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Hashimoto Miyuki - Kisetsu o Dakishimete ~blooming white lov

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年7月13日 at 0:39:14

Artist: Hashimoto Miyuki
Title: Kisetsu o Dakishimete ~blooming white love~
Source: アストラエアの白き永遠
Tags: astralair no shiroki towa favorite galgame ending yamamoto mineko nozaki shinpe Lavender Minakami Yuki yf_bmp
BPM: 164
Filesize: 14040kb
Play Time: 02:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.39 stars, 174 notes)
  2. Insane (4.44 stars, 506 notes)
  3. Lavender's Hard (3.41 stars, 382 notes)
  4. Normal (1.98 stars, 255 notes)
  5. Yuki's Insane (4.8 stars, 539 notes)
Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Kisetsu o Dakishimete ~blooming white love~
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アストラエアの白き永遠
橋本みゆき - 季節を抱きしめて ~blooming white love~

Difficulties List :
Easy by | Me
Normal by | Me
Lavender's Hard by | Lavender
Insane by | Me
Yuki's Insane by | Minakami Yuki
Design StoryBoard & Lyrics by | me
Thanks yf_bmp for awesome StoryBoard effects
Some skin elements by Flower
OP1 by Flower : 新田恵海 - White Eternity
OP2 by KaedekaShizuru: 山本美禰子 - 雪のエルフィンリート ～Never ending love song～
Modder List
z1085684963
Shad0w1and
liangv587
ctpsky
Hollow Wings
Lavender
AIR
khy200610140
KaedekaShizuru
Narcissu
tutuhaha
Moecho
Mio_chan
Mackenzie
Flower
yf_bmp
Inazuma - Bubbled
Karen - Qualified
Disqualified
Karen - Rebubbled
Mackenzie - Requalified
2nd Disqualified
Mackenzie - 2nd Rebubbled
Flower - 2nd Requalified
Thank all of you!
Last edited by Kencho , edited 102 times in total.
Lavender
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Lavender
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SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Hashimoto Miyuki - Kisetsu o Dakishimete ~blooming white love~ (Short Ver.).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 101608
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Kisetsu o Dakishimete ~blooming white love~ (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:季節を抱きしめて ～blooming white love～ (Short Ver.)
Artist:Hashimoto Miyuki
ArtistUnicode:橋本みゆき
Creator:ken2010123
Version:Hard
Source:アストラエアの白き永遠
Tags:astralair no shiroki towa favorite galgame ending yamamoto mineko nozaki shinpei
BeatmapID:654792
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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没加音效
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Kencho
thx lots of :)
z1085684963
327 posts
Joined August 2012
z1085684963
hi
[Insane]
00:06:852 (2) - 前后是时间都一样为什么间距这么近
00:09:596跟钢琴的话别空着
00:12:157 (2) - 你跟的人声，往前拉两格
00:25:510这里停，后面加个note
00:36:943漏了
00:49:474别空着
01:15:084 (6) - nc
01:53:041别空着
02:00:358别空着
02:16:456^

滑条建议还是三点好好拉吧
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Shad0w1and
Insane
AR8
00:00:450 (1) - Ctrl-J然后摆回原位，或逆时针旋转30度
00:06:303 (1,2) - 这个为何和后面几个不摆得一样
00:12:157 (2) - 向右移，距离前后note都应该远一点
00:15:084 (1) - 弄弯
SPOILER
00:17:096 (4) - 逆时针转6度
00:27:340 (2,3,4,1,2,3) -
SPOILER

感觉排列问题有点多，不做微调了，做几个建议：
如果是要乱排，那么视觉DS的跳就十分重要了，怎么摆？看这张图学https://osu.ppy.sh/b/581531，首先保证你的每个小节中的DS的排列整齐，或者视觉距离，又或者至少物件组成的几何形状整齐。
滑条部分，请看这张图学，https://osu.ppy.sh/b/490188，看懂怎样保证你每个方向送出去的flow都能被接住，除非节奏中断，或者有变化时，又或者重音音轨切换的时候，不允许乱冲出去。00:26:791 (1,2) - 之间的flow就是直接被你切断了，00:44:352 (3,4) - 这里也是
Hard
00:07:950 (4,1,2) - 别重叠，你这种排列图风应该是不允许有这种存在的
00:18:559 (6,1) - 不是很好看
00:26:791 (1,2,3,1) -
SPOILER
00:36:669 (4) - 根据我的经验这种在hard里面反人类（不想打图了，你自己多试几次要是稍微觉得不顺就应该改）
00:37:035 (1,2) - 改成滑条
00:41:059 (4,5,6,1) - flow有点断开的感觉
00:41:425 (1,2,3,4,5) -
SPOILER
01:28:803 (2) - 弯一点会有韵味
SPOILER
02:09:230 (1) - ^
Hard要好不少
Normal
00:53:132 (1) - 牵强了
02:08:864 (4,1) - 有一点点违和，问题不算大，看你
Easy
怎样都好我不关心
美丽
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Kencho
z1085684963

