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SENTIVE - Daivan Prison (fade-out)

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Mafumafu
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年3月21日 at 11:13:53

Artist: SENTIVE
Title: Daivan Prison (fade-out)
Source: ラッキードッグ１
Tags: bl yaoi boys love ost bgm luckydog1 ld1 tennenouji
BPM: 100
Filesize: 1330kb
Play Time: 00:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Basic (1.33 stars, 40 notes)
  2. Intermediate (2.12 stars, 72 notes)
Download: SENTIVE - Daivan Prison (fade-out)
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My 8th ranked map.

Bubbled by Sieg, thank you! :3
Ranked by HabiHolic, thank you! :3
From bl game luckydog1. Love this smooth song very much, it arouses me the days spent at daivan with other CR-5 candres :3

And Giulio daisukiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!

Metadata: http://puu.sh/gkDoG/5cd87eb691.png http://puu.sh/gkDrT/dcd3a4d5d0.jpg
Thanks for alacat's metadata help: http://puu.sh/gqbMs/cc7c47f638.png

As I promised, more BL and yaoi maps are coming.

For rank. Genre Suggestion: Video Game; Instrumental

Just 2 diffs. All by me.



Happy birthday Giulio! (15th Feb)

BG from http://www.topit.me/item/4991863
Last edited by Mafumafu , edited 21 times in total.
Echoy
141 posts
Joined December 2013
Echoy
Hello>3<
说实在的没挑出什么问题，都是在鸡蛋里挑骨头

-Basic-
00:04:253 (3) – 这个拉长一格再往前一格，因为00:03:653 (2) –跟的音没有得到呼应，会觉得不舒服

-Intermediate-
00:05:353 – 这里有个很明显的变化，要不要加一个note(1/6)？不过对normal来说似乎…你来抉择吧
00:07:253 (1) – 一个音量较低的drum finish还不错，试试30%音量
00:15:053 (1) – 加个whistle似乎还不错
00:16:853 (1) – 这个感觉和00:15:653 (4) –呼应，whistle还是比较必要的
00:18:653 (5) – clap
00:22:753 - 你来看要不要加个note
00:22:853 (5) – 加whistle（稍微降低音量），明亮的弦乐器我的个人倾向一般是加whistle，所以00:23:853 (6) - 也会加，不知道你喜欢么
00:20:453 (3) – 开头加个whistle咧？
00:25:853 (5) –尾部的clap是故意的吗？感觉应该去掉
Mafumafu
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Mafumafu

Echoy wrote:

Hello>3<
说实在的没挑出什么问题，都是在鸡蛋里挑骨头

-Basic-
00:04:253 (3) – 这个拉长一格再往前一格，因为00:03:653 (2) –跟的音没有得到呼应，会觉得不舒服 加了个note

-Intermediate-
00:05:353 – 这里有个很明显的变化，要不要加一个note(1/6)？不过对normal来说似乎…你来抉择吧 还是不了，有点难
00:07:253 (1) – 一个音量较低的drum finish还不错，试试30%音量
00:15:053 (1) – 加个whistle似乎还不错
00:16:853 (1) – 这个感觉和00:15:653 (4) –呼应，whistle还是比较必要的
00:18:653 (5) – clap
00:22:753 - 你来看要不要加个note 还是不了，有点难
00:22:853 (5) – 加whistle（稍微降低音量），明亮的弦乐器我的个人倾向一般是加whistle，所以00:23:853 (6) - 也会加，不知道你喜欢么
00:20:453 (3) – 开头加个whistle咧？
00:25:853 (5) –尾部的clap是故意的吗？感觉应该去掉
其他的都改了
感谢！
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
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Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
nazi

[General]
既然图比较简单 建议音效方面可以弄得更复杂一些，现在音效上还是有些单薄了

[Normal]
00:05:453 (2,5) - 这个建议叠好
00:06:053 (3,5,1) - 等距一下
00:07:253 (1,2) - copy前面一个
00:12:053 (1,2,3) - 这样不太美观

[Easy]
00:09:653 (1,2) - 包好
00:19:853 (1,2) - 包好

真没啥好摸..凑点摸直接rank得了
AnreFM
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AnreFM
<3
Mafumafu
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AnreFM wrote:

<3
wow Anre! :3
AnOzi Changle
119 posts
Joined July 2014
AnOzi Changle
真的可以直接rank了

