Fire EX. - Shattered Dreams [Taiko] · forum

qoot8123

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qoot8123 2015-02-21T07:23:47+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年2月2日 at 上午 08:55:17

Artist: Fire EX.
Title: Shattered Dreams
Tags: 再會！青春 Goodbye! You!th Nardoxyribonucleic mingmichael -[ ix ishida xi ]-
BPM: 215
Filesize: 3391kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:

Futsuu (2.21 stars, 249 notes)
Inner Oni (5.61 stars, 945 notes)
Ishida's Inner Oni (5.69 stars, 999 notes)
Kantan (1.47 stars, 140 notes)
m1ng's Oni (3.87 stars, 593 notes)
Nardo's Muzukashii (3.23 stars, 448 notes)

Download: Fire EX. - Shattered Dreams
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Lyrics

甘有聽到怪手的聲　那是在拆咱的厝
甘有聽到咱的夢　破碎的聲
甘有看到子彈的影　那是要取阮性命
這個所在已經沒希望　核電廠趕快爆炸

眼前是絕望的寒冬　我已經沒半項　破碎的夢　畫面漸漸無聲
絕望的寒冬　我已經沒半項　破碎的夢　甘說你攏沒感覺

我只是想要保護屬於我的東西（絕望的寒冬　我已經沒半項）
我只是想要一點尊嚴和權利而已（破碎的夢　畫面漸漸無聲）
我只是想要抱著希望過生活（絕望的寒冬　我已經沒半項）
我只是想要自由地說一句話（破碎的夢）

Last edited by qoot8123 2016-02-16T04:13:39+00:00, edited 42 times in total.

Spy

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Spy 2015-02-21T07:32:45+00:00

qoot8123 wrote:
ㄍㄋㄋ

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-06-12T16:17:54+00:00

稍微改了一下, 感覺好像順一些

http://puu.sh/imbWv.rar

BlackHairEND

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BlackHairEND 2015-06-20T05:40:34+00:00

Hello~ qoot!
From PM :3
I'm lating mod sorry ;w;

[General Setting]

Widescreen Support un checked. (Kantan, ming's Oni, Ishida's Inner Oni, )

[Kantan]

<<Mapping>>

01:03:171 - add d This part ( 01:03:729 (86,87) - ) is better flow, here (01:03:171 - ) felt better place is good.

[Futsuu]

<<Mapping>>

00:50:753 - 00:59:683 - add d　　Roll sound of the drum was heard the sound of the back.
I felt that it is good if you put the d in this two parts.

[Nardo's Muzukashii]

<<Mapping>>

01:23:543 - add d We will see that put to match the lyrics. But, then you have the sound of the drum, I thought want excitement and because it is before the rust.
01:23:683 - add d same as above
01:32:334 (357) - move to 01:32:194 - this part (01:32:194 - ) is the strong sound of cymbals.　It would end up destroying the unity, but better here has felt good.
01:32:334 (357) - move to 01:32:194 - same as above

[ming's Oni]

<<Mapping>>

00:17:194 - add k　　High sound is heard from behind.
01:32:194 - add k　　Since there is a large cymbal sound, I felt Notes want.

[Inner Oni]

<<Mapping>>

No problem :3

[ishida's Inner Oni]

<<Mapping>>

00:58:846 (610,611,612,613) - change to ddk　　1/6 sound of I felt not reached
01:03:869 (664) - change k　Sound of cymbals I felt strong.

good luck

Last edited by BlackHairEND 2015-06-20T07:51:04+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-06-20T07:00:47+00:00

BlackHairEND wrote:
Hello~ qoot!
From PM :3
I'm lating mod sorry ;w;

[General Setting]
Widescreen Support un checked. (Kantan, ming's Oni, Ishida's Inner Oni, )
[Nardo's Muzukashii]

<<Mapping>>
01:23:543 - add d We will see that put to match the lyrics. But, then you have the sound of the drum, I thought want excitement and because it is before the rust. fixed
01:23:683 - add d same as above ^
01:32:334 (357) - move to 01:32:194 - this part (01:32:194 - ) is the strong sound of cymbals.　It would end up destroying the unity, but better here has felt good. No change because of the presence of snare at 01:32:334 -
01:32:334 (357) - move to 01:32:194 - same as above ^
good luck

Thanks for your mod~

Update: http://puu.sh/ivKsZ.rar

qoot8123

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qoot8123 2015-06-20T11:07:40+00:00

BlackHairEND wrote:
Hello~ qoot!
From PM :3
I'm lating mod sorry ;w;

[General Setting]
Widescreen Support un checked. (Kantan, ming's Oni, Ishida's Inner Oni, )
[Kantan]

<<Mapping>>
01:03:171 - add d This part ( 01:03:729 (86,87) - ) is better flow, here (01:03:171 - ) felt better place is good. i think this note is optional, and i also want to make some bigger break, so i will consider this one
[Futsuu]

