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Tritonal - Anchor (Noisestorm Remix)

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Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Secretpipe
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 22 mars 2015 at 16:25:14

Artist: Tritonal
Title: Anchor (Noisestorm Remix)
Tags: liquid dnb drum and bass Asphyxia Kin
BPM: 175
Filesize: 3076kb
Play Time: 01:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Asphyxia's Insane (4,83 stars, 343 notes)
  2. Hard (2,55 stars, 203 notes)
  3. Kin's Light Insane (3,69 stars, 276 notes)
  4. Normal (1,97 stars, 113 notes)
Download: Tritonal - Anchor (Noisestorm Remix)
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#9 Ranked!

Normal→ Done.
Hard→Done.
Kin's Light Insane→Done by Kin.
Asphyxia's Insane→Done by Asphyxia.

Liquid DnB as it's best! \:D/
Last edited by Secretpipe , edited 42 times in total.
Gero
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Gero
Firsto o/
VINXIS
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VINXIS
OK*
ac8129464363
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OK
Avena
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Joined December 2012
Avena
clors
[Colours]
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Combo2 : 150,219,117
Combo3 : 193,163,228
Combo4 : 211,223,132
ProfessionalBox
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
771 posts
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ProfessionalBox
Epic song ~ :oops:
My AngeI Amogus
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Last edited by My AngeI Amogus , edited 1 time in total.
Nozhomi
Global Moderator
4,568 posts
Joined May 2013
Nozhomi

seb2110 wrote:

Get this ranked now Peppy :O pls :s
Just wait 1 or 2 weeks.
Come[Back]Home
1,785 posts
Joined October 2011
Come[Back]Home
Normal
00:23:211 (2) Add Circle here and put a slider from 00:23:554 till 00:24:24 I think it fits better with the melodics.
01:08:811 (1) Blank this one with 01:07:782 (3) looks weird otherwise (Or make it just straight cause 01:10:182 (3) goes into the same direction as (1) which looks weird, so making it staright should be nice)
01:24:582 (1) Slider till 01:24:925 I dont think you should skip the beat there
01:38:297 (3,1) This blank can be improved
01:44:468 (1,2) Something like this maybe?
SPOILER
01:46:182 (3,4,1) Maybe like this?
SPOILER
I think it looks cooler

Hard
00:49:268 (3,1) Maybe a slider instead, fills up the emptiness
01:41:725 (1,3) I dont think its on purpose that theiyre are touching cause it looks weird

Kin's Light Insane
00:25:440 (5,6) Why dont you blank them? I think it would look better. I personally dislike the pattern
00:34:525 (1) ctrl+g? Plays and feels better to play
00:43:097 - 00:43:782 Maybe you can add some circles here for the vocals? Its an Insane, would be awesome there. (Its like a lead in to the main part)
01:41:725 (1) ctrl+g?
01:48:754 Add Circle here for the vocal

Asphyxia's Insane
Kinda emberassing that i couldnt find anything after looking at it 4 times. Awesome diff.


Good Luck Secretpipe o/
Nozhomi
Global Moderator
4,568 posts
Joined May 2013
Nozhomi
Yo Secret quick mod.

- General :
  1. Enlève Widescreen support sur toutes les diffs.
  2. Ton bg n'est n'y en 16/9 ou 4/3 j'ai peur que ça pose problème.

- Normal :
  1. CS3 et AR5 pls. C'est sensé être ta diff la plus facile !
  2. 00:22:182 - Unsnaped greenline.
  3. 00:49:611 (1) - Pas tout à fait blanket t'as juste à bouger la queue du slider.
  4. 00:53:382 (5) - Pareil lol.
  5. 01:00:582 (1) - Bouge le poit central à 16:162 pour perfect blanket.
  6. 01:50:125 - Plein de useless greenlines à partir d'ici à remove !

- Hard :
  1. 00:50:468 (3,4) - C'est le seule ! Le seul endroit de ce kiai ou tu place un jump comme ça. Même si c'est pour le stack...reste constant pls.
  2. Plein de petits nazi stacks mais bon démerde toi pour ça :D .
  3. Je trouve que la diff pourrais contenir de légers jumps pour avoir un meilleur spread avec celle de Kin. Enfin tu vois.

