1. koreapenguin
2. Hard
3. Battle
4. Shana Yami *twice
5. Exa
6. Sc4v4ng3r *twice
7. Victorica
8. Kocari
9. haha5957
10. Ipas
11. Runa_Hime
12. T-Mac
13. Lexis
14. Xelasto
15. nya10
16. Underforest
17. FCL
18. MondoKuma
19. newyams99
20. Electoz
21. Kibbleru
22. BeatofIke

koreapenguin wrote:

From #modreqs - first mod by BN? lucky me~ xD

General

1. Disabled on Normal diff - done

Normal

1. 00:32:532 (3) - add newcombo here, same as other newcombos. ya for consistency, also it would be easier to gain HP - ok
2. 01:53:905 (3) - hear so this rhythm is sooo weird to me, actually some big sound is since being start here 01:53:709 - vocal with drum so if you followed vocal then http://puu.sh/hJslN/d46cc8fde2.jpg this rhythm is works better - keep it for now. I might come with new idea later
3. 01:58:807 (3,4) - i don't want recommend like some semi hide, seem still you can make more common, and it might be unnatural to play for beginners - this is fine. they can hit read this perfectly. also, I want to keep this for aesthetic sake.
4. 01:58:807 (3) - also you can add newcombo here same as first - ok
5. 02:05:865 (2,3) - it's error? seem make to same distance as 1.0x it would be better. some changing distance will big effect to beginners so it's not good - thanks for noticing this one. yes, it should be 1.0x
6. 03:28:218 (4) - add newcombo here? for consistency with 02:27:042 (1,2,3,4) - them - yup

Hard

1. if you worried about spread then how about use AR7.5 ? i think it would be better to spread with Normal or you can make just repeat slider for this 01:27:042 (5,6,7,8,9) - rest is good imo - AR 7.7
2. 01:27:630 (1) - this spinner is doesn't fit the mapping up to this point, feel so it just kind of comes out of nowhere to me - removed
3. 01:52:532 (7,1) - swap newcombo? - nice!
4. 02:31:748 (1,3) - wtf lol, i think this pattern is doesn't fit up with Hard diff... if it's Hard diff then you should make like Hard diff at least for patterns, rhythm something else etc but it's not Hard diff's pattern it over works little bit imo - tbh, I want to keep this. this pattern already tested with some players and they did fine here. I'll wait for another opinion for this. will be considered.
5. 04:06:846 (1) - add newcombo here, it will be help to read - okay

Mochi's Insane

1. No

that's all

Hard wrote:

hi there. let's mod this. - hi, thanks for coming

[Hard]

1. 01:16:846 (6,7) - this jump could be too much for a Hard - I disagree. if there is any jump that is too hard for Hard diff, it should be here 00:13:316 (7,1,2,3,4) - nevertheless, I won't change this. because I have tested this and all of the testers play this pattern nicely.
2. 01:27:042 (5,6,7,8,9) - how about you add some drum hitsounds here? drum-finish or clap? - okay~
3. 01:35:669 (6,7) - this is nazi-mod but how about you make 7 so it won't touch 6? - no, intended to do so. I like it.
4. 01:48:414 - for the loud... whistle in the background how about adding some finish? - added, in slider-end and 01:47:826 (4)
5. 02:30:179 (5,6) - again this jump could be a bit too much for a Hard - how come? no! they are fine
6. 04:01:552 (2,3,4) - maybe emphasize the chimes with soft hitfinishes? - no, hitwhistle already cover that very well.

[Normal]

1. 00:04:297 (1,2,3) - i think those three loud chimes should be tapped and also emphasized. so change this into circles maybe? also add soft finishes? - maybe no. this already good. well, (1) follows a long sound there and considering about the gameplay too, slider would be the best choice imo.
2. 03:28:610 (5,6,7) - to get the tension and emphasize how about using hitnormals instead of soft ones? - I'll consider this
3. 04:01:159 (1,2,3) - the same with the chimes as i said before. change somehow. so all of them are tippable - same reason as above. I honestly think this is a good suggestion tho.

this is a really nice mapset. take a star. - this is your second time. thank you very much!!