z1085684963 wrote:

hi
[Insane]
00:06:852 (2) - 前后是时间都一样为什么间距这么近 故意疊起來的=.=
00:09:596跟钢琴的话别空着 ok
00:12:157 (2) - 你跟的人声，往前拉两格 前面加了note
00:25:510这里停，后面加个note 好主意
00:36:943漏了 先保留，因為不想做太難 現在加了
00:49:474别空着 好
01:15:084 (6) - nc 好
01:53:041别空着 這個我也先保留，因為不想做太難 現在加了
02:00:358别空着 這個也不太想加連打，反而後面那個加了 現在加了
02:16:456^ 不想太難

滑条建议还是三点好好拉吧 其實四點五點滑條有什麼問題嗎……我看別的圖也有這樣做的，滑條統一款式而且剛好對稱

Shad0w1and

Shad0w1and wrote:

Insane
AR8 164BPM AR8實在太難讀
00:00:450 (1) - Ctrl-J然后摆回原位，或逆时针旋转30度 好
00:06:303 (1,2) - 这个为何和后面几个不摆得一样 故意疊起來的=.=
00:12:157 (2) - 向右移，距离前后note都应该远一点 前面加了note，所以位置也改了一下
00:15:084 (1) - 弄弯 好
SPOILER
00:17:096 (4) - 逆时针转6度 好
00:27:340 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 改了
SPOILER

感觉排列问题有点多，不做微调了，做几个建议：
如果是要乱排，那么视觉DS的跳就十分重要了，怎么摆？看这张图学https://osu.ppy.sh/b/581531，首先保证你的每个小节中的DS的排列整齐，或者视觉距离，又或者至少物件组成的几何形状整齐。
滑条部分，请看这张图学，https://osu.ppy.sh/b/490188，看懂怎样保证你每个方向送出去的flow都能被接住，除非节奏中断，或者有变化时，又或者重音音轨切换的时候，不允许乱冲出去。00:26:791 (1,2) - 之间的flow就是直接被你切断了，00:44:352 (3,4) - 这里也是 唔，我會盡量改一下
Normal
00:53:132 (1) - 牵强了 改了一下
02:08:864 (4,1) - 有一点点违和，问题不算大，看你 覺得還可以
Easy
怎样都好我不关心 ;w;
美丽
thx modding
update
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liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
liangv587
[Insane]
00:04:657 (3) - 两个圈，增强打击感
00:09:230 (1) - 平行前面一个，00:09:779 (3,4) - 这里都是
00:13:254 (1) - ctrl+g
00:14:352 (3,4) - 换位置，00:15:084 (1) - 弯一下，改善flow
00:31:730 (3) - 用3点滑条多好，这种看起来有点蛋疼
00:39:413 (3,4,5) - 跳应该在34之间，45之间不适合
01:00:449 (1,1) - 可以不用nc，能看懂的

[Hard]
02:01:181 (3) - ctrl+g？
确实dio啊这个hard

[Normal]
00:04:474 - 用1/2滑条，或者00:04:108 (2) - 用1/1
00:21:669 (1) - 好好用3点滑条不好吗，这种一看就不圆
01:29:535 (5,6) - flow不好，就用个3点滑条就行了http://puu.sh/h5ZEl.jpg
02:01:547 (4) - 不要藏在里面http://puu.sh/h5ZHp.jpg
02:13:620 (3,1) - overlap了http://puu.sh/h5ZLR.jpg

[Easy]
01:10:693 (1,1) - 转盘后面隔4拍

Insane可以改善的地方听多的，然而我懒了删Insane起飞算了，懒得改
AnOzi Changle
119 posts
Joined July 2014
AnOzi Changle
[General]
02:29:718 (1) - 这一段貌似需要timing

[Insane]
00:01:547 (2) - 我觉得这种滑条好丑。。
00:11:242 (2) - 歪了
00:20:206 (2,3,4,5,1) - 转换的太奇怪了了
00:23:864 (1) - 转盘后紧接note
可以把转往前移一拍 然后在 00:25:510 加个圈
00:30:998 (1) - 我还是不喜欢这样的滑条。。 仔细一看还没包好
00:34:840 (3,4) - copy 00:34:108 (1) 然后ctrl+h 00:35:389 - 然后这里加个note
00:44:901 (4) - 并不好看 换成一个羊角式的对称
01:32:645 (3) - 我跟倾向于拆成3个圈
01:50:937 (3) - 以及后面这个位置的 还是blanket的好
02:15:815 (3,6) - 稍微铺开一些
02:25:145 (1,2,3) - 我认为这里的走势应该是往右下而不是左上

[Hard]
这图很神 不过貌似没音效？
01:31:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - 试试14325？
02:02:645 (3) - ctrl+g更好吧

[Normal]
00:48:193 (2) - 歪了
01:03:742 (2,3,4) - 歪了 4考虑掉个头
01:25:876 (3) - 不好看
01:27:889 (1) - NM的话这flow不好吧
02:00:449 (2,3,4) - NM这样不好吧
02:05:571 (3) - 歪了

EaSy不摸了
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
m4m

General

  1. finish your storyboard, there's too much elements' not used in your sb code.
  2. currently there're two .osb file, remove one of them.

