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neonat

Beatmap Nominator

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

neonat 2015-01-31T09:40:03+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, 14 March 2015 at 11:53:20 PM

Artist: minato
Title: SECRET & TRAP
Tags: Vocaloid Kagamine Rin magnet -favorites plus- minatone Regraz
BPM: 129
Filesize: 6538kb
Play Time: 03:07
Difficulties Available:

Hard (2.81 stars, 356 notes)
Insane (3.49 stars, 530 notes)
Regraz's Normal (1.64 stars, 205 notes)

Download: minato - SECRET & TRAP
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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34th Submission

RIP Hitsouding, what am I doing.

Another slow song, from the album magnet (also magnet -favorites plus-)

Normal by Regraz!

Last edited by neonat 2015-03-14T15:54:10+00:00, edited 11 times in total.

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-01-31T10:06:50+00:00

1st

luxoDeh

1,497 posts

Joined February 2012

luxoDeh 2015-02-06T16:24:44+00:00

Hi! first mod from my vocaloid queue

REGRAZ'S NORMAL

00:45:716 (2,3) - check blancket
00:53:158 (2,4) - stack perfectly
01:10:367 (6,1) - blancket
01:37:809 (2,3) - ^
01:45:251 (2,4) - check the stack as before
02:12:228 (2) - maybe make this shape to blancket better 02:14:088 (1) - . something like this (just to make it more clean imo :3)

SPOILER

02:22:693 - and 02:22:925 - are these green lines usefull?

HARD

01:06:879 - add a note here? since it's the last strong beat before the soft part
01:16:414 (6) - move it 3-4 grids up, to be more in line with the next slider
02:51:065 (5,7) - stack is not perfect
03:02:460 (5,6) - you did perfect pattern all the map, try to make this curve with a better blancket, or anyway something different. this is the only thing that contrast the rest of the diff
very nice hard

INSANE

- 00:10:832 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - hm.. here it's clearly heared a strongest beat at 00:11:298 - but this stream really don't emphatize it.. I see you put the new combo, and also that a little jump can be also not good.. maybe try to put a stronger hitsound.. or maybe change 00:11:298 (1,2,3) - with a reverse slider
- 01:07:111 - I think maybe here you should place a note, because the song gets slow in a sudden and this slider 01:07:344 (1) - has a distance that make you think that it have to be hitten in a sudden, and it kinda break the flow imo.
- 01:26:995 (3,4) - why did you choose this placement? it make an unnecessary overlap with 01:25:716 (1) - I think you can make a stack, or placing these notes somewhere else
- 01:32:693 (6,7,8) - try to make the curve of this triplet smoother
- 01:44:321 (1,2) - I think this small overlpa can be avoided, also to be more consistent with the rest of the map

Really nice and solid map! I'll leave a star ^.^
Good luck!

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,367 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2015-02-07T01:42:12+00:00

@luxoDeh
All fixed except the greenlines! SInce they change the volume of spinner bonus and it goes with the music.
Thank you!

;w;

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 08.SECRET  TRAP.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44786
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:SECRET & TRAP
TitleUnicode:SECRET ＆ TRAP
Artist:minato
ArtistUnicode:minato
Creator:neonat
Version:Regraz's Normal
Source:
Tags:Vocaloid Kagamine Rin minatone Regraz
BeatmapID:631745
BeatmapSetID:274593

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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luxoDeh wrote:
Really nice and solid map! I'll leave a star ^.^

I'd leave one, too. Out of the love of vocaloid and the great map itslef!

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,528 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

neonat 2015-02-07T02:23:10+00:00

luxoDeh wrote:
Hi! first mod from my vocaloid queue

HARD

01:06:879 - add a note here? since it's the last strong beat before the soft part for the Hard I was focusing solely on that certain instrumental part, so I only mapped to that specifically
01:16:414 (6) - move it 3-4 grids up, to be more in line with the next slider ok
02:51:065 (5,7) - stack is not perfect tried again then lol
03:02:460 (5,6) - you did perfect pattern all the map, try to make this curve with a better blancket, or anyway something different. this is the only thing that contrast the rest of the diff did something to change the shape of the slider
very nice hard