[-Deemo-] wrote:

I tried looking at the Normal difficulty to find something wrong only to be reminded I can't mod normal lol, this song is pretty lon - lol

[Hard]
00:02:728 (5) - NC? - no, one combo last for 2 downbeat.
00:10:179 (6) - NC - will consider this
00:44:297 (5) - My ears tell me that this sounds right, and not right at the same time so .3. - this is good imo. trust me
00:50:767 (8) - NC?
00:53:905 (8) - NC?
01:10:571 (4) - NC?
01:13:709 (4) - NC?
01:17:630 (1) - NC? NC cuz it's like the NC that's right after it
01:19:199 (1) - NC?
02:17:042 (8) - NC?
02:20:179 (10) - NC?
02:36:846 (4) - NC?
02:39:983 (4) - NC?
03:28:610 (5) - NC - yes for this.
03:38:022 (4) - NC
03:41:159 (4) - NC?

for the rest are nope because I use NC every 2 downbeat.

[Insane]
I didn't find a problem with Insane .3. inb4 someone better at modding finds a lot wrong .3. no kd btw - sorry for taking a long time to respond this. thank you very much for your mod.

[ Shana Yami ] wrote:

I tried - hello Shana Yami, thanks for coming
[Normal]
00:18:414 (3) - Flip Horizontal it - sorry, no. It was intended to be like that. I think it's fun in its own way
00:26:061 (5) - should be at 00:25:865 - I'll think about this...no change for now
00:27:434 (3) - Wrong DS - this too ^
00:54:885 (1) - Shouldn't Clap here, also at 00:58:022 - why not? it fits the music very well. you can hear the drum there.
01:52:336 (6) - place at 01:52:140 - will be considered
01:53:905 (3) - place at 01:53:709 - ^
[Hard]
It's ok for me, so I won't mod it - lol
[]
thank you for your mod! I don't have an idea for your suggestion yet, so I put it on hold. I have a plan to change it tho. I'll tell you when I do.

Exa wrote:

[Easy New]
- on hold! because Easy is just an experiment as now
00:05:081 (2,3) - Avoid overlapping. Keep your map as clean as possible.
00:28:218 (4,1) - Same goes for this one.
00:57:630 (4,5) - Flow is not consistent here. I guess it is ok though.
01:15:669 - I suppose you are not ending the map here?

[Easy]
- and goes to this too.
- SV is too big for easy.
00:04:297 (1,2) - Are you trying to blanket?
00:05:865 (3,1) - Are you trying to blanket?
00:28:218 (8,1) - Avoid overlapping.
00:30:571 - Don't skip this beat.
01:03:120 - Again, ending it here?

[Normal]

00:07:434 (1) - Move one tick to the left. - ok
00:22:532 (5,6) - Avoid stacking. - sorry, no. I think this stack fits the song and it looks good too
00:24:297 - Don't skip that beat. - on hold for now, I planned to change this overall.
00:25:865 - Don't skip. - ^
00:47:434 - How about using an 1/4 reverse slider here? - I don't think it's appropriate for normal diff. I have tried this and I don't like how it plays.[color]
00:55:081 (2,3) - Are you trying to blanket? -
01:17:826 (6,1,2,3) - This part is too hard to read. - uh...oh, will consider changing this.
01:18:807 (3,4) - Not a perfect blanket. - fixed a bit. I hope it's perfect now
01:52:336 (6,1) - You do that a lot. It becomes boring after some time. - ikr. I'll try to come up with new ideas later
02:39:591 (1) - Remove new combo. - wait, I think this one is perfect for the song o.o
02:39:983 (2) - Add new combo. - no....
02:44:101 (6,1,2,3) - This part is too hard to read. - disagree, tested to some new players and they did fine here.
02:47:042 (6,1) - Don't do that. When you stack like that, it's usually with 1/2 ticks. Changing to 1/1 here decreases readability. - yup
03:05:277 (2) - Make the end facing the next slider. - fixed a bit. adding curve to make it looks more natural

