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Otokaze - Karen feat Rhyzz&Bell&Jas Mace (The 49ers)

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Backstep
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 24 เมษายน 2558 at 1:34:55

Artist: Otokaze
Title: Karen feat Rhyzz&Bell&Jas Mace (The 49ers)
Tags: Save the Flavor Summer Love Natsu Koi Firework Hanabi chill collection vol.3 Xinely
BPM: 184
Filesize: 11030kb
Play Time: 02:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.7 stars, 191 notes)
  2. Hard (3.43 stars, 322 notes)
  3. Insane (4.65 stars, 466 notes)
  4. Normal (2.11 stars, 217 notes)
Download: Otokaze - Karen feat Rhyzz&Bell&Jas Mace (The 49ers)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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6th Beatmap for rank!, I really love this song from spboxer3 map!
Easy : Done! by Xinely.
Normal : Done! by Me.
Hard : Done! by Me.
Light Insane : Done! by spboxer3 (Click here to get special stage xD)
Insane : Done! by Me.
Storyboard : Done!

Who support this map!
Xinely (Guest Difficulty), spboxer3 (For some skin element.), CelsiusLK (Offset timing), -N a b a k a - (Short irc mod), NolanM, SLAY3RR30, Mako Sakata, finap, ArrowOfWInD, ziin, ReeChelly, imaikiseta, Winek, Flask , KSHR (Metadata check.), BeatofIke

Change log
At beginning: Thanks sp3 for some skin element and Hitsounds :')
22/03/2015: Change offset -4 by CelsiusLK
26/03/2015: Change sp3 difficulty setting.
04/04/2015: Change all difficulty name and complete my Hard difficulty to gap all diffs.
05/04/2015: Change a bit BG and some SB element.
07/04/2015: Add some creators and thanks for playing storyboard element / disable widescreen for all difficulties.
15/04/2015: Fixed Title of this song and tags all difficulties.
18/04/2015: Remove sp3 diff (T.T) and Change title again by KSHR.
nya10
Love the song <3
Go for rank bakastep!
Topic Starter
Backstep

nya10 wrote:

Love the song <3
Go for rank bakastep!
Yay! \:D/
spboxer3
\:D/ karen
Iceskulls
changed offset a bit
don't forget to resnap everthing

irc
21:02 Backstep: หวัดดี o/
21:02 CelsiusLK: ดี o/
21:03 Backstep: พี่รบกวนอะไรหน่อยได้มั้ย?
21:03 CelsiusLK: อ่าๆ
21:03 CelsiusLK: ได้
21:03 Backstep: ช่วยพี่หา offset เพลงนี้ที
21:03 *Backstep is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/665402 Otokaze - Karen feat.The 49ers]
21:04 CelsiusLK: เพลงนี้มัน
21:04 CelsiusLK: เหมือนเคยได้ยิน
21:04 Backstep: =3=
21:05 CelsiusLK: อ่อ xP
21:05 *CelsiusLK is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/154357 Otokaze - Karen (Short Ver.)]
21:05 CelsiusLK: ของพี่เป็นเวอร์ชั่นมีคนร้อง
21:07 Backstep: ลบแมปเก่า นั่งทำใหม่
21:07 Backstep: เพลงนี้แหละ
21:07 *Backstep is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/158928 Otokaze - Karen (Short Ver.)]
21:07 Backstep: 555
21:07 Backstep: เยส
21:07 Backstep: ทำได้ยากสุดแค่นั้นก็บุญละ (ปกติอินเซ้นทำไม่ค่อยเป็น)
21:08 CelsiusLK: ลอง offset แถวๆ -523 ถึง -525
21:09 Backstep: โอเช ลองแปป
21:09 CelsiusLK: -524
21:13 Backstep: ดูดีกว่า -520 lol
21:13 CelsiusLK: lol
21:13 Backstep: นั่งฟังไป แมปเป็นไงบ้าง :3
21:14 CelsiusLK: ชอบหนุกดี
21:15 CelsiusLK: ชอบ sb ด้วย :3
21:15 Backstep: สไลด์อาจไม่ค่อยหลากหลายเท่าไหร่ = ="
21:15 Backstep: ขอบคุณครับ \:D/
21:16 Backstep: ปัญหาเพลงนี้อยู่ที่ไม่ค่อยมีโน้ต 1/8 เลย
21:16 Backstep: ทำให้เกือบทั้งเพลงมีแต่โน้ต 1/4
21:16 Backstep: เอ้ย 1/2
21:17 CelsiusLK: ต้องเล่น jumps ถ้าจะให้ยากๆ +สนุก
21:17 Backstep: ... ไปหมดละสมงสมัน เพลงนี้มีแต่โน้ต 1/2 โน้ต 1/4 ไม่ค่อยมีให้เห็น
21:17 CelsiusLK: เพลงนี้เหมาะกับ jumps
21:17 Backstep: (ชินแต่ทำแมปเพลงช้า)
21:18 Backstep: ทำไม่ค่อยเก่งด้วยสิ
21:18 CelsiusLK: ผมก็เป็น
21:18 Backstep: ต้องให้ นานากะ =3=
21:18 CelsiusLK: ชินกับเพลงช้า 555
21:19 Backstep: โดดของพี่คิดว่าง่ายไปมั้ย ;w;?
21:19 CelsiusLK: แบบนี้ก็น่าจะพอดีละ
21:19 CelsiusLK: jumps หนักดูไม่ค่อยเข้ากับเพลงนี้เท่าไหร้
21:20 CelsiusLK: เอาพอประมาณ :3
21:20 Backstep: โอเช โพสต์ในทู้เลย เด๋วยิงคุโด้ <3
21:20 CelsiusLK: ขอบคุณครับ :D


Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Backstep

CelsiusLK wrote:

changed offset a bit
don't forget to resnap everthing

irc
21:02 Backstep: หวัดดี o/
21:02 CelsiusLK: ดี o/
21:03 Backstep: พี่รบกวนอะไรหน่อยได้มั้ย?
21:03 CelsiusLK: อ่าๆ
21:03 CelsiusLK: ได้
21:03 Backstep: ช่วยพี่หา offset เพลงนี้ที
21:03 *Backstep is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/665402 Otokaze - Karen feat.The 49ers]
21:04 CelsiusLK: เพลงนี้มัน
21:04 CelsiusLK: เหมือนเคยได้ยิน
21:04 Backstep: =3=
21:05 CelsiusLK: อ่อ xP
21:05 *CelsiusLK is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/154357 Otokaze - Karen (Short Ver.)]
21:05 CelsiusLK: ของพี่เป็นเวอร์ชั่นมีคนร้อง
21:07 Backstep: ลบแมปเก่า นั่งทำใหม่
21:07 Backstep: เพลงนี้แหละ
21:07 *Backstep is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/158928 Otokaze - Karen (Short Ver.)]
21:07 Backstep: 555
21:07 Backstep: เยส
21:07 Backstep: ทำได้ยากสุดแค่นั้นก็บุญละ (ปกติอินเซ้นทำไม่ค่อยเป็น)
21:08 CelsiusLK: ลอง offset แถวๆ -523 ถึง -525
21:09 Backstep: โอเช ลองแปป
21:09 CelsiusLK: -524
21:13 Backstep: ดูดีกว่า -520 lol
21:13 CelsiusLK: lol
21:13 Backstep: นั่งฟังไป แมปเป็นไงบ้าง :3
21:14 CelsiusLK: ชอบหนุกดี
21:15 CelsiusLK: ชอบ sb ด้วย :3
21:15 Backstep: สไลด์อาจไม่ค่อยหลากหลายเท่าไหร่ = ="
21:15 Backstep: ขอบคุณครับ \:D/
21:16 Backstep: ปัญหาเพลงนี้อยู่ที่ไม่ค่อยมีโน้ต 1/8 เลย
21:16 Backstep: ทำให้เกือบทั้งเพลงมีแต่โน้ต 1/4
21:16 Backstep: เอ้ย 1/2
21:17 CelsiusLK: ต้องเล่น jumps ถ้าจะให้ยากๆ +สนุก
21:17 Backstep: ... ไปหมดละสมงสมัน เพลงนี้มีแต่โน้ต 1/2 โน้ต 1/4 ไม่ค่อยมีให้เห็น
21:17 CelsiusLK: เพลงนี้เหมาะกับ jumps
21:17 Backstep: (ชินแต่ทำแมปเพลงช้า)
21:18 Backstep: ทำไม่ค่อยเก่งด้วยสิ
21:18 CelsiusLK: ผมก็เป็น
21:18 Backstep: ต้องให้ นานากะ =3=
21:18 CelsiusLK: ชินกับเพลงช้า 555
21:19 Backstep: โดดของพี่คิดว่าง่ายไปมั้ย ;w;?
21:19 CelsiusLK: แบบนี้ก็น่าจะพอดีละ
21:19 CelsiusLK: jumps หนักดูไม่ค่อยเข้ากับเพลงนี้เท่าไหร้
21:20 CelsiusLK: เอาพอประมาณ :3
21:20 Backstep: โอเช โพสต์ในทู้เลย เด๋วยิงคุโด้ <3
21:20 CelsiusLK: ขอบคุณครับ :D


