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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunes, 30 de marzo de 2015 at 21:45:28

Artist: Owl City
Title: You're Not Alone Feat. Britt Nicole
Tags: Adam Young Brittany Waddell mancusojuanmattos
BPM: 84
Filesize: 5741kb
Play Time: 03:37
Difficulties Available:
  • Easy (1,36 stars, 165 notes)
  • Hard (2,62 stars, 366 notes)
  • Normal (1,64 stars, 225 notes)

Download: Owl City - You're Not Alone Feat. Britt Nicole
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Oh.. I'm mapping again :o. And this time Owl City once again (and other low BPM song xD), this song really inspired me to map it.
If you've the beatmap before to 29/3/15, you need to redownload because I changed the mp3 (special thanks to Lanturn for providing me a better mp3 quality).

Mapset:
Easy: 100%
Normal: 100%
Hard: 100%
Last edited by mancuso_JM_ on , edited 12 times in total.
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1st

Suerte c:

Gracias c:. Voy a ver si puedo conseguir algun mod por ahi xD.
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OMG Owl City <333 *Guarda espacio para un modpost*
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Modding cause I can~


Easy
  • 00:05:835 (3) - I don't think this is 100% symetrical but I could just be stupid
  • 03:02:978 (1) - I'd remove this note tbh, 1) It might catch newer players off guard 2) It kills the feeling of the spinner winding down the map before the break imo


Normal
  • 01:47:263 (3) - There's nothing really wrong with this but I love blankets ;w;
  • 01:50:120 (3,4) - This blanket could be a bit better
  • 02:12:978 (3) - There's a lot happening in his voice so I'd say to make it a curve or something more interesting, and keep the next one as a straight slider to match the music better
  • 03:02:978 (1) - Same thing as the easy



Hard

That's all I could find cause your map is really pretty <3
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Modding cause I can~ c:


Easy
  • 00:05:835 (3) - I don't think this is 100% symetrical but I could just be stupid haha, great catch. I didn't notice that before haha, fixed.
  • 03:02:978 (1) - I'd remove this note tbh, 1) It might catch newer players off guard 2) It kills the feeling of the spinner winding down the map before the break imo I was doubting about this note too, but I'll wait for some other opinion before to change it.


Normal
  • 01:47:263 (3) - There's nothing really wrong with this but I love blankets ;w; I didn't want a blanket here :P
  • 01:50:120 (3,4) - This blanket could be a bit better Fixed a bit.
  • 02:12:978 (3) - There's a lot happening in his voice so I'd say to make it a curve or something more interesting, and keep the next one as a straight slider to match the music better Don't bother my dear stright sliders :c. Talking seriously, I think is ok.
  • 03:02:978 (1) - Same thing as the easy I was doubting in the easy but in this difficulty I don't think it'll be problem for average players, so I'm pretty sure I won't change that.



Hard
  • 00:42:978 (1,2,3) - I'd blanket these personally :c emm.. I'll do it later xD, I'm so lazy.
  • 01:09:228 (2,3,4) - And blanket these
  • 02:34:228 (6,1,2) - And these
  • 03:02:978 (1) - Same as before on all the other diffs Same as Normal, actually it plays pretty nice for me, I remember I did something like you're suggesting me in my previous maps and people suggested me to add a note, so I think this is a personal like.
  • 03:32:085 (2,3) - and I'd blanket these Meh.. you and your blankets :c. I did something in some places :P

That's all I could find cause your map is really pretty <3 c:. I'm glad you like it.

Unexpected mods are the best! :D
Thanks a lot! Updated.

Edit: Ups, I added my previous username in tags. I didn't forget that, but this time was the exception xD.
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Hi! Mr. Global moderator Mancuso_Jm! I'm not a good modder. So if you don't agree with my mod it's fine. I'm constantly learning.

    SOME PERSONAL COMMENTS
  • I really liked the song. I mean being Feat by Britt Nicole makes it a wonderful song. Indeed the lyrics are just amazing. With all of that means you have really good likes o3o
  • You have done a really nice job mapping all the song. Indeed, it's too slow, almost 90 BPM. You're very patient mapping. Congratulations!
  • I was very surprised when I started modding because the beat snap divisor is in 1/8. That's means you're a really good mapper. ;) And you know it! xD
  • For my perspective it's an honor mod a map. even knowing it will suck at the end. But, I'll do my best.