INSANE

- 00:10:832 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - hm.. here it's clearly heared a strongest beat at 00:11:298 - but this stream really don't emphatize it.. I see you put the new combo, and also that a little jump can be also not good.. maybe try to put a stronger hitsound.. or maybe change 00:11:298 (1,2,3) - with a reverse slider I think I will keep this for now, it seems decent enough, though maybe there could be more ways to emphasize it in the future
- 01:07:111 - I think maybe here you should place a note, because the song gets slow in a sudden and this slider 01:07:344 (1) - has a distance that make you think that it have to be hitten in a sudden, and it kinda break the flow imo. I don't think that string-like instrumental is big enough for me to map to though, I just felt it sounded better as a break to be honest
- 01:26:995 (3,4) - why did you choose this placement? it make an unnecessary overlap with 01:25:716 (1) - I think you can make a stack, or placing these notes somewhere else The way things are placed are usually dictated by where my mouse naturally moves to for the maps lol, hence I felt that such position moved nicely for me, and the overlap made a slight differing touch to it
- 01:32:693 (6,7,8) - try to make the curve of this triplet smoother edited slightly
- 01:44:321 (1,2) - I think this small overlpa can be avoided, also to be more consistent with the rest of the map shifted

Really nice and solid map! I'll leave a star ^.^
Good luck!

Thanks for star and mod

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2015-02-11T16:43:48+00:00

Hello~
Responding to your ticket request via PM.
So let's get started~

Take note: Everything in bold is highly suggested.
Everything in red is unrankable.

General:

Uncheck “Widescreen support” in all your diffs, since you don’t have a storyboard.
I suggest adding this soundfile to get rid of the sliderslide sound:
http://puu.sh/fMgSd/44a0d148f7.wav

Regraz’s Normal:

00:18:739 –This sounds like an important beat to me, so I suggest trying to place a circle here to emphasize that beat better. So maybe try this:
Picture
00:59:670 –This is also quite an important beat and will make gameplay more fun and enjoyable if you place a note (circle) there to punctuate that beat.
Picture
I just removed the repeat and placed a circle here: 00:59:670 –
01:17:809 (6,3) –Try to make a blanket here.
Picture
01:21:995 (1) –Why don’t you try to stack the head of this slider on the tail of 01:20:135 (3) -?
01:25:716 (1,2) –Not a fan of this flow and placement so maybe try something like this instead:
Picture
I made a sort of double blanket there, so you’ll have to adjust both sliders to make that blanket work.
01:28:507 (3,1) –Nazi. This blanket can be improved a tiny bit.[/b]
01:51:763 –Same as my previous suggestion. Try to place a circle there to emphasize the beat better.
Picture
02:08:507 (2,1) –If I were you, I’d try to avoid this overlap, but I cause it’s probably not such a big issue. It’s just my opinion.
02:30:832 (1) –I don’t know if this is just an accident, but please remove this single combo. It’s inconsistent with your previous combos and doesn’t make sense. So remove new combo here: 02:32:228 (1) – and then add new combo here: 02:34:553 (3) -
02:40:599 (1) –For consistency, remove new combo here and then add new combo here: 02:41:995 (3) –

Just a few nazi things that need fixing, but other than that, this diff looks great~

Hard:

00:26:181 (9) –For consistency, add new combo here and remove new combo here: 00:26:414 (1) –
00:25:251 (6,7) –I suggest rather removing this jump and adding a jump here: 00:26:181 (9) – Where the new combo starts.
00:36:414 (5,6) –Rather try one of these rhythms. I think it fits better with the vocals:
Picture
00:47:577 –Since this is quite an important beat I suggest placing a circle here.
Picture
01:03:391 (1) –Stack this circle on 01:02:460 (4) -?
01:18:274 –I really suggest placing a note here, since it’s quite an important beat. Then you can maybe also change these two circles: 01:18:507 (1,2) – into a slider to avoid having too many circles in a row.
01:51:763 –Rather try to place a circle here to emphasize that beat more.
Picture
02:07:809 (2) –Rather place this circle somewhere here to make a blanket with 02:06:646 (1) –
Picture
02:12:228 (5,6,7,8) –The placement of these notes looks a bit random, so try to maybe place them in a half-circle shape. Like this:
Picture
02:21:530 (1) –I suggest rather ending this spinner here: 02:22:925 – Then place a ½ slider here: 02:23:391 – The reason for this suggestion is cuz I think that it will be more effective if you start placing notes from here: 02:23:391 – instead since the vocals start there again.
Picture
02:26:181 – and 02:27:111 –Important beats that should rather have a circle in my opinion to emphasize them better. (There are other places as well, but I’m not going to point out all of them.)

Just like Normal, just a few nazi stuff that requires improvement, but it’s a very nice diff overall.

I’m not good at modding Insanes, so I’m rather going to leave it.

I'll shoot a star~
Good Luck with your map, neonat~!

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,367 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2015-02-13T12:53:11+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
Hello~
Responding to your ticket request via PM.
So let's get started~

Take note: Everything in bold is highly suggested.
Everything in red is unrankable.

