1. Easy (1.05 stars, 121 notes)
2. Hard (2.74 stars, 343 notes)
3. Normal (1.63 stars, 221 notes)

Modders

YellowManul
-Dave Strider-
Krauv (Only SB mod)
Moo-Chan
xChangJo (With SB mod)
Nekomata
LucyS
Atsuro
sukiNathan
Nerova Ruiz GX
AlpacaCokelat
CelsiusLK
Mono98
jloughman14
_Unreality_
Lally ( , )
HabiHolic ()

YellowManul wrote:

hi!~
mod request
put it in Works In Progress/Help topics owo/
Uhh, it's all ready for mods, especially my SB omo

Easy
01:19:907 (3) - end of the slider at 256:200 (imo better); if yes, 01:21:574 (4) - 272:128 I guess this pattern fine, as long as it's still possible to click.
01:21:574 (4) - if yes with that ^ , stack them; if yes, put beginning of this 01:24:352 (3) - on 196:96 ^
01:30:463 (4,1) - fix blanket Okay, corrected
03:07:963 (1) - spinner from here to 03:13:241 It's a good idea, but it'll sound off the best in the end since the ride fades out. This'll be the same reason as the other diffs you've mentioned it.

Normal
00:35:463 (1,2) - i think these two should be different (like this - http://puu.sh/fE4Cx/457adc1e32.jpg) for better flow Cool, remade the pattern
02:41:852 (5) - 308:164 Okay
02:48:241 (4) - 276:200 This should be fine on it's placement.
02:49:907 (2) - ^ stack, if yes in previous ^
03:00:463 (1) - start spinner from this It's already on.
03:07:963 (1) - spinner from here to 03:13:241


Hard
00:55:741 (2) - end at 248:140 Okay
00:57:963 (2,3,4) - chage it with 1\2 slider http://puu.sh/fE6tN/6b0e4b5a8c.jpg Probably, i'm following the vocals.
01:48:796 (1) - beginning at 188:200 for a triangle http://puu.sh/fE6J9/41e897c19e.jpg I'm making a triangle here, in a jumpy way for following the song track.
01:57:685 (1) - beginning at 268:164 owo/ Placement looks okay here omo\
03:00:185 (1) - spinner from here Same reason
03:07:963 (1) - spinner from here to 03:13:241

I'm sorry if it's mod is small, but i just checked some minor fixes, because it's very nice map with great flow, timing and hs.
Also good SB. Good luck!

-Dave Strider- wrote:

from my queue!

Easy
+maybe replace 02:04:352 (3) with a spinner? Not sure if it's a spare part for a spin, but giving it a try.

Hard:
+00:28:241 (4,5) - maybe add clap to these? It'll be inconsistent with the other diffs.
+02:34:074 (4,5,6,7,8) - this isn't really a stream but this looks a little hard for a hard diff I'll reconsider this, if others mention this as well, i'll change it lightly.

yay for short mods this is a really nice map, never thought i'd hear a country song on osu good luck!

Moo-Chan wrote:

Easy

1. change OD to 2 Okay
2. 00:37:130 (4) - move to x:388 y:140 Okay
3. 00:59:352 (3) - move to x:232 y:300 Okay
4. 01:21:574 (4) - move to x:272 y:132 Okay

Normal

1. 00:36:574 (2,3,1) - i feel like because of the stacking you have here, new players wouldn't understand this. maybe move the single note away from under the tail? Well, in my view, it's probably visible due approach circles. But i'll reconsider this...

Hard

1. change the CS to 4 I guess this looks fine for a Hard diff.
2. 00:20:463 (2) - why is this here? i dont see any other sliders like this for a while owps, good catch! will change to triplets.
3. 02:29:352 (2) - ctrl - g this It's a small jump i'm planning to add it here, to emphasize the song.

well, thats all i really see. i love the song btw <3
good luck with the set
heres a star

xChangJo wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue I can't see more issue from your map sorry if my mod is not helpful, I think the mapset is good and I love the storyboard and the imagen from the last kiai time /o/

Mod

General:

- I don't have troubles with general but I have some suggestion k
- I think if you can make a insane difficulty are nice for this mapset I tried to map an Insane, but the song doesn't contain streams and more 1/4 beats. So just kept the Hard diff as the hardest one in the mapset.
- The storyboard is beautiful but if you can make with widescreen support it would look more nice,
because some images are cut and without the black line in the side the pictures seems more good Well... i'll give a try on this.

