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BiBi - Natsu, Owaranai de.

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ZZHBOY
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年4月8日 at 20:17:04

Artist: BiBi
Title: Natsu, Owaranai de.
Source: ラブライブ! School idol project
Tags: μ's u's Cutie Panther Love Live Ayase Eli Nanjo Yoshino Nishikino Maki Pile Eriko Hori Yazawa Nico Tokui Sora
BPM: 140
Filesize: 6351kb
Play Time: 03:53
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.81 stars, 474 notes)
  2. Insane (3.98 stars, 814 notes)
  3. Normal (1.86 stars, 327 notes)
Download: BiBi - Natsu, Owaranai de.
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Last edited by ZZHBOY , edited 22 times in total.
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
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Mafumafu
打不过EX怎么办
ZZHBOY
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ZZHBOY

Regraz wrote:

打不过EX怎么办
你玩的日服?
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
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Mafumafu

ZZHBOY wrote:

Regraz wrote:

打不过EX怎么办
你玩的日服?
都有在玩，国服为主。 :)
Moecho
267 posts
Joined October 2014
Moecho
sofa
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
我觉得这个ex不难啊
ZZHBOY
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ZZHBOY

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

我觉得这个ex不难啊
他们说一个ex是固定的一个ex是随机生成的 我就把据说是固定的那个fc了另一个结尾似乎全是1/4乱跳 苦苦
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
哦草怎么又是长图
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
liangv587
zzb貌似更加的清爽可口了
[General]
背景图不换个大点的吗
音效声音偏小+20

[Insane]
00:07:254 (1) - 00:32:968 (1) - 00:39:825 (1) - finish
00:46:682 (1) - 01:00:397 (1) - 01:07:254 (1) - 01:08:968 (1) - 01:10:682 (1) - kiai的finish
01:14:111 (1) - 我觉得kiai应该到这里的，背景里面duang的那一声
01:26:111 (1) - 01:51:825 (1) - 01:58:682 (1) - finish
02:05:539 (1) - 02:19:254 (1) - 02:26:111 (1) - 02:27:825 (1) - 02:29:539 (1) - kiai的finish
02:53:539 (1) - 02:56:968 (1) -
03:03:825 (5) - 03:07:254 (1) -
03:17:539 (1) - 03:18:611 (1) - 03:19:039 (2) - 03:20:325 (4) - 03:20:968 (1) -
03:24:397 (1) - 03:27:825 (1) -
03:34:682 (1) - 03:41:539 (1) - 03:48:397 (1) - 差好多finish
00:08:754 (2) - 既然跟背景下clap，这种地方怎么漏了，00:12:182 - 好多，两小节出现一次
24线一直有吉他扫弦声，可以加whistle，每8小节最后一小节没有
03:05:539 (1,2) - 太远了，分不清是1/2还是1/4

[Hard]
ar8吓人吗
音效同insane
01:20:968 (1) - 建议连续3个1/1滑条
ZZHBOY
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ZZHBOY
587

liangv587 wrote:

zzb貌似更加的清爽可口了
[General]
背景图不换个大点的吗
音效声音偏小+20

[Insane]
00:07:254 (1) - 00:32:968 (1) - 00:39:825 (1) - finish
00:46:682 (1) - 01:00:397 (1) - 01:07:254 (1) - 01:08:968 (1) - 01:10:682 (1) - kiai的finish
01:14:111 (1) - 我觉得kiai应该到这里的，背景里面duang的那一声
01:26:111 (1) - 01:51:825 (1) - 01:58:682 (1) - finish
02:05:539 (1) - 02:19:254 (1) - 02:26:111 (1) - 02:27:825 (1) - 02:29:539 (1) - kiai的finish
02:53:539 (1) - 02:56:968 (1) -
03:03:825 (5) - 03:07:254 (1) -
03:17:539 (1) - 03:18:611 (1) - 03:19:039 (2) - 03:20:325 (4) - 03:20:968 (1) -
03:24:397 (1) - 03:27:825 (1) -
03:34:682 (1) - 03:41:539 (1) - 03:48:397 (1) - 差好多finish
00:08:754 (2) - 既然跟背景下clap，这种地方怎么漏了，00:12:182 - 好多，两小节出现一次加毛 我无脑3clap的
24线一直有吉他扫弦声，可以加whistle，每8小节最后一小节没有
03:05:539 (1,2) - 太远了，分不清是1/2还是1/4好