Regraz’s Normal:
00:18:739 –This sounds like an important beat to me, so I suggest trying to place a circle here to emphasize that beat better. So maybe try this: OK
Picture
00:59:670 –This is also quite an important beat and will make gameplay more fun and enjoyable if you place a note (circle) there to punctuate that beat. OK
Picture
I just removed the repeat and placed a circle here: 00:59:670 –
01:17:809 (6,3) –Try to make a blanket here. OK
Picture
01:21:995 (1) –Why don’t you try to stack the head of this slider on the tail of 01:20:135 (3) -? OK
01:25:716 (1,2) –Not a fan of this flow and placement so maybe try something like this instead:
Picture
Hmm, I think mine is fine. This will break my idea at 2 to 3.
I made a sort of double blanket there, so you’ll have to adjust both sliders to make that blanket work.
01:28:507 (3,1) –Nazi. This blanket can be improved a tiny bit.[/b] Trying to
01:51:763 –Same as my previous suggestion. Try to place a circle there to emphasize the beat better. OK
Picture
02:08:507 (2,1) –If I were you, I’d try to avoid this overlap, but I cause it’s probably not such a big issue. It’s just my opinion. It's intentional
02:30:832 (1) –I don’t know if this is just an accident, but please remove this single combo. It’s inconsistent with your previous combos and doesn’t make sense. So remove new combo here: 02:32:228 (1) – and then add new combo here: 02:34:553 (3) -
02:40:599 (1) –For consistency, remove new combo here and then add new combo here: 02:41:995 (3) – Fixed these two combo issues.

Thank you very much!

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neonat

Beatmap Nominator

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Topic Starter

neonat 2015-02-20T03:13:33+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
Hello~
Responding to your ticket request via PM.
So let's get started~

Take note: Everything in bold is highly suggested.
Everything in red is unrankable.

Hard:
00:26:181 (9) –For consistency, add new combo here and remove new combo here: 00:26:414 (1) – fixed the NC for the song elsewhere as well
00:25:251 (6,7) –I suggest rather removing this jump and adding a jump here: 00:26:181 (9) – Where the new combo starts. keeping for now
00:36:414 (5,6) –Rather try one of these rhythms. I think it fits better with the vocals: intended break
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00:47:577 –Since this is quite an important beat I suggest placing a circle here. following the held vocal
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01:03:391 (1) –Stack this circle on 01:02:460 (4) -? want it directly above 5
01:18:274 –I really suggest placing a note here, since it’s quite an important beat. Then you can maybe also change these two circles: 01:18:507 (1,2) – into a slider to avoid having too many circles in a row. I think that beat is honestly just a lead-in which and may or may not be mapped to, optional
01:51:763 –Rather try to place a circle here to emphasize that beat more. this part still can be felt like a returning slider though
Picture
02:07:809 (2) –Rather place this circle somewhere here to make a blanket with 02:06:646 (1) – it cuts the movement too much with that angle, I don't want to do as such because of movement
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02:12:228 (5,6,7,8) –The placement of these notes looks a bit random, so try to maybe place them in a half-circle shape. Like this: I just made the rise in the pattern slightly higher, do not want to change angle/direction
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02:21:530 (1) –I suggest rather ending this spinner here: 02:22:925 – Then place a ½ slider here: 02:23:391 – The reason for this suggestion is cuz I think that it will be more effective if you start placing notes from here: 02:23:391 – instead since the vocals start there again. I get where you're going, but I feel each difficulty presents this differently, Hard shows it with spinners, Insane does what you mention
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02:26:181 – and 02:27:111 –Important beats that should rather have a circle in my opinion to emphasize them better. (There are other places as well, but I’m not going to point out all of them.) will consider

Just like Normal, just a few nazi stuff that requires improvement, but it’s a very nice diff overall.

I’m not good at modding Insanes, so I’m rather going to leave it.

I'll shoot a star~
Good Luck with your map, neonat~!

Thanks : )

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2015-02-21T18:20:05+00:00

Hey neonat!

General

You can add these words in the tags: 流星P RyuuseiP トゥライ.
Disable Widescreen Support since you don't have a SB.

Regraz's Normal

Hello Regraz!

01:36:879 (1) - I don't see a point with ending that slider on the red tick, instead of the upbeat. Since you didn't do this in the first kiai section, you might reduce the length by 1/2 a beat, so ending it on the upbeat.
02:06:646 - I like the long sliders, but I don't think it would go with the difficulty, which is a normal difficulty. You can spice up a bit like adding circles on 02:09:902 - 02:13:623 .
02:24:321 - Add a circle here? The gap in the timeline seems large to me, since the BPM is low. Adding a circle there would shorten the gap a bit. There's also 02:57:809 that you can add a 1/1 slider there.

Nothing else to say about the difficulty.