<<Mapping>>
00:50:753 - 00:59:683 - add d　　Roll sound of the drum was heard the sound of the back.
I felt that it is good if you put the d in this two parts. because 1/2 is a bit hard for futsuu with 210 bpm, so keep this

good luck

thanks !

mingmichael

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mingmichael 2015-06-21T13:17:48+00:00

BlackHairEND

Hello~ qoot!
From PM :3
I'm lating mod sorry ;w;

[General Setting]

Widescreen Support un checked. (Kantan, ming's Oni, Ishida's Inner Oni, ) i think qoot could change it for me

[ming's Oni]

<<Mapping>>

00:17:194 - add k　　High sound is heard from behind. i keep mine with a 1/2 notes there. actually it's a nice idea for adding a note there, but i prefer with the easy one
01:32:194 - add k　　Since there is a large cymbal sound, I felt Notes want. [color=#8000FF]nice catch, but accidentally i didn't try to put it, since the patterns are changed and it becomes a bit soft with some 3/2 breaks (from 01:31:078 - ~ 01:35:543 -)[/color]

good luck

thanks for the mods :3 but sorry no changes ><

S a n d

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S a n d 2015-06-22T02:37:12+00:00

Taiko mod request from: qoot8123
Request Type: PM Request
Request Diff: -
Modding Content: m1ng's Oni, Inner Oni, Ishida's Inner Oni
*Note: I mod map according to my style of mapping, so sorry if it is unpractical >_<*

- 01:35:543 ~ 01:38:892 - Why not have kiai here?

- 00:00:799 - Add d here? There's sound there.
- 00:03:032 - ^
- 00:22:148 - Change to k?
- 00:31:218 - Add d here? There's sound there.
- 00:33:450 - ^
- 00:34:148 and 00:34:427 - Change to k?
- 00:37:008 - Change to d?
- 00:38:892 (3,4) - Move to 00:38:683 to fit the song?
- 01:07:636 - Change the slider to something else? It is weird to have unfitting slider and only one throughout the entire map.
- 01:40:846 - I think it will be fine to add a big note like Inners too. Just that it doesn't have to be invisible note, normal sv would be fine.

(Shit, I can't find anything)
- 00:33:032 - Change to d?
- 00:50:683 (198,199,200) - Ctrl+G? A.k.a kddkd.
- 01:08:753 - D?

- 00:22:985 ~ 00:23:543 - Would be better like this?

- 00:27:590 - Change to ddk?
- 00:28:985 - Change to k? and also 00:29:125 Change to d?
- 00:32:822 - Change to d or remove?
- 00:56:055 - Change to ddkkdkd?
- 00:58:846 - Change from (dddk) -> ddk? It's weird to have a random 1/6 popping out of nowhere lol.
- 01:03:729 - Big notes aren't allowed to be in the end of 1/4 stream. Unless it's color was changed such as ddK or kkD, but ddD or kkK won't be rankable.

~~ㄍㄋㄋ~~ Good luck ranking it

~

qoot8123

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qoot8123 2015-06-23T03:13:21+00:00

S a n d wrote:

Taiko mod request from: qoot8123
Request Type: PM Request
Request Diff: -
Modding Content: m1ng's Oni, Inner Oni, Ishida's Inner Oni
*Note: I mod map according to my style of mapping, so sorry if it is unpractical >_<*

- 01:35:543 ~ 01:38:892 - Why not have kiai here? 因為那裏感覺不是很長,再放Kiai感覺會有點不協調

(Shit, I can't find anything)
- 00:33:032 - Change to d? 因為這個位置吉他有用重音,所以我用不同顏色的note來做強調
- 00:50:683 (198,199,200) - Ctrl+G? A.k.a kddkd. 這裡的kkddd是用來銜接後面的ddd(00:51:311 (505,506,507) - )
- 01:08:753 - D? 我覺得d就夠了,大圓感覺不是說很必要,而且d的音色也是偏重的,所以這個先保留

~~ㄍㄋㄋ~~ Good luck ranking it ~

thanks for mod! and updated ishida's diff

Yuzeyun

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Yuzeyun 2015-06-24T09:02:10+00:00

very quick question, is the metadata made of official translations?

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-06-24T09:07:42+00:00

_Gezo_ wrote:
very quick question, is the metadata made of official translations?

I think so.

qoot8123

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qoot8123 2015-06-24T09:24:59+00:00

_Gezo_ wrote:
very quick question, is the metadata made of official translations?

yes, this is song's list in album

Nofool

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Nofool 2015-06-27T14:11:47+00:00

Yo'
sry fast check x_x set looks good anyways
maybe some OD/HP changes needed

[Kantan]
OD 3 ?

