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KOTOKO - INFINITE SKY [Taiko]

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BlackHairEND
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年5月13日 at 11:17:33

Artist: KOTOKO
Title: INFINITE SKY
Source: 蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags: sprite eroge visual novel second opening ao no kanata no four rhythm Beyond the sky into the firmament preference JUDYDANNY
BPM: 190
Filesize: 2779kb
Play Time: 01:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.04 stars, 186 notes)
  2. JuDa's Oni (4.02 stars, 501 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.42 stars, 93 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2.76 stars, 344 notes)
  5. Oni (3.8 stars, 527 notes)
Download: KOTOKO - INFINITE SKY
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd Ranked Beatmaps!

少女たちが空を駆け、恋をする物語。

蒼の彼方のフォーリズム 2nd OP INFINITE SKY
Kantan - Done. by me.
Futsuu - Done. by me.
Muzukashii - Done. by me.
JuDa's Oni - Done. by JUDYDANNY.
Oni - Done. by me.


toara_fict
tenga0216たちが空を駆け、恋をする物語。
JUDYDANNY

toara_fict wrote:

tenga0216たちが空を駆け、恋をする物語。
JUDYDANNY
IRC Moded.
Kantan & Futsuu.
toara_fict
IRCってやつ ( in TS3 )
03:54 *BlackHairEND is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/84254 Hikasa Youko - SUPER STREAM (TV Size)]

3/17

23:17 *toara_fict is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/662213 KOTOKO - INFINITE SKY [Kantan]]

23:18 toara_fict: 00:30:602 (25,26) - delete. ( 00:18:602 (12) - ~ 00:21:128 (13) - / 00:28:707 (22) - ~ 00:31:233 (27) - )
23:19 toara_fict: 00:29:339 (23) - -> 00:30:602 (24) -
23:21 toara_fict: 00:29:339 (23) - 00:30:918 (26) - 00:31:865 (28) -
23:21 toara_fict: http://puu.sh/gE4EQ/47ecaf8cd6.jpg
23:21 toara_fict: 00:28:707 (22) - ~ 00:33:760 (29) -
23:22 toara_fict: 00:33:444 (28) - delete
23:22 toara_fict: 00:33:128 (27) - change k
23:24 toara_fict: 00:35:970 (32) - 00:37:233 (34) - 00:38:496 (37) - delete
23:24 toara_fict: 00:38:812 (38,39,40) -
23:26 toara_fict: 00:44:496 (47,48) - / 00:47:339 (51,52) -
23:28 toara_fict: 00:49:865 (57) - 00:52:391 (62) - delete ?
23:28 toara_fict: 00:53:970 (64) - ~ 00:59:023 (76) - Futsuu並
23:30 toara_fict: 00:57:444 (69) -  -> 00:57:128 (69) - move
23:32 toara_fict: 01:07:233 (88) - Finish
23:32 toara_fict: Vo _
23:32 toara_fict: ?
23:32 toara_fict: 01:09:128 (91) -
23:32 toara_fict: ^
23:33 toara_fict: 00:59:023 (73) - same as well
23:34 BlackHairEND: 00:59:023 -
23:34 toara_fict: 01:09:128 (91) -
23:35 BlackHairEND: 01:19:233 (101,102,103,104,105,106) -
23:35 toara_fict: 01:14:181 (99,100,101) -
23:35 toara_fict: 01:20:654 (108) - delete
23:35 toara_fict: 01:21:128 (108) -
23:35 toara_fict: delete finish
23:36 toara_fict: 01:19:233 (105,106,107) -
23:36 toara_fict: 01:21:760 (109) -
23:38 toara_fict: 01:20:654 (108) -
23:38 BlackHairEND: 01:20:654 -
23:38 toara_fict: http://puu.sh/gE5t4/3899a20710.jpg
23:39 toara_fict: 01:21:128 (108) -
23:39 toara_fict: 01:21:760 (109) - 強調するため
23:41 toara_fict: 01:29:970 (119) -  でぇて
23:41 toara_fict: *Delete
23:41 toara_fict: 01:24:286 (111,112) - 01:29:338 (118,119,120) -
23:43 toara_fict: 01:29:970 (119) - ここがいらない
23:44 BlackHairEND: 01:30:918 -
23:44 toara_fict: 01:26:022 (113) -  Change k. follow back sounds. ( same as Muzu Oni )
23:44 toara_fict: 01:30:601 (120) -
23:44 toara_fict: 01:29:970 (119) -
23:45 toara_fict: 01:29:338 (118) - d 01:30:601 (120) - k 01:31:075 (121) - k
23:46 BlackHairEND: http://gyazo.com/bea4856247ba93566fea4b61c2217dc4


