1. Easy (1.69 stars, 215 notes)
2. Hard (3.5 stars, 486 notes)
3. Insane (4.71 stars, 624 notes)
4. Normal (2.16 stars, 284 notes)
5. Skystar's Extra (5.75 stars, 798 notes)

Fycho wrote:

Insane (4.76 stars, 623 notes)

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

沙发沙发

[Insane]
嘉文的语气：I prefer tickrate2 照顾一下穿白线的长slider 不喜TR2
00:21:687 (2) - 还是平均一下间距的好没平均 换了间距
00:52:476 (3) - ↑ 或者23距离大于34距离 改不改没说法
01:06:924 (1) - whistle我不喜欢whistle+finish一起加
01:44:266 (4,5,6) - 像01:43:792 (2)那样带点弧度如何 稍微blanket一下带弧度不好打
02:22:634 - 这段速度感觉需要再降一点 X8或者X0.75不要


[Hard]
00:07:950 (3,1) - 不平行一下么平不平行没说法，不可以去平行
01:06:924 (1) - 同insane whistle
02:28:319 (3) - blanket有点歪 X172 Y312的锚点拉到X192 Y300 flow优先，我不考虑blanket
02:46:160 (4,5) - CTRL+G做个对跳？hard这样太难

后面太nazi懒摸 反正你也不会改

edit for mod

Kagamine Ren wrote:

Fycho wrote:

Insane (4.76 stars, 623 notes)

623真爱系列

[Easy]

1. aimod里有三个unsnap fix
2. 00:22:950 (3,1) - 不平行不刻意平行 没什么区别
3. 01:53:423 (3,4) - ^
4. 02:52:476 (2,3) - ^
5. 00:40:950 (4,1) - 这两个碰到了moved

[Normal]

1. 00:51:055 (4) - 加个whistle听起来好这一段都不加whistle
2. 02:11:108 (1,2) - 这样放还不如干脆blanket改的更“不blanket”了
3. 01:38:266 (4) - 滑条头加whistle，前后类似的地方是有whistle的same
4. 01:40:792 (4) - ^

[Hard]

1. 00:23:739 (5,5) - 没叠好=。=
2. 02:04:003 (2,3,4) - 把中间那个往上一点，让他们空间上距离一样

[Insane]

1. 00:20:739 (2) - 移到425,263左右，跟上面两个距离弄一样换到别处去了
2. 00:29:897 (4) - 这位置有点别扭。把这个放到00:28:950 (1) - 这个滑条头的位置感觉不错 那样flow反而绕的太别手
3. 01:15:371 (5) - 稍微往右一点，看起来跟左右距离有点不一样换了梗

tag里加上 hatsune mikuok

Fycho wrote:

1. Insane (4.71 stars, 624 notes)

Regraz wrote:

Fycho wrote:

1. Insane (4.71 stars, 624 notes)

真爱美丽

Hi!
Here's Regraz Mod! :3/

General

>>If you want to keep the tag 初音ミク, consider putting “Hatsune Miku”in the tags, too?

Easy

Rhythm
>>00:21:371 (1,2,3) - The rhythm sounds a little weird And the red-line 3/2 space from 2 to 3 is even harder to those newbie players than 1/2 under such a circumstance. Try this instead? http://puu.sh/fjUn7/66267c5322.jpg I know the use of 1/2 in Easy with such BPM is a little hard, but I think it is easier for newbie players to catch the rhythm for the accordance and consistency of the vocal and downbeats, also providing high readablity with the stack caused by the DS of 1/2. changed on my way
Structure
>>00:40:950 (4,1) - (Nazi) Avoid the slight overlap? It may somewhat causes the confusion of the rhythm even if the DS is stable.
Hitsound & Others
>>Dunno if this is ok now? 00:11:424 (1) - only 1/2 after its previous note. Same at 01:06:055 (3,1) -kept it

Normal

Rhythm
>>00:07:003 Consider mapping this sound out like this? http://puu.sh/fjWaH/5940943e89.jpg Leaving the sound unmapped feels a little weird cause there’s a strong music pitch varying sound. And it will only break the whitsle-pattern of your hitsound.我觉得没什么必要