[Hard]

00:02:728 (5) - New combo.
00:12:728 (6,7) - Not a perfect blanket. - fixed
00:29:983 (2,3) - Not a perfect blanket. - this too
00:30:963 (5,6) - Bad transition here. - not really, it goes well with the music and the vocal too
00:50:767 (8) - New combo.
01:02:336 (1,2) - Are you trying to blanket? - ah yes
01:05:473 (1,3) - Not a perfect bowl. - how come? I don't see it. where?
01:14:885 (1,2) - Too big of a jump here. - it's fine. trust me.
01:17:238 (7) - Ctrl+G. - no for this. I just don't like it
01:22:336 (3,4) - Not a perfect blanket. - fixed
01:32:532 - Don't skip that beat. - nah, I don't think this one need to be emphasized because it's already clear that I follows some instrument *idk the name tho. piano maybe?
01:38:414 (4,5) - Not a perfect blanket. - let it be~
02:36:846 (4,5) - Again, these two are 1/1 and you usually stack when it's 1/2; so this part is hard to read well. - disagree in this one. I already warn the player in the first kiai time 01:10:571. they should be fine here.
03:18:022 - Don't skip that. Following the vocals alongside with the instruments here is your best bet, since they are most noticeable. - I'll consider this
03:19:983 (8,1) - I suggest using reverse sliders here. - will be considered
03:20:571 (2,3) - Same goes for this. - no for this tho. no reason, really. sorry.
03:28:610 (1,2,3) - Try increasing DS here a bit. - I'm out of idea here. I tried to make (2) stacked with previous slider
03:50:375 - While playing, this vocal here is really noticeable. I would do something about it though. I can tell you are following the music though; so you can leave it be. - I'll leave it then

[General]

- All difficulties must end at the same time. Or else the mapset is unrankable.
- Nice normal difficulty.
- Nice insane difficulty.

I see great potential in this mapset. Keep developing it! - thank you.
I loved the Insane, so kds for you. - oh my, not only a mod but a star too? wow thanks!

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hello~ NM as requested - hai hai, welcome!

Nice song~ Have a star in advance xD - whoa...thanks

[General]

1. You are not using this BG : "saekano-2", right? Remove it if so. - maybe later. still searching for a better BG that fits the song

[Normal]

1. 00:08:807 (3) - Pretty nitpicky, but you should move the last anchor point bit to the left for better flow. - ok
2. 00:16:846 (1,2) - Curving (1) even more would make the transition here better. - alright
3. 00:17:434 (2,3) - (3) is in a awkward position, why not try to blanket (2)'s tail with (3)? - in my opinion it is not that awkward. I intend to make the player move the mouse in such way. it's interesting for me.
4. 00:24:297 - Don't miss the snare here, it is quite strong. I suggest to 00:23:512 (1) - reduce this as a 1/1 slider for the clap here. OR you can go for a 1/2 slider and removing 00:24:493 (2) - to emphasize the vocals. - I am planning to remap this part but well, I'm not entirely convinced with your idea. I'll try to remap this later
5. 00:25:865 - ^^ - and this too~
6. 00:26:258 (1,2,3) - These doesn't seem to fit into the rhythm pretty well, how about this? : - great idea! thanks for your idea.
   
