1. Hard (4.81 stars, 518 notes)
2. Insane (4.99 stars, 618 notes)
3. Normal (2.8 stars, 209 notes)

if you not finished yet move topic to WIP is better XD ~

1. 00:34:438 (2) - 这个spacing远了点
2. 01:07:886 (x) - 加个break好些

1. 01:43:059 (3) - Spacing有点近
2. 01:47:197 (8) - ^
3. 02:10:645 (8) - 加个finish
4. 03:45:128 (11) - Finish
   稍微有点难,建议把一些连打改成来回折返的slider,现在都已经是insane级别了

Breeze wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:34:438 (2) - 这个spacing远了点
2. 01:07:886 (x) - 加个break好些

[Hard+]

1. 01:43:059 (3) - Spacing有点近
2. 01:47:197 (8) - ^
3. 02:10:645 (8) - 加个finish
4. 03:45:128 (11) - Finish
   稍微有点难,建议把一些连打改成来回折返的slider,现在都已经是insane级别了

Insane感觉后面很多部分和hard太像了,考虑用其他的排列方式试试
star

Vikon wrote:

Angel Beats! Therefore I am here to give some suggestions~

[General]
notes 排列得蠻整齊，富節奏感，還算不錯，只是有點兒小問題。

[Normal]
00:30:990 (7) 太長了，在這裏起new combo?
00:36:162 (4) new combo, to match with 00:37:542
00:38:921 (3) new combo?
01:16:507 (3) 有點長，在這裏起new combo?
01:23:059 (3,5) new combo?

[Hard+]
00:26:680 (1) end at 00:26:582
00:59:438 (4,1) spacing有點混亂，這種節奏，之前全是用1.0x的，但在這裏一時用1.0x、一時用重疊。
這情況亦在之後不斷出現
02:29:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6) 這裏的結他聲太小和亂了，驟耳聽這種打法有點怪， 建議直接把02:08:576的slider拉長至02:29:955算了
或 若想保留這6個notes,就只把 (6) 在02:29:955 結束吧~
02:56:162 (1,2) 這2個notes或應該像02:50:645 (1,2)般做成slider 或把這2部份的排法調轉， 在後來少notes了，氣勢會銳減
03:07:197 (1,2) ^

[Insane]
00:25:990 (3) start at 00:26:162
00:50:990 (4) 囧......這個slider一開始應該往那轉，沒有人會知道, 可以改成清晰點嗎?
01:35:128 (4) ^
01:11:680 (3) start at 01:11:680
01:22:800 (2,3,6) unsnapped objects
02:29:093 情況和hard一樣.
02:50:645 ~ 03:09:266 這裏一段是為了突顯後面而不使用hitsound? 這樣太單調了， 或可以採用soft 的whistle作hitsound就可，前後的對比感仍在。
03:34:093 ~ 03:42:369 這裏也是太單調了，不妨使用soft 的finish來加hitsound :
03:34:093 (1,2,3) finish
03:39:093 (1,2) whistle?
03:39:611 (3,4,5) finish

Overall, Star~

H-boy wrote:

Normal
这个觉得更像easy些...

Hard+
00:30:645(x) - add a circle,hitsound finish
01:16:162(x) - ^
02:49:438(8) - del circle

一些建议
00:28:576(x) - circle
00:28:748(x) - ^
00:29:611(x) - ^
01:14:093(x) - ^
01:14:783(x) - ^
01:14:955(x) - ^

Insane
00:30:645(x) - add a circle,hitsound finish
01:16:162(x) - ^
02:44:438(3) - spacing
02:49:438(8) - del circle

一些建议
01:08:231(x) - add a circle
01:08:576(x) - ^
01:08:748(x) - ^
01:08:835(x) - ^
01:08:921(x) - ^
01:20:473(x) - ^
01:09:093(x) - ^
02:46:680(x) - ^
03:09:093(x) - ^

starr

Lissette wrote:

comboburst should not exceed 500 pixels wide

Insane
00:59:611 - the slow down is kind of unexpected >.<
01:22:886 (3) - unsnapped note
01:23:750 (6) - ^
02:38:231 - add note?

Hard+
00:43:748 (1) - remove new combo
00:47:197 (1,2) - (1) remove new combo (2) add new combo
00:51:335 (5) - new combo
01:02:369 (7) - ^
01:16:162 (1) - remove maybe
01:27:197 - put combos like i pointed above

Nice map
Star!!

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
.osb文件不用的话删掉重传。

[Normal]
kiai不加吗？（其他难度在2分那里也有啊~）
明显的感觉hitsounds音量大……调低一点吧= =
那些短break……我能理解不map的心情，但觉得可能还是填一填会好~
01:44:438 (2) - 这个和之前的(1)弄对称会比较好的样子
01:50:645 (3,4) - spacing.大概(4)是上一格

[Hard+]
唔，+在哪了= =。。。叫Hard不好吗。。。
02:02:369 (1) - 这个note后面为什么要停kiai？
02:05:128 (3,4,1) - 这里太空了，加点东西吧，给一个例子：
[attachment=0:7f41e]Snap3.jpg[/attachment:7f41e]
音效从(3)起是o xo ox o xo ooxo (x=clap o=normal)，试试看
02:53:059 (1) - 建议这里还是换上个circle出音，然后1/2后开始spinner.
02:58:576 (1) - 同
03:04:093 (1) - 同
03:16:852 (6,1) - switch new combo
03:24:093 (3,4,5) - 没完美重叠上。不过我不确认你是不是想叠上
03:34:093 (1) - 开始漫长的空旷地带……请填音吧，可以参考我上面给的例子

[Insane]
00:33:145 (1) - remove new combo
01:53:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - 觉得不适合用渐远间距，要跳就直接跳好了
02:02:369 (1) - 这个note后面为什么要停kiai？
02:05:128 (3,4) - ……请填note吧，比Hard可以加四分音
02:53:059 (1) - 以及接下来的几个spinner，和Hard要说的一样。
03:17:024 (1,2,3,4,5) - 觉得不适合用渐远间距，要跳就直接跳好了
03:28:835 (1) - remove new combo
03:34:093 (1) - 还是请填note……
感觉这个难度的new combo有些混乱，按照长白线对齐自己再看一看好了= =

star~

• • Your difficulties are N I I (see beatmap listening): you MUST make an easier difficulty

• • 01:58:921 (8,1) - Spacing (keep "Distance nsap" active and fix it)

• • 02:10:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Delete these circles/sliders

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]

• • Your difficulties are N I I (see beatmap listening): you MUST make an easier difficulty

[Normal]

• [attachment=0:46731]timing.jpeg[/attachment:46731]

[Hard]

• • 01:58:921 (8,1) - Spacing (keep "Distance nsap" active and fix it)

[Insane]

• • 02:10:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Delete these circles/sliders