- Kin's Light Insane :
  1. 00:48:582 (2,3,4) - Je trouve pas ça super beau ce léger overlap m'enfin bon.
  2. 01:31:268 (2,3,4) - Je stackerais bien 01:30:068 (5,2) - pour éviter ce léger overlap. Ca fait un poil plus joli.

- Axphyxia's Insane :
  1. 01:13:440 (2,3,4) - The only stack you didn't do perfectly. Rest of the map is clean.

Uguu~ o/
Mukyu~
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Secretpipe

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Normal
00:23:211 (2) Add Circle here and put a slider from 00:23:554 till 00:24:24 I think it fits better with the melodics. It'll be a bit hard for the Intro of the Normal o/
01:08:811 (1) Blank this one with 01:07:782 (3) looks weird otherwise (Or make it just straight cause 01:10:182 (3) goes into the same direction as (1) which looks weird, so making it staright should be nice) yea done !
01:24:582 (1) Slider till 01:24:925 I dont think you should skip the beat there but what about recovery time then ? :o
01:38:297 (3,1) This blank can be improved yea done thank u c:
01:44:468 (1,2) Something like this maybe?
SPOILER
1/2 pattern better fits here o/
01:46:182 (3,4,1) Maybe like this?
SPOILER
I think it looks cooler changed pattern

Hard
00:49:268 (3,1) Maybe a slider instead, fills up the emptiness Switched a circle and a slider, it better fits now !
01:41:725 (1,3) I dont think its on purpose that theiyre are touching cause it looks weird wat o:



Good Luck Secretpipe o/

Nozhomi wrote:

Yo Secret quick mod.

- General :
  1. Enlève Widescreen support sur toutes les diffs. done!
  2. Ton bg n'est n'y en 16/9 ou 4/3 j'ai peur que ça pose problème. J'irai le resize!

- Normal :
  1. CS3 et AR5 pls. C'est sensé être ta diff la plus facile ! Ok!
  2. 00:22:182 - Unsnaped greenline. Resnapped!
  3. 00:49:611 (1) - Pas tout à fait blanket t'as juste à bouger la queue du slider. Done!
  4. 00:53:382 (5) - Pareil lol. Regarde en 1/16 , ce blanket est bien o/
  5. 01:00:582 (1) - Bouge le poit central à 16:162 pour perfect blanket. kk done
  6. 01:50:125 - Plein de useless greenlines à partir d'ici à remove ! Done o/

- Hard :
  1. 00:50:468 (3,4) - C'est le seule ! Le seul endroit de ce kiai ou tu place un jump comme ça. Même si c'est pour le stack...reste constant pls.
  2. Plein de petits nazi stacks mais bon démerde toi pour ça :D .
  3. Je trouve que la diff pourrais contenir de légers jumps pour avoir un meilleur spread avec celle de Kin. Enfin tu vois. J'vais rajouter des petits jump then o/



Uguu~ o/
Mukyu~


Thanks guys for ur mods ! updated!
Kin
2,618 posts
Joined August 2010
Kin

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Kin's Light Insane
00:25:440 (5,6) Why dont you blank them? I think it would look better. I personally dislike the pattern are you telling me to kill the flow for the sake of a blanket which make it only worst ?
00:34:525 (1) ctrl+g? Plays and feels better to play symmetry
00:43:097 - 00:43:782 Maybe you can add some circles here for the vocals? Its an Insane, would be awesome there. (Its like a lead in to the main part) it doesn't goes with the fact I follow the drum
01:41:725 (1) ctrl+g? the transition between 01:41:211 (3,4,1) - would be horrible
01:48:754 Add Circle here for the vocal fixed

Nozhomi wrote:

- Kin's Light Insane :
  1. 00:48:582 (2,3,4) - Je trouve pas ça super beau ce léger overlap m'enfin bon. tant que le flow est bon, moi ça me va
  2. 01:31:268 (2,3,4) - Je stackerais bien 01:30:068 (5,2) - pour éviter ce léger overlap. Ca fait un poil plus joli. perso l'overlap me dérange pas >_>
thanks for mod \o

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riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
Yo, as requested.