   
7. 01:10:963 (5) - To express the vocals here, you should use 2 1/2 sliders. - well, I do want to emphasize the vocal but one is enough. I don't think it's comfortable to play. sorry...
8. 01:35:081 (4) - I think a finish on the head of this slider fits. - hmm...I don't hear cymbal tho. I'll consider this
9. 01:36:454 (6) - Don't miss the clap here - nice one
10. 01:50:571 - Should use a 1/2 slider to express the vocals again. - same with 00:24:297
11. 01:52:140 - ^^ - this too.
12. 01:52:532 (1,2) - This doesn't fit into the rhythm again. Do the same thing like the picture above. - I know, right? xD
13. 01:58:807 (1,2) - Overlapping is fine, but this is just way too much... - fixed a bit
14. 02:21:356 (2,3) - (3) is again on a awkward spot. Try to blanket (2)'s tail with (3) again. - intended. I don't like using blanket too often.
15. 02:28:218 (4,1) - You may as well start (1) off the left, and possibly creating a blanket to create a smoother flow. - nah, I don't like it
16. 02:38:022 (6) - NC here and remove NC at 02:39:591 (1). - no, because I want it have a similar NC pattern with the first kiai
17. 03:09:395 (4,5) - Don't make traps like this, all your previous stacks had a 1/2 spacing. - I'll consider this but no change for now
18. 03:39:199 (6) - NC here and remove NC at 03:40:767 (1). - same with above
19. 03:50:963 (4,1) - Just my opinion, but I think it should look better with a blanket instead of a overlap. - booooo....overlap ftw! lol

thanks to you I've able to remap some part that I mentioned above and I think it turns out nice.
[Hard]

1. 00:19:983 (6,7) - Ugly overlap IMO, would be better with a blanket. - no change.
2. 00:21:160 (1) - Remove NC here. - ok
3. 00:21:552 (3) - Add NC here, and try a jump to express the strong note. - ok
4. 00:26:258 (8,5,6) - Again, ugly overlap IMO, this time use the similar slider shape as 00:30:963 (5). - no. this overlap is nice. it goes well with the song and give a fun flow. try to love overlap instead of blanket! fyi this map inspired by Loneight, that's why I use a lot of overlap.
5. 00:32:140 (7,1) - A jump here doesn't look necessary, I don't really hear any strong beats or instruments. - I don't always put jump in strong beats you know. sometimes, jump added for improving the flow so the map could be more fun. go play it and feel it. no change anyway
6. 00:46:846 (6) - Ctrl + H this and place back at the original position. This will improve the flow a lot. - nope. this is one of my favorite. I have my reason for this, catch me in-game or forum PM if you interested
7. 00:53:512 (7,8) - Flow is broken in this transition, I would rather ctrl + g (5) and (7). - still trying to figure this out
8. 00:55:669 (5,6) - Again an unnecessary jump. - and again with the same reason. no offense
9. 01:27:042 (5,6,7,8) - You used kick sliders for all triplets previously but for quadraplets you are not. You should make these a kick slider. - well, here's the idea of my map. I avoid triplet and using slider instead but for a 5-notes I didn't do that. I do this to make my map have more variation. you would bored if you play a map with most click in white and red line, don't you?
10. 01:35:669 (6,7) - Overlap on these can be avoided while keeping a good flow. - nah. intended to do so.
11. 01:49:395 (1,2) - Don't really know about this overlap... - no change
12. 01:58:414 (6,1) - Another unnecessary jump. - nope.
13. 02:26:846 (1,2,3,4) - For the previous part, you reduced the DS, but here you didn't. Do either 1 of them for the rest of the song. - will consider this. currently looking for ideas
14. 02:38:022 (1,2) - Perfect opportunity for a sliderbow here. - I prefer cross. sorry...
15. 03:28:414 (4,1,2,3) - Listen carefully, there is snares in the background. To show that, it is okay for a increasing volume of claps for all these notes. - ok
16. 03:54:493 (5,6,7,8) - Use a kick slider, since you did that for all triplets. - but not with this one tho.
17. 04:07:238 (3) - I'm hearing that this note should be snapped bit later, maybe even using the 1/24 snap divisor :/ - I will have someone to check this before I made a change

[Mochi's Insane]

1. I can't find anything here, difficulty is really nice

That will be all from me. I hope to see this getting ranked, I love this song
GL! - thank you very much for your support! I will get this ranked, don't worry.

