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KANON NAKAGAWA starring Nao Toyama - Summer Boy

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Topic Starter
Ozato Fumika
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015년 3월 15일 일요일 at 오후 10:58:15

Artist: KANON NAKAGAWA starring Nao Toyama
Title: Summer Boy
Source: 神のみぞ知るセカイ
Tags: colors character song natsuiro surprise 東山奈央 toyama touyama nao kaminomi zo shiru sekai the world god only knows cut short ver
BPM: 150
Filesize: 4488kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.28 stars, 75 notes)
  2. Hard (2.94 stars, 229 notes)
  3. Insane (3.68 stars, 284 notes)
  4. Normal (1.81 stars, 145 notes)
Download: KANON NAKAGAWA starring Nao Toyama - Summer Boy
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Touyama Nao!!

Enjoy!!

All diff by me :3


OSU! needs more summer songs in winter!
Kibbleru
first
Topic Starter
Ozato Fumika
so attempted to give kd
Suimya
Why always kawaii songs + NAO!!!!! ;w;

baka kawaii moe Dap =3=//
Topic Starter
Ozato Fumika
moe songs yay :D/
Tenseki

Tenseki wrote:

Attention plz GMT
It is just Fun comment, I will change to real modding when i come to my computer

BG Character request

[General]
로리가 너무 못생겻어요. 초등학생 쓰지말져.
전 중학생이 좋음 ^~^ 교복물은 필수 ^^
[Hair]
전 단발에 금색이나 은색이좋음 흑발도환영 ^^

[Body]
왠만하면 바스트는 B컵으로 ^^

[Legs]
날씬한거 아니면 로리라고 할수없음 ㅋㅋ
짧은 교복치마 필수 ^^
[Etc]
안경도 있으면 귀여울듯 ㅋㅋ

Real Modding


[Kawaii]
00:12:911 (4) - 박자 세기가 강해지는 느낌이 들음
따라서 00:12:911 (4,6) - ctrl G 해주고 동세 부드럽게 00:13:111 (5,6) - 도 ctrl G
그리고 힛사 다시 수정
01:12:911 (1,2) - 디스턴스 너무멈..
01:23:911 (1) - 동세 -> ctrl+g

[Hard]
00:13:311 (1) - curve 더 넣으면 이쁠듯

[Easy]
01:12:911 (2) - ctrl g 해줘도 될듯
01:24:711 (2,3) - blanket??

[Etc]
아나 고칠거없는맵...
Topic Starter
Ozato Fumika
아니 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 이게 뭐야 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
Euny


  • General
  1. 노답님 말씀대로라면, artist가 touyama nao아닌가요?
  2. source는 원래 없어용??
  • Easy
  1. 00:14:311 (3) - ctrl*2 번 해주세요! 이뻐지기위해!
  2. 00:50:311 (3) - ^
  3. 01:07:911 (1) - ^
  4. 00:27:911 (1) - 이 슬라이더 00:25:911 (2) - 이거 잔상에 맞춰보시는거 어떠세요? 하신다면 00:28:711 (2) - 이거 x144 y64로만 옮겨주시면 다음콤보까지 맞는거같아요!
  • Normal
  1. 00:05:511 (1) - 오예 또있어요! ctrl*2번 해주세요!
  2. 00:06:311 (3) - ^
  3. 00:24:711 (1) - ^
  4. 00:43:511 (6) - ^
  5. 01:18:911 (4) - ^
  6. 01:25:311 (4) - ^
  7. 01:31:511 (3) - ^
    이쯤이면 저를 위해 그냥 두신거같다는 생각이 듦니다 :3헤헷..
  • Hard
  1. 00:09:511 (3) - 이거 13도정도 돌려보시겠어요? 다음 콤보로 이어지는 흐름이 더 좋은거같아요!
  2. 00:35:111 (3) - 15도정도 돌려보시는건 어떠세요? 역시나 다음으로 이어지는 흐름이 더 괜찮아지는거같은데..
  3. 00:37:511 (1) - 13도 돌려서 00:38:311 (3) - 이거랑 안겹치게 조금만 위에 두시는것도 콤보 치는데 큰 문제없을거같아요!
  4. 01:06:711 (2) - 이 콤보, 01:05:111 (2) - 이거 잔상에 오버랩되게 해보시는건 어떠세요? 물론 옆에 01:06:911 (3) - 이 콤보도 살짝만 오른쪽으로 당겨주시면 좋구요!
  • Kawaii
  1. 00:07:911 (3) - 이거 x268 y320으로 옮겨서 00:06:111 (2) - 랑 오버랩되게 두는게 제 생각엔 뭔가 더 깔끔해보여요!
  2. 00:09:511 (3) - 13도정도 돌려보세요. 다음 콤보랑 담요느낌 살아나면서 흐름도 더 괜찮아지는거같아요!
  3. 01:02:311 (4) - 이 슬라이더 조금만 더 둥글게 해서 01:03:911 (4) - 이 슬라이더 머리에 오버랩되게 두어보시는거 어떠세요?