3/21

09:42 toara_fict: 00:25:233 (18) - Delete ?
09:43 toara_fict: 00:28:075 (21) - Delete ?
09:43 toara_fict: 00:34:391 (29) - ^
09:43 toara_fict: 00:38:181 (33) - ^
09:44 toara_fict: 00:40:865 (37) - ^
09:44 toara_fict: 00:42:286 (39) - ^
09:45 toara_fict: 00:43:233 (41) - ^( same 00:38:181 (33) - )
09:45 toara_fict: 00:45:918 (45) - 00:47:339 (47) -
09:45 BlackHairEND: 100:38:812 (30) -
09:46 toara_fict: 00:47:654 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) -
09:46 toara_fict: 00:48:602 (50) -
09:46 toara_fict: 00:49:549 (52) -
09:46 toara_fict: 00:51:128 (55) - 00:52:075 (57) -
09:46 toara_fict: 00:53:654 (59) - 00:56:181 (63) -
09:47 toara_fict: 00:58:707 (67) -
09:47 toara_fict: 01:06:286 (81) -
09:47 toara_fict: む↑つ↓ば→
09:48 toara_fict: つ↓ Delete
09:48 toara_fict: 01:14:654 (95) - 01:17:181 (98) - 01:19:707 (101) -
09:49 toara_fict: 01:27:759 (110) -

09:54 *toara_fict is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/662213 KOTOKO - INFINITE SKY [Futsuu]]

09:54 toara_fict: 00:59:970 - 01:09:444 - add k
09:55 BlackHairEND: 01:07:233 -
09:56 toara_fict: 01:08:181 - add d
09:57 BlackHairEND: 01:13:233 -
09:58 toara_fict: 01:12:128 (127) -
09:59 toara_fict: 01:11:339 (126) - add k
10:02 toara_fict: 01:04:391 (111) - add k
10:04 toara_fict:
10:04 toara_fict: 00:11:023 (15) - add d
10:05 toara_fict: 00:35:970 (56) - move 00:35:654 (56) - & change k
10:06 toara_fict: 00:35:023 (55) - change k
10:06 toara_fict: 00:34:391 (54) - change d]
10:06 toara_fict: この2つはKantanも
10:09 toara_fict: 00:33:760 (53) - d 00:34:391 (54) - k 00:35:023 (55) - d 00:35:654 (56) - k 00:36:286 (57) - K
10:10 toara_fict: Kantan: Change d 00:35:023 (27) -
10:12 toara_fict: 00:42:286 (67) - move 00:41:970 (67) -
10:14 toara_fict: 00:47:023 (76) - add k
10:14 toara_fict: 00:48:602 (80) - change k
10:15 toara_fict: 00:49:865 (83) - delete
10:16 toara_fict: 00:53:181 - add k
10:17 BlackHairEND: 00:53:654 -
10:19 toara_fict: 00:14:496 (21) - change k 00:14:812 (21) - add d]
10:19 toara_fict: 00:15:444 (22,23) - ^
10:19 toara_fict: 00:17:339 (26) - add d
10:21 toara_fict: 00:35:970 (58) - add d
Apl_old_1
Mod Request from PM by BlackHairEND

Kantan
00:02:181 - add a o
00:07:233 - add a o
↓move↓
00:39:128 o → 00:38:812
00:44:181 o → 00:43:865

Futsuu
00:01:549 - add a o
01:00:760 - change a oo
01:03:128 - change a oo
01:08:181 - change a oo
01:10:707 - change a oo

Muzukashii
00:48:918 - change a oo
00:49:233 - change a oo
00:49:549 - change a oo
↓delete↓
01:05:181 o
01:11:812 o

;)
Renka

toara_fict wrote:

tenga0216たちが空を駆け、恋をする物語。
Topic Starter
BlackHairEND

kiicha wrote:

Mod Request from PM by BlackHairEND

Kantan
00:02:181 - add a o
00:07:233 - add a o
ここの部分は音取りとしてありだと思うのですが、最初の部分は静かな印象があるので悩ましいところです…。 この二つは保留にします。

↓move↓
00:39:128 o → 00:38:812 ok!
00:44:181 o → 00:43:865 ok!