Victorica wrote:

Hi! From my modding queue~ :3 - yo~ hi, welcome!

[Normal]

1. 00:12:728 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe a Pentagon/Star-shaped pattern would be better? Here's an example picture. >< - objectively speaking, yes your pattern is better but....I want to keep this for now. might change it sooner or later. depends on my mood.
   
2. 00:41:944 (1,2) - These two sliders looked awkward. x3 - but it plays fine. I already tested this to some player and they did fine in this part.
3. 01:00:767 (1,2,3,4,1) - The pentagon pattern here isn't very well made. x3 You can use Ctrl D and then Ctrl S to make the patterns. :3 Here's an example picture: - fixed, though it's different with your suggestion a bit.
   
4. 01:04:689 (5,6,1) - I think curving the sliders would make this look nicer~ - I prefer straight. sorry...
5. 01:54:101 (4,5) - On the other hand, these sliders feels a bit too curved. xD - lol. will consider this, no change for now
6. 02:52:140 (1) - Change this slider to a single note and add a spinner after it? (If so, end it at where the slider ended at~) - I like this slider. I would do that if this was easy diff.
7. 03:12:532 (3,4,5,6,1) - Ctrl D~ - umm...for what? I don't see anything changed when I press the button.
8. 03:32:140 (5,6,1) - Curving might make this look better~ - idk tho, still I prefer my current pattern.
9. 04:06:846 - Add something here since there's the piano that you could follow. - yup. thanks for reminding me.

Overall, the Normal difficulty is nice. ^^

[Hard]

1. 00:21:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This part feels awkward. >< There's several was you can improve this part like for example for notes 3 to 7 can be turned into a more proper pentagon formation. - I'm not planning to deny this one. it does awkward for some people but that's what makes this map more challenging to play. the player would be more cautious with similar pattern in Insane diff. also, it already have a nice pentagon imo.
2. 00:55:081 (4,5,6) - This part also looks weird. - I guess you don't like stacked notes. this part is fine. they follow the music properly.
3. 01:17:630 (8,1,2) - These feel really far apart. xD - I'm out of ideas here. maybe change it later
4. 02:52:728 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - You can use Ctrl D and Ctrl S to fix the positions. :3 - how does Ctrl S help my map? it's a command to save. also, what is Ctrl D? I never used that command and when I try I don't see anything different
5. 03:56:061 (4,5) - Instead of putting the single note near the slider start, why not put it right after the end of it so the flow feels better? - actually, this is better. you can hear a loud piano sound in the last note so a jump should be better to emphasize the sound.

The Hard difficulty has potential~ It's really good but some parts needs a bit more polishing. ^^

[Mochi's Insane]

1. 00:38:022 (2,3,4,5,1) - The star pattern could use a little fixing. x3
2. 02:19:395 - There's a beat missing here. >< Unless you're mapping something else that I didn't pick up on this part.
3. 03:38:218 (2,3,4,5,6) - I'm just curious but the star pattern here looks elongated. xD Is this intentional?

This insane is pretty nice to play~ Relaxing~ :3 Good job~ ^^

I hope my mod helped. ^^ - you did a fine job. thank you for your help!

Kocari wrote:

Here from modding queue

[General Overview]

I think this is pretty good, I didn't find anything that was unrankable or that may cause of a big concern in the future. So far it looks great. Do turn off osb though as there isn't a storyboard and the file is just there causing junk. Other than that great job on one hell of a good map. Call me back when easy is done if you want to - pretty sure I have turned off the .osb. please check it (redownload). it may be still there or not.