[General]
  1. Get a slightly edited version of your BG. It's also 1366x768.
[Normal]
  1. The only weird thing here is your choice of multipliers/velocity. Set main SV to 0.9 so you can change x0.9 multipliers to x1.0. And then re-calculate x0,75 part.
  2. Since this is the easiest diff drop your HP and AR settings a little. 4 and 4,5 respectively will do great.
  3. You can also drop OD. The 3/2 stuff isn't that easy to play, you know.
  4. 00:35:897 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - try to add a couple of sliders here. It'll make stuff easier and drop str rating a little. Which is cool in this situation.
  5. 01:14:982 (2,5) - minor - the overlap/stack is a little visible here. You might want to fix it.

    Just the SV multipliers. Apart from that, lovely diff.
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:925 (2,3) - try to replace them with a single slider. I think it will match slightly better with the music.
  2. 00:35:211 (2,1) - minor - is this overlap supposed to be like that? I'd rather have them stacked but it's your call.
  3. 01:10:868 (3,4) - even though it's a drop-off slider the jump's distance still feels too big. Try to find a way and lower it.
  4. 01:13:611 (3,1) - minor - the stack's imperfection is obvious, so you'll probably have to set both to x143 y92.
  5. 01:26:468 (4,1) - the jump feels off music and isn't really readable. Probably you should move circles around? example

    1 grid left, 1 grid right, evertything's alright.
[Kin's Light Insane]
  1. 00:22:868 (3) - minor - as this is just the beginning of the diff we should try to avoid overlaps. You can make things look neater with a little rotation and moving to the right
    Note: 00:38:982 (1,3) - after this one you'll probably have to fix this one for consistency.
  2. 00:44:725 (3,4) - it is clearly readable as 1/2. Try to avoid 1/4 jumps, it's just a Light Insane.
    Note: 00:45:840 (2,3,4) - 00:48:582 (2,3,4) - and so on - same. Come on, spaced 1/4s look nicely, too

    Everything but those 1/4 triplets is cool. I understand the reason why you've done it, but I think we'll have to tone down the diff.
[Asphyxia's Insane]
  1. 00:37:268 (1) - minor - the slider has quite a weird direction change which isn't used anywhere else in the map. I'd replace it with something like a straight or a simple arc-shaped slider.

    Looks fine. It's just the slider that bugs me. o/ Triplets sound a little overmapped to me, but welp, they're consistent and placed nicely, so it should be fine.
That's a decent set you have here!

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Best of luck!
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Zetera
Medal Hunter
1,019 posts
Joined November 2010
Zetera
Quick polishing on request. Don't expect anything good.

[Normal]

|00:40:011 (3,4) - Why didn't you keep the 1/2 going?
|01:07:440 (2,3) - I'd recommend not making a stack here. Use the normal spacing.
|01:16:354 (5) - Probably hard to read.
|01:24:582 (1) - Remove NC, doesn't seem to have a function. Also applies to 01:46:868 (1) -
|00:49:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It's weird how this pattern doesn't appear anymore. Either you use it later again (01:00:582 - ) or you use the pattern you used every other time.

[Hard]

|00:25:954 (4) - Not sure if you need a shape like that. It could be simply straight or a bit curvacious through the whole object. That bulge doesn't look really neat.
|00:25:954 (4) - Ctrl+G for rhythm? You'll have to relocate the slider and the circle again, also you need to set the hitsounds right.
|00:50:982 (1,2,3) - Unclean distance.

[Light Insane]

|01:32:125 (1,2,3) - Pretty weird looking. Put 2 a bit further away from 1.


Nothing else to say. Good luck!
Shadren
Featured Artist
531 posts
Joined March 2011
Shadren
Preview point isn't snapped
[Normal]
01:24:582 (1) - slider 1/1 will more fits the song, imo
01:41:382 (4,5) - it's need some work with blanket (reason: http://puu.sh/gJrH7/e5ea3a477a.jpg)

[Hard]
00:30:925 (2,3,4) - try this, it's look better imo: http://puu.sh/gJrPe/a3bd6e98c5.jpg
00:33:840 (2,3,1)http://puu.sh/gJrWJ/d59a996979.jpg
00:32:297 (7) - Ctrl-J ?
01:13:611 (3,1) - stack it pls

[Kin's Light Insane]
00:44:468 (2,3,4) - what about this rythm: http://puu.sh/gJs8Y/23066b232b.jpg ?
00:48:840 (3,4) - and this flow: http://puu.sh/gJsf4/3c5c7b8893.jpg ?
01:31:268 (2,3,4) - Ctrl-J ?

