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ChouCho - Kawaru Mirai

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Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Iceskulls
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 11 มีนาคม 2558 at 11:32:13

Artist: ChouCho
Title: Kawaru Mirai
Source: 神様のメモ帳
Tags: ちょうちょ It's the Only NEET Thing to Do Kami-sama no Memo-chou Notebook of God Heaven's Memo Pad Opening Full lantis
BPM: 167
Filesize: 7823kb
Play Time: 03:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.55 stars, 275 notes)
  2. Hard (3.3 stars, 607 notes)
  3. Insane (4.26 stars, 803 notes)
  4. Normal (2.03 stars, 353 notes)
Download: ChouCho - Kawaru Mirai
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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ChouCho <3

3rd ranked map
09/03/2015 Bubbled by xxdeathx
11/03/2015 Ranked by handsome


Ready for mods
22/02/2015 fixed metadata a bit




Special thanks

Modders
Adol Christin
12345g
NewIpas
reminixe
kakifly
-Nya-
Fantastica
FlobuFlobs
Come[Back]Home
FireHawk60
bigfrog
zj0924
Remilia_CO
jloughman14
xxdeathx
handsome
Last edited by Iceskulls , edited 36 times in total.
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
Hi from your queue, for M4M.

Because of this beautiful song, I watched God's Notebook anime. Last week I finished the light novel. If you didn't read the novel, I highly recommend it. The story is really good except the ending..... (Don't regard this as a Detective Novel)

Edit: Ummm... Generally this is a simple but clear map. Therefore there are few things that are necessary to improve, I think. Nice job!

Insane

  1. 00:43:756 (1) - Reverse slider here is ok but.... Comparing with the same rhythm at 01:55:613, reverse slider is not really a good choice.
  2. 00:41:601 (4) - Blanket can be improved.
  3. 01:57:948 (3) - Sounds weird, only one reverse will be fine.
  4. 01:51:660 (4) - Suggest increasing the space between this slider and previous triple, or adjusting the triple's direction slightly downward. Both would be better.
  5. 01:51:660 (4) - Blanket can be improved.
  6. 02:30:104 (1,2,3) - Space between them is a bit too large (especially between the second reverse and long one), which is a bit tricky.
  7. 03:30:463 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved.
  8. 03:32:619 (3,4,5) - Maybe you can try some new patterns rather than this. The current one is boring.
  9. 03:46:810 (2,3) - Suggest lining them up.

Hard

  1. 00:10:702 (1,2) - Please stack them perfectly . Current one is hard to read.
  2. 00:16:092 (4,1) - Try blanket?
  3. 00:24:535 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved.
  4. 00:28:487 (2,3) - ^
  5. 00:51:660 (1,1) - Try stacking them perfectly or add a circle. It's tricky for people who are not familar with this song.
  6. 00:57:050 (2,3) - Blanket
  7. 00:58:128 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved.
  8. 01:04:595 (3,4,1) - 01:11:780 (3,4) - 01:31:541 (2,3) - 01:33:337 (3,4) - 02:50:044 (5,2,3) - ^
  9. 03:51:481 (4) - Line up this with next circle and slider.

That's all my mod. Good luck for ranked!
Last edited by Adol Christin , edited 1 time in total.
12345g_old
12 posts
Joined January 2015
12345g_old
Hi, attempting to do the M4M for your queue
Of course only if you find this helpful. Modding the Easy and Normal only. If you accept, I will only ask mod for Easy and Normal
Mod
Easy

  1. 00:29:385 (1) - and 00:30:822 (2) - : what about making it perfectly straight by adjusting the sliders' start and end points? (unless this is intended)
    If you decide to do it, change this in easy.osu:
    136,288,29385,6,0,L|140:104,1,158,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    296,120,30822,2,0,L|299:277,1,158,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    to this:
    140,280,29385,6,0,L|140:104,1,158,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    300,120,30822,2,0,L|300:280,1,158,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:49:684 (2) - while it fits the song, there's something about avoiding short sliders in easy
    so maybe replace this short slider with a hit circle on the slider's start 00:49:684 - or at the slider's end 00:49:864 - depending on the song
    If you decide to do it, place the hit circle carefully to not ruin the distance spacing
    Similar problems, skip if you don't agree:
    1. 00:51:660 (2) - ^
    2. 01:14:834 (4) - ^
    3. 01:16:271 (2) - ^
    4. 01:19:145 (2) - ^
    5. 01:34:954 (3) - ^
    6. 01:56:690 (2) - ^
    7. 02:02:978 (1) - ^
    8. 02:03:517 (2) - ^
    9. 03:17:708 (2) - ^
    10. 03:18:247 (3) - ^
    11. 03:42:858 (2) - ^
    12. 03:45:732 (2) - ^
  3. 02:33:178 - the break should end when the next object starts to appear. maybe extend this break until 02:43:155
    If you decide to do it, change this in easy.osu:
    2,153178,159475
    to this:
    2,153178,163155

Normal

  1. 00:06:391 (1) - this slider appears too soon before this 00:04:954 (1) - spinner ends, maybe it's too hard for normal?
    if you agree, delete the spinner or replace it with a hit circle or a slider
  2. 02:18:607 (1) - what about moving the slider's end point upwards to make it flow better/reduce the overlapping with 02:19:145 (2) - ?
    if you decide to do this, in the normal.osu, change this:
    236,152,138607,6,0,L|76:132,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    to something like this:
    236,152,138607,6,0,L|136:100,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 02:20:044 (3) - ^
    before:
    240,280,140044,2,0,L|376:240,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    after:
    240,280,140044,2,0,L|352:288,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 02:31:361 (1) - this spinner is too short. maybe replace it with a slider, or extend it to 02:32:978 - and remove 02:32:978 (1)
  5. 02:33:178 - the break should end when the next object starts to appear. maybe extend this break until 02:43:425
    If you decide to do it, change this in normal.osu:
    2,153178,159475
    to this:
    2,153178,163425
Good luck
Ipas
806 posts
Joined September 2013
Ipas
Hello!
M4M from your Modding Queue!
I can only mod Hard and Insane because this map drain time is too long..

[Hard]
00:11:421 (2) - Move to x:284 y:184?
00:51:301 (2) - Move to x:196 y:168?
00:51:660 (1) - Move to x:180 y:172?
01:13:936 (1,2,3) - I think it's hard to read. Change the flow please >_<
01:20:403 (4) - Make this slider more longer just for one tick. So, this ( 01:20:672 ) will be mapped too :3 That tick is sounds good after i make your slider longer.
01:24:175 - Add circle this and put your slider ( 01:24:535 (2) ) at 01:24:355 and end of the slider at 01:25:074
OR
01:24:175 - Add circle this and starts a spinner with whistle from 01:24:355 till 01:25:433
OR
You can change it like your insane :) ( 01:23:996 (1,2,3) on Insane )
02:03:157 (2,3) - I don't like this note placement :( If you can please change it
03:08:906 (1,3) - I think it's overlapped. I don't like this.
03:17:888 (2) - I don't like this note placement :( If you can please change it

*I'm sorry when my English was so bad

[Insane]
00:04:774 (6) - Stack it to 00:04:056 (4) sliderhead
00:17:888 (1,3) - Why this is overlapped? Change pls :( You can make blanket for another way to fix this
00:29:026 (4,1) - Stack please
00:29:385 (1,4) - Why this is overlapped? Change pls :( You can make blanket for another way to fix this
00:35:134 (1,4) - ^
00:48:427 (2,4) - Stack it
00:55:972 (4,1) - Stack head of slider (1) to end of slider (4)
01:14:295 (2,4) - Stack it
01:18:786 (2,4) - Stack circle (4) to end of slider (2) or you can move circle (4) to another place
01:44:834 (5,7) - Stack?
02:07:110 (1,3) - Overlapped again. Move circle (3) to another place
02:16:810 (4,2) - Stack ._.
02:20:403 (2,5,6,7) - Stack or move circle (2) to another place
02:22:559 (4,2) - Stack please
02:24:894 (3) - Move to x:273 y:207
02:26:331 (3,4,5) - ^
( 02:31:181 (3) - I LOVE THIS SLIDER :D )
03:24:714 (1,4) - Stack it
03:28:128 (3) - Move to x:260 y:248
03:28:846 (1,3) - Why this is overlapped? Change pls :( You can make blanket for another way to fix this
03:41:062 (3) - Move to x:216 y:264

*I'm sorry when my English is so bad

That's my mod. Don't forget to mod my map :D
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/271339
dsco
287 posts
Joined April 2014
dsco
M4M from your queue

Insane
maybe higher OD, 7.5? would be a good map for it.