Good luck :)
All changed thanks!
bossandy

Here for you <3
Frostmourne
Really amazing :) love it พี่มอส <3
Topic Starter
Backstep

bossandy wrote:


Here for you <3
Thanks you bro!

FrostxE wrote:

Really amazing :) love it พี่มอส <3
ดีใจที่ได้ยินแบบนั้นนะ lol
Inversal
ดาวบินไปแร้ววววว <3 SB
Natsuki Nanaka
Love it ♥

simple irc mod

take my star >:D

SPOILER
2558-04-01 23:09 - N a n a k a -: 01:47:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 
2558-04-01 23:09 - N a n a k a -: ชอบ jump นี้มาก
2558-04-01 23:09 Backstep: ก็ใส่มั่วไป :3
2558-04-01 23:10 - N a n a k a -: perfect jump มากนะนาย
2558-04-01 23:10 - N a n a k a -: 00:05:834 -
2558-04-01 23:10 - N a n a k a -: ใส่โน๊ตตรงนี้มันเข้ากับเพลงมากกว่า
2558-04-01 23:11 - N a n a k a -: 00:02:573 - ลองตั้ง sample set เป็น drum ดู
2558-04-01 23:11 Backstep: งืม
2558-04-01 23:12 Backstep: เอา kds มั้ย lol
2558-04-01 23:12 - N a n a k a -: lol
2558-04-01 23:12 - N a n a k a -: แล้วแต่
2558-04-01 23:13 - N a n a k a -: 00:30:454 -
2558-04-01 23:13 - N a n a k a -: clap ดู
2558-04-01 23:15 Backstep: เคร
2558-04-01 23:17 - N a n a k a -: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2960608
2558-04-01 23:18 - N a n a k a -: ถ้าเราทำจะวางแบบนี้
2558-04-01 23:20 Backstep: ไม่เปลี่ยน orz ...
2558-04-01 23:20 - N a n a k a -: ไม่เป็นไร อิอิ
2558-04-01 23:21 - N a n a k a -: วางแบบนี้มันเล่นง่ายกว่ายังไงไม่รู่
2558-04-01 23:21 Backstep: คือท่อน rap ก็ให้ relax มือไง
2558-04-01 23:21 Backstep: โดดมากไปก็... เอิ่ม
2558-04-01 23:22 - N a n a k a -: ก็โดดไม่มากนะเราว่า
2558-04-01 23:22 - N a n a k a -: หรือเราวางโดดจนเคยชินไป
2558-04-01 23:23 - N a n a k a -: 01:54:910 (5,6) -
2558-04-01 23:23 - N a n a k a -: blanket pls
2558-04-01 23:24 - N a n a k a -: more blanket blanket and blanket
2558-04-01 23:24 - N a n a k a -: kds pls
2558-04-01 23:24 - N a n a k a -: ty
2558-04-01 23:25 Backstep: lol
Nuolong
I saw BG on ranked map already so I changed it a bit

Omg such a beautiful storyboard ;_;

Insane
00:00:780 (4) - Move to x172 y225 maybe? The jump feels unnatural to me
00:02:084 (4) - ^ except move somewhere else

