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Thnx alot for your input, I appreciate the big effortm1223961117 wrote:
Please reply all modders' mod, let us know what you change and what you don't change.
[General]
- No problem.
[Easy]done
- Slider Velocity still too fast, why you just add slow down greenline instead fix Timing??
- And are you using Tiny size grid to make diff?? I think you are not.
00:01:052 (2) - DS
00:01:701 (4) - Slider end here 00:02:187 - and DS fix distance fixed slider
00:08:025 (3) - add reverse slider?? I think it's good I decided against the reverse slider- You are not using same DS space to make diff. I can't catch your spacing.
00:13:376 (1,2) - Fix DS
I remapped every DS with a much lower slider velocity
0.8x
00:21:160 (3) - DS
00:21:809 (4) - ^
00:23:106 (2) - ^
00:30:890 (2) - ^
00:34:133 (6) - Make like this: http://puu.sh/gRjyk/3a74680414.jpg Don't hiding 00:36:079 (3,4) - fixed
00:35:755 (2) - I think no need this circle, del it deleted
00:50:349 (1) - del this slider?? unrankable, make like this: 00:09:484 (1,1) - give spinner and next note 4 white line space fixed
00:50:998 - remove whistle, add finish done
00:56:187 - finish, 00:56:187 (1) - Ctrl+H?? done
00:58:133 (3) - DS fix
00:58:782 (4) - remove all finish, same 01:00:079 (6) - done
01:01:376 - remove clap, add finish done
01:06:565 - add finish done
01:12:403 (2,3) - remove all finish done
01:16:944 - and 01:17:917 - add finish done
01:20:511 (5) - ^, remove whistle done
01:24:565 - spinner start here
[Normal]Remapped all DS with a much lower slider velocity
- Slider Velocity still too fast, why you just add slow down greenline instead fix Timing??
- And are you using Tiny size grid to make diff?? I think you are not.
- Use 1/2 to make Normal diff
00:08:025 (3) - Slider end white line. Same 00:08:673 (4) - fixed
00:10:782 (1,2,3,4) - Are your sure this is right rhythm?? Same 00:15:322 (3) - remmapped
00:15:971 (1,2) - this is very hard for newbie, please reduce to use this set. fixed
00:17:755 (2) - slider start 00:17:917 - ?? fixed
00:20:836 - why this part empty?? keep to make. Same 00:31:863 - Mapped them
00:25:052 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Follow drum or voice, not guitar please, it's very hard to play and listen remapped comepletly
00:40:133 (1) - End red line please done
00:46:214 - End white line, Same 00:46:295 (7) - done
00:46:782 (8) - Slider end 00:47:430 - and add circle 00:47:755 - ?? done
00:57:160 (2) - DS
00:58:133 (4) - ^
01:05:268 (1,1) - All object must follow DS in Normal diff, it's very important
01:14:673 (2,3) - make like 01:09:484 (8) - done
01:17:917 (4,1) - This is good flow, keeping
01:24:728 - spinner start here
[Hard]
00:02:511 (3) - Del circle?? done
00:05:106 (4) - ^ done
00:24:890 (6) - remove all finish done
00:26:673 - add circle?? done
00:29:268 - ^ done
00:49:700 (2) - Hiding on 00:48:079 (1) - 's tail fixed
00:50:917 - where is finish?? done
01:17:755 (3) - del circle done
01:20:349 (4) - ^ done
01:21:484 (6,7) - please let them not to be covered by 01:20:511 (5) - fixed
01:22:457 (2,3) - too close, fix distance fixed
01:24:646 - spinner start here done
※Perfectly follow lyric. Next time you can try follow lyric and sounds. I remapped some parts to follow the drum
[Insane]
- Hard set in Insane diff, you can follow more things, not just follow voice
- I said you can "check" this diff and add something in your Insane: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/635743, Don't be afraid
- I want to see Hard and Insane have different set.
thnx for your input!ohad1881 wrote:
hi there!
from my m4m reverse queue!
general-wtf is this artist remove what is in the ()
fix DS in easy and normal you have a lot of problems... see this - http://prntscr.com/6lwsn7 and this http://prntscr.com/6lwsps -the prev and the next should be closer as 0-3 to each other.
easy
i cant mod this- this is to weird
fix DS and call me back
normal
i cant mod this either call me back after u fix DS
hard
00:04:782 (2,3,4) - make them DS remapped
00:12:079 (1,2,3,4) - this jumps are to far from each other to hard diff fixed
00:30:728 (3) - if u want to make a roundy slider do it like this http://prntscr.com/6lwtus fixed
00:40:133 (3) - ^^ fixed
00:48:079 (1) - ugly overlap fixed
00:49:700 (2) - ^^ fixed
01:05:917 (4) - make it away from 3 dont know what you meant by that
01:14:025 (8) - stack it done
insane- ar 8 pls
00:01:701 (4,1,6) - if u want to make a wave do it like this http://prntscr.com/6lwum3
00:08:025 (9) - wtf.. fixed
00:08:673 (11) - ^^ fixed
00:29:755 (8) - so uglyyy fixed
00:41:755 (2) - what the kept
01:10:295 (5) - pls kept
USE DS TO MAKE THINGS LOOK GOOD
well, i see you are a new mapper, witch is ok- but ur map has to many problems and you should really read guide for beginners...
ill send you my map that you should mod in pm!
gl!
