Hi P A N~ Saw your M4M queue, here's a half-mod, not a full mod, reasons explained at the end~
[Marathon]
00:08:274 (2,3,4) - Triplet doesn't really follow anything...
01:15:131 (1) - End this repeat slider earlier and map a note here? 01:15:631 -
01:19:831 (7,1) - NC on 7 Instead?
01:21:231 (5) - How about making this a 3/4th slider and adding a circle at the end?
01:31:831 - The most audible in this stream section is here... and it's unmapped
01:50:975 (5,6,7) - Sounds off. Shouldn't 6 be at 01:51:316 - ? Unless you are mapping to the drumbeats, but i really feel the main melody is stronger here.
01:52:794 (6,7,8) - This is better. 7 Is in the correct spot.. but how about switching 7, and 8 in the timeline? two sliders and then a circle instead? I think this plays better. Also because 6, and 7, are "held" while 8 isn't.
02:01:884 (5,6,7) - ^Same idea. There are a few other instances during this particular song where you can also use this pattern... if you want.
02:22:866 (1) - Make this two circles? I really feel 02:23:090 - should be mapped ;P.
03:04:306 (6,1) - Swap these two in timeline.
03:09:373 (1,2) - Jump pattern with circles seems like a better fit here
you really hear the notes clearly here unlike other sections of this song where the 2nd or 3rd beat is really soft if not inaudible.
03:25:184 (8,9,10,11,1,4) - How about making them parallel?
03:33:089 (5,6,7,8) - Ehh, this is a really sharp angle. Maybe make the angle coming out of the slider a bit less?
03:33:698 (1,2,3) - Maybe make the stack from above parallel to this?
03:47:799 (9,1) - Move the slider slightly to the left. It's not perfectly aligned with the stream here
03:54:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You could really space them further apart
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04:19:198 (5,6,7,8) - How about making this a 5-stack instead? There is a note at 04:19:325 - .
04:47:506 (3,4,5,6) - Align them better.
04:55:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Minor, but how come this stream is a different spacing than the rest of the streams in this song? :S I would make the spacing the same just for consistency...
05:11:300 (1,2) - You could improve the readability of this pattern by moving slider 1 so that it only half-overlaps slider 2, rather than 2/3 overlaps.
05:16:443 (1,2) - ^
05:48:552 (2,3,4,5,6) - Tidy up this pattern? The triangles formed by 2, 4, 5 and 3, 4, 5 just don't look right.
05:57:954 - No note here?
06:06:721 (1,2,3) - I think you could map the melody here a bit better...
06:24:910 - Note here? You put a note here during 06:19:393 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - And 06:23:594 (1,2,3,4,5) - is essentially the same rhythm. If you want to have a 1/1 space in between maybe save that for 06:25:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Which follows the 2nd combo's pattern.
07:03:704 (1) - Consider making this a stream?
07:28:398 (8,1) - This doesn't really fit imo. make 1 a circle instead and add another circle at 07:28:827 - for a triplet. I think this works better with the triplet patterns you have that follow this part.
07:42:541 (1) - Not this slider in particular... But while 1/2 sliders aren't bad, because this section is heavily triplet-based, consider also using a 1/4 sliders + circle patterns instead of 1/2 sliders sometimes. I understand you want to have some variety between triplets and repeat sliders too. Just another option.
08:06:497 (2) - Two circles instead? Similar to the pattern you use later: 08:09:297 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think a consistency of rhythmic patterns would be nice here. You already have enough variety in this mapset being a marathon and all... xD
This was as far as I got last night~ Went to check this morning to finish the second half and after updating, timing is completely off. I think you accidentally deleted a timing section somewhere because for example,
This whole section is silent (break time) but it's clearly mapped.However, your first song is correctly timed.