기회를 주시니 항상 감사드립니다 xD
Topic Starter
Ozato Fumika

Euny wrote:



  • General
  1. 노답님 말씀대로라면, artist가 touyama nao아닌가요? 가상 아이돌 앨범 수록곡이라서 아니에요
  2. source는 원래 없어용?? 앨범은 소스에 들어가지 않아서
  • Easy
  1. 00:14:311 (3) - ctrl*2 번 해주세요! 이뻐지기위해!
  2. 00:50:311 (3) - ^
  3. 01:07:911 (1) - ^ 이런건 안해도 괜찮아서 ㅋㅋ..
  4. 00:27:911 (1) - 이 슬라이더 00:25:911 (2) - 이거 잔상에 맞춰보시는거 어떠세요? 하신다면 00:28:711 (2) - 이거 x144 y64로만 옮겨주시면 다음콤보까지 맞는거같아요! 수정
  • Normal
  1. 00:05:511 (1) - 오예 또있어요! ctrl*2번 해주세요!
  2. 00:06:311 (3) - ^
  3. 00:24:711 (1) - ^
  4. 00:43:511 (6) - ^
  5. 01:18:911 (4) - ^
  6. 01:25:311 (4) - ^
  7. 01:31:511 (3) - ^
    이쯤이면 저를 위해 그냥 두신거같다는 생각이 듦니다 :3헤헷..
  • Hard
  1. 00:09:511 (3) - 이거 13도정도 돌려보시겠어요? 다음 콤보로 이어지는 흐름이 더 좋은거같아요!
  2. 00:35:111 (3) - 15도정도 돌려보시는건 어떠세요? 역시나 다음으로 이어지는 흐름이 더 괜찮아지는거같은데.. 현재 흐름이 더 좋은거같아요. 1/1 박 빈공간이 있고 흐름은 그다지 상관 없을듯
  3. 00:37:511 (1) - 13도 돌려서 00:38:311 (3) - 이거랑 안겹치게 조금만 위에 두시는것도 콤보 치는데 큰 문제없을거같아요! 일부러 겹친거라서 :3
  4. 01:06:711 (2) - 이 콤보, 01:05:111 (2) - 이거 잔상에 오버랩되게 해보시는건 어떠세요? 물론 옆에 01:06:911 (3) - 이 콤보도 살짝만 오른쪽으로 당겨주시면 좋구요! 지금 흐름이 마음에 들어서 ㅠㅠ
  • Kawaii
  1. 00:07:911 (3) - 이거 x268 y320으로 옮겨서 00:06:111 (2) - 랑 오버랩되게 두는게 제 생각엔 뭔가 더 깔끔해보여요! 스택하면 흐름이 맘에 안들어서 ㅠㅠ
  2. 00:09:511 (3) - 13도정도 돌려보세요. 다음 콤보랑 담요느낌 살아나면서 흐름도 더 괜찮아지는거같아요! 음 여긴 리매핑했어요
  3. 01:02:311 (4) - 이 슬라이더 조금만 더 둥글게 해서 01:03:911 (4) - 이 슬라이더 머리에 오버랩되게 두어보시는거 어떠세요? 수정