Easy:

- 01:22:130 (1,2,3) - move this 1 pixel to left for a stack Okay

Normal:

- 00:21:018 (4,1) - I think this pattern don't look nice because the flow with the first and the second slider are a little weird,
because the first slider come down and the player need to go up for the second slider, and the second slider don't make a blanket with the first I'll reconsider... i don't plan to make a blanket here, but still going to reconsider.
- 02:02:130 (1,2,1) - I think this stack are nice but for a normal I think is a little hard Okay

Hard:

- 00:26:296 (6,1,2,3) - Stack a little better this, or is intentional (?) Probably intentional.
- 00:46:574 (1) - Move 1 pixel to right and down Okay
- 00:49:907 (4,5) - I think this flow is a little strange Well, i tried symmetry here.
- 01:25:046 (3) - I think this slider sound a little weird, because in the red tick are a sound Following the vocals here.
- 01:36:574 (4,5,6,7) - I think this flow is better if you use Ctrl + G in 01:36:852 (5,7) and then the same for 01:37:130 (6,7) Nice one, okay.
- 02:26:296 I think you can place a circle here for follow the storyboard and the soft rhythm in the song I prefer myself to follow the intense beat, i know there is a soft sound there. But it's likely un-overrated.
- 02:53:796 (3,5) - Stack this Okay

Good Luck With Your Beatmap /o/ I'll give you a kudo :3

1. 01:55:463 (3) - i think this can be rounded slightly better
2. i think inserting a break after 02:23:796 (2) would be nice

1. 02:07:130 - try spinner up to 02:10:463
2. 02:23:241 (2) - shift/angle snapping
3. break after 02:24:352 (1) would be nice

1. 00:26:296 (6,2) - probably try stacking this one better
2. 02:53:796 (3,5) - ^
3. 02:35:463 (1,2,3) - ^
4. 02:49:907 (4,1) - ^ (maybe not really)
5. 02:02:685 (2,3) - i think it can be positioned/centered a little better
6. 01:23:796 (4) - try shift/angle snapping this
7. try spinner from 02:06:852 - 02:10:463
8. 03:00:463 (1) - i suggest shortening this by 1 beat and then putting a circle on 03:04:352 instead (and maybe a circle on top of 03:04:907 (1) on 03:04:630 as well)
9. maybe break after 02:24:352 (1) for consistency with other diffs if you did the breaks there

Nekomata wrote:

here's a mod, from your m4m queue

[Easy]

1. 01:55:463 (3) - i think this can be rounded slightly better Okay
2. i think inserting a break after 02:23:796 (2) would be nice I guess the next note is already approaching and visible, i don't think it needs a break here.

[Normal]

1. 02:07:130 - try spinner up to 02:10:463 Probably not following the vocals here.
2. 02:23:241 (2) - shift/angle snapping Okay
3. break after 02:24:352 (1) would be nice Same reason

[Hard]

1. 00:26:296 (6,2) - probably try stacking this one better Okay
2. 02:53:796 (3,5) - ^ Okay
3. 02:35:463 (1,2,3) - ^ Tried, already stacked
4. 02:49:907 (4,1) - ^ (maybe not really) Okay
5. 02:02:685 (2,3) - i think it can be positioned/centered a little better Okay
6. 01:23:796 (4) - try shift/angle snapping this Nah, keeping them symmetry.
7. try spinner from 02:06:852 - 02:10:463 Same reason
8. 03:00:463 (1) - i suggest shortening this by 1 beat and then putting a circle on 03:04:352 instead (and maybe a circle on top of 03:04:907 (1) on 03:04:630 as well) This might break the consistency of this spinner between diffs.
9. maybe break after 02:24:352 (1) for consistency with other diffs if you did the breaks there Same reason.

take a star, i enjoyed the song and sb

1. Normal finishes sounds a lot better, but without the "Normal hit". If you don't know wtf I'm saying: Try locate and select any note with finish and change the "Sampleset" to Soft and the "Additions" to Normal.Try do it and see for yourself. The soft finishes aren't bad at all but in my opinion it doesn't fit so much with this song, especially in parts like 02:39:907 . If you like it, use this instead of all these soft finishes.

1. 02:44:907 - You can add a slidertick here to cover this beat, or just decrease the slider.
2. 02:26:574 - Like I said before, change the sampleset to Soft and the Additions to Normal.
3. 02:35:463 - ^
4. 02:44:352 - ^
5. 03:04:352 - I recommend to increase a bit this break after spinner, I'm not sure since is a slow song but this may be unrankeable. In Eazy is common give a full measure of break after spinner. Try this rhythm:
   SPOILER

   
   I like the circle in the end because this way we can hit the last beat.

1. 00:37:407 - This is a bit confusing, the stack suggests a gap following the vocals, I mean... like 00:37:685 (1) - starts at 00:37:963 . I think better if you just do this:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:33:518 - You repeat this rhythm a few times so you can vary a little: I like this rhythm too:

SPOILER

1. 01:17:407 (6) - Add drum whistle?
2. 02:59:074 - Add a circle here? I can hear the instrumental, and is really better to play.