Futsuu
00:01:549 - add a o ok!
01:00:760 - change a oo ok!
01:03:128 - change a oo ok!
01:08:181 - change a oo ok!
01:11:123 - change a oo ok!

Muzukashii
00:48:918 - change a oo ok!
00:49:233 - change a oo ok!
00:49:549 - change a oo No change. ここはdddのパターンが一番良いとおもうのでこのままで。
↓delete↓
01:05:181 o  ok!
01:11:812 o  ok!

;)

Thanks Mod!! :)
Mame ga nyaa
Rankedがんばって (o´∀`o)ノ ☆
Renka
こんにちは!ゲーム内っチャットから


かんたん
00:05:339 - add d  
00:07:233 - ^
00:16:707 - add k
01:30:602 - add d
ノーツ数が少ないとおもうので少し追加してもいいかと思います

ふつう
00:56:496 ~ 00:57:760にすっぴなーを移動
01:06:602 - change d
01:15:760 - add d
01:16:075 - ^
01:18:286 - add k
01:18:602 - ^
01:21:128 - change D こっちの方があっていると思います

むずかしい
00:44:181- add D あった方がしっくりくるとおもう
00:52:865 - delete
00:58:865 - change k kkkの方がしっくりくるとおもう
00:59:496 - delete
01:00:444 - ^
01:21:128 - ふつうとおなじ
01:22:549 - change d dddの方がしっくりくるとおもう

おに
01:21:128 - むずかしいとおなじ

以上です~ ランクド頑張ってください!
tina71129
Hi~ Mod request by BlackHairEND

Muzukashii
00:02:970 (7) - d
00:05:654 (18,19) - Ctrl+G
00:06:917 (21,22) - d
01:35:654 - add spinner

Oni
00:27:444 (134) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2991666
01:35:654 - ^ Muzukashii

JuDa's Oni
00:09:760 (4) - d?
00:28:707 (11) - D

Good Luck! :D
Topic Starter
BlackHairEND

chaica wrote:

こんにちは!ゲーム内っチャットから


かんたん
00:05:339 - add d  ok!
00:07:233 - ^ ok!
00:16:707 - add k No change ここは後ろのバイオリンにあわせておいてるのでこのままで。
01:30:602 - add d ok!
ノーツ数が少ないとおもうので少し追加してもいいかと思います

ふつう
00:56:496 ~ 00:57:760にすっぴなーを移動 ok!
01:06:602 - change d ok!
01:15:760 - add d  Nichange  ここの大音符のあとにd もしくはkをいれるのは難しいと判断したためいれません。
01:16:075 - ^ 上と同じ理由です。
01:18:286 - add k  こちらも同じですね。
01:18:602 - ^  上と同じです。
01:21:128 - change D こっちの方があっていると思います ok!

むずかしい
00:44:181- add D あった方がしっくりくるとおもう ok!
00:52:865 - delete ok!
00:58:865 - change k kkkの方がしっくりくるとおもう ok!
00:59:496 - delete ok!
01:00:444 - ^ ok!
01:21:128 - ふつうとおなじ ok!
01:22:549 - change d dddの方がしっくりくるとおもう ok!

おに
01:21:128 - むずかしいとおなじ ok!


以上です~ ランクド頑張ってください!
Thanks mod! :)
Topic Starter
BlackHairEND

-Eternal Love- wrote:

Hi~ Mod request by BlackHairEND

Muzukashii
00:02:970 (7) - d No change.
00:05:654 (18,19) - Ctrl+G ok!
00:06:917 (21,22) - d ok!
01:35:654 - add spinner No change.

Oni
00:27:444 (134) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2991666 ok!
01:35:654 - ^ Muzukashii Sorry.. No change.

Good Luck! :D
Thanks mod! :)
rew0825
Hi from PM request :)

[ Kantan]
notes
  1. change HP/OD to 4/3
  2. 00:36:286 (24) - change to D ? follow melody
  3. 00:48:918 (37) - change to k ? i think it's high sound
  4. 01:14:181 (23,24,25,26) - change (23,24) to D , change (25,26) to K ? look will be better sound

[ Futsuu]
notes
  1. change HP/OD to 4/4
  2. 00:29:654 (49) - change to k ? follow melody
  3. 01:14:181 (38,39,40,41,42,43) - change (38,39,40) to D , change (41,42,43) to K ? look will be better sound