00:01:181 (2,3) - ctrl+g 2 and move 3 closer, doesn't read rhythm well to start.
00:07:648 (6,1) - make spacing more even?
00:09:984 (4) - curve slider to improve visual flow
00:19:325 (1,3) - slider overlaps, move 3 for readability
00:21:301 (3,4) - big jump compared to others
00:28:666 (3,5) - very difficult to read, flows odd
00:35:672 (2,3) - consider making triple
00:46:990 (2) - rotate slider more? looks a bit ugly because it is unbalanced with the next one.
00:48:068 (1,3) - hard to read
00:51:301 (1,2) - hard to read due to slider velocity and somewhat strange rhythm
01:13:038 (3) - move higher to more equally distribute spacing
01:16:451 (4) - space farther from 01:16:631 (5)
01:29:744 (1,2) - space more to read rhythm better. put 01:29:744 (1) under 01:28:487 (2)
01:54:355 (2) - space equally between 01:54:175 (1,3)
01:59:205 (3) - move higher for visibility
02:11:421 (1,2,3,4) - weird jump pattern for sake of 02:11:780 (3) fitting on 02:11:062 (5). move 02:11:960 (4) either farther up or down, looks ugly
02:12:499 (6) - doesn't flow, ctrl+g?
02:17:708 (4,5) - strange double. make triple?
02:23:277 (2,3,4) - looks ugly
02:27:229 (1,2,3) - fullscreen space to improve rhythm readability?
02:28:487 (1) - make triple instead of slider
02:31:181 (3) - ugly. try something with redpoints, like this: example
02:32:978 (1) - consider removing and starting break there
02:40:523 (4,5) - space more?
02:43:756 (3,4,5,6,7) - change to stream for emphasis / energy. if not, move 02:44:295 (7) so no overlap. hard to read.
02:48:068 (3,4) - space more, first three sliders have jumps in between
02:51:481 (6) - space slightly so no overlap.
02:54:535 (1,2,3) - space evenly between 02:54:355 (7,4)
03:09:265 (2) - curve to blanket 03:09:625 (3)
03:09:804 (4) - point away from triple, looks better and flows more like the rest of the map
03:11:062 (4) - larger jump to match 03:10:702 (2,3)
03:23:637 (2) - ctrl+g
03:33:876 (3) - very big jump comparatively, move closer
03:36:571 (2,3) -point more away from each other
03:40:523 (1) - ctrl+g or move more left, awkward flow
03:49:505 (2,3,4) - weird jump pattern
03:12:858 (5) and 03:44:475 (6) use earlier in map? weird to introduce the rhythm very late.
Hard
00:07:110 (3) pair with 00:07:469 (4) looks ugly to have 00:07:469 (4) alone
00:10:702 (1,2) - awkward anti-jump, especially with AR8
00:49:145 (1) - consider reversing slider. weird rhythm.
00:51:660 (1,1) - another bad anti-jump, especially because slider points to the beat.
00:57:409 (3,1) - random rhythm gap, disrupts flow
01:07:289 (2) - big jump comparatively
01:15:014 (5,1) - space more to emphasize rhythm. if its close enough to be read like 01:14:654 (4,5) it should be spaced
01:17:888 (5) - make 1/4 instead of 1/8. shouldn't have 1/8th in a hard
01:20:762 (5) - match rhythm of 01:20:403 (4) for emphasis and dont overlap 01:21:122 (1)
01:23:637 (5) - make into reverse slider instead of having a 1/2 slider after
01:39:625 (1,2,3) - awkward rhythm. idea
02:03:517 (3,1) - same as 00:51:660 (1,1)
02:12:140 (3,1) - space more for rhythm
02:29:924 (4,1) - less jump? since part is difficult
02:39:445 (3,4) - same as 00:07:110 (3,4)
03:12:858 (5) - change to 1/4
03:18:247 (1,1) - same as above
03:41:421 (5,1) - space more, weird rhythm gap
03:44:475 (5) - 1/4
03:51:481 (4) - make triple
Normal
00:03:517 (1) - reverse slider
00:15:014 (1) - could blanket slider end better
00:27:948 (3) - looks ugly, curve / make more interesting
00:32:259 (1) - curve to make distinct from 00:32:978 (2,3)
00:47:169 (2) - match rhythm of other sliders, weird rhythm to play in a normal
00:50:762 (1,2,3) - awkward rhythm, change or spinner
00:52:738 (2,3) - hard rhythm for a normal
01:05:313 (3) - could blanket slider end better
01:17:349 (5) - put on next downbeat instead of upbeat, fits better
01:23:996 (1,2) - same as the rest of the break, may as well delete
01:34:595 (5) - put on next downbeat
01:44:834 (2) - blanket the next slider beginning, looks ugly
02:02:619 (1,2,3) - you should use this rhythm for the part earlier
02:04:595 (2,3) - weird rhythm for normal
02:30:104 (1) - move the spinner to begin here. too short of a spinner as it is, anyway
02:44:475 (1) - why does the break end so far before here?
02:46:631 (2) - a bit too far away
02:53:637 (2) - make reverse slider and delete 02:54:175 (3,4). plays better
03:15:373 (4) - space more evenly
03:19:325 (2,3) - again
03:49:145 (3) - space farther, looks ugly
03:51:301 (2) - curve like 03:50:583 (1)
Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Iceskulls
:O

Adol Christin

Adol Christin wrote:

Hi from your queue, for M4M.

Because of this beautiful song, I watched God's Notebook anime. Last week I finished the light novel. If you didn't read the novel, I highly recommend it. The story is really good except the ending..... (Don't regard this as a Detective Novel)

Edit: Ummm... Generally this is a simple but clear map. Therefore there are few things that are necessary to improve, I think. Nice job!

Insane

  1. 00:43:756 (1) - Reverse slider here is ok but.... Comparing with the same rhythm at 01:55:613, reverse slider is not really a good choice. :arrow: reverse here is to make emphasis the tone of the vocal+intrument here , it looks fine to me
  2. 00:41:601 (4) - Blanket can be improved. :arrow: looks okay
  3. 01:57:948 (3) - Sounds weird, only one reverse will be fine. :arrow: I want to map the instrument here
  4. 01:51:660 (4) - Suggest increasing the space between this slider and previous triple, or adjusting the triple's direction slightly downward. Both would be better. :arrow: ok
  5. 01:51:660 (4) - Blanket can be improved. :arrow: moved the note from above mods
  6. 02:30:104 (1,2,3) - Space between them is a bit too large (especially between the second reverse and long one), which is a bit tricky. :arrow: fixed a bit here
  7. 03:30:463 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved. :arrow: not that bad
  8. 03:32:619 (3,4,5) - Maybe you can try some new patterns rather than this. The current one is boring. :arrow: ok
  9. 03:46:810 (2,3) - Suggest lining them up. :arrow: ok

Hard

  1. 00:10:702 (1,2) - Please stack them perfectly . Current one is hard to read. :arrow: fixed a bit
  2. 00:16:092 (4,1) - Try blanket? :arrow: nah
  3. 00:24:535 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved. :arrow: looks fine
  4. 00:28:487 (2,3) - ^ :arrow: fine
  5. 00:51:660 (1,1) - Try stacking them perfectly or add a circle. It's tricky for people who are not familar with this song. :arrow: will consider this
  6. 00:57:050 (2,3) - Blanket :arrow: nah
  7. 00:58:128 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved. :arrow: looks fine
  8. 01:04:595 (3,4,1) - 01:11:780 (3,4) - 01:31:541 (2,3) - 01:33:337 (3,4) - 02:50:044 (5,2,3) - ^ :arrow: fixed some
  9. 03:51:481 (4) - Line up this with next circle and slider. :arrow: the current one fine imo

That's all my mod. Good luck for ranked!

12345g

12345g wrote:

Hi, attempting to do the M4M for your queue
Of course only if you find this helpful. Modding the Easy and Normal only. If you accept, I will only ask mod for Easy and Normal
[box=Mod]
Easy

  1. 00:29:385 (1) - and 00:30:822 (2) - : what about making it perfectly straight by adjusting the sliders' start and end points? (unless this is intended) :arrow: intened , stright sliders look boring to me
    If you decide to do it, change this in easy.osu:
    136,288,29385,6,0,L|140:104,1,158,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    296,120,30822,2,0,L|299:277,1,158,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    to this:
    140,280,29385,6,0,L|140:104,1,158,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    300,120,30822,2,0,L|300:280,1,158,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:49:684 (2) - while it fits the song, there's something about avoiding short sliders in easy
    so maybe replace this short slider with a hit circle on the slider's start 00:49:684 - or at the slider's end 00:49:864 - depending on the song
    If you decide to do it, place the hit circle carefully to not ruin the distance spacing :arrow: I find hit circle pretty a bit hard to play in easy so no
    Similar problems, skip if you don't agree:
    1. 00:51:660 (2) - ^
    2. 01:14:834 (4) - ^
    3. 01:16:271 (2) - ^
    4. 01:19:145 (2) - ^
    5. 01:34:954 (3) - ^
    6. 01:56:690 (2) - ^
    7. 02:02:978 (1) - ^
    8. 02:03:517 (2) - ^
    9. 03:17:708 (2) - ^
    10. 03:18:247 (3) - ^
    11. 03:42:858 (2) - ^
    12. 03:45:732 (2) - ^
  3. 02:33:178 - the break should end when the next object starts to appear. maybe extend this break until 02:43:155
    If you decide to do it, change this in easy.osu: :arrow: whoops didn't notice that lol
    2,153178,159475
    to this:
    2,153178,163155

Normal

  1. 00:06:391 (1) - this slider appears too soon before this 00:04:954 (1) - spinner ends, maybe it's too hard for normal?
    if you agree, delete the spinner or replace it with a hit circle or a slider :arrow: replace with slider
  2. 02:18:607 (1) - what about moving the slider's end point upwards to make it flow better/reduce the overlapping with 02:19:145 (2) - ?
    if you decide to do this, in the normal.osu, change this: :arrow: ok
    236,152,138607,6,0,L|76:132,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    to something like this:
    236,152,138607,6,0,L|136:100,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 02:20:044 (3) - ^ :arrow: this one looks fine
    before:
    240,280,140044,2,0,L|376:240,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    after:
    240,280,140044,2,0,L|352:288,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 02:31:361 (1) - this spinner is too short. maybe replace it with a slider, or extend it to 02:32:978 - and remove 02:32:978 (1) :arrow: replace with circle
  5. 02:33:178 - the break should end when the next object starts to appear. maybe extend this break until 02:43:425 :arrow: ok
    If you decide to do it, change this in normal.osu:
    2,153178,159475
    to this:
    2,153178,163425
Good luck[/box]

NewIpas

NewIpas wrote:

Hello!
M4M from your Modding Queue!
I can only mod Hard and Insane because this map drain time is too long..

