stream. I think this will ease the transition into the jumps, cuz i like this jump pattern actually xD.

suggestion

i'll add later

i actually couldn't find any issues from that point on lol if i have a lot of time i could look at the entire map again and maybe i can find more stuff to mod
good job with the map, very fun to play

Osuology wrote:

hi m4m

So first, in general, at the beginning you ignore the piano notes a lot, and I would like if maybe you could change that. Nah. It's nice like that.
Also, you never change hitsound volume from 50%, maybe change it to the song? I might... idk. not great with hitsounds.
02:36:674 (2,3,4,5) - These took me by surprise, and I can't really read that they are different from the others. Maybe make into sliders? Nah. This is fine.
05:59:877 (1,2,3,4) - These play kinda weird, I can't play them without 100's. This is fine for me. Unless someone suggests a better alternative i'm going to keep.
07:28:627 (1) - Why so many red things, just make a straight slider, it isn't that much longer. For stylistic emphasis lol.
09:25:033 (2) - Distance is not right. Moved it a few pixels to the right.
10:11:361 (2,3) - Change to 1 slider. No, this is better .
10:30:345 (3,4) - Hard for me to read. Change maybe? Nah .
11:22:377 (1) - This ignores some of the notes. It's fine.
13:25:970 (6,1) - Hard to read. No it's not ;____;

Other than that, nice!

mostrata wrote:

Feel free to mod whatever drain time you feel is fair :3

1. I know this map is very long, but the HP Drain could be a bit higher imo
2. Disable Countdown from song setup since there isn't enough time to make it work. Or add some audio lead in if you want to put the countdown...it's your choice
3. Can I ask you why do you have 2 .osb files in your folder? o.O Since you have Widescreen Support disabled I think you should have none of them...
4. I'm not sure about this, bnut I guess you'll have to rename your diff simply "Marathon", because it exceeds 10MB file size and I don't know if the site will accept this but maybe I'm wrong... Probably you'll just need to add "Marathon" within your tags now that I checked other maps like this one

1. 00:07:690 (1) - These Claps feel a bit too much imo @.@
2. 00:08:940 (1) - Maybe add an additional soft whistle on head
3. 00:10:815 (2) - Soft-hitnormal & Normal-whistle for the slider's body
4. 00:13:940 (1,2) - Additional soft-whisltes on each end
5. 00:14:721 (4) - ^
6. 00:15:190 (1,2,3,4) - ^
7. Additional drum-whistle on:
   1. 00:16:440 (1) -
   2. 00:17:533 (1) - head
   3. 00:18:315 (5) - head
8. Additional soft-whistle on:
   1. 00:18:940 (1) -
   2. 00:19:565 (5) -
   3. 00:20:815 (4) -
   4. 00:21:283 (7) -
9. Add additional soft-whistles to:
   1. 00:22:690 (1,2,3) - Slider end of each of them
   2. 00:23:940 (1) -
   3. 00:24:408 (4) -
10. 00:24:565 (5) - Additional drum-whistle on head
11. 00:25:190 (1,3) - Additional soft-whistle on slider's head and circle
12. 00:26:049 (2) - Additional drum-whistle
13. 00:28:940 (1) - Additional soft-whistle on head, repeat and end
14. 00:30:190 (1) - ^ Just on the repeat tho
15. 00:30:971 (3,5) - ^
16. 00:33:002 (2) - ^ end
17. 00:33:940 (1) - ^
18. 00:34:252 (4) - ^ end

1. 01:37:690 (1) - I don't think this finish fits well here
2. 02:38:940 (1) - What about a soft-finish here?
3. 03:41:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too many claps here @.@ At least put something else in addition to them I guess...
4. 04:01:596 (2) - Do you really need this clap here?