Now, my mod starts.

✿ General ✿
✿ Hard ✿
  • 00:18:692 (3) - This object is too far from this slider 00:18:335 (2)
  • 00:33:335 (3) - This object is too close from this slider 00:32:263 (2) - I don't think this would be relevant becase there's no way to move that wild circle.
  • 00:50:656 I think it's missing a circle here because of the song. It has like a hidden beat here.
  • 00:32:263 (2) - I'd suggest to make a repetition of that slider because it flows with the song. Something like this. http://puu.sh/gLpPB/7456eec508.jpg that's just a recommendation. You're free to do what you consider it's good or not.
  • After all, you manage good symmetric patterns! Too Awesome! ;)

✿ Normal ✿
  • 01:20:120 (3) - This object is too far from this slider 01:19:049 (2)
  • 01:35:835 (3) - This object is too far from this slider 01:35:120 (2) Fix this distance.
  • Hitsounds are really flowing with the song! Really nice job.
  • 00:53:870 I don't know if a circle would flow well with the song here. But I think it's missing something there. At the end with the clap of this slider00:52:978 (3) I'd think that there's a beat or something else.

I don't have nothing to say about the easy diff. It's really well done!
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Hi! Mr. Global moderator Mancuso_Jm! I'm not a good modder. So if you don't agree with my mod it's fine. I'm constantly learning.

    SOME PERSONAL COMMENTS
  • I really liked the song. I mean being Feat by Britt Nicole makes it a wonderful song. Indeed the lyrics are just amazing. With all of that means you have really good likes o3o
  • You have done a really nice job mapping all the song. Indeed, it's too slow, almost 90 BPM. You're very patient mapping. Congratulations!
  • I was very surprised when I started modding because the beat snap divisor is in 1/8. That's means you're a really good mapper. ;) And you know it! xD
  • For my perspective it's an honor mod a map. even knowing it will suck at the end. But, I'll do my best. Thanks for the nice words c:

Now, my mod starts.

✿ General ✿
✿ Hard ✿
  • 00:18:692 (3) - This object is too far from this slider 00:18:335 (2) This one is intentional, if you see again the map you'll notice I increased the spacing between 1/4 spacing in this slow section.
  • 00:33:335 (3) - This object is too close from this slider 00:32:263 (2) - I don't think this would be relevant becase there's no way to move that wild circle. This is intentional, and this technique is called anti-jump. Is a good thing when the objects are really far in the timeline and looks pretty for me.
  • 00:50:656 I think it's missing a circle here because of the song. It has like a hidden beat here. Hmm.. I don't think so. I think this emphasize pretty well the vocals and a not here would be breaking that emphasis.
  • 00:32:263 (2) - I'd suggest to make a repetition of that slider because it flows with the song. Something like this. http://puu.sh/gLpPB/7456eec508.jpg that's just a recommendation. You're free to do what you consider it's good or not. Actually, there is not anything revelant in the song at 00:32:978 - so any sound in there would sound bad. I prefer to keep it as it is.
  • After all, you manage good symmetric patterns! Too Awesome! ;) Thanks c:

✿ Normal ✿
  • 01:20:120 (3) - This object is too far from this slider 01:19:049 (2) Ups, that was not intentional hehe. Fixed.
  • 01:35:835 (3) - This object is too far from this slider 01:35:120 (2) Fix this distance. Same here.
  • Hitsounds are really flowing with the song! Really nice job. Thanks c:
  • 00:53:870 I don't know if a circle would flow well with the song here. But I think it's missing something there. At the end with the clap of this slider00:52:978 (3) I'd think that there's a beat or something else. Hmm.. naa xD. I don't think so.

I don't have nothing to say about the easy diff. It's really well done!