[Hard]
00:11:421 (2) - Move to x:284 y:184? :arrow: changed placement
00:51:301 (2) - Move to x:196 y:168? :arrow: will consider
00:51:660 (1) - Move to x:180 y:172? :arrow: ^
01:13:936 (1,2,3) - I think it's hard to read. Change the flow please >_< :arrow: I don't think so
01:20:403 (4) - Make this slider more longer just for one tick. So, this ( 01:20:672 ) will be mapped too :3 That tick is sounds good after i make your slider longer. :arrow: ok
01:24:175 - Add circle this and put your slider ( 01:24:535 (2) ) at 01:24:355 and end of the slider at 01:25:074
OR
01:24:175 - Add circle this and starts a spinner with whistle from 01:24:355 till 01:25:433
OR
You can change it like your insane :) ( 01:23:996 (1,2,3) on Insane ) :arrow: want some variation between diffs and I'm fine with the current one
02:03:157 (2,3) - I don't like this note placement :( If you can please change it :arrow: will consider
03:08:906 (1,3) - I think it's overlapped. I don't like this. :arrow: fixed
03:17:888 (2) - I don't like this note placement :( If you can please change it :arrow: will consider

*I'm sorry when my English was so bad

[Insane]
00:04:774 (6) - Stack it to 00:04:056 (4) sliderhead :arrow: nah , it feel the same imo
00:17:888 (1,3) - Why this is overlapped? Change pls :( You can make blanket for another way to fix this
00:29:026 (4,1) - Stack please
00:29:385 (1,4) - Why this is overlapped? Change pls :( You can make blanket for another way to fix this
00:35:134 (1,4) - ^
00:48:427 (2,4) - Stack it
00:55:972 (4,1) - Stack head of slider (1) to end of slider (4)
01:14:295 (2,4) - Stack it
01:18:786 (2,4) - Stack circle (4) to end of slider (2) or you can move circle (4) to another place
01:44:834 (5,7) - Stack?
02:07:110 (1,3) - Overlapped again. Move circle (3) to another place
02:16:810 (4,2) - Stack ._.
02:20:403 (2,5,6,7) - Stack or move circle (2) to another place
02:22:559 (4,2) - Stack please :arrow: everything is my intentions :(
02:24:894 (3) - Move to x:273 y:207 :arrow: nah
02:26:331 (3,4,5) - ^ :arrow: nah
( 02:31:181 (3) - I LOVE THIS SLIDER :D ) :arrow: thanks
03:24:714 (1,4) - Stack it :arrow: why?
03:28:128 (3) - Move to x:260 y:248 :arrow: why?
03:28:846 (1,3) - Why this is overlapped? Change pls :( You can make blanket for another way to fix this :arrow: the overlapped is not that bad , I guess it doesn't really affect the gameplay that much , I really like how it is
03:41:062 (3) - Move to x:216 y:264 :arrow: why?

*I'm sorry when my English is so bad

That's my mod. Don't forget to mod my map :D
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/271339

reminixe

reminixe wrote:

M4M from your queue

Fixed a lots here
Insane
maybe higher OD, 7.5? would be a good map for it. :arrow: nah

00:01:181 (2,3) - ctrl+g 2 and move 3 closer, doesn't read rhythm well to start. :arrow: It not that hard to read here imo
00:07:648 (6,1) - make spacing more even? :arrow: this is jumps D:
00:09:984 (4) - curve slider to improve visual flow :arrow: looks fine
00:19:325 (1,3) - slider overlaps, move 3 for readability :arrow: looks fine
00:21:301 (3,4) - big jump compared to others :arrow: fixed
00:28:666 (3,5) - very difficult to read, flows odd :arrow: no, it's not
00:35:672 (2,3) - consider making triple :arrow: play weird for me
00:46:990 (2) - rotate slider more? looks a bit ugly because it is unbalanced with the next one. :arrow: ok
00:48:068 (1,3) - hard to read :arrow: I don't think so
00:51:301 (1,2) - hard to read due to slider velocity and somewhat strange rhythm :arrow: fixed a bit
01:13:038 (3) - move higher to more equally distribute spacing :arrow: looks fine
01:16:451 (4) - space farther from 01:16:631 (5) :arrow: fine
01:29:744 (1,2) - space more to read rhythm better. put 01:29:744 (1) under 01:28:487 (2) :arrow: asdsadasdsad, fine
01:54:355 (2) - space equally between 01:54:175 (1,3) :arrow: okay , jumps is used when I feel that the beat is really emphasized like the (3) one if you listen to the beat (3) sound quite really loud that I want to do sometihng instresting here so I use jumps to make it looks intreseting if I keep the spacing the notes would play boring and looks like hard diff
01:59:205 (3) - move higher for visibility :arrow: fine
02:11:421 (1,2,3,4) - weird jump pattern for sake of 02:11:780 (3) fitting on 02:11:062 (5). move 02:11:960 (4) either farther up or down, looks ugly :arrow: I don't see it really weird
02:12:499 (6) - doesn't flow, ctrl+g? :arrow: no
02:17:708 (4,5) - strange double. make triple? :arrow: no
02:23:277 (2,3,4) - looks ugly :arrow: no
02:27:229 (1,2,3) - fullscreen space to improve rhythm readability? :arrow: no
02:28:487 (1) - make triple instead of slider :arrow: no
02:31:181 (3) - ugly. try something with redpoints, like this: example :arrow: I don't like your slider
02:32:978 (1) - consider removing and starting break there :arrow: *rip*
02:40:523 (4,5) - space more? :arrow: (5) is not emphasized to me ......................
02:43:756 (3,4,5,6,7) - change to stream for emphasis / energy. if not, move 02:44:295 (7) so no overlap. hard to read. :arrow: fine
02:48:068 (3,4) - space more, first three sliders have jumps in between :arrow: ok
02:51:481 (6) - space slightly so no overlap. :arrow: tbh I love overlap
02:54:535 (1,2,3) - space evenly between 02:54:355 (7,4) :arrow: fine
03:09:265 (2) - curve to blanket 03:09:625 (3) :arrow: fine
03:09:804 (4) - point away from triple, looks better and flows more like the rest of the map :arrow: I wonder if I should trust you or not ,this wall of mods :< and I reject like most of them
03:11:062 (4) - larger jump to match 03:10:702 (2,3) :arrow: ok
03:23:637 (2) - ctrl+g :arrow: guess what I'm gonna say
03:33:876 (3) - very big jump comparatively, move closer :arrow: fine
03:36:571 (2,3) -point more away from each other :arrow: fine
03:40:523 (1) - ctrl+g or move more left, awkward flow :arrow: my map is not your taste then
03:49:505 (2,3,4) - weird jump pattern :arrow: ^
03:12:858 (5) and 03:44:475 (6) use earlier in map? weird to introduce the rhythm very late. :arrow: what do you mean
Hard
00:07:110 (3) pair with 00:07:469 (4) looks ugly to have 00:07:469 (4) alone :arrow: huh?
00:10:702 (1,2) - awkward anti-jump, especially with AR8 :arrow: fixed
00:49:145 (1) - consider reversing slider. weird rhythm. :arrow: fine
00:51:660 (1,1) - another bad anti-jump, especially because slider points to the beat. :arrow: will consider
00:57:409 (3,1) - random rhythm gap, disrupts flow :arrow: a small break
01:07:289 (2) - big jump comparatively :arrow: will consider
01:15:014 (5,1) - space more to emphasize rhythm. if its close enough to be read like 01:14:654 (4,5) it should be spaced :arrow: I really wanted to spaced it but I want the stack too so I guess I will keep this for awhile maybe , it's not that bad tho
01:17:888 (5) - make 1/4 instead of 1/8. shouldn't have 1/8th in a hard :arrow: ok
01:20:762 (5) - match rhythm of 01:20:403 (4) for emphasis and dont overlap 01:21:122 (1) :arrow: will consider
01:23:637 (5) - make into reverse slider instead of having a 1/2 slider after :arrow: fine
01:39:625 (1,2,3) - awkward rhythm. idea :arrow: it looks prett weird to ignore big white tick and I want the rhythm to be somehow simple a bit here
02:03:517 (3,1) - same as 00:51:660 (1,1) :arrow: same
02:12:140 (3,1) - space more for rhythm :arrow: ok
02:29:924 (4,1) - less jump? since part is difficult :arrow: will consider
02:39:445 (3,4) - same as 00:07:110 (3,4) :arrow: same
03:12:858 (5) - change to 1/4 :arrow: ok
03:18:247 (1,1) - same as above :arrow: fine
03:41:421 (5,1) - space more, weird rhythm gap :arrow: will consider
03:44:475 (5) - 1/4 :arrow: ok
03:51:481 (4) - make triple :arrow: no
Normal
00:03:517 (1) - reverse slider :arrow: looks too complex
00:15:014 (1) - could blanket slider end better :arrow: looks fine
00:27:948 (3) - looks ugly, curve / make more interesting :arrow: looks fine
00:32:259 (1) - curve to make distinct from 00:32:978 (2,3) :arrow: fine
00:47:169 (2) - match rhythm of other sliders, weird rhythm to play in a normal :arrow: huh?
00:50:762 (1,2,3) - awkward rhythm, change or spinner :arrow: no
00:52:738 (2,3) - hard rhythm for a normal :arrow: will consider
01:05:313 (3) - could blanket slider end better :arrow: fine
01:17:349 (5) - put on next downbeat instead of upbeat, fits better :arrow: fine
01:23:996 (1,2) - same as the rest of the break, may as well delete :arrow: asdsafsagdsgdfhgfdhdhd, no D: I don't think this really has any issue if I use circles I think it may be just too hard for normal or whatever this is the best rhythm I can find seriously
01:34:595 (5) - put on next downbeat :arrow: no
01:44:834 (2) - blanket the next slider beginning, looks ugly :arrow: I don't care about blanket
02:02:619 (1,2,3) - you should use this rhythm for the part earlier :arrow: it just doesn't work ,the beat just doesn't sound the same
02:04:595 (2,3) - weird rhythm for normal :arrow: fine
02:30:104 (1) - move the spinner to begin here. too short of a spinner as it is, anyway :arrow: fixed
02:44:475 (1) - why does the break end so far before here? :arrow: fixed
02:46:631 (2) - a bit too far away :arrow: but the spacing is okay .....
02:53:637 (2) - make reverse slider and delete 02:54:175 (3,4). plays better :arrow: nah, doesn't work for me
03:15:373 (4) - space more evenly :arrow: fixed
03:19:325 (2,3) - again :arrow: If you listen to the music you will find that 03:19:325 (2) - is pretty emphasized , try delete this note and play for yourself , I try and it give me weird feeling honestly , compare them by yourself and if I change to easy's rhythm one it just looks boring really
03:49:145 (3) - space farther, looks ugly :arrow: should make spacing consistent here
03:51:301 (2) - curve like 03:50:583 (1) :arrow: why?