Insane

  1. 00:50:206 (1) - part from here's hs' too quiet too be heard. larger hs volume here a bit.
  2. 00:58:986 (4) - i recommend you ctrl+g this to emphasis the special vocal beat at the end of the slider with anti flow.
  3. 01:00:449 (1,1) - remove nc, not necessary here even with inconsistent rhythm.
  4. generally fine to me. some patterns' detail style can be polished a lot thou, like 00:37:035 (7,8) - do you think the current version of these two sliders' structure is the best idea? same things to almost all stuffs in your map, you can scan your diff your self if you care. but rhythm's in good style imo.

Teichan's Hard

  1. finish your hitsounding work.
  2. 00:08:681 (2,3) - still recommend you swap these two notes, that quiet part's not value a big jump.
  3. 00:47:279 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - these jumps are a bit large, especially the last one. shorter them into a common hard diff level.
  4. a star to this diff.

Normal

  1. too quiet the previous part of the song's hs volume is, larger them all.
  2. 00:47:279 (1,2) - maybe blanket perfect (nazi
  3. 01:03:742 (2,3,4) - ok, seems like you don't care blanket at all.
  4. in lower diffs i still recommend some regular structures, thou it's up to you.

Easy

  1. same hs volume problem as above.
  2. and same words at last as above.
for your map's not finished yet, i will skip considering move it on.

you have one chance to poke me check this when you get your bubble.

good luck.
Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Lavender
Hitsound done. 用默认hitsound不是很熟，下得不好不要打我
I only fix what I point out.

Shad0w1and wrote:

00:07:950 (4,1,2) - 别重叠，你这种排列图风应该是不允许有这种存在的 虽然重叠是不对，不过图风是个很主观的东西

ctpsky wrote:

01:31:181 (1,2,3,4,5) - 试试14325？ 好

Hollow Wings wrote:

  1. finish your hitsounding work. done
  2. 00:08:681 (2,3) - still recommend you swap these two notes, that quiet part's not value a big jump. Changed pattern here
  3. 00:47:279 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - these jumps are a bit large, especially the last one. shorter them into a common hard diff level. Consider, I wonder whether it would cause a spread issue if I remove the jump.
  4. a star to this diff. Thanks for support!

[Some personal comments]
  1. 转盘延长到 02:38:498 -
  2. 我真的很想禁了sliderslide, 太难听了
Thanks for modding!

Code
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Hashimoto Miyuki - Kisetsu o Dakishimete ~blooming white love~ (Short Ver.).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 101791
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 450,6303,12157,18010,23864,26791,32645,38498,44352,50206,56059,61913,67767,73620,79474,85328,91181,97035,102889,108742,114596,120449,126303,132157,138010,143864,149718
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Kisetsu o Dakishimete ~blooming white love~
TitleUnicode:季節を抱きしめて ～blooming white love～
Artist:Hashimoto Miyuki
ArtistUnicode:橋本みゆき
Creator:ken2010123
Version:Teichan's Hard
Source:アストラエアの白き永遠
Tags:astralair no shiroki towa favorite galgame ending yamamoto mineko nozaki shinpei [Teichan]
BeatmapID:654792
BeatmapSetID:290683

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG 3.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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450,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
11425,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
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26059,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
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38498,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
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100328,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
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137279,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
138010,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
149718,-100,4,2,2,20,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 143,85,253
Combo2 : 248,248,248
Combo3 : 238,102,133
Combo4 : 255,255,128
Combo5 : 200,200,200
Combo6 : 253,162,227