[Futsuu]
OD 4 ?
- 01:33:311 (229) - that d usually is at - 01:33:590 - ? example : - 00:55:636 (133) -, i can see a little difference with that last part on the vocal tho.
- 01:37:497 (243) - could be removed, just for a little break.

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
- 00:13:915 (50) - remove ? not really needed.
- 00:23:683 - what about kd k instead of kdkd here ? that last note as k fits well the vocal imo.
- 01:13:776 - try dk ddkd instead of dkdd kd ? fits better guitar's melody. Also move - 01:16:287 (280) - to - 01:16:566 - and move - 01:18:520 (291) - to - 01:18:799 -.
- move - 01:32:055 (358) - to - 01:32:194 - as k (and maybe del next k) ? u usually follow the vocal at these parts.

[m1ng's Oni]
HP 5 ?
- 00:36:659 (2) - remove ? not really needed.
- 00:38:892 - what about k d ddd kkk d d instead of ddd d kkk k d d here ? plays better imo and can reflect - 00:36:939 -.

[Inner Oni]
OD 5 HP 6 ?

[Ishida's Inner Oni]
OD 6 HP 6 ?
y u Whistle ;_;
- delete 00:04:287 (24,25,26) - + add d at - 00:04:427 - ? calm part = more break.
- 00:24:659 (235) - D ? - 00:23:962 (229,230) - d K - 00:24:520 (234,235) - k D sounds cool.
- 00:25:776 (249) - d ?
- 00:51:450 (529) - k ?
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-06-27T16:39:40+00:00

Nofool wrote:
Yo'
sry fast check x_x set looks good anyways
maybe some OD/HP changes needed

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
- 00:13:915 (50) - remove ? not really needed. fixed
- 00:23:683 - what about kd k instead of kdkd here ? that last note as k fits well the vocal imo. fixed
- 01:13:776 - try dk ddkd instead of dkdd kd ? fits better guitar's melody. Also move - 01:16:287 (280) - to - 01:16:566 - and move - 01:18:520 (291) - to - 01:18:799 -. no change since the patterns here are drum-oriented.
- move - 01:32:055 (358) - to - 01:32:194 - as k (and maybe del next k) ? u usually follow the vocal at these parts. fixed, and did the same thing on the note at 01:34:287 - as well.
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'

Thanks for your mod Nofool~

Update: http://puu.sh/iEIyR.rar

qoot8123

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qoot8123 2015-06-28T07:21:52+00:00

Nofool wrote:
Yo'
sry fast check x_x set looks good anyways
maybe some OD/HP changes needed

[Kantan]
OD 3 ?

[Futsuu]
OD 4 ?
- 01:33:311 (229) - that d usually is at - 01:33:590 - ? example : - 00:55:636 (133) -, i can see a little difference with that last part on the vocal tho. here has a drum sound, so i don't want to ignore it.
- 01:37:497 (243) - could be removed, just for a little break. hmmm, you are right, but it is a bit weird to make a break on this part.

[Inner Oni]
OD 5 HP 6 ?

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Good luck'

thanks for mod!

mingmichael

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mingmichael 2015-06-28T11:57:07+00:00

S a n d

- 00:00:799 - Add d here? There's sound there. i decided not to give a note there and just give a 2/1 break in the beginning of the part
- 00:03:032 - ^ ^
- 00:22:148 - Change to k? just wanna to keep the constant vocals with the dons 00:22:148 (2,3) -
- 00:31:218 - Add d here? There's sound there. i didn't try to follow all the sounds in this song since we have a Inner diff which is higher than oni. so i just tried to map the easier oni by not follow whole of the sounds, like 00:31:218 -
- 00:33:450 - ^ ^
- 00:34:148 and 00:34:427 - Change to k? keep mine with the monotonous don patterns
- 00:37:008 - Change to d? ^
- 00:38:892 (3,4) - Move to 00:38:683 to fit the song? literally the drums come out 00:38:892 -
- 01:07:636 - Change the slider to something else? It is weird to have unfitting slider and only one throughout the entire map. nopenope, it fits really well with the song when the drum rolls come out there and it's not a good decision to use the notes because it will give a long stream there
- 01:40:846 - I think it will be fine to add a big note like Inners too. Just that it doesn't have to be invisible note, normal sv would be fine. nope, it's just for the inner one, not for my oni

Nofool

Yo'
sry fast check x_x set looks good anyways
maybe some OD/HP changes needed

[m1ng's Oni]
HP 5 ?
- 00:36:659 (2) - remove ? not really needed. yap it is. removed~
- 00:38:892 - what about k d ddd kkk d d instead of ddd d kkk k d d here ? plays better imo and can reflect - 00:36:939 -. owh nice idea here. changed

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'

thanks for the mods guys~
m1ng's Oni

Jerry

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Jerry 2015-07-04T15:53:46+00:00

Taiko mod as requested via in-game PM

Sorry for the severe lateness of my mod!