I will trust you :)

Thanks for the mods guys :)
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Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
Remapped Insane?

Edit: Go the hell short sliders!
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Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Iceskulls

Adol Christin wrote:

Remapped Insane?
Yes

Thanks Adol Christin and No Dap for star <3
kakifly
940 posts
Joined April 2014
kakifly
eeey m4m from my queue /:))

General

  • fine
Insane

  1. 00:04:774 (5) - imo the normal finish doesnt fit here, nothing in the music has a finish, a whistle would work just fine, same applies to other diffs
  2. 00:50:762 (1,3) - ithink clap would fit these?
  3. 00:51:660 (1) - are you following the vocals with this? since its not really onbeat with vocals, choucho is a bit off and sang a few miliseconds earlier than the white tick, i would just suggest removing this since it feels offbeat compared to 03:18:247 (1) - which is sang more onbeat
  4. 01:25:433 (1) - imo, a circle here instead would make the break less awkward, the slider makes it seem like there are still notes to play after but actually theres just a break
  5. 01:37:289 (1,2) - i would prefer if you mapped out the guitars at 01:37:469 - instead so its not an on and off switch of mapping vocals and then instrumentals
  6. 01:40:163 - you can have a stream here if you wantttt :< or maybe add 2 circles at 01:40:163 - & 01:40:253 - ?
  7. 02:15:014 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - if you made this normal sampleset (just normal - hit) it would match the music well imo
  8. 02:31:181 (3) - maybe slow the sv? i just feels right, imo the fast sv is unexpected
  9. 02:32:978 (4) - nc?
  10. 02:44:115 (7,8,9,10) - theres actually a little normal whistle sound in here, add one if you'd like, maybe lower the volume if you do because spams of normal whistles sound horrible lol
  11. 03:32:978 (6,1) - the flow here is kinda awkward.. maybe something like this would be a bit better? but you can do whatever you like since this is just my suggestion http://puu.sh/fSXXz/998592fba4.jpg
  12. 03:53:098 (6,1) - why are these so close when 03:52:738 (5,6) - are farther? i'd suggest equal or bigger spacing because its a strong beat
    i like this diff
Hard

  1. 00:02:080 (1) - whistle on tail to follow piano? applies to all diffs
  2. 00:06:391 (1,2,3,4) - aa nothing wrong here but the pattern is just boring, same sliders played 4 times, im sure you can change up the flow a bit to make it more interesting?
  3. 00:11:421 (2,3,1) - make the spacings consistent? 3 and 1 are just a bit too close
  4. 00:15:732 (3) - this drum clap intentional? just seems kind of random imo
  5. 00:32:978 (4,5,1) - you can make this triangle better by moving (1)left a bit
  6. 00:46:271 (5,1) - distance may be too large here, if you change the shape of 00:46:631 (1) - you can reduce the shape, heres what i would do as an example http://puu.sh/fSZfX/05c3d5a4ea.jpg
  7. 00:50:762 (1,2) - this distance lol, looks like its 1/4, better increase it
  8. 00:51:660 (1) - same as insane
  9. 01:11:062 (1) - 01:11:780 (3) - these are too close to each other it doesnt look very good
  10. 01:23:816 (1) - slider tail on a strong beat im crying
  11. 02:02:619 (1,2) - 03:17:349 (1,2) - same as 00:50:762 (1,2)
  12. 02:38:726 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:06:391 (1,2,3,4) -
  13. 02:45:912 (1) - slider tail is covered, may be unrankable, but i would fix just in case
Normal

  1. 00:50:762 (1) - remove nc for consistency? but i would understand the reason you nc, same for 02:02:619 (1) - 03:17:349 (1) -
  2. 01:37:828 - why not map this part? add 1/2 slider to follow drums?
  3. 01:38:367 (1,2,3) - imo this rhythm would follow the music better, because it also covers the drum at 01:39:265 - http://puu.sh/fT0Kx/a7f4bd6e71.jpg
  4. 03:46:271 (2) - 03:47:708 (1) - could you un-overlap these lol
  5. 03:55:074 (2) - usually a 1/4 slider isnt expected in normal.. i would just recommend a circle o-o
gl!! \:D/
Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Iceskulls

kakifly wrote:

eeey m4m from my queue /:))

General

  • fine :arrow: yay
Insane

  1. 00:04:774 (5) - imo the normal finish doesnt fit here, nothing in the music has a finish, a whistle would work just fine, same applies to other diffs :arrow: ok
  2. 00:50:762 (1,3) - ithink clap would fit these? ok
  3. 00:51:660 (1) - are you following the vocals with this? since its not really onbeat with vocals, choucho is a bit off and sang a few miliseconds earlier than the white tick, i would just suggest removing this since it feels offbeat compared to 03:18:247 (1) - which is sang more onbeat :arrow: I might consider this a bit , I have to this a lots and I don't it off that much
  4. 01:25:433 (1) - imo, a circle here instead would make the break less awkward, the slider makes it seem like there are still notes to play after but actually theres just a break :arrow: ok
  5. 01:37:289 (1,2) - i would prefer if you mapped out the guitars at 01:37:469 - instead so its not an on and off switch of mapping vocals and then instrumentals :arrow: didn't notice that guitar sound
  6. 01:40:163 - you can have a stream here if you wantttt :< or maybe add 2 circles at 01:40:163 - & 01:40:253 - ? :arrow: I tried before but it doesn't sound right to me when I play it
  7. 02:15:014 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - if you made this normal sampleset (just normal - hit) it would match the music well imo :arrow: Sound a bit noisy and not right to me , no thanks
  8. 02:31:181 (3) - maybe slow the sv? i just feels right, imo the fast sv is unexpected :arrow: ok
  9. 02:32:978 (4) - nc? :arrow: no , since I made change to (3)'s slider so I have to NC it and if I nc this it would end up with weird nc pattern
  10. 02:44:115 (7,8,9,10) - theres actually a little normal whistle sound in here, add one if you'd like, maybe lower the volume if you do because spams of normal whistles sound horrible lol :arrow: no , I think using hitsound on stream maybe a bit noisy even at low volume if the song doesn't feel intense there
  11. 03:32:978 (6,1) - the flow here is kinda awkward.. maybe something like this would be a bit better? but you can do whatever you like since this is just my suggestion http://puu.sh/fSXXz/998592fba4.jpg :arrow: I like your suggestion
  12. 03:53:098 (6,1) - why are these so close when 03:52:738 (5,6) - are farther? i'd suggest equal or bigger spacing because its a strong beat :arrow: ok
    i like this diff :arrow: nice ><
Hard