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246,66,91364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
186,125,91547,1,0,1:0:0:0:
167,44,91730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,148,91913,2,0,L|332:140,1,70,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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448,149,92462,6,0,P|453:218|439:286,2,140,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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283,185,93742,1,0,1:0:0:0:
365,167,93925,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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192,35,95389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,92,95571,6,0,L|320:104,1,70,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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340,319,96669,2,0,L|270:311,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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269,226,100693,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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266,72,103986,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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388,127,105724,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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219,304,110023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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440,53,111303,1,8,0:0:0:0:
488,175,111486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,169,113864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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179,135,115328,2,0,L|111:151,1,70,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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220,97,123376,5,4,0:3:0:0:
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261,153,126852,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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92,138,128132,1,8,0:0:0:0:
173,182,128315,2,0,P|209:240|197:307,1,140,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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269,170,129047,1,0,1:0:0:0:
269,170,129139,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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446,67,129779,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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229,152,134901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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136,89,136547,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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221,120,137096,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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412,139,138010,6,0,P|433:205|408:269,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,310,138559,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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2,203,139840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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350,149,140846,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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271,104,141486,1,4,0:3:0:0:
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AIR
1,577 posts
Joined November 2012
AIR
[Easy]
  1. 00:04:474 (2) - 这个位置比两边都轻点，建议提前红线
  2. 00:42:157 (2) - 建议后移红线
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:108 (2,3) -
    00:06:852 (2,3) - 类似不再提
  2. 00:08:681 (1,2) - 00:10:693 (1,3) - 00:13:986 (1,4) - 00:16:547 (1,3) - 00:29:718 (1,4) - 交换nc，类似不再提，尽量在等拍数大白线或者节奏转换处比如00:38:498 (3) -
[Teichan's Hard]
  1. 00:03:376 (1) -
    00:06:303 (1) - 类似
  2. 00:21:486 (2) - 建议这样过渡
  3. 00:37:035 (1) -
    主要感觉后面鼓有点提前了，前面白线停顿一下感觉好些
[Insane]
  1. 00:35:754 - 此处建议断开
  2. 00:37:035 (7,8,1,2,3) - 参考Hard的摸
  3. 美丽
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Kencho
liangv587

liangv587 wrote:

[Insane]
00:04:657 (3) - 两个圈，增强打击感 好
00:09:230 (1) - 平行前面一个，00:09:779 (3,4) - 这里都是 好
00:13:254 (1) - ctrl+g ok
00:14:352 (3,4) - 换位置，00:15:084 (1) - 弯一下，改善flow ok
00:31:730 (3) - 用3点滑条多好，这种看起来有点蛋疼 你們都吐槽這個，我換回三點吧……
00:39:413 (3,4,5) - 跳应该在34之间，45之间不适合 改了
01:00:449 (1,1) - 可以不用nc，能看懂的 好

[Normal]
00:04:474 - 用1/2滑条，或者00:04:108 (2) - 用1/1 好
00:21:669 (1) - 好好用3点滑条不好吗，这种一看就不圆 好
01:29:535 (5,6) - flow不好，就用个3点滑条就行了http://puu.sh/h5ZEl.jpg √
02:01:547 (4) - 不要藏在里面http://puu.sh/h5ZHp.jpg √
02:13:620 (3,1) - overlap了http://puu.sh/h5ZLR.jpg √

[Easy]
01:10:693 (1,1) - 转盘后面隔4拍 換成滑條了

Insane可以改善的地方听多的，然而我懒了删Insane起飞算了，懒得改 打包

ctpsky

ctpsky wrote:

[General]
02:29:718 (1) - 这一段貌似需要timing 反正是轉盤timing也沒啥用了，沒影響應該沒問題

[Insane]
00:01:547 (2) - 我觉得这种滑条好丑。。 ..還可以吧
00:11:242 (2) - 歪了 fixed
00:20:206 (2,3,4,5,1) - 转换的太奇怪了了 稍微弄大一點間距吧，我覺得還可以
00:23:864 (1) - 转盘后紧接note
可以把转往前移一拍 然后在 00:25:510 加个圈 原本我是直接一個轉盤的，上面Z1叫我加個圈，現在又加一個實在太奇怪了= =
00:30:998 (1) - 我还是不喜欢这样的滑条。。 仔细一看还没包好 你們都吐槽這個，我換回三點吧……
00:34:840 (3,4) - copy 00:34:108 (1) 然后ctrl+h 00:35:389 - 然后这里加个note 不太看得懂……要是可以的話可以截圖看看
00:44:901 (4) - 并不好看 换成一个羊角式的对称 因為這個是3/2拍的滑條，所以沒太在意怎麼啦，好我對稱一下
01:32:645 (3) - 我跟倾向于拆成3个圈 一開始我是三個圈的……但是聽著鼓音其實這樣才對
01:50:937 (3) - 以及后面这个位置的 还是blanket的好 ok
02:15:815 (3,6) - 稍微铺开一些 ok
02:25:145 (1,2,3) - 我认为这里的走势应该是往右下而不是左上 我把123的角度改了下，和4 blanket了

[Normal]
00:48:193 (2) - 歪了 √
01:03:742 (2,3,4) - 歪了 4考虑掉个头 好
01:25:876 (3) - 不好看 改了
01:27:889 (1) - NM的话这flow不好吧 改了
02:00:449 (2,3,4) - NM这样不好吧 改成沒有overlap了
02:05:571 (3) - 歪了 √

EaSy不摸了


Hollow Wings

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

General

  1. finish your storyboard, there's too much elements' not used in your sb code. fixed
  2. currently there're two .osb file, remove one of them. fixed