I cannot find anything wrong T_T
The storyboard is hypnotizing me, too good
Feel free to give me no kd :3
Topic Starter
Backstep

NolanM wrote:

I saw BG on ranked map already so I changed it a bit

:arrow: I changed a bit by myself :3 I think your BG feel a bit darken LOL

Omg such a beautiful storyboard ;_;

Insane
00:00:780 (4) - Move to x172 y225 maybe? The jump feels unnatural to me
:arrow: Okay I moved a bit to make same distance with 00:01:921 (3,4)
00:02:084 (4) - ^ except move somewhere else

I cannot find anything wrong T_T
The storyboard is hypnotizing me, too good
Feel free to give me no kd :3
Thanks for modded! :oops:
SLAY3RR30
really cool map & song

here's what i think

00:12:519 (4) - move this slider slightly to the left
01:36:486 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think u should make them closer to each other (by putting (4) and (5) a lil bit down)
01:18:715 (5) - put it a lil bit up (its really hard to hit)
Topic Starter
Backstep

SLAY3RR30 wrote:

really cool map & song Thanks!

here's what i think

00:12:519 (4) - move this slider slightly to the left Ah... My mistake to make same distance with 00:13:171 (1) also fixed!
01:36:486 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think u should make them closer to each other (by putting (4) and (5) a lil bit down) Fixed with square shape.
01:18:715 (5) - put it a lil bit up (its really hard to hit) I Changed a bit imo
Thanks for modded! :3

More mod please T.T
Shiranai
Hey backysteep from #modreqs ~
Some small sugestion from me,

[General]
  1. I think it's better on all diffs disable the widescreen support, because as far as I can see the SB is using 4:3 aspect ratio and not looking so good if we play on widescreen or 16:9 ratio, unless you do re-scale on some SB element, example when I play on widescreen http://puu.sh/h3gAb/0d0d886822.jpg see yourself that strobing effect kinda mess up there, there's another one http://puu.sh/h3gI9/da7b73e191.jpg Maybe you need to re-adjust something like the fade-in and fade-out effect
[Storyboard]
  1. Since the diff name is plain without GDer's name (just plain ENHI), so how about add some text like "Mapped by Xinely" for Easy and "Mapped by sp3" for Light Insane, if possible to do that it might looks better :p
  2. Since the ending of the SB is prety long, so how about add thankyouforplaying.png for closing because just spinning the stary sky is a bit too plain and might be better if there's also some shooting star on the ending that same as like this one 00:47:736 -
I just give the idea here but overall the SB looks so lovely so far ❤️

[Easy]
  1. 00:13:823 (1) - Following the lullaby sound, harusnya sih di akhir slider dikasih whistle
  2. 00:42:519 (1) - NC I guess, kalo ngikutin per dua downbeat sih
  3. 00:41:215 - Duplicate green line
  4. 01:03:389 - Add green line there? raise the volume 5~10%, karena bagiannya mulai lebih upbeat
  5. 01:19:041 - Pointless green line, delete aja deh
  6. Xinely kalo di part ini 01:21:649 - sampe sini 01:24:258 - ditambahin beberapa green line bgmn? terus volumenya diatur jadi kaya meningkat gitu volume hitsoundnya sampe pas mulai kiai, kayanya lebih ngefeel sama yang suara lullaby sama drum backsoundnya hahaha XD
  7. 01:29:476 (1) - Miss clap on end
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:128 (1) - Forget whistle? because same as 00:01:432 (1) -
  2. 00:02:736 (1) - Add whistle on head?
  3. 00:03:389 (2) - Add whistle?
  4. 00:03:715 (3) - Add whistle on reverse?
  5. 00:05:345 (2) - Add whistle on head?
  6. 00:05:345 (2,3) - Tbh a that rhythm is diffrent with these three 00:00:969 - 00:01:432 (1,2) - 00:06:649 (1,2) - I think to keep the concistency rhythm, it's better to change the rhythm on this 00:05:345 (2,3) - into somewhat same as 00:01:432 (1,2) -
  7. 00:06:649 (1) - 00:10:562 (1) - Add whistle also?
  8. 00:52:954 (1) - Delete clap on head? not relly fit imo
  9. 00:53:606 (2) - For a better flow, how about move that to x:332 y:208?
  10. 00:56:541 (3) - Delete clap on head? I guess the clap on end is enough
  11. 01:00:780 - until 01:03:389 - Add some green lines there? add adjust the raise the volume up, so the hitsound volume is gardually increased
  12. 01:21:649 - until 01:24:258 - Same as above, add some green lines, adjust the volume gradually up
[]
I'm here because otokaze and so have a star for lovely SB ❤️
I'm tired, sorry gotta stop here for now ;(
Topic Starter
Backstep
Wow! I can't believe it you will mod my map lol