  1. 00:02:080 (1) - whistle on tail to follow piano? applies to all diffs :arrow: ok
  2. 00:06:391 (1,2,3,4) - aa nothing wrong here but the pattern is just boring, same sliders played 4 times, im sure you can change up the flow a bit to make it more interesting? :arrow: well imo I actually make those sliders a bit different so I guess nothing wrong here with the flow imo, might consider if the next modders mention about this
  3. 00:11:421 (2,3,1) - make the spacings consistent? 3 and 1 are just a bit too close :arrow: fixed a bit
  4. 00:15:732 (3) - this drum clap intentional? just seems kind of random imo :arrow: yes , I don't think it sound random tho
  5. 00:32:978 (4,5,1) - you can make this triangle better by moving (1)left a bit :arrow: ok
  6. 00:46:271 (5,1) - distance may be too large here, if you change the shape of 00:46:631 (1) - you can reduce the shape, heres what i would do as an example http://puu.sh/fSZfX/05c3d5a4ea.jpg :arrow: Since I ues 0.75x SV here the distance maybe a bit too large but I think it actually okay to use and not hard to play here imo
  7. 00:50:762 (1,2) - this distance lol, looks like its 1/4, better increase it :arrow: okay
  8. 00:51:660 (1) - same as insane :arrow: same reason
  9. 01:11:062 (1) - 01:11:780 (3) - these are too close to each other it doesnt look very good :arrow: Not that close imo
  10. 01:23:816 (1) - slider tail on a strong beat im crying :arrow: noticed this is the only diff I use slider tail on downbeat lol
  11. 02:02:619 (1,2) - 03:17:349 (1,2) - same as 00:50:762 (1,2) :arrow: fixed
  12. 02:38:726 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:06:391 (1,2,3,4) - :arrow: same reason
  13. 02:45:912 (1) - slider tail is covered, may be unrankable, but i would fix just in case :arrow: fixed
Normal

  1. 00:50:762 (1) - remove nc for consistency? but i would understand the reason you nc, same for 02:02:619 (1) - 03:17:349 (1) - :arrow: No , want to emphasis the kick in of emphasized beat here
  2. 01:37:828 - why not map this part? add 1/2 slider to follow drums? :arrow: I tried that but I guess it doesn't sound right to me, it was like the beat plays sudden and might give awkward feeling to players here
  3. 01:38:367 (1,2,3) - imo this rhythm would follow the music better, because it also covers the drum at 01:39:265 - http://puu.sh/fT0Kx/a7f4bd6e71.jpg :arrow: ok
  4. 03:46:271 (2) - 03:47:708 (1) - could you un-overlap these lol :arrow: okay lol
  5. 03:55:074 (2) - usually a 1/4 slider isnt expected in normal.. i would just recommend a circle o-o :arrow: will consider this since this slider appear as the last note in this diff and you just need to click the head to finish this slider so I guess normal players can play this with no problem
gl!! \:D/
Thanks for mods :)
-Nya-
2,133 posts
Joined December 2011
-Nya-


Heya! M4M from above queue. Can I maybe ask that you give me a rating in my queue after applying the mod, thanks.
So let's get started.

Please note: Everything in bold is highly suggested.
Everything in red is unrankable.

General:
Looks fine.

Easy:
  1. 00:09:984 (2) –Maybe do this?
    Picture
    Copy and paste 00:09:265 (1) –then Ctrl+J. (Just a dumb suggestion :P)
  2. 00:12:858 (2) –Move this slider like one grid downwards so it’s closer to 00:11:780 (4) –and try to perfect the blanket more.
  3. 00:15:014 (1,3) - In my opinion this can look better. Like this:
    Picture
    Move the tail of 00:15:014 (1) –a bit downwards like in the pic above and then copy and paste that slider and then Ctrl+H.
  4. 00:28:307 –I’d say place a note here, since you can clearly hear a beat there that suggests a note. And it will play nicely and help with flow.
  5. 00:34:595 (4) –I think rather try placing this slider like this for better flow.
    Picture
  6. 00:39:086 (2,4) –Improve this stack. Move 00:40:523 (4) –to this spot: X:384 Y:165.
  7. 00:43:038 (4) –Rather place this slider here for better flow.
    Picture
  8. 00:49:684 (2) –Same here. Place this one somewhere here:
    Picture
  9. 00:58:128 (1,2,3,4) –This rhyhm can be improved in my opinion. Try this:
    Picture
  10. 01:12:140 –Place a note here? There is a beat there afterall.
  11. 01:24:714 (2) –Nazi. Place the red square of this slider more in the middle of the slider for a nice curve.
  12. 01:35:493 (1,2) –Hm, rather try this rhythm. Much better in my opinion and follows the music/vocals nicely:
    Picture
    Another reason why I prefer my above reason is cuz I think the gap between 01:36:391 (2) – and 01:38:367 (1) –is rather unnecessary and should be mapped.
  13. 01:41:241 (1,2,3) –Rather try doing this. It looks nicer and neater.
    Picture
  14. 02:48:068 (2) –Rather straighten this slider to support 02:47:349 (1) -?
  15. 02:52:379 (4,1) –Make a nice blanket here?
  16. 03:08:906 (3) –I suggest placing the red square of this slider right in the middle of the slider to follow the beat nicely.
  17. 03:11:421 –Place a note here?
  18. 03:14:295 –Here as well. Place a note.
  19. 03:55:074 (2) –Why not rather remove this short slider and place a spinner in its place instead?

Very solid Easy. I guess flow can still be improved. I didn’t name all the places where flow was a bit of a problem in my opinion, so I recommend that you look at the diff again and try fixing the places where you think flow might be a problem.

Normal:
  1. Uncheck “Widescreen support”.
  2. 00:39:445 (3) –Just a suggestion cuz it’s my own taste. I suggest straightening this slider so it looks like this:
    Picture
  3. 01:04:595 (2,3) –Improve this blanket please.
  4. 01:31:541 (4,1) –Try making a better blanket here.
  5. 01:37:648 –to 01:38:008 –I don’t really understand why you left this open. Maybe place two circles here:
    Picture
  6. 01:38:367 (1,2) -Something is seriously wrong with this spacing. Please use a spacing of 1.0X. I know it was probably an accident.
  7. 01:40:163 –to 01:40:882 –I really advise you to map this area.
    Picture
  8. 01:52:738 (1) –Nazi. Just move the tail of this slider a bit lower so it’s a bit further away from this circle: 01:52:020 (5) –
  9. 01:55:613 (1) –Try this rhythm. It sounds better in my opinion and covers more beats.
    Picture
  10. 01:57:229 –Place a short slider here. I can faintly hear a beat there and it would fit nicely and take away that unnecessary gap.
    Picture
  11. 03:55:074 (2) –Same as Easy. Perhaps you can rather place a spinner in this slider’s place.

Hard:
  1. 00:28:666 (3,4) –Make these two sliders look similar.
  2. 00:36:211 (5) –Hm, straighten this slider as well to support 00:35:852 (4) –
  3. 00:38:726 (3) –Why don’t you rather place this slider somewere here for consistency with 00:38:008 (1,2) –
    Picture
  4. 00:41:421 –Place a note here? I don’t think it will be an issue and it will be consistent with 00:40:702 (4,4) –
  5. 01:13:936 (1,2,3) –Try to make this triangle shape look nicer.
    Picture
  6. 01:30:463 (3) –Straighten this slider to support 01:29:744 (1) –
  7. 02:32:978 (1) –Stack this circle on 02:32:259 (2) -?
  8. 02:39:445 (3) –Move this slider just a little bit more upwards for consistency with the distance.
  9. 03:12:858 (5,1) –Rather just stack them properly.
  10. 03:55:074 (4) –Like the previous two diffs. Replace this slider with a spinner?

Overall, there’s still just some nazi stuff that require fixing but mainly it looks great.
So, here’s a star~
Good Luck! :D
Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Iceskulls

-Nya- wrote:



Heya! M4M from above queue. Can I maybe ask that you give me a rating in my queue after applying the mod, thanks.
So let's get started.

Please note: Everything in bold is highly suggested.
Everything in red is unrankable.

General:
Looks fine.