1. 00:59:907 - Move the green line from here to 00:59:352 - , sounds better if that drum finish is louder.
2. 00:59:630 (6) - Change with two circles, to give more emphasis to these strong drum notes before starting the break. Suggestion: http://puu.sh/gbptJ/957f36828e.jpg
3. 01:11:574 (2,3) - Flow wise, it would be better if these two circles were lower. Like this http://puu.sh/gbpP0/77e6c139f6.jpg
4. 01:17:407 (6) - Add drum clap here?
5. 02:04:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - You made a jump every two notes except in this one 02:05:463 (5,6) - . For consistency (and for more fun) make it another jump, maybe a larger jump since the song increases it's intensity :p.
6. 02:18:241 - Uhh, the storyboard is doing strange flashes on one point, i think notes used to be there? lol
7. 02:29:352 (2) - Rotate like 25° on it's center, looks weird if it's exactly the same as 02:28:796 (1) - http://puu.sh/gbqvk/28641deacd.jpg
8. 02:38:518 (3) - Move it to somewhere like 336, 192 so it's like "blanketed" by 02:38:796 (4) - . Oh, and if you do that rotate 02:37:963 (2) - to make it lead to 3. Baically this: http://puu.sh/gbqNT/91c65b8d07.jpg
9. 02:39:630 (5) - Would flow better at 324, 364
10. 02:59:074 - Add a circle here, skipping a drum beat.
11. 03:00:185 - Add circle with finish because it sounds and feels good.
12. 03:07:685 - Why is this so low volume? D: Make it the same as the previous ones, it sounds way better.
    
    Good job with this one.

1. 00:23:796 (3,1) - Try turning this into a 1/1 slider, goes good with the prolongation of the vocal there.
2. 00:59:907 - Same thing as Hard, move the green line
3. 01:09:352 (3) - Make it a 1/2 slider like the other ones. http://puu.sh/gbrCU/17dbb04c51.jpg
4. 01:15:463 (1) - Slider with repeat on blue tick, this might throw some normal players off rhythm, it's a slow song but it would be nice if you could avoid doing it.
5. 01:30:463 (3,4,1) - ctrl + g, j and h and reposition like this to improve flow to 01:31:574 (2) - . Position like this: http://puu.sh/gbrQg/e3b224050b.jpg
6. 01:36:296 (2) - This should be lower, flow is not smooth the way you have it placed. http://puu.sh/gbrYQ/c58d0989a3.jpg
7. 02:55:463 (1) - Soft finish would work better.
8. 03:00:185 - Circle with finish! please.
9. 03:07:407 (4,5) - Both should have finish, and remove the lower volume line, it makes no sense really.
   
   Nice normal, all the rhythms were good, but you still can improve it's flow.

1. 00:59:907 - Line thing, (i hope you make the change, the lower volume doesn't make sense on this note 00:59:352 -
2. 01:28:796 (3) - Ctrl + j this, would improve the flow since it would lead directly to the next circle.
3. 02:23:796 (2) - Move this higher, to make the previous slider lead here. http://puu.sh/gbsHC/8e426185a1.jpg
4. 03:07:685 - D:
   
   I liked the easy, nice :p

LucyS wrote:

Hello ~
M4M from your Queue
I really like this song =3 ikr

[General]

1. Normal finishes sounds a lot better, but without the "Normal hit". If you don't know wtf I'm saying: Try locate and select any note with finish and change the "Sampleset" to Soft and the "Additions" to Normal.Try do it and see for yourself. The soft finishes aren't bad at all but in my opinion it doesn't fit so much with this song, especially in parts like 02:39:907 . If you like it, use this instead of all these soft finishes. Sounds good, i'll give it a go.

[Eazy]

1. 02:44:907 - You can add a slidertick here to cover this beat, or just decrease the slider. The percussion here, sounds a bit overrated, so i don't think following it makes sense in this rhythm. Thanks for the efforts anyway.
2. 02:26:574 - Like I said before, change the sampleset to Soft and the Additions to Normal. Okay
3. 02:35:463 - ^ Okay
4. 02:44:352 - ^ Okay
5. 03:04:352 - I recommend to increase a bit this break after spinner, I'm not sure since is a slow song but this may be unrankeable. In Eazy is common give a full measure of break after spinner. Try this rhythm: Good idea, it sounds very empty, but added a circle behind it.
   SPOILER

   
   I like the circle in the end because this way we can hit the last beat.