Insane

  1. 00:50:206 (1) - part from here's hs' too quiet too be heard. larger hs volume here a bit. ok
  2. 00:58:986 (4) - i recommend you ctrl+g this to emphasis the special vocal beat at the end of the slider with anti flow. ok
  3. 01:00:449 (1,1) - remove nc, not necessary here even with inconsistent rhythm. ok
  4. generally fine to me. some patterns' detail style can be polished a lot thou, like 00:37:035 (7,8) - do you think the current version of these two sliders' structure is the best idea? same things to almost all stuffs in your map, you can scan your diff your self if you care. but rhythm's in good style imo. thanks you suggest

Normal

  1. too quiet the previous part of the song's hs volume is, larger them all. ok fixed
  2. 00:47:279 (1,2) - maybe blanket perfect (nazi fixed
  3. 01:03:742 (2,3,4) - ok, seems like you don't care blanket at all. sorry for this/.\
  4. in lower diffs i still recommend some regular structures, thou it's up to you.

Easy

  1. same hs volume problem as above. ok fixed
  2. and same words at last as above.
for your map's not finished yet, i will skip considering move it on.

you have one chance to poke me check this when you get your bubble. thx

good luck.


AIR

AIR wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:04:474 (2) - 这个位置比两边都轻点，建议提前红线 好
  2. 00:42:157 (2) - 建议后移红线 其實白線紅線都有音，但不能用1/2，所以白線上比較好按
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:108 (2,3) - 改了
    00:06:852 (2,3) - 类似不再提 改了
  2. 00:08:681 (1,2) - 00:10:693 (1,3) - 00:13:986 (1,4) - 00:16:547 (1,3) - 00:29:718 (1,4) - 交换nc，类似不再提，尽量在等拍数大白线或者节奏转换处比如00:38:498 (3) - 好的
[Insane]
  1. 00:35:754 - 此处建议断开 好
  2. 00:37:035 (7,8,1,2,3) - 参考Hard的摸 那個位置有鼓音的吧
  3. 美丽

Teichan
[Some personal comments]
  1. 转盘延长到 02:38:498 - 高難度可以吧，低難度就不要了
  2. 我真的很想禁了sliderslide, 太难听了 我的set裡面是靜音了呀
    神麻婆Teichan
Thx your modding!
update!
Toruta
147 posts
Joined October 2012
Toruta
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Toruta
147 posts
Joined October 2012
Toruta
抱歉有點晚了 我太懶了orz
雖然是菜mod不過還是開始吧 :)
[General]
排列很有你的風格? (不過我不太喜歡這種風格，個人覺得有點悶~_~hh
我覺得這樣放的話大致上也沒什麼大問題


[normal和easy]
玩過一次，感覺沒發現什麼 不會mod簡單難度orz


[Teichan's Hard]
00:05:389 考慮換成單點? (個人感覺聽起來舒服一點
00:06:852 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 感覺有更好的節奏可以下 可以試試這樣的 http://puu.sh/hfkBb/2d8556c482.jpg ? 或者其他的節奏？(我也不太懂



[Insane]
01:10:328 (2,3,4) - testplay的時候以為是連擊 按錯了 :? 或許可以把3個note的距離拉遠一點
00:56:791 可以考慮加音 http://puu.sh/hfm2G/3e9bd342bf.jpg :)

加油rank :)
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
KaedekaShizuru
等的我花儿都谢了
[Yuki]
diff name 可以改成Yuki's Yuki
00:12:157 (1) - 自身相交的slider貌似现在不允许了吧还是我记错了
00:54:230 (3) - 移动到X272 Y168 或者NC
01:34:840 - 空着挺难受虽然这里的确没音 试试这样？
http://puu.sh/hMSpF/c1549d7388.jpg

[Insane]
Test Play
落叶一生推啊最佳人妻prpr
00:44:352 (3,4) - 包好
00:46:364 (4) - CTRL+G
01:41:974 (1) - 尾巴上的NM-whistle删掉 感觉在头上加SC1的whistle比较好
01:42:340 - 加一个短滑条或者二连打 建议不要漏掉这里两个鼓点
01:45:084 (5) - 换成SC1的whistle 24CLAP足以
01:49:474 (3) - ↑
01:59:718 (4) - ↑
02:00:358 - 有音 建议和02:00:267组成短滑条
01:59:718 (4) - SC1whistle
KIAI里的鼓点没有必要那么密集 尤其是红线上的。保持24clap足够


[Teichan]
AR7→7.5 or 8
00:53:681 (2) - 删掉尾端的D-finish 在头上加SC1-whistle
00:56:608 (2) - ↑
00:59:535 (2) - ↑
01:02:645 (3) - 删掉头上的D-finish 在01:02:462 (2) - 加SC1-whistle
01:05:206 (5) - 头上whistle
01:05:571 (6) - 删掉头上的D-finish
01:35:206 (3,4) - 这个距离大丈夫吗？
02:20:571 (4) - 移动到X236 Y24