1. 00:21:440 (1) - I think this note isn't needed. While playing I had the istinct to spin after 00:21:283 (7) - so you could remove (1) and move the spinner close to (7). It feels a bit more natural imo
2. 00:21:361 (1) - I think that if you move this spinner as I said above it would fit better to make it end at 00:22:377 -
3. 00:40:190 (1,2) - & 00:40:815 (4,5) - The music is suggesting me to stack these notes in couples (1&2, 4&5)
4. 00:41:596 (2,3) - Ctrl + G maybe?
5. 00:42:690 (1,2) - It feels nice if you delete (2) and put a repeat on (1). The new (1)'s end will also be stacked with 00:43:627 (4) - giving a good effect since you used the same hitsounds
6. 00:48:783 (7,1) - I think you swapped these objects, because the slider feels weird since the strong beat is at 00:48:783 - . Basically, I'm suggesting to do slider-circle instead of circle-slider
7. 00:57:611 - I hear another note here....
8. 01:01:049 (6) - I can hear 01:00:736 (3) - but I can't hear (6) so I suggest to remove it
9. 02:22:065 (6) - I can't hear this note too...
10. 02:52:690 (1) - I'd reduce this spinner by 1/2
11. 02:54:877 (7) - I think keeping the slider's curve would be nicer, so move this note a bit to the left
12. 03:32:690 (1) - Ctrl + G?
13. 03:49:877 (6) - What about 2 stacked circles instead?
14. 04:11:908 (4,5) - I don't really like this one. It makes me remember about 03:04:565 (4,5) - this pattern which is almost the same, but with the little difference that 03:04:565 (4,5) - has 1/2 of break and 04:11:908 (4,5) - has 1/4 break. Can you give a different spacing to this part?
15. 06:06:127 (1,2) - Why not stacking them as you did with the other 1/4 notes? Probably you'll have to move the slider a bit
16. 06:30:658 (5,6) - They feel really weird, maybe because they start on red ticks I guess... I think you should change this part
17. 07:24:252 (5) - Don't get angry with me, but what about a NC here?
18. 08:38:627 (1,2) - Again, this 1/4 note feels strange with that much spacing
19. 11:13:158 (4,5) - Ctrl + G?
20. 12:26:595 (1,2,1) - The stream isn't linear xD (I know this is nazi, sorry)

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Alright, here I am with my reply mod to your M4M :3

mostrata wrote:

Feel free to mod whatever drain time you feel is fair :3

So, you modded one of my mapsets = I'll mod one of your mapsets :3 Looks fair for me

Ok, this will take a while, so I'll probably split the mod in parts so I can focus better on everything

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[General]

1. I know this map is very long, but the HP Drain could be a bit higher imo This is fine xD. Keeping the HP drain low so more players can get past the marathon. There are some really intense sections like the Attack on Titan part is full of streams.
2. Disable Countdown from song setup since there isn't enough time to make it work. Or add some audio lead in if you want to put the countdown...it's your choice Got it.
3. Can I ask you why do you have 2 .osb files in your folder? o.O Since you have Widescreen Support disabled I think you should have none of them... Thinking of making a storyboard but idk anymore lmao...
4. I'm not sure about this, bnut I guess you'll have to rename your diff simply "Marathon", because it exceeds 10MB file size and I don't know if the site will accept this but maybe I'm wrong... Probably you'll just need to add "Marathon" within your tags now that I checked other maps like this one This is fine. Added marathon in tags tho~

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[Hitsounds]
Keep in mind I'm not very good with them yet, but if I never try to make/check them I won't improve, so here's my attempt to help you on this matter
Note: When I suggest 2 hitsounds they're usually like this: (sampleset hitsound) - (additional hitsound). I'll make a note when this isn't applied. Where there is no sampleset indication it will be just Auto by default (whicxh mean it will be Normal for most of them if not always)

