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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 03 April 2015 at 12:16:04

Artist: amazarashi
Title: Kisetsu wa Tsugitsugi Shindeiku -Tokyo Ghoul Root A Edit-
Source: 東京喰種 トーキョーグール√A
Tags: tokyo ghoul root a season 2 ending Seasons die one after another
BPM: 181
Filesize: 13140kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  • Easy (1.44 stars, 101 notes)
  • Hard (3.18 stars, 226 notes)
  • Insane (4.18 stars, 315 notes)
  • Normal (2.01 stars, 131 notes)

Download: amazarashi - Kisetsu wa Tsugitsugi Shindeiku -Tokyo Ghoul Root A Edit-
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*If you downloaded this map before 02/04/2015, please re-download it

東京喰種 トーキョーグール√A ED Theme
amazarashi - 季節は次々死んでいく -東京喰種トーキョーグール√A Edit-


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Last edited by Ipas on , edited 103 times in total.
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so i played your insane diff the day before yesterday and i thought it was fine, but now i updated and it's all out of sync, just wondering what happened? i tested it a little bit and 180 bpm and 115 offset seem to be the best although i think i goes a little slower later (like 179 ish)
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I'm sorry. I changed the MP3 >_<
Please re-download >_<
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No problem man, i'm just glad there's someone who's actually making a Nice map with this beautiful song. :)
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Here's my mod
asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - unrankable issue

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General

  • Where's the background ? Maybe the BG is missed . Open song's folder , take the BG from your map's folder and then insert it in editor
  • Combo3 is pureblack which is unrankable . Instead use this colour :
    Code:
    Combo3 : 128,0,0
    and for Combo1 and Combo2 why you not use these colours :
    Code:
    Combo1 : 0,128,192
    Combo2 : 128,128,192

    It will be more easier to player find objects during FL because the colours are brighter
  • You have some unused hitsounds . Use them or remove them


Easy

  • 00:10:879(1)- Move the red gap to x:124 y:128 and then the second grey gap to x:156 y:168 and then the last gery gap to x:196 y:220 for a better flow and cursor movement I guess
  • 00:24:139(3)- Add NC because there's new vocals then remove NC form next object
  • 00:25:133(1)- Move the circle to x:340 y:298 to make a blanket with the previous slider if you want . The blanket should be like in this pic
    Image
  • 00:26:459(4)- Instead adding a 1/4 slider , you can replace it with a note to follow the piano rhythm and the vocal
  • 00:27:454(1)- ~ 00:30:769(4)- Maybe you should remap this part because these sliders don't follow the piano rhythm and vocal very well . Delete all objects from that part and begin that part from 00:26:791()- to follow good the vocal and the piano
  • 00:45:354(1)- It will be more cooler imo if you move the middle gap to x:288 y:120 and then the last gap to x:324 y:136 for a better cursor movement I guess
  • 01:02:592(2,1)- Try this to improve the cursor movement
    Image
  • 01:07:896(3)- Can you move the last gap to x:433 y:220 to make a perfect slider ? Ehh just in my opinion
  • 01:25:133(1,2)- Make these 1/4 sliders more curve and then move (2)- to x:179 y:157 for a good pattern like in this pic
    Image


Continue later with Normal and Hard :3
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Umm,,,, sorry. I can't reply one per one of your mods. There's something i accept and i don't accept it. But for the general, i accept all of them.
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ByBy_ChAn wrote:
Here's my mod
asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - unrankable issue

Image

General

  • Where's the background ? Maybe the BG is missed . Open song's folder , take the BG from your map's folder and then insert it in editor
  • Combo3 is pureblack which is unrankable . Instead use this colour :
    Code:
    Combo3 : 128,0,0
    and for Combo1 and Combo2 why you not use these colours :
    Code:
    Combo1 : 0,128,192
    Combo2 : 128,128,192

    It will be more easier to player find objects during FL because the colours are brighter
  • You have some unused hitsounds . Use them or remove them