[Hard]

1. I believe the hitsound pattern like this would benefit more, as the claps used during this section is a bit delayed because of notes (3-5)
   00:21:552 (3) - Add clap 00:21:944 (5) - Remove clap 00:22:140 (6) - Claps on all of them - This will benefit the hitsound more as it maintains the double claps before and at 00:22:728 (8,9) - and removing claps on 5 benefits with 00:22:532 (7) - added clap for 00:22:140 (4) - and that's all. for me, it sounds weird when I remove the clap in 00:21:552 (1) - and removing clap in 00:21:944 (3).
2. 00:29:395 (1) - Sorry gotta be nazi, move slightly down for better blanket - so nitpicky. fixed
3. 00:43:316 (4) - Maybe have more effect with the anchors http://puu.sh/j2emo/3a52bb428c.jpg - this is awesome dude!
4. 00:46:846 (6) - Keeping this as a regular straight slider will be better, the purpose of the red anchor was to move the slider up anyways, so having a regular slider going up would be more clean to the before slider and the repeats, I mean common does this not look good? http://puu.sh/j2eqA/bd85864da9.jpg - umm...no. it looks good but I want to make it slightly different from other map.
5. 01:35:669 (6,7) - ooo overlap here is a bit strange, maybe lean more on the side of this like you use to have before http://puu.sh/j2exn/0faa583356.jpg - nah, it's just my preference. strange is nice for sometimes xD
   like dis 01:48:218 (6,7) -
6. 02:16:061 (4,5,6,7) - This seems quite jumbled and doesn't really look good, cleaner like this http://puu.sh/j2eCY/81c1d8b0d6.jpg - okay~
7. 02:28:218 (4) - Clap to utilize the beat in the music? also to start off the kiai strongly with that clap, so these can dramatically increase the entry to it - oh wow. this part now feels a lot better then before.
8. 02:28:218 (4,1) -
9. 03:09:395 (6) - Can start a NC here to keep it short, and because the stringy guitar or something sound increases in volume, so you can use NC here to categorize that - alright. still not sure about this tho.
10. 03:28:610 (1,2,3) - You can emphasize these by using inheriting timing sections to increase the volume of each note to be played to its potential - yup
11. 03:42:924 (2,3) - I said the same thing in insane as well, you can have double finishes here to increase the vocal effect as having just one play the part she is singing and leaving the other out seems strange, fully commit to that vocal - umm...maybe? changed anyway. xD
    Nicely done - /o/

[Normal]

1. 00:03:512 (4) - Distance Snap please - okok
2. 00:04:101 (5) - Same as above here - k
3. 00:08:807 (3) - Claps here makes this stronger on head and tail for that beat in the music - whistle is good enough for this one. clap is too loud
4. 00:11:160 (2) - DS - ok
5. 00:12:728 (4) - Same ^
6. 00:14:885 (4,5) - Try something like this, the pattern itself is ok but keep it turned into a rectangle rather than a weird one http://puu.sh/j2f7w/45c35a6880.jpg - lol ok
7. 00:23:120 - The downbeat would be better utilized if it was a note rather than ending it with a slider as the next slider appears to be awkward or a slider can work into this http://puu.sh/j2fe7/798cd6a785.jpg - oh man, ily <3
8. 00:42:728 (2) - I'm not sure about this, but lets see what others have to say - this is fine.
   That's probably about it but be sure to check DS, to maintain 1.0 some are slightly off so give it a good lookthrough so you can fix and make cleaner - roger that

haha5957 wrote:

[Hard]
01:17:630 (8,1) - I expect something harder or dynamic pattern on this part of music, looks too simple for "the most kiaiest part" of a map...? - I don't have any ideas left for this one orz
02:37:042 (x) - I excpect a beat here, dont care it being circle or sliderend ovo - added a note for now. might change to original pattern later.
02:44:689 (1) - same as 01:17 - change to slider and a note

good map and good luck! - thanks for the star!