[Asphyxia's Insane]
01:06:754 (6) - Ctrl-J ?
01:16:697 (8) - ^
01:16:697 (7) - X:412 Y:312 ?
01:49:782 (7) - I think that there's not need this circle
Kin
2,618 posts
Joined August 2010
Kin

-Bakari- wrote:

[Kin's Light Insane]
  1. 00:22:868 (3) - minor - as this is just the beginning of the diff we should try to avoid overlaps. You can make things look neater with a little rotation and moving to the right I don't like how the flow is changed >_>
    Note: 00:38:982 (1,3) - after this one you'll probably have to fix this one for consistency. ^
  2. 00:44:725 (3,4) - it is clearly readable as 1/2. Try to avoid 1/4 jumps, it's just a Light Insane.
    Note: 00:45:840 (2,3,4) - 00:48:582 (2,3,4) - and so on - same. Come on, spaced 1/4s look nicely, too

    Everything but those 1/4 triplets is cool. I understand the reason why you've done it, but I think we'll have to tone down the diff. I've just reduced the spacing to 1,8, I like those stacking. + make it easier, will just make a bigger spread between my diff and Asphyxia's one

Sala- wrote:

[Light Insane]

|01:32:125 (1,2,3) - Pretty weird looking. Put 2 a bit further away from 1. I want to make the spacing increase only when you clic on 2

Shadren wrote:

00:44:468 (2,3,4) - what about this rythm: http://puu.sh/gJs8Y/23066b232b.jpg ? I still prefer the current one
00:48:840 (3,4) - and this flow: http://puu.sh/gJsf4/3c5c7b8893.jpg ? too jumpy
01:31:268 (2,3,4) - Ctrl-J ? ^
thanks for mod !

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Asphyxia
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Asphyxia

-Bakari- wrote:

[Asphyxia's Insane]
  1. 00:37:268 (1) - minor - the slider has quite a weird direction change which isn't used anywhere else in the map. I'd replace it with something like a straight or a simple arc-shaped slider. Sure, I changed into a more simple shape

    Looks fine. It's just the slider that bugs me. o/ Triplets sound a little overmapped to me, but welp, they're consistent and placed nicely, so it should be fine.

Shadren wrote:

[Asphyxia's Insane]
01:06:754 (6) - Ctrl-J ? I somehow prefer how they are now, it fits the pattern slightly better
01:16:697 (8) - ^ ^
01:16:697 (7) - X:412 Y:312 ? I prefer its current placement, sorry :c
01:49:782 (7) - I think that there's not need this circle You're right, I replaced the note with a 1/2 slider
Thanks a lot everyone! I gave Secretpipe the .txt file in-game
Secretpipe
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Topic Starter
Secretpipe

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested. yo c:

[General]
  1. Get a slightly edited version of your BG. It's also 1366x768. Awesome so far ! Thanks! c:
[Normal]
  1. The only weird thing here is your choice of multipliers/velocity. Set main SV to 0.9 so you can change x0.9 multipliers to x1.0. And then re-calculate x0,75 part. prefered to do 0.8 and 0.9 cuz it'll break all my patterns :c had to start from scratch two times
  2. Since this is the hardest diff drop your HP and AR settings a little. 4 and 4,5 respectively will do great. kk
  3. You can also drop OD. The 3/2 stuff isn't that easy to play, you know. will leave it as it is atm c:
  4. 00:35:897 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - try to add a couple of sliders here. It'll make stuff easier and drop str rating a little. Which is cool in this situation. This is a good idea but here I'd rather keep these squares instead of sliders ! c: diversity they'd said xD
  5. 01:14:982 (2,5) - minor - the overlap/stack is a little visible here. You might want to fix it. done

