1. Easy (1.49 stars, 114 notes)
2. Hard (3.25 stars, 330 notes)
3. Irre's Insane (4.15 stars, 379 notes)
4. Normal (2.04 stars, 161 notes)
5. Weakness (5.46 stars, 569 notes)

1. 00:16:889 (2) - Might want to curve it slightly more to be more fitting with 00:16:439 (1) - ? Fine either way, would probably look just a bit more appealing
2. 00:17:789 (1) - ^?
3. 00:21:239 (6) - I think it's incredibly awkward that you have to move your cursor back, instead of like straight to the right. I think something like this could work really well too;
   
   Example, it creates a nice triangle with 00:21:089 (5) - and 00:21:839 (1) -

   
4. 00:27:689 (2,3) - I know you did it intentionally but making them parallel with 00:27:239 (1) - would be more appealing. Yours is fine also, just something I personally would've done.
   
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5. 00:32:039 (1) - It'd be really cool visually if you would move this slider somewhere to x:372 y:76 so it'd be a triangle with 00:31:739 (4,5) -
   
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   Moreover, your blanket with 00:32:039 (1,2) - isn't done properly, so you could that get fixed at least?
6. 00:33:689 (2,3,4,5,6) - I just ctrl + G'd few notes and came up with something quite enjoyable, just a suggestion though you may want to try it out;
   
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7. 00:57:689 (2,3,5) - Triangle looks like it could be improved, or am I seeing things?
8. 00:59:039 (4) - Move it like this so it'd make a square?
   
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9. 01:00:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Your curve isn't perfect, when you place a note at the center of that curve it's not blanketed properly, nothing major since your stream looks very appealing as well and it plays good, but if you're interested..
   
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10. 01:15:239 (4,5,1) - Move more down so this 01:14:789 (1,2,3) - would look more symmetrical and / or better?

Asphyxia wrote:

Cool stuff cool song great nice.

[Weakness]

1. 00:27:689 (2,3) - I know you did it intentionally but making them parallel with 00:27:239 (1) - would be more appealing. Yours is fine also, just something I personally would've done. I honestly think my version looks better
   
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2. 00:32:039 (1) - It'd be really cool visually if you would move this slider somewhere to x:372 y:76 so it'd be a triangle with 00:31:739 (4,5) - I'll just fix the blanket instead
   
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   Moreover, your blanket with 00:32:039 (1,2) - isn't done properly, so you could that get fixed at least?
3. 00:33:689 (2,3,4,5,6) - I just ctrl + G'd few notes and came up with something quite enjoyable, just a suggestion though you may want to try it out; I prefer the way mine plays
   
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4. 00:59:039 (4) - Move it like this so it'd make a square? you dont see it :c http://kshro.s-ul.eu/iUh7ffP5
   
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Great nice, mostly just nitpicking stuff, feel free to deny everything with a reason, good luck~

1. YOUR BG AIN'T THE RIGHT SIZE
2. holy shit this song IS AMAZING I LOVE IT, FOR NOT HAVING ENGLISH LYRICS IT'S SO GOOD
3. why are your kiais same in the lower diffs and then different in the GD and the extra

1. 00:18:389 (4,5,1) - 1 is feeling cold and desperately needs a blanket or else it's going to freeze to death, TREAT YO SLIDERS RIGHT
2. 00:30:839 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 7 and then the last 3 should just honestly be stacked on each other just cause I said so, it's irritating me looking at it even though it probably doesn't matter
3. 00:55:439 (3) - I feel like this slider is so out of place for the epic transitional beat that comes up right after it, you should have like a 1/2 slider and then a triplet, it'd be baller
4. 01:03:989 (3,4) - extremely awkward pause????????????????????????? intentional or no? it doesn't seem intentional but idk maybe it was, there definitely should be a note inbetween these
5. 01:19:139 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this seems like it would be cooler if it were snaking around instead of just in this kind of circle motion, maybe that's just my opinion
6. 01:34:589 (1) - why not put this right on top of the spinner? would be cool and make a nice interaction
7. 02:22:139 (1,2,3,4) - make around the spinner middle part? would flow into the spinner perfectly

1. cs7 please, this map is way too easy at the current cs and as such you should change it to 7
2. no video? o.O
3. 00:12:989 (1,2,3,4) - alternate these back and forth for the love of everything
4. 00:24:839 (9) - NC?
5. 00:26:189 (1) - no NC?
6. 00:40:739 (1,1,1,1) - if these are all NCs why not make them like.. more fun to play or something? make them single taps or something and put a jump in or something, bleh, idk, 3 DS snapped sliders with NCs on them doesn't feel very.. worthy
7. 01:46:814 (9) - NC?
8. 01:59:789 (1,1,1,1) - why all the NCs? seems unnecessary
9. 02:01:439 (1) - remove NC?
10. 02:03:389 - huehue copy and paste kiai

1. this diff is disgustingly good
2. 01:26:789 (4,1) - are these the same slider? if not they should be, they seem really weird
3. 01:27:689 (2,1) - visible overlap
4. 02:09:089 (2,1) - this map was so good until I saw this, oh my god, YOU KNOW EXACTLY WHATS WRONG WITH THIS

1. 00:24:089 - put something here please please please
2. 00:24:389 (1) - I really wish this middle point was a single tap/slider start, it feels like such a weird transition
3. 00:44:489 (1,2) - I have no idea whether or not this is okay, it just seems really weird
4. 01:23:789 (3,4,1) - you could probably blanket 1 and 3 pretty well, idk. up to you I guess

1. it's an easy it looks fine idk, the notes on red ticks alone is kinda weird but that's the song not the map