Structure
>> (Nazi)【强迫症患者】01:25:161 (2,3) – 再摆歪一点或者摆成一条直线？
>> 01:34:003 (4) – HP-bar touching object.
>> 02:11:108 (1,2) –Blanket them?换成其他了
Hitsound & Others
>>Consider using smaller CS like 3.3? Since there’s an Easy and the CS of it is already 3.这个等我考虑考虑

Hard

Rhythm
>>00:50:108 (3) – Suggesting 1/1 slider here for keeping a consistency with 00:49:161 (1,2) -. Also making the sound at 00:50:582 a single note is nice imo. Same at latter sections.这样明显不好吧
>>01:06:450 Add a note here?原来有 不过删了 太难
Structure
>>Cannot understand clearly about the slightly DS variety. 有的时候1.1x 有的时候1.2x？是和滑条速度配合的吗？基本是
>>00:37:161 (2,1) – Hmm there’re some Nazis but I think it is necessary to mention this because this is too obvious.这离得太远了懒去动了
>>01:25:319 (3,1) – (Just personal reference) Maybe it will be of better performance when stacking them.nope I dont like that
Hitsound & Others
Nice

Insane

Rhythm
OK
Structure
>>00:13:003 (3,1) - ;w;
>>00:17:739 (2,3) – Why jump?I like
>>00:40:950 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) – Try this? http://puu.sh/fk3kx/fc27b5fa3b.jpg changed in another way
>>01:06:213 (2) – Better to keep regular DS here.后面的是串子 没事
>>01:19:003 (4,5) – Too sudden and large jump. Consider reducing it. Same at latter sections. Though it will provide better play-feeling to use jump to emphasize in silent/smooth music sections, these large jumps are really excessive. 这几个是强调鼓音的
>>01:32:108 (1,2) – Ctrl+G respectively for better flow不喜欢那样.
>>02:40:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) – Consider improving this stream shape?我觉得还行
>>02:47:582 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/fk4d9/283d972324.jpg
Hitsound & Others
OK

Good Luck！Really great map!

Crystal wrote:

[Insane]
00:09:687 (4) - 472|232, for better flow imo. flow更不好
00:38:582 (4,5,6) - Make them straight?先放着吧
01:06:371 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Not smooth imo. 我喜欢这种http://puu.sh/fk6IZ/8515965cea.jpg
*02:12:055 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^
01:21:213 (3,4) - It easily leads to a combobreak at slider, consider making the slider a bit more curved, or setting the circle to another place, which makes the flow angle a bit bigger.我觉得不会，打了也不会

[Hard]
00:37:003 - Add a circle? Here it is like a sudden surprising stop imo.没必要
01:42:687 - ^
02:54:213 (1) - 84|84, to adjust distance here. (If you change this, 02:54:687 (2) - 296|96.) yea


Fine, take a star and good luck!

Kibbleru wrote:

lol i feel like its skystar or something

oh damn i just realized vincent was mapping this too LOL

Kibbleru wrote:

lol i feel like its skystar or something

oh damn i just realized vincent was mapping this too LOL
maybe you should give him some credit for the mp3, he DID BUY the CD in order to get the good quality mp3 >_<

CloudSplash16 wrote:

- ❤️ -

[General]

1. Remove all unused green lines in each diff.
2. Maybe add "shigure ui" in tags too.

[Easy]