1. 00:07:690 (1) - These Claps feel a bit too much imo @.@ Removed.
2. 00:08:940 (1) - Maybe add an additional soft whistle on head
3. 00:10:815 (2) - Soft-hitnormal & Normal-whistle for the slider's body Nice
4. 00:13:940 (1,2) - Additional soft-whisltes on each end Okay
5. 00:14:721 (4) - ^
6. 00:15:190 (1,2,3,4) - ^ K all^
7. Additional drum-whistle on:
   1. 00:16:440 (1) -
   2. 00:17:533 (1) - head
   3. 00:18:315 (5) - head
8. Additional soft-whistle on:
   1. 00:18:940 (1) -
   2. 00:19:565 (5) -
   3. 00:20:815 (4) -
   4. 00:21:283 (7) -
9. Add additional soft-whistles to:
   1. 00:22:690 (1,2,3) - Slider end of each of them
   2. 00:23:940 (1) -
   3. 00:24:408 (4) -
10. 00:24:565 (5) - Additional drum-whistle on head
11. 00:25:190 (1,3) - Additional soft-whistle on slider's head and circle
12. 00:26:049 (2) - Additional drum-whistle
13. 00:28:940 (1) - Additional soft-whistle on head, repeat and end
14. 00:30:190 (1) - ^ Just on the repeat tho
15. 00:30:971 (3,5) - ^
16. 00:33:002 (2) - ^ end
17. 00:33:940 (1) - ^
18. 00:34:252 (4) - ^ end

Well, I guess you get it by now: just add some whistles here and there to make a different rhtyhm which won't bore the player. From now on I'll just point out hitsound corrections, because you should map this yourself :3

1. 01:37:690 (1) - I don't think this finish fits well here
2. 02:38:940 (1) - What about a soft-finish here?
3. 03:41:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too many claps here @.@ At least put something else in addition to them I guess...
4. 04:01:596 (2) - Do you really need this clap here?

After that I tried to find something else but the rhythm is almost the same (from a hitsounding point of view) so I would have had to write the same things again and again :/ No worries~... I ended up applying everything above lol. Thanks so much!!!

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[Patterns and related]

1. 00:21:440 (1) - I think this note isn't needed. While playing I had the istinct to spin after 00:21:283 (7) - so you could remove (1) and move the spinner close to (7). It feels a bit more natural imo This is fine imo, but if someone else brings this up i'll take it out.
2. 00:21:361 (1) - I think that if you move this spinner as I said above it would fit better to make it end at 00:22:377 -
3. 00:40:190 (1,2) - & 00:40:815 (4,5) - The music is suggesting me to stack these notes in couples (1&2, 4&5) I'd prefer not to stack right after a stream. I think this is fine.
4. 00:41:596 (2,3) - Ctrl + G maybe? Would make the flow from 4>5 a bit awkward imo.
5. 00:42:690 (1,2) - It feels nice if you delete (2) and put a repeat on (1). The new (1)'s end will also be stacked with 00:43:627 (4) - giving a good effect since you used the same hitsounds Nice.
6. 00:48:783 (7,1) - I think you swapped these objects, because the slider feels weird since the strong beat is at 00:48:783 - . Basically, I'm suggesting to do slider-circle instead of circle-slider Nice. Changed.
7. 00:57:611 - I hear another note here.... Nice, added.
8. 01:01:049 (6) - I can hear 01:00:736 (3) - but I can't hear (6) so I suggest to remove it Fine also, imo. Works with the rhythm.
9. 02:22:065 (6) - I can't hear this note too...This is fine, since i don't want to use a randon 1/4 slider instead. Overmapped but it works with the rhythm,
10. 02:52:690 (1) - I'd reduce this spinner by 1/2 Sure
11. 02:54:877 (7) - I think keeping the slider's curve would be nicer, so move this note a bit to the left Alright sure.
12. 03:32:690 (1) - Ctrl + G? Nah, poor flow imo.
13. 03:49:877 (6) - What about 2 stacked circles instead? I think this is fine~
14. 04:11:908 (4,5) - I don't really like this one. It makes me remember about 03:04:565 (4,5) - this pattern which is almost the same, but with the little difference that 03:04:565 (4,5) - has 1/2 of break and 04:11:908 (4,5) - has 1/4 break. Can you give a different spacing to this part? I'll keep it for now, since you don't need to worry about spacing to play these patterns if you use slider-leniency. I'll change it its brought up again though.
15. 06:06:127 (1,2) - Why not stacking them as you did with the other 1/4 notes? Probably you'll have to move the slider a bit Ah fixed.
16. 06:30:658 (5,6) - They feel really weird, maybe because they start on red ticks I guess... I think you should change this part This is fine. I think using red-ticks is okay sometimes too.
17. 07:24:252 (5) - Don't get angry with me, but what about a NC here? Not necessary imo xD. I'd have to NC a lot of other places with similar emphasis too
18. 08:38:627 (1,2) - Again, this 1/4 note feels strange with that much spacing Fixed.
19. 11:13:158 (4,5) - Ctrl + G? Would also detract from the flow imo.
20. 12:26:595 (1,2,1) - The stream isn't linear xD (I know this is nazi, sorry) Haha nice, fixed.