Easy

  • 00:10:879(1)- Move the red gap to x:124 y:128 and then the second grey gap to x:156 y:168 and then the last gery gap to x:196 y:220 for a better flow and cursor movement I guess
  • 00:24:139(3)- Add NC because there's new vocals then remove NC form next object
  • 00:25:133(1)- Move the circle to x:340 y:298 to make a blanket with the previous slider if you want . The blanket should be like in this pic

    box=Image
  • 00:26:459(4)- Instead adding a 1/4 slider , you can replace it with a note to follow the piano rhythm and the vocal
  • 00:27:454(1)- ~ 00:30:769(4)- Maybe you should remap this part because these sliders don't follow the piano rhythm and vocal very well . Delete all objects from that part and begin that part from 00:26:791()- to follow good the vocal and the piano
  • 00:45:354(1)- It will be more cooler imo if you move the middle gap to x:288 y:120 and then the last gap to x:324 y:136 for a better cursor movement I guess
  • 01:02:592(2,1)- Try this to improve the cursor movement
    Image
  • 01:07:896(3)- Can you move the last gap to x:433 y:220 to make a perfect slider ? Ehh just in my opinion
  • 01:25:133(1,2)- Make these 1/4 sliders more curve and then move (2)- to x:179 y:157 for a good pattern like in this pic
    Image


  • Continue later with Normal and Hard :3

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    from my queue!

    Normal:
    +maybe if you changed 00:12:204 (1,2,3) to something like this it would sound better with the song
    +if you shorten 00:28:116 (2) enough so that 00:28:945 (3) can be moved to 00:28:779 without the two overlapping it sounds a lot better
    +removing 00:55:630 (4) and moving 00:55:961 (1) to 00:55:630 and adding a note at 00:56:624 sounds good, but if you don't want to change this you don't have to!

    Hard:
    +00:27:287 (2,3) - these dont sound good to me, maybe move 00:27:287 (2) to 00:27:453 and add a circle at 00:27:287, then remove 00:27:784 (3) and add a circle at 00:27:952 and move 00:28:282 (4) up to 00:28:116 and move up the other notes after that accordingly (this sounds really long so if this confuses you heres a screenshot)
    +removing 00:47:674 (3,4) and moving 00:47:177 (2) to 00:47:342 sounds better
    +removing 00:48:503 (2) and making 00:48:005 (1) a repeat slider sounds better

    i couldn't find many real mistakes from this map, only notes that could sound better if they were placed differently. these suggestions are mostly optional but if you apply them, they'll go a lot better with the song overall. good luck!
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    -Dave Strider- wrote:
    Your mods. Thanks :D
    from my queue!

    Normal:
    +maybe if you changed 00:12:204 (1,2,3) to something like this it would sound better with the song - fixed
    +if you shorten 00:28:116 (2) enough so that 00:28:945 (3) can be moved to 00:28:779 without the two overlapping it sounds a lot better - fixed
    +removing 00:55:630 (4) and moving 00:55:961 (1) to 00:55:630 and adding a note at 00:56:624 sounds good, but if you don't want to change this you don't have to! - yes, i don't have to change this :3

    Hard:
    +00:27:287 (2,3) - these dont sound good to me, maybe move 00:27:287 (2) to 00:27:453 and add a circle at 00:27:287, then remove 00:27:784 (3) and add a circle at 00:27:952 and move 00:28:282 (4) up to 00:28:116 and move up the other notes after that accordingly (this sounds really long so if this confuses you heres a screenshot) - fixed in another way :3
    +removing 00:47:674 (3,4) and moving 00:47:177 (2) to 00:47:342 sounds better - fixed
    +removing 00:48:503 (2) and making 00:48:005 (1) a repeat slider sounds better - fixed

    i couldn't find many real mistakes from this map, only notes that could sound better if they were placed differently. these suggestions are mostly optional but if you apply them, they'll go a lot better with the song overall. good luck! THANKS :D
    Thanks for modding :3
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    Mod
    General
    • Ubah nama file BGnya ke yang tulisan biasa aja, soalnya dibeberapa komputer (mungkin) hurufnya ga bisa muncul gitu & hapus 1 BG yang ga kepake :> http://puu.sh/fG5hF/5dbeeb7f99.jpg
    • Centang "Letterbox during breaks"
    • Mungkin nama karakter yang ada di BG bisa ditambahin ke tag ?
    • Cuma saran sih :> Combo Coloursnya, coba ganti warna salah satu Combo 1 atopun Combo 2, soalnya hampir sama warnanya. Sama tambahin warna lagi, paling engga sampe Combo 4?