[Normal]
00:01:547 (2,3) - 包好
00:04:291 (3,4) - 保持在同一弧线上
00:07:218 (2,3) - ↑
00:09:779 (2,3) - 包好
00:55:693 (4,1) - 保持在同一弧线上
01:32:645 (3) - 突然改成跟vocal感觉很奇怪
01:36:120 (4) - 不要跟vocal 下同

[Easy]
有些地方压的点不舒服 比如
01:32:645 (3) - 跟鼓点应该在01:33:010 就结束的 然后在01:33:376 放一个circle这样不是很好么
02:03:376 (1,2) - 包好 低难度能blanket就blanket
和NM一样 部分有点要去跟vocal的倾向
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Kencho

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

等的我花儿都谢了

[Insane]
Test Play
落叶一生推啊最佳人妻prpr prpr
00:44:352 (3,4) - 包好 √
00:46:364 (4) - CTRL+G √
01:41:974 (1) - 尾巴上的NM-whistle删掉 感觉在头上加SC1的whistle比较好 √
01:42:340 - 加一个短滑条或者二连打 建议不要漏掉这里两个鼓点 √加了連打
01:45:084 (5) - 换成SC1的whistle 24CLAP足以 √
01:49:474 (3) - ↑ √
01:59:718 (4) - ↑ √
02:00:358 - 有音 建议和02:00:267组成短滑条 √不過這個擔心會不會容易出100
01:59:718 (4) - SC1whistle √
KIAI里的鼓点没有必要那么密集 尤其是红线上的。保持24clap足够 √刪了一堆紅NM

[Normal]
00:01:547 (2,3) - 包好 √
00:04:291 (3,4) - 保持在同一弧线上 √
00:07:218 (2,3) - ↑ √
00:09:779 (2,3) - 包好 √
00:55:693 (4,1) - 保持在同一弧线上 √
01:32:645 (3) - 突然改成跟vocal感觉很奇怪 √
01:36:120 (4) - 不要跟vocal 下同 √稍微改了一些地方

[Easy]
有些地方压的点不舒服 比如
01:32:645 (3) - 跟鼓点应该在01:33:010 就结束的 然后在01:33:376 放一个circle这样不是很好么 √
02:03:376 (1,2) - 包好 低难度能blanket就blanket √
和NM一样 部分有点要去跟vocal的倾向 √稍微改了一些地方
感謝摸圖 :)
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
[general]

AudioLeadIn: 0 → 1500 , 作用是額外提供1.5的準備時間，避免開頭太快玩家來不及反應

建議去掉letterbox , 因為你的BG上下都有內容，被黑掉會很難看

你的skin有些文件不合要求的大小比如sliderfollowcircle 應該用256*256，偶爾一兩個大概沒問題然而多了肯定不行。參考 t/97083

毫無存在感的故事版 = = 可以設置更多變化不單單是左右平移

offest 建議 -6 , 自從測了變速曲我整個人都自信了

建議做完後點reset 去掉過量的藍線

4/4建議四色

Tag 參考 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/277869

女主不是白髮弱嬌紅瞳蘿莉嗎 …… CG呢

[easy]

00:05:937 (4,1) - 因為這個地方之前有00:03:376 (1,2) - 了，所以建議往左上走避免overlap

02:15:084 (1,3) - ^

01:30:084 (3,2) - 圈疊滑條尾對新人是很難讀的梗

[normal]

0.75SV → 1.0 SV的變化對低難度來說過大，相當建議改成0.9-1.0

00:09:230 - 在重音的時候設置點擊，這同時也是你長白線下NC的位置，為什麼要放折返箭頭上呢

00:28:803 (5) - 和easy一樣，之前已經有物件佔用了這片區域，為了整潔應該往左走或者堆疊

00:36:852 (3,4) - 和上面一樣，這個單獨拿出來說是因為太嚴重了，不只是影響整潔而且影響讀圖 = =

01:20:937 (3,1) - ^

01:56:059 (3,1) - 01:59:352 (5) - 完全覆蓋的兩個滑條在Extra難度之前都是 unrankable。儘管間隔了兩個物件還是建議改掉

00:32:645 (1) - DS降到1.15了

00:44:901 (2,5) - 這種可以先ctrl+g堆疊好再ctrl+g變回來

[Teichan's Hard]

00:04:291 - 這裡應該設置點擊，你可能要參考Yuki's Insane 重做這部分的折返梗

00:13:437 (3) - 加NC更合適

00:22:218 (3) - ^

00:26:059 (1,2) -這種折返非常難讀難打，動不動就斷還沒pp。換成單折返聽上去的效果不會有什麼影響但是整潔舒適都能上一個檔次 → http://puu.sh/hNFuo/3d78fcf0c2.jpg