Alright, that's all from me. Probably it isn't much because this map has a solid base so most of my suggestions will be avoided :3
Here, take also a star for your hard work, since you did all this by yourself

Call me again when you need a mod or, even better, a M4M :3

ChubbySquishy wrote:

Monstrata senpaii~ Quick mod from me!

[Two Dimensions]

I think audio you can increase to 70% since the other Anison Sprint marathon uses 70% audio and default hitsounds . Sure why not loool

00:16:908 (4) - Remove clap is better i think ;o OKay
00:21:518 (1) - Maybe you can make the spinner softer at the beginning and then it gets louder? Nice
00:30:815 (2) - Remove clap I think this one is fine~
00:43:783 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Soft Whistle instead of Drum Whilste?ff Yea soft whistle better i think haha.
01:32:690 (1) - Remove clap~
01:57:690 (1) - Remove clap here too Okay both
01:58:158 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Soft Whistle better i think~ Yep
02:27:690 (1) - I dont't hink you need clap for end of streams :3333 O okay
03:51:440 (1) - Soft whistle? K both!
04:42:377 (1) - Soft Whilste here defefinitely
04:43:002 (2) - Here too! Ya
05:49:877 (1) - No clap xdddokay
06:00:111 (2) - Maybe soft whilte on head? idkk D:. I think better not to put a whistle there haha....
06:00:580 (4) - Here too and do the same on the other symmetry pattern DD

MAP LOOKS REALLY GOOD!!! I can only comment on the hitsound haha,

Kite wrote:

Yooooooo

00:33:705 - add beat for a stream? Feels kinda weird leaving it empty I'd prefer not to here x___x I really like this pattern haha. I know there's a beat there, but it's quite a pain to add it and take out the star pattern :C.
00:33:861 - ^
04:11:908 (4,5) - I'd suggest to move 5 closer, right now the spacing is really dodgy to read. x15|y301 works Okay. I made this slider 1/2 instead of 3/4 instead.
05:45:970 (5) - remove and make 05:45:814 (4) - into a 1/2 slider instead for better playability, current pattern flows weird Nice. Okay, changed.
06:45:502 - This section feels odd, could easily be fixed by reducing the 1/2 sliders into 1/4 (06:45:502 (5) - for example) I'd like to keep this rhythm. It's a bit simpler while still mapping the rhythm adequate imo. I *would* map the 1/4 sliders since they definitely fit, but I ended up simplifying a lot of the other 3/4 rhythms I used in the map so i feel the way this rhythm currently is will be more balanced.
06:59:720 (4) - x163|y205 for better playability Nice
08:05:502 (3) - make into 1/4 slider instead to follow rhythm
08:06:439 (3) - ^
10:11:283 - add beat here and turn 10:11:361 (3) - into a 1/2 slider? Ooo nice.
11:37:533 - beat + 11:37:611 - slider ending at 11:37:845 - Hmmm. I think mine is fine atm but i'll try this ;o.

That's all for standard modding!
This map is REALLY gorgeous and a lot of fun, def. one of the best maps I've seen in a long time. Thanks!! ^___^
Hitsound mod will follow up soon!