    Easy :
    • 00:45:353 (1) - Mungkin sudutnya agak diturunin dikit ?
    • 01:06:569 (1,2) - mungkin entah gimana caranya... agak arahin kekanan gitu, soalnya combo 3nya ada disebelah kanan

    Normal :

    Hard :

    Insane :

    GL :D semoga membantu
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    RzHr wrote:
    Mod
    General
    • Ubah nama file BGnya ke yang tulisan biasa aja, soalnya dibeberapa komputer (mungkin) hurufnya ga bisa muncul gitu & hapus 1 BG yang ga kepake :> http://puu.sh/fG5hF/5dbeeb7f99.jpg - di tempat aku cuma ada satu BG kok. hapus aja itu BG yg lama, yang tulisannya gak kebaca
    • Centang "Letterbox during breaks" - okay
    • Mungkin nama karakter yang ada di BG bisa ditambahin ke tag ? - yes
    • Cuma saran sih :> Combo Coloursnya, coba ganti warna salah satu Combo 1 atopun Combo 2, soalnya hampir sama warnanya. Sama tambahin warna lagi, paling engga sampe Combo 4? - changed to gray and added one combocolour

    Easy :
    • 00:45:353 (1) - Mungkin sudutnya agak diturunin dikit ? - gatau ke fix atau nggak, ck ulang mungkin :3
    • 01:06:569 (1,2) - mungkin entah gimana caranya... agak arahin kekanan gitu, soalnya combo 3nya ada disebelah kanan - Tiada cara untuk melakukannya ._.

    Normal :

    Hard :

    Insane :

    GL :D semoga membantu - THANKS!
    Thanks for mod
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    General
    • I can't see any bg in editor it might because you use special symbol for bg's name in song folder consider changing "tokyo ghoul ‡•A" to "BG" or what you what it to be named and also change it in .osu notepad too
    • Uncheck widescreen support
    • The usage of hitsound is pretty low consider make use of hitsounds


    Insane


    Hard


    Normal


    Easy
      SV=0.85x? so that there is a bit different between normal and easy
    • 00:25:795 (2,3) - Blanket ?

    Good luck :)
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    CelsiusLK wrote:
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    General
    • I can't see any bg in editor it might because you use special symbol for bg's name in song folder consider changing "tokyo ghoul ‡•A" to "BG" or what you what it to be named and also change it in .osu notepad too - fixed, so re-download it
    • Uncheck widescreen support - unchecked
    • The usage of hitsound is pretty low consider make use of hitsounds - consider this, if any modders commented this again, so i will search the hitsounds


    Insane


    Hard


    Normal


    Easy
      SV=0.85x? so that there is a bit different between normal and easy - tired to changes this, but it has been changed
    • 00:25:795 (2,3) - Blanket ? - i think this is good. No blanket

    Good luck :) - THANKS! :3
    THANKS FOR YOUR MODS!
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    Hi! From -[Trias's STD Modding Queue]-

    ( Special Mods! Indonesian Player ;) )


      General
    • Tags : kaneki-kun rize-chan touka-chan ( just : kaneki rize touka ) no need kun / chan ;)
    • Background : bg.jpg is 1365x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1366x768 / 1024x768.
    • Title : Should add ( TV Size ) but since you put tv size in tags so no problem about the title ;)
    • Extra : Where's the hitsound ?





    Sorry short modding .. :o
    GL! NewIpas :D
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    Sky Trias wrote:
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    Hi! From -[Trias's STD Modding Queue]-

    ( Special Mods! Indonesian Player ;) )


      General
    • Tags : kaneki-kun rize-chan touka-chan ( just : kaneki rize touka ) no need kun / chan ;) ok
    • Background : bg.jpg is 1365x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1366x768 / 1024x768. fixed
    • Title : Should add ( TV Size ) but since you put tv size in tags so no problem about the title ;) :3
    • Extra : Where's the hitsound ?
    will search for this. NOTE: I just use normal-htinormal for hitsounding now


      Image Easy
    • Where's the hitsound ? will search for this
    • 00:57:287 (2,3) - Blanked no
    • 00:32:094 - 00:41:375 - you can mapped over here cause this is TV Size ;) no. I has mapped here before, but, it's not too balance with the song because the sound at this part is too low
    • 00:58:613 (1,2) - Swap NC ok




    Sorry short modding .. :o No problem
    GL! NewIpas :D THANKS! :D
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