00:36:943 (5,1) - 大DS連打非常難，不管是什麼難度都不建議超過1.0DS，對於hard建議直接堆疊滑條尾

02:27:706 (2) - 這個太吵了……原曲是三連然後接別的了

[insane]

OD7沒pp啊，這年代有pp就是大爺，相信我 (＞﹏＜)

00:06:852 (2,3) - 00:08:315 (2,3) - 應該是1/2滑條接1/2折返

00:22:218 (1,2) - 三連打不要慫

00:30:998 (1) - 是我的話會採用不順手的排版或者放跳來強調紅線提琴 http://puu.sh/hNI5F/7b4eb0b19a.jpg

01:34:291 (2) - 我的話會去掉這個圈，前後換成一個1/1滑條，因為這裡沒有鼓點，人聲也是長音

01:01:547 (1) - 01:03:376 (1) - 01:06:669 (1) - 到底是人聲NC還是長白NC還是鋼琴NC呢……

02:00:449 (3) - 從音樂看這裡應該加NC，你可能需要參考Yuki's Insane 重擺這個跳梗

[Yuki's Insane]

4/4的曲目建議四色，或者加到8色 ??

00:12:157 (1) - 正圓弧比較符合一般人的審美吧

00:16:547 (1) - 這裡疊到00:16:181 (4) - 上面分開overlap會好看點

00:17:645 (3,1) - 人聲不是一組的，因而同向滑條並不適合

00:22:218 (1,2) - 三連打不要慫

00:37:858 (4) - 儘管8連打較常見，然而音樂是六連打-

00:38:132 (7) - 可以加NC

00:39:230 (3) - 應該是圈接1/2滑條，這一片建議的排版 http://puu.sh/hNJKN/148b702fd4.jpg

01:02:645 (3,4,1) - 這種複製對稱梗太多了，本身就是短圖可以考慮更多的樣式讓玩家覺得有新意

01:24:779 (2,3) - 比較明顯的音疊滑條尾好一點吧，方便玩家判斷打擊時間……overmap的話建議低DS擺旁邊

01:38:132 (4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 超長單點對一些玩家來說是噩夢……另外01:38:498 (1,1) - 的clap並不適合因為破壞了原曲遞進的關係，直到01:39:962 (1) - 之前建議混搭滑條

01:42:889 - 副歌太送了……SV，平均DS，節奏密度都沒有變化，相比之下主歌間奏有兩個長單點混串的梗反而難的多

02:17:645 (7) - 可以補個NC

02:29:352 (1) - 去掉NC

--------------------

難得寫這麼長早知道用英文了……

改完general 和低難度的unrankable 就可以去找BN啦，記住不要給HW送分，不要給HW送分

最重要的是白髮弱嬌蘿莉，是白髮弱嬌蘿莉
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Kencho

Narcissu wrote:

[general]

AudioLeadIn: 0 → 1500 , 作用是額外提供1.5的準備時間，避免開頭太快玩家來不及反應 √

建議去掉letterbox , 因為你的BG上下都有內容，被黑掉會很難看 √

你的skin有些文件不合要求的大小比如sliderfollowcircle 應該用256*256，偶爾一兩個大概沒問題然而多了肯定不行。參考 t/97083 我是借了OP的全套skin，OP也沒事所以應該沒什麼問題吧

毫無存在感的故事版 = = 可以設置更多變化不單單是左右平移 我嘗試加點效果吧=.=

offest 建議 -6 , 自從測了變速曲我整個人都自信了 √

建議做完後點reset 去掉過量的藍線 √

4/4建議四色 我覺得六色挺好的，多點變化=w=不影響rank就不改了

Tag 參考 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/277869 能加的都盡量加了

女主不是白髮弱嬌紅瞳蘿莉嗎 …… CG呢 原因在群裡解釋了=w=

[easy]

00:05:937 (4,1) - 因為這個地方之前有00:03:376 (1,2) - 了，所以建議往左上走避免overlap √

02:15:084 (1,3) - ^ √

01:30:084 (3,2) - 圈疊滑條尾對新人是很難讀的梗 √改了

[normal]

0.75SV → 1.0 SV的變化對低難度來說過大，相當建議改成0.9-1.0 好吧，我改成0.9了，然後又要重新排版了orz

00:09:230 - 在重音的時候設置點擊，這同時也是你長白線下NC的位置，為什麼要放折返箭頭上呢 √

00:28:803 (5) - 和easy一樣，之前已經有物件佔用了這片區域，為了整潔應該往左走或者堆疊 重新排版後已改善

00:36:852 (3,4) - 和上面一樣，這個單獨拿出來說是因為太嚴重了，不只是影響整潔而且影響讀圖 = = √

01:20:937 (3,1) - ^ √

01:56:059 (3,1) - 01:59:352 (5) - 完全覆蓋的兩個滑條在Extra難度之前都是 unrankable。儘管間隔了兩個物件還是建議改掉 √