随便写点挑骨头凑摸吧


[Inter...shenmegui]
00:06:053 (3,5,1) - 可以稍微移动一下刚好成三角形
00:10:253 (2,3,4) - ^
00:15:053 (1,2,3) - ^ 并且感觉4的位置不是很好
00:28:053 (4,5) - 不顺手
00:33:653 (1) - 往中间摆可好？


[Basic]
感觉更难读
00:19:853 (1) - 经过精准测量发现没包好 291,195



感觉太短了。。。
Mafumafu
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Mafumafu

yf_bmp wrote:

nazi

[General]
既然图比较简单 建议音效方面可以弄得更复杂一些，现在音效上还是有些单薄了 我尽量。。。。音效好难qwq

[Normal]
00:05:453 (2,5) - 这个建议叠好 这么远应该没事吧
00:06:053 (3,5,1) - 等距一下
00:07:253 (1,2) - copy前面一个
00:12:053 (1,2,3) - 这样不太美观 还可以吧。。flow也挺顺的感觉

[Easy]
00:09:653 (1,2) - 包好
00:19:853 (1,2) - 包好

其他的都改了！

真没啥好摸..凑点摸直接rank得了 唉，没5mod不好说话啊
感谢！
Mafumafu
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Mafumafu

ctpsky wrote:

真的可以直接rank了

随便写点挑骨头凑摸吧


[Inter...shenmegui]
00:06:053 (3,5,1) - 可以稍微移动一下刚好成三角形
00:10:253 (2,3,4) - ^
00:15:053 (1,2,3) - ^ 并且感觉4的位置不是很好
00:28:053 (4,5) - 不顺手
00:33:653 (1) - 往中间摆可好？


[Basic]
感觉更难读
00:19:853 (1) - 经过精准测量发现没包好 291,195



感觉太短了。。。
基本和上面的差不多！ 都改了！ 谢谢！
Mafumafu
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Updated Again！
Intelli
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Intelli
Hi! From modding q

First things first, I just think that the combo colors are way too bright for the background image. Darken them!

Basic:
  1. 00:04:053 (3) - Remove. It sounds nice, but it will confuse players at the level it's mapped at. Remember the audience!

  2. 00:23:853 (2) - Move over and down a bit. http://gyazo.com/16d39fd839ab9a0c8c24d2203c7e596b

  3. 00:38:453 (1) - End the spinner here, it's an Easy lol
Very nice

Intermediate:
  1. 00:07:853 (1) - Remove NC

  2. 00:15:053 (1) - Make it like this: http://gyazo.com/d240cbea8082ccfe462f8ee7fd9f68fb or something similar.
Very nice for a map somewhat early in development :)
Mafumafu
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Mafumafu

IntelliTroodon wrote:

Hi! From modding q

First things first, I just think that the combo colors are way too bright for the background image. Darken them!

Basic:
  1. 00:04:053 (3) - Remove. It sounds nice, but it will confuse players at the level it's mapped at. Remember the audience! OK!

  2. 00:23:853 (2) - Move over and down a bit. http://gyazo.com/16d39fd839ab9a0c8c24d2203c7e596b OK!

  3. 00:38:453 (1) - End the spinner here, it's an Easy lol Hmm, that will be inconsistent with Intermediate..
Very nice

