1. Another (5.03 stars, 460 notes)

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1. 00:01:713 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow
2. 00:02:379 (1,2) - This can space a bit more
3. 00:05:713 - This beat can be emphasis more , try making the note here clickable
4. 00:26:046 - Why not map this beat?
5. 00:35:046 (6) - NC
6. 00:36:379 (12) - NC
7. 00:37:713 (2) - NC this instead of 00:37:546 (1) -
   Well , try NC every big white tick to make NC consistent , it works for this song
8. 00:40:546 (1,2) - imo This is a bit hard to read , try to make it a bit easier to read
9. 00:43:046 - This beat can be emphasis more , try making the note here clickable
10. 00:44:879 (1,2,3,4,5) - Should make the spacing consistent here , I don't see any reason to space notes like that
11. 00:45:713 - This beat can be emphasis more , try making the note here clickable
12. 00:48:046 (4,5) - Space these a bit ? so it will looks a bit good the current looks not good imo
13. 00:49:213 (1,2) - The slider end can be emphasis more
14. 00:56:546 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - You might need to rework the rhythm here a bit , I find that slider head at white tick sound better
15. 01:12:463 (1) - imo this is not really suit here , the beat is streamy here, why you use slider here?
16. 01:44:296 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - The hitsound here sound really low , you can increase the hitsound volume and add a hitsound here to mix with the sound of the instrument here , it sound better

CelsiusLK wrote:

[General]

1. Uncheck widescreen support and enable countdown

[The only diff that available now]

1. 00:01:713 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow done
2. 00:02:379 (1,2) - This can space a bit more done
3. 00:05:713 - This beat can be emphasis more , try making the note here clickable done
4. 00:26:046 - Why not map this beat? done
5. 00:35:046 (6) - NC done
6. 00:36:379 (12) - NC done
7. 00:37:713 (2) - NC this instead of 00:37:546 (1) - done
   Well , try NC every big white tick to make NC consistent , it works for this song will do later
8. 00:40:546 (1,2) - imo This is a bit hard to read , try to make it a bit easier to read I really want to keep this
9. 00:43:046 - This beat can be emphasis more , try making the note here clickable done
10. 00:44:879 (1,2,3,4,5) - Should make the spacing consistent here , I don't see any reason to space notes like that done
11. 00:45:713 - This beat can be emphasis more , try making the note here clickable done
12. 00:48:046 (4,5) - Space these a bit ? so it will looks a bit good the current looks not good imo done
13. 00:49:213 (1,2) - The slider end can be emphasis more done
14. 00:56:546 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - You might need to rework the rhythm here a bit , I find that slider head at white tick sound better will fix
15. 01:12:463 (1) - imo this is not really suit here , the beat is streamy here, why you use slider here? I am hesitant to fix this, it fits the music (the long violin note) but I too am doubting whether I should have it or not..
16. 01:44:296 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - The hitsound here sound really low , you can increase the hitsound volume and add a hitsound here to mix with the sound of the instrument here , it sound better will fix

Probably you need to work on rhythm a bit , I guess
pm me when the others diff finish so I can mod it I will!

Good luck

IggyistheBoss wrote:

quick mod

00:11:546 (2) - probably take this out and extend repeating slider Done.
00:16:046 (3) - this and all the sliders like this pattern should probably be changed to a less smooth one, it fits the music better imo Will fix.
00:31:879 (4) - i'm not sure this fits the music, try something else here I think this is fine, I will change if more people mention it.
00:34:379 (3,4) - change this to the same as 00:34:713 (5) Done.
00:40:546 (1,2) - these can be hard to read, but you can probably leave these in if you really want Yes, I don't want to ditch this.
01:01:379 (1,2) - change this, maybe put 2 under where 1 ends Done.
01:12:463 (1) - this is a little weird, but i saw your earlier reply, it is a bit confusing Yeah.
01:26:879 (2,1) - these are too far apart Fixed.

starred, this is a cool map so far Thank-you!

1. Audio bitrate is higher than 192kbps, http://puu.sh/eWHNt.mp3 <- amusing you're going for rank use this mp3 instead (new offset = 402...i think). Also don't forget to resnap everything~
2. Enable widescreen
3. Uncheck countdown, unless you want that

1. Not 100% sure if you'll be able to keep that diff name, maybe ask round as they seem to be strict about that.
2. 00:04:213 (6,1,2,3,4) - the spacing difference between these notes are a bit much, the music does not express this and can make the random jumps awkward to play. If you don't like using DS at least try keeping the distance similar and sensible unless the music calls for it.
3. 00:07:213 (1) - I suggest finding a better place to put this
4. 00:09:713 (1,2,3,4,5) - for this and the following two streams I strongly recommend replacing (5) with a 1/4 slider. There is a note on the unmapped blue tick and having the 1/4 there makes it sound better imo, also it doesn't really add difficulty or change how its played.
   
   example

   
5. 00:14:212 (2,3,4) - this applies for the whole map, I don't recommend that you start sliders on red ticks, it doesn't sound and play as good. 00:14:213 (3) - See how this slider cuts through a large white tick? Such a dominant beat shouldn't be passed by. I think this fits better...
   
   example

   
6. 00:16:713 (1,2,3,4) - again with the red tick slider thing, 00:17:213 (3) - if you listen closely there is a note in the middle of the slider, would be more effective if this was to be mapped out
   
   example

   
7. 00:19:213 (1) - this slider starting on a red tick is fine as its mapping out something quite dominent, however that note stops on the following white tick and there is also a dominant beat there, I recommend shortening the slider to 1/2.
8. 00:21:713 (1) - bring this back by 1/2 and replace (7)
   
   example

   
9. 00:24:629 (1,2) - try map this part out with sliders, using singles is a bit hard to read due to the switch to 1/8 especially when the DS isn't even.
10. 00:25:546 (4,1) - I advise against this, overlapping these against those previous notes will make it seem like they're mapped to the same rhythm as before and will throw players off.
11. 00:27:546 (2,3,4) - why put (2) and (3) further away than (3) is to (4) when (2)&(3) are 1/2 apart and (3)&(4) are 3/4 apart. The distance drop will make it awkward to read.
12. 00:31:796 - should be a note here.
13. 00:31:879 (5) - unsnapped
14. 00:37:880 (2) - from this point on so many red tick sliders, I'll stop mentioning it but seriously it would sound so much better if they started on white ticks. Sliders on red ticks work best when mapping vocals, otherwise they usually feel awkward.
15. 01:12:463 (1) - this slow slider feels very out of place in the most intense part of the song .-. what you've been doing before was fine.
16. 01:16:713 (6) - again this feels out of place, also if you were to keep it, it is overextended by 1/4
17. 01:16:713 (6,7,8) - for an insane this feels way under mapped for what this part has to offer
18. 01:20:046 (1,2,3,4,5) - song isn't very long, not sure the break is needed, also i feel like this isn't necessary either
19. 01:25:046 (1) - this slider should end 1/8 (1/6 maybe?) earlier
20. 01:27:046 (1) - cool slider but the direction it starts in maybe a little difficult to sight read
21. 01:43:296 (1,2,3,4) - i don't know about this, i think this might play better and be a less confusing rhythm to follow
    
    example

    
22. 01:44:296 (5,6) - seems unnecessary to repeat a third time as music doesn't really support it
23. 01:49:713 - feel like this gap should be mapped