[Hard]
ar8吓人吗
音效同insane
01:20:968 (1) - 建议连续3个1/1滑条有道理
thx for mod
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
这BG，又丑，又有人用过，又NSFW，快快换了

[Normal]

  • none

[Hard]

  • none

[Insane]
  1. 00:18:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里不是渐变间距嘛，所以00:19:254 (3,4) - 变大间距，00:20:325 (8,9) - 一样(这个好像没那么重音
  2. 00:32:861 (5) - snap错了，音在1/6，放1/6不友好，建议删掉
  3. 00:43:254 (9) - NC?
  4. 00:49:575 (4,7) - 1/6
  5. 00:56:861 (8) - ^ 靠我好懒...不想一个个听了，不会是我听错了吧...后面请再check一下
  6. 01:07:254 (1) - finish？
  7. 01:08:968 (1) - ^
  8. 01:21:611 (4,1,6) - 都finish？
  9. 01:31:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - 强迫症http://puu.sh/gE9eI/f4b4e93b9e.jpg
  10. 01:51:825 (1) - finish
  11. 01:58:682 (1) - ^
  12. 02:19:254 (1) - ^
  13. 02:26:968 (4) - ^ 额，既然是故意的我也不想说了，就当凑条数了
  14. 03:20:861 (5,1) - ??为什么只有这个1/4是这样的，太突兀了，跟前面一样overlap吧

好晚啊，NH可不可以不摸啊，射个星给你 :)
ZZHBOY
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Topic Starter
ZZHBOY
Kagamine Ren

Kagamine Ren wrote:

这BG，又丑，又有人用过，又NSFW，快快换了

[Normal]

  • none

[Hard]

  • none

[Insane]
  1. 00:18:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里不是渐变间距嘛，所以00:19:254 (3,4) - 变大间距，00:20:325 (8,9) - 一样(这个好像没那么重音
  2. 00:32:861 (5) - snap错了，音在1/6，放1/6不友好，建议删掉
  3. 00:43:254 (9) - NC?
  4. 00:49:575 (4,7) - 1/6
  5. 00:56:861 (8) - ^ 靠我好懒...不想一个个听了，不会是我听错了吧...后面请再check一下
  6. 01:07:254 (1) - finish？
  7. 01:08:968 (1) - ^
  8. 01:21:611 (4,1,6) - 都finish？
  9. 01:31:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - 强迫症http://puu.sh/gE9eI/f4b4e93b9e.jpg
  10. 01:51:825 (1) - finish
  11. 01:58:682 (1) - ^
  12. 02:19:254 (1) - ^
  13. 02:26:968 (4) - ^ 额，既然是故意的我也不想说了，就当凑条数了
  14. 03:20:861 (5,1) - ??为什么只有这个1/4是这样的，太突兀了，跟前面一样overlap吧

好晚啊，NH可不可以不摸啊，射个星给你 :)

fixed some, thx for mod :3
JJburstOwO
183 posts
Joined July 2012
JJburstOwO
随便写点~
[Insane]
00:39:397 (7) - 角度抬高点
02:11:968 (5) - 放这里有点突兀，还是用弯的吧，后边间奏的还不错
03:22:897 (2,3) - 三连？这边三连比较多 统一一下

00:15:611 (5) - drum
00:29:111 (6) - 这几个都是小节开头前一根红线，我不知道要不要clap，听上去和你加clap的地方一样
00:34:254 (4) - 全程都有，问问别人好了-L-
00:37:682 (4) -
00:41:111 (4) -

不会摸图，我先跑了ε = = (づ′▽`)づ
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

JJburstOwO wrote:

随便写点~
[Insane]
00:39:397 (7) - 角度抬高点
02:11:968 (5) - 放这里有点突兀，还是用弯的吧，后边间奏的还不错
03:22:897 (2,3) - 三连？这边三连比较多 统一一下

00:15:611 (5) - drum
00:29:111 (6) - 这几个都是小节开头前一根红线，我不知道要不要clap，听上去和你加clap的地方一样
00:34:254 (4) - 全程都有，问问别人好了-L-
00:37:682 (4) -
00:41:111 (4) -

不会摸图，我先跑了ε = = (づ′▽`)づ
fixed some, thx for mod
Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Lavender
看我速水一发