Thanks for modding! I really apreciate it.
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Hi~
From #modrequest
Some minor fixes, because it's already well-mapped. <3

Easy:

00:35:478 (2) - x:392 y:128 should fit better for flow /w\
00:44:763 (1) - Maybe you should remove nc here, but i'm not sure.
02:15:120 (2) - End at the x:170 y:286
03:32:620 (2) - Beginning: x:453 y:29, End: x:466 y:173

Normal:
00:04:049 (2) - x:337 y:107
01:08:692 (1) - You can do something like this here => http://puu.sh/gMBlK/a5ae66b403.jpg (like here 01:31:549 (1) - )
02:27:620 (3) - Point on slider (Example: http://puu.sh/gMBzt/2d65446454.jpg)
02:47:263 (3) - With the beginning at the x:231 y :230 it looks better imo
03:16:906 (5) - Note missing? owo\
03:31:549 (1) - Try to move beginning at x:211 y:89

Hard:
00:02:263 (4) - x:483 y:233
00:06:906 (2) - x:106 y:161
00:48:513 (6) - x:441 y:242
02:26:906 (2,4) - They're a little bit anstacked (y:35 and y:36)
02:38:335 (3) - Beginning at x:420 y:305
03:29:228 (2) - Try to move beginning at x:261 y:303

Lovely map, lovely patterns, lovely hitsounds&song.
Amazing as always, mancuso owo/
Good luck with rank~ :)
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Hi~ Hey c:
From #modrequest
Some minor fixes, because it's already well-mapped. <3

Easy:

00:35:478 (2) - x:392 y:128 should fit better for flow /w\ Okas.
00:44:763 (1) - Maybe you should remove nc here, but i'm not sure. I prefer to keep it because this phrase is not part of the previous combo, but I added a New Combo in Normal for consistency.
02:15:120 (2) - End at the x:170 y:286 Hmm.. nah, that's too nazi.
03:32:620 (2) - Beginning: x:453 y:29, End: x:466 y:173 I made something similar.

Normal:
00:04:049 (2) - x:337 y:107 Moved a bit but not exaclty where you told me.
01:08:692 (1) - You can do something like this here => http://puu.sh/gMBlK/a5ae66b403.jpg (like here 01:31:549 (1) - ) I like how it looks actually :p
02:27:620 (3) - Point on slider (Example: http://puu.sh/gMBzt/2d65446454.jpg) Curved, but on the other side xD. link
02:47:263 (3) - With the beginning at the x:231 y :230 it looks better imo Don't break my symetry here pls :c
03:16:906 (5) - Note missing? owo\ Sure, added.
03:31:549 (1) - Try to move beginning at x:211 y:89 Nah, I like how it looks actually and it is a really minor change.

Hard:
00:02:263 (4) - x:483 y:233 I prefer to keep it, it is a little change and I like how it looks actually.
00:06:906 (2) - x:106 y:161 Not exactly where you told me but I make a tiny change in this pattern.
00:48:513 (6) - x:441 y:242 meh.. k
02:26:906 (2,4) - They're a little bit anstacked (y:35 and y:36) lelelelelele
02:38:335 (3) - Beginning at x:420 y:305 No, I'm keeping the symetry here.
03:29:228 (2) - Try to move beginning at x:261 y:303 naah, works fine as it is.

Lovely map, lovely patterns, lovely hitsounds&song.
Amazing as always, mancuso owo/
Good luck with rank~ :)

Thanks for modding! It was a nazi mod but I still appreciate it.
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hiya :3/


General
Borra el "Owl City - You're Not Alone ft. Britt Nicole (mancuso_JM_).osb"
Ponle unos 2000ms de lead-in


Easy

00:00:121 (1) - Le di un toque a este, puedes usarlo para este tambien 00:01:549 (2) -
Code:
70,304,121,6,0,B|102:316|122:348|122:348|152:328|192:336,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:38:335 (2,3) - Spacing
00:54:049 (1) - Quita el whistle del body
00:59:049 (2) - Whistle?
01:05:478 (1) - quita whistle del body
01:38:692 (3) - Quita el whistle el sliderbody
02:14:049 (1) - ^
02:25:478 (1) - ay, ya van muchos, creo que es intencional, no se :/
03:16:549 (4,5,6) - Spacing
03:18:335 (2,3) - Quita el whistle del (2) y ponle uno al (3) para que seas consistente con los kiais anteriores, suena genial ademas


Normal

00:59:406 (4,5) - puedes ponerle Nc a alguno de esos, es el unico inconsistente y eso. Igual no creo que sea problema, pero almenos sirve para que lo tengas en cuenta
03:22:620 (1) - spacing, si es intencional igual seria mejor que lo arreglaras, no cambia mucho
Lo mismo de los whistles en los sliderbodys, solo por si acaso. (aun no se si es intencional x.x)


Hard

02:53:513 (6,7) - stack
Tambien puedes ver lo de los whistles en los sliderbody hue

How2modperfectmaps;w;

Suerte !
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hiya :3/ Hola!