[ Muzukashii]
notes
  1. 00:03:286 (8) - move to 00:03:128 ? look will be better sound
  2. 00:55:391 (199) - change to k ? follow melody
  3. 00:55:707 (200) - change to d ? follow melody
  4. 01:14:023 (293) - change to k ? , 01:14:181 (294,295,296) - change to D ? look will be better sound
  5. 01:16:707 (301,302,303) - change to K ? look will be better sound
  6. 01:26:654 (330) - move to 01:26:496 ? look will be better sound

[ Oni]
delete notes
  1. 00:14:812 (59,67,75) - Delete ? look will be better sound and it's have break 'w'
  2. 00:58:785 (328,329) - Delete ? some break
notes
  1. 00:27:760 (137) - change to k ? i think it's high sound
  2. 01:14:023 (293) - change to k? , 01:14:181 (294,295,296) - change to D ? look will be better sound
  3. 01:16:707 (301,302,303) - change to K ? look will be better sound

[ JuDa's Oni]
notes
  1. 00:44:181 (1) - change to D ? follow melody
  2. 00:58:865 (11) - Delete ? for some break
  3. 01:16:707 (1,2,1) - change to K K D ? look will be better sound

Good luck :)
OzzyOzrock
Hi! :D

[Stuff ;w;]
BGはちょっと小さいです(800x600)!1366x768はよい!

[Juda's Oni]
00:01:233 (1) - katu? because you also do it here 00:06:286 (15) :)
00:06:918 (18,19,1) - k k instead?
00:08:023 (4) - don to match music?
00:09:760 (4) - don?
00:13:865 (2,3) - k d?
00:38:181 (11,12,13,14,15) - (ddk k d)?
00:43:865 (27) - don feels better for big kat after
01:12:918 (79,80,81,82,83) - (kkd d k)?
01:24:601 (3) - same as the first change ^^^
01:34:864 (50) - d?

nice diff
[Oni]
00:38:812 (207) - no finish?
00:43:549 (234,235,236) - k k d?
01:08:733 - don here?
01:09:286 - note here? (there is singing here)
01:12:918 (430,431,432,433,434) - (ddd k d)?
01:35:181 (531) - K?

gj!
[Muzukashii]
00:05:970 (19,20,21,22) - make same as first one? (d k k k)?

i think it's good!
[Fuutsu]
よいだ!

[Kantan]
これも!

よいマップだともいます!good luck!
If you want to mod for mod, you can do this one https://osu.ppy.sh/s/96115 ありがとう! (。´∀`)ノ
Topic Starter
BlackHairEND

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from PM request :)

[ Kantan]
notes
  1. change HP/OD to 4/3 ok!
  2. 00:36:286 (24) - change to D ? follow melody ok!
  3. 00:48:918 (37) - change to k ? i think it's high sound ok!
  4. 01:14:181 (23,24,25,26) - change (23,24) to D , change (25,26) to K ? look will be better sound
No change.

[ Futsuu]
notes
  1. change HP/OD to 4/4 ok!
  2. 00:29:654 (49) - change to k ? follow melody ok!
  3. 01:14:181 (38,39,40,41,42,43) - change (38,39,40) to D , change (41,42,43) to K ? look will be better sound
No change.

[ Muzukashii]
notes
  1. 00:03:286 (8) - move to 00:03:128 ? look will be better sound ok!
  2. 00:55:391 (199) - change to k ? follow melody ok!
  3. 00:55:707 (200) - change to d ? follow melody ok!
  4. 01:14:023 (293) - change to k ? , 01:14:181 (294,295,296) - change to D ? look will be better sound
  5. 01:16:707 (301,302,303) - change to K ? look will be better sound umm... No change. sorry ;w;
  6. 01:26:654 (330) - move to 01:26:496 ? look will be better sound

[ Oni]
delete notes
  1. 00:14:812 (59,67,75) - Delete ? look will be better sound and it's have break 'w' No change.
  2. 00:58:785 (328,329) - Delete ? some break No change.
notes
  1. 00:27:760 (137) - change to k ? i think it's high sound ok!
  2. 01:14:023 (293) - change to k? , 01:14:181 (294,295,296) - change to D ? look will be better sound No change.
  3. 01:16:707 (301,302,303) - change to K ? look will be better sound No change.