[Normal]

1. 00:37:407 - This is a bit confusing, the stack suggests a gap following the vocals, I mean... like 00:37:685 (1) - starts at 00:37:963 . I think better if you just do this: Okay
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:33:518 - You repeat this rhythm a few times so you can vary a little: I like this rhythm too: I'm following the vocals here, i don't think the rhythm looks really off

SPOILER

[Hard]

1. 01:17:407 (6) - Add drum whistle? It'd be inconsistent from the other diffs, no.
2. 02:59:074 - Add a circle here? I can hear the instrumental, and is really better to play. Okay

Now answer me: In the bg... This is a Girl or a Boy? Technically....... a boy lol
Sorry, I can't contain my curiosity xD Lol
That's all
Good Luck!!

Atsuro wrote:

Hi Gray Veyron,

M4M from your queue

[Hard]

1. 00:59:907 - Move the green line from here to 00:59:352 - , sounds better if that drum finish is louder. But it's one of the calm parts, so it should be calm too.
2. 00:59:630 (6) - Change with two circles, to give more emphasis to these strong drum notes before starting the break. Suggestion: http://puu.sh/gbptJ/957f36828e.jpg Okay
3. 01:11:574 (2,3) - Flow wise, it would be better if these two circles were lower. Like this http://puu.sh/gbpP0/77e6c139f6.jpg Okay
4. 01:17:407 (6) - Add drum clap here? Same reason in LucyS' mod, it'd be inconsistent in other diffs.
5. 02:04:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - You made a jump every two notes except in this one 02:05:463 (5,6) - . For consistency (and for more fun) make it another jump, maybe a larger jump since the song increases it's intensity :p. Ahh.. Okay
6. 02:18:241 - Uhh, the storyboard is doing strange flashes on one point, i think notes used to be there? lol I mainly follow my own phase here until the flash point gets down, like in other diffs. lol
7. 02:29:352 (2) - Rotate like 25° on it's center, looks weird if it's exactly the same as 02:28:796 (1) - http://puu.sh/gbqvk/28641deacd.jpg Okay, rotated 30°
8. 02:38:518 (3) - Move it to somewhere like 336, 192 so it's like "blanketed" by 02:38:796 (4) - . Oh, and if you do that rotate 02:37:963 (2) - to make it lead to 3. Baically this: http://puu.sh/gbqNT/91c65b8d07.jpg Okay
9. 02:39:630 (5) - Would flow better at 324, 364 Move nearby your suggested grid.
10. 02:59:074 - Add a circle here, skipping a drum beat. Okay
11. 03:00:185 - Add circle with finish because it sounds and feels good. I don't need to add something here. Give players a prepare, and this track is too minor for a note.
12. 03:07:685 - Why is this so low volume? D: Make it the same as the previous ones, it sounds way better. Done this on my own way.But i'll reconsider this later.
    
    Good job with this one. ty

[Normal]

1. 00:23:796 (3,1) - Try turning this into a 1/1 slider, goes good with the prolongation of the vocal there. I don't think a downbeat fits here.
2. 00:59:907 - Same thing as Hard, move the green line Same reason
3. 01:09:352 (3) - Make it a 1/2 slider like the other ones. http://puu.sh/gbrCU/17dbb04c51.jpg Okay
4. 01:15:463 (1) - Slider with repeat on blue tick, this might throw some normal players off rhythm, it's a slow song but it would be nice if you could avoid doing it. At least they can hear the vocals, so it doesn't look like a huge problem though.
5. 01:30:463 (3,4,1) - ctrl + g, j and h and reposition like this to improve flow to 01:31:574 (2) - . Position like this: http://puu.sh/gbrQg/e3b224050b.jpg Okay
6. 01:36:296 (2) - This should be lower, flow is not smooth the way you have it placed. http://puu.sh/gbrYQ/c58d0989a3.jpg Okay, i'll just move to the center.
7. 02:55:463 (1) - Soft finish would work better. I've preferred here to follow the small drums in the song track.
8. 03:00:185 - Circle with finish! please. I don't think so.
9. 03:07:407 (4,5) - Both should have finish, and remove the lower volume line, it makes no sense really. ^
   
   Nice normal, all the rhythms were good, but you still can improve it's flow. Okay, will do if i see "it".

[Easy]

1. 00:59:907 - Line thing, (i hope you make the change, the lower volume doesn't make sense on this note 00:59:352 - Same reason
2. 01:28:796 (3) - Ctrl + j this, would improve the flow since it would lead directly to the next circle. Okay
3. 02:23:796 (2) - Move this higher, to make the previous slider lead here. http://puu.sh/gbsHC/8e426185a1.jpg It'd look the same, i'll keep the current one.
4. 03:07:685 - D: D:
   
   I liked the easy, nice :p ty

Good luck!