[insane]
  1. 我也觉得bg不好看
  2. kiai的sv不变吗，我觉得可以1.2x左右
  3. 00:08:111 (1,2,3) - 3向左下移一些，这样不太美观
  4. 00:11:539 (3,1) - 没有规律的overlap就是乱，感觉还不如stack。
  5. 00:13:897 - 这里空的没有理由啊，vocal依然有
  6. 01:06:397 (1,1,3) - 看起来不好，建议把两个单点stack了
  7. 01:13:254 (7,8,9,10) - 个人比较讨厌把三连强行拆成一个note和一个slider
  8. 01:11:111 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这一段整体，我建议break保留spinner，或者取消spinner然后map那段，现在这样感觉有点不伦不类
  9. 01:28:254 (2,3,4) - flow很不舒服
  10. 01:32:325 - 这个也是漏得莫名
  11. 01:35:325 (2,3,4) - flow
  12. 01:37:897 (1) - 听了听，音乐1/2都没有，这里强行塞1/4，overmap得有点严重
  13. 01:49:897 (9) - ^这里虽然有1/2，但是仍然是overmap
  14. 02:01:468 (5) - 用1/2折返滑条切vocal
  15. 02:11:968 (5) - 02:34:254 (8) - 这滑条不仅难看，打起来也不太顺，然而我也不会slider art，还是不书话了
  16. 03:48:182 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - 比较的反人类
我怎么感觉像是随手做的，并没有看出什么规划
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Shad0w1and
Insane

00:10:575 (6) - 删
00:31:897 (2) - 重叠到3上
or 00:31:254 (1,2) - 加绿线换成慢速滑条
00:53:539 (1) - 滑条结尾对于2、3没有等分感觉别扭，而且之前的DS是1.4这里却是1.5
00:59:968 (7) - 倾向于加绿线弄尾部静音滑条。vocal拖长音在一分拍内我都会做成滑条 |跟乐器就算了
01:19:468 (1) - 希望做出来
01:54:397 (4,5) - 突兀，建议01:54:397 (4,5,6,7) - 两个一组，固定DS 1.5
02:25:897 (7,8,1,2,3,4) -
SPOILER

03:02:968 (2) - x248y136，能同时与两组元素组成两个正三角为何不


其他难度放这么工整:/
没有什么问题。
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY
taichan

[Teichan] wrote:

看我速水一发

[insane]
  1. 我也觉得bg不好看
  2. kiai的sv不变吗，我觉得可以1.2x左右
  3. 00:08:111 (1,2,3) - 3向左下移一些，这样不太美观
  4. 00:11:539 (3,1) - 没有规律的overlap就是乱，感觉还不如stack。
  5. 00:13:897 - 这里空的没有理由啊，vocal依然有
  6. 01:06:397 (1,1,3) - 看起来不好，建议把两个单点stack了
  7. 01:13:254 (7,8,9,10) - 个人比较讨厌把三连强行拆成一个note和一个slider
  8. 01:11:111 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这一段整体，我建议break保留spinner，或者取消spinner然后map那段，现在这样感觉有点不伦不类
  9. 01:28:254 (2,3,4) - flow很不舒服
  10. 01:32:325 - 这个也是漏得莫名
  11. 01:35:325 (2,3,4) - flow
  12. 01:37:897 (1) - 听了听，音乐1/2都没有，这里强行塞1/4，overmap得有点严重我节奏下错了 这里是1/6
  13. 01:49:897 (9) - ^这里虽然有1/2，但是仍然是overmap
  14. 02:01:468 (5) - 用1/2折返滑条切vocal
  15. 02:11:968 (5) - 02:34:254 (8) - 这滑条不仅难看，打起来也不太顺，然而我也不会slider art，还是不书话了
  16. 03:48:182 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - 比较的反人类
我怎么感觉像是随手做的，并没有看出什么规划
Shad0w1and

Shad0w1and wrote:

Insane

00:10:575 (6) - 删
00:31:897 (2) - 重叠到3上
or 00:31:254 (1,2) - 加绿线换成慢速滑条
00:53:539 (1) - 滑条结尾对于2、3没有等分感觉别扭，而且之前的DS是1.4这里却是1.5
00:59:968 (7) - 倾向于加绿线弄尾部静音滑条。vocal拖长音在一分拍内我都会做成滑条 |跟乐器就算了
01:19:468 (1) - 希望做出来
01:54:397 (4,5) - 突兀，建议01:54:397 (4,5,6,7) - 两个一组，固定DS 1.5
02:25:897 (7,8,1,2,3,4) -
SPOILER