Hard

00:07:809 (3) - Curve the slider around the next slider's head? It's not an issue, but I think the blanket pattern will look nicer.
00:40:135 (5) - Add a repeat on the slider? The repeat sliders in this section follows very well with the vocals and beats in the music, so I thought continuing the same rhythm would the case.
01:07:111 - This skip feels very awkward just because the object follows on the vocal on 01:07:344 . I'd add something on that beat, like a circle or extending the previous slider with a repeat.
02:06:763 - This sounds a bit weird to be honest, and this rhythm isn't applied on other similar measures, like 02:10:367 . So my suggestion is that you modify the rhythm with objects that land on red ticks by the rhythm 02:10:367 (1,2,3,4) -, so it could keep consistency in the rhythm.
02:18:274 - The circles follows the piano, then after the vocals? The point is that it sounds weird. I would add a 1/1 slider on 02:18:507 to follow the piano.
02:36:879 (5) - Aesthetically, I would move the tail to x:367 y:167 so the tail doesn't "touch" the next slider's tail.
03:05:716 (6,1) - Adding more distance between them, so a jump, would make more sense, then 03:05:018 (4,5) will get the same distance as you use as constant distance (1.10x).

Insane

00:07:577 to 00:09:437 - The distance in that section is consistent to the other patterns, which have a larger distance.
00:16:181 (5) - Move this circle so the pattern 00:15:949 (4,5,6) makes an isosceles triangle? Also, the distance from this to the next slider seems to not make sense to me.
00:29:902 (1) - You don't really see it, but after bouncing the repeat, it touches the circle 00:31:181 (3) . So maybe lower the repeat's position a bit?
00:41:995 (1) - Remove the new combo to keep the consistency.
01:15:018 (3) - Lower the distance from this to the previous note? The vocals seems to be stable, until the next big downbeat.
01:21:995 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - isn't consistent to the previous section, because the distance between is 1.3x instead of 1.4x.

This should be it! Good luck with your map, neonat! Don't hesitate on asking me questions concerning about the mod!

Mafumafu

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Mafumafu 2015-02-22T01:37:08+00:00

sheela901 wrote:

Regraz's Normal
Hello Regraz!
01:36:879 (1) - I don't see a point with ending that slider on the red tick, instead of the upbeat. Since you didn't do this in the first kiai section, you might reduce the length by 1/2 a beat, so ending it on the upbeat. OK, fixed another way
02:06:646 - I like the long sliders, but I don't think it would go with the difficulty, which is a normal difficulty. You can spice up a bit like adding circles on 02:09:902 - 02:13:623 . I think they are fine. Since I've used ths in my ranked mapset already.
02:24:321 - Add a circle here? The gap in the timeline seems large to me, since the BPM is low. Adding a circle there would shorten the gap a bit. There's also 02:57:809 that you can add a 1/1 slider there. That's something deliberate. As is known, in lower diffs, there needs to be enough place after a spinner, so why I'd liketo make the space such large? It is because the ending point of the slider at 02:23:390 is already the start of a sentence, so I'd like to leave the whole sentence empty.Adding a note as you said will break this spac, namely break ths sentence. So I'd like to keep my current one.
Nothing else to say about the difficulty.

Thank you!

Code:

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 08.SECRET  TRAP.mp3
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Title:SECRET & TRAP
TitleUnicode:SECRET ＆ TRAP
Artist:minato
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Tags:Vocaloid Kagamine Rin minatone Regraz
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neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,528 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

neonat 2015-02-23T01:55:24+00:00

sheela901 wrote:

Hey neonat!
General
You can add these words in the tags: 流星P RyuuseiP トゥライ.
Disable Widescreen Support since you don't have a SB. ok

Hard
00:07:809 (3) - Curve the slider around the next slider's head? It's not an issue, but I think the blanket pattern will look nicer. I prefer when the connection between objects is this way
00:40:135 (5) - Add a repeat on the slider? The repeat sliders in this section follows very well with the vocals and beats in the music, so I thought continuing the same rhythm would the case. tried that then
01:07:111 - This skip feels very awkward just because the object follows on the vocal on 01:07:344 . I'd add something on that beat, like a circle or extending the previous slider with a repeat. I will try it out, since the gap here is longer than Insane and the effect I tried making with the pause doesn't really show up much here in Hard
02:06:763 - This sounds a bit weird to be honest, and this rhythm isn't applied on other similar measures, like 02:10:367 . So my suggestion is that you modify the rhythm with objects that land on red ticks by the rhythm 02:10:367 (1,2,3,4) -, so it could keep consistency in the rhythm. changed some rhythm
02:18:274 - The circles follows the piano, then after the vocals? The point is that it sounds weird. I would add a 1/1 slider on 02:18:507 to follow the piano. piano is 1/2 beats as well
02:36:879 (5) - Aesthetically, I would move the tail to x:367 y:167 so the tail doesn't "touch" the next slider's tail. they aren't touching, and I think they still seem fine
03:05:716 (6,1) - Adding more distance between them, so a jump, would make more sense, then 03:05:018 (4,5) will get the same distance as you use as constant distance (1.10x). shifted slightly further