General
Borra el "Owl City - You're Not Alone ft. Britt Nicole (mancuso_JM_).osb" Emm.. tengo planeado que este map tenga un sb, asi que voy a esperar. Si me arrepiento lo elimino.
Ponle unos 2000ms de lead-in Seguro.


Easy

00:00:121 (1) - Le di un toque a este, puedes usarlo para este tambien 00:01:549 (2) - Okas, lo uso.
Code:
70,304,121,6,0,B|102:316|122:348|122:348|152:328|192:336,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:38:335 (2,3) - Spacing Ups.. Arreglado.
00:54:049 (1) - Quita el whistle del body No y la respuesta es igual para todos los cuerpos slider (asi no te respondo siempre lo mismo xD). Con los Whistle en el cuerpo de los sliders sigo las secciones largas en la voz, pero solo las mas importantes. En este caso, vas a ver que en la palabra ''eternity'', la ''y'' es constante hasta que termina el slider y eso es lo que sigo.
00:59:049 (2) - Whistle? No me gusta el doble whistle y lo siento mas predominante en 00:58:692 - por eso prefiero dejarlo como esta
01:05:478 (1) - quita whistle del body En este caso, ''saaaaaay'', remarcando esa larga ''a'' con el whistle.
01:38:692 (3) - Quita el whistle el sliderbody
02:14:049 (1) - ^
02:25:478 (1) - ay, ya van muchos, creo que es intencional, no se :/
03:16:549 (4,5,6) - Spacing Listo (igual creo que te equivocaste en los numeros (?)
03:18:335 (2,3) - Quita el whistle del (2) y ponle uno al (3) para que seas consistente con los kiais anteriores, suena genial ademas Listo, ademas agregue un drum finish en (2).


Normal

00:59:406 (4,5) - puedes ponerle Nc a alguno de esos, es el unico inconsistente y eso. Igual no creo que sea problema, pero almenos sirve para que lo tengas en cuenta Agregado en (5) por consistencia.
03:22:620 (1) - spacing, si es intencional igual seria mejor que lo arreglaras, no cambia mucho Ups, no se como paso eso xD. Listo.
Lo mismo de los whistles en los sliderbodys, solo por si acaso. (aun no se si es intencional x.x) Lee lo que puse en la Easy.


Hard

02:53:513 (6,7) - stack so nazi xD
Tambien puedes ver lo de los whistles en los sliderbody hue Igual.

How2modperfectmaps;w; c;

Suerte !

Gracias por el mod ;)
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si vas a usar el .osb aunque sea renombralo de "Owl City - You're Not Alone ft. Britt Nicole (mancuso_JM_).osb" la parte que dice "ft" en lugar de "feat"
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pkhg wrote:
si vas a usar el .osb aunque sea renombralo de "Owl City - You're Not Alone ft. Britt Nicole (mancuso_JM_).osb" la parte que dice "ft" en lugar de "feat"
c:

En caso de usarla lo cambio. Gracias por eso :P
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hard
00:02:978 (1) - moving this to x:446 y:39 would flow nicely. http://puu.sh/gSvwo/4c1641a2ee.jpg
00:04:049 (2,3,4,1) - re distance snap if u follow above
00:04:049 (2,3,4,1) - make this sorta a triangle, it looks better > http://puu.sh/gSvyz/f93df09ea8.jpg
00:15:478 (2,3) - keep same rhythm as before. also the beats are on white ticks, dont use slider ends for it because it plays badly. use this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/gSvFb/45ed873c80.jpg
00:42:978 (1,2,3) - looks a bit gross. fix blankets please
01:09:942 (4,5) - same as before, dont slider end the white tick
01:12:799 (4,5) - ^
01:14:228 - a bit concerned about this gap, but meh
01:20:299 - 01:31:370 - uhh?? this isnt mapped?
02:26:906 (2,4) - nazi stack
02:33:335 (4) - curve flow? http://puu.sh/gSwa9/eeef3b0b1d.jpg
02:46:549 (3,4) - this isnt a perfect blanket
02:56:370 (5,6) - rotate 60 degrees since you curved this so much 02:55:656 (4) - http://puu.sh/gSwjv/20c9d3a0ae.jpg

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