1. It's a bit distracting imo that slider slide sound, do you mind to add some soft-sliderslide and normal-sliderslide on mapset?
2. In my opinion you should raise HP up to 1 or 2, because not quite make sense if HP is 4 since it's an marathon extreme diff and maybe should lower OD by 1 to make it balance
3. Really no tags? well in my opinion you can add the trcklist which is played on this medley, so people is easier to find this map
4. BG is curently fine, but can be maximized to 1366x768
5. How about you set the slider tick rate into 2? because you have slow down here 11:22:377 (1) - 12:26:595 (1) - so I believe for more readable it's better to add one more tick rate
6. One last thing, why don't you add some SB? I mean some text that indicate the transition of the song (like song title that played on this medley), because tbh I don't really familiar with anime song and not really know when the song is over and begin the new one

1. 00:01:440 (1,1,1,1) - Can be add whistle on each of them imo, because you add whistle on the every downbeat here 00:06:440 (1,1,1) - So to make it more consistent
2. 00:21:283 (7) - Set the sampleset into auto then delete the whistle? because in my opinion following the previous normal-hit, it's better to have (7) with normal-hit also
3. I sugest this one 00:21:440 (1) - is changed into soft-hit, just set the sampleset on soft or better you just can delete that (1) and start this 00:21:518 (1) - spinner here 00:21:440 -
4. 00:21:440 (1) - That spinner should be end here 00:22:377 - based on its musicality, check your green line and readjust the volume there and you can add clap on the spinner
5. 00:25:190 (1,2,3) - The polarity between them is somewahat not comfortable imo, while (2) is on blue tick and it's sometimes in this kind high AR we just misclicked that faster than it should be, maybe the rhythm should be like this instead http://puu.sh/h5T6F/960055e88e.jpg
6. 00:30:815 (2) - Delete clap? somewhat not fit
7. 01:12:065 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - I think it's neater if that stream is shaped a curve instead and blanked this 01:11:908 (3) - something same as you did before 00:52:065 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,3) - , I think you can do that again there
8. 05:19:252 - Pull that break up to here 05:19:877 -
9. 05:38:002 (3) - Forget clap on end?
10. 05:39:877 (1) - Delete clap on head? not really sounds right because next white tick you put clap
11. 07:12:845 (4,5,6,7,8) - Those circle-ing flow is odd and not good imo, so my sugestion is move some note, first move (4) to x:409 y:148 then move (5) to x:324 y:134 then move (6) to x:348 y:224 then move (7) to x:440 y:228 then move (8) to x:496 y:156, if you need the whole pict. http://puu.sh/h5TIF/cf8c8fb618.jpg sorry a bit lazy to copy-paste the code :p
12. 07:25:502 (3) - Add clap on head?
13. 07:32:377 (1,3,1,3) - Tbh you can add diffrent SV on each of that slider which is faster (e.g. this one 07:32:377 (1) - is have initial 1.00 SV then this one 07:33:002 (3) - have 1.05 SV so in other words you can add 0.05 SV on each that slider), please pardon my bad explaination :p
14. 08:38:627 (1,2) - Why don't you end the slider on 08:38:939 -? because that rhythm doesn't sounds right imo
15. 09:01:439 (1) - Use soft sampleset there? because that normal-hit sound too loud, I think you need a bit soft sound there instead a normal one
16. 10:55:345 (4,5) - How about ctrl+g that one? I think it's flow better when it make trangle patern there
17. 12:37:689 (2,3) - 12:40:189 (2,3) - What is that haha XD, how about not to stacked those two together? it's come from no where that suddenly you have that kind of stack
18. 13:11:283 (2) - Clap on tail? I think you forget
19. 13:26:439 (2) - Remove clap? because for finishing you don't put any clap after that, sound a bit odd there

Mako Sakata wrote:

Helloooo M4M, sorry for delay
Some small sugestion from me,

[General]

1. It's a bit distracting imo that slider slide sound, do you mind to add some soft-sliderslide and normal-sliderslide on mapset? Added very recently .
2. In my opinion you should raise HP up to 1 or 2, because not quite make sense if HP is 4 since it's an marathon extreme diff and maybe should lower OD by 1 to make it balance I want to keep the HP low so more players can enjoy the map. Higher OD for Lower HP is my compromise since everyone wants OD8 xD.
3. Really no tags? well in my opinion you can add the trcklist which is played on this medley, so people is easier to find this map I'll need to get a metadata check sometime haha.
4. BG is curently fine, but can be maximized to 1366x768 Oh. Right
5. How about you set the slider tick rate into 2? because you have slow down here 11:22:377 (1) - 12:26:595 (1) - so I believe for more readable it's better to add one more tick rate I think Tick rate 1 is fine. I really don't like the ticksounds ;P.
6. One last thing, why don't you add some SB? I mean some text that indicate the transition of the song (like song title that played on this medley), because tbh I don't really familiar with anime song and not really know when the song is over and begin the new one Storyboard is on the way . Waiting for a friend to help me generate the texts to go with all the anime's (there are 150 lol).