Insane
00:07:577 to 00:09:437 - The distance in that section is consistent to the other patterns, which have a larger distance. no change here
00:16:181 (5) - Move this circle so the pattern 00:15:949 (4,5,6) makes an isosceles triangle? Also, the distance from this to the next slider seems to not make sense to me. shifted circle
00:29:902 (1) - You don't really see it, but after bouncing the repeat, it touches the circle 00:31:181 (3) . So maybe lower the repeat's position a bit? I still don't see it though, maybe see if others mention it
00:41:995 (1) - Remove the new combo to keep the consistency. ok
01:15:018 (3) - Lower the distance from this to the previous note? The vocals seems to be stable, until the next big downbeat. shifted slightly
01:21:995 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - isn't consistent to the previous section, because the distance between is 1.3x instead of 1.4x. not changing this, I made it such that it remains consistent within itself, and I don't think it is too much a difference from the previous

This should be it! Good luck with your map, neonat! Don't hesitate on asking me questions concerning about the mod!

Thanks~

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2015-03-03T09:43:37+00:00

Hello~

00:18:739 (1,2,3) - Make 12 and head of 3 an equilateral triangle?
00:20:600 (4,5) - Suggest shift 4 lower to form nicer flow towards 5:
SPOILER
00:31:065 - Don't like how this area is empty, suggest rhythm like that:
SPOILER
00:34:786 (2) - Same^
00:52:228 (1,2,3,4) - Suggest centralizing
01:10:367 (6) - Suggest rhythm here to change to something like in spoilerbox because there are strong drums there
SPOILER
01:18:274 (1) - Suggest shifting 1 lower to form nicer flow
SPOILER
01:20:135 (3,1) - Overlap of sliders may be confusing, consider changing 01:21:065 (4) - to just slider and hitcircle instead
01:21:995 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Rhythm here is too boring, I suggest change but its fine as such
01:34:088 (3) - (Sorry I'm super picky when it comes to sliders) Suggest change slider shape, refer to following spoilerboxes
SPOILER
Removing the 4th point

SPOILER
or changing co-ordinates to 286|97, 340|111, 375|77, 417|58, 465|79

SPOILER
or change to an ordinary wave slider
01:59:204 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Suggest remove to keep consistency with rest of the map
02:08:507 (2,1) - Don't like how they intersect
02:10:367 (1,2) - Don't like how they don't blanket
02:12:228 (2,1) - ^ Slider art here not really nice in my taste
03:06:181 (3) - To keep consistency with the rest of the parts, I suggest changing this to a 1/1 slider instead

Very nice Normal! I liked most of the rhythm, just the slider art at the slow bit bugged me a little but its generally ok.

Also not to forget:

2015-03-03 16:44 Estellia-: Ok I'll start with Hard
2015-03-03 16:45 Estellia-: 00:07:809 (3,4) - I would say the transition of sliders are v awkward, but if you think its fine you can keep it
2015-03-03 16:46 Estellia-: 00:09:670 (2) - I would say rotate this by 20deg to form a nicer ~ like flow
2015-03-03 16:46 Estellia-: 00:18:739 (1,2,3) - Fix the distance snap maybe? 1-2 = 2-3
2015-03-03 16:47 Estellia-: 00:22:693 (2,4) - Make 2 blanket 4 as well
2015-03-03 16:47 neonat: i rather 10 degrees
2015-03-03 16:47 Estellia-: Alright^
2015-03-03 16:47 Estellia-: 00:40:135 (5,6) - Why not blanket?
2015-03-03 16:48 Estellia-: 00:55:018 (8,9,1) - I would say fix the distancing here
2015-03-03 16:48 neonat: didn't want to, and wanted it to be less curved than the previous 2
2015-03-03 16:48 Estellia-: Oh^
2015-03-03 16:48 Estellia-: 00:59:670 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really like how this isn't centralized
2015-03-03 16:49 Estellia-: 01:11:763 (3,4,5) - Fix distancing
2015-03-03 16:49 neonat: still a matching pattern lol
2015-03-03 16:49 Estellia-: You aren't wrong I guess
2015-03-03 16:50 Estellia-: 01:40:600 (1,2) - Fix blanket?
2015-03-03 16:50 Estellia-: 01:41:298 (2,3,4) - Fix distancing
2015-03-03 16:50 Estellia-: 01:48:042 (4,5) - Fix blanket
2015-03-03 16:51 Estellia-: 02:27:809 (3,5) - Don't really like how they intersect, maybe rotate 5 by 90 deg counterclockwise?
2015-03-03 16:52 Estellia-: 02:30:832 (1,2,3) - Fix distancing
2015-03-03 16:52 Estellia-: 02:31:298 (2,3,4) - Same^
2015-03-03 16:52 Estellia-: 02:48:972 (8) - I don't hear anything on the reverse beat, maybe just leave it as a normal slider?
2015-03-03 16:53 neonat: fix some distancing, elsewhere as well
2015-03-03 16:53 Estellia-: 03:00:135 (9,10,11,12,1) - May be weird because I don't remember seeing any other streams in the map (tell me if there are)
2015-03-03 16:53 neonat: but there is a hit hat there for the triplet
2015-03-03 16:54 Estellia-: Oh ok^
2015-03-03 16:54 Estellia-: 03:04:786 (3,4,5) - Maybe fix distancing
2015-03-03 16:54 neonat: 00:44:321 (5) - but i wanted the end to be circles
2015-03-03 16:54 Estellia-: What about that^
2015-03-03 16:56 neonat: i made it such that 03:05:251 (5,6) - in the middle would be bigger spacing but then i evened out the sapcing between03:05:018 (4,5) - to be similar to 03:05:716 (6,1) -
2015-03-03 16:56 neonat: basically i shifted left
2015-03-03 16:56 Estellia-: Yea exactly why I said 'maybe'
2015-03-03 16:56 Estellia-: So its up to you
2015-03-03 16:56 neonat: 00:25:716 (7,8,1) - i made the jump between 8 and 1 instead
2015-03-03 16:57 neonat: if u didnt catch that
2015-03-03 16:58 Estellia-: Oh
2015-03-03 16:58 Estellia-: What do you mean?
2015-03-03 16:59 neonat: instead of between 6 and 7
2015-03-03 17:00 Estellia-: I don't think there should be a jump there
2015-03-03 17:01 neonat: it makes things more consistent
2015-03-03 17:01 Estellia-: Ok up to you
2015-03-03 17:01 Estellia-: 03:07:111 (5,6) - These 2 notes' rhythm can be changed
2015-03-03 17:01 Estellia-: For the 5th slider, it should end on redline, and 6th slider should start on blue line and end on red line
2015-03-03 17:02 Estellia-: http://puu.sh/gkrU5/4599004f09.jpg
2015-03-03 17:04 neonat: i think it works both ways lol, will see if other suggest that
2015-03-03 17:04 Estellia-: rly
2015-03-03 17:04 Estellia-: The rhythm is v obvious
2015-03-03 17:06 neonat: really rly lol
2015-03-03 17:06 neonat: cuz the main 3 pitch changes are on the white then blue then red
2015-03-03 17:07 neonat: so as long as the objects either start or end there they shown
2015-03-03 17:07 Estellia-: then
2015-03-03 17:08 Estellia-: Why not keep it to a white to blue to white 1 reverse slider
2015-03-03 17:08 neonat: last white isn't part of the change?
2015-03-03 17:09 Estellia-: Ooops
2015-03-03 17:09 Estellia-: white blue reed
2015-03-03 17:09 Estellia-: red*
2015-03-03 17:11 neonat: differ from the ending of normal
2015-03-03 17:12 Estellia-: Oh ok
2015-03-03 17:12 Estellia-: Then hard is done
2015-03-03 17:14 Estellia-: On to Insane
2015-03-03 17:14 Estellia-: 00:23:856 (6,7,1) - Fix distance
2015-03-03 17:15 Estellia-: `00:30:832 (2,3,4) - Maybe centralize
2015-03-03 17:15 Estellia-: 00:39:204 (1,5) - Don't like how they intersect
2015-03-03 17:15 Estellia-: Shift 5 lower^
2015-03-03 17:15 Estellia-: 00:45:949 (4,5,6,7) - I suggest triplet first then hitcircle
2015-03-03 17:16 Estellia-: 00:53:391 (4,5,6,7) - Same
2015-03-03 17:17 neonat: worried that centralising may cause ds problems
2015-03-03 17:17 Estellia-: Oh ok then
2015-03-03 17:17 Estellia-: 01:45:716 (4,5,6,2,3,4) - Maybe shift the 234 away from 456 a bit so you can see a difference
2015-03-03 17:18 Estellia-: 02:10:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This shape is v awkward, consider changing to pentagon
2015-03-03 17:19 neonat: i tried to make the intersectmore pleasing then lmao
2015-03-03 17:19 neonat: by making the overlap similar to a stream overlap
2015-03-03 17:19 Estellia-: Oh sure then
2015-03-03 17:19 Estellia-: Wow that's it LOL
2015-03-03 17:19 Estellia-: Your Insane too perfect
2015-03-03 17:20 neonat: changed triplets
2015-03-03 17:20 neonat: i wanted to follow the music but then earlier triplets felt nicer to play
2015-03-03 17:20 neonat: lel
2015-03-03 17:20 Estellia-: Exactly what I felt!
2015-03-03 17:20 Estellia-: Also uh
2015-03-03 17:20 Estellia-: Will I get double kds
2015-03-03 17:21 Estellia-: Or is it only until 4 days later
2015-03-03 17:21 neonat: shifted the overlapping triplets
2015-03-03 17:21 neonat: thought if they matched perfectly they would look nicer
2015-03-03 17:21 neonat: no?