1. Just my opinion: This map feels quite fast for Easy diff... Despite not having any 1/2, it feels more like an easier Normal. At high BPM, I think it is more suitable to have slightly lowered SV, since the absolute speed of sliders scales on BPM. Also, the map consists entirely of 1/1 and 3/2, which at such high BPM is hard for beginner players to keep up with. I think beginners will struggle to react fast enough.
2. 00:08:108 (4) - Whistle on head?
3. 00:22:161 (2) - On similar notes, you sometimes used whistle, and sometimes not, and seems a bit random. Is there some pattern that I am missing? You used whistle at head of 01:27:845 (2) and on 01:30:371 (2) so why not also on 00:22:161 (2) and 00:24:687 (2)
4. 00:23:266 (4) - Whistle on head? it matches with 00:25:792 (4) and 00:28:318 (4)
5. 00:33:687 (4) - I think clap here is not really appropriate, as it's not actually snare sound in music. It's more of a dull/low drum sound, and the map's hitsound pattern will also sound better without clap here.
6. 00:56:108 (4) - I think the finish on the end is a bit extra, not necessary.
7. 01:32:897 (2) - Whistle here too? It is the same as 00:27:213 (2)
8. 01:39:371 (4) - Same as 00:33:687 (4) and also, make 01:39:687 (1) hitsound match with 00:34:003 (1)
9. 01:48:055 (2,3) - How about moving them so the curve of (3) fits with (2) smoother: http://puu.sh/fp9Kd/8c5fa54d28.jpg
10. 01:53:108 (2) - The hitsound should match with 00:47:424 (2) I think.
11. 02:00:687 (2,3,4) - Hmm... placement here feels a bit weak. Like.. (3,4) doesn't feel very good to play. Better to have (3) above (4), maybe like: http://puu.sh/fpa6R/48a58a1757.jpg or http://puu.sh/fpabR/6d2be314f4.jpg
12. 02:11:739 (3,1) - I feel that players are very likely to hit (1) too early, because it is preceded by objects that are all offbeats, which can cause them to click at 02:12:371 or even if they know the rhythm, the lack of background beat may cause them to hesitate and not be able to click the circle in the right time. My first suggestion is this but maybe you don't like it because you want click on the last beat... so maybe you can extend (3) like this instead: http://puu.sh/fpaQj/9d8cf3c010.jpg I know it doesn't follow vocals that way, but it still goes fine with drum, and avoids confusing beginner players with that kind of rhythm change.
13. 02:57:529 (2,3) - 哇, spacing suddenly got big here. 哇
14. Note that some hitsound suggestions I made here may extend to other diffs too.

[Normal]

1. 00:01:161 (1,2) - Fix the distance spacing.
2. 01:17:897 (3,5) - Stack it?
3. 01:26:582 (4) - I think it's better to angle it a bit like this: http://puu.sh/fph75/148dec76d1.jpg It will give nicer motion from (3).
4. 02:50:108 (3,4) - Better to stack these, since the direction change is so sharp, and also consistent since you stacked in the other two kiai sections.

[Hard]

1. 00:19:318 (2) - Try to avoid putting the head so close to sliderbody of (1). You can move it to the left a bit and still keep distance spacing: http://puu.sh/fpke5/46c925e21f.jpg
2. 00:23:739 (5,5) - Doesn't really matter, but it just bothers me a bit that there aren't stacked
3. 01:19:161 (4) - Reverse works better here in my opinion. I actually thought it was that, the first time I played. It feels a bit similar to 01:17:424 (2,3)I think it's fine.
4. 01:55:792 (3) - Not sure if it's intended, but the sharp corner on the second node doesn't look good to me. I think it's better to move the third node right like this: http://puu.sh/fpkWT/63e821eb4d.jpg it's intentional:<<
5. 02:46:003 (3) - Just for appearance, I think it will look better if this is higher up, so (1,2,3) looks more even: http://puu.sh/fpljB/177170652c.jpg

[Insane]

1. 00:17:739 (2) - Sounds empty. Add a whistle on the end?
2. 00:45:845 (4) - This part flows better if you move this up a little bit: http://puu.sh/fpnjF/bf0c9fe8a2.jpg Just very little.
3. 00:51:529 (4) - This is overlapping with the hp bar. If possible, try to avoid this.
4. 00:56:424 (4,1) - Hmm.. stack doesn't fit well here imo. I think 1/2 slider rhythm would be much better. I think it works well
5. 01:27:529 (3,4,1) - Movement here feels a bit awkward. I think flow will be much better if you move (4) like this: http://puu.sh/fpnWR/74227f4022.jpg
6. 02:06:055 (1) - This is touching hp bar. Can move it down a bit?
7. 02:24:845 (4) - Maybe try Ctrl+G. it plays not good
8. 02:43:161 (2) - I think move this down, since (2,3) spacing is a bit too small compared to the others before it.
9. 02:47:266 (4,5,1) - Feels very strange in my opinion. I think it's better to move (5) like this: http://puu.sh/fpoGl/997c6e3062.jpg

Good luck!