[Medley]

1. 00:01:440 (1,1,1,1) - Can be add whistle on each of them imo, because you add whistle on the every downbeat here 00:06:440 (1,1,1) - So to make it more consistent Sure why not ;o.
2. 00:21:283 (7) - Set the sampleset into auto then delete the whistle? because in my opinion following the previous normal-hit, it's better to have (7) with normal-hit also Okay
3. I sugest this one 00:21:440 (1) - is changed into soft-hit, just set the sampleset on soft or better you just can delete that (1) and start this 00:21:518 (1) - spinner here 00:21:440 -
4. 00:21:440 (1) - That spinner should be end here 00:22:377 - based on its musicality, check your green line and readjust the volume there and you can add clap on the spinner I think the spinner is fine atm.
5. 00:25:190 (1,2,3) - The polarity between them is somewahat not comfortable imo, while (2) is on blue tick and it's sometimes in this kind high AR we just misclicked that faster than it should be, maybe the rhythm should be like this instead http://puu.sh/h5T6F/960055e88e.jpg Nice. Changed.
6. 00:30:815 (2) - Delete clap? somewhat not fit K
7. 01:12:065 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - I think it's neater if that stream is shaped a curve instead and blanked this 01:11:908 (3) - something same as you did before 00:52:065 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,3) - , I think you can do that again there Improved the shape of the stream slightly, but i don't want to blanket here cuz I use blanket streams a lot haha.
8. 05:19:252 - Pull that break up to here 05:19:877 - Niiice.
9. 05:38:002 (3) - Forget clap on end?Ya
10. 05:39:877 (1) - Delete clap on head? not really sounds right because next white tick you put clap okay
11. 07:12:845 (4,5,6,7,8) - Those circle-ing flow is odd and not good imo, so my sugestion is move some note, first move (4) to x:409 y:148 then move (5) to x:324 y:134 then move (6) to x:348 y:224 then move (7) to x:440 y:228 then move (8) to x:496 y:156, if you need the whole pict. http://puu.sh/h5TIF/cf8c8fb618.jpg sorry a bit lazy to copy-paste the code :p This is fine imo. I think the flow works. Yes, there is a severe angle change on 5, but i think it's reflected in the music.
12. 07:25:502 (3) - Add clap on head? K
13. 07:32:377 (1,3,1,3) - Tbh you can add diffrent SV on each of that slider which is faster (e.g. this one 07:32:377 (1) - is have initial 1.00 SV then this one 07:33:002 (3) - have 1.05 SV so in other words you can add 0.05 SV on each that slider), please pardon my bad explaination :p I know what you mean. its a good idea, but i think the increasing DS is good enough.
14. 08:38:627 (1,2) - Why don't you end the slider on 08:38:939 -? because that rhythm doesn't sounds right imo This rhythm is fine imo, since there needs to be something clickable on the end for the drumhit.
15. 09:01:439 (1) - Use soft sampleset there? because that normal-hit sound too loud, I think you need a bit soft sound there instead a normal one Nice.
16. 10:55:345 (4,5) - How about ctrl+g that one? I think it's flow better when it make trangle patern there This is on purpose to switch the flow from clockwise to anti-clockwise .
17. 12:37:689 (2,3) - 12:40:189 (2,3) - What is that haha XD, how about not to stacked those two together? it's come from no where that suddenly you have that kind of stack Lol. I think it's pretty cool, but ahh, i'll keep it in mind if it gets brought up again i have another solution. I think this looks nicer tho so i'll keep for now~
18. 13:11:283 (2) - Clap on tail? I think you forget My bad thanks~
19. 13:26:439 (2) - Remove clap? because for finishing you don't put any clap after that, sound a bit odd there Okay .