기회를 주시니 항상 감사드립니다 xD
매번 모딩 감사합니다 :3/
Suimya
I think the artist should be like this instead: KANON NAKAGAWA starring Nao Toyama

Uncoded artist: 中川かのん starring 東山奈央


No kd ofc baka Dap o3o/
Topic Starter
Ozato Fumika

Sekai-nyan wrote:

I think the artist should be like this instead: KANON NAKAGAWA starring Nao Toyama

Uncoded artist: 中川かのん starring 東山奈央


No kd ofc baka Dap o3o/
lol yeah you're right

im so baka orz

Thanksss <3
Tenseki
Artist Lol
Setz
SAMMA BOIIIIIIIIII
ZZHBOY
m4m~~
[General]
  1. spread between Hard and Normal diff seems a little large...i think set hp5 and ar6 in Hard will make that better...
[Easy]
  1. 00:29:511 (3) - move the last anchor point to right a little or reverse selection this slider twice to make it in the mapping filed
  2. 00:55:111 (1,3) - consider to make a blanket to make here looks nicer?
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:911 (4) - here's rhythm looks a little weird imo, i suggest to use a 1/1 slider instead this, to follow the heavy beat at
  2. 00:07:111 - like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2733035. i think a Normal diff with clear rhythm will more suit for a new player to play...
  3. 00:10:111 (4) - ^ constant notes is not good in a Normal diff imo, just empty some light sound will be better
  4. 00:29:511 (4) - make a blanket? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2733045
  5. 00:32:711 (1,2,3) - 3 circles with 3/2 gap is not suitable in a Normal diff i think. consider to use some slider to instead of them?
  6. 01:22:111 (4,1,2,3) - crowd here, consider ctrl+g this slider 01:23:911 (1) - , ctrl+j these 01:24:511 (2,3,4) - and adjust spacing here?
[Hard]
  1. 00:06:311 (3,1) - try this will make here looks nicer? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2733089
  2. 00:14:311 (5,1,2) - make a blanket?
  3. 00:31:711 (2) - 00:32:511 (4,1) - move them a little right will make flow better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2733093
  4. 01:11:711 (3,1) - overlap here is ugly...consider to move them away?
  5. 01:33:711 - start the spinner from here will make here easier to play?
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:111 (2) - move to 110 174 will make here plays better? stack made here flow bad
  2. 00:11:511 (4) - reverse selection will also make here plays better imo
  3. 00:22:711 - a little jump will fit the music here well like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2733111
  4. 01:29:911 (5,6) - use a 1/2 slider instead them will more fit the music because sound here 01:30:111 - is soft, or remove the whistle will make here sounds better
nice song and nice map, good luck :3
Modem
Hi~! For M4M (> w <)/
(O w o)/ Moe song <3

General
Change the green combo colour into another softer colour? I think green colour is unnecessary for the background or for the song. Change it into the pink colour would be great <3
Pretty fine here~!

Easy
00:06:711 (2,3) Make this sliders into the blanket would be nice :)
00:07:111 (3) This repeated slider feels a bit weird since you reversed it at 00:07:711 (red tick) and in my opinion, this repeated slider doesn't follow both the song or the singer's vocal. Split this slider into two 1/1 sliders will be better. First slider is from 00:07:111 ~ 00:07:511. And the second slider is from 00:07:911 ~ 00:08:311
00:15:711 (2) Ctrl + G this slider for better flow
00:15:111 (1) Add finish at this slider's head to emphasize the hitsound. Anyway, the music strongly suggests it ;)
00:15:711 (2) Here too ^
00:16:311 (3) Here as well ^
00:18:311 (1) Same ^
00:18:911 (2) Same goes here ^
00:19:511 (3) Here too ^
00:18:911 (2) Also ctrl + G this slider for better flow
00:27:911 (1) Make this slider into the same shape like the next slider -> 00:28:711 (2)
01:18:711 (2,3) Ummm..... Blanket this sliders?
01:23:911 (1) Move this slider to x:132 y:12 to make this slider symmetrical with this slider -> 01:23:111 (3) . After that, fix the DS
01:27:711 (2) Ctrl + G this slider for better flow
01:27:111 (1) Add finish at this slider's head. The music strongly suggests it
01:27:711 (2) Here too ^
01:28:311 (3) Here as well ^
01:30:311 (1) Also do that ^ for this part
01:30:911 (2) Same goes here ^
01:31:511 (3) Here too ^
01:30:911 (2) Ctrl + G this slider for better flow