Easy:
  1. 00:09:984 (2) –Maybe do this? :arrow: I'm fine with mine
    Picture
    Copy and paste 00:09:265 (1) –then Ctrl+J. (Just a dumb suggestion :P)
  2. 00:12:858 (2) –Move this slider like one grid downwards so it’s closer to 00:11:780 (4) –and try to perfect the blanket more. :arrow: ok
  3. 00:15:014 (1,3) - In my opinion this can look better. Like this: :arrow: I'm fine with mine since actually would to make flow a bit variate here so it consistent with the song imo
    Picture
    Move the tail of 00:15:014 (1) –a bit downwards like in the pic above and then copy and paste that slider and then Ctrl+H.
  4. 00:28:307 –I’d say place a note here, since you can clearly hear a beat there that suggests a note. And it will play nicely and help with flow. :arrow: Since I end (2) on downbeat placing note after that would be a bit make player feel awkward imo so I chose not to put any note there
  5. 00:34:595 (4) –I think rather try placing this slider like this for better flow. :arrow: I'd like to break flow a bit here to emphasis beat on (1)
    Picture
  6. 00:39:086 (2,4) –Improve this stack. Move 00:40:523 (4) –to this spot: X:384 Y:165. :arrow: ok
  7. 00:43:038 (4) –Rather place this slider here for better flow. :arrow: ok
    Picture
  8. 00:49:684 (2) –Same here. Place this one somewhere here: :arrow: fixed a bit
    Picture
  9. 00:58:128 (1,2,3,4) –This rhyhm can be improved in my opinion. Try this: :arrow: 1/2 spacing would increase the difficulty for this diff which I don't want to increase anymore now
    Picture
  10. 01:12:140 –Place a note here? There is a beat there afterall. :arrow: a small break for lower in difficulty a bit here
  11. 01:24:714 (2) –Nazi. Place the red square of this slider more in the middle of the slider for a nice curve. :arrow: ok
  12. 01:35:493 (1,2) –Hm, rather try this rhythm. Much better in my opinion and follows the music/vocals nicely: :arrow: (1) doesn't sound right for me and I don't want to map the next section after (2) too
    Picture
    Another reason why I prefer my above reason is cuz I think the gap between 01:36:391 (2) – and 01:38:367 (1) –is rather unnecessary and should be mapped. :arrow: I don't see any problem with that, I also do something similiar like this in normal so I guess it's fine
  13. 01:41:241 (1,2,3) –Rather try doing this. It looks nicer and neater. :arrow: I love placing sliders like that :3 don't want to blanket on 01:40:882 (3) - much tho
    Picture
  14. 02:48:068 (2) –Rather straighten this slider to support 02:47:349 (1) -? :arrow: No, thanks not much change in flow
  15. 02:52:379 (4,1) –Make a nice blanket here? :arrow: nah, not my intention :P
  16. 03:08:906 (3) –I suggest placing the red square of this slider right in the middle of the slider to follow the beat nicely. :arrow: Fixed a bit , the bent there is to emphasis the vocal
  17. 03:11:421 –Place a note here? :arrow: no,thanks
  18. 03:14:295 –Here as well. Place a note. :arrow: I see that this is calm part so I don't want to put many notes here
  19. 03:55:074 (2) –Why not rather remove this short slider and place a spinner in its place instead? :arrow: That will make the end point inconsistent with insane

Very solid Easy. I guess flow can still be improved. I didn’t name all the places where flow was a bit of a problem in my opinion, so I recommend that you look at the diff again and try fixing the places where you think flow might be a problem. :arrow: the star diff for this diff is 1.53 star which really make the icon become N mean that it might be somthing between easy and normal so I don't put much linear flow and break flow a bit at some point it might be hard but I will consider it I just need some more mods on this

Normal:
  1. Uncheck “Widescreen support”. :arrow: ok
  2. 00:39:445 (3) –Just a suggestion cuz it’s my own taste. I suggest straightening this slider so it looks like this: :arrow: This part seems a bit suit for curve slider imo
    Picture
  3. 01:04:595 (2,3) –Improve this blanket please. :arrow: that blanket , ah okay
  4. 01:31:541 (4,1) –Try making a better blanket here. :arrow: I'm fine with it
  5. 01:37:648 –to 01:38:008 –I don’t really understand why you left this open. Maybe place two circles here: :arrow: well that part feel right goo to put small break so I guess it okay to leave that empty , adding a notes there feels not right for normal imo
    Picture
  6. 01:38:367 (1,2) -Something is seriously wrong with this spacing. Please use a spacing of 1.0X. I know it was probably an accident. :arrow: accident x.x
  7. 01:40:163 –to 01:40:882 –I really advise you to map this area. :arrow: no, feels pretty intense there I chose not to make any intense rhythm there
    Picture
  8. 01:52:738 (1) –Nazi. Just move the tail of this slider a bit lower so it’s a bit further away from this circle: 01:52:020 (5) – :arrow: okay
  9. 01:55:613 (1) –Try this rhythm. It sounds better in my opinion and covers more beats. :arrow: imo calm part = easy rhythm
    Picture
  10. 01:57:229 –Place a short slider here. I can faintly hear a beat there and it would fit nicely and take away that unnecessary gap. :arrow: I prefer my rhythm
    Picture
  11. 03:55:074 (2) –Same as Easy. Perhaps you can rather place a spinner in this slider’s place. :arrow: same reason

Hard:
  1. 00:28:666 (3,4) –Make these two sliders look similar. :arrow: ok
  2. 00:36:211 (5) –Hm, straighten this slider as well to support 00:35:852 (4) – :arrow: I like how it is here
  3. 00:38:726 (3) –Why don’t you rather place this slider somewere here for consistency with 00:38:008 (1,2) – :arrow: remap this part a bit to avoid major fix
    Picture
  4. 00:41:421 –Place a note here? I don’t think it will be an issue and it will be consistent with 00:40:702 (4,4) – :arrow: will consider this somewhat I feel right doing like that make it a bit feel different which make the players know that the tone of music is changed
  5. 01:13:936 (1,2,3) –Try to make this triangle shape look nicer. :arrow: ok
    Picture
  6. 01:30:463 (3) –Straighten this slider to support 01:29:744 (1) – :arrow: no, not what I want
  7. 02:32:978 (1) –Stack this circle on 02:32:259 (2) -? :arrow: ok
  8. 02:39:445 (3) –Move this slider just a little bit more upwards for consistency with the distance. :arrow: ok
  9. 03:12:858 (5,1) –Rather just stack them properly. :arrow: stack make it feel a bit weird for me
  10. 03:55:074 (4) –Like the previous two diffs. Replace this slider with a spinner? :arrow: I don't know where to put the spinner end since the song graudually decrease the volume till slilence not ending at the right when the final beat played

Overall, there’s still just some nazi stuff that require fixing but mainly it looks great.
So, here’s a star~ :arrow: thanks for star <3
Good Luck! :D

As for a rating , your mods is pretty great but some maybe a bit inconsistent with my intentions so I denied some of your suggestion but mostly if I find the mods can make the map looks better at least a pixel bit I don't feel hesistate , I do fix it right away lol
Thanks for the mods :)
Blizs
898 posts
Joined November 2013
Blizs
Hi hi :3~~~~ from my queue...



[Insane]
  1. 00:15:732 (6) - a mysterious drum additions on the head...
  2. 00:34:774 (7) - let's make this silder flow better. the slider straight curving from (6) and back again to same position as (6) with more flowing. Example.... http://puu.sh/g3eik/32a16d45c7.png
  3. 01:01:002 (1) - finish on head ? I heard it in the music
  4. 01:13:936 (1) - stack the tail properly
  5. 01:20:403 (3) - This part should be 1/3
  6. 01:46:631 (6) - stack the tail properly
  7. 02:20:583 (3,4,5,1) - I think this pattern should be like http://puu.sh/g3s7u/12c60743eb.jpg
  8. 02:52:379 (4,5) - have same distance with 02:49:505 (4,5) - but different snap... It's confusing x_x
  9. 03:46:990 (3) - should be 1/3

[Hard]
  1. 00:15:732 (3) - a mysterious drum additions on the head
  2. 00:49:145 (1,2,3) - This pattern is confusing when first time I see it. Try this http://puu.sh/g675I/8e302f5e1c.jpg . And also I think there's should be a click at 00:49:325 - because there was a big effect in instrument before it it changing from 1/2 to 1/1 in red tick.
  3. 01:20:403 (4) - Should be 1/3
  4. 02:45:912 (1) - make the curve different way http://puu.sh/g67ph/34f59beefb.jpg . It'll be a better flow.
  5. 03:28:487 (4) - make the tail stack properly. move this slider to left a bit.
  6. 03:46:990 (3) - Should be 1/3
  7. 03:50:583 (1) - stack the tail properly. move the slider up a bit.
[Normal]
  1. 00:15:732 (2) - a mysterious drum additions here
  2. 01:52:738 (1) - I suggest to make it more like http://puu.sh/g68Ao/52d5707894.jpg because 01:52:738 (1) - will make a flow with 01:52:379 (6) - and blanketing 01:52:020 (5) - .
    Nothing to say~~~ this diff is good ;) ;)
[Easy]
  1. 00:15:014 (1) - a mysterious drum additions on the end of slider. aww.... why did you use it ? there's nothing special in the song
  2. 00:33:696 (3,4) - hmmm.... this pattern will confusing. why did you ignore the neutral snap (same with before, 1/1) at 00:34:056 - and ignore the clear instrument in the song at 00:34:415 - because of the low volume vocal ?
  3. 00:51:122 (1,2) - I think using this continued 1/2 snap in Easy isn't good. I suggest to change 00:51:660 (2) - to a cricle
  4. 00:59:924 (3) - Blanket is better IMO
  5. 01:29:744 (1,2) - clicking a note in red tick is a bit hard for new players. Here I mean not all of red ticks. I mean the red ticks where the note before is a white tick. I suggest to change the pattern to http://puu.sh/g69lE/cd15881e00.jpg
  6. 02:02:978 (1,2) - same with 00:51:122 (1,2) -
  7. 02:30:104 (1) - I think the slider should be like http://puu.sh/g6a3f/defd8351fa.jpg . For newbie hidden player like me, It'll more comfortable and easy to read if the slider straight flow to the next note.
  8. 03:17:708 (1,2) - same with 00:51:122 (1,2) -
Okay that's all :3
I like the design and pattern... shoot XD
Good Luck with this mapset ~(^o^~)
Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Iceskulls

Fantastica wrote:

Hi hi :3~~~~ from my queue...