Thnx for your mod. Those small suggestions actually made me think alot about my hit placementshaha5957 wrote:
oh fuck my hour of mods are gone due to shitty browser error =.=
I'll make it really short i guess ;w; let's take a look at [insane] difficulty.
for example, 00:32:673 (2,3,4) - this part here, overlaps eachother really bad. I would suggest you to completely avoid this kind of pattern for now, but anyways
Your current pattern : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945091
only small adjustments and looks much better : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945097
other example : 00:34:619 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) -
your current pattern :http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945144
another small adjustments and looks better : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2945149
your map currently "plays" ok but the appearance of map is honestly very poor overall. This can be fixed by making very small adjustments like i did above.
use view->grid level->4 since it makes it much easier to do that..
sorry I'm too lazy to redo the hour long mod again orz but mainly your map currently suffers too much from poor appearance!
good luck!
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/129734
Here's a good example of how "pretty map" looks like.. see how he used overlaps and placed circles? the rhythm isn't too different from yours, but looks much nicer due to small differences..
[/box]Ah ty for your input. I'll make the changes along with the person above you tonight and what I've changed. Ty for your timeKhora wrote:
Hello , how are you today ? So , i am going to mod the Insane diff pf ur ur map .
Overall toughts ( on things that u need to improve )
- So , first thing that i noticed was that the slider speed is too slow . Yes , there are some situations that slow sliders are better , but not in the style that u mapped / song / diff . It would take some time to fix everything , but i think that this is a crucial mistake on ur map .
- Some sliders arent in with a good shape
- The end looks kinda rushed , you should work on that .
Open
[box=]Insane
00:01:701 (4,5,6,1) - I didnt like the sliders ( the first one isnt bad , but needs some work i think , but the second one just doesnt fit the situation ) . Try this http://puu.sh/gTOHy/2d2428d0c0.jpg
00:03:321 - shouldnt be a NC
00:05:268 (8) - make the curves a bit smaller
00:06:403 (2) - move this just a tiny bit to the right ( so it gets more flow )
00:07:619 (7,8,9,1,2) - this little stream doesnt fit this part of the song . U can add 2 circles instead on the stream ( with the regular 1/4 )
00:09:321 (7,8,9) - change these for a slider
00:11:267 (10) - move a bit to the right so it wont be flat
00:13:375 (8) - make the curve smaller
00:15:971 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - distance not symetrical , try to work on that
00:19:051 (8) - i think you should remove this slider and put a circle on 00:19:051 and 00:19:375 ( yes , remove the another slider )
00:19:862 put a slider from there to here 00:20:024 , and make it NC ( then remove the NC from 00:20:187 (1) - )
00:25:051 (1,2,3,4) - make a little curve/another thing with the circles , but do not do a line :p
00:25:700 - toooo slow
00:26:349 (6,7,8,9,10) - this part is a bit strange , try to make it full of 1/4 sliders / circles
00:29:430 (9,10) - i dont like these small sliders , i think that they shouldn't be here . Put another type of sliders / circles that u thing that would fit well
00:34:375 (7) - wrong place xD , put it in 00:34:457
00:37:700 - make the spinner start there and end here 00:38:997
00:39:321 this part shouldnt be on the spinner , since now it will be empty , fill it with little jumps , sliders , whatever you want .
00:47:267 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream is a bit pointless , try to continue the same style of 00:43:214 (1,2,3)
00:52:294 something MUST start here ( and its on the middle of a slider D: ) . Do this : http://puu.sh/gTPHd/b7d747c1c8.jpg ( the position is up to you )
00:54:889 same mistake around here . do this : http://puu.sh/gTPCI/42bd649c58.jpg
00:57:321 (7) - remove it
00:58:781 (1) - make it a bit bigger till it reaches the red thing
01:00:240 Make this "5" slider end here
01:01:700 (2,3,4,5,6) - remove all this and make something with the previous style ( of 0:50 ~ )
01:08:511 (2) - collapsed with the previous notes . try to bring it up a bit
01:20:186 (7) - make a little curve with this slider
01:27:321 make the spinner end here
Well , I think thats it . Anything you need , you can pm me . Good luck