Good luck :)
JUDYDANNY

-Eternal Love- wrote:

[JuDa's Oni]00:09:760 (4) - d? :arrow: bass sounds 00:08:496 (1) - ,00:11:023 (1) - . but 00:09:760 (4) - doesnt .
00:28:707 (11) - D :arrow: uuumm,,,,,keep ;;

rew0825 wrote:

[ JuDa's Oni]notes
  1. 00:44:181 (1) - change to D ? follow melody :arrow: D doesnt change. but changed some.
  2. 00:58:865 (11) - Delete ? for some break :arrow: sounds hit to clear. it needs to put this for kiai.
  3. 01:16:707 (1,2,1) - change to K K D ? look will be better sound :arrow: I don't think so, invert the colors weird for pure sounds.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Juda's Oni]
00:01:233 (1) - katu? because you also do it here 00:06:286 (15) :)
:arrow: emotional variation for back sounds. 1st dddkk used is make a little emphashized to bass piano, 2nd ddkkk is emphaseized to sounds up on the my emotion.
00:06:918 (18,19,1) - k k instead?
:arrow: 00:05:812 (11,12,13) - linked to this triplet 1/4 kkd. phrased to decrease the power of the vocal.
00:08:023 (4) - don to match music? :arrow: fixed.
00:09:760 (4) - don? :arrow: bass sounds 00:08:496 (1) - ,00:11:023 (1) - . but 00:09:760 (4) - doesnt .
00:13:865 (2,3) - k d? :arrow: fixed, i guess its better to make a consistent with the patterns.
00:38:181 (11,12,13,14,15) - (ddk k d)? :arrow: fixed, phrased more things that sound to get weak.
00:43:865 (27) - don feels better for big kat after :arrow: changed some.
01:12:918 (79,80,81,82,83) - (kkd d k)? :arrow: ups, changed some lol
01:24:601 (3) - same as the first change ^^^ :arrow: same.
01:34:864 (50) - d? :arrow: fixed.

niice dff :arrow: thx :)
Thanks for mods! :) :)

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TitleUnicode:INFINITE SKY
Artist:KOTOKO
ArtistUnicode:KOTOKO
Creator:BlackHairEND
Version:JuDa's Oni
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム 2nd OP
Tags:sprite ao no kanata no four rhythm JUDYDANNY
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192,0,72286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,72444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,72602,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,72760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,72918,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,73075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,73154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,73233,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,73391,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,73707,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,73865,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,73944,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,74023,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,74181,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,32,74654,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,32,75128,5,6,0:0:0:0:
192,32,75602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,75760,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,76075,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,76154,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,76233,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,76312,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,76391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,76470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,76549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,76707,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,32,77181,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,32,77654,5,6,0:0:0:0:
192,32,77970,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,78049,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,78128,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,78207,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,78286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,78365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,78444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,78602,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,78760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,78918,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,78996,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,79075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,79233,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,32,79707,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,32,80181,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,32,80654,1,6,0:0:0:0:
192,32,81128,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,32,81444,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,32,81760,5,6,0:0:0:0:
192,32,82075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,82233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,82391,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,82549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,82707,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,82786,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,82865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,83023,5,6,0:0:0:0:
192,32,83181,1,6,0:0:0:0:
224,192,84286,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,84443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,84601,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,84759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,192,84917,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,192,85233,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,192,85549,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,192,85864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,86022,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,160,86338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,160,86496,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,160,86654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,86970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,87128,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,128,87286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,87601,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,87759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,128,87918,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,88391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,88549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88707,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,128,88865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,89180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89338,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,89496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,89654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,128,89812,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,128,89970,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,128,90286,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,128,90601,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,128,90917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,128,91075,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,96,91391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,91549,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,96,91707,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,96,91864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,92338,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,96,92496,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,93128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,93601,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,93759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,94075,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,94154,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,94233,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,94312,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,94391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,64,94707,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,94864,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,95022,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,95181,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,224,95496,1,4,0:0:0:0:
-xNaCLx-
mod as requested,

all of them are suggestions, feel free to ignore.

[JuDa's Oni]
00:13:865 (2,3,4,5,6) - i would suggest to change the pattern into "k k d k d" here to make it the same as 00:16:391 (2,3,4,5,6) -

00:40:865 (12) - maybe a k here? for the vocal and music here
00:45:918 (13) - ^

00:42:918 (21) - this D sounds not quite good as the sound here is much softer than the previous D, i would suggest to add some more notes here without the finishes.

00:43:944 - add kd here? like 00:38:891 (17,18) -

00:50:181 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - imo its better to change this "x x x x xxxxx" pattern into "x x x xxxxx x" pattern like 00:48:918 - and 00:51:444 -

01:34:865 (50,52) - change to d, like 00:12:602 (4,5,6,7) - ?