Anyway I'm still traveling and cannot login osu! orz..

I'll look and fix your mod soon Mako Sakata. :')

EDIT: I can waiting your mod if you tired you need some rest I don't rush you (○゚ε゚○)
nanoK
[Insane]
00:08:606 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you're going for a star here, do ctrl-shift-D, choose 5 points, and rearrange them into a star pattern.
00:33:389 (9) - nc
00:34:041 (1) - remove nc
00:34:693 (5) - nc
01:37:954 (3,4,5,6) - Again, do ctrl-shift D. Place one of the points on the end of the slider so it stays and looks equal
02:11:215 (2) - Although it looks cool, there's no purpose here. If you want slider art, at least time it better

Overall, this difficulty is amazing, which is why most of the mods here are very minor. Great mapping here!

[Easy]
No problems here, but it's kind of like a light normal with CS3 and low AR, so easy players might not like it

[Normal]
00:54:258 (4,5) - I don't think this is predictable. Please change it to the vocals which are 2 1/2 sliders and 1 circle

I'm starting to feel bad for not modding alot. It's just that the map is good ;-;

[Hard]

Why don't I have any mods for this...
Maybe you can fix the heart's timing, but I'm not going to say it's manditory

[Overall]

Honestly, in the beginning, I thought it was a boring song that was going to be made by a new mapper, but you took the song and made it into something great. I love all the difficulties, especially Insane and Hard.

I hope you get this ranked, good luck!
Topic Starter
Backstep
@Mako Sakata: I'm fixed all your Normal... and my storyboard I'll fix soon :/ okay i'm fix it now with all general + sb
P.S. I'll wait your full mod soon >w<

finap wrote:

[Insane]
00:08:606 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you're going for a star here, do ctrl-shift-D, choose 5 points, and rearrange them into a star pattern.
:arrow: Fine for me, I don't need perfect symmetrical shape.
00:33:389 (9) - nc
00:34:041 (1) - remove nc
00:34:693 (5) - nc
:arrow: All NC would be nice, fixed.
01:37:954 (3,4,5,6) - Again, do ctrl-shift D. Place one of the points on the end of the slider so it stays and looks equal
:arrow: Same above.
02:11:215 (2) - Although it looks cool, there's no purpose here. If you want slider art, at least time it better

Overall, this difficulty is amazing, which is why most of the mods here are very minor. Great mapping here!
:arrow: Thanks!

[Easy]
No problems here, but it's kind of like a light normal with CS3 and low AR, so easy players might not like it

[Normal]
00:54:258 (4,5) - I don't think this is predictable. Please change it to the vocals which are 2 1/2 sliders and 1 circle
:arrow: I think it's fine here too, coz I want to make player not bored with same rhythm pattern like Easy difficulty.
I'm starting to feel bad for not modding alot. It's just that the map is good ;-;

[Hard]

Why don't I have any mods for this...
Maybe you can fix the heart's timing, but I'm not going to say it's manditory

[Overall]

Honestly, in the beginning, I thought it was a boring song that was going to be made by a new mapper, but you took the song and made it into something great. I love all the difficulties, especially Insane and Hard.
:arrow: Thanks for all your comments :')
I hope you get this ranked, good luck!
Thanks for modded!

P.S. I need more HS mod orz...
ArrowOfWInD
-Insane-

reverse the slider so that at the end of the slider player will be moving cursor -> towards the next hit obj instead of <-
i find myself almost always slider break at here unless i force myself to move my cursor after the hit sound
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