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,367 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2015-03-04T12:33:36+00:00

[quote="Estellia-"]Hello~

00:18:739 (1,2,3) - Make 12 and head of 3 an equilateral triangle?
00:20:600 (4,5) - Suggest shift 4 lower to form nicer flow towards 5:
SPOILER
00:31:065 - Don't like how this area is empty, suggest rhythm like that:
SPOILER
That's deliberate
00:34:786 (2) - Same^
00:52:228 (1,2,3,4) - Suggest centralizing I think mine is fine.
01:10:367 (6) - Suggest rhythm here to change to something like in spoilerbox because there are strong drums there
SPOILER
Hmm I think it is not nice to place long whiteline to slider-tail.
01:18:274 (1) - Suggest shifting 1 lower to form nicer flow
SPOILER
Then how can you deal with DS issue?
01:20:135 (3,1) - Overlap of sliders may be confusing, consider changing 01:21:065 (4) - to just slider and hitcircle instead
01:21:995 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Rhythm here is too boring, I suggest change but its fine as such Will consider it later.
01:34:088 (3) - (Sorry I'm super picky when it comes to sliders) Suggest change slider shape, refer to following spoilerboxes
SPOILER
Removing the 4th point

SPOILER
or changing co-ordinates to 286|97, 340|111, 375|77, 417|58, 465|79

SPOILER
or change to an ordinary wave slider
OK
01:59:204 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Suggest remove to keep consistency with rest of the map I dont think it is necessary
02:08:507 (2,1) - Don't like how they intersect
02:10:367 (1,2) - Don't like how they don't blanket
02:12:228 (2,1) - ^ Slider art here not really nice in my taste I think these 3 sliders are fine.
03:06:181 (3) - To keep consistency with the rest of the parts, I suggest changing this to a 1/1 slider instead Fix another way

Very nice Normal! I liked most of the rhythm, just the slider art at the slow bit bugged me a little but its generally ok.

Thank you very much!

Code

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Ringating

717 posts

Joined August 2013

Ringating 2015-03-05T06:50:56+00:00

bg mod

the new image is sharper and 16:9 and png but still tiny

so yeah

no kds

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,528 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

neonat 2015-03-05T16:37:11+00:00

Lol people call you to my maps all the time, I'm so bad :c

Changed

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,802 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2015-03-07T05:05:00+00:00

wow ringating appearing on a map right before i mod it what a coincidence

[general]

neonat wrote:
Another slow song, from the album magnet
so... magnet in tags yea
finishes without delay and claps without excess empty space

[normal]

replace the first line under [TimingPoints] in the .osu file with this, then snap the kiai at 02:23:390 to 02:23:391. right now some stupid glitch is forcing the kiai to be 1ms earlier than the other diffs. i dont even know why it happens but if you this everything will be fine please ;-;
```
7577.0880950218,465.116279069767,4,2,1,70,1,0
```
00:18:274 (6,1) - spacing
01:35:018 (1) - new combo isn't necessary. consistency with 00:42:925 (4) -
02:19:670 (1) - new combo isn't necessary for reasons
02:38:274 (1,2,3) - superminor spacing
02:44:778 - green line less than 10ms apart from another one and does nothing uh just remove it. will make me feel better
02:48:042 (4,5,1) - spacing

[hard]