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Don't worry I take a look on your mapset till end haha. Btw need to recheck those hitsound and NCs, because it's sometimes the combos is very long yet another one is very short, but structuraly mapset is very well done

That's all, it take a while to look after 13 minutes map, goodluck~

1. 00:12:690 (1) - I think that it would sound better if you followed the melody here. Suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2975459
2. 00:29:486 - Try to make the stream start here, the sound found here is strong enough to warrant this imo.
3. 00:29:565 (3) - Remove clap to keep the hitsounds consistent, nothing changed here on the song
4. 00:30:971 (3,4,5,1) - I know you like jumps, but try to turn these into triples. The skipped sounds are very noticeable when playing.
5. 00:33:002 (2,3,4,5) - Just a rhythm suggestion to give it more variety http://puu.sh/h8YCy/f52b98c549.jpg It applies also here 00:34:252 (4,5,6,7) - and here 00:38:002 (2,3,4,5) -
6. 00:36:440 (1) - This slider doesn't fit here, some kind of jump pattern with 1/2 sliders or circles would fit here better imo.
7. 00:55:033 (6) - This needs to be a triple or two separate notes to avoid the downbeat being on a slider end.
8. 00:56:283 (13) - Same as above, but i think a triple is not viable here.
9. 00:57:533 (8,1) - Make this a triple maybe? Add a note between these two
10. 01:01:127 (6,7,8) - Overmapped triple? idk i can't hear anything here and plays weird. I strongly recommend that you remove it.
11. 01:36:908 (3,4,5) - Overmapped triple again :p. Suggestion to fix it: remove 3 and 4, then move 01:37:065 (5,6,7,8) - 1/2 beat back and add a triple with 01:37:690 (1) -
12. 02:08:471 (5,6) - Try combining these two into a 1/1 slider, to have less 1/2 rhythms at least lol
13. 02:14:252 (2) - Feels out of place, (return is ovemapped). Try this to also follow the sound you skipped here 02:14:486 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2975494 (don't pay attention to the ugly placement :p)
14. 02:19:408 (4,5,6) - Consider deleting 6, it's not needed and it would give more variety to the rhythm and stuff
15. 02:21:908 (4,5,6) - ^^^^ 02:24:408 (4,5,6) - ^^^^
16. 03:00:033 (1) - Remove the finish at the end of the slider, it's not needed.
17. 03:19:565 (3) - An extended slider would fit nicely here, extend this to the next blue tick and reposition.
18. 03:21:440 (1) - Finish instead of clap?
19. 03:22:065 (7) - Remove clap if you applied the previous suggestion
20. 03:28:783 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try this: http://puu.sh/h90yd/ac810b9be4.jpg or something like this, would follow the melody better.
21. 03:34:877 (4) - You're skipping a beat on the red tick, make this end there.
22. 04:14:408 (3,4) - Swap these on the timeline for better flow.
23. 04:28:783 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why not sliders like you did previously? They play nice. :p
24. 04:32:065 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - This stream is overmapped, and you can do something that follows the song better here. Try: http://puu.sh/h91JJ/0fd477d73d.jpg
25. 05:11:283 (2,3) - Swap these on the timeline for better flow.
26. 05:45:345 - Why skip the beat? D:
27. 05:45:814 (5) - Missing clap
28. 05:48:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Stream should start on the red tick, so... delete 2 and move 1 or the stream :p
29. 05:49:877 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
30. 05:59:877 (1) - Finish instead of clap
31. 06:10:189 (2,4) - Add claps

Atsuro wrote:

Hey, mod from ticket (sorry for taking so long)
It's been a while since i modded something, i'm a bit rusty here.