[Kantan]

00:42:520 (47) - Move this note over to 00:41:404 - so that you have a consistent o o o rhythm with 00:38:613 (42,43,44) - and 00:36:380 (39,40,41) -
01:09:590 (94) - Follow the guitar for this note and move this to 01:09:729 -? The beat sounds more solid imo (But if this is too hard for Kantan, then you can just ignore this suggestion)
01:11:822 (97) - ^ Same, try moving to 01:11:962 -?

[Futsuu]

00:57:032 (137) - Move this back to 00:56:892 - so that it follows the vocals more accurately? You mapped the notes at 00:55:636 (133,134,135,136) - to the vocals, so I think you should do the same for this note.

[Nardo's Muzukashii]

01:25:497 (321,322,323,324) - These 1/2 double note patterns kinda makes the flow of this part feel very rigid in my opinion. I recommend changing it to something similar to what you did after this part at around 01:28:287 -. Try moving 01:25:636 (322) - over to 01:25:776 -, and then moving the two kats at 01:25:915 (323,324) over to 01:26:055 -

And I also suggest you do the same to a similar part at the first kiai before this, at 00:47:543 (135,136,137,138) -.

Sorry for the short mod but that's all I could find.
ming's Oni and Inner Oni are brilliantly mapped, can't find anything wrong with them.
I initially had a few points for Ishida's Inner Oni diff, but then I decided to retract my suggestions because alot of the points will largely impact the style that Ishida was going for, and I do not want to ruin that mapping style of his(or her, idk LOL).
Good luck and here's some stars ~

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-07-05T07:12:03+00:00

Jerry wrote:
Taiko mod as requested via in-game PM

Sorry for the severe lateness of my mod!

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
01:25:497 (321,322,323,324) - These 1/2 double note patterns kinda makes the flow of this part feel very rigid in my opinion. I recommend changing it to something similar to what you did after this part at around 01:28:287 -. Try moving 01:25:636 (322) - over to 01:25:776 -, and then moving the two kats at 01:25:915 (323,324) over to 01:26:055 - fixed

And I also suggest you do the same to a similar part at the first kiai before this, at 00:47:543 (135,136,137,138) -. No change for this since this would result in a deviation of vocal mapping.

Sorry for the short mod but that's all I could find.

Thanks for your mod~

Update: http://puu.sh/iNGt5.rar

qoot8123

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qoot8123 2015-07-05T09:24:47+00:00

Jerry wrote:
Taiko mod as requested via in-game PM

Sorry for the severe lateness of my mod!

[Kantan]
00:42:520 (47) - Move this note over to 00:41:404 - so that you have a consistent o o o rhythm with 00:38:613 (42,43,44) - and 00:36:380 (39,40,41) -

01:09:590 (94) - Follow the guitar for this note and move this to 01:09:729 -? The beat sounds more solid imo (But if this is too hard for Kantan, then you can just ignore this suggestion) here also has drum sound, so let me consider it

01:11:822 (97) - ^ Same, try moving to 01:11:962 -?

[Futsuu]
00:57:032 (137) - Move this back to 00:56:892 - so that it follows the vocals more accurately? You mapped the notes at 00:55:636 (133,134,135,136) - to the vocals, so I think you should do the same for this note.
hmmm...you are right, but i feel it would be a bit strange for me, so keep this

Sorry for the short mod but that's all I could find.
ming's Oni and Inner Oni are brilliantly mapped, can't find anything wrong with them.
I initially had a few points for Ishida's Inner Oni diff, but then I decided to retract my suggestions because alot of the points will largely impact the style that Ishida was going for, and I do not want to ruin that mapping style of his(or her, idk LOL).
Good luck and here's some stars ~

thanks for mod and star!

-[ ix Ishida xi ]-

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-[ ix Ishida xi ]- 2015-07-06T12:18:06+00:00

Nofool wrote:
[Ishida's Inner Oni]
OD 6 HP 6 ? Ok
y u Whistle ;_;
- delete 00:04:287 (24,25,26) - + add d at - 00:04:427 - ? calm part = more break. no TwT
- 00:24:659 (235) - D ? - 00:23:962 (229,230) - d K - 00:24:520 (234,235) - k D sounds cool. you're right ><
- 00:25:776 (249) - d ? I followed the drum ;w;
- 00:51:450 (529) - k ? ok :3
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Good luck'

Thank you for modding ><

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qoot8123 wrote:

BlackHairEND wrote:

BlackHairEND wrote:

S a n d wrote:

_Gezo_ wrote:

_Gezo_ wrote:

Nofool wrote:

Nofool wrote:

Jerry wrote:

Jerry wrote:

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