[Oni]
00:16:233 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72) - imo this pattern could not fit well, maybe d k k d d k k would fit better?

00:40:233 (210,211) - what about making it k d? as the latter have the same pitch of the coming d

00:39:839 - add a d to make a triplet like 00:44:812 (237,238,239) - ?

00:49:865 (268) - k? as the pitch is going upward here, also make consistence with 00:51:128 (275) - and 00:52:391 (282) -

01:19:549 (452,454,456,458) - i personally do not appreciate these finishes much as there are basically no sound here. consider remove the finishes?

[Muzukashii]
00:39:128 - add D and remove finishes on 00:38:812 (133) - ? imo keep this same as 00:43:865 (152,153) - is better

00:43:707 (151) - move to 00:43:391 - ? fits better imo

[Futsuu & Kantan]
looks good to me :D

nice map :) good luck
Topic Starter
BlackHairEND

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Hi! :D

[Stuff ;w;]
BGはちょっと小さいです(800x600)!1366x768はよい! ok! thank you~~!

[Oni]
00:38:812 (207) - no finish? ok! & 00:43:865 - delete finish
00:43:549 (234,235,236) - k k d? ok!
01:08:733 - don here? ok!
01:09:286 - note here? (there is singing here) ok~! add d note.
01:12:918 (430,431,432,433,434) - (ddd k d)? ok!
01:35:181 (531) - K? umm... No change. :(

gj! thanks :3
[Muzukashii]
00:05:970 (19,20,21,22) - make same as first one? (d k k k)? ok!

i think it's good!
[Fuutsu]
よいだ! thank you!

[Kantan]
これも! :)

よいマップだともいます!good luck!
If you want to mod for mod, you can do this one https://osu.ppy.sh/s/96115 ありがとう! (。´∀`)ノ
Thanks mod! Ozzy~! :)
-Sh1n1-
Hi~~ (mod requested via PM)

[About]

  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is finish don note
  4. K is finish kat note
[General]

  1. Uncheck "Enable Countdown" </3
  2. uncheck "Widescreen support on JuDa's Oni </3

[Oni]

  1. 00:41:023 (216) - delete
  2. what happen with 01:19:549 (454) - 01:20:023 (456) - 01:20:496 (458) - 01:20:970 (460) - You should remove because sounds too weird, follow your preview pattern 01:16:707 (444,445,446) -
  3. 01:21:128 (461) - 01:21:444 (462) - 01:21:760 (463) - remove finish, better with voice

[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:04:233 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - I found this part weird ._. I'll give you some suggestions but it's up to you
    _ 00:05:023 (15) - move to 00:04:549 -,
    _ 00:05:496 (17,18) - delete
  2. 01:12:760 (287) - remove
  3. 01:04:865 (249) - ^
  4. 01:07:707 (262) - too long, need breaks here

[Futsuu]

  1. 00:23:970 (40) - delete, is not nessesary
  2. 00:26:181 (44) - same here ^
  3. 00:29:339 (48) - move to 00:29:023 - and 00:29:970 (50) - move to 00:30:286 - feel better
  4. 00:43:865 (80) - I'm a 100% certain that this note should be at 00:44:181 - and if you move <-- you should add a note at 00:42:918 -
  5. 00:38:812 (69) - ^ should be at 00:39:128 - and a note at 00:37:865 - same reason as above
  6. 01:10:707 (29,30) - Ctrl+G consistency with 01:00:602 (7,8) - 01:03:128 (13,14) - because is not the same as 01:08:181 (23,24) -
  7. 01:12:918 (34,35,36,37) - mmm... I'm not sure :3 will be better if you add a rest at 01:13:075 -
  8. 01:24:918 - add d, consistency with 00:01:549 (2) -

[Kantan]

  1. 00:28:075 (15) - Should be k, because the song have a change here, if you are not agree, consider that 00:27:444 (14,15) -, both can't be d
  2. 00:31:233 (19) - change to d, consistency with 00:33:760 (22) -
  3. 00:41:181 (29) - I'm not agree with 1/2 , it's confusing for newbies and move to have consistency with 00:46:391 (34) -
  4. 00:48:918 (37) - I can hear a different sound here
Amazing map, take my Star, JuDa's Oni is so good, please don't add and delete notes on JuDa's Oni (500 combo are cool xD) Good Luck
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