Suggestions focusing on rhythm (for some reason):

Two Dimensions

1. 00:12:690 (1) - I think that it would sound better if you followed the melody here. Suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2975459 I prefer a simpler rhythm here.
2. 00:29:486 - Try to make the stream start here, the sound found here is strong enough to warrant this imo. This is fine, i don't really like having streams right after a slider so i omitted it here.
3. 00:29:565 (3) - Remove clap to keep the hitsounds consistent, nothing changed here on the song K
4. 00:30:971 (3,4,5,1) - I know you like jumps, but try to turn these into triples. The skipped sounds are very noticeable when playing. I think this is fine, but i'll change it if someone else brings it up.
5. 00:33:002 (2,3,4,5) - Just a rhythm suggestion to give it more variety http://puu.sh/h8YCy/f52b98c549.jpg It applies also here 00:34:252 (4,5,6,7) - and here 00:38:002 (2,3,4,5) - I'd prefer to stick with triplets, the rhythm is kind of complex and i prefer simple rhythms haha.
6. 00:36:440 (1) - This slider doesn't fit here, some kind of jump pattern with 1/2 sliders or circles would fit here better imo. I like it~. it fits, but it's really simple. I think this is fine though. Adding some slider variety and giving a bit of a break to the player.
7. 00:55:033 (6) - This needs to be a triple or two separate notes to avoid the downbeat being on a slider end. This is fine, keeping with the melody here.
8. 00:56:283 (13) - Same as above, but i think a triple is not viable here.
9. 00:57:533 (8,1) - Make this a triple maybe? Add a note between these two Okay.
10. 01:01:127 (6,7,8) - Overmapped triple? idk i can't hear anything here and plays weird. I strongly recommend that you remove it. Changed~
11. 01:36:908 (3,4,5) - Overmapped triple again :p. Suggestion to fix it: remove 3 and 4, then move 01:37:065 (5,6,7,8) - 1/2 beat back and add a triple with 01:37:690 (1) - Okay. Did something else, but changed~
12. 02:08:471 (5,6) - Try combining these two into a 1/1 slider, to have less 1/2 rhythms at least lol I like the way this plays tho D:.
13. 02:14:252 (2) - Feels out of place, (return is ovemapped). Try this to also follow the sound you skipped here 02:14:486 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2975494 (don't pay attention to the ugly placement :p) Tried. I think the repeat isn't overmapped but yours isnt bad either. I'll have to apply this to the previous pattern too for consistency.
14. 02:19:408 (4,5,6) - Consider deleting 6, it's not needed and it would give more variety to the rhythm and stuff Kinda deceptive spacing. Tried making 5 a slider instead, played alright bit i think triplets are still better.
15. 02:21:908 (4,5,6) - ^^^^ 02:24:408 (4,5,6) - ^^^^
16. 03:00:033 (1) - Remove the finish at the end of the slider, it's not needed. Okay
17. 03:19:565 (3) - An extended slider would fit nicely here, extend this to the next blue tick and reposition. Nice. Okay.
18. 03:21:440 (1) - Finish instead of clap? Oh nice. Sounds better now
19. 03:22:065 (7) - Remove clap if you applied the previous suggestion Yep
20. 03:28:783 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try this: http://puu.sh/h90yd/ac810b9be4.jpg or something like this, would follow the melody better. Damn nice.
21. 03:34:877 (4) - You're skipping a beat on the red tick, make this end there. I think this is fine, i don't use 3/4 sliders a lot and it fits here too, but i'll change if someone else brings it up.
22. 04:14:408 (3,4) - Swap these on the timeline for better flow. For me, flow is fine either ways so i'll keep.
23. 04:28:783 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why not sliders like you did previously? They play nice. :p Changing it up a bit, since a break is coming up I thought I could add a jump pattern.
24. 04:32:065 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - This stream is overmapped, and you can do something that follows the song better here. Try: This is fine imo~ A little overmap should be fine, and these work imo.http://puu.sh/h91JJ/0fd477d73d.jpg
25. 05:11:283 (2,3) - Swap these on the timeline for better flow. Alright
26. 05:45:345 - Why skip the beat? D: I wanted to use a different pattern. Also, some 1/1 break for diversity lol.
27. 05:45:814 (5) - Missing clap Added
28. 05:48:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Stream should start on the red tick, so... delete 2 and move 1 or the stream :p This is fine imo~
29. 05:49:877 (1) - Finish instead of whistle? Okay
30. 05:59:877 (1) - Finish instead of clap K
31. 06:10:189 (2,4) - Add claps Added them for now, since i had them there before. Will have to ask soeone to testplay this cuz i think the claps arent necessary but meh~

Im at half the song... I'll continue later :p