03:02:968 (2) - x248y136，能同时与两组元素组成两个正三角为何不


其他难度放这么工整:/
没有什么问题。
fixed some, thx for mod
zyoi
631 posts
Joined May 2014
zyoi
BG怎麼有點不對/.\
ZZHBOY
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Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

- E n j u - wrote:

BG怎麼有點不對/.\
其实并没有不对 这张图就是这歌所属专辑的图.-.
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
ok

SPOILER
2015-04-02 22:33 xxdeathx: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/661710 BiBi - Natsu, Owaranai de. [Insane]]
2015-04-02 22:33 xxdeathx: 03:26:978 (3,4) - this rhythm is weird
2015-04-02 22:33 xxdeathx: this 03:27:192 - is being ignored
2015-04-02 22:35 ZZHBOY: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2966579 added a circle
2015-04-02 22:35 xxdeathx: ok
2015-04-02 22:36 xxdeathx: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/659115 BiBi - Natsu, Owaranai de. [Hard]]
2015-04-02 22:36 xxdeathx: 00:27:835 (1,2) - is this a mistake?
2015-04-02 22:36 xxdeathx: 00:34:692 (1,2) -
2015-04-02 22:36 xxdeathx: 00:41:549 (1,2) -
2015-04-02 22:37 ZZHBOY: damn
2015-04-02 22:37 ZZHBOY: maybe bug happened when i changed the offset
2015-04-02 22:39 ZZHBOY: fixed all and submitting
2015-04-02 22:39 ZZHBOY: done
2015-04-02 22:42 xxdeathx: hmm
2015-04-02 22:42 xxdeathx: i wonder if spinner ends too early 02:58:692 (1) -
2015-04-02 22:42 xxdeathx: the vocal sounds like it's on 03:00:460 -
2015-04-02 22:42 xxdeathx: idk
2015-04-02 22:43 xxdeathx: nvm
2015-04-02 22:43 xxdeathx: ok it sounds on 03:00:442 -
2015-04-02 22:44 ZZHBOY: in fact i think it should be stopped at 03:00:353 -
2015-04-02 22:44 ZZHBOY: i wanna stop the spinner with the end of the sound "o"
2015-04-02 22:45 xxdeathx: idk
2015-04-02 22:46 ZZHBOY: i think this spinner has no problemm..
2015-04-02 22:47 xxdeathx: ok, just leave spinner at 03:00:407 -
2015-04-02 22:47 ZZHBOY: i also think so
2015-04-02 22:51 xxdeathx: oh one important thing
2015-04-02 22:51 xxdeathx: i think bpm is 60
2015-04-02 22:51 xxdeathx: 70
2015-04-02 22:51 ZZHBOY: ......
2015-04-02 22:53 ZZHBOY: it's 140
2015-04-02 22:53 xxdeathx: ..... it's 70 imo
2015-04-02 22:53 ZZHBOY: for 1/4 beat and clap
2015-04-02 22:53 ZZHBOY: it's 140.....
2015-04-02 22:54 xxdeathx: the clap pattern is 70
2015-04-02 22:54 ZZHBOY: even double bpm is fine now...
2015-04-02 22:54 xxdeathx: i don't think doubling the bpm is allowed
2015-04-02 22:55 ZZHBOY: em.....
2015-04-02 22:55 ZZHBOY: i will take time to ask some qat for some suggestions....
2015-04-02 22:55 ZZHBOY: QAQ
2015-04-02 22:55 ZZHBOY: it's time for me to go to class ;w;
2015-04-02 22:55 xxdeathx: i don't want to bother kwan, but i'm quite sure it's 70
2015-04-02 22:55 ZZHBOY: em.....
2015-04-02 22:56 ZZHBOY: i will ask her to confirm bpm after class..
2015-04-02 22:56 xxdeathx: ok..
2015-04-02 22:56 ZZHBOY: see you later x..x
2015-04-03 03:01 ZZHBOY: hi xx.......i asked desp-kun and asphyxia for the bpm of that map they said both 70 and 140 are fine
2015-04-03 03:01 ZZHBOY: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2967102

to next BN: pay attention to the spinner 02:58:692 (1) - i think the end 03:00:407 is a little too early compared to vocals, but it shouldn't be a big issue
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