    Just the SV multipliers. Apart from that, lovely diff.
<3

[Hard]
  1. 00:30:925 (2,3) - try to replace them with a single slider. I think it will match slightly better with the music. done
  2. 00:35:211 (2,1) - minor - is this overlap supposed to be like that? I'd rather have them stacked but it's your call. yea my bad LOL Thanks!!!
  3. 01:10:868 (3,4) - even though it's a drop-off slider the jump's distance still feels too big. Try to find a way and lower it. I honnestly think it's fine but if another coplain I'll change it
  4. 01:13:611 (3,1) - minor - the stack's imperfection is obvious, so you'll probably have to set both to x143 y92.okay done
  5. 01:26:468 (4,1) - the jump feels off music and isn't really readable. Probably you should move circles around? The stream better fits the shape of 01:25:954 (3) - but if anyone complain I'll change it ! example

    1 grid left, 1 grid right, evertything's alright.


That's a decent set you have here!

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Best of luck!
Thanks a lot !


Sala- wrote:

Quick polishing on request. Don't expect anything good. dw bby <3

[Normal]

|00:40:011 (3,4) - Why didn't you keep the 1/2 going? yea cool idea! added!
|01:07:440 (2,3) - I'd recommend not making a stack here. Use the normal spacing. Volunteer here cuz ppl ca see the note understacked here!

|01:16:354 (5) - Probably hard to read. Just decreased AR so it should be fine ;)
|01:24:582 (1) - Remove NC, doesn't seem to have a function. Also applies to 01:46:868 (1) - It announces a spinner so I wanna keep it as it is :c
|00:49:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It's weird how this pattern doesn't appear anymore. Either you use it later again (01:00:582 - ) or you use the pattern you used every other time. it's a "Secretpipe" pattern xD I mean , 4 sliders with strange shape and ...enjoy :D/

[Hard]

|00:25:954 (4) - Not sure if you need a shape like that. It could be simply straight or a bit curvacious through the whole object. That bulge doesn't look really neat. okay done
|00:25:954 (4) - Ctrl+G for rhythm? You'll have to relocate the slider and the circle again, also you need to set the hitsounds right. wrong slider?
|00:50:982 (1,2,3) - Unclean distance. yea fixd!



Nothing else to say. Good luck!
THANKS A LOT

Shadren wrote:

Preview point isn't snapped Fixed!
[Normal]
01:24:582 (1) - slider 1/1 will more fits the song, imo nah because I kept a break for recovery time with spinner c: but if not , I'd use a slider here
01:41:382 (4,5) - it's need some work with blanket (reason: http://puu.sh/gJrH7/e5ea3a477a.jpg) done

[Hard]
00:30:925 (2,3,4) - try this, it's look better imo: http://puu.sh/gJrPe/a3bd6e98c5.jpg already changed c:
00:33:840 (2,3,1)http://puu.sh/gJrWJ/d59a996979.jpg I'd rather prefer a long shaped slider here c:
00:32:297 (7) - Ctrl-J ? nah
01:13:611 (3,1) - stack it pls changed with sala or bakari mod idk <3
THANKS SHADREN <333
riffy
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riffy
Re-checkin' cause you told me to do so

[Normal]
  1. Check in-game. I've sent you an example of what I expected you to do with the sliders.
  2. 01:07:440 (2,3) - the only stack in the whole diff feels awkward. Please, unstack. I feel bad for the stack.
[Hard]
  1. 00:33:840 (2) - the curve does not correspond with music and creates an unnatural and forced change of the flow. Why did you change it? :c
  2. 00:49:097 (3,1,2) - this sudden Ds drop feels pretty weird to me. probably you should try to keep Normal DS here.
  3. 01:10:868 (3,4) - are you sure you want to keep it? I am convinced that it should be changed. :c
  4. 01:26:468 (4,1,2) - /me sighs
[Kin's Light Insane]
  1. 00:44:468 (2,3,4) - I'd really love to hear more opinions on that stuff. I still think that's too much for a Light Insane. They give you only 0,05 of star rating and lowring spacing of them wouldn't hurt too much. But again, I can't force you and I feel like it needs more opinions.
[Ashpyxia's Insane]
  1. 00:37:268 (1) - thanks. :c The shape is still a problem for me as this is still the only slider curved in such a way and it feels pretty random to me.
Get 1-2 more mods and find me.
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia
Fixed! damn you Bakari dont hate on my special shapes

http://puu.sh/gJIYw/f2ffe82850.txt
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