[Insane]
  1. 00:15:732 (6) - a mysterious drum additions on the head... :arrow: imo I think it doesn't sound weird I like how it sound here
  2. 00:34:774 (7) - let's make this silder flow better. the slider straight curving from (6) and back again to same position as (6) with more flowing. Example.... http://puu.sh/g3eik/32a16d45c7.png :arrow: ok
  3. 01:01:002 (1) - finish on head ? I heard it in the music :arrow: ok
  4. 01:13:936 (1) - stack the tail properly :arrow: fine as it is
  5. 01:20:403 (3) - This part should be 1/3 :arrow: ok
  6. 01:46:631 (6) - stack the tail properly :arrow: fixed
  7. 02:20:583 (3,4,5,1) - I think this pattern should be like http://puu.sh/g3s7u/12c60743eb.jpg :arrow: mine is fine
  8. 02:52:379 (4,5) - have same distance with 02:49:505 (4,5) - but different snap... It's confusing x_x :arrow: fixed
  9. 03:46:990 (3) - should be 1/3 :arrow: yea

[Hard]
  1. 00:15:732 (3) - a mysterious drum additions on the head :arrow: same as insane
  2. 00:49:145 (1,2,3) - This pattern is confusing when first time I see it. Try this http://puu.sh/g675I/8e302f5e1c.jpg . And also I think there's should be a click at 00:49:325 - because there was a big effect in instrument before it it changing from 1/2 to 1/1 in red tick. :arrow: ok
  3. 01:20:403 (4) - Should be 1/3 :arrow: same as insane
  4. 02:45:912 (1) - make the curve different way http://puu.sh/g67ph/34f59beefb.jpg . It'll be a better flow. :arrow: ok
  5. 03:28:487 (4) - make the tail stack properly. move this slider to left a bit. :arrow: fixed
  6. 03:46:990 (3) - Should be 1/3 :arrow: yea
  7. 03:50:583 (1) - stack the tail properly. move the slider up a bit. :arrow: ok
[Normal]
  1. 00:15:732 (2) - a mysterious drum additions here :arrow: same as insane
  2. 01:52:738 (1) - I suggest to make it more like http://puu.sh/g68Ao/52d5707894.jpg because 01:52:738 (1) - will make a flow with 01:52:379 (6) - and blanketing 01:52:020 (5) - . :arrow: didn't intend to blanket and also I don't like when the curve at tail make it flow like 01:53:996 (3) - because it feels a bit repetitive to have same curvy flow there
    Nothing to say~~~ this diff is good ;) ;) :arrow: thanks
[Easy]
  1. 00:15:014 (1) - a mysterious drum additions on the end of slider. aww.... why did you use it ? there's nothing special in the song :arrow: same as insane the drum in the music here feel a bit speacial to me
  2. 00:33:696 (3,4) - hmmm.... this pattern will confusing. why did you ignore the neutral snap (same with before, 1/1) at 00:34:056 - and ignore the clear instrument in the song at 00:34:415 - because of the low volume vocal ? :arrow: I just feel like what some variation so it not looks boring but I guess it's not right thing to do now in the present so fixed but I still keep some fixed only the ones that feel weird for me
  3. 00:51:122 (1,2) - I think using this continued 1/2 snap in Easy isn't good. I suggest to change 00:51:660 (2) - to a cricle :arrow: ok
  4. 00:59:924 (3) - Blanket is better IMO :arrow: Changed a bit here
  5. 01:29:744 (1,2) - clicking a note in red tick is a bit hard for new players. Here I mean not all of red ticks. I mean the red ticks where the note before is a white tick. I suggest to change the pattern to http://puu.sh/g69lE/cd15881e00.jpg :arrow: aww I didn't know I can use this rhythm instead lol
  6. 02:02:978 (1,2) - same with 00:51:122 (1,2) - :arrow: ok
  7. 02:30:104 (1) - I think the slider should be like http://puu.sh/g6a3f/defd8351fa.jpg . For newbie hidden player like me, It'll more comfortable and easy to read if the slider straight flow to the next note. :arrow: ok
  8. 03:17:708 (1,2) - same with 00:51:122 (1,2) - :arrow: ok
Okay that's all :3
I like the design and pattern... shoot XD :arrow: Thanks for star <3<3<3
Good Luck with this mapset ~(^o^~)
Thanks for the mods :)
FlobuFlobs
579 posts
Joined June 2011
FlobuFlobs
Sup
[General]
  1. Decrease the AR by 1 at all diffs except insane? I can't see any reason why it should be this high, the bpm is low and the pattern are easy

[Hard]

  • [Rhythm]
  1. 01:20:403 - 01:20:762 - this is 1/3
  2. 01:43:038 (2) - Replacing them with 2 circles would follow the vocals better

    [Gameplay]
  3. 03:52:020 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure how possible it is for a Hard player to play 1/4 spaced


[Insane]

  • [Rhythm]
  1. 00:08:906 (4) - Use a triple here instead? you can clearly hear the 1/4
  2. 01:43:038 (2) - Replacing them with 2 circles would follow the vocals better
  3. 01:20:403 - 01:20:762 - this is 1/3

    [Gameplay]
  4. 00:04:774 (5) - Space it a bit more than the other 2, its way louder 1.8 would be nice
  5. 00:52:918 (3) - Not sure about this one, sure its playable but maybe it could be better when you replace it somewhere else
  6. 01:37:828 (1) - Remove that NC, it confuses because 01:38:367 (1) - this one tells 1/1 gap and 01:37:828 (1) - doesnt change anything at all
  7. 02:31:181 (1) - holy crap, WHAT IS THAT xDD lal it crashed my osu afterwards

    [Suggestion]
  8. 01:05:672 (3) - This is extremly close to the bottom of the screen, replace it to avoid issues with other resolutions
  9. 02:48:427 (5) - ^same

q_q This set is soo nice, couldnt find much

The other 2 diffs are looking fine for me
Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Iceskulls

FlobuFlobs wrote:

Sup
[General]
  1. Decrease the AR by 1 at all diffs except insane? I can't see any reason why it should be this high, the bpm is low and the pattern are easy :arrow: ok

[Hard]

  • [Rhythm]
  1. 01:20:403 - 01:20:762 - this is 1/3 :arrow: already fixed from previous mods
  2. 01:43:038 (2) - Replacing them with 2 circles would follow the vocals better :arrow: The 1/2 vocal doesn't feel emphasis there imo so I don't make that 1/2 clickable here

    [Gameplay]
  3. 03:52:020 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure how possible it is for a Hard player to play 1/4 spaced :arrow: I guess they can play 1/4 here since the spacing here isn't that big and I guess it make hard player learn how to play 1/4 spaced


[Insane]

  • [Rhythm]
  1. 00:08:906 (4) - Use a triple here instead? you can clearly hear the 1/4 :arrow: not sound right and play weird imo even when there is 1/4 there lol
  2. 01:43:038 (2) - Replacing them with 2 circles would follow the vocals better :arrow: same as hard
  3. 01:20:403 - 01:20:762 - this is 1/3 :arrow: same as hard

    [Gameplay]
  4. 00:04:774 (5) - Space it a bit more than the other 2, its way louder 1.8 would be nice :arrow: ok
  5. 00:52:918 (3) - Not sure about this one, sure its playable but maybe it could be better when you replace it somewhere else :arrow: changed a bit
  6. 01:37:828 (1) - Remove that NC, it confuses because 01:38:367 (1) - this one tells 1/1 gap and 01:37:828 (1) - doesnt change anything at all :arrow: Hmm..I guess the nc there is for change in spacing since I use anti-jumps here 01:37:289 (1,2,3) - and the next nc here 01:38:367 (1) - is surely for change in snap since I change from 1/2 to 1/1 gap there , well somehow this looks fine to me if I remove nc there it kinda make me confuse when trying to play this 01:37:828 (1,2) -
  7. 02:31:181 (1) - holy crap, WHAT IS THAT xDD lal it crashed my osu afterwards :arrow: my suck as sh*t slider art lol

    [Suggestion]
  8. 01:05:672 (3) - This is extremly close to the bottom of the screen, replace it to avoid issues with other resolutions :arrow: fixed
  9. 02:48:427 (5) - ^same :arrow: ^same

q_q This set is soo nice, couldnt find much :arrow: thanks

The other 2 diffs are looking fine for me
Thanks for the mods :)
Come[Back]Home
1,785 posts
Joined October 2011
Come[Back]Home
Easy
00:11:780 (4,1) Improve blank
00:15:014 (1,2,3) Perfect trianlge pls and (3) is very close to (1) which looks weird
00:24:355 (2,4) Bad overlap here
01:37:289 Repeat slider till 01:38:008 maybe?
02:20:044 (3,4) Improve blank pls
02:23:637 (4,2) Stack is not perfect
03:18:786 (1,2) Improve blank
03:19:684 (2,4) Stack is not perfect
03:55:074 (2) Delete this one and put a circle there instead