Normal
Ummm..... Why CS 3.3? CS 3.5 is better I think
There are few DS problem (AiMod). Please fix this :
00:42:611 -> Object is too far from the previous object
00:56:611 -> Object is too close to the previous object
01:21:411 -> Object is too close to the previous object
01:23:011 -> Object is too close to the previous object
01:26:211 -> Object is too close to the previous object
00:15:111 (1) Add finish at this slider's head would be nice
00:15:711 (2) Here too ^
00:16:311 (3) Here as well ^
00:18:311 (1) Same ^
00:18:911 (2) Same for this part ^
00:19:511 (3) Same ^
00:34:711 (1,2) Blanket this sliders
00:37:111 (5,1) ^
01:01:111 (5,1) ^
01:14:311 (1) I think this spinner should end at 01:16:111 (red tick) instead of 01:15:911 (big white tick)
01:27:111 (1) Add finish at this slider's head would be great
01:27:711 (2) Here too ^
01:28:311 (3) Here as well ^
01:30:311 (1) Same ^
01:30:911 (2) Same goes here ^
01:31:511 (3) Same ^
I can't find anything wrong more at this diff. Nice diff :D

Hard
00:06:511 (3) Fix the blanket from this slider with 00:06:911 (1)
00:15:111 (1) Add finish at this note. The music strongly suggests it
00:15:711 (1) Here too ^
00:16:311 (1) Here as well ^
00:18:311 (1) Same goes for this note ^
00:18:911 (1) Same ^
00:19:511 (1) Same here~ ^
00:27:711 (4,1) This blanket feels a bit off. Please fix this
00:29:111 (4) Ctrl + G this slider
00:37:911 (1,2) Fix this blanket
00:52:511 (2) Move this note to x:236 y:244 to make a good triangle-shaped flow
01:00:911 (4) Ctrl + G this slider
01:05:711 (4,5) Blanket this slider and note
01:19:311 (1,2) This blanket can be improved
01:24:311 (1) Stack this slider's tail with the head of this slider -> 01:24:711 (3) to avoid overlap
01:27:111 (1) Add finish at this note. The music strongly suggests it
01:27:711 (1) Here too ^
01:28:311 (1) Here a well ^
01:30:311 (1) Same ^
01:30:911 (1) Same here ^

Kawaii
00:11:911 (1) Add finish at this slider's head
00:15:111 (1) Do that ^ for this note
00:15:711 (1) Here too ^
00:16:311 (1) Here as well~! ^
00:18:311 (1) Same ^
00:18:911 (1) Same goes for this note ^
00:19:511 (1) And this note as well ^
00:21:511 (3,1) Fix this blanket. This slider -> 00:20:911 (3) is too curvy to form a blanket with this note 00:21:711 (1)
00:27:911 (1) Add finish at this note please~!
00:34:311 ~ 00:40:611 Make the SV into 0.7 instead of 0.85 would be nice ;)
00:45:111 (6) Add clap in drum additions at this slider's head
01:27:111 (1) Add finish at this note. The music strongly suggests it
01:27:711 (1) ^
01:28:311 (1) ^
01:30:311 (1) ^
01:30:911 (1) ^
01:31:511 (1) ^
That's all~! Good Luck for Rank! (> w <)
Topic Starter
Ozato Fumika
fixed a lot from your mods.
mostly suggesions were taken, but crtl g and hitsounds are fine imo :3/