00:58:274 (5,6) - spacing could be misleading since it's exactly twice as high as your usual distance snapped stuff. something around 2x distnace snap would be fine
02:08:042 - seems super weird to have a gap here when the same thing is covered at 02:11:763 - 02:15:484 - . just using a 1/2 slider instead of a single circle would be k
02:36:879 (5,6) - it literally doesnt matter at all but i'd like this more if they weren't almost touching. just like 5 pixels of breathing room please. ideal would be around sameish thing as 02:38:274 (1,2) -
02:45:251 (7,1) - not as important as the previous spacing thing, but this would be better if spaced further for possibility of interpreting it as 1/2

insane is k. gonna assume you know your own metadata because you are you

sorciere

147 posts

Joined April 2013

sorciere 2015-03-07T13:00:22+00:00

as promised
also sorry this is 1 day late
btw i feel Regraz's Normal and Insane is perfect, so i'll just leave it as it is

[Hard]
00:33:623 (1,2,3) - first few times i've tried this it feels weird, now i'm not so sure. anyway i think a straight flow from (1) to (3) will be better.
01:08:042 (3) - the dist. snap stands out awkwardly as it's lower than the one before, how about keeping dist. snap 1.3? (or making the other pattern 1.2)
02:19:670 (1) - hmm this spinner ends a lil surprisingly, maybe extend it to 02:21:065 or 1 tick lesser if you want it to match the voice. (if you did this then make this consistent for all diffs)
02:37:344 (6) - feels too close to the prev slider, how about moving it to (468,248) so that its as far as the 2 sliders after. (owait the prev mod mentioned this too)
03:00:135 (9,10,11,12,1) - maybe needs nerf since it's almost doubletap/too fast for 2.8 star.

my mod quality is quite low really, so no kds if you think it's not helpful (i'm ok with that). here's a star, i like this map a lot. good luck!

Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,367 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2015-03-07T14:54:55+00:00

ALL FIXED, thank you pishifat! :3
CODE:

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 08.SECRET  TRAP.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44786
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:SECRET & TRAP
TitleUnicode:SECRET ＆ TRAP
Artist:minato
ArtistUnicode:minato
Creator:neonat
Version:Regraz's Normal
Source:
Tags:Vocaloid Kagamine Rin minatone Regraz
BeatmapID:631745
BeatmapSetID:274593

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"158655 sample.png",0,0
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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neonat

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neonat 2015-03-07T16:17:49+00:00

pishifat wrote:
wow ringating appearing on a map right before i mod it what a coincidence

[general]
neonat wrote:
Another slow song, from the album magnet
so... magnet in tags yea I will add some tags if needed~
finishes without delay and claps without excess empty space
[hard]
00:58:274 (5,6) - spacing could be misleading since it's exactly twice as high as your usual distance snapped stuff. something around 2x distnace snap would be fine used 2x then
02:08:042 - seems super weird to have a gap here when the same thing is covered at 02:11:763 - 02:15:484 - . just using a 1/2 slider instead of a single circle would be k changed the rhythm here
02:36:879 (5,6) - it literally doesnt matter at all but i'd like this more if they weren't almost touching. just like 5 pixels of breathing room please. ideal would be around sameish thing as 02:38:274 (1,2) - gave more space
02:45:251 (7,1) - not as important as the previous spacing thing, but this would be better if spaced further for possibility of interpreting it as 1/2 shifted to about 1x spacing
insane is k. gonna assume you know your own metadata because you are you

thanks!

Rokkea wrote:
as promised
also sorry this is 1 day late
btw i feel Regraz's Normal and Insane is perfect, so i'll just leave it as it is

[Hard]
00:33:623 (1,2,3) - first few times i've tried this it feels weird, now i'm not so sure. anyway i think a straight flow from (1) to (3) will be better. shifted slightly up
01:08:042 (3) - the dist. snap stands out awkwardly as it's lower than the one before, how about keeping dist. snap 1.3? (or making the other pattern 1.2) I think this is fine as it is
02:19:670 (1) - hmm this spinner ends a lil surprisingly, maybe extend it to 02:21:065 or 1 tick lesser if you want it to match the voice. (if you did this then make this consistent for all diffs) I want it to end before the vocals do, so that the hitsound hit would end with the vocals
02:37:344 (6) - feels too close to the prev slider, how about moving it to (468,248) so that its as far as the 2 sliders after. (owait the prev mod mentioned this too)
03:00:135 (9,10,11,12,1) - maybe needs nerf since it's almost doubletap/too fast for 2.8 star. a stream is a stream, I want to add some climax here, being the most difficulty part in terms of density

my mod quality is quite low really, so no kds if you think it's not helpful (i'm ok with that). here's a star, i like this map a lot. good luck!

Thanks!

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luxoDeh wrote:

luxoDeh wrote:

-Nya- wrote:

-Nya- wrote:

General

Regraz's Normal

Hard

Insane

sheela901 wrote:

Regraz's Normal

sheela901 wrote:

General

Hard

Insane

neonat wrote:

pishifat wrote:

neonat wrote:

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