Normal
03:49:145 (3) Maybe you should make this one straight too.
03:55:074 (2) Same as in Easy

Hard
00:11:421 (2,3) This could be to hard for an Hard
00:17:169 (3,4) ^
01:11:062 (1,2,3) (3) is really close to (1). Try to do a perfect triangle
01:20:403 (4,5) Im really unsure about this, could be a bit to confusing
01:52:020 (3,4) ^
03:36:211 (1,4) They are really close to each other, move (4) a bit down
03:52:020 (1,2,3,4) To Hard

Insane
Ar 8.5-8.8 maybe?
Looks fine

Srsly, i dont like japanese songs, but the map is really awesome mapped, great job, i really enjoyed watching the Normal and Hard
Good luck and take my star~
Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Iceskulls

Come[Back]Home wrote:

Easy
00:11:780 (4,1) Improve blank
00:15:014 (1,2,3) Perfect trianlge pls and (3) is very close to (1) which looks weird :arrow: fixed
00:24:355 (2,4) Bad overlap here :arrow: fixed
01:37:289 Repeat slider till 01:38:008 maybe? :arrow: no,thanks I think slider repeat once is enough for easy
02:20:044 (3,4) Improve blank pls
02:23:637 (4,2) Stack is not perfect
03:18:786 (1,2) Improve blank
03:19:684 (2,4) Stack is not perfect
03:55:074 (2) Delete this one and put a circle there instead :arrow: ok
I fixed every blanket and stack you mention here but too lazy to say fixed lol

Normal
03:49:145 (3) Maybe you should make this one straight too. :arrow: edited a bit
03:55:074 (2) Same as in Easy :arrow: ok

Hard
00:11:421 (2,3) This could be to hard for an Hard :arrow: I don't think so
00:17:169 (3,4) ^ :arrow: ^ They spaced a bit close so I don't think it that much hard
01:11:062 (1,2,3) (3) is really close to (1). Try to do a perfect triangle :arrow: want a stack here 01:10:343 (3,1,3) -
01:20:403 (4,5) Im really unsure about this, could be a bit to confusing :arrow: no,I think if the players listen to the music while playing I'm sure they can't miss this
01:52:020 (3,4) ^ :arrow: like I said spacing kinda low and the beat they is also emphasized so not much problem when playing those
03:36:211 (1,4) They are really close to each other, move (4) a bit down :arrow: ok
03:52:020 (1,2,3,4) To Hard :arrow: couldn't think any easier rhythm here and use spinner here like normal kinda feel meh for me imo since this is hard diff

Insane
Ar 8.5-8.8 maybe? :arrow: I think 9.0 is fine
Looks fine

Srsly, i dont like japanese songs, but the map is really awesome mapped, great job, i really enjoyed watching the Normal and Hard
Good luck and take my star~
Thanks for the mods and star :)
FireHawk60
12 posts
Joined October 2013
FireHawk60
Just stopping by to mod your Insane difficulty as I'm most comfortable with Insanes. I'm not the best modder but i'd like to say I know my way around. Please keep in mind these are all suggestions so do what you will with them.

[General]
  1. You have a few seconds of silence at the end of the song. You'll need to trim the mp3 down a bit.
  2. I really like the flow you have in this map. The streams really feel nice and transition smoothly.
  3. I don't know what else to say xD. Great map and great song choice! ChouCho! <3 Lovely voice.
[Insane]
  1. 00:13:217 (5,1) - I don't like the way these notes are touching each other. I don't think the sliders should touch.
  2. 00:40:523 (4,5,6,7,1) - You have a nice curve going on here, but then it leads into a straight slider that suddenly breaks the curve and goes to the right. I think you should make the slider's end point more to the left so that you kinda follow the curve, or make the slider curvy to follow the stream.
    Not like this
    But like this
    Or curved
  3. 01:01:002 (1,2) - I don't like the way these notes are touching here either. It doesn't look very pretty so you should move them so they're not touching
  4. 01:15:014 (5,6,7) - Hmm for some reason the triplets looks funny to me. Idk maybe make it straight instead of curvy?
  5. 01:22:199 (5,1) - I don't like how these notes stack and touch each other. I suggest making a blanket.
    Blanket
  6. 01:34:954 (4,5,6) - I think instead of a straight slider after the two circles, you should make it a curved slider instead to make it pretty.
    Curvy
  7. 01:36:391 (5,6,1,2,3,1,2) - The timing at this part really throws me off because of the inconsistent pause. You end on the red tick and then start on the white tick. That's a full beat, and then a half of a beat which is extremely hard to tap correctly. I think you should change up the notes here to make it easier to tap.
    It looks like this
    I suggest this
  8. 01:52:379 (4,5,6,7,1) - This is just me being pick here lol. I'm not a fan of that zig-zag stream xD I think you should turn it into a curved stream like the other ones you have. Just a suggestion for consistency :D
    Maybe like this?
  9. 02:19:864 (5,6,1) - Maybe a curvy slider here too? Instead of the straight slider you have.
  10. 02:21:122 (5,1) - I think the stack here looks a bit awkward. Maybe you should move it so it's not touching. Or maybe you could turn it into a blanket.
    It could be like this perhaps

  11. CelsiusLK wrote:

    1. 02:31:181 (1) - holy crap, WHAT IS THAT xDD lal it crashed my osu afterwards :arrow: my suck as sh*t slider art lol
    ^^ LOLOL.
  12. 02:30:104 (7,8,9) - What if you change these notes and make a smiley face? Or is that too weird? I don't think I've ever seen anyone make a smiley face before in a map lol.
    Smiley face?
  13. 02:32:978 (10) - Then you could move this note to the center at x:256 y:192
  14. 02:46:990 (6,1) - Perfect opportunity for a blanket! This way the notes won't be touching and it'll look better.
    Blanket like this maybe
  15. 02:55:253 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I think it would feel smoother if you just made this stream into a curved stream instead of making it straight and then curving at the end, but that's just me.
    Not like this
    But maybe like this
  16. 03:10:702 (2,3,4) - For this triplet, it looks a little odd that the last circle is a little higher in my opinion. I think you should just make it straight and align it with the other circles before it. Just like the one you have here 03:38:367 (3,4,5) -
    Like this
  17. 03:11:421 (6,1) - I don't think you should stack these notes. Maybe move the circle out of the way so they are not touching.
  18. 03:17:349 (1,2) - Hiding circles under sliders is not always the best idea. At this part, the music is building up until it reaches a climax. Maybe you could move the circle and make a big jump for emphasis, instead of putting the circle under the slider.
  19. 03:27:229 (5,1) - I don't like the way these notes are stacked and touching each other. Perhaps you could make a blanket.
    Blanket
  20. 03:32:619 (5,6) - I think you should make a blanket here too. Give it a little bit of a curve instead of that plain old straight slider.
    Just a bit of a curve
  21. 03:49:684 (4,5,6) - I'm being picky here too, but if you could make the two notes before the slider kinda of curve and follow the slider, I think it would look and feel a lot better. Or I guess you could curve the slider too. Same difference.
    Something like this
    Instead of what you have here
Have fun and good luck!
Last edited by FireHawk60 , edited 5 times in total.
bigfrog
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
bigfrog
hello, M4M from queue

General
looks fine to me

Easy
00:27:229 (2) - less bending looks better i think
00:38:008 (1,3) - maybe can try symmetry
01:11:062 (3) - suggest to use this slider :
01:36:391 (2,1) - hmm...not sure but still think the distance between these two object should be x1.0, you can add a circle on 01:38:008, but still a suggestion
03:11:780 (2,1) - blanket? but it not necessary :P
03:36:211 (1,2) - this for looks more neat and avoid overlap? :

Normal
00:22:199 (3) - bend as 00:20:762 (1) - ? :
00:27:229 (2,3) - the flow between can be better, maybe this :
01:03:876 (1,2) - blanket would flow better i think
01:20:942 - add a circle here?
03:28:487 (2) - move to 03:28:487? since there has a big sound and also follow the vocal in othere way

Hard
00:11:421 (2,3) - change to only reverse 1 time? since it's hard and the distance between might too far
00:56:690 (1) - try this pattern? just looks playful ww :
01:31:541 (2,3) - blanket better?
02:15:014 (3,4) - i still prefer this way, since it's Hard...i think it's more fit to put them in Insane
02:26:870 (5) - ctrl+g and add more a reversion to 02:27:140
02:55:433 (4,5) - this rhythm?
i just put 02:55:972 (5) - random, you can move it as you like

Insane
00:34:595 (6) - move to 180|236 or nearby seems flow better
00:54:535 (5) - ctrl+g?

overall i can't find more problems in this diff, just think the flow can be better
but i really not good at that, so sorry :P

that all i can mod~
btw still curious about how long you finish this map, this song is long but you done it all by yourself :O
Good Luck~!!
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