Thanks for modding !!
Xiaolin
[General]
  1. I suggest removing the green color combo since there's nothing green in the background, I suggest that you make it brown/orange/yellow or remove it
[Easy]
  1. - 00:11:111 (3) - Move it a little bit up to avoid overlap with (2)'s reverse
  2. - 00:22:711 (2) - Move this to 384, 184 to avoid overlap with (1)
  3. - 00:41:511 (2) - Move this to 164, 16 to make a better flow with (1)
  4. - 00:50:311 (3) - Make this a little curvy ?
  5. Suggest adding more curvy sliders huehuehuehue
[Normal]
  1. - 00:06:311 (2) - Copy this and pasted at 00:05:511 (1) to make a better flow
  2. - 00:12:711 (3) - ^
[Hard]
  1. - 00:08:311 (6) - Improve blanket with (1)'s end tail
  2. - 01:12:511 (1) - Move to 16, 104 to avoid overlap with (3)'s slider
[Kawaii]
  1. - 00:07:911 (3) - Stack this with (3) ?
  2. - 00:37:511 (1) - Make this curvy like 00:36:711 (3) for a better flow
gracefu
Hai Dapless

Kawaikunai:
Test play: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/171 ... %20Osu.osr

00:30:111 - the plucky sound is only a quintuple and ended at 00:29:911 - meaning there's no triplet here D:
00:55:711 - Why 345 triplet here? D: Also why not use 6-kinkat7-7end type slider? or maybe 6-repeatat7-7end? 'Ai' is different mora but same syllable :3 or maybe even swap slider and circle so the 'ni' is a circle?
01:11:011 - That timestamp. Btw, Ew.
01:20:211 - Ew
01:24:911 - I don't hear a triplet here :/
01:26:211 - Ew
01:31:911 - I would use a slider from here to maybe blue tick because so hard D:
SPOILER
23:42 gracefu: lol i thought the last jump in kawaii was also the same time gap
23:42 gracefu: 50 XD
23:54 No_Dap: lol
Attempt~
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/17117351/Summer%20boy%20mod/Screen%20Shot%202015-02-19%20at%2000.03.08.png

Hard:
No comment

Normal:
00:38:911 - Ew

Easy:
No Comment
Iceskulls
Hi no dap <3

[General]
  1. add " colours " to tags since colors = colours imo , not sure is it necessary ?
  2. In song folder, add blank hitsound for sliderslide3 ?
[Kawaii]
  1. 00:07:111 (1) - Ctrl+G here ? flow pretty nice imo
  2. 00:13:511 - Whistle ?
  3. 00:21:311 - Why use 5% here when you use blank hitsound for sliderslide1
  4. 00:21:711 (1,2) - The spacing here is at bit low here compare to 00:20:911 (3,1) - imo , I suggest you move (2) a bit further like move to x376 y152 for consistent spacing with 00:20:911 (3,1) - since I find that (2) sound emphasized like (3)
  5. 00:29:111 (5,1) - Aesthetic - this looks really like blanket I suggest if you didn't intend to blanket maybe curve (1) a bit downward well just for a bit aesthetic not really affect flow much imo
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:511 - Whistle ?
  2. 00:21:311 - Same as insane
  3. 00:29:111 (4) - Ctrl+G ? I think the jumps here 00:28:711 (3,4,1) - might a bit too much for hard imo
  4. 00:38:311 (3) - How about this rhythm ? It play a bit nice here imo
[Normal]
  1. 00:13:511 - Whistle ?
  2. 00:27:311 (6) - Ctrl+G ? flow better imo
  3. 00:50:311 (4,5,6) - How about this ? sound a bit better imo
  4. 00:56:511 (4,5) - Stack properly , x+1 at (5)
  5. 01:21:511 (3) - x+1 for nice stack here 01:21:311 (2,3) -
  6. 01:23:111 (6) - y+1 for this one ( better stack here 01:22:911 (5,6) - )
  7. 01:26:311 (6) - This one x+1 y+1 for nice stack here 01:26:111 (5,6) -
    I notice the stack problem from aimod since it said those notes are too close to each others I'm lazy at checking stack manually lol
[Easy]
  1. 00:13:511 - Whistle ?
  2. 00:15:711 (2) - Ctrl+G this so it make the pattern here 00:15:111 (1,2,3) - variate a bit
  3. 00:18:311 (1,2,3) - ^same , it's up to you ( I'm just not a fan of using same pattern like that )
Nice mapset

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Ozato Fumika
fixed blanket, stack, and spacing issues from your mods.

I like the flow as it is, and the hitsounds are fine imo.

thank you for modding~
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