Intermediate:
  1. 00:07:853 (1) - Remove NC OK

  2. 00:15:053 (1) - Make it like this: http://gyazo.com/d240cbea8082ccfe462f8ee7fd9f68fb or something similar. Hmm this one is not fine imo so just keep my own :p
Very nice for a map somewhat early in development :)
Thank you! :)
z1085684963
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irc
2015-02-27 20:09 z1085684963: 晚上好热瓜子
2015-02-27 20:09 Regraz: 晚上好！
2015-02-27 20:09 z1085684963: ！！
2015-02-27 20:09 Regraz: >w<
2015-02-27 20:10 z1085684963: >w<
2015-02-27 20:11 z1085684963: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/630519 Linked Horizon - moshi kono Kabe no Naka ga Ikken no Ie dato shitara [Liberty]]
2015-02-27 20:11 z1085684963: 需要摸吗
2015-02-27 20:12 Regraz: 啊。。。这个。。准备找BN了
2015-02-27 20:13 z1085684963: 没事,以后要摸找我;w;
2015-02-27 20:13 Regraz: 十分感谢！。。。如果可以的话有一张其他的图。。。行吗？
2015-02-27 20:14 z1085684963: 好的没问题
2015-02-27 20:14 Regraz: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/640501 tennenouji - Daivan Prison (fade-out)]
2015-02-27 20:14 Regraz: 谢谢啦！
2015-02-27 20:16 z1085684963: 感觉你喜欢短的
2015-02-27 20:16 Regraz: 其实是偷懒【233
2015-02-27 20:16 z1085684963: 233
2015-02-27 20:29 z1085684963: 速刷hard233
2015-02-27 20:29 Regraz: Hard。。。。;w;
2015-02-27 20:41 z1085684963: ;w;实在没什么可摸得
2015-02-27 20:41 z1085684963: best of 2015
2015-02-27 20:42 Regraz: QwQ
2015-02-27 20:42 Regraz: 那。。那就算了吧
2015-02-27 20:42 Regraz: 还是感谢
2015-02-27 20:42 z1085684963: 0先等等啊
2015-02-27 20:42 z1085684963: 00:29:453 (2) -
2015-02-27 20:43 z1085684963: 这样摆太丑，拉直和3平行吧
2015-02-27 20:43 Regraz: 嗯。。。好
2015-02-27 20:44 z1085684963: 后面不加clap是因为音量变小吗
2015-02-27 20:44 Regraz: 是00:28:253 (5) - 这个之后？
2015-02-27 20:45 z1085684963: 对
2015-02-27 20:45 Regraz: 嗯。。。。是我漏加了。。。我补上
2015-02-27 20:45 Regraz: 音效还有感觉不太好的地方吗？别的modder有说音效不是很好
2015-02-27 20:47 z1085684963: 因为图的音乐太少了所以会突出这个问题吧
2015-02-27 20:47 Regraz: 嗯。。所以我加音效的时候也有点头疼。。。
2015-02-27 20:48 z1085684963: 音乐少音效也不好加啊
2015-02-27 20:48 Regraz: 唉。。。;w;
2015-02-27 20:49 z1085684963: ;w;
2015-02-27 20:50 z1085684963: 没别的了
2015-02-27 20:51 Regraz: 好。。多谢。。。。那就算irc了吧！
2015-02-27 20:51 z1085684963: 祝起飞
2015-02-27 20:51 Regraz: post在论坛里？
2015-02-27 20:51 z1085684963: 恩
2015-02-27 20:51 Regraz: 感谢www 我加油
2015-02-27 20:51 z1085684963: www
Lobelia
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Lobelia
[ Basic ]
00:06:053 (2) - 还是和前面统一的下节奏比较好QWQ http://puu.sh/gfTni/ef70d0df05.jpg 跟前面这种← ←
00:26:453 (1) - 这里FLOW感觉不太顺滑条往上弯一点？
00:27:653 (2) - 间距调整下

[ Intermediate ]
00:15:053 (1,2,3,4) - 这地方单点太多了QWQ不太协调
00:12:653 (2) - 间距
00:22:253 (3) - 间距
Mafumafu
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Mafumafu

[ Abhor ] wrote:

[ Basic ]
00:06:053 (2) - 还是和前面统一的下节奏比较好QWQ http://puu.sh/gfTni/ef70d0df05.jpg 跟前面这种← ← ♂还是感觉变化一点吧
00:26:453 (1) - 这里FLOW感觉不太顺滑条往上弯一点？
00:27:653 (2) - 间距调整下

[ Intermediate ]
00:15:053 (1,2,3,4) - 这地方单点太多了QWQ不太协调
00:12:653 (2) - 间距
00:22:253 (3) - 间距
其他都改了，感谢mod！
schwarzvgrune
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schwarzvgrune
OMG I LOVE BL GOOD LUCK IM ROOTING FOR YOU >w<b
Mafumafu
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schwarzvgrune wrote:

OMG I LOVE BL GOOD LUCK IM ROOTING FOR YOU >w<b
Thank u for ur support!
Kyouren
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Kyouren
Daisuki Daisuki Daisuki >w< >w< >w<!!!¡¡¡
Ranked this plz~ :3
Mafumafu
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gokugohan12468 wrote:

Daisuki Daisuki Daisuki >w< >w< >w<!!!¡¡¡
Ranked this plz~ :3
Haha I will! :3
Thank you for your support!
Fushimi Rio
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[General]

为什么我总觉得yaoi里的男人长的都是一张脸
Audio leadin 加到1500，给玩家准备时间（其实是有规定

[Basic]

HP-1
00:33:853 (1) - 结束点应该再往后拖1/6

[Intermediate]

AR6.5有点太高了吧 6就够了
00:09:053 (5,6) - 这里不像00:15:053 (1,2) - ，第三个音比第二个音弱 先用circle再用slider比较合适
00:33:853 (1) - 同basic

鸡蛋里挑骨头没什么意思 就这样吧
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