00:32:645 (1) - DS降到1.15了 大概稍微改了一點位置沒注意到

00:44:901 (2,5) - 這種可以先ctrl+g堆疊好再ctrl+g變回來 √

整個圖我都重新擺了下，根本就像remap了一樣=.=
[insane]

OD7沒pp啊，這年代有pp就是大爺，相信我 (＞﹏＜) 雖然我也知道多pp，不過反正Yuki's Insane是7.5啦，真的不想再高了(＞﹏＜)

00:06:852 (2,3) - 00:08:315 (2,3) - 應該是1/2滑條接1/2折返 √改了

00:22:218 (1,2) - 三連打不要慫 還是慫了

00:30:998 (1) - 是我的話會採用不順手的排版或者放跳來強調紅線提琴 http://puu.sh/hNI5F/7b4eb0b19a.jpg √好

01:34:291 (2) - 我的話會去掉這個圈，前後換成一個1/1滑條，因為這裡沒有鼓點，人聲也是長音 √改了

01:01:547 (1) - 01:03:376 (1) - 01:06:669 (1) - 到底是人聲NC還是長白NC還是鋼琴NC呢…… 其實是排版NC……不過還是改成白線NC了

02:00:449 (3) - 從音樂看這裡應該加NC，你可能需要參考Yuki's Insane 重擺這個跳梗 對這個之前改了但忘了NC

總而言之排版也小修了一下
--------------------

難得寫這麼長早知道用英文了……

改完general 和低難度的unrankable 就可以去找BN啦，記住不要給HW送分，不要給HW送分 =.=

最重要的是白髮弱嬌蘿莉，是白髮弱嬌蘿莉 (＞﹏＜)抱歉ED1沒有，ED2肯定會有的
感謝摸圖 :)
Aeoka
21 posts
Joined September 2013
Aeoka
Hello.

I absolutely adored these maps, but I think the offset is a little off the mark. Try 460.
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
[Easy]
00:04:285 (2) - 我觉得这里应该用slider拉到下面那个长白线那里，现在放在easy有点坑
00:26:785 (1) - 节奏
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3160109
既然选择了节奏比较多的方法来map easy, 就别左miss一个节奏右miss一个节奏了...
00:30:809 (2) - 还是拉到这里比较好，现在你设置的节奏其实有点太复杂了对于easy来说
后面的同样的节奏类型我就不说了
首先你选择跟的背景音我觉得太轻了，所以并不适合放在easy里的红线节奏上
00:49:651 (3) - 节奏
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3160129
然后KIAI后面那段纯音乐和我前面说的应该是同一个节奏类型
然后我觉得你KIAI后面的那段处理的比前面的好

[Normal]
00:04:285 (3) - 用circle比较好
00:23:858 (1,1) - 太近了
00:37:029 (4,5,6) - 4跟的东西和5,6跟的东西不一样啊...建议4拉到00:37:395 (x) - 这里就好
00:46:541 (5) - 应该从这里开始
01:39:041 (5) - 我觉得拉到01:39:407 (x) - 就ok了
01:54:407 (6) - delete
01:58:431 (3) - 用circle比较好
01:59:163 (4) - 然后4放到这里
02:28:797 (4) - 用circle比较好

[Hard]
00:16:541 (1,2) - 这俩离得有点太远了
00:22:943 (4) - ctrl+g
01:35:383 (4,1) - 这俩中间才应该跳吧
02:14:712 (3,4) - 这个跳没有必要
02:20:931 (1,2,3) - 其实这种flow玩起来并不舒服...2应该要在1尾巴去的那个方向比较好

[Insane]
00:12:151 (3) - NC从这里开始
00:56:053 (1) - x92，y340
01:01:907 (1,3,4) - 覆盖好
01:11:236 (2,3) - ...怎么听都觉得好奇怪
01:13:614 (1,2,3,4,1) - 我的想法是这样的
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3160176
01:16:175 (3,1) - 这俩的间距再大一点
01:16:541 (1,2,3,4) - 和前面的节奏类型一样(楼上的楼上
01:22:943 (2) - ctrl+g
01:22:395 (1,2,1) - ...三个点可以搞掂的事干嘛要用5个点！
后面的slider也一样
01:41:968 (1) - 用circle比较好
01:42:883 (1,2,3) - 间距统一
02:18:004 (1,2) - flow明明是往↘的....干嘛要搞到↖..
02:29:712 (1) - ...这个spinner的长度能不能统一到normal和easy里

[Yuki's Insane]
00:09:224 (1,2,3) - 转换的很僵硬..
00:12:151 (1,2) - 00:18:370 (2,3) - 你要是能把这俩间距统一一下我就觉得ok
01:34:834 (x) - 空一格好奇怪

GL then
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